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    505 KB Sir Scribe 08/23/11(Tue)13:15 No.16037079  
    Het /tg/, this request was made in a drawthread a couple days ago and I finally got off my lazy ass and finished it. Decided to drop it off here to see what y'all thought.

    Also I guess this is a drawthread or something.
    >> Anonymous 08/23/11(Tue)13:18 No.16037089
    I suppose I'll file my request for good measure:

    I really just want a dark-haired human assassin ducking below the swing of a very large man (almost giant) and plunging a dagger into him. Wherever.
    >> Anonymous 08/23/11(Tue)13:21 No.16037114

    Are you taking requests? Would you be interested in drawing a Dwarf?
    >> Anonymous 08/23/11(Tue)13:21 No.16037115
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    Whoa. Just..whoa. That's fucking amazing, man. That is some serious quality work there. Awesome job!

    If you are taking requests, I would like to request an Emperor's Children Termie with lightning claws (like at left, if you would be so kind) fighting an Iron Hand.
    >> Anonymous 08/23/11(Tue)13:26 No.16037142
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    I want a Kamen Rider/Masked Rider like dude but with marshmallow peeps as a theme instead of grasshopper.
    >> Anonymous 08/23/11(Tue)13:27 No.16037155
    >> Anonymous 08/23/11(Tue)13:28 No.16037162
    Where is that image from?

    It is glorious.
    >> Anonymous 08/23/11(Tue)13:28 No.16037168

    Sweet work. What was the request?
    >> Anonymous 08/23/11(Tue)13:32 No.16037187
    A human assassin in dark form-fitted clothing fighting a giant.
    >> Anonymous 08/23/11(Tue)13:38 No.16037240
    ok, "constructive" criticism/bashing time:

    the perspective construction is awkward, especially on the sword, that doesn't even look like it's resting on the shoulder or following the same viewpoint.
    the right leg also looks strange, as if the thigh was three-inches-long. She also doesn't look like she's standing on that corpse, simply superimposed on it, because she's not shaded the same way and barely casts a shadow on it.

    the face is heavily distorted and the jaw/neck is too wide compared to the body. there are also other minor anatomy errors that can be assimilated to a misconstruction.

    There is little sense of depth in the whole picture, mostly because the various elements are not shaded the same way when they should and also lack contrast following the light sources.

    the shading itself tends to go towards cushion shading, because it's too soft for such a harsh lighting and doesn't quite follow the volumes.

    also, the blood looks "diluted", which could also be said of a lot of shadows.

    the linework itself was better than the shaded pic.

    but it looks like you're able to highlight metal relatively well. You mostly lack a grasp of depth and masses that would allow you to use highlights and shades properly.
    >> Anonymous 08/23/11(Tue)13:40 No.16037253

    Who are you , and god-emperor forbid if you are not a drawfag and criticize.
    >> Anonymous 08/23/11(Tue)13:42 No.16037260
    not op

    I remember that being the request of someone who bemoaned his luck back then with getting his requests done by drawfags. Suddenly out of nowhere, three drawfags come along and do his.

    I remember it was an inquisitor, missing an eye, beat up and bloodied, sword resting on shoulder and her other hand flinging psyker bolts while daemons approached in the distance.

    I think
    >> Anonymous 08/23/11(Tue)13:43 No.16037268
    you'd have to be blind not to notice everything I mentioned.
    >> Anonymous 08/23/11(Tue)13:45 No.16037280

    I am not op, but, YOU DO IT BETTER THEN.
    >> Sir Scribe 08/23/11(Tue)13:45 No.16037289
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    It should be noted that the amount of thime I spent on the entire background is the same amount of time that I spent on the Inquisitor herself.

    I have an old Dward Fighter sketch somewhere in my laptop. Gimme a minute and Ill try and dig it up.

    This is something complicated enough for me to want to spend a full day or two on. I'll let you know if I can do so.

    started on this.

    An armored, female Inquisitor (Warhammer 40k), with a 'hugeass' sword resting on her right shoulder, with her left hand shooting psychic lighting, all cut up doing a last-stand deal against an oncoming horde of khornate daemons, in front of an imperial starport

    I refuse to listen to the inquisitor-with-fluer-tattoo discussion again so Ill say that the fleur on her cheek was part of the request.
    >> Anonymous 08/23/11(Tue)13:46 No.16037292
    I won't spend my time trying to do it better just to prove you that you fail at noticing obvious errors, I'm not that mean.
    >> Anonymous 08/23/11(Tue)13:47 No.16037311
    well, here's an other problem: you treated the background and the inquisitor as separate drawings.

    sometimes, using layers under photoshop can be a handicap.
    >> Anonymous 08/23/11(Tue)13:47 No.16037312

    Are you being sarcastic or are you just an idiot?

