[Return]
Posting mode: Reply
Name
E-mail
Subject
Comment
File
Password(Password used for file deletion)
  • Supported file types are: GIF, JPG, PNG
  • Maximum file size allowed is 3072 KB.
  • Images greater than 250x250 pixels will be thumbnailed.
  • Read the rules and FAQ before posting.
  • ????????? - ??


  • File :1245028369.jpg-(200 KB, 703x994, Arrival_by_velinov.jpg)
    200 KB The Rotted Crown Anonymous 06/14/09(Sun)21:12 No.4881643  
    Years ago a hero fought and won against a tyrant. The kingdom rejoiced and gave the hero rulership over them.

    As time went on, the king lead his people in times of trouble, but always led them true. As king of the land, he was bonded to its health, and he gained longevity and well-being.

    Something poisoned the king, or perhaps, something poisoned the land. The next decade led into an age of whithering, as the poison spread. Swamps spread across the lands, filled with half-rotten trees where before had been lush forests. Dangerous bogs swallow those who stray from the path.

    The King sits on his throne at the heart of the swamps, of his kingdom. Murky waters fill farmland, damp moss grows across stone, rust spreads like an infection on metal. Mist hands low, unseen light-sources flicker in the dark.

    The knights, servants, and peasants have all been draw in, changed as the king has changed.

    ....

    Any suggestions of what the general population could be turning into? Something vaguely humanoid, but just not undead.
    >> Anonymous 06/14/09(Sun)21:15 No.4881667
    swamp lolis
    >> Anonymous 06/14/09(Sun)21:15 No.4881668
    Like the concept a lot. Perhaps some kind of troll/parasite symbiote? A fungal zombie plague? Fishmen that drag maidens into the muck?
    >> Anonymous 06/14/09(Sun)21:15 No.4881669
    Unpublished writers

    or

    unemployed clowns
    >> Anonymous 06/14/09(Sun)21:15 No.4881671
    Play Silent Hill.
    >> Anonymous 06/14/09(Sun)21:16 No.4881678
    uunnfff
    i love this imagery
    the people just go damp, maybe even partially rotting, diseased, and covered in patches of moss.
    pale and mottled skin, maybe a touch of trenchfoot on different parts of their body.
    >> Anonymous 06/14/09(Sun)21:18 No.4881697
    >>4881668
    >>troll

    But, yeah, this is an awesome concept
    >> Anonymous 06/14/09(Sun)21:30 No.4881796
    I was thinking maybe some sort of water-buffalo/minotaur/Kelpie hybrid. Or maybe just a sort of gill-man/skink: sunken eyes, mottled skin, ragged mossy clothes hanging off in tatters, gulping noises.
    >> Anonymous 06/14/09(Sun)21:32 No.4881824
         File :1245029571.jpg-(31 KB, 333x500, marvel-man-thing.jpg)
    31 KB
    >> Anonymous 06/14/09(Sun)21:45 No.4881944
         File :1245030316.jpg-(70 KB, 610x526, 610x.jpg)
    70 KB
    Even before the rot set in, the kingdom was not fully secured within the borders.

    An exhausted mine became home to a kobold tribe, a forest was home to a number of kenku flocks.

    Though not human, these dwellers are still part of the land, and with the poison were changed as others had been.

    The kobolds still live in their mine, but it is now flooded with water all the way to the surface. The kobolds have changed to an aquatic mutation, similar in proportion to young crocodiles, though much large in size.

    Mostly they hunt the numerous fish and reptiles that inhabit the swampland, but will happily scavenge from a lost human.
    >> Anonymous 06/14/09(Sun)21:46 No.4881956
         File :1245030387.png-(550 KB, 853x480, Innsmouth Look (Dagon).png)
    550 KB
    >> Dickteeth the Vampire 06/14/09(Sun)21:48 No.4881974
    Humans turn into lovecraftian lesser beings, like rotting cultists. Think fantasy nurgle with lovecraft overtures.
    >> Anonymous 06/14/09(Sun)21:49 No.4881981
         File :1245030559.jpg-(65 KB, 525x600, glossy_ibis_.jpg)
    65 KB
    The Kenku's legs have adapted, grown longer to allow them to wade through the deep waters. Through their mimicry, and the deep mist, they often lure people off the safe paths with false cries for help. Sharp spears extend their reach, and also double as fishing tools.
    >> Anonymous 06/14/09(Sun)21:49 No.4881985
    Insectile and/or gelatinous forms of themselves (as the templates in Savage Species, if using 3.5)
    >> Dickteeth the Vampire 06/14/09(Sun)21:55 No.4882034
    Oh, I have an idea.
    The blighted knights!
    They wear partially rusted armor, have marks of disease and plague all over, they are quiet and reserved. They wield faintly glowing claymores, with odd mosses, mold and fungi coming from their armor orifices.

