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    32 KB Warriors of the Eight Tombs Anonymous 05/28/11(Sat)23:58 No.15087969  
    Needs more Homebrew Necron.

    Deep within the outskirts of Subsector Yamato lies planet Ti'Anxia a barren desert world, undisturbed for untold millenia. Unbeknownst to Baron Paral Von Hoskarl and Rogue trader Arlmod Gertlend , they had stumbled upon one of the eight tombs of this world.
    The "Warriors of the Eight Tombs" are a Necron Tomb world assembly Led by Kaar, The Hand of Unity. Self appointed Lord of the Eight Tombs, Emperor of Ti'anxia a Platinum Level Lord.
    So Far we Have Karr - Pictured (Based on a Tomb Spyder body)

    First rendition of Kaar, the Hand of Unity
    8 different Gold Lords subservient to Karr - 1 running each tomb like the 8 Immortals of Zui Quan. (Based on the Old Chinese Mythos of the "Eight Immortals")

    >Link to 1d4chan

    >link to previous threads
    > http://suptg.thisisnotatrueending.com/archive/15058985/

    Get crackin'!
    >> Anonymous 05/29/11(Sun)00:00 No.15087989
    do necron lords even have personality?
    >> Shas'o R'myr !!J5+vjygjQuK 05/29/11(Sun)00:01 No.15087995

    They do now. You can thank Ward.

    So which C'tan did you guys enslave?
    >> Anonymous 05/29/11(Sun)00:02 No.15087999
    wait he did something useful for once? UNPOSSIBLE
    >> Anonymous 05/29/11(Sun)00:06 No.15088039
    Different tactics.
    Thats its.
    >> Anonymous 05/29/11(Sun)00:10 No.15088071
    so OP, do these guys have an agenda or anything or are they just DESTROY ALL LIFE
    >> Anonymous 05/29/11(Sun)00:12 No.15088088
    >> S.T.A.L.K.E.R. 05/29/11(Sun)00:15 No.15088118
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    >Chinese Theme Necron
    Great now all we need is Orks Mongols and something to represent Korea and East Asia will be complete.
    Kind of like this?
    >> Anonymous 05/29/11(Sun)00:19 No.15088141
    yeah pretty much

    and a Waaugh could easily crash onto the planet for the lulz
    >> The God-Emperor of Mankind 05/29/11(Sun)04:30 No.15090304
    Okay time to revive this thread.

    Arlmond Gertlend was awoken by the bitter taste of earth and blood. It wasn’t the first time it he had experienced it, the last such instance involved a pissed off crew and enough alcohol that even the Emperor himself would wake up next to some hiveworld whore with questionable personal hygiene standards. This time it was different.
    Rolling to his side, Arlmond held his cracked ribs and let out a string of profanity that would likely cause an inquisitorial investigation if he was in the company of more honourable men. Thankfully he was not....
    >> The God-Emperor of Mankind 05/29/11(Sun)04:31 No.15090315

    The cloud of sand that filled the cave began to settle and Arlmond wiped away the blood and dust from his eyes with a torn cloth he found to his side. It was only after his vision returned he realised that the cloth he had used was worn by a miner just a few moments ago and still had some remnants from its previous owner attached.
    He fought back the urge to vomit but failed. Then came the buzzing, his hearing was returning along with a headache that could kill a caveworm or two. It didn’t matter. Arlmond’s eyes were drawn to something in the distance. Just past the fallen debris, past the team of men trying to pull out a man whose legs had become trapped under a very big rock. A fantastic green glow emitted from a symbol of unknown origin.
    “What in the Emperors name?” wheezed Arlmond, as a droplet of blood dripped into his wide open mouth.
    >> The God-Emperor of Mankind 05/29/11(Sun)04:33 No.15090340

    As he collapsed, again, the taste of blood and earth in his mouth remained…A torrent of twisted mechanical beings arose from the ground, each followed by a hundred of the same. Ti’Anxia itself came alive with a million mechanical tendrils reaching out for destruction.
    A consistent hum was emitting from deep within the core of the planet. If the sight of an untold number of ancient evils, a mix of machine, torn-flesh and incomprehensible technology, marching forth would not cause a man to lose his mental capacity, the sound that pierced even the thickest armour surely would. It scratched and it scraped at the inside of man’s soul. It ripped apart every barrier until it was inside the deepest corridor of any man, the part that gave him his greatest weakness - mortality.
    No man was immune. Not even the mighty Space Marines whose abundance of loyalty and honour could do little to save them now.
    >> The God-Emperor of Mankind 05/29/11(Sun)04:35 No.15090359

    “Foolish mortals, we are older than time itself.” A voice hissed, “Your immaturity and pride has led you once more into the chasm of destruction. We are without equal… We are without number…” , As the voice dimmed down,the tortured screams of a thousand men echoed across the planet inside every man’s conscience.
    >> Anonymous 05/29/11(Sun)04:45 No.15090424
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    GO ON.
    >> The God-Emperor of Mankind 05/29/11(Sun)05:12 No.15090645
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    Writing something in responce to this. Hold on.

