Hello everybody, I am trying my hand at creating a choose your own Adventure. In this story, you will play the part of a saiyan warrior, now of age to begin conquering worlds in the name of King Vegeta, and of course, Lord Frieza. You will go in to battle, grow stronger, and make decisions that will shape your life. Will you spend the whole time as a servant to your King and the dark ruler he serves? Will you rise against them and attempt to claim their mantels for yourself? Will you discard your saiyan legacy and live in peace? Will you even live long enough to make those choices? That is all up to you.Decisions will be made based on votes. At every vote, you will be given multiple options, and will vote by posting a response with that letter. The first option to get three votes will be the one that the story will continue with. Have fun!
>>28006850feed me words!
Today is a day you have long waited for. Today is the day you will finally join the ranks of the great Saiyan conquerors. You have trained your whole life for this moment, nothing else anywhere near so important to you. You stand before a massive building, surrounded by a crowd of your fellow Saiyan warriors. Like you, they will begin their careers on this day. Looking up to the balcony of the building, you see a tall and imposing figure. Recognition flares through your mind, and you drop to your knees, as does every other Saiyan in the crowd. Keeping your head bowed low, there is silence until your king speaks.
>>28006907Lurking, maybe participating. BTW, might do to put "quest" in the title somewhere for the benefit of those filtering these. Just keep that in mind if there are future installments.
>>28006907"Today, you stand ready to join the Saiyan armies, the fiercest fighting force the universe has ever known!" King Vegeta begins. "There will be no more training, no more pretending, from now on, it is only kill or be killed! You are all a part of a proud legacy, the legacy of warriors that has struck fear into the hearts of beings on countless worlds for millennia! As such, you are expected to uphold that legacy. Should you fail to do so, you will die on an alien world, unremembered and unmourned. But should you succeed in your duties, you will have the respect of your people, and truly earn the right to call yourselves Saiyans." With that, the king turns and goes into the large building. You and the rest of the crowd stand, and a ferocious cheering breaks out.A. Join in the excited cheers of your comradesB. Stay silent and wait for what's next
>>28006935Thanks for the tip, I will do so in future installments
>>28006993B. Stay silent and wait for what's next
>>28006993A. Join in the excited cheers of your comrades
>>28006993A. Join in cheer. We're celebrating out people's heritage as a proud warrior race. Let's be vocal about it. Besides, that "aloof loner sitting silently in the corner" antisocial shit is lame.
>>28007055>>28007078You join in the cheering. You can't help it, this is the proudest day of your life! You are finally one of the true saiyan warriors, and soon, you will have the chance to prove yourself. The passion and joy of your comrades is contagious, and you feel yourself overcome with the same emotions. So caught up in your stupor, you are shocked back to reality by a loud voice."Alright you runts, listen up!"Looking up to the balcony, you spy a hulking figure. He has rather short hair at the top of his head and a small mustache that honestly makes him look a bit goofy. Still, you know who this man is, and you are not stupid enough to voice such an opinion."For those idiots who have been living under a rock, I am Nappa, commander of the Saiyan armies! You're all here because you are the newest warriors to join our ranks. Today you will meet your new teams. You have all been assigned based on power level, and the coordinates of your leader's location will be transmitted to your scouters momentarily. Report to them, do what they say, and try not to get yourselves killed. Now, get going!" Your scouter beeps, and the coordinates you are to go to appear on its tiny screen.A.Report directly to your team's locationB. Take a moment to look at your home one last time before departingC. Try and speak to Nappa
>>28006850I chose C: "Troll all over this motherfucker!"
>>28007193>A.Report directly to your team's locationLet us not dwell on our past
>>28007193A, possibly B. C is right out. We are not wasting the general's time, he'd breathe lasers on us for it.
>>28007216Only logical answer
>>28007193>A.Report directly to your team's location
>>28007216>>28007240Well, we do get stronger when we recover from near-death experiences. If we get him to kick our asses, but just not quite hard enough to kill us...No, wait, that's retarded. Let's just report to our post.
>>28007217>>28007218No more waiting, you've done enough of that. You leap into the air and take flight, as do the majority of the others in the crowd. Flying as fast as you can, you soar across the city, touching down at a small field just outside the capital. Like much of the planet outside of the cities, this area is a wasteland, no plants or animals to be seen. What you do see however, is a young woman in battle armor nearby. She is a bit shorter than you, and has short black hair. She looks at you for a moment with intense green eyes.A. Walk over and introduce yourselfB. Use your scouter to scan her power levelC. Try and hit on her. This would probably be unwise.
