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>Warning: May contain condensed butts
>Wizard Curse: Plump Grabbable Ass Quest 15

You are Roger Smith, a young man, turned young woman by way of crazy ass-magic, currently tied up in a personal quest to reclaim control of your life and gender and break the curse of the magical and possessed dress that you are stuck wearing and that will slowly drive you crazy if left alone.

With the help of your accidentally summoned Succubus familiar, a bandit you turned into a cat girl in self-defense, a six-armed Asuran pilgrim, and your retired adventurer parents, you have made it to the Bridge City of Arisca and secured a meeting with two famous Wizards. With any luck, you will be able to convince them to take you as a student and hopefully learn how to untangle the spells and enchantments that torment you and the soul that is still bound to the dress.

Presently, you have decided to rest. Your day has been filled with more magical training, elf librarian flirting, studying, hair styling, and ghost hand groping then you've ever dealt with before. After a nice night gathered 'round the table with your party and a few new friends, Lady Pon, the Tau Tailor and Sir Shears, the Tama stylist, you've finally retired for the night. You've got a busy day awaiting you, for tomorrow, you meet the Wizards.
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>Previous threads for those who need to catch up
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I was going to add a synopsis, which some of you have seen, but pastebin decided to eat the updated version I was working on.

>IRC Channel for chit-chat and direct contact
#AssQuest on irc.rizon.net

>How this works
I type up the story, guided along by the suggestions and choices that people suggest. I can't possibly implement every idea, but I'll try to work in a lot of them alongside doing my usual thing. So, if you've got any ideas, or things you'd like to see, do post them. It helps me to write faster and makes things more interesting.

Also, since it matters, if you want to suggest things for Roger to do, then do so in plain text. If you want to suggest things as Lucile and the Dress, the proverbial devil on Roger's shoulder, you can do so in spoiler text. ([*spoiler]words here[*/spoiler] minus the asterisks)

I'll also use dice rolls whenever I feel like it to shape some decisions. Instead of just giving it to the highest roll, since that's stupid, I give you a target number, and you have a certain number of posts to meet or beat that number on 3d6. For instance, if I were to tell you to hit 12 or better in 4 rolls, if any of the first 4 dice rolls following that prompt roll 12 or higher, then you succeed. Otherwise, you fail.

Rolling dice does not give you narrative control or direct influence over what happens next any more than any other post. Rolling can just as easily get the opposite of what you want.
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You are not Roger Smith, or R. Dorothy, or whatever she's decided to call herself for the day. You are Lucile Catenza, a wildly talented Wizard who would have been renowned through history for her accomplishments if not for certain circumstances which interfered with your career.

Roger is in a deep, deep sleep right now. The poor thing has gone and tired herself out after burning through your magic all day long. Inexperienced little girl like her couldn't rightfully hold as much mana as you do, but your unique relationship with her means she gets to use your store of power, which is more of a strain on her, since she hasn't conditioned her body to handle that much power like an experienced Wizard would have.

No matter, though. She'll be fine come tomorrow morning, but for now, you have been afforded a special opportunity that likely won't come along again any time soon. You have a chance to gain control for a short while. The Dress has no hold over a sleeping mind, especially not one in such a deep, deep slumber.

You've bidden your time long enough for everything to line up just right. Roger's been asleep long enough to regain a portion of your magical power, her little familiar is passed out at her side, and no one will think to bother either of them until tomorrow morning.

Now, the hard part: Taking control of the body. You've done it before, but that was with the Dress's help. You just need to sort of slip into it, like pulling yourself into a... dress.

Little by little you feel the senses kick in. The muscles feel groggy and slow, but they seem to warm with time, making it easier to move. You won't be able to do this forever, but it feels so nice to have a physical self to move, if only for this one night...
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>>22623702
As soon as we are able to move again, we must go downstairs and get something to eat.
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>>22623702
we must stop and think on what do we truly and deeply want, why are we doing this. Do we still want to teach this little brat some manners and work towards complete takeover? Or is she really sincere in trying to understand us, what can we do to make the most out of our time now? Maybe we should stop and write down some notes and reminders to help Dorothy progress with fixing both our problems.
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>>22623828
I thought we just wanted to have our own fucking body for a little while, if we are just borrowing it from some poor genderbent shmuck.
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>>22623623
That gif is mesmerizing.
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Before even moving out of bed, you make sure to do something very important. You prepare a pair of sleep spells.. One for Millia, one for Roger. Keep them snoozing while you go to work.

Millia doesn't even flinch as the spell washes over her. Roger's consciousness flickers, but both of them will thank you in the morning for the best sleep of their lives.

You climb out of the bed and take a few unsteady steps across the room. Roger's youthful body.. You did such good work on it, but it was still lacking the confidence in movement and posture that only comes with maturity.

You make your way to the bathroom and casually set up a light spell, creating an illuminating orb which floats along beside you, casting a pleasant light that fills the small side room.

You take a moment to examine yourself in the mirror, taking note of the new hairstyle and finding yourself quite pleased. Roger was right, it is cute, but you don't think cute will really be what you'll need tonight.

As much as you'd like this to just be a chance to stretch your legs and have a nice walk about town, you have others goals in mind. Poor Roger has been beating herself up non-stop in an effort to help you.. and also herself, but she's doing it. The last oaf who you were stuck with freed you from a century of being locked away only to give up almost immediately. He practically supported the dress and everything it wanted to do. No spine at all. Good riddance.

You run your tongue over your lips, puckering a little kiss at your reflection, playfully making seductive expressions.

Tonight is about money. There's not enough time for your to sit down and help her begin to untangle the chaotic mess of enchantments in this Dress, but you can at least alleviate her monetary woes.

The only question now is how to go about it...
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>>22623828
Let's make the most of this and not just go immediately to work, we focused so hard on resisting and deal with the perverted dress. Let's have a taste of what we were missing out on and then do some serious work, but definitely something 'selfish' first.
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>>22623869
Don't do anything that Dorothy won't do.
So no whoring, or 'favors', ok?
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>>22623869
Sell back alley body transformations.
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>>22623869
If we do anything overly slutty and promiscuous to get that money, it will only serve to harm Roger in the end with an even worse reputation. It will also shatter any trust (s)he has in us. If that sort of behavior is our only option then we must magically disguise ourselves.
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>>22623927
if we have the magic to do that, then we should do that to our faces as well temporarily to allow annonymity
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>>22623942
there is also a fact that it isn't right to have someone use your body for things that you will never do.
Like someone using your body to murder people.
Sure, you won't remember that or even know it happened. But, it still doesn't make it ok.
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>>22623927
We'll need to disguise ourselves; that kind of unlicensed magical activity is probably enough to get a wizard disbarred and have a license revoked.
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>>22624017
Oh snap, we probably avoid ANYTHING like that then. We got to try to earn this money in a mundane way if possible.

Could we possibly pull of masked vigilante by night?

>HAVE NO FEAR CITIZENS! ASS LADY IS HERE!
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Night club. Go put that body to good use.
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>>22623869
Fight the fucking crime
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>>22624017
>>22624109
Maybe the dress can go all Carnevale for us.
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>>22623869
Let's start a back-alley transformation clinic. We'll give people the bodies they've always wanted.

Also monstergirls.
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>>22624109

We'd need a way to disguise our ass along with our face. It's pretty recognizable.
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>>22624109
If it's only for a little bit, we should be able to do it, but we need criminal contacts for that.

And night clubs and vigilantism? Seriously?
Working at a night club would break the fragile trust between Lucille and Dorothy, and is not worth it.
And vigilantism? In a city full of adventurers and wizards? Only the absolutely retarded or the extremely good would try physical crimes here. Most crime is going to be of the black market variety, and those tend to be either well-defended or the clients themselves are adventurers.
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>>22624259
>We bamboozle and rob a random guy
>Walking out of town after our quest has ended
>I RECOGNIZE THAT ASS from the crowd
>Get arrested.

Yeah. We should tone down the ass a tad.
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>>22624109
yes!
>>22624199
YES!
>>22624203
YES YES YES!

>>22624259
.....a masked ass.... YES! all my YESES!
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>>22624266
Well, let's just go fight petty crime then. And by fight petty crime, I mean go find youthful naive girls criminally under-stimulated and fight their boredom. With our ass.
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>>22624288
>all criminal investigations in Arisca now have an ass lineup as well as a face lineup for potential suspects thanks to us
>we cause mass mayhem by giving multiple people the same ass
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>>22624266
all it takes is a drunk person to try and accost a innocent young woman in the streets, and when that happens... ASS LADY SHALL SAVE THAT POOR DAMSEL'S ASS!
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You catch the faintest hint of disapproval in your, or rather Roger's, expression staring back at you in the mirror. It would be unwise to abuse her body and risk ruining her reputation. Roger would never forgive you.

As long as you make it temporary, a disguise would alleviate any problems that might arise from people recognizing the body you're using. Simple enough for you. For better or worse, the Dress has allowed you to master Transformation magic in ways that others could never imagine. Your expression darkens as you briefly consider that it may not even matter, as you won't have too many opportunities to express that mastery.

