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Sup /tg/? I have a question for all of you elegan/tg/entlemen.

We've seen chapters like the Angry Marines, the Emperor's Nightmare, even such off-key chapters as the Blood Jaguars...

But something has occurred to me. While we have such badasses as the Fire Hawks/Legion of the Damned, they constantly bounce back and forth between being dead and being mutated. Yes, they're loyal to the Big E himself, but they're a small force that are bro-tier with the IG, and little else.

It has gotten me thinking; at what point do we draw the line between Chaos and Loyalist?

Would a Legion, even after being declared traitors or being driven out of the Imperium and hunted by their battle brothers, still share some degree of Loyalty to the Imperium of Man and its cause? Even if, stripped of their title of loyalist to the Imperium, mutated by the warp (or from creation), only able to garner favor to those planets lost and obscured by the warp storms, and they were forced to manufacture and steal whatever wargear they were able? To what end; madness, excommunication, mutation, taint, and unwanted favor by Chaos, would they put up with before they gave in?

It is for that reason that I, once, thought to create a chapter of marines using the Chapter creation tables, and then take that chapter, and run it through the Chaos Space Marine table. I feel that, over time, they have become lackluster and flawed, due to only one person's ideas.

So, I ask you, /tg/, are you interested in creating a Legion more downtrodden then the Lamenters, more fucked over than the Fire Hawks, and, dare I say it, possibly as either insane or flawed as the forces of Chaos, and yet they still wear the Imperial Aquila with pride?

If so, I am ready with the creation tables for both the SMs and CSMs, and await your command. Dubs garner great favor, Trips confirm.

Are you up for it?

Pic semi-related to the concept.
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I'm interested. Proceed.
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Onwards.
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>>23645181
>>23645197
Very well then. As I said, I planned to run them through SM and CSM tables, so let's start with the obvious.

Why was the chapter founded?
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>>23645140
Would that character named Cypher, i think, be a good reference to start with?
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Rolled 24

>>23645213
Gonna guess a d100 because ferty key.
If suggestions, because orks. Chaos can be cleansed with fire, nids can be exterminated and broken, everyone else dies, but orks keep popping up until you virusbomb the place.
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>>23645213
perhaps the chapter was warped by chaos, but somehow maintained their sanity, or at least some of it. just enough to know that they still should serve the emprah before they die.
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>>23645266
The Dark Angels Cypher?

Possibly, though think more Lamenters and Legion of the Damned in levels of 'kicked the shit out of'. Now if you mean 'always keeps fucking showing up now matter how many times he's confirmed to be killed' then possibly. It all depends on what they end up being formed as.

Speaking of which; dice are subjective to this. If you can give a good reason without having a roll, then we can likely go for it.
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>>23645213
My interest has been piques. Let's see what's what.
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>>23645280
d10. My bad. Should have placed that in the post.

>>23645290
Likely a possibility.
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Rolled 60

>>23645311
That's odd thought I rolled there. Why is there an extra +?
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>>23645321
>>23645280
Going from the 10s, this would suggest either a Strategic Prognostication or a Counter of some kind.

Normally, I would suggest Counter for a healthy dose of irony, but Prognostication has my interest. If so, what threat might they have been planned for?
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>>23645312
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Rolled 3

>>23645362
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Rolled 1

>>23645382
that was totally the right field
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Rolled 3

>>23645362
I vote eldar. They're an experiment in out-prognosticating the Eldar. Which is kind've doomed on theory, but we wanted a space marine chapter FUBAR right? How about being founded with a goal that's functionally impossible, because being founded in the first place was Just As Planned?
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>>23645418
This. I like this.

>Captcha: atpest vantage
Hmm exactly, captcha. Exactly.
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>>23645398
>>23645409
>>23645418
Majority confirms for Prognostication. 'spose we can flesh this out later once we get to their enemies (Eldar, Tau, etc.). Noting a vote for the Space El- I mean Eldar, because you, anon, are making sense.

Alright. Next; when was the chapter founded? (d100)
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Rolled 37

>>23645457
>squalor tryiness
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Rolled 72

>>23645457
Hoping for later rather than sooner.
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>>23645478
37 would put us at the 36th Millenium (ironic) while >>23645491
Would put us in the 40th Millenium, meaning they're a fairly late-to-the-party chapter who would at least have a fighting chance of dealing with the enemy by observing tactics and such...

But this is a fucked-over chapter, so it could swing either way.
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>>23645491
Failed to notice that comment's extra bit. Care to elaborate on why you would hope them a younger chapter?

>called esdnesd
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Rolled 1

>>23645561
Evens it's 36th, odds it's 40th.
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>>23645629
I'll accept that. 40th Millenium it is then. Considering how things are going, what with the recent 6th edition and all, this would likely make sense... sort of.

Anyway. Next table; What was the chapter's progenitor?

>Boiler rdhoris

Is the captcha saying Salamanders or something?
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Rolled 6

>>23645672
1d100?
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>>23645672
Salamanders would be intriguing, if only because they have no confirmed successors, what with Black Dragons being mutant dickweeds and all.
Not suggesting them because I already have a chapter that was created in part due to the actions of my techmarine, no sir. Not at all.
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Rolled 4

>>23645672
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>>23645700
Yes.

>>23645705
Aye, it would. I don't even think that the /tg/40k setting has any Salamanders successors yet.

Also; so far we have... >>23645700 >>23645722
...Ultramarines...

...Let's see some later rolls and ideas before we go on, shall we?
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Rolled 98

>>23645733
sorry, thought it was 1d10
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>>23645747
No, no; my fault for not listing the dice; I expressly apologize for that. I can't expect people to all have a table pulled up as well and instantly be aware of rolls.

On another note; Iron Hands would be intriguing, though I'm partial to Salamanders at this point. Still, being how crazy the Iron Hands are fluff-wise, this would make a bit of sense.
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Rolled 27

>>23645733

Please, something other than smurfs...
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>>23645764
Sadly, that falls in the 1-50 that makes up the smurf section of the table. I wish I was making this up. Thankfully, no dubs or trips.

Do you wish to reroll, good sir?
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Rolled 15

>>23645795

Rerolling. If it's still smurfs, than I suppose we can do a d2 between smurfs and iron hands.
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Rolled 76

>>23645747
Votin for this laddie.
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>>23645805

...This is the one thing I dislike about the SM creation table. It's a full 50% chance to land as ultrasmurfs, whether you want them or not.
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Eh, just keep with smurfs. Outpredicting the spess elfs seems like something they'd try to do anyway.
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>>23645805
>>23645820
So either Smurfs, Iron Hands, or Dark Angels.

Dark Angels could work, considering how paranoid they are; perhaps instrumental in declaring the chapter to be traitors? Iron Hands could relate to their insanity or whatever, and Smurfs...