Rolled 14>>28007331>C. Try and hit on her. This would probably be unwise.>rollin' for seduction
Rolled 31>>28007331>B. Use your scouter to scan her power levelif its high Try and hit on her
>>28007331A again. Scanning her PL with no introduction seems rude; she was sorted into the same unit as us, that means she's roughly as capable as we are. No need to vet her. Hitting on her seems doomed to failure as we're a green rookie with no accomplishments to our name.
>>28007397Rational thought...you might actually survive a while.>>28007385>>28007397>>28007382So far we are deadlocked
>>28007331>. Try and hit on her.?but isn't that just hitting each other for Saiyans?
Rolled 55>>28007394>gives us choices>complains when we makes oneOP confirmed nigger
>>28007424.....well...most of them are probably in to that sort of thing
Rolled 12>>28007416Well, I'm not about to samefag and stack the vote. That would be a dick move. Tell you what, I'm rolling for it.
>>28007437Not complaining, just saiying it's interesting. Besides, we are still deadlocked, although I could probably count that B vote as C since he wanted to hit on her as well
>>28007458Good enough system. The roll for A is 12
Rolled 21>>28007472rollin' for C
Okay, since so few people are currently involved, I am changing the system a bit. First option to get two votes wins
>>28007515For now, C wins
>>28007515You can't deny that the woman is very attractive, and the intensity of her eyes gives you the feeling she has quite the warrior spirit. Such qualities are much sought after in a Saiyan mate, and so you decide to make a move on her. But, how should you go about it?A. All confidence, strut up like you own the place and watch her fall at your feetB.Be respectful, compliment her in some wayC. This was a bad idea, just forget it
Rolled 26>>28007587>B.Be respectful, compliment her in some way"nice shoes, want to fuck?"
>>28007629Okay, that made me laugh
>>28007587>A. All confidence, strut up like you own the place and watch her fall at your feet>B.Be respectful, compliment her in some way>C. This was a bad idea, just forget itlol>dem pickuplinesOP confirmed virgin
OP, I feel obligated to note that in a normal quest I'd be a vote of reason, but Sayians are mostly assholes. The dick move here is actually in character.
>>28007642>Protip: None of these will fucking work
>>28007685My point exactly...
>>28007663Same here, if only because I can't actually imagine a respectful saiyan icebreaker.A
>>28007708>>280076291 vote A, 1 vote B, we need a tie-breaker
>>28007721Consider my vote changed to be then, which makes it unanimous with >>28007739
>>28007629>>28007739>>28007753"Nice shoes, want to fuck?"Your answer is a knee to the groin, and you double over in pain. You feel the woman's boot on the back of your head, pushing it into the dirt."Let me make one thing perfectly clear" she says. "I don't care if I'm supposed to be leading you and helping you stay alive. If you cross me, you are dead."She grinds her boot on the back of your head."And one surefire way to cross me is to try hitting on me. I am your leader, and you will show me respect, or I will show you an early grave. Are we clear?"A. "Yes"B. "You think you scare me?"C. Attempt to attack her
Rolled 11>>28007820A. "Yes ma'am"
>>28007820...well that escalated quickly.
>>28007820>A. "Yes">But I would also like an answer to my question
>>28007862Well, you're a brand new member of the army, she is a squad leader, and you disrespect her by hitting on her the second you meet her. Saiyans don't take insults lightly.
>>28007862A. "You know, from this angle your shoes are rather drab. Maybe we should keep our relationship professional."
>>28007851>>28007871>>28007882Vote on the words you say, no voting for your ownA."Yes ma'am"B. "Yes, but I would also like an answer to my question"C."You know, from this angle your shoes are rather drab. Maybe we should keep our relationship professional."
>>28007879>she is a squad leader>leader>threatening to kill us for hitting on herI know which one in this unit I deem "expendable" It is OP
>>28007918King Vegeta executed a man for taking too long to stand after kneelingVegeta killed Nappa for disobeying an order and getting woundedI think you underestimate how little many saiyans care if other saiyans die
>>28007851>>28007871>>28007882You tell her yes, you understand."Good." She removes her boot from your head and you stand. Looking around, you see that the rest of your team has arrived. One of them is a large man who's appearance reminds you quite a bit of Nappa, except his hair is longer and he has no mustache. Another is a rotund man with no hair on his head or his face. And the last is another female, who looks near identical to the squad leader. The only physical difference is her height, her being a few inches shorter than the leader.A. Scan their power levelsB. Introduce yourselfC. Wait for your leader to give instructions
>>28008041C. Wait. Scanning is useless, already know we are around the same level. And talking before the commander is senseless.