You start with the obvious traits that will obscure Roger's identity the most.

Phsyical maturity, first of all. Dorothy is a petite young girl. Lucile is not. Lucile is mature woman and her body should reflect that. A little taller, lips fuller with just a bit of pout, hair fiery and red, eyes emerald green. Your face had a certain familiarity to it now, like you were looking at an echo of your old self.

Then there's the matter of the rest of her body. You'd been trying to coax her into it, but she's so stubborn. You'd have imagined a young man would have jumped at the chance to have a body that's as sexy as possible.

You stop and shake your head. Too much influence from the Dress, you think, but still, if you're going to traipse around disguised, you'd rather things be to your liking. Perhaps to Roger's as well. You've felt those little twinges of jealousy she gets when she looks at Danny.
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>>22624345
AND THEN CLAIM IT
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>>22624345
And then escort that ass home. For her safety. Better escort her up to her bedroom too. Just to be sure. And escort her to bed. In fact, better just spend the night in bed with her, to make sure she's protected.
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Use force if necessary to alter more shapes. This is for Rodger's own good.
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>>22624616
>>22624459
>>22624288

>Save lovely young maiden
>Take her home and ravish her
>Return home, change back, content in your good work
>Before you leave down, she is suddenly there, begging you to stay or to take you with her.
>How do you recognize me...?
>I would recognize your ass anywhere!
>Cue shitstorm between Roger and Lucille
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>>22624713
If by shitstorm you mean Roger and Lucille doubleteam some comely maiden, then yeah, that's absolutely what would happen.
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>>22624766
How the hell do you doubleteam someone if you are sharing a body?

Actually, wait, I don't think I want to know.
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You carefully craft a more full-figured form for your disguise. A nice hourglass curve suits you far better than that slim, elven body. You smirk at your reflection, amused by the sight of Roger's body maturing before your eyes. It's a shame she'd take after her Mother if she did grow up. While she may be a beautiful woman, most elves tend to be somewhat small, with more delicate and lithe figures. Nothing at all like the body you've crafted.

The Dress automatically stretches and grows to contain your expanding form, tailoring itself around the generous swell of your chest, cinching just a bit at the waist to emphasize the prominent curve of your hips. Maybe you overdid it a little, but wide child-bearing hips never go out of style. There's something instinctively attractive about that none can resist.

>STATUS CHANGE
>Breasts: 3+2
>Waist: 2+1
>Hips: 3+3
>Ass Plump/Grab: 5/4 +2/+2

You step back to take a good look at your work, admiring the gorgeous half-elf woman you've disguised yourself as. You stand up straight and stretch, taking a moment to bathe in the pleasant sensations of your new form. It's a lot like your old body, in some ways, but a lot different too.

You may be using the excuse of doing this to help Roger, but there's no denying the selfish reasons in this. You just wanted to feel alive again and with such an overwhelmingly sexy body, you certainly do feel alive.

You leave the bathroom and grab Roger's Halberd on your way to the balcony window. There was a big city out there and you needed to find a way to secure some coin for your poor, broke victim.

You set the Halberd horizontally in the air and climb onto it side-saddle. You briefly entertain the thought of patrolling the streets for crime, considering how heroic you must seem surveying the city from your perch, but you can't see that being too lucrative.
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>>22624848
I was thinking of Lilli instead of Lucille, but I now stand by my mistake.
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>>22624881
Find drunks, relieve them of their wallets.

Rodger won't mind that. He's had way too much experience with drunks.
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>>22624713
>>22624766
>>22624848


This needs to happen.
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>>22624616
Only if she's rich. Then she'll reward us.
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>>22624938
Not tonight it doesn't. We're on a time limit.
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>>22624848
I imagine ghost hands would be involved somehow.
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>>22624881
Maybe bounty hunter, there must be a bandit leader just asking to be arrested in this big city
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>>22624881
Go bounty hunting
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>>22624881
What about Yurara's den.
He would be able to tell who we are, and may be in contact with the type of people that would want some 'cosmetic changes' done, paid in cash with no questions asked.
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>>22624987
Well there was, but he got turned into a catgirl and became an Asuran fucktoy.
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Clearly we should choose style options from Guild Wars 2
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Go dancing, damnit. Just being a showgirl should bring lots of money, with that body and dem skills.
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>>22625171
Do you even know how little money that would actually get us?
Not to mention the amount of work we would have to do for so little gain.
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You drift over the city, heading to no where in particular. It's nice to just feel the air brushing across your skin and your hair whipping through the wind.

You had options when it came to securing some coin, but the ones that seemed the most viable were the ones that would bother Roger the most. The idea to fight crime seems to be the least objectionable, but then that would require you to steal from anyone you decide to stop. Following that same idea, you could go bounty hunting. Danny did say she has a bandit crew back in the forest, but you'd be out of time before you could fly out to the forest, locate them, then fly all of them back to receive a reward, if there was one.

You considered possibly finding a way to sell transformations, but finding customers would be time consuming. Selling your body is right out. You imagine Roger might wake up and seize control the moment you go near a dick, or even just a woman who isn't her precious familiar..

You curse under your breath. This is looking like it might just be a pointless stroll out into the night at this rate.

You need to do something, though. All this effort and nothing to show for it would be letting Roger down.

You spot a red-light district below you. More of a small street nestled to the side of the bridge where the main flow of traffic wouldn't pass, really. You figure that anything you've done already would make Roger angry if he found out...
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Seduce bandits, then make them explode, turn in trophies. Like Lina Inverse with big tits.
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>>22625266
Hmm, could roll drunk nobles looking for a lay.
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>>22625266
Dammit, Lucille, you best not be thinking about suckin dicks.
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>>22625367
She doesn't seem to mind dicks or tits
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Search around for nobles getting robbed.
Incapacitate the robber, then steal whatever he was stealing.
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>>22625400
She's been in the dress for how long? She's probably bored of them by now.
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>>22625266
We know where that merchant we worked for lived, let's steal from him then
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Who's even awake to help at this hour, other than the whores (who would appreciate body-mod, likely) and the drunks (thievery targets!)?
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>>22625420
That is just plain stupid.
How retarded are you?

>>22625266
Selling body-mods to pimps to upgrade their prostitutes and brothels? A possibility.
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Hold up...I thought you said Lucille is free of the dress' control, for the moment. Why is she still a sex maniac with a transformation fetish? Shouldn't she be revolted by anything sexual at this point?
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>>22625604
>>22625573

Yeah, this sounds good.

Make sure the prostitutes themselves are okay with this first, though, not just the pimps.
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>>22625611
She's lived with it pressing on her brain for so long, it's probably left an imprint
>>22625573
> selling body modification to whores

I can see it now

"Hello there!"
> tits baloon
"How would you like to"
> tits shrink
"Have the body of"
> ass swells
"Your dreams?"
> ass shrinks
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Oh, since we're Lucille...

Have we been making Roger act noble and dignified and ladylike, or was that the fey crown?
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Could we turn guys into girls, then extort them for dosh?
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SHIT SHIT SHIT
ALERT
If we use up all our magic now, how's Roger going to prove he's magical tomorrow?
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>>22625817

Lucille won't be up the whole night. He will recover some mana.
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>>22625611
It's a sort of weird three-way game of mental twister with Roger, Lucile, and the Dress.

Without a wearer, the dress is kind of useless, so with Roger's mind asleep, it doesn't have anything to shout through Lucile to mess with Roger.

As for Lucile, she's not quite a sex maniac, but she has had a very large portion of her existence defined by sex and transformation. Saying it left and imprint is probably the best way to explain it.
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>>22625848
Still, let's be conservative here. Little changes to people, not full on catgirling.
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Hey, can we get a spell list over here? Sure, there's the transformative, but what else've we got?
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>>22625936

Agreed. If we make any monstergirls, Roger will be sure to know it was us. Just charge the brothels to pretty up any willing hookers for them.
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>>22625266
Do we know healing spells? If so, let's just go to the hospital and heal people for money
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You swoop down and drop down between two buildings. No one walking the streets is watching the sky, not that it would matter if they were. Flying by Halberd is strange, but it's not like magic is known. You spin a quick illusion around the head of the polearm and disguise it as a broom. Roger's fascination with illusions seems to be rubbing off on you.

You tip the Halberd broom over your shoulder and stroll casually out into the red light district. Even at midnight, things are still stirring. It's a different kind of liveliness than Roger has seen yet. In times long past, you had seen a few areas like this. Places where people shrug off politeness and give into their lust. Some places are dangerous and deal in illegal things, but others are honest businesses, will willing workers, as you've been led to believe.

You're treading on fragile ground to start with, but you believe there is some coin to be made around here. You have a wide variety of services to offer that don't require to so much as touch a person. Men looking for the company of a beautiful woman. Performers who might want to touch up their appearance.. Oh, and stages that need dancers!