    Anyone else out there willing to help out with a little bit of background history? Fleshing out some of the Eight lords?

    >> The God-Emperor of Mankind 05/29/11(Sun)05:19 No.15090706

    The Necrons marched forth in relentless, overwhelming, implacable ranks, the Rising Sons companies falling to their molecular-stripping gauss weapns and unnaturally sharp blades as just would any other living being. And yet there was almost an vindictive air to the thoroughness with which they slaughtered the doomed warriors of Chapter Master Toshiro, smashing their Holy relics and laying waste to their sacred armor. The leader of the once proud force of genetically enhanced super-warriors of the God Emperor looked on in horror as they fell one by one to the unrelenting tide of Necrons.

    As formidable a threat as the Master Warrior and his 600 Battle Brothers were, respendant and proud in their wargear with battle standards flying high and prayers to the Emperor on their lips as they smashed their blades and fired their bolters into the oncoming waves of living metal monstrocities, their defeat was utterly consuming and thorough. It seemed as though no living force could halt the tidal wave of cold, heartless death as it crashed over the planets of the Yamato system.
    >> The God-Emperor of Mankind 05/29/11(Sun)05:21 No.15090718
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    In the last hours of the massacre, The Master of the Rising Suns suddenly understood the full extent the Necron threat. He had acted with the speed and grace borne by the Sons of Khan, Sending his 6 companies planetside to utterly ahniiliate what they had believed to be the Necron Lord and his personal standing forces. By that act was his failure to the Emperor cemented forever in inglorious defeat. With terrifying clarity he realized his error as the Xenos abominations poured into the subsector, their numbers beyond counting, slaughtering all into their path. They had laid a trap, and he, in his anger and impatience, had sprung it.

    When the Necron Legions began arriving in the Yamato subsector, the local Imperial Guard Detachments made every effort to push back the advancing horde of death and destruction. Unfortunately for them, there are no walls or barriers thick enough to withstand the punishing fire of Gauss weapnry. Fewer still are there Artillery batteries or firearms of sufficient cabaility to halt a Necron advance of this magnitude.

    Lord General Tso of the Ashiguru Imperial Guard was helpless against the deathless tide, and his soldiers were completely overrun within the first few hours of the engagement.
    >> Anonymous 05/29/11(Sun)05:23 No.15090729

    I'd like to call for some back-scaling here. Do we really want to completely wipe out another /tg/ created thing? I've written for both the Rising Sons and the 8 Tombs and I'd rather not have one OC wipe out the other.
    >> Anonymous 05/29/11(Sun)05:25 No.15090743
    Huh, I was thinking about making thread no. three but decided against it. Oh well. looks like /tg/ has spoken for me
    >> The God-Emperor of Mankind 05/29/11(Sun)05:27 No.15090754

    We are not wiping them out. Just invading. They sent in 6 companies out of 10.
    >> Anonymous 05/29/11(Sun)05:27 No.15090760
    >(Based on the Old Chinese Mythos of the "Eight Immortals")

    You mean like the Phoenix Lords?
    >> The God-Emperor of Mankind 05/29/11(Sun)05:29 No.15090771

    By the time Toshiro's scouts identified the incoming Xenos reinforcements through their scopes on the outskirts of the field of battle, the defeat of the Third Company, first to engage the enemy in honorable combat, was at hand. They knew, as only doomed men might know, that if they were going to have any chance of defeating these soulless enemies, they would need to change the very way they fought and bled in service to the Emperor. With a defiant scream of hatred, the Captain of the third was suddenly, finally silenced. Knowing they needed to warn others of the impending onslaught, the Warriors of the third fought ever harder, but to no avail. By the time the final bolter was silenced, the implacable Xenos had already begun moving on to still-living prospects, such was the contempt they had for their would-be attackers.

    The victory was not swift by any means, but it was utterly absolute. The day after the battle not even the corpses of guardsmen were to be found, only a massive Host of Necron Raiders and Monoliths where Imperial bulwarks and shrines to the Emperor had formally stood, resplendant in their glory and might, now reduced to rubble and dust. A macabre reflection of the enslaved minds of the Necrons, marching in rank upon rank to bring ruin to the Galaxy.
    >> Anonymous 05/29/11(Sun)05:29 No.15090774

    I like the tone, It just may be pushing it too far. I thought the general Idea was the 'Crons pushing the Rising Sons off planet with massive casualties (But still survivors) to the Rising Sons, and then kinda sitting there and simmering for a while while the forces gathered, fighting off (Insert enemy here) occasionally, until they were ready to push out once more.
    >> The God-Emperor of Mankind 05/29/11(Sun)05:32 No.15090799

    I just took out ONE company out of SIX. And some of those IG guardsmen they have .