>>28008041Okay, hold up for a second. Not trying to be overly critical, but I believe it's generally customary to make the narrative posts a bit...more substantial. I'm also not quite sure every possible action we take needs to be determined by popular consensus. I this many choices is slowing the pace down. Maybe you could just tell us whether we introduce ourselves to the rest of our unit, then save the multiple choice questions for a more pivotal decision?
>>28008130Sounds good. Sorry, my first CYOA
>>28008041This is the world's fucking shittiest questthread post. Seriously, this is 'she says okay' bad.
>>28008169No worries, you learn with experience; not that I'm exactly an old hand myself.
>>28008041BTell them we're so fucking awesome
>>28008091After a few seconds, your leader speaks up."Alright, listen up. I am Salta, your leader. I will be in charge of every mission we take part in. You will do exactly as I instruct you. First thing's first, everybody introduce yourselves. We're all going to be shedding blood together after all."The woman introduces herself as Spina, the Large man, Carros, the fat man, Portat. You introduce yourself as well, and your commander speaks once again."Alright, now that the pleasantries are out of the way, let's get moving. You have each been provided with a pod ship. These, of course, will transport you to wherever our missions take us. They are simple to use, simply enter the coordinates of our destination, and sit back for the ride."With that, she climbs inside her own pod. The others follow, Portat looking somewhat disinterested as he climbs in his pod, Spina and Carros each wearing a look of determination and excitement as they climb into theirs. You can't help but feel excited as you climb into your own pod. Coordinates are transmitted to your scouter, and you enter them in your pod's computer. Your ships all shoot into the air and begin the journey towards your first mission. Your ships are equipped with radios you can use to communicate with one another during the trip.A. Contact SaltaB. Contact PortatC .Contact SpinaD. Contact CarrosE. Sit back and rest up for the mission ahead
>>28008371>E. Sit back and rest up for the mission ahead
>>28008371ACall them and talk at length about our last meal. Go all out, describe *everything*. They'll love it.
>>28008371E.We'll learn more from fighting with these guys than talking anyway.Also, what's our name?
>>28008407Wait, so are we the comic relief of the group?
>>28008371D, make fun of his name
>>28008408Seconded. Sit back and psyche up for battle.
>>28008430I'm dead serious.
>>28008408That's really up to you guys to decide, you don't have a set name.
>>28008371Salta>SaltPortat>PotatoSpina>SpinachCarros>CarrotWe are a fucking vegetarian buffet
>>28008456Our name is Frank.
>>28008487Let's be Tomatos
>>28008487All Saiyans are named after vegetables. Our king's NAME is Vegetable.
>>28008514Or Tom for short
>>28008528>>28008514No guyswe're frankwe're the meaty length in their rabbit food
>>28008543Those were both me. I'm not taking Sayian Quest seriously enough to attempt to samefag and drum up support for my particular idea.
>>28008405>>28008408>>28008450You decide to sit back and rest up for the coming battle. Closing your eyes, you fall into a restful sleep. Several hours later, a beeping rouses you from your slumber. A monotone voice says "Approaching planet 1143-Scraba"Your ship comes crashing down to the ground, and opens up. Stepping outside, you take in your surroundings. You seem to have landed in a wide open plain, grass spreads further than you can see. There seems to be no sign of any civilization nearby. Pressing a button on your scouter, the device begins seeking out the highest power levels on the planet. The scouter detects a dozen beings with power levels of roughly 300, and one about 500, slightly higher than your own. Still, if that's the best this planet can provide, this should go quickly.You see that the rest of your team have emerged from their own pods. Salta checks the power readings with her own scouter before addressing you."Alright, this is a rather primitive world, no technology of note, the people here still have not even harnessed electricity. That makes this planet valuable. It has a vast wealth of untapped resources, and the people here could potentially be useful laborers. As so often happens in societies like this, I think it is safe to assume that the beings with the highest power levels are in charge. The highest power level is roughly one hundred miles East. Four of the beings with power levels of three hundred are in the same location, the rest are scattered. We'll hit the group first, then hunt down the others if need be. Oh, and not that we should need it, but the full moon on this world is about three weeks away. Let's get moving."She takes off, and you follow along with the rest of your team. After flying for a short period of time, you come across a city, or, what passes for one on this planet. None of the buildings are over two stories tall, and there aren't that many of them. Your scouter picks up several lifeforms, but they
>>28008695average at power levels of about twenty-five, no threat to you. The power levels you detected earlier are gathered in a building in the center of the city. Your team lands just in front of it, and Salta blasts the door in. As you step through the ruined entrance, a small group rushes you. Getting a clear look at them, you see they are humanoid, covered in hair, and each have four arms. In each hand, the creatures hold swords, and with some amusement you realize they believe they can harm you with them. Their power levels are puny, no threat.A. Dispatch them all yourselfB. Let your teammates handle it
>>28008764>B. Let your teammates handle itLet's see what our teammates are all about.