    To behold one, let alone face one, takes courage. It is tempting to empty your stomach at the mere smell of one, but do not, for if they see any opportunity they will take it as a sign of weakness and kill you.. Or worse, fester you with rot and infection until you join the court of the rotted king.
    >> Anonymous 06/14/09(Sun)21:58 No.4882063
    >>4882034
    Make them some kind of fungus like orks aswell! That way they aren't undead, their bodies were just devoured by some moss and fungus that took their forms and some intelligence
    >> Anonymous 06/14/09(Sun)22:00 No.4882086
    >>4882034
    probably a bit too active recruitment. It's really all about apathetic resignation. They'll fight you if you break a law, but they don't want you to join them.
    >> Dickteeth the Vampire 06/14/09(Sun)22:02 No.4882100
    The locals in towns surrounding the mire are quite afraid and paranoid of any travellers, and shun anyone with any sort of ailment, for they believe they have bear the mark of the rotted mire. It is no wonder that those afflicted wander into the marsh at the deadest hours of the night, to flee the discrimination and persecution of the local church, that idolizes purity and is zealous with a fiery passion.

    I digress, for every soul does not wish to speak of the horrors which await the lost, doomed, damned and stupid enough to be drawn into the marsh. Rumor has it that when you are drawn to it, you will hear whispers, telling you that your time has come, and that the rotted council approaches you in the form of a traveller, beckoning you with temptation. Eventually, the anxiety of this boils and culminates, until you are irresistibly drawn to the horrid swamp.

    Fuck, that was hard not to rip off lovecraft. Anyway, inspiration over. Glad I got that out of my head.
    >> Anonymous 06/14/09(Sun)22:03 No.4882109
    Alligator people
    >> Anonymous 06/14/09(Sun)22:03 No.4882113
    I would love to play in this setting.
    >> Anonymous 06/14/09(Sun)22:05 No.4882127
    You could always go with specters, or some other undead.
    >> Anonymous 06/14/09(Sun)22:06 No.4882138
    >>4882120
    like snapping turtles
    >> Anonymous 06/14/09(Sun)22:08 No.4882150
    >>4882127
    I think there's room for that in the swamp-drowned (a bit like LotR's swamp)
    >> Dickteeth the Vampire 06/14/09(Sun)22:08 No.4882151
    >>4882086
    >>4882063
    I just wanted them to be what used to be the trusted knights of shining whitery of the king, now corrupted and bitter. The smell of them is indescribable, they're intelligent despite their aura of decay, and they often are submerged in the shallow, murky marshes just off the trails.. Waiting.
    Also, you don't join the knights, you join the cult or the swamp-people. A band of whatever you imagine.

    Double-also, the only way they get new knights is when the local uptight stick-up-their-ass pallies go and SMITE AND CLEAVE, only to succomb to the corruption, for they are not pure. It's kind of an initiation of purity in the local zealot church to stride through the mire, and come back alive and uncorrupted.
    >> Mouse !r9w.Zv6o7o 06/14/09(Sun)22:10 No.4882168
         File :1245031811.jpg-(175 KB, 640x445, bullywug.jpg)
    175 KB
    BULLYWUGS. THREAD OVER.
    >> Anonymous 06/14/09(Sun)22:11 No.4882176
    makes me think of high on fire, and kylesa albums.
    mmm sludgy metal...
    >> Anonymous 06/14/09(Sun)22:13 No.4882188
    >>4882151
    Nice... although I would roll up a character who pretends to be a paladin but is somehow able to survive this challenge. Fucking fighter with tricks up his sleeves heck yeah!
    >> Anonymous 06/14/09(Sun)22:14 No.4882201
         File :1245032086.jpg-(268 KB, 548x800, frogmen.jpg)
    268 KB
    >>4882168
    not if they look like TMNT rejects
    >> Dickteeth the Vampire 06/14/09(Sun)22:16 No.4882213
    >>4882138
    Pretty much. They aren't much for aggressive RIP AND TEAR, they're more of the sneaky, contemplating type.

    HERE I GO AGAIN.
    If some ill-fated soul somehow manages to make it past the shrines, fetishes, lean-tos' and crude huts that make up the shire with half a brain left, they will gaze upon undoubtably one of the most diseased, corrupted and festering places in all the land..