    I dont think thats pushing it, right? :(
    >> Fightan Man 05/29/11(Sun)05:43 No.15090817
    >The leader of the once proud force of genetically enhanced super-warriors of the God Emperor

    I think you sometimes get abit carried away my dear.
    >> X 05/29/11(Sun)05:43 No.15090832

    True, but currently it kinda feels too "Spiritual Liege" if you know what I mean?

    "Necrons Iz the best and no-one can stand against them" Have them win. Have them fucking Crush the enemy. But give the enemy the belief that they have a chance of of success, a series of counter attacks that brings them near one of the golden lords himself. Only to be countered at the last second by Khaan himself, or the deepstriking monoliths of the 7th lord, something that turns it and makes the treader think, Oh. these are not just killy robots, these are tactical, angry, and vengeful machines that will stop and nothing, no matter what, to succeed.
    >> The God-Emperor of Mankind 05/29/11(Sun)05:45 No.15090855

    I should have written these things in a wordpad to proof read them, im sorry.

    But then again these are ideas on the table, they will be corrected / whatever.
    >> Anonymous 05/29/11(Sun)05:47 No.15090860
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    >mfw when I said Khaan instead of Karr
    >> Fightan Man 05/29/11(Sun)05:49 No.15090864
    I think you both can learn something about the necrons by watching the second Renaissance of animatrix.


    especially the battles.
    >> Anonymous 05/29/11(Sun)05:49 No.15090867

    >With terrifying clarity he realized his error as the Xenos abominations poured into the subsector, their numbers beyond counting, slaughtering all into their path.

    That made it look like they overran the entire subsector. At least, that's how I read it.
    >> The God-Emperor of Mankind 05/29/11(Sun)05:49 No.15090870

    Feel free to edit on the walls of text, I dont mind, I am just saddened of the fact that I feel I am the only one contributing.
    >> The God-Emperor of Mankind 05/29/11(Sun)05:51 No.15090879
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    Fuck yeah Overseer - Supermoves !
    >> Fightan Man 05/29/11(Sun)05:55 No.15090899
    I play it during vidya, it's pretty amazing.

    Also i'm still working on the blackwatch tale, you wanna spectate?
    >> The God-Emperor of Mankind 05/29/11(Sun)06:00 No.15090918

    Uhm sure, I guess , I need to cook myself somethin to eat anyway, ill be happy to read whatever is there during omnom time.

    Heres hoping I return to moar contributions ITT.
    >> Fightan Man 05/29/11(Sun)06:30 No.15091020
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    Short post not to dissapoint.


    The recorded occurences around Specialist Jake Herod, and staple-code: "The thing" //---_=_=-=_

    Segmentum Command has been chasing Argus Yaucha around for two millenia...
    I've been chasing Argus around for what seems two millenia...

    It's not far from the truth, ever since I came into contact with Argus my detachment has spearheaded his destruction with extreme prejeduice. I was 24 at the time... My command career hasn't been about anything else the past 278 years.
    >> Fightan Man 05/29/11(Sun)06:31 No.15091022
    Earliest data mentions that somewhere in late m.39-m.40 the Mechanicus Bioligis of the Hippocrasian sect witin the Calaxis sector cooked up rare genetic material, pre-primordial... Something the Galaxy was populated on,
    even before the Emperor took to the stars. Many men and woman would be disgusted at such a jest that there was a time before gods and man, having access on to the lord commander millitant's resources makes me shivver.
    At every requisistion of information the galaxy becomes more and more horrifying, even on need to know a commander of the BlackWatch can never turn back from his office, it is were you die.

    I was part of the 53rd Hunter Killer Squadran an small 300 years back, by than the epidemic had been rampaging the stars for 1.7 thousand years.
    I did not know back than what I know now, that we created our greatest enemies with our own hands and repeat the eternal cycle of war, war amongst the stars.
    >> Fightan Man 05/29/11(Sun)06:32 No.15091033
    We started in Calaxis where Argus... Where "The Thing" had been for many years, it had made it's way into a Hive, made to supply the imperium with guardsmen. Billions upon billions of humans populated the planet, it was a nightmarish battlefield; gangers oogling our weapons thinking they could rank higher up with our gear, mutants, "it". It would've been a disaster for any other company in the close densely populated confines of the hive.