>>28008764A. Dispatch them all. To do otherwise is to show weakness.
>>28008764A. Everybody's getting ki blasts! Don't want our crew to think we're slackers. Fight smart, though. Maybe blast the roof the tumble it on the approachers, back out of the way and then fire into the wreckage. Nobody said we wanted to preserve their architecture.
>>28008803And by "roof" I mean "ceiling", of course.
>>28008777Actually. nvm. Changing vote to A.
>>28008764>A. Dispatch them all yourself
Rolled 1>>28008764>A. Dispatch them all yourselfIn the most METAL way possible wear ones head as a hat.
>>28008798>>28008803Stepping forward, you dispatch the two closest attackers with a pair of ki blasts. Their companions halt, eyes wide with fear. Giving them no time to retreat or form a new plan of attack, your slaughter them all with a flurry of energy blasts. Salta casually steps over their smoking corpses and strides towards the other side of the room, where one of the creatures is sitting in a crude throne, with four others standing around him. These are the ones your scouter detected, and they do not show the same fear."You have one chance. Surrender and turn control of your planet over to us, or be killed like your friends here."The alien on the throne laughs. "Do you think you are the first to come and claim my throne? The first hairless freaks, maybe, but many upstarts have tried, yet here I sit. You are strong, so I will allow you to live, if you kneel and agree to serve me."Salta smirks and looks back at you."Alright rookies, let's see what you can do, kill them."The king growls "Attack!" The four around his throne rush your group, Salta leaps behind you and the rest of your team, clearly wanting you to do this yourselves.The team spreads out, one for each opponent. Yours charges at you with surprising speed, he carries no weapons.A. Block his incoming attacksB. Meet him head on and try to deliver the first decisive blowC. Fire energy blasts, damage him as much as possible before he can reach you.
>>28008953>C. Fire energy blasts, damage him as much as possible before he can reach you.
>>28008953>A. Block his incoming attacks
>>28008764Dispatch them ourselves, step aside and let the squad lead in after. As in, Rolling out the doormat, but the doormat being people.Spina seems to be the related to Salta, so in the future try to butter up that one, so she could vouch for us in the future.
>>28008953A.Try to get a bead on him, look for openings for a decisive counter.
>>28009000As a corollary, watch out for those multiple arms. These guys are probably specialized in striking with the upper limbs; the flipside is, their kicking techniques are probably neglected. Roll with the punches, shove our boot through his torso at the first opportunity.
>>28008953>B. Meet him head on and try to deliver the first decisive blow
>>28009000>>28008983You stand firm as he charges you. His attacks are fast, but yours are faster, and you block the first few with ease. However, as his arms outnumber yours, an attack eventually gets through, and a punch to the face causes you to stagger backwards. In your momentary daze, you are hit again, and this time sent sprawling. Looking up, you see the creature let out a vicious roar. This gives you a brief window to act.A. Hit him with an energy blastB. Get to your feet and fly, you can't get high in here, but it should still be enough for you to be out of reach.C. Stand and try a direct attack
>>28009086>A. Hit him with an energy blastright in the kisser
>>28009086CAlways attack while they're showboating
>>28009110Fail. Meant to vote for A.
>>28009086A. Shoop da whoop, mothafucka.
