So, what where the Bad, Bad+ and good+ endings?
OP, great thread, you do a good job at creating atmosphere and setting a tone. However... your ending was... too quick,,and too underplayed. A little more drama and mystery would be nice. Ofcourse a mystery is never as scary when revealed, so it's hard to work around that, but it could have been better. So hey, good thread, good DMing, keep practicing (yeah, it's just a ploy to manipulate you into making more threads)