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Greeting elegant/tg/entleman. Last time, we’ve had a small talk with the mantis that isn’t back on her feet yet and exchanged some information with the Tanuki that seem to have been invited to the castle, and it was revealed that the agent responsible for the charming was found dead, suicide to avoid capture. Next came some charming while trying to appoint her to the eventual position of spymaster of the war effort and it seem she’s quite receptive to the idea.

But now, this consumption ability we have has shown itself to be rather… worrisome and so we’ve decided to try the library for anything related, for right now we seem to possess the time.
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It didn’t take much effort to find a guide for the library, apparently the castle had a inbuilt one of moderate size that had been commissioned by the queen herself a few years back, most of the books from the library outside the castle found their way here and from there the young queen kept increasing the collection because, apparently, she read much more than she work. This castle seems more and more like a manor.

That catgirl servant is a real blabbermouth, but you’d certainly not refuse the help of a guide, it seems the library is deep into the bowels of the building, right into the basement where no windows are constructed, the way is light by lamp even during the late morning.

Tanuya was sleeping very tightly so you’ve decided to simply leave her there to sleep, the floor was covered by a small comfortable mattress and the day is warm, she’s in hood hands anyway, your left is flanked by the angel staying as stoic and discipline as you’ve ever saw her, always armed and geared up in armor while looking straight ahead but sometime her eyes cross yours and she look away quite fast. Behind you is Bletsia, her progress perfectly even with your march thank to the obscene amount of legs she got, she’s waving and slithering on the floor with much more dexterity than any lamia, that’s something you’re more than willing to bet solid gold on, the girl tend to nibble on your shoulder with her mandible but you’ve yet to be poisoned so you feel safe enough.

‘’Here’s the door to the Library ambassador, the keeper is very likely to be present but if you need another guide, servants come and go from this area as well as soldiers’’

You did cross path with some of those, you simply nod to the girl and off she goes.

>cont
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Next, the simple door to the library is opened by Hadraniel as she step inside without your consent, but you have to admit to be impressed, this library is big, especially for being in a castle.

Two stories tall you’d say, there’s two set of ladders leading to the balcony upstairs where the large, second rows of books are situated, with rows upon row of large bookcase adorning the walls and floor with most of everything illuminated by lamp of alchemical nature: they glow a dull white without releasing magic.

Hmm but something does feel unusual here, a slight feeling of discomfort…

The sound of light snoring is picked up next, Bletsia also suddenly spring ahead, slithering fast as she look and… smell the various rows of books, but you see that, sprawled on a large desk, is a rather tall Crow Tengu, sleeping soundly with her cheek on some open books while her two wings take almost all the space of her support, short hair of jet black adorned with a small conic hat give a rather comical impression, but you spy some talons that would mean business in a confrontation.

She’s sleeping soundly at least, for Hadraniel various clicking as she move are more than telling enough for presence.
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>>19421915

Let her sleep.

Not our place to disturb and we don't want too much news about our ability.
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>>19422037

Then will you proceed to look through each of the bookcase for anything relevent?

That's going to take a while
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>>19422053

Still siggy's not one to just disturb someone sleeping.

And its not like she was sleeping on the front desk or something.

At least until Bletsia knocks something over or cannot resist the temptation and pokes that sleeping Tengu.
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>>19422125

If such is the course of action, what kind of books are oyu hoping to find so things can be narrowed down?
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Wake her. Courtesy is one thing, but we're likely to just waste our time poking around at random. Besides, she is the librarian / caretaker of this place so we'd be only asking her to do her job.

On a related one, can Siggy even read the language most of these books are likely written in?
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>>19422180

You've spent your youth in the mage college learning a few languages (mostly that of the South) and when you've stepped into Zipangu, everyone spoke the same language but its likely you'll stumble upon something you don't know, however the odds are in your favor regardless.
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>>19422161

Texts on medical subjects or religious text that praise the efforts of saints or prophets.

For the first, such conditions would probably be collected in books detailing rare conditions.

For the second, such abilities would probably be part of legends or great deeds, say cleansing land or something.
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>MGQ BUMP
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After taking in the large library and walking in circle in the middle for a few moments, Hadraniel suddenly started to hover and fly up to the balcony, her wings produce some kind of breeze each time they flap and even if she’s out of view now, you can feel this strange breeze that seem almost natural.

But again there this feeling that keeps you on edge, it’s hard to pinpoint or identify but it’s enough to make your step louder when you approach the sleeping Tengu, a quick look to the side and you see the centipede slithering through the alleys of books with incredible dexterity given her long body.

‘’uguu…’’

She’s talking in her sleep? Anyhow you don’t have time for this, looking through this place row by row is going to take you a week so, you a firm hand, you wake the girl by tapping the desk…

Her eyes lazily plop open and you frown slightly at the crimson color, but it seem she just froze with the most tired looking face you’ve ever see someone have, you almost wonder if she’s bre-

‘’Whooooa whooa!’’

Her wings suddenly flap and airborne she goes, the sudden noise caused both Bletsia and the angel to look at her, with the blue armored creature clutching her spear.

‘’Whooa! Who the hell!? Why are you here?’’

She asks, sending papers everywhere while the frenetic flapping of her wings allows her to easily stay levitating.

Off to a good start.
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>>19422312

"Ambassador Sigfried. Are you the caretaker of this library? My apologies for disrupting your rest but I am searching for some books and I'd like to call upon your expertise."
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>>19422372
This
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"Ambassador Siegfried. Are you the caretaker of this library? My apologies for disrupting your rest but I am searching for some books and I'd like to call upon your expertise."

You look up after speaking, looking at her straight in the eyes and her crimsons ones shift away from your gaze while the flapping continue for a time, but it seems she’s recovering fast and, without warning, her wings stop and she land without a sound, the talons offering perfect landing.

‘’I see, I see…’’

She look to Bletsia for a moment, provoking another flap of wings and some feathers to fall, but when she finally spot Hadraniel hovering in the middle of the room, she gawk for a good 10 seconds.

‘’I would like to consult you for books of…’’

You start, grabbing her attention and she interrupt you by jumping on the desk and ruffling what remains with her talons but she’s rather tall, such an operation is thus more messy than effective.

Then she grab book and chuck it at you.

‘’It’s the index, but I’ll help however I can anyway, thank for waking me up by the way’’

And so the search starts.

>Roll 1d20 for effectiveness and time
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rolled 20 = 20

>>19422434

Rollin'
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>>19422445

God damn dem dices
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>‘’uguu…’’
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>>19422445
>>19422455
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>>19422445
>20

We're going to miss that 20 the next time combat rolls around though.
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>>19422494

Quite likely, yes.

Thus is the fate of Quest that use /tg/ dice.

At least we can talk our way out of most situations.
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And so the search started, the Tengu went off to the second story with Hadraniel taking the second part, both of them having wings mean looking through the high bookcase something easy, while you were left with the first floor and a rather curious Bletsia that, somehow, found a game running through the alley and curving between each obstacle with a flexibility that was, honestly, scary.

You’ve charged yourself with finding books on prophet, magical phenomenon and, if you could, inexplicable disease but so far the results were poor, most of what you found were various retelling of the Great Crusade, it would seem even the monsters are very fond of the 13 heroes, there was also quite a bit of different work about the history of the island, its geography, its various plant life and of course some books detailing the various Monsters, with some philosophical entry on the nature of corruption that you decided to pick, but overall the wield was rather… poor.
Then again you’re nature of Consumer seem to be an enigma to Ame-no-Uzume and her mother.

But…

It seem your star shined, one armful of books you were examining one of the furthest bookcase on the wall (only to find that it was erotic literature), but this impression of ‘’wrong’’ suddenly sprang, but you weren’t feeling anything magical, no it was… something else and when you looked, between two books, you saw something unusual: a slight uneven structure on the wall, but you soon identified it to be a door, a metallic one at that, covered in dust where this ‘’wrongness’’ you keep feeling in your guts is originating from.

A hidden door in the library?

>>19422460
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>>19422526
The RNG is fickle one.
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>Log on to /tg/ for first time in months.
>MGQ

And while I wait, archive binge!
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>>19422625
Need a link.
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>>19422615
>A hidden door in the library?

More likely than you think.
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>>19422625

http://suptg.thisisnotatrueending.com/archive.html?tags=Monster%20Girls%20Quest
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>>19422615

Let it never be said Siggy was not a curious man.