>>28009086>C. Stand and try a direct attack
>>28009109>>28009110You take the opportunity to fire a blast of energy directly into his face. With a pained cry, he falls on his back, and you seize the opportunity to get back on your feet. The creature begins getting up, but you don't give it the chance. You blast it, again, and again, and again, blasting it a few more times for good measure even when its cries go silent. Surveying your surroundings, you see that Spina and Carros are still in battle with their own opponents. Portat, on the other hand, is in serious trouble. He is on his back, his foe on top of him. Two of its hands are busy keeping Portat pinned while the other two are wrapped around his throat.A. Do nothing, this is not your fight. There is no use for a weak saiyanB. Blast it while it is distractedC. Attack the king while he is unguarded. His power level is higher than yours, but now that you know how these things fight, you think you can take him
>>28009236>C. Attack the king while he is unguarded. His power level is higher than yours, but now that you know how these things fight, you think you can take himThese guys haven't used any energy attacks. So we should be able to stay out of range and wear him down with ki blasts.
>>28009236B. A weak Saiyan may be useless, but a Saiyan in your debt, that may come in handy later.
>>28009236>C. Attack the king while he is unguarded. His power level is higher than yours, but now that you know how these things fight, you think you can take h>TO GLORYcaptcha: war apdme
>>28009236B. But kinda be a dick about it, gloating that he needed saving, but that kinda 'I still have your back' kinda gloating.
>>28009236Weak fool deserves to get killed for his idiocy.Power up a blast to hit both of them as hard as you can. If Portat lives then he's strong enough to survive, if not he can get fucked.
>>28009236B.If anyone accuses us of being soft, we'll just say we wanted their leader to experience the anguish of watching his finest die before we finish him off. (Really, it's just good tactics.)
>>28009236B. Blast it while it is distracted
>>28009306Ooooh. I like this. Changing my vote here: >>28009276 to this one
>>28009236. Attack the king while he is unguarded. His power level is higher than yours, but now that you know how these things fight, you think you can take him
>>28009281>>28009291>>28009297>>28009306>>28009325>>28009327>>28009330You take a moment, gathering your power. You feel your energy burn brightly, and you extend your hand towards the creature choking the life from your comrade. Your outstretched palm glows brightly, and you unleash a particularly powerful attack. It strikes the creature in the head, and it is thrown sideways by the blast. Gathering your energy again, the creature is met with another blast when it gets up. You casually walk towards it as it struggles to its feet, and deliver a powerful punch to the face. The creature staggers back, its back now against the wall, and you finish it with a mighty kick to the throat.A. Help Portat upB. Gloat at PortatC. Attack the king aloneD. Order Portat to help you attack the kingE. Survery the situation
>>28009421>D. Order Portat to help you attack the king
>>28009421Combination of B and D. "C'mon, fat man, pull your weight! If you can."He'll probably fight better if he's fired up.
>>28009421True saiyans fight alone faggots. We fight the king alone.
>>28009421>C. Attack the king alone
>>28009421B. You owe me one, Portly! Ha ha!
>>28009465Bardock and his crew didn't seem to have any reservations about going tag team.
>>28009495They fought as an army against an army (loosely fitting). Also, the people they were conquering were seen as vermin and not worthy of fighting one on one.The king is at a power level above or near yours. He will be a challenge, and great will be the pride, honor, and glory if you defeat him by yourself.Also, you don't tag team when it's one v one. The king ordered his bodyguards to attack, he didn't join in the fray. He has yet to challenge or be challenged.
>>28009445>>28009453>>28009458You glance over at Portat, who is wheezing and gasping for breath."Come on fat man, pull your weight! If you can!"With that, you turn and fly full speed towards the king, only to find out why he did not look phased when you used energy blasts before. His four hands glow and you are hit head on by a flurry of ki blasts, with a pained yell, you are sent flying backwards, crashing to the ground. Portat fired a ki blast of his own at the king, who effortlessly swats it aside. Portat is soon hit by a flurry of the blasts, and does not get up when he is floored.You struggle to your feet, in intense pain, and think of what to do next.A. Frontal assaultB. Fire energy blasts at himC. Blast the ceiling and try to crush him under debrisD. Ask the others for help
>>28009545>C. Blast the ceiling and try to crush him under debrisAt the very least, it will give us a little time to formulate a better plan.