    The castle.
    Oh, it pains one to describe it without bringing imagery to their head. Many a seer has gone mad trying to fathom the colossal unpurity that is the court of the rotted king. The only information that was intelligible to this day is that on one floor, there lies a council's chamber, full of horrid shrines to deities the stomach detests and the mind pains to imagine. The various priests, high cultists and champions of the corrupted nature reside here in this sanctum, researching and contemplating, praying to the gods, and spreading the corruption across the land. This has come to be known to the local people as the Vestibule of filth.
    >> Anonymous 06/14/09(Sun)22:16 No.4882216
         File :1245032217.jpg-(40 KB, 672x526, Beast_Sworn_Heket.jpg)
    40 KB
    >> Anonymous 06/14/09(Sun)22:18 No.4882227
    >>4882216
    Fuck.
    Yes.
    Hekkets.
    >> Dickteeth the Vampire 06/14/09(Sun)22:21 No.4882256
    >>4882201
    >>4882168
    The more afflicted cultists, who either have done horrid, corrupt things, or have simply been here far too long begin to change..
    There is two ways they might change. The first and most common is that their very souls begin to fester, rot, and change, along with their bodies. Picture the bullywogs and nurgle unclean one mixed.
    The second is that they begin to become bearers of the plague, bastions of disease, spreading corruption across the land. The outward signs of this are very little, but inside, they are seething, burning, boiling pimples of hate and disease, waiting to infect foreigners. The most common are the men lured by money and temptation; Rogues, Merchants and Diplomats/politicians seeking power are promised it in return for becoming vassals.
    >> Anonymous 06/14/09(Sun)22:24 No.4882279
    They all turn into banjo playin rednecks who rape anyone that enters the kingdom.
    >> Dickteeth the Vampire 06/14/09(Sun)22:25 No.4882282
    Goodnight, /tg/.

    Hope you enjoyed my writefaggotry. :D
    >> Anonymous 06/14/09(Sun)22:25 No.4882284
    Hellboy plague of frogs infection type?
    >> Anonymous 06/14/09(Sun)22:25 No.4882287
         File :1245032730.jpg-(19 KB, 312x258, 00000388.jpg)
    19 KB
    >>4882213
    there you go again with that whole "active lifestyle" thing
    >> Dickteeth the Vampire 06/14/09(Sun)22:29 No.4882333
    >>4882287
    With the majority of them being rotting cultists worshipping forgotten, dying, and rotting gods, the majority aren't doing much.

    The king still has to have an agenda, doesn't he?
    >> Anonymous 06/14/09(Sun)22:29 No.4882335
         File :1245032964.jpg-(73 KB, 640x443, 20080508_114854_0.jpg)
    73 KB
    >> Anonymous 06/14/09(Sun)22:31 No.4882363
         File :1245033092.jpg-(37 KB, 300x351, 1242101811911.jpg)
    37 KB
    >>4882335
    swap you
    >> Anonymous 06/14/09(Sun)22:32 No.4882376
    >>4882333
    No, The king literally just sits on his throne, being rather moldy (and being sustained by the mold). Everything is lowly falling into disrepair because he's not really holding even himself together.
    >> Anonymous 06/14/09(Sun)22:35 No.4882404
    is that some fucking Golden Bough? Because if it, fuck yeah
    >> Dickteeth the Vampire 06/14/09(Sun)22:35 No.4882409
    >>4882376
    Well, I'm just a unpublished lowly writefag who gets imagery and writes it down, so interpret it how you will, improve etc.
    >> Anonymous 06/14/09(Sun)22:36 No.4882423
    Swamp Dryad and Nymph, well, except they're all a bit lonely, and clingy. And might be inclined to accidentally drown you, Probably best not to mention their last lover, so they don't start crying... they're already pretty damp and depressing anyway.
    >> Anonymous 06/14/09(Sun)22:46 No.4882520
    The swamp has a few druid-hermits who turned up after the change occurred. They spend most of their time half-submerged in the water (usually just their head above it), and have been known to spend some time communing with the various amphibious animals. They almost always carry a frog or two with them when travelling outside the kingdom.

    Their affiliation with the king is minimal, though they do visit the court on occasion, usually to see the general reaction (or lack of it).

    An old witch has taken to living in one of the old huts in an outlying abandoned village. While she deals in bits and pieces, her constant cold, and a tanned skin-tone make it clear that she's not exactly a native of the land. She refuses to speak about where she originates, but the accent is distinct, and probably from one of the hotter climbs where witchcraft is more vigorously "policed".



    Delete Post [File Only]
    Password
    Style [Yotsuba | Yotsuba B | Futaba | Burichan]