Lets take a look. Without the Tengu noticing.
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>>19422681

That will mean moving the heavy and tall bookcase of wood, meaning an inevitable roll
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>>19422704

Might as well.
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>>19422642
>>19422661
>>19422642
For six and up. The rest should be on the foolz archive, and even I'm not crazy enough to go searching through that.

>>19422704
dice+1d20

DICE GODS I COMMAND YOU
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>>19422615
Let's enter but be wary after all curiosity killed the cat.
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>>19422751
>>19422758
Shouldn't we just ask the Tengu? The queen herself seems to like us quite a bit, so even if we need her permission to open that door, we should be able to get it.
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>>19422704

Lets see if our luck holds.

At the worst we could cite infiltration fears if we're caught.
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>>19422768
Good point.
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Well then, 1d6 to move the bookcase

>>19422751

Everything has been archived beside update 19 I believe, its jsut that I fucked up the tags for 6 and up during a very tiring night
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>>19422800
Could you be so kind and consider >>19422768
?

At least until more than 1 anon has commented on it?
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rolled 4 = 4

>>19422800

See if our luck holds
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>>19422808
Move it first, then ask permission. Seriously!
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rolled 6 = 6

>>19422800
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>>19422808

I am considering it but it seem the consensus is moving the bookcase, going with the flow bro
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>>19422822

That permission will never be granted.

It's always easier to ask forgiveness than for permission.
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>>19422826

Good lord...

Let it be known that I was NOT planning for two crit so close to each others
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>>19422855
Someone roll a third time; it'll be a 1.
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>>19422855
The /tg/ dice are fickle.
They hate players and quest runners alike.
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>>19422940

And they laugh.

/tg/ dice laughs and drinks our tears.
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A man will be curious and form that need dreams and ambition are born, right?

This bookcase is right between two others, meaning there no real grip anywhere and its stuffed full, but even so you grab the sturdiest part you can find and slowly, slowly pull while looking at your surroundings, but you can only see Hadraniel on the other end of the second story between two column, she seem busy enough, the Tengu is probably above while Bletsia continue her obstacle course with a flexibility a Lamia would never match.

So you pull very, very carefully no books fall, everything is staying in place, your grip is absolutely worthless and that damn huge bookcase is both taller and heavier than you yet someone you manage to pull enough to get a more comfortable side grip and form there its smooth sailing, with nobody seeing anything while you are in clear view.

How did you manage that…?

Still the door. It’s one of metal and, even with all the dust, the mark of the books allow you to spot some form of runes, but nothing magical emanate from it, so those are probably decoration. You spot the doorknob; it’s a very small one as expecting so getting a grip is rather hard but then…

Well as expected.

It’s locked, the hole for the key is easily seen, right under your hand.
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>>19422988

INH, we can adjust the ice we create at will right?
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>>19423007

But that mean entering focus and everyone sensible to magic will know you're casting
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>>19423007
Clever girl.
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>>19423025
Perhaps not a good idea then.
I wouldn't suppose we happen to know how to pick a lock right?
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>>19423025

Damn. Cockblocked.

It should be an old-style lock. Lockpicking is actually quite possible...

Peer through the keyhole? See if theres anything we can see inside.
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>>19423061
>>19423047

You don't.

HOWEVER

You can control the amount of magic you let out, just like that girl that tried to charm you. Siegfried has enough discipline to not be overwhelmed by the feeling of power brought by Focus, but you don't know if the Tengu is skilled in magic.

And Hadraniel is sharp, you know that first hand.
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>>19423076

Then magical key plan is a go.

Create a small key sized not-cold icicle and insert and have it create nubs at different lengths to test which tumbler gives at which height.
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Mage are often describe as unsubtle, brutish and to the point and you can’t exactly disagree, when two mages duke it out the confrontation end fast with usually one clear winner, your kind isn’t a subtle one.

But that doesn’t mean you, at the very least, aren’t.
A mage of water is not limited to ice even if it became something of a specialization over the years, you index is now right on the keyhole and you take in several deep breath, calming your heartbeat while entering Focus slowly, unlike every single time you did it on your journey. The amount of magic in you in finite, it’s almost insulting but with a brief look back, Bletsia seem to have disappeared but then you see that the Tengu seem to have exchanged place with Hadraniel, the angel is nowhere to be seen.

Probably above.

Still you concentrate, a small gelatinous water extend from your finger and from there, it enter the keyhole and you start to morph it slowly to the perfect key, each nooks and cranny is neatly identified into the gelatin and after a few moments, you harden it with ice and create a small handle, turn it and…

Bin-

‘’What are you doing?’’

You don’t jump, you simply freeze on the spot, Hadraniel small voice is not enough to carry to the other end of the library and with another look, the Tengu is gone, however your companion is looking at the door, the moved bookcase then at you with a frown.

‘’…’’

Her silence speaks volume.
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rolled 2 = 2

>>19423238
"This... is exactly what it looks like."
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>>19423252

This.

add "Wanna take a look?"
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"Falling victim to the siren song of curiosity dear Hadraniel."
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"This... is exactly what it looks like."

You reply with a firm voice, looking at her square in the eyes and letting go of Focus, causing the key to disappear into the ether.

Well at least it’s her that caught you…

‘’Want to take a look?’’

You add, pressing on the doorknob, but Hadraniel take a silent step and put her free hand on your shoulder.

‘’You are an ambassador Siegfried, there is probably a few seconds before the Tengu see what you done. You want to break into an area that was sealed?’’

But then when she looks at the door, she frowns and retreat her hand while the grip on her spear tighten.

‘’…This is a bad idea, the keeper will spot you for certain’’

When you look back, you still can’t spot the bird woman.
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>>19423319
"Not if someone would you know, keep her occupied with something."
Of course delivered with the most innocent tone and expression we can manage.
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>>19423357

"And I have a slightly bad feeling about this door. It might have something to do with those church agents.

So I want to make sure, just in case."
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>>19423357
>>19423376
Sounds about right. At this point we most likely couldn't cram the bookcase back the way it was silently and fast enough anyway.
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"Not if someone would you know, keep her occupied with something."

You say, delivered in a casual tone as you smile to your companion, to which she replies with yet another frown. She really need to stop that, it’ll end up ruining her pretty face. But then when you look back, the Tengu is back at her desk and…

Did you linger too much?

Well whatever, Bletsia is looking at her form a distance but she’s looking straight at you and of course the angel, her wings flapping and a tired expression on her face.

Look like she came back to put some books back but now you’ve been caught red handed but she doesn’t seem hostile at all, the girl flaps her wings and jump to you, it’s an impressive feat given the distance.

‘’I knew I felt a bit of magic, but to actually find this door, anyway I’m not exactly sure it’s a good idea stepping in there, ambassador. Well if you do I’ll have to tell the regent, duty bound and all, but don’t let me stop you’’

She seems way too relaxed, Bletsia is following close behind, her violet eyes on the door but then for some reason, she’s spooked and retreat.
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>>19423421
Ask her if she knows what is behind the door.
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>>19423436
Hmm. Doesn't seem to be too terrible if we go in. Yeah, ask her about what's behind the door.
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>>19423421

"Well at least you know it exist. I was slightly worried if this doorway was being used by the agents who infiltrated the palace.

In any case, I just might follow you to see her highness. Do you know what is behind this door? I cannot explain it but there is a terrible sense of wrongness emitting from it. Does she go in there often? It might have been able to subtly affect her."
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"Well at least you know it exists. I was slightly worried if this doorway was being used by the agents who infiltrated the palace.’’

You start, but the Tengu doesn’t seem to be listening, actually she’s staring at the bookcase, then at you, back and forth but only end up scratching her head with the talon of her wings.

You simply stay silent and finish your speech, but you have a rather smug smile on your face.

‘’In any case, I just might follow you to see her highness. Do you know what is behind this door? I cannot explain it but there is a terrible sense of wrongness emitting from it. Does she go in there often? It might have been able to subtly affect her."

Whatever reservation Hadraniel had seemed to be gone, she’s staring at the door with intensity.

‘’I wouldn’t be surprised at all if the angel pick it up, but you? Seem like the rumor are true, you’re made of strange stuff’’

The Tengu then turn to look at Bletsia and slowly walk to the spooked girl then extend her wings and gently rub her cheek.

‘’That place is where precious books were stored, the one not meant for the public eyes, but right now it store one, single book and nobody visited it for 5 years, not after the incident’’

Then she turns to you, her crimson stare turn cold and resolute.