>>28009545C. Blast the ceiling and try to crush him under debris
>>28009545>C. Blast the ceiling and try to crush him under debris
>>28009545>ask the others for helpYeah right, fuck that. Create smoke/debris to make it hard to see, then use our scouters to locate and attack the King in the haze. Hand to hand, ki blasts could give him time to locate us.
>>28009545C. Hopefully the debris will obscure his vision, at least. They have no scouters, and we all know, you can't sense energy without a scouter. It will be like he's fighting us in the dark.
>>28009545E. Run over to Portat and pants his corpse. His fat ass will resemble the full moon enough that we can become the mighty Oozaru!
Okay, obviously we need to train more. This is fucking ridiculous. We should go fucking Vegeta levels crazy of working and dedication in between planetary missions.
>>28009573>>28009578>>28009580>>28009581>>28009594A frontal assault is useless here, you're going to have to fight smarter, and you don't have much time. look up at the ceiling and make your decision. You fire a ki blast at the ceiling right above the king's head. The king is surprised that you did not attempt to attack him, so surprised in fact, that he doesn't even bother to look up. He never saw the debris coming as they crushed him under them. You smirk to yourself, but you know he isn't dead, not yet. Your scouter confirms this, he is wounded, as evidenced by a moderate decrease in his power level, but not dead. You should fix that.A. Gather up your energy and launch a massive attack when he emerges from the debrisB. Ask Salta to finish himC. Wait and see what happens
>>28009797Fuck yeah we need to train. We're not even at Raditz's level yet. We're weaker than Saibamen, damn it.
>>28009814A. Gather up your energy and launch a massive attack when he emerges from the debris
>>28009814A. Blast this motherfucker with our signature technique.
>>28009814>A. Gather up your energy and launch a massive attack when he emerges from the debris>>28009797Agreed
>>28009814A: Rip and Tear. Fire it while rushing behind the trail. The light from the ki blat/size of the blast should conceal our movements, so that even if he blocks it we'll be right on top of him to sock him hard
>>28009837What is our signature technique? "Relish Ray"? It would fit with the vegetable theme, and our hot dog theme, since apparently we're named Frank.Ooh, "Spicy Mustard attack!"Anyway, >A
>>28009877It can't be anything other than Spicy Mustard Attack now.
>>28009877What about Meteor Gun? That sounds vaugely DBZ esque
a) all of our energy into a ki blast.
>>28009977>How about...Devil Drill Beam?>What about Spiral Death Beam?>Doom Laser!>Rail Beam!>Nail Gun?>...shit that's good!http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=h4L2dFoUysU
>>28009835>>28009837>>28009850>>28009871>>28009877You've had enough of this. You want this creature to die. You concentrate your energy, as you had done when you saved Porta, but gather even more this time. You put all of your energy into this, if this does not work, you'll be in no condition to keep fighting. But you don't worry about that, you channel your energy, your rage, this creature, little more than an animal, had wounded both you and another saiyan warrior, it had the arrogance to demand another saiyan bow at its feet. And now, it simply refused to die.Well, you aren't going to give it a choice anymore.With an enraged roar, the king breaks free of the pile of debris, and looks at you, eyes full of hate. You don't give it the chance to say or do anything, you extend your right hand, and a wave of energy explodes from your palm. The king's eyes go wide in fear as he is hit full force. The beam crashed him into the wall at the back of the building and continues pushing him until he is pushed through it. The beam causes him to be lifted off his feet and fly backwards, and as you watch, the energy wave slowly disintegrates him before your eyes. In a few more seconds, he is gone, smoky ground all that is left after your blast. Breathing heavily, you turn towards your team. Spina stands over a bloody corpse, which has had two of its arms ripped off and has a gaping hole in its chest.Carros stands over a limp figure who's head has been twisted one hundred and eighty degrees. Portat has moved, sitting and breathing heavily, looking pale and burnt.Salta is in the same spot as before, looking at you thoughtfully. You notice that the others are all staring at you as well. Nobody says anything, until Salta's lips curl into a small smile."Not bad kid, maybe I won't kill you after all."A. Make some kind of smart-ass come backB. Say nothing, just nodC. Thank herD. Ask Portat if he is okay
>>28010069I am hungry lets find some wear to eat
>>28010069A. Kill me? I'm the best damn warrior this squad's got. If anyone, kill lumpy over here.
>>28010069Kind of a mix of A and C."It was nothing, Captain. Just a little regicide to start off the mission."
>>28010069D. Ignore ho, check on Bro.