You look around more eagerly, searching for a place where you might apply your skills.
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>>22626090
>let's just go to the hospital and heal people for money
Oh sure, we're going to waltz in, with no medical or magic license, under the noses of people that do, and start healing people in the middle of the fucking night for a profit.
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>>22626247
Find streetwalkers, apply touchups for money.
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>>22626247
Lets plump some prostitute ass first.
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>>22626247
Let's start by upgrading the prostitutes, not only things like minor, and I do mean minor and not debilitating, upgrades to their ass/tits, things to make their skin smoother and softer, touching up any blemishes that they want taken care of, that sort of thing. A one woman perfect plastic surgery team.

If that isn't enough we can do something involving the rich nobles slumming it here and get some of their cash.
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>Stages that need dancers

Do it.
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>>22626464
Do the plastic surgeon route first and see how much it makes us.
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>>22626247
offer cosmetic magical operation
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>>22626247
Look for any streetwalkers.
Go up to them, ask them if they like what they see, and if they'd like to have some of the same, for a small fee.
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>>22626530
Still think we should do it this way.
>>22625632
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>>22626464
this but we must choose carefully. nothing that could be considered as stripping. nothing that should Roger find out may tempt him to get the wizards to destroy us.
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Upgrading women of loose virtues seems to be looking pretty popular, not like they'll be hard to find either.
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You quickly find your first customer in the form of a harlot standing beside a light-post calling seductively to passing men. She's dressed nicely, at least for a prostitute, and has look that says she's enjoying herself. Not every street-walker has to be down-trodden and abused. This must be a good city.

As you move to approach her she immediately takes notice and apologizes in advance, claiming that she 'doesn't do women'. You laugh and shakes your head, quickly explaining that you are offering your magical services to the girls of this street in exchange for a small, negotiable fee. She gives you a reluctant look, to which you reply by stretching your arms above your head and arching your back to show off your own body, playfully explaining that magic has *so* many more uses than fireballs and lightning bolts.

With her curiosity piqued, you start by suggesting small things. Spells that make you smell more attractive, or make your hair more lustrous, simple mends for tattered garments, smoothing of the complexion to makes one's skin like cream. Then you begin to suggest the most expensive services, like figure modifications. "Make one's cup runneth over.." you say while running a hand over your breast for good measure.

She admits to having limited coin to spend. You try to urge her onward by saying this is a one-time offer, but all she can afford is a couple of your smaller spells. You get a handful coins out of her, enough for a few meals, and leave her as a cleaner, smoother, and more fragrant tart than when you met her. As you head on your way to the next group of girls, you notice someone already approaching her from the corner of your eye.
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>>22626593
"Good evening..." in as much of a vamp voice as you can, and bow deeply.
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>>22626675
And then do some variation of this >>22625632
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>>22626593
observe do Not make contact with the customer. interference with her business and word spreads we are not to be trusted
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>>22626715
Have her do what she did in >>22626593, except have the breast she cups get larger with each massage. Work a demonstration into your pitch.
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You don't have too much trouble selling your services to the various girls, though some have to decline because the money they carry is not theirs to spend, yet. You briefly consider hunting down their employer and freeing those girls, but it wouldn't be prudent to attempt to start a rebellion with the little time you have left. You'll consider guiding Roger here and see if her sense of morality will lead her to the same conclusion.

You manage to polish up a few more prostitutes with some simple cosmetic enchantments and even manage to come across those willing to spend the extra coin for the permanent enhancements you have to offer. You make a show of it for others to see, taking the time to be very hands on with the procedure, tenderly massaging her breasts from behind, whispering playful little nothings into her ear.

You'd be concerned that all your time within the dress had made you enjoy the act of transforming others too much, but before you can dwell on it another girl is reaching for her purse and asking for her turn, to which you glady oblige, planting both hands firmly on her lacking hindquarters.

You have to restrain yourself, though. You can't vent all your magic. You don't have that much to burn at the moment. Your mastery does allow you to make these difficult spells into trifling gestures, but you also don't want to create an entire street of overly-exotic, unearthly Goddesses vying for attention. That ever-present pressure from the Dress would want to, but you don't need that much exposure.

You turn back and take some time to observe to fruits of your labor. The street still looks the same, but the girls seem happier and more proud of themselves than they did before. There's no shame in doing what they do. Roger could learn quite a few things from these girls.
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>>22626788
Maybe we can "accidentally" guide him here sometime tomorrow. Like on his date with the elf
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Alright. I've got about 30 minutes before I need to run. Let's see if we can't squeeze out two more posts before I need to leave for a few hours. Don't fret, though. I should be back to continue the thread for a few hours after I return.
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>>22626788
Get home, get back in bed, and pretend to have been asleep the whole time.

...wait, what happens if Lucile tires herself out and falls asleep? Does the Dress lose its conduit to Roger?
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This... really has gone overboard now. The first few quests were okay, but slowly slipped more towards /d/ territory as it chugged along, then we had that big bitchfest thread where S P agreed to tone it down a bit, and now we're... here. I haven't been able to collaborate for a few threads. And now... this. Yeah.

God damn you guys. God damn.
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>>22626875
this is just Lucille. if it was with Roger then I would worry.
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>>22626875
>SP clearly setting up dramatic tension between Roger and Lucille
>Fetish stuff was suggested by the anons and mostly glossed over
>THIS IS WAY TOO LEWD YOU GUISE! NEVERMIND THE FACT THAT WE HAVE MULTIPLE QUESTS THAT DESCRIBE MONSTERGIRL SEX OR UNDERAGE LESBIANISM IN INTRICATE DETAIL AND ONE QUEST THAT LITERALLY REVOLVED AROUND NOTHING BUT EARPLAY FOR THE FIRST THREAD AND A HALF
Nah, I think you're just overreacting a little bit here.
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>>22626875
Do you really think it's gotten that bad? I know I did snap at people that one time, but that's because we had a whole lot of people shouting to turn every character into some sort of cliche monster girl, including Roger's Parents.

I'll be the first one to admit that this quest goes to strange places. Sometimes it's because people suggest it and others because I'm the one writing it and I know that I'm writing a smutty, fetishy sort of story about a genderbent half-elf and his succubus playmate.
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>>22626958
It's fine. Don't worry about it.
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>>22626958
I think you're doing fine.
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>>22626930
>UNDERAGE LESBIANISM
what quest is that? I'm interested.
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>>22627072
Every single magical girl quest you dipshit. Especially that transhumanity one.
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>>22626958

I think it's probably due to the regulars for the threads being mostly interested in the softcore parts of it, rather than the adventure/uncursing thing.
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>>22626958
There's a difference between transformation fetishes and simply being a magical black market plastic surgeon.
It's like people not understanding that in a society where people can buy new faces and bodies from a catalogue and that the business is large enough to support 50% Off Sales, a person's body is just another accessory.
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>>22627123
I don't know about you, but I like me some adventuring. On the flip side, faffing about town is fine, too.
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>>22627092
There's 2 magical girl quest.
The transhumanity one, one of the girls is the fork of a couple of decades-old AI, and the other is from a society where a 15-year old is expected to at least be working on a Master's if not an MD.
And in Cyberpunk Magical Girl Quest, all the girls are in their mid to late 20's, with younger bodies due to a procedure they undergo.
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You take your purse in one hand and jostle it lightly, feeling its weight and listening to the clinking coins inside. You really undersold the value of your services, but the point was the make money, not to get rich.

With the amount of money you've collected, Roger could afford another week at the inn with a small amount to spare for extra costs. If you were to call it a night right now and just sneak back into bed, you think Roger would still be pleasantly surprised and thankful for the extra money, as long as she doesn't know you took control of her and ran around groping prostitutes.

But still... Some money is good, but a lot of money is great. You know you passed a few 'dance' clubs on your way here. You think you could put on quite a show if you could get on stage.

Sunrise is still a few hours off and your hold on Roger's body was still firm. You won't get another chance like this. You're already risking it all by even doing this..

You begin to march back down the street, searching diligently for a club.

That one looks too seedy. That one looks empty. That one looks like the dancers are expected to touch the customers. That one.. There we go. That one looks like the sort of thing you need. An audience, a stage, and a few stern bouncers out front to keep things peaceful.

You saunter right up, only for one of the bouncers, an other with a single gold tusk jutting up, to stop you. "Cova' charge." You smile coyly, not letting this throw you off your rhythm, "I'm here to perform.." you shift your weight from one foot to the other, wiggling your hips for him.

You slip around his outstretched arm and blow him a kiss over your shoulder as you make your way through the club, like you knew exactly where you were going...
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Alright. I'm cutting it close, but I need to run. Expect me to be gone for about 3 to 4 hours. We can carry on into the wee hours when I get back.
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>>22627174
It doesn't matter what you claim they are if they still act like little girls. And there's also magical girl noir, all those strike witches quests and that grimderp toohoo one that just started up will inevitably devolve into lesbianism., but this is not the thread to discuss them.
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>>22627133

In-game reasoning aside, transformation fetishes is why these things exist in the FIRST place. And all the shapeshifting antics with Lucille, AND the possession aspect that's been there all along but REALLY ramped up are all clear indicators that this is fapping: the Quest for the people making the decisions.
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>>22628132
Personally, having been around since thread 1, I'm here to curtail that. It's become sort of a habit, honestly; find a fetish quest just at the start of its lifespan, put on my serious face, and try to curb the fetish bullshit while pushing it towards a Good End. Strike Witches Quest was my one before that, until I realized it didn't need the help.
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>>22628191

Consider this one a failure for you, then.
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>>22628273
Considering how it could have turned out? I think he is doing just fine.
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>>22628480
Not really, since he is doing little to curtail anything, since most people are getting exactly what they want out of the quest. The only time the balance between plot and PLOT was disturbing with monstergirl spam, he was not alone in fighting against it.
One of us, one of us, one of us.
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>>22627072
Are there non-underaged lesbianism quests?