Well, having a succesor of the Ultramarines nearly falling to chaos and being mutated as fuck would certainly be a spit upon them, wouldn't it? I, for one, would find it rather hilarious that the Ultramarines got taken down a peg or two.

So, what is the majority ruling, or do we want to let a roll decide?
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>>23645862

I say a roll, but if not I vote for Smurfs. I also enjoy the idea of this lesson in humility.
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>>23645836
This. If we're going to shit on a chapter, it might as well be them.
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>>23645896
Agreed
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>>23645890
>>23645896
>>23645836
>>23645936
So making them an Ultras chapter, for the sake of making them gain humility, and to spit upon the heretic known as Matt Ward. I like it.

>>23645833
We all know that feel bro.

Onwards, then; gene-seed purity (d10). Pure, New Generation, Altered Stock, or Flawed are the choices, so if we decide to fuck over the dice for the sake of continuity, we can look over what we could go with.

Roll or suggest, either way.

>playstoc settlements
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Rolled 9

>>23645949

Rollin'.
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>>23645896
I second this, also trying to out do someone at what they are good at sounds like something they would try to pull
>eptimov Frozen
I think the captcha wants an ice planet
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>>23645965

Flawed, so they were different from their brothers to begin with.
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>>23645949
lets do this
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Rolled 5

>>23645997
done goofed the roll
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Rolled 7

>>23645949
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Rolled 4

>>23645949
Rollin for IMPURE.
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Rolled 9

>>23645949
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>>23645965
>>23645979
And now I'm beginning to see why they were declared traitors. Knowing the Smurfs, they'd denounce them purely for the sake of keeping their shining image that nobody gives a fuck about...

>>23646006
>>23646011
Sadly, these are pure. Re-roll if you wish.

>>23646010
Altered stock, eh? This could be interesting as well, but ultimately I leave it to you all to decide on the majority.

Or we could do both flawed and altered, if we want to break the table. I'm against it, but considering how badly we plan to fuck them over, it is something of note.

Y'know, I almost feel sorry for Roboute, considering that he himself said that the Codex is only a guide, and that actual brains were also needed. Almost.
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Rolled 2

>>23646058
>pure
>in an smurf army we plan to mess up
lets try that again
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>>23646058

I'd say go with flawed, because it would be a good reason for the ultrasmurfs to go 'HERESY!'.
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>>23646058
Personally I think that they should be cast out by their brothers early.

CAPTCHA: small objaxi
cap is suggesting perhaps a mutation making them smaller than the average marines, perhaps human sized?
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Rolled 7

>>23646011
>>23646058
REROLLING CAUSE IT WASNT GOOD ENOUGH THE FIRST TIME 'ROUND
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>>23646058
flawed, baby
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>>23646087
>>23646092
>>23646093
>>23646101
Okay, looking over at this, it says that gene-seed deficiencies can still occure, regardless of if they're Altered or not, so we can still go with Flawed and fuck them over gene-seed wise.

So flawed it is then? If so; next is Chapter Demeanor (1d10)

Also, for those who want to know the specific shit, 1d4chan isn't exactly fully-detailed, so I direct you to this:

http://www.heresy-online.net/forums/showthread.php?t=83190
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Rolled 4

>>23646093
hmm, that could turn out interesting, could also be their flaw, hard to hide that you are all 2ft shorter then you should be
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>>23646129
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Rolled 1

>>23646129
To glory!
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Rolled 2

>>23646129
ALWAYS ANGRY, WE SHALL BE THE ANGRY SEERS AND THAT WILL TOTALLY WORK AND NOT HAVE SIGNIFICANT FLAWS
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>>23646129

Rollin'.
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Rolled 7

>>23646144
sorry
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>>23646150
No.
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Rolled 10

>>23646151

Fail...
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Rolled 10

>>23646129
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>>23646194
>10|Uphold The Honour Of The Emperor
would explain why they didn't fall to chaos so easy
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>>23646141
>>23646149
>>23646150
>>23646155
>>23646162
So any of these:
Swift as the Wind (Fast as the Warp)
Brothers In Battle (Willing to die for their fellow battle-brothers)
No Mercy, No Respite (Fighting for only their main objective (killing), even if it can cost them; everything else is secondary.)
See, But Don't Be Seen (The Chapter understands well the value of maintaining a silent, unseen vigil on the foe, striking only when his target is at its weakest and most vulnerable)
Suffer Not The Alien To Live (Fucked over by and hates a group of aliens)

Uphold The Honour Of The Emperor (What >>23646211 said)
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>>23646255
Whoops. Remove See, But Don't Be Seen.
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Rolled 5

>>23646255
brothers in battle
us outcasts gotta stick together
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>>23646255
Swift as the wind.
Jetbikes will totally outspeed the eldar versions and not be forseen at all guise srsly
Also teleportation is not dangerous at all srsly
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Rolled 1

>>23646261
We got more 10's than anything else, so flawed prognosticators who are totally emperor-sessed? I lol'd.
>captcha tsbhip Plutarch
What's a plutarch and how do we get one in the chapter?
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Rolled 6

>>23646255

Brothers in battle.
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>>23646296

Lol, forgot to remove roll. disregard it.
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>>23646283
A greek historian, apparently. More to the point; you're right on having a majority of tens.

>>23646277
...Okay, even if we don't take this one, I say we incorporate that in why the Eldar were able to fuck them over when they went into battle.

>>23646296
We could also use this somewhat; See, But Don't Be Seen meaning they appear right before they try to fuck the eldar up, but get slaughtered themselves.

>>23646272
So bro-tier with the Legion of the Damned and the Lamenters, then?
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>>23646255
I forgot to take off roll in my 4, please disregard
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>>23646283
do you want plutarch the moon crater, plutarch the greek philosopher, plutarch the byzantine bishop, or plutarch the tyrant of eretria?
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blood jaguars
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Rolled 4

>>23646320
Rolling a d4 to break up this STALEMATE!
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Rolled 3

>>23646320
d4 tie-breaker
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>>23646345
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Rolled 1

>>23646345
>>23646320
d4 seems reasonable
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>>23646345
we bros now
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>>23646340
Unrelated to the thread, but that is an awesome paint scheme. My compliments.

>>23646345
...You... ah, did not state what was what for each number... and honestly I was going to declare majority rules, then use the other 3 for major aspects of the chapter...

Everyone's happy, and it adds some interest. Its not a wholesale combining all 4, but the other 3 are rather noticeable.

>zealous Shrisks
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Rolled 4

>>23646326
Our chapter master should be named Plutarch, going off of the philosopher and maybe the bishop. He's always staring off into the distance, trying to plan 12 moves ahead of himself in three different crusades / battles / boarding actions, he rarely goes into action but is always trying to pierce the veil of the future. He managed to not fall despite everything else because he's deeply insightful into the nature of the Space Marine soul, and his philosophies managed to keep his battle-brothers safe as well.
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>>23646340
why is the Rhino backwards?
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>>23646375
>super fast, sneeky, bro-tier, and confused emprah worshippers
noice
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Rolled 11

>>23646375
I was just going down the list, 1-4 for the options. So that nets us Brothers in Battle. What's next OP? dice related
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>>23646375
Majority being what I said in >>23646320 with the majority of 10 roles. Its like the Big E wanted it or something, but if you guys want Bro-Tier, then I can roll with that.