>>28010069A.You just killed 3 opponents, one of whom was objectively stronger than you. At this rate, you'll be able to take her.
>>28010069Based Saiyan. Don't show that you are tired or weak though, mix of A and C like this anon >>28010117 said.
>>28010069D. Ask Portat if he is okay
>>28010130Plus those scrubby 25pl guys before, but they dont count.>>28010117Works, go sit on what's left of the throne.
>>28010113>>28010117>>28010130"Kill me? I'm the best damn warrior this squad's got. If anyone, kill Lumpy over there" you reply, gesturing to Portat."Hey!" he shouts indignantly.Spina snorts and Carros, bursts into laughter, even Salta looks amused."You did well, bringing down an opponent with a power level twenty percent higher than yours is pretty damn impressive, especially for a newcomer" Salta says to you."It was nothing captain, just a little regicide to start off the mission" you respond.Her smirk widens. "You look rather injured for it to have been nothing. You have potential, but you made some rookie mistakes. Charging a foe head on without consideration is usually not a good idea. And when you fought his guard, you seemed to forget at first that your foe had four arms."She crosses her arms. "Like I said, you have potential, but you need practice. When we get back to planet Vegeta, I want you to look into getting some more combat training."She looks around at everyone. "For now, all of you stay here. This was a test, and you all showed you have some worth as fighters. The main threat is eliminated, I'll take care of the rest. You all do what you want, but stay in this city. Have fun, break some shit."With that, she turns and exits the building.A. Talk to Portat, see if he is okayB. Talk to SpinaC. Talk to CarrosD. Lie down and take a nap, that fight wore you outE. Go out and have some fun in the city
>>28010069a) smart ass comeback"I would have preserved the throne for you but this monkey made me break it"
>>28010069A"I'll offer you the same courtesy, ma'am."Snarky comment but still technically respectful?Also, let's be kind of a dick-ass, what do you think guys?/tg/ is all about playing paladins and do-gooders, it might be fun to be a self-serving megalomaniac for once.
>>28010333ALet's give some pointers to the Fat Man. We can be a dick, but a helpful dick. Kind of like Vegeta in the show, actually. Giving you excellent advice and calling you a pussy when you're trying as hard as you can, etc.
>>28010333B. Talk to Spina.I wanna know why she resembles the squad leader so closely. And if they're related, has the captain always been such a hardass.
>>28010365Yeah, definitely see us being the snarky dick type. Also, we should keep trying to be super macho in front of Salta to try and get in her pants (of course getting beaten by her at every attempt)>>28010333E. We're not badly injured. Let's go massacre some locals.
>>28010333Maybe take a trophy from the king? Like a battle trophy? I was thinking like a crown or a ring he might have had on him.also chat up that Spinna. You know she just got a little hot from that blast.
>>28010420Agreed.Fat Wretch, let's go see what these primitives have for food!
>>28010420>>28010467You walk over to Portat. He does not look good, still seeming to have a bit of trouble breathing, and sporting several burn marks from the energy blasts. You offer a hand to help him up, which, after a moment of hesitation, he accepts. You pull him to his feet, aware that the others are watching the two of you."Are you alright?" you ask."I've been better" he replies, "But on the upside, if I die, you'll all have something fried to eat"A. Smart ass remarkB. Tell him he's an idiot and is going to get himself killed if he doesn't learn to fight soonC. Thank him for helping you against the king
>>28010528We should not encourage him in his weakness. Smart ass remark and offer to be his training partner (then beat/push him to hell and back once training).
>>28010528Mix of A and B. Lightheartedly tell him he's a moron bound for death, but with a touch of seriousness.Are we taking Portly under our wing now?
>>28010528A"Lose some weight and I think we'll all feel better about working with you, lumpy.""Your technique wasn't all bad, of course, but you'll need to work hard to catch up to me..."
>>28010574This. He seems to be too cautious, hanging back and attacking from a distance. With his weight and Vegeta's high-gravity, he has to have some brawn. He'd do better if he got up in the front lines and put his momentum and center of gravity to good work.Our problem seems to be we're too impulsive. He might be a good sparring partner.
>>28010528A. "I'd rather try the local cuisine. Let's go roast some weaklings."