Just, ahem, you know. Curious.
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>>22628954
Ass Quest, though the exact sexuality of certain actions gets a little fuzzy in here.
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>>22628954
This one. And that's it, really. Why I'm here at least.
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>>22628852

This. I gave up posting because people just want to be the dress corrupting Roger CONSTANTLY and getting more and more pervy stuff in.

And then this part happened, and it was like WELLP, WELCOME TO MY MAGICAL REALM!

>implying we haven't been in OP's magical realm all along
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>>22629542
But we aren't Roger and we are still not doing pervy stuff TO Roger. Or really pervy stuff at all, save our unconventional method of applying enchantments. Shit, this has probably been one of the calmer threads since the Dress is out of the picture for now as well as Roger, meaning all the people urging Roger to suck a dick haven't had a chance to try and make him do so yet.
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>>22629780
>But we aren't Roger and we are still not doing pervy stuff TO Roger.

Doing shit with Roger's body. Same thing.
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>>22629823
>Same thing.
Not at all to some people. They want to see Roger suck the dick, not Roger's body. Its the corruption fetish of turning a straight guy 'gay', or 'making him accept his newfound femininity' or however else you want to phrase it. Having Lucille discretely suck a dick when Roger isn't aware of it wont do anything for them. Not to mention the alteration done to Roger was more of a disguise being put on than any corruption/expansion fetish smut.
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>>22629924

Uh. hate to break it to you, but this is transformation smut happening. People are fapping to it just as much as other people would to corruption, expansion or anything.

Fuck, this thread STARTED with transformation smut. It's the whole premise! It just became a lot more overt recently.
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>>22630014
I never said it wasn't, nor did I say it wasn't, you know, the founding idea behind this whole nonsense, all I was saying is that as far as Ass Quest goes, today has been one of the tamer sessions, which is why I'm surprised this one bothers people so much.
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>>22630064

Probably because it's become 99% fetish and 1% plot.
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>>22630128
>Lucille gaining the ability to plot behind Roger's back
>not plot
Huh, coulda fooled me. Maybe I was just blinded by the implications of Lucille's new found freedom to care too much about the subsequent fetish indulgence which still felt a little too rushed to be proper fetish indulgence to me.
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>>22630128
> 99% fetish
> "Wizard Curse: Plump Grabbable Ass Quest"

You think?
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>>22630349

Well, it took the "magical cosmetic surgery" idea from plenty of fetish threads and kinda went with that. So hey.
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>>22630697
It seemed pretty pragmatic and sensible to me, especially considering the alternatives.
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>>22630897

Not to mention fapworthy.
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>>22631051
Its not my fetish, so I couldn't say.
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WHY IS THIS FETISH QUEST SO FULL OF FETISH

GOD DAMMIT

I DIDN'T START FOLLOWING THIS JUST TO HAVE ALL THESE FETISHES IN MY FACE

IT'S LIKE SOME PEOPLE THINK IT'S INTEGRAL TO THE PLOT OR SOMETHING
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>>22631565

Overdoing it now.
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I know I've said it before, but I like saying it: I love it when you guys debate and discuss this sort of thing.

I can understand how some people could be put off by this sort of thing and it doesn't make their criticisms any less valid, but at the same time, I have agree with those who think it's silly to complain about fetishy material in this quest of all places. Perhaps we've all just gotten too comfortable with things being calm and in control, or the threat of the dress becoming too tame. Perhaps I've just been too soft and let certain things get brushed under the rug.

Let's continue on and see just how far we've really gone and whether or not that's too far.
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>>22632129
> let's continue on
Yes, please do. After you.
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>>22632129
>Let's continue on and see just how far we've really gone and whether or not that's too far.

Nooo, I have to go to sleep!
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>>22632296
Last chance to toss out some suggestions then before you go.
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>>22632129
I almost find the balance between random fetish fuel and actual plot to be the most amusing part of this quest - the struggle between the Dress and Roger is where a lot of the fun comes from. But I'm still looking forwards to greater adventure beyond being babied by our parents.

Or maybe it's just that my fetish is lesbians but I don't like lolis. Who knows.
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>>22632312
Standing vote for lesbian sex.
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>>22632312
I would have thought that Lucille would have wanted to experience drinking and eating again, after hundreds of years of not experiencing any sensation at all.

And while she might want to dance a little to exult in the feeling of moving around, you're neglecting taste.
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>>22632361
Pretty sure she feels what the host feels.
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>>22632318
I suppose I should also throw this out there because I just never did: Roger is 19.. Or she's at least over 18. Not a full blown adult or 100% mature, but not a loli kiddy.

I don't know if I even accidentally implied that Roger was a 12 year old or whatever, but whether I set it in concrete that she's a certain age or not, the idea is that Roger is at least a young adult. Someone who is just taking their first steps into actual life and such.
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Is it bad that I would love to see Lucille fighting crime? And fighting aliens and pretend to be an intergalactic cop who lives inside the body of a boy?
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I am not so sure about the dance, but I guess I am on the losing side.
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>>22632472

>Tetsuwan Birdy
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>>22632389
>I don't know if I even accidentally implied that Roger was a 12 year old or whatever
You didnt. We were discussing earlier how this is the only quest with lesbians that aren't little girls.
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>>22632492
Nope. Me too. I'm very sure that with our wits and magical prowess, this isn't necessary. If we could get a spell list, I'd prove it.
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>>22632492

How about we subtly influence Roger to use up her magic more often so Lucille will be a PC too?

Since we are the fae crown and all that.
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>>22632495

/tg/ is great. We really don't need the other boards anymore.
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>>22632510

How about we start writing a treaty on transformation magic? Then we can be the award winning author and roll in the cash.
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>>22632312
Pretty much this >>22632322
The only reason I follow this quest is possibility of that. Other fetish stuff don't bother me (as long as it's not dick sucking, or anything to do with a dick)..
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>>22632492

Well, at least we can be vocal about it even if we lose. Third anon here.
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>>22632492
Fourth anon not wanting to dance, here.
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>>22632603

Considering the Ass twitter only has 8 followers, I would even assume that half of the quest regular followers are against this idea.

I know, I am using the numbers all wrong, but 4 is a crowd.
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>>22632603

Oh come on and live a little for once. Whens the next time you can help Smith and enjoy a night out.

Go dance Go!
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>>22632645
20 followers, and SP follows 8 other people.
So 16 against.
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We have useless meat on our breast and ass. Why don't we try to transform the economy of the region and start growing POTATO?
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Why would you want to not dance? That doesn't make sense, in the least.

>>22632645

Do not make such assumptione ver again. I for one, follow the quest since it's beggining, yet I have not visited SP's twitter even once.
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>>22632675

Opps my bad anon.
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>>22632603
Five anon. I just wanted to Lucile to look badass
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>>22632675
>So 16 against.

You mean, 16 for?
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>>22632649
>>22632693
Because there's no reason to, when we're an arch-sorceress. Or, were going to be. It's nice to help people out, but we're FREE. We can do what we want. We just need to remember what we can do, now that we've got our own skills back.
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Dance, as we dance we transform the patrons into dancers themselves. For once, let's go all out with the ass-tastic magic!
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>>22632716
...errr, yes.
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Im kinda ambivalent on dancing myself. On one hand, it doesnt seem like a good idea and might be a good way to burn so much magic that we cant un-sluttify Roger. On the other hand, theres no doubt that it will makes us some mad dosh.
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>>22632732
For once, we have no reason to use ass-tastic magic! Read the thread. Dress is dormant.
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I want Lucille to do whatever the fuck she wants to. The women has been stuck in the dress since forever, she should be allowed to live a little.

Yes, that means do something for herself. If she wants to dance, then so be it.
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A vote for the dance.
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Why is Lucille not visiting the wizards in their sleep as the Ghost of Christmas Past and prophesize that a girl that will save the world will come under their tutelage?
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>>22632740

I think we can trust Roger to be resourceful enough to make money himself.
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>>22632751
Limited magic, wanting to save what we have, and not knowing what wards they have up. One of them catches The Dress early, we're all fucked, quite literally.

Also, voting for 'Lucille (and with it, SP) decides'.
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>>22632741
w-well, ok then...
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>>22632766

True, although that idea does have a wild charm to it. How about giving a dream to a person close to the wizard?
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>>22632766
>One of them catches The Dress early, we're all fucked, quite literally.
Aw, hell. The dress is going to throw a fit when we show up there, isn't it? Note to Roger: Brace yourself.
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Dress is asleep.

Time to troll wizards.