>>23646394
So is that a yes then?

>>23646382
This. I like it.
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>>23646394
I am ok with this
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>>23646409

I like this.

>>23646409

Also I agree, 10 got rolled more, so it should be so.
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so are we freelancer marines or something?
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>>23646432

...First link is supposed to go to >>23646382
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>>23646442

We'll find out exactly what we are when all the dice have been rolled. Until then, we're just making it up as we go.
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>>23645672
Chapter master must be names Boiler Rhidoris
fate commands it
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>>23646408
Technically the next one is chance of gene-seed deficiency, with Ultras having a 10% chance...

...But honestly we all know we're going to just say 'fuck the dice, they have mutations!' right?

>>23646419
>>23646394
>>23646432
Alrighty then. So the stated one is Uphold The Honour Of The Emperor, but we incorporate Swift as the Wind, See, But Don't Be Seen, and Brothers in Battle into their general demeanor/battle doctrine...

So basically ultra-fast, out-of-nowhere bros who have stayed loyal to the Big E himself. I can live with this.
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>>23646465
nope.
plutarch leads us to victory
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>>23646473
so what do we roll?
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>>23646473

You read my mind. Yes, I say fuck the dice, we need moar excuses for the ultramarines to say 'HERESY'.
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>>23646465
>>23646477
We shall decide when we get to the Figure of Legend table, my brothers.
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>>23646495
next is mutations right?
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Rolled 13

>>23646473
What're we rolling for mutations?
Screw it, here's a d100
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>>23646473
They're trying to outrun and outpredict the eldar, to prevent them from harming the imperium...
And they're doing, y'know, better than expected, but they're starting waaaaay too late in the game to help much.
Showing up at almost the right time, maybe just figuring out enough to halfway stop the plans...
But spess merheens don't give up that easy.
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>>23646486
Technically, were we to do so, it would be to roll d100 and see if we have a gene-seed deficiencies, and then move on to that table... but again; I'm all for saying 'screw that'.

In which case, it is a d10 to determine which are deficiencies, with a chance for a 10, which is getting up to 3 deficiencies.
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Rolled 10

>>23646515
I think its a d10
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Rolled 3

>>23646536
ill just roll a d10
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Rolled 9

>>23646536
>>23646544
Glorious.
Guessing rollan again for picking.
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Rolled 9

>>23646536
MUTATIONS FOR THE CORPSE GOD
that seems wrong somehow. Can't put my finger on it.
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>>23646544
Dubs garner major favor. Roll again for which 3. re-roll doubles.
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>>23646556

This ain't the thread for that, make your own thread.

Also obligatory 'We just had this thread yesterday'.
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Rolled 6

>>23646536
I vote auto mutated, go straight to the d10
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Rolled 7

>>23646575
forgot to link to >>23646571
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>>23646574
Deleted post. I just thought it would make more sense to post it in here. Well, im off to search the pages.
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Rolled 4, 8, 1 = 13

>>23646571
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>>23646565
>>23646562
Double 9

CAPTCHA: aeosed could
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>>23646599
i like this one
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i just thought of something. what if the marines are from a traitor legion?
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>>23646634

We'll burn that bridge when we get to it. We're not even through with the Loyalist SM creation table yet.
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>>23646590
>>23646599
>>23646602
Let's see...

First is Lost Zygote, second is odd-colored skin, Lost Zygote, and addicted to flesh. Third is... Doomed...

>>23646634
>>23646651
Agreed.
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Rolled 7

>>23646690
Excuse my lack of knowledge for showing. I was attempting to roll a d10.

Rollin' just because.
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>>23646690
>doomed
is there a way we can get around that?
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>>23646690
Never actually been in one of these threads before. Where did you get the template for this? Or did you already post it and I just missed it?
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>>23646690

I vote for Lost zygote. Doomed would mean they'd all die out eventually, and we can't have that.
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>>23646740
http://www.heresy-online.net/forums/showthread.php?t=83190
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>>23646740
http://www.heresy-online.net/forums/showthread.php?t=83190
its dangerous to go alone
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Rolled 8

>>23646746
Agreed on Lost Zygote and removing Doomed.

So that means we have 2 mutations left, with Addicted to flesh, odd-colored skin, and... whatever this roll is. I'm just rolling to give ideas at the moment.
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>>23646749
Thanks, I actually just found it after giving the thread another skim. Was getting ready to delete the post when you posted.
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>>23646690
Doomed would be too easy. I vote two lost zygotes and an odd skin color... I'm thinking bright yellow.
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>>23646746
It's perfect though. A doomed chapter of marines created to outmatch a doomed race.
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Rolled 40

>>23646690
Rolling, still think we should go for the short marines.
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Rolled 4

>>23646774
It's all good bro.

>>23646776
Two lost Zygotes seems a bit much, honestly, but if majority goes for it, I guess...
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Rolled 1

>>23646811
>>23646813
Wow, we're getting a lot of doubles on the rolls.

Yes, I am shitposting so that we can get some other mutations to choose from. It just doesn't seem... flawed enough, if that makes sense...
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>>23646813
dude, we're super fast sneaky bro-tier ultramarines
we could go for some nerfing
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>>23646813

Addicted to flesh can easily cause problems down the line. Pretty hard to tell khorne to fuck off when your dining table consists entirely of the boody meat of your enemies.

Whether we want that or not, I dunno, but we're looking for a chapter that as a majority still says 'Praise the Big E, and fuck the rest'.
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>>23646834
Dubs are lucky, got a good feeling about this one.

Cap'tn CAPTCHA is also with us, his decree:

commenced Febmilye
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>>23646834
Y'know, we have to roll on what our flaw is and what zygote gets take away as well.
Your rolls give us access to the Catewhateveran node, how about a bunch of Seers that can't sleep, but when they do they sleep for a freaking year?
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Rolled 9

>>23646846
>>23646860
...Point taken.

Also the fact that once we get to the CSM table, we can add warp mutations and such. All for double Zygotes?

Alright, let's just move on and get shit done. Next table is Chapter Flaw (d10).

>hostsGF cause
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Rolled 7

>>23646887
rolly
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Rolled 3

>>23646887

Rolling.
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Rolled 8

>>23646887
They see me rollin
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>>23646869
That could work. Will note once we get to which gene-seeds are flawed/missing.

>missionaries ollagsq
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Rolled 3

>>23646887
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>>23646905
>>23646933
Eye-to-Eye (Melee-heavy) with dubs. Clearly Emps has his hand in this...