>>28010574>>28010583>>28010597"Lose some weight and we'll all feel better about working with you lumpy" you joke. The others laugh as you put a hand on Portat's shoulder."Listen, you need to learn to fight better, and fast. You nearly got destroyed here, twice, and I doubt this will be the toughest mission we get. I'm stuck training when we get back to Vegeta, and you're gonna train with me"He groans "Fine, when do we start?"You shrug. "We could start now, but I'd rather try the local cuisine. Let's go roast some weaklings."With that, you exit the building, casually frying a few civilians that were out on the street. The others soon emerge from the building and split up to do some thorough hunting.A. Go by yourselfB. Go with SpinaC. Go with PortatD. Go with Carros
>>28010734B. Time to find out what's with Spina and Salta
>>28010734B. Go with Spina. Portly has had enough character development, for one evening, IMO. Let's see what her deal is. "So, I noticed what was left of your opponent. You disarmed him pretty handily. I'm impressed."
>>28010756>>28010780I third these guys.
>>28010756>>28010780>>28010900You decide to follow Spina. You observe as she incinerates civilians on the streets. A few of them retreat into a nearby building. She shoots it with energy blasts until it collapses, and your scouter confirms everything inside was killed. She looks around boredly until she notices you."Hey hotshot" she greets. "What brings you to my section of this crappy city?"A. Compliment her on how she defeated her opponentB. Ask her if she's related to SaltaC. Tell her you're just here to kill thingsD. Say nothing
>>28010960>A. Compliment her on how she defeated her opponentsee if she found a restaurant, I am so fucking hungry
>>28010960A. "You're not half bad. What say you and I have a contest? First to 100 dead primitives wins."
>>28010960A, then segue into B if we can steer the conversation there without it getting awkward.
>>28010984>>28011027"You're not half bad. What say you and I have a contest? First to 100 dead primitives wins."She smirks. "Are their any stakes to this game?"A. Give your idea for what the stakes should be
>>28011070The loser buys the winner an all you can eat meal when we get back to Vegeta. It's perfect, either way we get a dinner date. But our natural saiyan gluttony makes it seem as though it's perfectly platonic.
>>28011070If you win, I'll blatantly hit on Salta, if you lose, I'll blatantly hit on you.
>>28011115I like it. Seconded.
>>28011070"Winner gets to claim the first liquor store we find."
>>28010960B. Touch fluffy monkey tail.
>>28011118>I'll blatantly hit on SaltaSure we couldn't gamble on something safer? Maybe play a bit of Russian Roulette?
>>28011197I think blatantly hitting on Salta, and getting beaten to a pulp in the process each time, has become one of our traits.
>>28011115>>28011151"The loser buys the winner an all you can eat meal when we get back to Vegeta."She laughs "You're on! I hope you have a lot of extra money, you're going to need it."With that, she takes to the sky and begins raining death upon the civilians.(To be continued)And this concludes the first segment of CYOA: Saiyan Story. The next update will most likely occur on Thursday night.For now, I will wait around and answer questions. What did everyone think?
>>28011253Pretty good. I would like to add rolls for the attacks however. Makes it more exciting. Would that make it a quest thread though?
>>28011253Great stuff. Looking forward to Thursday.
>>28011253Good once it hit it's stride. Started off kinda slow, but that was lack of participation as much as anything else.I'll be back Thursday.>>28011281I respectfully disagree. I think an additional random element of conflict resolution would minimize the impact of thinking tactically. Unless a system is decided on that uses that as a modifier, which might be overcomplicating things. I prefer a more narrative approach, myself.
>>28011281Roll attacks really just aren't my thing. I don't like the idea of making everything luck based
>>28011358Fair enough, it's your CYOA.You may want to add more narrative-style warnings or hints in your writing though."You could attack him head on, but he's the fastest warrior you've ever seen.""You could attack him head on, now that he's stumbling..."Nonspecific hints would be a good indicator.Also, do you think we could get hard(er) stats on our ki, health, and powerlevel. Ki and Health could just be (Depleted - Normal - Brimming), that would be good.
>>28011675Ki and Health are currently low, that fight wore you out big time.
>>28011728Cool. Alright, see you next time, QM
>>28011728awesome, were only gonna get stronger then.it would be pretty cool if you could give us power levels at the end of each thread.
>>28011805>>28011769Power level at beginning of thread: 400Power level reached during battle with King: 500Power Level once you recover: Unknown
>>28011728>>28011769Oh, and I went ahead and archived this bad boy for next time, man
>>28011876Many thanks, anon