Lucille the Wizard Troll.
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Well then. How's about, since so many people dislike the idea of dancing, we offer ourself as 'stage manager' for the night? A spell on the door to attract customers, one on the stage to draw the eye, and gentle cantrips on the girls, in return for a percentage?
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>>22632840

I can get behind that. Although I want Lucille to be awesome in her own thread.
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>>22632766
>mfw Lucile spend all the money she got drinking
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>>22632852

I think she deserves a drink at this point.
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>>22632860
You don't just have one drink, anon. But I agree. Set herself up with drinks for the night and a small percentage in return for cantrips to draw in customers? Sure, why not?
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>>22632833
We're running on low magic reserves, and you want to troll master wizards with nearly full magic tanks, and who would have dealt with other wizards who thought they could troll them in a permanent manner?

>>22632840
>>22632850
We are running on limited amounts of magic here.
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>>22632889

Best trolls are those that no one ever thought of, ones that takes little mana, and ones that the wizards will laugh at too.
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>>22632889
We are. That's why I'm suggesting cantrips that even Roger could use without issue.
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The Bouncers let you go without any further objections. You'd once learned that you can get into nearly any place you need to go by being confident and looking like you knew where you were going. You're glad that it actually worked, since you'd never tried it before.

Inside, a small crowd sat spread amongst an array of tables, arranged carefully so they could all view the stage without having their vantage blocked by the other tables. Nestled against the wall was a bar, stocked mostly with a wide variety of liquor. Unlike the Feisty Penguin, this establishment doesn't offer any meals.

The patrons seem to be a mix of average men and a few who look like they have enough money to not need a place like this. You are able to pick out the latter because they are having private dances and accompaniment from some of the barely-clothed girls working here.

You turn a few heads, but most keep their attention glued to their drinks or to the lovely Asuran woman on stage. You must admit that the fluidity of her motions carrying through her entire body is pleasantly hypnotic. A woman that really knows how to move her body. Were Roger awake, she'd surely find a way to befriend her in a matter of minutes.

If you intend to dance, your largest concern is finding your way on stage. However, there are other possibilities here. It may be harder for you to sell your cosmetic magic here, but you imagine you might be able to coax some coin out of one of these men, especially if you offer them the company of their ideal woman.
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>>22632504
Yes, and our appreciation for that fact.
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>>22632965
Lucille...
It's been a long time since you've had a choice in the matter, huh? I won't hold it against you. Just don't settle for one because you can choose what one you want. Be sure you want him, because you've got a lot of other options.
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>>22632999

I am for this.

The only idea I have is to shout "Raiding Party!" and raid the treasury.
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>>22632965

So, either dancing, or semi-protitution?

Yeah, let's go with dancing.
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>>22632965
Dance, let them all see us but not be able to touch us. Just dance freely.
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>>22632965
It's been a couple hundred years. Let's get a drink at the bar.

>>22632999
What? No, the men are just marks, clients, meat with nice, plump coinpurses. They're nothing more than that.
You disgust me.
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>>22632965
can Lucille sing?
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>>22632965
Dance, as long as there are no physical contact.
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>>22633068
If they were women, you'd be singing a different tune. Lucille is, by now, at the very least bisexual. I won't hold what she does against her, whether it be sleeping with them or fleecing them. I'm still for the 'cantrips of attention getting' idea, though.
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I support dancing.
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>>22633108
Regardless what she is or she deserves, she is using Rogers body for that.
She shouldn't do what Roger wouldn't do.
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>>22633033
This. Seems improper to sell a body that we are in turn renting.
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>>22633178
Is she? Her body has changed. She obliterated Roger's body and replaced it with Lucille's, and will be switching it back. That's the point of the disguise spells.
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>>22633190
No? She just shape-changed it.
There is no obliterations, or 'replacing'.
It's still Roger's body, even if it doesn't look like one.
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>>22633229
If it doesn't look like Roger's body, and it isn't Roger in control of the body, and what she does with the body won't affect how Roger's usual body looks or acts, how is it Roger's body?

We appear to have run into the Grandfather's Ax paradox.
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>>22633250
It seems we define differently what constitutes someones body.
I don't base it only on looks or control. So to me what she does with the body very much affects Roger as a individual.
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>>22632965
Well, our goal is money. If you want drinks, get others to buy them for you. And do try to dance. And whose to say you can't befriend the lovely Asuran woman? The night is yours, this room your oyster. Take from it as much as you can.
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>>22633319
Why only the woman? There must be some men interesting enough to consider as well. Hells, why not both? As you said, the night is yours. The room is your oyster.
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>>22633250
No it's Rogers body, get out.
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>>22633334

Well hes not using it right now, might as well make some pleasant dreams for him
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>>22633334
On what grounds? It's a body that roger is not part of, that he didn't grow into, that his magic didn't put him into, that he has no say in as long as he's asleep. You seem to be saying "It's Roger's Body Because It's Roger's Body". Tautologies haven't worked as an explanation since I was 5.
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>>22633319
>>22633332
You guys can't stop acting like the dress, can you?
The Dress may have left a mark on Lucille, but it doesn't control her.
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>>22633108
>If they were women, you'd be singing a different tune
>implying Millia isnt mai waifu
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>>22633363
It doesn't. That's why I'm suggesting it's up to her. It could be men, it could be women, it could be both, it could be neither! The room is her oyster. The world is her oyster. She can do whatever she goddamned well pleases. Limiting herself to one thing (in this case, women) doesn't seem to scan.
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>>22633357
On the grounds that you are trying to use preschool philosophy.
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>>22633380
I'm saying she shouldn't fuck anything in a body that she is only borrowing.
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>>22633380
We, the players, have control over Lucille at this moment. If you want to relinquish control of the character, then hide the thread until after we return to controlling Roger.
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>>22633392
Matching the measure of the one I debate with, yes. So far as the thread has shown, absolutely nothing that she does will have any direct consequences for Roger, except for magic use. People seem to think that Roger's going to have some sort of dreams about this or feel it in the morning or whatever, when that just doesn't make sense with the magic involved.
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>>22633357
>You seem to be saying "It's Roger's Body Because It's Roger's Body"
Correct me if Im wrong, but it is the body that Roger had possessed since he was born, his own flesh and blood, albeit drastically altered. Even Lucille acknowledges it as his body, she just has no problem borrowing it for some time. Theft does not confer rightful ownership, you know.
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>>22633357
I am not >>22633334
But I'll try to explain myself a bit more. (i am >>22633298)
It's still his body because he was born into it.
Yes, it has been changed via magic countless times to something that doesn't look like his birth form. Even if all the changes changed the base DNA of it (which I don't think happened, just that Lucile made outer shell look like her). It would still be his body. IF nothing else, but by birthright.

>>22633444
It may not have direct consequences, but it still means that someone used his body without his permission to do stuff that he will never do. Even if he doesn't recall those things, or is aware of them. It's still wrong.
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>>22633510
>It may not have direct consequences, but it still means that someone used his body without his permission to do stuff that he will never do. Even if he doesn't recall those things, or is aware of them. It's still wrong.
More important question: Would Lucille Care? She cares enough to do good for him while she has it, but does she care THAT much?
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>>22633524
I would like to believe so. And I would vote for her to care.
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>>22633444
Or they, as seems to be mentioned, seem to think the idea of doing certain actions with a borrowed body would be somewhat of a betrayal of trust. This is regardless of Roger finding out.
I have to agree with them, though perhaps you do not. While I could easily see an argument to give into temptation and do it anyway, you seem to be trying to argue that such an action has no meaning.
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You decide that it may be best to consider your plan further, for the time being. You're not about to kick such a lovely woman off stage and if you do something foolish, you're likely to get kicked out all together.

You aren't doing this for yourself, after all.. Well, partially, but all these efforts are for Roger. You getting the chance to run around in the flesh for a while and making sure Roger gets some extra coin is just a splendid win-win. You simply need to be careful with what you do, for Roger's sake.

You decide to approach the bar and find a handsome human barman awaiting. You catch his attention quite quickly and he makes no effort hiding his interesting in you. He drinks in your appearance, scanning you from head to toe then back again with a twinkle of approval in his eyes.

You decide to play things carefully. If you can squeeze a free drink out of him, that would be ideal, but you might also be able to use him to get on stage. You tell yourself, before even saying a word to him, that anything more than playful conversation is right out.

You rest your eblows against the bar and lean in, giving him an eyeful of cleavage. He asks what you're drinking, to which you tell him "Something strong." You've been out of the loop for too long to accurately name anything they might actually have on the shelf, but that line seems playful enough to hold his attention.

He delivers something you don't recognize with a "-for the gorgeous lady," which you take a gulp of. The sensation of tasting it directly is exhilarating and also kicks you in the throat like an angry mule.
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Alright, since I still don't get it, I'd like to come at this from a different angle:

Exactly what, if anything, makes this body, right now, more Roger's than Lucille's?
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>>22633573
>The sensation of tasting it directly is exhilarating
We haven't tasted anything directly for hundreds of years.
Let's savor the experience.
Ask the name of the lovely lady on the stage.