>>23646931
>>23646973
Could work too; Pride in Colors (doesn't like to hide chapter colors. At all.)
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>>23645140
OP, You would love the Souldrinkers series

http://wh40k.lexicanum.com/wiki/Soul_Drinkers#.UT-f_Bz5o34
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>>23646634
what i mean is that we are, for instance, marines from the thousand sons who believe that the wolves attacked them during the confusion of the heresy as a way of eliminating a despised leagion without any consequences, and the emprah had nothing to do with it. or even pre-heresy marines from a traitor legion whose ship left the warp millennia later
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Rolled 1

>>23646980

I'd go with Eye-to-eye. Pride in colors kind of clashes with "See, but don't be seen", since camoflauge would be 'covering their livery'.
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Rolled 10

>>23646980
So basically, if you hide your colors we find you and cave in your head with a power fist for being a coward.

I like it.
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>>23646980

Pride in Colors would annoy the shit out of the smurfs, esp if our Colors and symbols were similar to theirs.
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>>23647035
YES
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>>23646980
eye to eye works great with the sneaky part; we just jump out, look you in the eyes, then bash your brains out with a power hammer
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Rolled 9

>>23646980
Get those spess elfs where they're the weakest, in the welter of blood and toil.
Melee all the waylee.
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wait, eye to eye doesnt say melee
just that you have to do the killing blow
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>>23647069

...Good point. It's more like 'SURPRISE, MOTHERFUCKERS', than 'RIP AND TEAR!'.
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>>23646980
On another note, here's a recap of the rolls
>Why were they founded?
Strategic Prognostication; meant to do some future event
>When were they founded?
40th Millenium
>Progenitor
Ultramarines (for spitting on them by making the most fucked-over loyalists ever)
>Gene-Stock Purity?
FLAWED AS FUCK
>Codex Demeanors
Uphold The Honour Of The Emperor, with slight aspects of Brothers in Battle, See, But Don't Be Seen, and Swift as the Wind
>Gene-Seed Deficiencies?
3; Two lost Zygotes (TBD) and Oolitic Secretions (odd-colored skin) (I think that was the chosen one for the announced mutation?)
>Flaws (TBD)

On that note.
>>23647035
>>23647043
Possibly, but >>23647006 has a point that >>23647008 expands on...

Though melee would make sense for fucking over the Eldar when they can't even pull out a shuriken pisto-

>>23647069
>>23647106
Oh... fuck. I misread that then. My bad.
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>>23647106
we are stealthy, so it would make sense for us to just jump out and beat the shit out of someone
ranged or melee doesnt matter
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>>23646989
... This is relevant to my future interests. I shall bookmark it for a later time.
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man, the smurfs are gonna be pissed when they learn about us
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Rolled 2

>>23647129
Only one lost zygote. What were the other options?
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Rolled 10

>>23647210
The butthurt will be glorious.
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>>23647138
This is somewhat true, and honestly, Pride in Colors kind of clashes with that philosophy. Don't get me wrong; decking ourselves out in Ultra symbols and colors and making them remember us is all well and good, but we're flawed, not (completely) stupid.
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>>23647213
a 2 is... Oversensitive Occulobe
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>>23647242
so do we disregard the pride in colors?
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>>23647231
Or this, which is Chapter Cult.

>>23647213
Oh, we did? Sorry; my bad. I've been distracted by IRL stuff. Had to deal with a friend and some fundraiser thing involving soda cans or something, so I was fast-typing what I could remember.

And honestly, the combo of odd-colored skin, one lost zygote, and this would be rather hilarious if we did it properly; maybe make them look like some kind of warp daemon (purple skin maybe?) with a sensitivity to light, and a missing zygote for some 'fucked over and not as pure as Ultras, but of Ultra stock' action.

Hate to backtrack, but would this be okay?

Also; putting Flaw to a vote; either Pride in Colors, Chapter Cult, or Eye To Eye. Voting is for 20 posts. Go.
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Rolled 9

>>23647242
I mean pride in colors does not mean we cannot be stealthy. I'm thinking that that we have some kind of retractable banners and stuff. We sneak into position, and wham. Element of surprise.
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>>23647328
chapter cult
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Rolled 2

>>23647328
If we're trying to piss off the Smurfs I think Chapter Cult is probably the way to go.
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Rolled 9

>>23647328
Eye to Eye.
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>>23647328

Eye to eye. We sneak up, then pop out and fuck 'em over.

>>23647337

This, however, could also make sense, and I could see this being a possibility, even if it would be a bitch converting into models.
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Rolled 7

>>23647328
Chapter Cult, did not realize that it was an option. It would fit better, even if Pride would mess with the smurfs more.
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>>23647328

Chapter Cult.
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Rolled 10

>>23647398
Replying to my own post.

Chapter Cult would be cool considering our Eldar fuckery. We could combine a bit of Eldar lore into our rituals and beliefs.
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>>23647328
messing with the eldar with eye to eye or messing with the smurfs with chapter cult, decisions decisions
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>>23647429

Oh, that would be nice. It would be a way to fuck with the Eldar and the smurfs at the same time.
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Rolled 4

>>23647456
My thoughts exactly. I also don't think anything like it has been done before. I can imagine having different names, like the Raptor Aspect or the Devastator Aspect.
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>>23647456
Agreeing on this, so I guess casting my own vote for Chapter Cult.

12/20 posts unless someone posts before me. Score is as follows
Chapter Cult:
Eye-To-Eye: 2
Pride In Colors: 0
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>>23647525
Fuck. Wrong tally, my bad.
Chapter Cult: 6
Eye-To-Eye: 2
Pride In Colors: 0
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>>23647525
can we have eye to eye and chapter cult?
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>>23647552
Not a fan of eye to eye honestly. Limits the way we can use stealth to our advantage.
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>>23647552
Technically we could if we have the 'What form do the Chapters' beliefs take?' table be an auto-designated 'Esoteric Beliefs' but that's not guaranteed. 16th post if this is after >>23647581 btw. If you haven't voted, lock in that shit.
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>>23647581
yeah, i guess
i still like chapter cult though
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>>23647599
That's 7 for Cult, 2 for Eye, and 0 for colors. Since we have 18 posts in, this means that even if we have the next ones be eye-to-eye it wouldn't be enough.

So I guess, by overwhelming majority, Chapter Cult wins.

Next up is the Limited or Missing Zygotes. So are we doing the mutations as >>23647328
or >>23647129 ?
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i dont think anyone is left to vote
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>>23647728

Two lost Zygotes and Oolitic Secrections.
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>>23647728
>And honestly, the combo of odd-colored skin, one lost zygote, and this would be rather hilarious if we did it properly; maybe make them look like some kind of warp daemon (purple skin maybe?) with a sensitivity to light, and a missing zygote for some 'fucked over and not as pure as Ultras, but of Ultra stock' action.
this
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>>23647728

>>23647328
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Rolled 3

>>23647779
This

>captcha: Alien beenhide
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Rolled 4

>>23647728
One lost zygote. Shenanigans.
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With all these feminists strong-arming the vidya industry into changing so much about their games, why don't we do something similar with GeeDub? Get them to make more female models, figures or coughcoughSisterscough.
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>>23647836
how does this pertain to anything
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>>23647779
>>23647788
Trips +1 vs Double Dubs +2. I don't even know how to call this one.