    In case you're an idiot; criticisms are subjective views of the works with the personal ideas of the views being expressed with the idea of the artist being made aware of these ideas.
    Some may disregard it all, some may spot certain things to improve and others may strive to re-create their style.
    >> Anonymous 08/23/11(Tue)13:47 No.16037313
    No huge knockers?
    How can we have portals without knockers?
    >> Anonymous 08/23/11(Tue)13:47 No.16037316
    not the guy pointing out assumed flaws but as a drawfag myself, I want to draw my own interpretation of the scene as well.

    hopefully it'll be done before thread 404's
    >> Anonymous 08/23/11(Tue)13:49 No.16037319

    This is what I've wanted to see. Each drawfag has his style. And any respectable drawfag knows where his flaws are , if not he would ask for criticism.
    >> Anonymous 08/23/11(Tue)13:50 No.16037324
    A jedi using blasters to deflect other blaster shots. (They never said light sabers were their only option!)

    Kudos if you have him/her doing acrobatics.
    >> Anonymous 08/23/11(Tue)13:50 No.16037328
    Requester here.

    Thanks so much for starting on this, it's roughing out very nicely already!
    >> Sir Scribe 08/23/11(Tue)13:51 No.16037344
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    That'll make 4 drawfags who've done this request. Is that a record or something?

    Yeah, I know. I am aware of near every criticism you mentioned, and those I wasnt were things that I did in like a minute soyeah.jpg

    (or did you want something other than Dwarf Fighter #eleventy billion?)
    >> Anonymous 08/23/11(Tue)13:53 No.16037353

    Its fine bro!
    >> Anonymous 08/23/11(Tue)13:54 No.16037359
    well, constantly asking for criticism does not mean you'll receive it. I speak from experience. And when some criticism does arrive, there's always one or two idiots to mistake it for an insult.

    there are differences between having distinctive flaws and having a style. Even if you call it the same thing, there is no dignity in drawing a specific way just because you cannot draw better. I will consider developing a style of my own when I will be able to draw/paint photorealistic pictures in several media, as well as several pre-existing styles.
    >> Anonymous 08/23/11(Tue)13:55 No.16037372

    Again, depends on the individual.
    >> Anonymous 08/23/11(Tue)13:58 No.16037401
    I'm implying that every artist should do as I do if he/she fancies having a style of his own.
    >> Anonymous 08/23/11(Tue)13:59 No.16037406
    /b/ most likely
    >> Anonymous 08/23/11(Tue)14:04 No.16037438
    Awesome! I hope you have time to finish it, it's looking great so far.
    >> Anonymous 08/23/11(Tue)14:11 No.16037491
    Dude, after seeing what you can do spending a day or two on a project, that is fine by me. In fact, I would be honored if you chose to but that much detail into it.
    >> Sir Scribe 08/23/11(Tue)14:25 No.16037598
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    Think Ill do this next because it sounds silly.
    >> Anonymous 08/23/11(Tue)14:29 No.16037645
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    I have to take someone down to take a college test shortly and because of the drive I plan on sticking around until it's done. Can everyone bump the thread until I return in about 7 hours?

    Puppy dog eyes for a bump or two if thread is dying before I return.
    >> Anonymous 08/23/11(Tue)14:30 No.16037650
    I appreciate it, Sir Scribe. I owe you... do you need anything written? I'm a freelance author by trade... if you need any character bios or scenarios written out I'd love to help.
    >> Sir Scribe 08/23/11(Tue)14:40 No.16037731
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    Battle Droids are hard to speed-draw recognizably.

    Hmmm... There's a /tg/ homebrew for a Zelda RPG going on, and I'm sure they'd appreciate a writefag working on setting histories/character bios and such.

    If you want you could do some brief Writefaggotry with my D&D character. Human Fighter, shield-based, worked as a town guard before being roped into the adventure. has a "What did I do to deserve this??/What the fuck is going on??" attitude, and is very rapidly becoming jaded and cynical after having to deal with PC-style plans, and magical underground kingdoms hidden beneath swamps. Named Aran DuGalle.
    >> wahirsch@gmail.com writefag thief !!oZGoixrRumn 08/23/11(Tue)14:45 No.16037779
    I'll get to work on something, if you want to drop some more details to me via email.
    >> Anonymous 08/23/11(Tue)14:50 No.16037815

    One clarification and one slight change in my request, if I may make one. The clarification is just that while the Emp Child does have Slaaneshi marks and Chaos Symbols on his armor, he still looks pre-Heresy since he has embraced the facet of Slaanesh that deals with perfection. Also: that cloak and wing device is still awesome.