‘’And it would be in everyone best interest if you don’t mention this room to her Highness’’
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>>19423506
"I shall keep that in mind then. Can you perhaps tell me about this incident that happened 5 years ago and what kind of book is being stored in there? Or is this something best left for me to discover on my own?"
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>>19423467
>>19423506

on rereading, I was confusing the queen and regent up, again. Bleh.
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We really need to find out more about this "incident", since a lot of things we encountered during our brief stay so far seem to be connected by it.
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>>19423506
Do we even know what this incident is?
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"I shall keep that in mind then. Can you perhaps tell me about this incident that happened 5 years ago and what kind of book is being stored in there? Or is this something best left for me to discover on my own?"

You step a bit closer to this door, still feeling spooked by whatever is inside, but your words take some time for an answer, the Tengu simply continue to give Bletsia some small caress with her wing and the centipede is rather funny to look at for she’s loving the operation very, very much, her face is one of true bliss.

Hmm… are wings comparable to the fluffy tails?

‘’I came sometime after what happened so I wasn’t present, however the regent herself made me keeper and guard of this door you see’’

She heave a brief sigh and stop petting Bletsia, provoking a slight sad expression from the girl while a clicking from Hadraniel make you realize she’s standing right beside you now, her own wing slightly rubbing you on the back.

…what is she doing? You feel some kind of raw emotion but it’s quickly gone.

‘’5 years ago, Rhy mother, the late queen, went berserk for a reason still unknown, she maimed and almost killed her daughter, it required one of her closest bodyguard to kill her to save the princess – now – queen.’’

Is that so…

The Tengu is speaking in a cold, detached voice without looking at you but now…

Let’s see, Sylphis was born 5 years ago, her father is the chief of the police here and Mantis are very low profile in the realm. Her Highness, Rhy Rahal, was almost killed by her own mother and required a spirit healer for her trauma, and they found one that was actually an agent of the church?
Looking at it this way, the dots are starting to form…
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>>19423600
(So sylphis' mother killed the queen, and then went into exile? Or fled. That's what I'm getting from this.
Perhaps the queen was driven mad and removed so that a more malleable queen was placed into power)
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>>19423643

That's one way to look at it of course, there many answer that can be found, you could try digging deeper if you wish.
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>>19423600

Right there is enough circumstantial evidence to incite an outright declaration of war against the church. Even if they weren't already coming.

From what I get, part of her trauma is probably a feeling that her mother hated her enough to kill her, even if she logically knows that is not possible.

In that case wouldn't telling her about this connection vastly improve her condition? Since it immediately takes away the 'my mother didn't love me' factor.

On the other hand, this can incite war. Immediately.

"I see... but that doesn't explain the taint of magic. Is the book warded somehow?"
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>>19423672

Let's just say her trauma is deeper than ''mommy doesn't love me''

She's lacking some part of one leg and has a scar ruining one of her eye, it was not a pretty incident at all
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>>19423692

I'm not saying thats all there is to it but just that it should be a major part of her trauma.

Nonetheless, wait and see might be the best option for awhile. At least we should discuss the option with the regent.
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"I see... but that doesn't explain this… taint. Is the book warded somehow?"

You drift your gaze back to the door; the unease has slowly disappeared, replaced by something just as bad: an increasing, cold, dark void of hunger, but it’s far, far from overwhelming like it would be starting corruption face to face.
Hadraniel put a hand on your shoulder, hmm maybe you were feeling a bit upset just now…

‘’Maybe, it’s just that everyone near the door always felt somewhat spooked so I made sure to put most of the useless books near it, I have not stepped inside and if you want to, I can’t stop you, I’m not strong enough to resist a mage and an angel, but I won’t follow you either’’

She gazes at you with a rather ferocious face, now that you think about it the number of people here that seem… strong mentally is high.

‘’Maybe it had a part on the previous queen outburst, maybe not, I was not there during that time and I didn’t ask, it’s not my place to rummage through bad memories’’
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>>19423767
It's not really our place to reveal this.
If the government doesn't want her to know, us telling her may endanger the treaty we are trying to broker.
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>>19423809
Rather than just entering, we could ask the regent about it. Or the old man.
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>>19423820
On the other hand even if we don't tell her, we should find out what we can, since these events are somehow connected to Sylphis who we insist on hauling around with us and sooner or later willful ignorance will come around to bite us in the ass.
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>>19423834
I was thinking the same thing.
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>>19423834

At this point, its not about finding out the history of events but more of finding the source of that taint. Plus the symptoms are too similar to siggy's hunger. Likely theres a good clue on his condition in there.

I'm of the opinion it would be worthwhile to just go in and then go with the Tengu to see the regent, after.

>>19423820

Fair enough.
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>>19423875
>>19423834

Then the next course of action is exiting the library and going for the regent or Keldran?

Which one?
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>>19423869
Oh I agree we need to know more, I just think that telling the queen is foolish.
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>>19423891
I also think we should go in and check this book out.
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>>19423936

Okay making sure of the consensus.

Going in, or asking for permission from someone of authority?
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>>19423896
I'm in agreement with >>19423891
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>>19423947
Check with someone first.

I'm thinking the Regent, but I'm a little uncertain there.
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>>19423891
I think ask keldran about it first.
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>>19423947
Get permission first.
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>>19423947

I say we should go in now.

I'm of the opinion that whatever gets us in the door. If we ask for permission, we might get denied. From that point, getting in is going to be hard.

On the otherhand if we go in now, we can apologise later and we still have a pool of goodwill with the regent since we didn't pursue her using Slyphis.
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>>19423947
I think we should go in first. Mostly because I'm hesitant that the regent will let us read the book if we do go to her and we lose out on this chance. And if we have to go purely on what she tells us, who knows what she might leave out that could be an important clue to us. If the Tengu had asked us to speak to the regent first, perhaps I would go with that but I rather just jump head first in this case.
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rolled 2 = 2

Rolling to break stalemate
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You fold your arms as you go deep in thought, stepping away from the door and any distraction, while the temptation of going in and discovering what is inside is strong, it’s not like anything in the place is going to grow legs and flee, asking the regent would likely clear up any kind of incident but she might also say no, it feel like you’ve got something important just dangling right in front of you…

‘’I will enter now, I’ll provide sufficient apology to the regent once this is over, but I feel like I must see what is inside as soon as possible.’’

The Tengu nod, she doesn’t seem hostile to the idea at all.

‘’I will wait here then and once you exit, we will proceed to inform Ran of what took place’’

Fair enough, you simply nod your consent and, without further ado, the bird monster walk to Bletsia and start to fawn all over her with her wings, prompting the young centipede to freeze in place from the caress of the wings.

‘’I will accompany you’’

Hadraniel seem decided, she’s staring at you but you feel some small speck of fear inside her, do you want her to follow or go in alone? You know how stubborn she is, she’s very likely to object.
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>>19424098
Let her follow.
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>>19424098

"Wouldn't have it any other way."
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"Wouldn't have it any other way."

You say with a confident smile, prompting a nod from the stoic angel and she take your spot, the door open in a very, very loud creaking of metal that easily overshadow the clicking of Hadraniel armor but, unimpressed, the lady simply grab the nearest alchemical lantern and proceed down the stairs, the dull white light easily illuminating the area in an artificial, seemingly otherworldly fashion but it may simply be due to the fact this is the first time you’ve seen the dark illuminated by something so white and when you look at her back, her folded wings and the spear held in front of her, that woman.

She’s something; it’s becoming more and more believable that she’s a Hero of old…

For some reason your heart is thumping, ah it’s probably the anticipation, the door outside is of course left open but as you descent behind the angel, this hunger inside you seem to be almost awakening but…

For the very first time its afraid and Hadraniel is solemn, yet her emotion is one of anticipation.

It take a moment of descent, but soon enough both of you bump into another door, one of wood without any kind of handle so the warrior at your front simply push it open with her spear.

>cont
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The room inside is completely pitch black, but after a few steps the light reveal a few row of old, dusty, ruined bookcase completely free of anything, with one desk in taters, dust cover every surface to the point of making breathing difficult but soon enough ,you spot it.

In the middle of the room, put inside a glass of alchemy, lie a small book that would fit in the palm of your hand, it doesn’t actually seem to be a book but something to take note with and that feeling of ‘’wrongness’’ seeping through, the only way to open it would be to break the glass but Hadraniel suddenly start coughing but, when you look at her and offer help, she simply wave you away.