But really, even if we don't stay out ALL night, we're still keeping this body running and moving and using up magic; there's probably going to be consequences in the morning.
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>>22633644
Because there isn't a question if it is more of Roger's or Lucille's. It's Rogers, period.
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>>22633676

but he hasn't been a girl that long, why would he have a period?
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>>22633702
funny.
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>>22633676
Exactly. So don't go having dicks stuck in it without his approval. But other things he may... probably... not notice.
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>>22633644
As I said here >>22633510
It doesn't matter what she does to it, or what form it's currently in. It's still Roger's body. So there is no question of more or less.
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>>22633573
Flirt a bit, butter him up, ask if he'd like to see us up on stage.
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>>22633660
sconding this. Keep in mind that body also needs rest.
Sleep isn't just for the mind, you know.
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>>22633644
As an analogy, say the body is Roger's house. While he's out, Lucille can move things around, re-arrange things, and make things more to her liking. But ownership did not pass to Lucille simply because she rearranged the furniture and put up some new drapes.

Another point is that Lucille does not actually reside within the flesh of the body; her soul is within the Dress, and is only controlling the body through the Dress' link to Roger. Since it's still Roger's soul that is tied to the flesh of the body, and not Lucille, he still has primary ownership, even though Lucille has control now.
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You segue the conversation quickly, not trying to flirt too much and ask how a girl might get up on that stage. He considers your question for a moment before offering to lead you somewhere. You slam down your drink in one quick desperate gulp and follow him. You don't even know if what you drank was good or bad or well aged for whatever it was, but it certainly makes you feel alive.

The barman leads you into a side room that connects to the back stage area. He talks with another worker back stage and gestures to you several times during their talk. To help seal the deal, you settle into a casual, yet seductive pose with your hip cocked out, back arched, breasts fully on display.

The other worker appraises you without the slightest hint of attraction and finally asks, "Can you actually dance?" Your lips curl into a wicked grin, "I'll put on a show you'll never forget, sweet heart. Believe me." He doesn't seem to be buying your charms, but he sighs and tells you to wait for this next dancer to finish, then you can get up there. When they give the sign, you wrap things up, take your coins, pay a small cut to the house, and that will be the end of it.

You'll have to make the most of your time then get out of here as fast as you can. You're pushing your luck already by even trying this. It would all be a waste if Roger wakes up in the middle of the Red Light district clutching a purse of coins that she doesn't remember getting.

While you wait your turn, you begin to plot how you'll go about your dance.. What will you even wear? Some spells are an absolute must if you want to impress, but which ones? Oh, you have a lot of plotting to do!
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>>22633676
I can try to help, but I'm unsure these are what you are looking for.
Lucille and the Dress are invading forces, much the same as the Crown may be. They recognize each other as seperate. While Lucille or the Dress possibly could attempt take over, generally they just go for certain things, and even then it's recognized that they are 'stealing' command or that the Wearer is giving over command.
As a seperate thing, these alterations are not replacing the body with entirely new things, they are, well, altering the body. Someone dying your hair doesn't suddenly make it not your hair, in example.
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>>22633788
>is only controlling the body through the Dress' link to Roger
This. This is a thing I'd missed, and it changes an awful lot. Shutting up now.
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>>22633788
>>22633817
This. I lack proper english skills to explain myself fully. So that is similar to what I think. Thank you.
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>>22633816
Not too much magic, we don't have overly much, and nothing too overt. Something to magnify our presence, change the lighting, make the music playing alongside us sound better and draw attention to us. Wear something gauzy, we want them to imagine what's underneath instead of just showing it outright, show peeks and glimpses of what is under the thin silk as we dance.
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>>22633816
Our body should be okay, and we've got a cantrip on our hair.
Is there anything that can help improve our coordination and agility?
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>>22633816

time for some Flamenco.

Also a nice red and black dress like the picture
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>>22633816
Use a bit of magic to make us attractive to both men AND women (we are going to get second looks from the working girls). Like a variation of magnify presence.
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>>22633816
Staying in our present form, begin our dance in what appears to be a formal ball gown. Have elements of the gown take bat wings, sprout faerie-like bodies and fly away, eventually leaving us in something small and lacey.
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>>22633816
Eh, might as well use a little bit of magic to make the men and women of the place more attracted to us. I think we should probably do some subtle atmospheric magic as well - changing light colour and intensity in sync with teh dancing.

As for clothing - start off with a lot and end naked - albeit wreathed in magic smoke if you want. Standard procedure. But don't rush it. If you draw it out longer, and remember to make the women attracted to you to (large pool that way), you can probably make a killing in tips.
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>>22633968
>>22634023

Both these sound good. I like the idea of any removal of clothing being made elegant and effortless by having it fly away.
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You wait, very impatiently, for your turn on stage. You've got all kinds of ideas and you're eager to try them. These other girls may be more experienced dancers than you are, but they won't be able to dazzle the crowd like you can.

You hear the music begin to die down, followed by a small round of unenthusiastic applause. The dancer, a dwarven woman with different shimmering metal decorations woven into her thick hair, comes strutting back stage, jingling with each step.

You hurry to the entrance and wait for the music to start. A jaunty little tune starts to play from the other side. You bounce on your heels for a moment, feeling out the rhythm of the music before you begin your show.

You open with an illusionary fog that pour out and fills the stage. You begin a slow, sensual saunter across the stage, unleashing a second spell on yourself. Enchanting appearance doesn't actually alter anything about you, but it adds an air of mystique that gathers attention and holds it so very well. Even the girls working the audience have started to watch your performance, now.

You approach the edge of the stage, still garbed in your full gown. You cast a quick Heavenly Spotlight, making the rest of the room seem dimmer and everything about you seem more illuminated.

You twirl to the right, and a phantom image of a nude woman flows off you, spinning to the ends of the stage and vanishing with it parts of your gown. Your outfit now more revealing, nothing more than a skirt and a minimal top. You twirl to the left, sending another phantom across the stage, leaving you clad in nothing more than a stylish set of lingerie with the faintest, gauzy coverings over it.

The audience collectively leans forward as you start into your actual dance, slowly gyrating you prodigious hips for them. Some have reached for their money already as you begin a careful, methodical belly dance.
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>>22634432
>The audience collectively leans forward as you start into your actual dance
As does the thread. Find a likely mark and start in on them, then go around the room.
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The illusionary mists behind you curl into the faintest images of female forms dancing wildly through the mists, vanishing in a puff and reforming again.

You catch sight of the first coins being tossed, lobbed carefully to hit the stage, but not the dancer. You don't let them hit the stage though. You work the gestures into your dance, carrying the spell through your arms and down into the rest of your body. A ghost hand catches the first coin, holding it aloft and letting it twinkle in your spotlight. You prepare several more, effortlessly splitting your attention between the spells and turning the stage into a star-lit night sky as you dance.

You turn your back to the audience and raises you hands above your head, shaking your ass back and forth for them while you smirk over your shoulder as you continue to catch more coins, just to let them know how easy this is for you. Automating a simple spell like the ghost hands is hardly a challenge for you and it feels wonderful to prove it.

A slow moving glint moving across the room catches your eye. Like a coin being thrown to the stage, but in slow motion. You reach out with a ghost hand and pluck a platinum coin from the air. You have to fight to contain your surprise. That's easily worth everything you've collected tonight put together!

You turn to scan the audience, quickly finding the thrower. Seated in the back of the room, leaning forward and resting both hands on a heavy wooden cane is an older man, dressed in heavy red robes. He gives an approving smile as you catch his gaze, as if you acknowledge that he did just pitch a platinum coin at a dancer.
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>>22634880
Give him a wink.CONTINUE THE DANCE!!
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>>22634880

oh god its a wizard and hes gonna track us down I know it!

FINALLY BACK WITH GOOD MASTERS~!
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>>22634880
That person is interesting, keep an eye on them, don't trust them in the least, and if they want to talk to us after the show be evasive. But for now, wink at him and smile.
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>>22634880
shit. Is this a wizard? Nobody that old with that much money to spend would be here casually.

Lower the pyrotechnics and prep a teleport. Duration left on the Sleep spell?
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>>22634880
Smile, finish up the dance, collect our earnings, and get the fuck out.
If he's a wizard, he can probably track our magic signature. Because did we renew the stealth charm on the Dress? I don't think we did, and it's been long enough that it might have worn off.
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>>22634880
Well at least he knows master magician at work when he sees one.
That...isn't a good thing. Finish up and bail.
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>>22635017
Being fair, everyone with eyes can tell we're a master magician with this.
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Oh, that is certainly not good. Anyone with that much money to throw around is never good news. Worse still, he might think he's owed something now, like a private show or worse. You need to finish your dance and catch the first Halberd-broom out of here.

You put on your best smile, then hold yourself back. Just a smile. A regular one. Don't let him think you're overly appreciative. Just like that..

You turn your attention to the other parts of the room. Everyone seems to be enjoying your dance, but no one's given the signal and the band seems to be following your lead now, matching the tempo of the music to the skillful wiggling of your hips.

You inch back onto the stage and begin to pull your illusionary mists around you in an effort to signal your exit. Everyone in the room leans in, waiting to see what trick you'll pull next. Not looking to disappoint, you pull all your mist into one concentrated cloud, then you pull all the floating coins in around it, and with a sudden burst, you and all your coin have vanished from the stage.