>>23647836
Not the thread for it. Go make one of your own, please.
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>>23647856
but theyre both the same
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>>23647875
Same in terms of which is confirmed, or same in terms of something I'm clearly lost to? I'm not understanding you.
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>>23647856
Ehh only difference is one zygote. Its a toss up, but I would say trips wins.
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>>23647946
Alright. Trips trounces dubs... but I have a compromise.

According to the table for limited/missing zygotes:
>99-100|Roll Twice On This Table

So we can do both. Who's for it?
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Rolled 71

>>23647971
rolling
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>>23647728
lost all the zygotes in the couch cushions somewhere. had to have Biologis make some new ones up
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Rolled 79

>>23647971
Rolly

Cap'tn CAP says:
merry Exuaga
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>>23647971
I kind of want one full fuckup and then one or two partial ones, but I'm not sure. Having them appear subtly inhuman rather than obviously so might be cool.
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>>23647987
>>23648040
Neuroglottis and Mucranoid, it seems!
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>>23647987
>>23648040
>>23648063
I'll take that as a 'yes, have the odd skin, poor high-light vision, and two zygotes' then?

Also; Zygotes are the Neuroglottis and Mucranoid for >>23647987 and >>23648040 respectively. Neither of these effect gene-seed deficiency, so unless anyone has objections, we're good.
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>>23648103
yeah, tasting and sweating aren't real important
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so, moving on to chapter heroes?
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>>23648103
Recap of the rolls.
>Why were they founded?
Strategic Prognostication; meant to do some future event
>When were they founded?
40th Millenium
>Progenitor
Ultramarines (for spitting on them by making the most fucked-over loyalists ever)
>Gene-Stock Purity?
FLAWED AS FUCK
>Codex Demeanors
Uphold The Honour Of The Emperor, with slight aspects of Brothers in Battle, See, But Don't Be Seen, and Swift as the Wind
>Gene-Seed Deficiencies?
3; Oversensitive Occulobe (light sensitive), Oolitic Secretions (odd-colored skin; likely purple because warp daemons), and two Lost Zygotes (Neuroglottis and Mucranoid)
>Flaws
Chapter Cult (Has something to do with Eldar Lore, Possibly related to >>23647429 and >>23647501 )

>>23648125
Kay then. Honestly, they aren't required, but are useful, so I guess we can live with that.

Onwards to: Figure of Legend (d100)

Roll it.
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Rolled 52

>>23648195
"Earn your forgiveness!"
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>>23648195
well, we already have plutarch
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Rolled 95

>>23648195
Monday Night RAWllin.
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Rolled 12

>>23648195

Rollin.
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Rolled 25

>>23648195
Rollin' for the Plutarch
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>>23648195
Also, might have to start a new thread soon, as we're getting closer to cramped in here... I think. I've lost track, to be honest.

And I have no idea how to archive.

>>23648229
This is true (also dubs). As I stated with >>23646495 that we would come back to him.

If so, what do we determine him to be, then?
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>>23648228
Another suggestion: "Through your blood, we are forgiven!"
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Rolled 53

>>23648195
Rolly Polly
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>>23648318
chapter master most likely
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>>23648318
I'm leaning towards Master of Sanctity (chaplain head) or Chief Librarian. Perhaps we could have either as chapter master.
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>>23647501
So... Aspect Marines, probably trying to emulate varuis traits of the Emperor or legendary Imperial Cult figures?
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>>23648318
Chief Librarians are always cool. He had the vision of the chapter's eventual forgiveness which never left his mind.

Who ever our figure of legend is, he should be decked out with mutations.
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>>23646477
this is what a Plutarch would be, http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Plutocracy
the dude does NOT approve
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Rolled 32

>>23648318
Rolls have said Chapter Master once >>23648324
Librarian twice
>>23648228
>>23648324
Some dude who was cool once
>>23648249
and an ultrasmurf here
>>23648301

Voting against ultrasmurf. Chapter-master and Librarian both make the most sense.
Random Marine Guy could be hilarious, but it would involve fluff stating how it is a Tac Marine managed to hold his entire squad against not turning to chaos when everyone else in the company was. With philosophy.
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>>23648371
so we're rich too?
sweeeeeeeet
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Rolled 35

>>23648358
Yeah, each Aspect would have a legendary figure behind it, and the warriors of the Aspect would seek to take on their traits.

Apparently Cap'tn CAP is getting ready to blow:
containing mssload
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>>23648371
Knights Templar approve.
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>>23648358
Seems legit.

>>23648228
Chief Librarian (Dubs)
>>23648249
Battle Brother
>>23648301
Seconded
>>23648316
Chapter Master
>>23648324
Chief Librarian
>>23648398
Chapter Master
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>>23648398
WAIT
what if plutarch had a vision of The emperor telling him to leave the ultramarines?
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>>23648423
sorry IRL things happened, what are we rolling for?
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Rolled 12

>>23648398
An amazing display of loyalty to the Emp would do it, some act that restored the squads faith. Perhaps self sacrifice?
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Rolled 41

>>23648423
Battle Brother would be hilarious. If we're making fun of the Smurfs, no better way to do it than with fluff. Maybe said Battle Brother took out a Chaos Titan with nothing but a Power Fist and a Bolt Pistol.
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>>23648449
Dubs, and we could still combine in >>23648370 for added awesomeness.

>>23648414
This, I like.
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Rolled 10

>>23648449
I like where this is going.

holy shit, CAPTCHA
doctrine opioma
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>>23648464
even though I don't know whats going on I like this, please continue
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>>23648398
The Tac Marine held the corruption of Chaos out of his mind by mentally conditioning himself, and his example has been taken by the rest of the chapter as the most important virtue beyond loyalty to the Emprah. Too unique-butterfly-slash-Sue-ish?
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>>23648488
This is the Ultrasmurfs we're talking about them being a successor chapter of.

Also, for the record, there is no rule saying that we can't have multiple figures of legend. Just saying. They're a fairly fucked-over chapter, so a lot of shit could happen to them.

We could have Plutarch with his visions of future greatness, and have the tac marine who held the chapter together.