‘’I am… fine, don’t concern yourself with me’’

So she say, but this… thing this energy, it feel like corruption, but not one that awaken your hunger. No, it’s afraid, almost whimpering.
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>>19424277

INH, what do you mean glass of alchemy? There is no way to physically touch the book?
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>>19424304

Oh no, its just regular old glass, but made with alchemy
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>>19424304

Dammit I shouldn't always answer so fast. The book is placed in the glass, no way to touch it yes.
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>>19424318

But is it a cover or a single enclosure?

Is there any opening or such or tools to manipulate the book with nearby?
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>>19424318
I take it that means that the book has been encased in a lump of glass using alchemy then.
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>>19424277
Hmm. Concerned how this might be affecting Hadraniel. Especially since she's weakened. If it gets worse, I think we should send her back.

Is there any writing, symbols or images on the book?
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>>19424349

Indeed, its placed in a small cube of glass, no tools or anything nearby, you'll have to break it open to grab the thing.
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>>19424352

The cover is a complete, slick, black. Nothing to see from all side beside the page of oranges
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>>19424277

Enter light focus.

Lets use whatever moisture is left inside the cube to form non-cold ice manipulators.
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>>19424380
Oooo. I like that. Yeah, let's try that. Don't want to break the glass unless we have to...
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Rubbing you chin a bit, you examine the book for a few more moment while Hadraniel look behind you, but then start inspecting the area while putting the lamp on the floor after you ask her.

You enter Focus, surprising her of course but you simply give her a smile to which she answer by a brief nod and you set to work, a very, very careful and lengthy manipulation of small time magical ice allow you to, slowly, very slowly slid of one part of the sealed cube, but it’s not an easy operation by any mean, the glass also seem ready to break at a moment notice

But when the book is in the open, you grunt as…’’something’’ weight on you, same thing happen to Hadraniel, you feel watched, slightly nauseous but not enough to be panicked, the angel however, has stopped walking and has her eyes closed, free hand covering one of it, but she isn’t in any kind of pain.

What the hell is this book…?
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>>19424472
Check on Hadraniel and see if she's okay. Might be time to consider getting her to leave or at least we leave as well. Also check out the first page since we have it open now.
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>>19424472

"Hadraniel? What wrong?"

Walk with her backwards away from the book. The effects might lessen if she stays away.
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"Hadraniel? What wrong?"

Breathing is getting a bit hard, but the angel gives you a fierce look, one of her eye coming through her fingers increase the ferocity of her ocean stare.

‘’Nothing…nothing…’’

She says through gritted teeth, her wings flap lightly caused a small storm of dust.

‘’Open it Siegfried, open and read, that what we came for, this book is leaking something… Familiar, please whatever assails you, DO NOT eat its… corruption’’

She holding her spear tightly and you feel a faint amount of magic coming through her.
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>>19424543

Read it, then.

If she starts getting worse, send her back.
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>>19424277
Read book.
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>>19424543
Get her out of here. She says nothing but it's bothering her enough to make her grit her teeth. We can read it on our own after.
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>>19424543
Read the book, she has warned us previously that her memories are unpleasant it could just be that this energy is a stimulus to unlock some of what she has forgotten.
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You don’t want to insult her, she doesn’t seem alright at all but… you did come here for this, Hadraniel soon step away from the wall to go near the door and you finally open the small carnet, you won’t have much to read.

‘’The name of this author is to be kept anonymous, after all snooping around for secrets related to the 13 greatest individuals of past time tend to bring a rather lukewarm welcome, they left some serious legacies all around and now I’m sure most of my work got censored, seized, burned.

Still the monsters of Zipangu are pretty welcoming, the journey has been hard but it seem I’ve hit the jackpot for at least one of the heroes, but I’m suspecting the most important of all is probably beyond my reach…

I’d like to speak to the winged one, at any rate, this really look more like a collection of notes isn’t it? But I’m one that sniff out secrets, not a writer, maybe once I feel satisfied I’ll make a big compilation or something but here I’ll have to concentrate on the Rahal.’’

You stop when Hadraniel suddenly fall to one knee, a sudden sharp pain course through her as she’s holding her head, whimpering, damn you’ve barely read this thing but then.

‘’Don’t mind me Siegfried, Don’t. Mind. Me’’

This angel has her pride.
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>>19424638
The winged one might be Hadraniel, maybe this has something to do with her memories?
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>>19424638
Keep going, we need to get her to remember.
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>>19424638
Bloody hell. Jack pot but we have to get Hadraniel out of here. Pride or not, this is going to end up badly for her.
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>>19424659

Most definitely. Winged one. Singular.

>>19424638

Shit. It's actually physically hurting her.

Can we get her to return to the sword or ask her to head back?
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>>19424669
I agree, we cannot let her pride be the death of her.
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‘’Hadraniel…’’

She interrupt, the angel fierce stare is cold, her emotions… there is nothing, absolutely nothing but cold, absolute determination.

‘’Keep going’’

She suddenly let out a long sight.

‘’Please, trust me, this book is leaking the Old Corruption, I am a null, I just need to stay in contact, please. Siegfried, Trust me’’

The Old Corruption!? That’s why this hunger of yours is retreating, it’s completely afraid of the thing and if you were to eat it…
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>>19424690
>>19424681
She's a Hero I doubt a little headache will be the end of her. Besides she said she wanted her memories back remember?
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>>19424726

>old corruption

..so thats how they got the queen's mother to go berserk.

No wonder this thing is sealed.

How the fuck did they weaponise that?!
Keep reading then but hurry it up.
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>>19424726
oooooooh boy. Thats a bit worse then I thought. Still that just means we have to go faster! No coddling.
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>>19424726
Sigh. Fine. Keep reading. Grab her hand though. Can't really help her beyond that at this point.
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‘’Fine, but I hate to hurt you like this’’

You say in a growl, prompting her to actually laugh, dammit, you stubborn Hero…

‘’The Oracle Rhy Rahal of the 13 heroes was one of the two monsters of the entire group, it would seem she had the characteristic of a cat, or maybe a dog its rather hard to judge with the old tapestry, with low pigmentation and an overall weak body, leading to her looking rather angelic with all the white on her person, and of course she was easily carried.

I can’t exactly report on how much time I dug for information’s, or cite my source for fear of getting beheaded, but suffice it to say that she was a vital asset to the group for Rhy was of no use in the numerous, numerous combats, but she acted as a sort of Oracle with the Old Corruption, as well as providing long distance communications, tales even go as far as to say she was able to spy on armies and provide bird eye view of a battlefield.

As for how she became ruler of a big chunk of this huge island, I have no idea. Records were burnt during the first crusade when the church hit this capital hard and for now, most of the things left are words of mouths but it seem there is another one of the Heroes residing on this land… but there might be more to the legacy of Rhy, she was the most unassuming member of the group, of that I can be certain’’

You stop, there a blank page next but then, you suddenly feel a crushing feeling of impending doom, one that buckle you knee in a growl while Hadraniel is going ‘’I can’t remember I can’t recall it’s not there…’’

However you spot some more letters on the next page
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>>19424785

Can we send her back to her shrine in her sword before we turn the page?
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>>19424836

If you think you can convince her
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>>19424785
I think it might be best if we stop here. Impending sense of doom is probably a warning sign we want to heed. Plus, this might not be the best way to trigger any of Hadraniel's memories if it happens.
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Soldiering on? or stopping? You guys know Hadraniel will choose the first option.
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>>19424785
>>19424836
>>19424857

"Hadraniel. Please fall back, back to your shrine if you have to."

After her inevitable denial.

"Hadraniel, listen to me. You have been my guide and shield many times already. I trust your counsel absolutely so believe me when I say I cannot bear to see you hurt any further like this.

I can and will continue to read it but not if it keeps hurting you like this. Please. Retreat for now. That I may yet continue to heed your words and advice."
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>>19424917
Keep going we should start listening to the angel she's been right so far. Besides if she thinks she's liable to come to harm I doubt she'd continue since that would put us at risk as well.
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"Hadraniel. Please fall back, back to your shrine if you have to."

There’s a sharp intake of breath, the only thing she does is staring at you with her bright blue eyes, no need for word, her denial is complete, unbending and will not budge.

"Hadraniel, listen to me. You have been my guide and shield many times already. I trust your counsel absolutely so believe me when I say I cannot bear to see you hurt any further like this.’’