You really didn't. You just created a sort of illusionary wall that mimicked the back curtain of the stage, and slipped behind that. Some of the dancers watch you intently as you hurry away from the stage, piling your coins into the purse with the rest of your earnings, while dispelling everything as fast as you can. Outfit back to normal. Enchanting appearance gone. No more spotlight, no more illusions, no more ghost hands.

They try to ask you different things, but you meet all their questions with a "Back door exit." They point you towards it and before they can say anything else, you've grabbed your halberd-broom and run off.

You're gone and into the air before anyone can catch up to ask where you are off to. Next stop, the Feisty Penguin. You have a bed to sneak back into.
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>>22635189
Excellent, get home, put a note with a summary of what we did in with the coins, and then cuddle up with Millia.

The note is because Roger will assume the worst if we don't tell him.
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>>22635240
Surely we don't need the truth, though? We can leave it that we went out helping people. Make it a happy story. A little sex-free.
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>>22635189
Suspect the coin of oddities. If that was a wizard, then some type of trick in the coin itself may be expected. If it's actually platinum and not something else, for one. And if there's some trackable residue, for another. I almost wish we had left the coin behind. The inverse of the magnified presence spell to help keep attention away may be a good idea as well, if we still have plenty of power left. Or if we can misdirect scrying and the like onto something else.
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>>22635189
Before we get in bed, make sure to undo the transformations with the magic we have left.

I'm conflicted on telling Roger what we did.
But, he'll wonder about what we did to earn that extra money, so telling him about the back alley black market cosmetic jobs we did should forestall most questions.

And check that platinum coin for magical tracking spells.
Also, if there's a spell that can wipe an object of all previous sympathetic ownership ties, use it on the coin. We don't want that guy using the coin to scry on us because he owned it once before.

Shit, this could get bad.
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>>22635189
Check the platinum coin for being a tracking device or trap.

Don't tell the truth about the coins at all. He'll probably resent it. If pressed, say that you just had a bank account in the city you emptied or something.
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>>22635309

The thing is, Roger might be just plain unhappy his body was used without him "present". IT might make him more paranoid about keeping us under control.

Just mysteriously leave the bag in the room, with a mysterious, vague not that has nothing to do with anything.
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You cut through the air as fast as you can, clinging to the Halberd for dear life. As soon as you spot the open balcony you flew out from, you dive right for it, coming to a skidding halt against the floor.

It's not just the platinum coin or the possibility that he may have wanted something else from you. Anything he might have wanted you probably could have gotten away from.. But the way he looked at you. That knowing, confident gaze... It was too familiar. It was the way they used to look at you. Just thinking about those old days makes you shiver with fear.

It couldn't have been, though. They'd all be dead. No one could possibly know who you are or where you came from. He was just a fellow Wizard, trying to be polite by helping out another Wizard. That makes more sense. If he had any sense for magic, he'd probably think that a skilled woman like yourself shouldn't be belittling herself dancing in tawdry little clubs for a pittance of coins.

You pace around the room, undoing the various transformations and changes you inflicted upon Roger's body. Back to her normal, petite, though somewhat bottom-heavy self.. Easy enough, really. If you had the time or the proper ability to, you'd take the time to teach Roger about conditional triggers for limiting your spells. Maybe when she's had more practice..

Still fearing the worst, you fish the platinum coin from the purse. You hold it up, examining it in the faint moonlight. Arcane Vision, True Sight, Sympathetic Scrutinization. You open your entire arsenal to make sure there is nothing connecting this suspicious coin to the unknown man...
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>>22635141
Not quite. They probably just think we are very good at magic. Only someone who is well versed in it can actually tell what effort and skill is needed to pull off what we did.
>>22635189
and lol. we didn't pay the house. Well it's not like they can do anything about it.
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>>22635414
> ending the post with that

Cruel!
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>>22635345
He might. Of course, telling how it happened means he knows how we did it and can work against it, but can still choose to allow it later; we did show ourselves to be reasonable. And there is a fairly good chance something will give us away. Plus, he really should know about the strange man.

And as
>>22635272
I also of course agree with making sure we can still reverse the form spell and should leave a note telling Roger we need to speak with him and to not worry too much about how we managed to write the note since we'll tell him how.
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>>22635414
>inb4 the wizard is one of the future Roger teachers.
I will laugh
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>>22635447

the ride never ends/rape train has no breaks

It will be great as Lucile can't say anything. HAHAHA
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Nothing. Thank the Gods. Not a thing.

No tracking spells or sympathetic connections. That would be quite silly. Trying to track the sympathetic line on a coin is nearly impossible. They pass through so many hands that you'd have hundreds of threads.. But there's always the possibility that this is some sort of warning shot. What if this guy is trying to tell you that he doesn't need a tracking spell or something like that to track you?

You sigh and drop the coin back into the purse and drop the whole thing on the table beside the bed. Roger is going to be very surprised and confused by the overstuffed sack of coins, that's for certain. There's not many ways you could play this that would make her just forget about it and take the money.

You create a small note and borrow Roger's quill. You think for a short while and decide on something vague. "To the lovely R. Dorothy. Best of luck. --Donated by the citizens of Arisca"

You know just as well as she does that she has a reputation forming in this city. The possibility of her upcoming audience with the Wizards becoming public knowledge to the various friends and co-workers and fellow adventurers she's met could make this work..

You put the quill back where you found it and drop yourself into bed. If Roger ever finds out you can at least say that you didn't actually do anything bad. This was the most good you've been able to do in a while, all things considered. You close your eyes and let yourself recede from Roger's body, back into that strange little place you occupy between her and the Dress. What's done is done, for now.
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>>22635601
Bullshit. This might be worth warning her about. Depends just what's on that coin.
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>>22635679
TIMING!

Rest well, Lucille. You deserve it.
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I think I'm going to call that a wrap. Gonna throw this up on the archive and get some sleep.

Thanks for all your impassioned debating. I hope that I didn't drive too many of you off by choosing to dance. I could never have guessed that would be the thing to divide your guys. Nor could I imagine that so many of you would fear that I'd take this on a magical dick-sucking parade.
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>>22635783
It's not the dance I think. Some don't like it, but not to the heights of leaving.
It's mostly the 'dick-sucking parade' and Lucille not caring what she does with Roger's body. Which you have shown to be a non-issue.
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>>22635783
Are you kidding? Have a dick show up in this thread at all and you'll lose 9/10 of your readers. We're in it for the lesbians, and the fact that it's a good quest is just a nice bonus.
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>>22635783
Well I had confidence in you that you wont take it in that direction. I mostly argued with the anons that wanted fetish all the time. So as not to stear the quest in that direction.
>>22635841
and what he said.
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Rolled 5

>>22635676
when roger wakes up we'll need to nudge him into using the platinum coin as fast as possible that way we won't have to worry about it
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>>22635934
Why use it? Take it to the bank in town or a busy moneylender and have them split it for you, unless you can think of something that Roger needs that's worth a whole platinum.
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>>22636281
Impressing elf girls? (have we had that date yet?)
Or, hell, we could invest in some adventuring equipment just in case.
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>>22636432
>Impressing elf girls? (have we had that date yet?)
I can see it now.

"Sadly, I am but a poor adventurer, and so we must make do with a single coin this evening."
> dramatic flourish, reveal platinum
"Surely, you can find it in your heart to forgive me?"
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A whole chapter just dedicated to making fa/tg/uys masturbate. Never stop appealing to the lowest possible denominator, S_P.
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>>22636490
>A whole quest just dedicated to making fa/tg/guys masturbate."
Fixed.
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>>22636570

>implying the OP couldn't have done better and shouldn't have done better under the blanket "oh but it was always a fetish quest" excuse
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>>22636596
>>22636570
> posting in a dead quest thread without saging

It's like you want to be a nuisance more than OP ever could.

Also, we already know his fetish. It's christmas cakes
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>>22636570
Well, I was there for the first thread and we made it about OUR DIIIICK
but then threads 2&3 happened and I left.
Also looking back on it I'm pretty sure SP expected us to react the way we did so it doesn't seem like that much of an achievement now.

tl;dr: this quest is, was, and always will be shit.
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>>22636622

It was always going to be about Roger being buttfucked, metaphorically and physically. The only people who have stuck with it are the people who fap to the forced feminization, possession and the other stuff OP is injecting in. I'm surprised this one just ended in a striptease and not sucking a million dicks, but it was still pretty awful. Also whoreswhoreswhores
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>>22636727
And this guy, apparently.
>>22628191
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>>22636741

At least he kept trying. If people want to change a quest, post in it. Be constructive. Offer second/third/fourth opinions.
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>>22636741
I would have done that, but honestly after the 3rd thread I decided "fuckit" and now just sigh loudly every time I hide the thread.
Which I didn't do for some reason this time.
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>>22636780

I feel the same way. Every "constructive" suggestion I made was drowned in the sea of requests for corruption, sex and more corruption. Eventually one gives up and stops trying, and lets the fetishfags get what they want.