And said tac marine possibly being chapter master for his deed?
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>a super fast stealthy bro-tier emprah worshippers lead by a rich intelligent philosopher who is being commanded directly by the emperor
HOLY FUCK
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>>23648523
Elaborating on that last line; having a bit of sue-ish shit is kind of required, don't you think?
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>>23648551
First. Fucking hell I can't type.
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>>23648551
Yeah, I mean us being outcasts counters it slightly
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Rolled 30

>>23648551
I mean honestly most chapters have crazy shit happen to them. We just happen to have a lot of bad crazy shit with the good.
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I think a tragic hero will fit with this chapter. When these guys got horribly corrupted, this Hero of the Chapter, while his brothers went insane and monstrous around him, helped those who could escape while holding the line. He followed, but was cursed twofold than his brothers for his sacrifice, warped and horribly injured, but alive. When asked how he has escaped, he spoke of the Emperor himself coming to his aid. The Emperor told him that The Imperium would grant them forgiveness if they continued to fight the good fight in His name. But they must keep the faith and stay true, or they will be forever lost.

He led the Chapter for many years with this vision in mind, with new Librarians being given seniority when seeing a vision of the Emperor (although this mutates them more as well [1d6 on the mutation table?]). But, he was struck down by Ultramarines, before they could even hear his words of wisdom.

Many more have begun to lose their sanity after his death.
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>>23648523
Elaborating on that, we could have the Tac Marine be an Enemy of Chaos for what his Deeds of Legend is (in addition to keeping us the fuck together. Hell, maybe a Daemon Prince actually caused it and he slew him after conditioning himself), and Plutarch's being Imperial Glory or something. I actually don't know what Plutarch's could be.

>>23648569
>>23648600
Exactly.

All in favor of these two great Chapter Legends?
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>>23648614
THIS
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>>23648614
I did not see this...

And it is glorious.
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>>23648614
>>23648637
2nd
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>>23648618
I!
>>23648530
welcome to the party
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I love the idea of us basically not caring about the imperium because we any orders they give are overridden by the emperor himself
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Rolled 34

>>23648614
You win
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>>23648618
>>23648614
I like this! I love the idea of some stalwart Emperor-lover being cast down for being so horribly mutated. Pure in mind if not in body, you know?
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>>23648614

Voting for this. Whether it's the Chief Librarian, Chapter Master, or Battle brother, doesn't matter. Someone has to fill this role.
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Rolled 46

>>236486
also this, we will be like the Alpha Legion, only actually working for the Emp.
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Rolled 34

>>23648694
oops
>>23648660
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>>23648681
Thinking of it, he could be a little like a reverse-Lorgar, if that makes sense.
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>>23648684
Okay, here's my idea. We do THIS GLORIOUS TAIL! >>23648614 with him being our Figure of Legend.

Plutarch is now our Chief Librarian, because he too has received a vision from Emps. So we only have to slightly modify his background/deeds.

Also this >>23648660

Agreed?
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>>23648684
we could roll it all into one and have him be Plutarch
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>>23648712
Hay also means we have access to forbidden tech, but it also means we might have to fight the imperium too
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>>23648736
Hay? The fuck?
Meant to say that
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>>23648726
*tale. I officially suck at typing.

>>23648736
Agreed on the tech, but we don't necessarily have to fight the Imperium... unless majority says yes? IDK.
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"Please brother, stay with me. Keep your mind on the Emperor! Please! Brother, listen to me! BROTHER, NO!"
"I am sorry, Brother Quinctilius. He is with the Emperor now."
"No he is not, brother. Until we earn our redemption, all of us are damn. Come, more of these scum are waiting."
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>>23648734
I like the idea of having two extremely important figures in the chapter's background, myself. It might also mean we could have a sweet two-tone color scheme.
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>>23648726

Agreed. I gotta go now, you guys better not fuck this up!
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>>23648758
Let's not fight the Imperium if we can avoid it. They are the Emperor's servants after all. If we are forced to, we will neutralize them and escape.
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>>23648764
ok then, shall we open the debate for his name now or later?
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>>23648758
Well I'm sure the imperium wouldn't take very kindly to marines commuting heresy all the time
Plus, we get to fight the ultramarines
Maximum hue
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>>23648758

Any fights with the imperium would probably be purely self-defense, and they'd do their best to gtfo as fast as superhumanly possible to minimize damage on both sides. They're fighting FOR the Imperium, even if the Imperium doesn't realize it.
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>>23648801
>>Boiler ridhoris
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>>23648816
I like this. The Imperium is suspicious of them and their actions but they are extremely Loyalist and concerned with civilian losses.
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>>23648799
>>23648816
Dubs. Agreed.

>>23648803
...Though we might occasionally make an exception with the Ultras.

>>23648764
Huh. Never thought of the color scheme thing...

Also, two figures would be nice.

>>23648801
I... would have no idea what to name him, honestly...
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Rolled 60

>>23648758
yeah, they are not out looking for a fight with the Imperium, but they will fight if they have to. They stay sorta out of the way unless really needed.
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I think our Grand Librarian should be called Varus.

Teutoburg Forest anyone?
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>>23648758
I say we use nonlethal/kill as few as possible and just use our fast trait to "advance" away from the fight, we would probably see them as misguided not evil
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>>23648839
wait
Brother "Boiler" Ridhoris
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>>23648801
We should name him after an historical figure, like Plutarch
>Captcha:infinita hephaestion
TO WIKIPEDIA
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>>23648853
Varus, or Tacitus seems good to me.
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>>23648857
... All in favor of naming this brave, beautiful fucker this?

>>23648854
Seems like a proper strategy.

So, are we doing two figures; our badass and Plutarch the Chief Librarian, or no?
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>>23648869
He got betrayed by a apprentice of his, leading to this Chapter's downfall.
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Rolled 11

>>23648845
>>23646602
>>23648839
Boiler Aeosed
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>>23648869
Or this. I'll just let you guys fight it out.

I would suggest this >>23648839 though being incorporated somehow.
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>>23648876
change my mind... voting for Tacitus
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>>23648865
Well, apparently hephaestion was Alexander the great's general, friend, and possible buttbuddy
PERFECT
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Rolled 54

>>23648876
yes for the two figures, yes for the strat, yes for the name
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>>23648865
>>23648845
guess we will use captcha to decide
>sir salva
well I like the sir part captcha, idk about salva though
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>>23648916
a bit off with the usual ultras name theme
but I like it, maybe as a minor named char?
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>>23648916
Maybe it's referring to the fact that he was the salvation of his chapter?
THE EMPEROR IS COMMUNICATING TO US THROUGH CAPTCHA
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>>23648897
well fuck, you win my vote sir
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>>23648897
Hephaestion Varus?
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Hang on. My text is being marked as spam.
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>>23648916
head chaplain for chapter, Ser SaLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLva
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>>23648897
Perhaps we could have Hephaestion as our heroic Tac Marine's first apostle?
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>>23648953
If we name this guy this, can we call the Flagship "The Teutoburg"?
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>>23648964
They don't allow slitherin into the adeptus astartes
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>>23648916
you haven't let me down Wikipedia
>Salva (Latin for "Save ")
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>>23648960
Okay. Hopefully this works.