    Sadly for them... we weren't any other Company, we were the BlackWatch we hold the redline it is the last one Humanity will ever hold in this shadow war from the inside. The first day a drugged up hiver took a pot shot at our forces we changed the ROE, everything went down in a storm of fire. Friendly or unfriendly the hive learned to escape our patrols and leave the hive as the body count ramped up, and we started encountering the infection.
    >> The God-Emperor of Mankind 05/29/11(Sun)06:33 No.15091036
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    Omnomn. Its nice, but what does this have to do with our Crons? :p
    >> Anonymous 05/29/11(Sun)06:35 No.15091044

    >The recorded occurences around
    >for what seems two millenia
    >spearheaded his destruction with extreme prejeduice
    >Mechanicus Bioligis
    >such a jest that there was a time before gods and man

    Oh fuck, I can't go on. You've managed to pack so much incoherence, grammar and spelling mistakes into these short posts that it's literally painful to read. Do over from scratch. F-, see me after class.
    >> Fightan Man 05/29/11(Sun)06:37 No.15091049
    Absolutely nothing, but thats how I roll.
    I've basically got this down since yesterday ever since youtube sidetracked me. But i'm gonna expand on "The Thing" and make a small story about our little generals endeavor to kill it, and put it on the Tiji blackwatch page.

    I just took out the spelling errors since word wouldn't load an english proof reader, but now it does.
    >> The God-Emperor of Mankind 05/29/11(Sun)06:39 No.15091056

    So Blackwatch is about Guardsmen?

    Can I try some writefaggotry as well on them? Maybe we can collab on both, guard and crons!

    Do you have MSN?
    >> Fightan Man 05/29/11(Sun)06:42 No.15091066
    Yes, e-mail field.

    Yeah I got surprised at some of those,
    >rest is all good wtf man.
    >> Anonymous 05/29/11(Sun)06:43 No.15091067
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    >not posting the gattling immortal

    Also why does the 1d4chan page have no pictures?
    >> Anonymous 05/29/11(Sun)06:44 No.15091071

    And by that i mean why does it have only one picture? I remember lots of them posted in the first thread.
    >> Anonymous 05/29/11(Sun)06:47 No.15091085

    >rest is all good

    Do you know English at all? Your sentences are malformed and lack words that are necessary for correct parsing of the sentence. If you don't understand what you're doing wrong, then stop writing.
    >> The God-Emperor of Mankind 05/29/11(Sun)06:48 No.15091089

    Because I have little to no knowledge on how 2 post stuff there. Im barely learning.
    >> Fightan Man 05/29/11(Sun)06:52 No.15091112
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    >yo moma
    See I can't tell when 4chon reviews my shit, if they're sincere writing masters or retarded halfwits. And I gotta gauge my editing on that.
    >> X 05/29/11(Sun)06:55 No.15091125
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    Picture dump'an commencing

    If people could create a gallery on the 1d4chan page and add them it would be great.
    >> X 05/29/11(Sun)06:56 No.15091127
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    >> X 05/29/11(Sun)06:57 No.15091130
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    Possible Idea for one of the eight lords
    >> X 05/29/11(Sun)06:57 No.15091133
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    Symbol of the Eight Tombs
    >> X 05/29/11(Sun)07:01 No.15091146
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    Ultra Chinese design that I still could be kinda cool if scaled back
    >> The God-Emperor of Mankind 05/29/11(Sun)07:23 No.15091241

    I like the fact that the thread dies, when I decide to shut up.
    >> Anonymous 05/29/11(Sun)07:27 No.15091257
    When you write you make a ton of spelling/grammar mistakes.

    If you took the time to think up a story put a little bit of effort into the delivery is all.
    >> Anonymous 05/29/11(Sun)08:16 No.15091481
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    >> X 05/29/11(Sun)08:18 No.15091485

    Huh, I really like that.

    Imo perfect for one of the eight gold Lords
    >> The God-Emperor of Mankind 05/29/11(Sun)08:22 No.15091501

    Nice to see im not the only one around contributing, I am fleshing out a portrait for Lord Kaar.
    >> Anonymous 05/29/11(Sun)08:29 No.15091534
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    Because the only thing worse than a giant mechanical undead centipede bursting out of a wall to murder you in gruesome unimaginable ways is a giant mechanical undead dragon centipede bursting out of a wall to murder you in gruesome unimaginable ways.
    >> Ultramarines? More like Overmarines 05/29/11(Sun)09:19 No.15091672
    Don't anyone dare forget the Drunken Boxing Flayed Ones.

    >> The God-Emperor of Mankind 05/29/11(Sun)09:56 No.15091918

    How about you start contributing yourself to your own idea.
    >> Centuryeggs !!yvm0QrHZZJQ 05/29/11(Sun)11:57 No.15092753
    I like your "dragon" tomb stalker idea so i stole it
    just kidding!
    >> Centuryeggs !!yvm0QrHZZJQ 05/29/11(Sun)11:59 No.15092766
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    Ugh i forgot the picture
    i hope you like it
    >> The God-Emperor of Mankind 05/29/11(Sun)12:44 No.15093101

    I LOVE IT, But its not my idea. :o

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