You tighten your grip on the damn book, Hadraniel stare is hard, but you keep looking in her eyes, she never soften, but she get up on her legs, not even using her spear for support.

‘’I can and will continue to read it but not if it keeps hurting you like this. Please. Retreat for now. That I may yet continue to heed your words and advice."

Your heart tighten somewhat, you… you really feel like you’re hurting her and its killing you inside, just a small bit.

‘’No’’

She say, letting out a deep, controlled breath as she never falters in her stare.

‘’I have decided to involve myself back into the affairs of the world, Siegfried, this Old Corruption is my antithesis, something I MUST kill, something I MUST be immune too, something I MUST get used too, I just need some time, one more minute’’

But then for some reason, you feel a small tint of fear coming from her, one that is uncharacteristic, but it comes and goes, impossible to grab.
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>>19424983

Well it was worth a shot.

I vote keep reading but hold on to her, if anything the two of them can support each other.
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>>19424983
"And you will. When you've regained your strength. You said yourself, you're not what you used to be. Trying to confront what you must destroy before you're ready is folly."

If that doesn't work just go with >>19425015.
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"And you will. When you've regained your strength. You said yourself; you're not what you used to be. Trying to confront what you must destroy before you're ready is folly."

You say, walking toward her, holding the book in both your hand, but Hadraniel simply shake her head.

‘’If the Old corruption is still somehow active, I don’t have the luxury to be ready’’

She’s… She’s really stubborn isn’t she?

You pat her on the head slightly, you feel completely immune to this corruption, you can’t exactly know the pain she’s in, it seem she’s not allowing it to seep through the Soul Link as well…

Steeling yourself, you open the book near her so she can see what you do and finally turn the blank page separating you form the last bit of information and…

What the hell is this?

omertnpoirmtaonitnformasahnebedofnu a inebg of a suconginmretnauliliw be bnortisnoe of the cygale of the heroes llsit a aywotplcomeetlymrveorethatitn of corruption ltoethgera no I’m tnoreusutbeht Demon Lord dha a nhadn in ithslelheenvehtpivoeusrdidacntaedha a nadh too his incomglilwbor the odlrw of tis uureftilntuvyotcir is radecheoen fo the wot Guardian siddaeonssdnagehtrsdau of the sky lendcihr of earth and oeshterfe of corruption rea ottbatlenda mforihts the ufrue siniissats.

Are Gods made flesh?

Nightmares are still active

Tenko is the instigator.

More research upon the nature of this creature is to be made
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>cont
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There isn’t any kind of sense to be made; the tone of the text has completely changed but then, suddenly, Hadraniel bolt to the door and grab the lantern, leaving you in the dark while a sudden scared bloodlust washes over you, coming from her, as she walk upstairs, prompting you to run to her side and see…

A impossibly tall humanoid, so tall that he need bend, so large that he take almost all the space upstairs, so dark in shadow that he, or it, is completely free of identification beside the silhouette, it stand atop the stair, taking one step, while you stare.

‘’You should only be active at night!’’

Hadraniel scream

‘’Go away, Nightmare!''

But it fall on deaf ears, the giant take another step and she point him, it, with her elegant spear.

>Back in 20 minutes
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>>19425053
Seconded
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>>19425151
... Damnit. I knew we should have stopped.
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>>19425151

...At least it saves us the trouble of getting an IC reason to ferret out the relevant information.

Full combat readiness.

Focus, frost armour and weapons.
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>>19425147
Portions of the scrambled text can be made out, for example
>the odlrw of tis
is,
>the world of its

and
>rea ottbatlenda
contains
>are battle and to
though im not sure of the order of that last one.
If I have time, I may try and figure out the message.
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>>19425182
Seconding. I hope that it will have some effect.
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>>19425151
Well, uh huh. Alright I admit that I screwed up in thinking it was a good idea to keep reading. Sooo how do we defeat a nightmare that is most likely a memory of the previous monster lord? I say memory because even dead gods can dream. Any one know the anti thesis of a nursery ryehm we could sing?
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>lendcihr
children
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>>19425210
I have no clue... First things first, get ready for combat and ask Hadraniel on what the hell it is though.
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>>19425204
What I got so far -
omertnpoirmtaonitnformasahnebedofnu a being of a suconginmretnauliliw be bnortisnoe of the cygale of the heroes llsit a aywotplcomeetlymrveorethatitn of corruption ltoethgera no I’m not sure but the Demon Lord had a nhadn (hand?) in this lelheenvehtpivoeusrdidacntaedha a hadn (hand?) too his incomglilwbor the world of its uureftilntuvyotcir is radecheoen of the two Guardian siddaeonssdnagehtrsdau of the sky children of earth and oeshterfe of corruption are to battle and mforihts the ufrue siniissats.
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>>19425291
cygale=legacy
llist=still
I think some of the longer passages are multiple words merged together for added difficulty.
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>>19425328
They are, I've got about a third of it done.
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>daughters of the sky children of earth and
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>>19425333

>>19425328

Boy you guys move fast
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What I have thus far. Seems a bit ominous.
His coming will rob the world of its <something>
omertnpo information ormasahnebedofnu a begin of a suconginmretnauliliw be bnortisnoe of the legacy of the heroes still a aywotplcomeetlymrveorethatitn of corruption alogether no I’m not sure but the Demon Lord had a nhadn in ithslelheenvehtpivoeusrdidacntaedha a hand too his coming will rob the world of its uureftilntuvyotcir is radecheoen of the two Guardian siddaeonssdna daughters of the sky children of earth and oeshterfe of corruption are to battle and from this the ufrue siniissats.
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>>19425291

ltoethgera = altogether

Some of the later ones... they seem to work phonetically, instead of being a word jumble.

like

ufrue = true
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>had a hand too
?
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>>19425370
of corruption alogether no I’m not sure but the Demon Lord had a handn in this hell even the
>didacntaedha
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>aywotplcomeetlymrveorethatitn
way to compeltely remove rthatitn
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>>19425370
His coming will rob the world of its future
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>>19425370
>siddaeonssdna daughters
siddaeonss and daughters
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>>19425479
>siddaeonss and daughters
siddae sons and daughters
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>>19425417
way to compeltely remove the taint
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Hadraniel I visibly shaken, the link tell you of some unknown terror, something pure, raw and savage radiating from this silhouette and its affecting your companion, but somehow, you stay cool, collected and true to yourself, whatever pressure or pressure this thing seem to be doing is wasted on you, maybe it’s because you’ve assaulted your own nightmares?

Still, you enter Focus in a flash and with a brief casting, your body is encased in solid armor of ice, plate covering your whole body with a helmet allowing you a perfect vision for it is tailored to your head and you sacrifice some protection for visibility.

You stop at this for now, you aren’t a warrior, but some protection wouldn’t hurt, however Hadraniel grab you by the hand and force you to retreat, her taking the lead, stepping away from the door as she take a low stance, holding her spear with two hands as she point.

You can feel him coming; it, step by step and your chest tighten with anticipation and fear.

‘’What the hell is this, Hadraniel?’’

Your voice is collected, but your breath is cold and come out in one long visible gulp of white.

‘’I don’t know, I’m not sure but it feel familiar.’’

With the white light coming from the lamp, you spot the shadow in the doorway, impossibly tall, it won’t be able to fit but then, in a low, low voice similar to rock grinding together, it say.

‘’Your Anchor is disconnected, weak’’

What? But then you hear someone else.

‘’What the hell is going on down there? You guys okay!?’’

It’s the Tengu! You feel magic coming from her just as well but the threat, the large, shadow of man, vanishes without a trace.

What the hell was that about!?
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>>19425370
>a begin of
I think this should be - a being of
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Updated and most current translation

omertnpo information ormasahnebedofnu a begin of a suconginmretnauliliw be bnortisnoe of the legacy of the heroes still a way to compeltely remove the taint of corruption alogether no I’m not sure but the Demon Lord had a hand in this hell even the previous did acntae had a hand too his coming will rob the world of its future ilntuvyotcir is radecheoen of the two Guardian siddae sons and daughters of the sky children of earth and oeshterfe of corruption are to battle and from this the ufrue siniissats.
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>>19425517

>What the hellx3

Oookay that was embarrasing
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>>19425494

needed that last bit.

his coming will rob the world of its future until victory is reached (by) one of the two Guardian siddae sons and daughters of the sky children of earth and those free of corruption are to battle and from this the ufruesini stasis.