We can use Sir Salva, Varus, Tacticus, Hephaestion, Boiler Aeosed, or Boiler ridhoris. We need to decide and move on.

Also figure out what Plutarch is. I'm for Chief Librarian.
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>>23649006
That's it, we have been chosen by the emperor to save the imperium
Fuck
Yes
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>>23649010
Could we make the Legendary Librarian Plutrach Varus, so we can have the deep philosophy and the fact he lost Emperor-knows how many marines to a traitor?
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does anyone know how to archive, this entire thread is gold
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>>23649048
I don't, but once we hit the limit, I'm making another one.

We haven't even done the Chaos parts yet, guys.
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Rolled 95

>>23649010
>>23649006
Boiler Salva, savior of the imperium
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>>23649003
not like that, think more along the lines of pic related
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>>23649048
suptg has a feature for it, I believe. I haven't tried it, however.
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>>23649070
ON IT BROTHA!!!
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>>23649010
Perhaps we could use the names that we don't use for the hero as names for the Company captains?
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WE ARE THE ELECTIS IMPERITORIS
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>>23649090
oh, someone beat me to it
captcha: alitsam Richard (in neat old english looking writing, no less)
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>>23649097
Seems legit.

>>23649064
This. A million times this.

>>23649045
Also this, unless anyone has objections.

We also need to flesh out Plutarch's deeds a bit, since I now have little clue on what we have decided on. Can someone get on this?

Also, what do we consider both Plutarch and our other Hero?
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>>23649115
Fuck, make that ELECTES
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>>23649090
you are a true elegan/tg/entleman
>>23649097
agreed, no need to let any of them go to waste
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>>23649141
Plutarch is the hero marine's first lieutenant and took over in command of the chapter when the hero got blammed by the Ultrasmurfs.
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>>23649141
Plutarch's mind was almost consumed by chaos, but the emperor saved his mind and gave him cool mind powers
He also told him that his men must split from the ultramarines and save the imperium from its enemies, and itself
Also, he gave them full permission to use whatever tech they want, be it Xenos, heretical, etc
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Wait wait wait.
I thought that the Hero Marine was the successor and Plutrach was the one with the vision.
Is that not what we are doing?
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>>23649184
>heretical
unless we play the angle that they may just be loonies, too far mate
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>>23649193
no, we're still doing that
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>>23649193
Hero marine is this >>23648614

Plutarch is... yeah, the one with the vision, but a different one than the Hero marine. It was emps forgiving them, not emps talking to them.
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>>23649202
by heretical i just meant tech that normal space marines would be forbidden to use
being the electes imperitoris has some nice perks
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>>23649174
this, the hero came back to the ultrasmurfs after saving the chapter from going full chaos but got killed anyway, plutarch is the current leader
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>>23649184
Let's stick with xenotech and play the elf angle up a bit. Like, say, Librarians with wraithcannons.
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>>23649235
way you said it made it sound like they would be looting daemon weapons and the like
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>>23649264
This as well.

So, can we get a full recape and name our Hero, because I have little to no clue on what's decided/accepted...

And we still aren't done on the table guys. Just saying.
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>>23649294
sorry, we are getting to caught um in fixing up the fall lore
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>>23649294
by now, i dont really care about the name
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It's all about the gene seed
>primarch is a part of the emperor making him a part of the imperium
>space marines carry down the legacy and strengthen with numbers
>space marines fairly resistant to chaos therefore
>IG very susceptible
>you must be part of the imperium to serve it
>you may not be heretics but you are not welcome to holy terra if you have been touched by chaos
>as a member of the inquisition I would suggest you prove your worth by killing traitor marines since you are used to it
][ Inquisitor out ][
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>>23649314
*up
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>>23648614
>>23649174
>>23649202
Thoughts on finalizing these for the hero's backstory, fa/tg/uys?
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Rolled 23

>>23649324
wat?
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>>23649348
Last one was supposed to be >>23649193
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>>23649324
the reason we split from the ultramarines (and in a way the imperium) is our differing views of the emperor
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>>23649348
>>23649362
I'm contradicting myself now. Disregard the third, I guess.
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>>23649348
the hero and plutarch both lead the chapter, and all of them were consumed by chaos. they were all saved by the emperor except for the hero, who was lost in the chaos. plutarch leads the chapter in his absence, hoping the hero will return
man, we really need a name
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>>23649434
oh yeah, and after the emperor saved them, they split from the ultramarines
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>>23649434
>We can use Sir Salva, Varus, Tacticus, Hephaestion, Boiler Aeosed, or Boiler ridhoris. We need to decide and move on.
lets pick a name for hero from this list
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Plutarch Varus was a well respected Ultramarine Librarian. After gaining many deeds to his name, removed from official Imperium record in the present millennium, he was instated to teach the Librarians of a newly formed successor. So proud was he, that he took a young pysker named Arminius, who he had been tutoring after saving him from a rebelling world.
But, Arminius had been taught in the ways of the warp already and hated the Imperium for declaring Exterminatus on his home. So, when the ship "The Teutoburg" entered the Warp, he called upon his powers to smite the Space Marines.
What answered were thousands of demons spewing from his body. It was only through Plutrach's great heroism that any Battle Brothers escaped at all. But in the depths of that accursed vessel, as his body twisted and his mind creaked under the strain, a shining light came through the corridors.
It was the Emperor Himself, cleaving through the Daemons with his blade of a hundred miles or more, His very gaze sending the foul beasts fleeing in terror. It was all Plutarch could do to not look away as The God of Mankind smiled down upon him and spoke the words remember by every marine of that lost chapter:
"Fear not, son of brave heart and loyal soul. All those that do my work and stay true to my name shall reap their rewards eternal. Go, for through blood, thou shalt earn thy forgiveness."

That moment was burned into the mind of Plutarch Varus, the Cursed, until the very moment the bolter rounds cut him down.
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>>23649434
Yeah. We should finalize a name unless we want to leave the hero's name as intentionally unwritten; perhaps this would be a mark of him being the anonymous epitome of what this chapter's generic Battle Brothers are to be.
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>>23649434
electes imperitoris was suggested earlier
captcha: Mstplann dwelling
next up I guess?
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>>23649479
Salva Boiler, best of both worlds.
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>>23649487
electes imperitoris just means chosen ones of the emperor in latin
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>>23649348
Okay... Hero is still >>23648614 this does not change. Period. No fucking with it.

Plutarch was the Hero's 2nd in command, and is now the Chapter Master in the stead of our Hero after his death at the hands of the Ultramarines.

Plutarch is a scholar who is always staring off into the distance, trying to plan 12 moves ahead of himself in three different crusades / battles / boarding actions, he rarely goes into action but is always trying to pierce the veil of the future. He managed to not fall despite everything else because he's deeply insightful into the nature of the Space Marine soul, and his philosophies managed to keep his battle-brothers safe as well.