At least we did try to turn this quest around into something decent.
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>>22636896
To be fair, SP had to railroad like fuck at the beginning.
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>>22636955

While he avoided some of the worst fetishtraps (I remember people wanting monstergirl harems), he has kept encouraging others. Just because the quest isn't as shitty as it could have been doesn't mean it's good.
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>>22636979
I mean, the first two threads. After that I quit.
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>>22636994

The sad thing is, I think OP has potential as a storyteller. His style isn't bad, and he's got better grammar and spelling than a lot of quest-runners. But he wastes it all on trivial fapbait shit, which only attracts the worst possible crowd /tg/ has.

I think you saw potential at the start of the quest as well, but just grew tired of seeing it dashed.
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Good job, forgot to pay our cut for the dancing. Need to pay that next night.
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>>22637046
>which only attracts the worst possible crowd /tg/ has.
I get the feeling you and others like you have not poked your heads in other quest threads if you truly think this one is the worst in regards to fetish pandering or blatant sexual content. Or even fanbase, for that matter.
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>>22637046
Sometimes fapbait is all that is desired. I would highly prefer the fapbait stay in quest threads like this rather than spilling out over the rest of /tg/ into "ELF SLAVE WAT DO" type threads.

And actually, as fair as these things go, this is fairly decent stuff.
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>>22637546
>fairly decent stuff.
what he said. This quest is terrible fapfic. If you want to do that, you are better of finding actual porn.
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Is bumping the thread just to go "Yeah this sucks" really necessary?
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>>22640695
it wasn't "Yeah this sucks" bump. More on the lines "Yea this isn't a fapfic, anons that say that are overreacting" bump.
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>>22640864
> This isn't a fapfic
> Wizard Curse: Plump Grabable Ass Quest.
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>>22641383
if you ignore that and look at what it contains. Then yes, it's not a fapfic. Even the 'fade to black' aren't fap material.
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>>22640864
>>22640695
I agree, I like how this Quest is staying firmly in /e/ territory rather than wandering over to /d/ or /h/ outside of the pastebin
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>>22641383
It's a fic with fap-esque themes.
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>>22640793
Let them talk. I want to hear this sort of stuff.

I know I can't please everyone all of the time, especially not with a story like this, but I want to know why people are displeased.

I understand entirely that having your suggestions ignored or drown out by the crowd is certainly disheartening and I've given up on a few quests myself for that exact reason. However, I also have to wonder why some people are so angry when things go into fetishy, smutty territory when so much of the quest is geared for that.

I do feel like I may have written myself into a corner, though. I expected light touches of the occasional fetishy transformation, not as the main focus, but as an element of the story. With the Dress as the main and ever-present antagonist, that sort of thing is always possible. Not to just snap and turn everyone into monster girls, but to create additional layers of drama for the characters.

The harder they work to turn things back to normal, the less normal things get. That sort of thing.

But still, the point is to resist, because Roger doesn't want to give in and because letting it happen brings everything closer to madness and losing all control.

The problem is that we're somewhere between a fapfic and a standard piece of fantasy fiction. For a fapfic, things are pretty tame and I spend way too much time getting too the good stuff. I imagine people fapping to this would have rubbed themselves raw in the span between FTBs and any actual transformations or body expansion shit.

As far as fantasy fiction goes, it's a little erotic, but things are pretty slow on the action and very very internal and mental with the character focus. The story might be there, but it's dragged out to make way for all the other elements.
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>>22623598
Continuing these thoughts.. More of a fucking thesis at this point.

Anyways, if I scuttle any of these elements, the story is ruined. Hence writing myself into a corner.

If I remove any threat of transformation or the dress just doing terrible things, short of forcing Roger to go on the aforementioned magical dick-sucking parade, then there's no tension. There's no urge to get things fixed as fast as possible and there no drive to push the story onward.

If I scuttle the story elements and just fast-forward between each FTB or make it all about Roger sexually conquering dozens of ladies and just turn this into the most basic, "Yay I'm a girl and I'm gonna scissor with EVERYONE" then things are drastically less interesting and it becomes unplayable as a quest because then I'm firmly outside of /tg/ territory and I've become everything I hate, and I know that a lot of you hate (which is probably why there's such a kneejerk negative reaction to the title and the premise)

In either case, I've often found myself caught in between the urge to add more fetishy elements to the story, because I know that's why some of you have come, but I also find myself worrying that any inclusion might drive you away, since each person's kinks can be very particular, and one step in the wrong direction will drive you all away.

Then there's the times where I feel I've dragged things on to long and I'm just writing a quest for the sake of writing a quest and then this thing really will become a 407 part monstrosity constantly eating up page space on /tg/ while everyone winces in revulsion at the jackass who doesn't realize he's not wanted here.
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Perhaps I'm just overreacting to some negative commentary, but I just wanted to air that particular grievance.

At this point, changing or removing certain elements would drastically change the way things would play out. It could drive people away, cause things to crash and burn, or simply just make this a boring piece of shit.

I'm not ever going to deny that this quest isn't meant to be semi-erotic or fetishy or whatever you want to call it. I didn't fully intend to get into things with the FTB and some of the other things that have happened, but I'm not going to deny that the intention was to make a quest about a guy who gets turned into a girl and has to deal with that.

As always, all I can really do is default any complaints about the quest to the title. It may not tell you exactly what you're in for, but you should be able to tell that it's not going to be squeaky clean and tame.

All of this shit was posted under nokosake, by the way. Not looking to bump this thread any more either.
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>>22641595
OK I'll be honest. I think so far that you are doing just fine.
The only reason I am following this quest, is that I'm curious about the 'boy turned girl ends up with the another girl in the end', possibility of the quest.
If there are fetish transformations along the way, so be it. As long as it doesn't end up in dickvile, I'll stick around.
btw I am >>22641448 >>22640864 >>22640793 And was trying to say that anons that keep insisting that this quest is fap fetish bait are overreacting. Probably didn't succeed and got misunderstood.
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>>22641756
oops ment to quote >>22640695 not >>22640793 sorry
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>>22641729

Write what you like and it will find an audience. Personally I think your quest is a good fit for /tg/. I don't follow it very closely myself, but it's always nice to see around.
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>>22641503
To me, it's mostly just the large amount of fetishes that I am opposed to on an entirely moral level. Transformation and body control being the two that pop into my head. I dunno if it's the amount of Rush I listened to as a kid or what, but denying a person their free will rubs me the wrong way on a very, very deep level.
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>>22642350
>but denying a person their free will rubs me the wrong way on a very, very deep level.
I'm with you, which is why I find it fun to fight the whole corruption/control element. It feels kinda weird to enjoy what is clearly someones fetish in an entirely nonsexual manner, but there you have it.
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>>22642350
>>22642438
Honestly, corruption, mindbreaking, hypnosis, brainwashing and other mental changes are all things I really don't like either. I didn't introduce it into the story because I'm furiously fapping and I only type so slow because I'm only using one hand when I do. It's in there because it makes for a good struggle. It's a good reason for a character to really think about who they are and who they want to be.

Roger may not want to be a sex crazed, crazy ass-wizard, but the question then, is who does she want to be? Having to struggle and fight that makes the whole choice so much more important.

Also...
>It feels kinda weird to enjoy what is clearly someones fetish
Everything is someone's fetish. EVERYTHING.

But, yeah, some of this is my cup of tea, but not all of it.
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Well, personally I hoped this was moving beyond the fetish-y start and into more plot-driven territory after the first few runs, as I said above, but that just didn't happen. Instead I feel there's been an acknowledging and adding more fetishes to it, moving it away from the story it could have been. Which is why I (and probably a lot of others) kind of dropped out of the quest after the first few RP's. There was also a lot of railroading in the first few RP's to make fetish stuff happening, which made me realize this probably wasn't the quest for me. Cool if you guys wanna do these sort of things to get a stiffy, but for a lot of people here we look for stories to go beyond fetishes we may or may not have, and it feels like Roger's story quite early fell into a cul-de-sac when it comes to the storyline.

Just my honest 2 cents.
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>>22642350
Turning someone into a girl isn't breaking their free will.

They're free to choose which dicks they suck.
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>>22643010
Sounds like you're really overreacting and focusing on the things you don't like, rather than all the stuff it sounds like you would like.

The kinky shit is not as prevalent as you are pretending it is, but seeing as you dropped out within the first couple threads, how would you know anyways?
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>>22643827

And this is why the quest will never be any better.

Retarded yes men everywhere. Fapping their dicks dry
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>>22643010
I feel like we have dithered about in Arisca for quite some time now, but there has been a fair deal of backstory delving and character development to justify it. For you to act like this quest is ONLY about plump, grabbable asses when you claim to have dropped it somewhere upwards of ten threads ago is far from an 'honest 2 cents', not to mention Pervert has proven himself pretty damn good at nipping obnoxiously flagrant fetish shit that wont advance the quest or is out of character in the bud. If it was really as bad as you claim it is, Roger would be the giga-assed Whorelord of a monstergirl harem right now.

Furthermore, saging a thread past bump limit just makes you look even more obnoxious.



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