Not too sure how to decode that second last word.
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>>19425517
Check on Hadraniel through the link. Otherwise let's get out of here and to the Tengu. When she asks what that was, just say something appeared as we were reading the book.
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>>19425370
>lelheenvehtpivoeusrdidacntaedha
this lelheenveht previous did acntae had
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>>19425575
Damn I move too slowly.

Least I wasn't totally wrong. That would've been embarrassing.
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>siddae
It doesn't make sense as it stands with the message but you could get "is dead" from this.
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>ufruesinistasis
ufrue is in stasis? No clue what ufrue is though unless it's supposed to be future.
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>>19425608

It is, I fucked up that word. Also the mumbled message contain no grammar of any kind, so the message is bound to be confusing
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>>19425608
It could be a typo.
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>>>19425569
>his coming will rob the world of its future until victory is reached (by) one of the two Guardian siddae
No by. I think it should be
his coming will rob the world of its future until victory is reached. One of the two guardians is dead
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>>19425591
That really helps.


His coming will rob the world of its future until victory is reached.
One of the two Guardian is dead.
Sons and daughters of the sky, children of earth, and those free of corruption are to battle and from this the ufrue is in stasis.
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>>19425574
Second. The palace guards probably detected our entering Focus and might be on alert.
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>>19425628

And spelling mistakes.

I have to mentally fill in some blanks.

It makes this puzzle really difficult.

And fun.
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>>19425646
Definitely. I stopped everything I was doing to work on this.
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>>19425637

Good point. That makes much more sense now that siddae is decoded.
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>>19425646

I really, really tried my best to have no spelling mistake, like seriously, but it seem I'll forever be plagued by that, least I'm doing an honest effort for not being a native english speaker
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Another section

>bnortisnoe
born its one


I think we've finished most of the important bits at this point.

>>19425687

It's cool. Besides, we're having fun.
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>>19425725
That got me this then -
>a begin of a suconginmretnauliliw be bnortisnoe
a being of consuming retnauii will be born. It's one of the legacy of the heroes.
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>>19425761
>retnauii
nature
But I don't know what the two extra i's are for.
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Hmm. Some things are still fuzzy but it sounds like Siggy here might not be so good for the world.
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Just like that…?

You and Hadraniel both stay at the ready, you full of magic and her still locked on the door but once the Tengu come downstairs, you put your hand on the angel shoulder and nod to her, her brief panic receding and without a word, you let go of Focus, the armor dissipate without any complication and one second later, the Tengu burst in, veins colored a deep violet while her two wing fingers are holding piece of paper similar to the ofuda given to you by Tsukiyomi, covered in strange handwriting and alphabet similar to runes.

She takes in some breath, then cough slightly due to the dust but her eyes settle immediately on you and frown seeing your relaxed stance.

‘’Something…came out of the book’’

Her stare zero in on said book and you look as well but then you notice.

The corruption is gone; completely Hadraniel is also relaxed and doesn’t seem to be suffering anymore.
This was one intense book reading session.

‘’The guards are coming, hope you’re ready to explain yourself’’

Then she looks at Hadraniel.

‘’I don’t want to worry the centipede too much, think you can take all the blame, ambassador?’’

Of course the angel protests immediately, and firmly.

‘’I followed him here, I should suffer whatever punishment he has to endure’’

Still, it’s easy to guess Hadraniel is shaken, not by looking at her, but there’s a deep, persistent sadness coming from the link.
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>>19425791
Typo
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>>19425761

That particular section is problematic.

The 'will' section was mispelled, meaning the last letter could be i or l since the letters of a jumbled word do not cross over into the next or previous wor-

>>19425791

That should probably be it
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>ormasahnebedofnu
orma has been found
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>>19425761
a being of a consuming nature will be born
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what do we have so far
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>>19425803
"Hadraniel, someone must take care of Blestia and I must ask you to do this. You followed me because I was reckless - you should not have to suffer for this. Besides, someone will need to tell Slyphis what has gone on. I'm sure she sensed some of what went on."
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>>19425835
armor has been found

>>19425803
"No, it is my responsibility as the ambassador to be accountable for the actions of my retinue.
"Don't worry, Hadraniel. I doubt it'll be anything too serious."
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>consuming nature
Siegfried?
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>>19425803

"No, the blame is mine. Hadraniel was only acting in her capacity as my bodyguard.

I will, of course, explain myself fully to the regent, in person."

Ignore her protest. We're still protected by our diplomatic status. Staff, are not.
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Current translation

omertnpo information orma has been found a being of a consuming ii nature will be born its one of the legacy of the heroes still a way to compeltely remove the taint of corruption alogether no I’m not sure but the Demon Lord had a hand in this hell even the previous did acntae had a hand too
His coming will rob the world of its future until victory is reached.
One of the two Guardian is dead.
Sons and daughters of the sky, children of earth, and those free of corruption are to battle and from this the future is in stasis.
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>>19425803
I think I should be the only one to shoulder it Hadriel, a shield is not to blame for the hands who wield it. Besides I think what we've learned from this book will be worth it.
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>omertnpo information orma
I doubt it's right but I want to say this should be "more important information". But I don't think complete words were shifted, just the spelling.
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>>19425896

Quite a bit different form what I have, but the message seem to be pretty similar nonetheless
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>did acntae
I think this is: candidate
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>>19425925
... Balls. Those details will kill us then. Similar isn't good enough when you're dealing with prophecies.
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>>19425950
That would give
>I’m not sure but the Demon Lord had a hand in this hell even the previous candidate had a hand too
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>>19425960
Yup and this prophecy seems to involve Siegfried.
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>>19425960

It's not really a prophecy. More of some jumbled writings and observations.

And it is actually pretty vague.
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>>19426006
Yeah, I can't think what else did acntae could be though. If the demon lord did have a hand in Siggy's ability though, that's concerning.
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"No, the blame is mine. Hadraniel was only acting in her capacity as my bodyguard.’’

You start, provoking a glare from the angel, she even protests with a ‘’but…!’’ however you intervene.

‘’I will, of course, explain myself fully to the regent, in person."

The blond warrior sigh and now you pick up guilt, just before you go up the stairs (and into the waiting guards, you can see them) you close in on the air of your dutiful bodyguard.

"Don't worry, Hadraniel. I doubt it'll be anything too serious. You should take this opportunity to inform Sylphis, I’m sure she picked up on my rather… emotional state’’

But of course the Hero says nothing.

--

The regent look rather… displeased, but the way her hair is standing up, her tired eyes and her pajama well… she’s not looking very convincing. Of course you were escorted by the guards but they dropped you right into her chamber with her still sleeping with the Tengu in tow and she explained your infraction, you’re still holding the little book too, but of course now it’s free of corruption.

‘’Sooo…’’

She start, rubbing her eyes and waving the Tengu away that, for some reason, giggles to herself.

‘’You’ve stumbled upon that…’’

She’s looking at what your holding and a small growl escape her while her tail starts to swing back and forth.

‘’…I’d say were even’’

It’s all she says.
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>>19426051

Oh its worse than that.

>hell even the previous candidate had a hand too

It's the continuing work of two demon lords.
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>>19426100

"Then I'd ask that you pardon my continued questions. What do you know of that book and its contents? That... 'prophecy'?"
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>>19426107
Or, the previous corruption eater candidate became corrupted or turned traitor.

We don't know if there is a succession of demon lords, or if there is just the one.
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>>19426051
No I think Siggy is the result of one of the heroes meddling trying to get every edge they could.
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"Your highness I wish to know more about what happened 5 years."
Lets see what she knows.
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>>19426184

Based on information Hadraniel told us, we know that previously, the monsters were mindless in attacking. It was only after the new Demon Lord ascended did we see the current monster girls appearing.

So yes, there is a succession.
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>>19426205
>5 years ago
Forgot a word
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>>19426151
Second. The regent obviously knows something about this book.
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"Then I'd ask that you pardon my continued questions. What do you know of that book and its contents? That... 'prophecy'?"

The stare she give that booklet is one of clear animosity, but the cat woman rub one of her eyes once more and give a yawn, then stretch.

‘’I haven’t looked at that book, not since that event, but for you to carry it like that… I guess the curse must have waned after some time’’

She then start scratching one of her ears, you’ve got to admit to being a bit embarrassed, this is the first time you find yourself in a lady room, but given her relaxed nature…

‘’Lady Ran’’

You start, taking seat in front of her.