His philosophies are, in fact, Plutocracratic in nature. He has also received a vision of the Emperor forgiving them, but only if they still venerate him.

Keep in mind that this is all from previous posts.
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>>23649480
I like this, but I would prefer the saviour of the ship not being the Emperor himself, but Plutarch being the embodiment of his will. "Through blood, we shall earn our forgiveness!" would be an excellent battle cry, as well.
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>>23649479
how about we combine them all into one super long name, then shorten it
>sir salva varus tacitus hephaestion boiler aeosed ridhoris
>S.S.V.T.H.B.A.R.
svathbarr?
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>>23649545
the emperor himself didnt come and do anything, he just spoke to them and kept chaos from consuming their minds
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>>23649545
>Saved by the Emperor himself
>Being a conduit for his will
Who says it was one or the other?
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>>23649514
I don't care. It is badass, and unless someone else comes up with a better one, this is it.

>>23649502
I'm for this.

>>23649545
Agreed on the battle cry, and on Emps not saving the, but the Hero.
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>>23649545
By Plutarch "embodying his will" I meant the Emperor possessing the Marine or inspiring some kind of extreme fervour onto him. I think it would be better if our Marine did the daemon-ass-kicking rather than Emps.
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>>23649578
This.

And seriously guys; let's not have a repeat of Roboute. We can't make all of this badass be in a single person, can we?

Seriously. I'm calling for 2 here. We can have >>23649520 and >>23649480 both, but we need to make sure we don't make the hero too big, y'know?
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>>23649578
Was the Emperor there himself, or was it The Hero simply summoning his power?
I think we already have a divide in our Chapter, I think.
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>>23649575
Emperor's Chosen as the chapter name? I say this because the Latin for titles is usually saved for Inquisition departments iirc.
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>>23649598
I like the idea of Plutarch being a smart motherfucker and mastermind but now he's dead, the second in command is trying to hold the Chapter together.
If it's working or not remains to be seen.
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>>23649502
ill 3rd this, unless anyone objects this looks like it will be hero's name
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>>23649575
Ok kids here it is. Salva Boiler was the chapter master and he sacrificed his life to save the entire chapter, even though some were heavily mutated. Afterwards, when he is killed, Plutarch is sent the vision from the Emp saying that Salva's sacrifice convinced him that the chapter was worthy of his service, so long as they stayed in his service. Work for everyone?
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>>23649646
approve this
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>>23649646
all my yes, just take it
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>>23649646
YES
you have my vote, fellow electes imperitoris
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>>23649598
Yes. Perhaps we could have the two men being touched by the Emperor as a recurring theme of duality?

Also, >>23649607 is worth considering.
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>>23649615
Works.

>>23649646
This is basically a cut-down version of what happened here >>23648614 and >>23649480
except the later isn't plutarch, its Salva Boiler.

Agreed?

Now, can we all agree here so that we may continue in creating this glorious chapter? I understand that everyone is caught up in creating the awesomeness here, but I only have so long that I can work on this, okay?
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>>23649672
Works for me.
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>>23649672
ok, ok, continue with the tables good sir
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>>23649615
Not really a fan, sounds too close to the Emp's Children.
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>>23649672
Sounds good. Also, trips on >>23649666
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>>23649672
Right, so Salva died on the ship, defending Plutarch as he kept the portal open for the Marines to escape. Plutarch saw him become possessed by the Emporer and tell him of his chapter's forgiveness. So he returns, hella mutated, but alive.
But, one day, he is shot by the smurf and burned to ashes. Now the current Chapter Master is trying to holding onto the cracks.
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>>23649705
perhaps simply "The Chosen"
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>>23649705
lets work on chapter name later, I have a feeling we are about to reach post limit
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>>23649656
Just a question; you managed to archive this thread, right?

>>23649688
>>23649697
>>23649711 (Trips confirm. Anyone else read Blood Gorgons? I'm thinking similar to that.)
Good. Alright then. For this reason, we don't need the Chapter Legend's deeds; we just wrote them.

>>23649716
>>23649732
Chapter name later.

Next table is homeworld (d100). Rollit.
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Rolled 39

>>23649745
rollin'
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Rolled 64

>>23649745
Rollin.
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>>23649716
I'm thinking something with the word sovereign in it, to denote their separation from the Imperium
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>>23649745
oops sorry, Rolly for homeworld
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Rolled 90

>>23649745
they see me rolling
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>>23649756
Sovereign Guard
Sovereign's Chosen
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>>23649745
fleet based,
cast out from the light of imperial civilization, they go where they are most needed
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Rolled 81

>>23649775
all my fails
Rolling
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>>23649749
Feral
>>23649750
Medieval
>>23649781
Uninhabited
>>23649785
Possibly. Seriously though; did you archive this, because I have no idea how to.
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>>23649798
It's on the first page of the sup/tg/ archive right now.
http://suptg.thisisnotatrueending.com/archive.html
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>>23649798
Yeah we did. It has a shitty name, description and tags though.

I'd say Fleet Based is the way to go if we want to stay consistent.
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>>23649798
someone else beat me to it, but there's an "add thread" button on sup/tg/ on the left, just add thread # (1st post) and put in some description
you can re-add the thread to update or change listing
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>>23649830
>>23649839
Perhaps we could name it the Damned Chapter as our "good" title?
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>>23649839
ya, that is old at this point, lets update it and move to a new thread before all our work is lost
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>>23649830
>http://suptg.thisisnotatrueending.com/archive.html
Right. Good. I shall keep this link bookmarked in case I have to leave early. I pray to the Big E I don't. If I do, nobody start a thread and try to continue my work, because I'll just be back on tomorrow to finish what I started. The Stranded Guardsman is not giving up on this pure gold.

>>23649830
Normally I'd agree, but I do have an idea. You guys can disregard it and we can say Fleet Based if you want.

What if we managed to make it to a part of the galaxy later cut off from the rest of the Imperium via Warp Storms, with occasional breaks allowing us to pass through and into the imperium at large. We have a sort of 'haven' to fall back to, and are still able to continue Big E's work.

Just an idea.

>>23649884
yeah, agreed. I'll link in here.
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Okay. Thinking about using these for our archive:
Name: "Damned Marines I"
Description: /tg/ makes a corrupted loyalist offshoot of the Ultrasmurfs with the SM and CSM tables.
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>>23649884
Well, I'm out for tonight. Make sure to link the old thread in the new one.

It has been my pleasure to write the fluff for this Chapter. If I can catch the next one, I will happily write some more.

Until next time, Brothers in Redemption!
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>>23649917
Also put this as thread number 1 in that. I'm making a new one now. After you make it, post here. NOBODY post after this post. Post in the next thread, okay?
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>>23649906
i like uninhabited
like its our very own fortress of solitude where our leaders coordinate our movements
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>>23649939
>>23649973 GET IN HERE!



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