    The slight change is just to change the guy he is fighting from an Iron Hand to a Dark Angel, if it wouldn't be that much more effort.
    >> Anonymous 08/23/11(Tue)14:51 No.16037820
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    >actually fighting someone

    This is more like what I'd picture. I apologize in advance for the lolperspective, but I did it in MSPaint.
    >> I asked for this 08/23/11(Tue)14:51 No.16037822

    Alicia Inquisitorial Psycho Bitch is done and it looks awesome!
    >> Anonymous 08/23/11(Tue)14:53 No.16037835
    Gonna toss my simple request out here. A short haired female barbarian with a big ass sword. Run with it, Drawfriend.
    >> writefag thief !!oZGoixrRumn 08/23/11(Tue)14:54 No.16037848
    Well the idea was that he tried sneaking into this giant-like man's house to kill him for (blah blah blah), but he'd consumed a potion of stoneskin in anticipation of an assassination attempt, this the killing blow glanced off of him and a fight ensued.
    >> Anonymous 08/23/11(Tue)14:57 No.16037866
    A true assassin would have replaced the stoneskin potion tih poison.
    >> Sir Scribe 08/23/11(Tue)14:57 No.16037872
    Would you like your barbarian to be unrealistically attractive and skimpy?

    Gonna take a quick break before taking another request; I hunger for nourishments.
    >> Anonymous 08/23/11(Tue)14:58 No.16037875
    I meant with.
    >> writefag thief !!oZGoixrRumn 08/23/11(Tue)14:58 No.16037885
    Well played, sir.
    >> Anonymous 08/23/11(Tue)14:59 No.16037895
    Attractive? Sure. Skimpy? Eh, I'd prefer not to have her tits hanging out all over the place, but lightly armored would be fine.
    >> I asked for this 08/23/11(Tue)15:00 No.16037908
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    Can't believe I went from never having it drawn to 4 separate drawbros doing it. Im gonna post theres in this thread if thats cool
    >> I asked for this 08/23/11(Tue)15:01 No.16037919
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    >> Anonymous 08/23/11(Tue)15:09 No.16037998
    If any drawfags are available or willing to add another request to their queue, may I possibly request the following character from a Shadowrun game I'm playing?

    Caucasian male, early 20's. Long straight brown hair down to just below his shoulders.

    Wearing desert camo pants, white ceramic armour vest with a white tshirt on underneath, an open black jacket with a yellow skull & crossbones logo on the shoulders, and black boots.

    Weilding a ridiculously oversized revolver that looks like the bastard child of a Mateba Model 6 Unica and a Nerf Maverick, and also has a sheathed straight bladed wakizashi. I know, I know, but despte this armament it's actually the least weeaboo character in the group...

    Thanks in Advance
    >> Anonymous 08/23/11(Tue)15:23 No.16038155
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    >> Anonymous 08/23/11(Tue)15:30 No.16038227
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    Didn't you already ask for this in the previous drawfriend general.
    Oh well. Here she goes:
    >> Anonymous 08/23/11(Tue)15:32 No.16038248
    Yep, but I'm a greedy bastard.
    Or rather, I like to see different takes on the same thing.
    Pick whichever one you like.
    >> Anonymous 08/23/11(Tue)15:34 No.16038266
    No prob, dude. Let me hear your thoughts on this version.
    >> Anonymous 08/23/11(Tue)15:39 No.16038323
    Not bad, considering the time amount and my vague description. Although, it looks more like a fighter or possibly a berserker than a traditional barbarian. But, that gives me an idea for s character...
    >> Anonymous 08/23/11(Tue)15:42 No.16038348
    Yeah, I thought the armor turned out heavier than I intended it to. It's just more fun to draw heavier armor.
    >> Anonymous 08/23/11(Tue)15:49 No.16038420
    That makes perfect sense, really. It gives you room to add more details and a bit more flavor than a bare character.
    >> Anonymous 08/23/11(Tue)15:53 No.16038454
    Well I'm signing off for today. Hope the other drawfags show up soon.
    >> Lecherstein 08/23/11(Tue)15:57 No.16038507
    I'm not the fastest of drawfags so bear with me.

    Do you want the inquisitor with a hat, a helmet or just hair? preferences for daemon chaos alignment?
    >> Lecherstein 08/23/11(Tue)15:59 No.16038517
    oh and in case I get struck by a serious case of bytheemperorineedsomesleep, I'll post the (messy) lineart/planning thing and maybe post a coloured version later on.
    >> Lecherstein 08/23/11(Tue)16:02 No.16038535
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    welp hair it is
    >> Sir Scribe 08/23/11(Tue)17:00 No.16039020
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    I think I made her a tad TOO lightly armored.

    Meant to make her outfit more sensible, but couldn't help myself :U
    >> Lecherstein 08/23/11(Tue)17:57 No.16039554
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    oh dear sorry I can't finish your inquisitor before I need sleep

    I dunno, I think I've remembered your name so if you ever post in a drawthread and I've somehow finished it, I'll post the result.
    >> Sir Scribe 08/23/11(Tue)18:12 No.16039721
    Your image broke.
    >> Anonymous 08/23/11(Tue)18:15 No.16039752
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    >> Sir Scribe 08/23/11(Tue)18:31 No.16039931
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    Noticed a pair of mistakes so I fixed them real quick :U
    >> greenmarine !!ynR8ly17cbg 08/23/11(Tue)21:06 No.16041352
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