‘’I would like to know what happened 5 years ago’’

That question hit a nerve; she closed her eyes and grimace, putting a hand to her forehead.

‘’It’s in the past, Siegfried.’’

She starts, but stops.

‘’What do you want to know?’’

Did she change her mind?
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>>19426315
"You mentioned that you haven't looked at this book since the event 5 years ago.
"Are the book and the event connected?"
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>>19426315
"What happened to the previous Queen 5 years ago? What role does this book have with that incident?"
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>>19426315
"Who killed the Queen?"
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>>19426349

Slyphis' mother.

>>19426315

INH, are we able to quote what we've decoded or is it way too soon IC to use that information?
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>>19426368

Much too soon, siggy only catched a glimpse of the mumbled mess.
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>>19426384
Best give us a heads up on when we can use it then. Otherwise we'll constantly be bugging you, heh.
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>>19426397

You'll pretty much have to spend the time IC to decode it.
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>>19426315
How close was the Queen to the book when the old corruption caught hold of her?
May as well cut right to the heart of the matter.
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>>19426384
>>19426315

Then.

"What can you tell me of what was written in the book? Has it been decoded?"
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"You mentioned that you haven't looked at this book since the event 5 years ago. Are the book and the event connected?"

You start and she grimace at the question, then heave a heavy sigh while turning from your stare, giving you a look of her profile.

‘’I’m not certain, I wasn’t exactly in my position back then, my aunt was… a rather despotic queen but still competent, all that I know is that she never really recovered from separating form her lover but she was researching something, something top secret that died with her, probably related to the man she loved’’

She doesn’t like talking about this, it’s clear from her tone, but she gives you a sad side glance, this cat is wounded, no doubt about it.

‘’But she did start to act… strange, but again I wasn’t exactly close to her, I was mostly busying myself with my studies and spending time with the Princess – now queen – ‘’

She doesn’t seem to be dancing around the issue at all, she probably has no idea how the previous queen got infested by the Old Corruption.

Then who could know? Someone in the castle? Think, Siegfried, anybody that seems to have a connection not the queen or probably the previous one…
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>>19426476
The priestess or the head of the police then. Failing that we can always ask the queen to allow us to speak to the mantis's lore keeper.
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>>19426476
Only person I can immediately think of is Keldran. Time to scour archives on people we met here...
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>>19426504

I am quite tempted to give a hint
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>>19426517
Please do its 5am where I've been I technically need to wake up in two hours. Speaking of I'm heading to bed best of luck to the rest of you.
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>>19426517

You terrible tease.

Spill your secrets.

>>19426504

Perhaps Keldran or the lore keeper you mention.

The priestess herself might be the one and I can't see Keldran or any of the mantises acting against the former queen.

>>19426541

>5am

Another brit?
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Damnit INH. You're going to make me re-read this entire quest again to refresh myself on details, aren't you? Only other person I can recall who might have info on the Queen is Hadraniel but then we'd have to go through her memories. Plus, I doubt she'd have info on the event that happened 5 years ago.
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‘’But’’

Her tone change slightly as she looks back to you.

‘’Remember those letters you gave me? One was from Ame-no-Uzume, the other was a personal one’’

…Garret did ask you to give a letter do the Queen, hasn’t he?
‘’It contained, and I quote’’

She starts, taking it a deep breath.

‘’Sorry for being absent’’

What?

The Regent slowly stand up, rubbing her hair for a moment, not minding at all the good glimpse you’ve got of her belly.

‘’A small message, it seem as if he did not know of the Queen fate but that’s impossible for the news was important enough to be known of the entire island, so I ask, why write something so personal to be given in the hand of Rhy?’’

>Not coping out, the regent is smart enough to mentions the letters, after all.
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>>19426568
Another britfag here as well.
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>>19426604
"Perhaps something worth asking him on my return then..."
Yeah I got nothing on why he might do that.
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>>19426604

>So far away

Then it's gonna have to wait until we get back home.

Good lord, if he's the one responsible, hes right next to amy and Athena's injured...
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You simply stare at her, it seem she’s deep in thought and simply voicing them out, better to let her continue.

‘’Now, the previous Queen could not let go of her lover, and that motivated her to research everything related to the Old Corruption and the myth of the 13 heroes, all of it has one source: the man she loved leaving her side for reason unknown’’

She stops, taking a breath and look to you.

‘’And now a personal letter from you, an ambassador, was directed to the Queen of the Rahal’’

Her arms cross, she start tapping her cheek with one of her index.

‘’Doesn’t that make some sort of strange coincidence, Siegfried?’’
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>>19426663
That reminds me INH do you plan on shifting the PoV to Athena like you did with Sylphis.
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>>19426663
Well shit.
"Could the journey back to Amen-no-Uzume's domain be arranged? Like right now?"
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>>19426717

Nah, her side of the adventure is more or less a arc in itself, Siggy would be the only one passionate enough about her to really change the outcome.
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Refresh my memory, how old is Garret?
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>>19426781

You don't know his age, but he did looked your age.

But he always left you the same impression as Tsukiyomi: someone that felt very, very tired.
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>>19426702

"...Too much of one. If that is so, my Queen is in grave danger since she departed with him and another companion to the lizard clan.

...I thank you for sharing this information with me, I know this conversation must have been hard on you, bringing up such bad memories."
>>19426649

Not for much longer. Just finished uni so in a month's time, I'll be heading home.
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>>19426702
So...he's the former queen's lover?
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"...Too much of one. If that is so, my Queen is in grave danger since she departed with him and another companion to the lizard clan.’’

Strange feelings in your guts… Could that man, that Garret, be a traitor? He seem to be a retainer that Tsukiyomi and her daughter trust, could a man manage to dupe them? Or maybe he hold the final answers to this dilemma, a tragedy that took years to take place and finally everything exploded 5 years ago…

‘’...I thank you for sharing this information with me, I know this conversation must have been hard on you, bringing up such bad memories."

The regent simply smile and approach you, still in her pajama give you a light flick on the forehead, making you frown and grunt.

‘’It’s okay, Siegfried, but I don’t think he represent that big a menace, after all someone that would write a letter so openly must not have too much to hide’’

…True.

Now, Siegfried, do you ask for a quick return home, or do you iron out the alliance details?
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>>19426851
Iron out the alliance details.
Sylphis has been stabilized, so her need for medical attention is not as great, and we have a great responsibility for Ame to make sure that this alliance goes through properly.
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>>19426877
Agreed.
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Iron out the alliance details but quick return home when finished.
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>>19426851
I'd like to say 'return', but staying and making sure this alliance actually gets off the ground is more important and also the only thing we can currently do anything about.
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>>19426851

Prepare the treaty with the regent. We still have our duty to perform.

"That is true. However there is a still a risk and I would prefer to not place my Queen in danger."

It might be time to use that Ofuda.

"However I still have my duties to perform. Let us work on that treaty."
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You want to come back…home?

Ame-no-Uzume domain is your…home, uh it feel strangely good to say it but it really feel like home.

But right now you have a job to do, the most boring part of it as well, but a man has to do what he has to do.

‘’I think, now that we have the chance, we should iron out the alliance, make everything flow smoothly when the army is mobilized’’

Ran let out yet another sight and you see her walk to a table, taking a small pipe.

‘’It’s going to take a while and we will need to write some documents, have some meetings… boring work, one that will keep you from your retinue’’

You simply nod.

‘’Then let’s go, aaah I want to laze in the sun…’’

>aaand ending there. Taking questions, of course.
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Now that I think about it, what kind of monsters would you guys like to see? We've already got quite the numbers now, but I can always try to think something up.

No promise
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>>19426956

Would the regent have actually given permission?

Gonna hit the sack, stupid sun. you rise too damn early...
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>>19427020

Maybe, maybe not you'd probablyhave needed to talk her into it. And its 1 am i nmy place ,started at around 4 pm... around 9 hours of writing, go me.
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Dragons? Perhaps some aquatic monsters after all Siggy is a water mage.
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>>19427066

That one can fit for lamia, dragon and aquatic doesn't she?

But yes I have been thinking up some mosnters here and there but overall, I think there's going to be one more... creature, unless you guys manage to wake the Ryu but then that's another can of worms.
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rolled 91 = 91

Can we have a slime girl?
A mimic would also be great
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>>19427113

I have indeed been thinking up a slime girl, but I can't decide between that and another one for what is going to probably be the last, relevent Monster Girls to be around Siggy
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>>19427113

We never did create that slime girl familiar, did we.

Then again, we hardly ever needed to.

I actually think the current cast is pretty well rounded at this point.
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>>19427150
We'll just grab the golem from the academy. Problem solved, heh.
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>>19427152

There's one last girl coming up, unless the Ryu get involved, then its 2. Its just that the war will inevitably cause quite a large split.

>>19427162

Or 3, Siggy want to ressurect his mom?
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>>19427009
Monsters I want to see?
Lamia and echidnas are awesome.
Harpies are cool.
Other than that? Unsure.
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>>19427162
That right
INH said he had big plans for that golem.
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>>19427009
I know what I don't want to see. Actually, considering our luck and location I'm surprised we haven't yet ran into one of these eight legged rape machines.
Although the mental image of Siggy trying to lay the swag on one of these amuses me to no end.
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>>19427181
If the golem will have any memories of Siggy's real mother, I'm wondering if that might be very worthwhile after decoding that jumbled passage.
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>>19427181

As long as it's nothing undead.

What in the world do you mean split?
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>>19427205

Those are down South, see that oni?

All the Oni of Zipangu were integrated into the Lizardman clan.

Still there is the inevitable drifter, but those are the calmest of the bunch.
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>>19427222

As in inevitable seperation, Ame-no-Uzume retinue are skilled people that make very fitting leaders or bodyguards.
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>>19427242

That... That is true...
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>>19427302

But all in due time!
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rolled 4 = 4

Every group needs a loli so give us a mimic
harpy cool to
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>>19427334

loli could be the Queen Rhy Rahal, she's on the small side and will be coming with you to Ame-no-Uzume domain.
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>>19427316
Sat next week, right?
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>That feel when Avina will never be apart of Siggy's group.
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>>19427348

Yep, Saturday next week. Hope I'm giving you guys a good time even with all my typo
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>>19427378

I can't wait until you guys get back home, childhood friend is one of my favorite trope.
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>>19427396

Enough fun to mess with my sleep cycle for the past couple of months.
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>>19427396
It's one of my weaknessess as well. I always have a soft spot for the childhood friend.
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>>19427396
So that you can kill of said childhood friend and then watch the resulting character breakdown? We can now never go home. I vote we run off and become pirates. Airship Pirates. Airship Pirates with an awesome crew. Airship Pirates with an awesome crew and far too much money.
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>>19427417

Hope I'm not causing too much trouble. Still next month I'm finally entering my own summer so I'll have more time for updates.
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>>19427396
Too bad they never win, eh?
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>>19427467

Now now, Avina supposed death did not happen on screen and I'm not rubbing it in, you guys know I enjoy causing feels
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6:45 AM and all is well. I didn't need sleep last night anyway.
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>>19427471

Fucking dense as fuck Harem mc, I'm making Siggy a bit dense as well but at least the guy is competent in what he does.

Also i'm still wondering what women you guys are gunning for, at this point it seem to me what truly matter is accomplishing the mission.

In Monster girls land
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>>19427524
We've obviously decided on the golem version of Siggy's mother and are just waiting to get her.

On a more serious note, that depends on how fluffy certain wings are...
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>>19427524
This is gentlemanly adventuring in a land of monsters, the mission is of course the most important part! That and being polite and chivalrous to all who we meet along the way.
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>>19427468

Nah. It's just like ol' MaidQuest all over again.

My sleep, i offer willingly.
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>>19427555

Oh my.

>>19427567

I wasn't around for MaidQuest.

A damn, damn shame...

Did you know that with a average population of 5 female to 1 male in the human lands (with your own homeland something of an exception thank to ther Purge). Polygamy isn't really frowned upon?

There's not alot of male in the monsters lands too...

Its hard to be a gentleman.

>>19427570
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>>19427524
No time for love, adventure awaits!
Than and death in less than a month.
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>>19427524

I'm partial to Amy myself but since Siggy knows hes doomed, I think hes restraining himself from forming too lasting relations.
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>>19427633
Yeah, that's kind of the way I've seen it. Siggy's has been told he might die within the month. How eager will he be to start romancing at that point?
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>>19427607
>Its hard to be a gentleman.
It's not fun if it's easy.

Plus Hadraniel would probably skewer Siggy if he even uttered the word polygamy.
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>>19427633
That sounds about right
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>>19427650
>>19427644
>>19427633

I'll be sure to try and sneak something, hell one of the women is working so much in the background...

I try to give points to every characters, but I have to admit that I have a favorite but I will never, ever, let such favoritism come in the way.
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>>19427666

Wrap the angel around your finger! Do it!
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>>19427717
With the last three digits of his post number, it's a sign that we must make it so.
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>>19427704
The queen mother I assume is the one working in the background.
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>>19427763

Definately.

I bet shes INH's fav, too.
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>>19427776

...how
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>>19427776
>>19427783
Well how about that.
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>>19427783

The magic scene was crafted too lovingly.
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Since some are still around, how about some speculation?
Something I can't wrap my head around is what's the point sending Rhy back with Siggy? She's a figurehead leader and from what we've seen not even a good one at that. She has neither the will or the ability to lead so she'd be a poor envoy/coordinator for the alliance in Ame's domain and since she doesn't do anything in Rahall either it's unlikely that this is part of some grab for power on the Regent's part who holds and exercises all the power already anyway.
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>>19427819

B-but...
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>>19427831
Perhaps its an attempt for her to grow. She can only do so much when she's protected as she is in her home and I believe INH hinted she's pampered by the mantis. Maybe her regent is hoping this will help her mature and overcome some of her problems to truly reign as queen.
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>>19427819
That and the fact that INH went out of his way to write an additional short story about her subtly hinted at it.
And by subtly, I mean with all the grace and subtlety of a jackhammer.
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>>19427863

But I tought I was being subtle because it was for Mother's Day and she's the only mom in the group!
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>>19427851

I'm not complaining.

I just had my suspicion after that scene.

Every author has their favs after all.

>>19427863

Wasn't that one a Mother's Day story? It was justified though.
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>>19427886
If that were the case, you could have always written a flashback about Siggy's mom.
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>>19427903

...

Dammit
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>>19427886
It was somewhat, but ever since she showed up I had the gut feeling that you are most attached to that character.

Which I'm completely fine with since she's my favorite.
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>>19427903

From an author's standpoint, not as much impact as Amy and Tsukiyomi since we're familiar with both of them.

Also, I believe INH has been trying to keep siggy's mum a little mysterious.
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>>19427954
Yeah I know. Kind of why I have been tempted to consider getting that golem if it will lead to us getting more info on her. Plus, she seems pretty bad ass.
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>>19427941

I just hope I'm not showing some kind of Author Favoritism because I hate that even more than mary sue.
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>>19427987

Don't doubt yourself so much. If it flows, go with it.

Second guessing yourself will make the whole thing a mess.
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>>19427954
I think it would have been appropriate since Siggy's mother was a central figure in his development, a story about her would have been a good opportunity to expand on why and how the protagonist turned out the way he has.
Not to mention that it could have been used to emphasize the fact of loosing her for additional feels.
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>>19428015

Well I do what Ican, but I want every character to shine, not just Siggy.

>>19427974

Badass as fuck, I may have been inspired by Marimo with her but I went with the concept of Mama bear too.
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>>19428048
Marimo from MuvLuv? Damnit INH. Marimo end in extra was obviously the best end.
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>>19427987
Don't worry, you aren't. At least not in any way I can see. I'd say you are good as long as you can step back and ask yourself whether you are favoring a character or not.
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>>19428035

Hmm duly noted... Its jsut that I've been thinking maybe we could have an update about his past or something, but most of the details aren't totally ironed out quite yet.
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>>19428072

>Round 2
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>>19428116
Best end.

Also, MLU is interesting so far. Mikoto ending up as a girl this time around still feels odd.
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>>19428148

About that...
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>>19428148

No, the implication is that he was actually a she, the entire time...
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I'm still amazed at the two crit in short succession, dice god REALLY did not want Siggy to linger in that library did he?
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>>19428181
Wot. I clearly missed something in extra then that insinuated that.
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>>19428244
I'm surprised too. I'm too used to heartache and despair from /tg/ dice for the most part. I guess they decided to be kind this night.
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>>19428266

Its a bit hard to reward such rolls when you're searching for stuff
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>>19428181

Can you upload this collection of Puchimasu thumbnails you have somewhere?


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