The prison. You've heard about it. Ever think about what it would be like there, to spend your life in the mines, a slave? Of course not. You thought yourself invulnerable from the misfortunes that befell others. But that privilege, son, is given to the rich, they are the ones who commit crimes fitting their station; treason, espionage, corruption, the transgressions of refined society. You are but a lowly citizen of the Kingdom of Madeen condemned to lowly crimes that signify your birth and class; killing some hobb for a couple of silver, raping that elf girl in an abandoned house, stealing from the church, or perhaps something else along those lines. And for that you must be indentured on the prison island, to try and give back to society for once in your petty existence.So, tell me what are you?>The Hobgoblin Hoodlum>The Elven Brigand >The Orc Lone-Wolf>The Human Serf#Note: All of these races deviate from the generic depictions.
>>29089977> The Orc Lone-Wolf
>>29090007>>29090041My orc brothers are with me, OP.
>>29089977orc because why not for a change
Magical Girl Half-Orc
>>29089977>The Hobgoblin Hoodlumbut the orc is pretty much decided and i am fine with it.
Let's just wait, surely OP will provide.
>>29089977>>The Elven Brigand....Though if we do go Orc, that 'Magical Girl Half-orc' sounds great.
A thousand apologies for the wait, had a disconnect. Not exactly the most auspicious of beginnings.>>29089993>>29090007>>29090041>>29090086>>29090169>>29090217>>29090224>>29090260The Orkh'un, or as the normal folks call you, the motherfucking Orcs, are a people much romanticized throughout Human history. The stoic, hardy Orc, away from home where wife and child wait for him, as he rages about foreign battlefields fighting people unknown to him, has been a fixture of many a ballads and epics. The Kingdom of Madeen was conquered from the blood spilt by your people. Most of your brethren fight on in battlefields throughout the world yet, you stayed back on Madeen, why? Was is it a debilitating injury, or are you just happy being some noble's house guard? Seven foot tall, built of sinew, know that no one challenges an Orkh'un and lives. There is this deference, or fear, or, what do you call it, that respect towards intimidation, the Thruum, among Orcs that sets them apart from the rest. Yet, they are strangers to a foreign land with no one to call a friend, where every other Orc is competition for that bag of gold. What is your name?>Bashuur>Zapha>Marghur>Faateh>SaarkahOrc surnames signify the greatest war they fought in, your participation in the Madeeni-Dwarven War earns you:Dhvann'kur
>>29090274Zapha! Best name.
>>29090274>or as the normal folks call you, the motherfucking OrcsYes. Yes. A little bit of snark is good.
>>29090274>FaatehCause it mean conqueror in arabic.
>>29090291>>29090315>>29090318>>29090320Faateh Dhvann'kur, veteran of the Madeeni-Dwarven war. Your sword cleaved numerous dwarven necks, as the Madeeni army marched to the capital. But after the war was over and you were back in Madeen, you could not resist the offer of a sinecure, as the bodyguard of a nobles daughter and the tutor of his sons. Shameful.So, tell me what was your crime?>Killed a noble in a duel>Rape>Murder>Any other
>>29090354>>Killed a noble in a duel>>Rape>>MurderAll of the above.What can I say, it was a busy night.
>>29090354>MurderBlood is our passion!
>>29090364Oh so we challenged him/her to a duel, beat him, then raped him and finally killed him.
>>29090354Rape, arson, murder and rape
>>29090354>>Killed a noble in a duel>>RapeKilled a noble in a duel and after that they framed the rape of a noble girl on us out of spite where it was actually consentual.
dis gon b fun
>>29090354Rape. We raped a dude.
>>29090378That seem like a good backstory material.
They do not speak overmuch about Ork'un loyalty and Orkh'un honor. When one of the nobles' brats made insinuations about degeneracy between you and your ward, you challenged him to a duel.As the tremulous man, I think he was more of a boy, offered apologies, you dragged him the collar into the courtyard. Handed him your sword. Dodged his shaky swipes. Counted to three. And broke his skull with a single punch.And, now, half an year after spending time in the dungeons you find yourself in a barge along with several others on your way to the island prison.contd.
>>29090428Your company consists of scores of humans of all shapes and sizes, one of them as round as a testicle, elves - tattooed from head to tie, odorous and quarrelsome hobgoblins and a gargantuan shape lying in the shadows. >try to chat with those near you>call for food and water>try and see what the thing is in the shadows
>>29090447>try and see what the thing is in the shadowsI'm curious.
>>29090447>>call for food and water>>29090428>No rape.
>>29090447> try and see what the thing is in the shadowsWe're a lone wolf.
>>29090447>try to chat with those near youLet's see what we can learn about the place we're going to.
>>29090447>try to chat with those near you
>>29090354>>Killed a noble in a duel>>Rape>>Murder>>Any otherPublic nudity.
>>29090447>>call for food and water>>try and see what the thing is in the shadows
>>29090454>>29090463Not like you anything better to do in the dank and darkness in the inside of the barge.You get up, stretch your limbs and head towards the shadow.Oddly, while the most of the barge is crowded as an elven brothel, every one seems to be giving that thing a wide berth.A human gets up and places a hand on your chest. "Don't wake it up now. I came with it in the first batch, that things could slaughter us all, and call it breakfast."You:>inquire about it>stare the human down and continue>break his hand>call to that thing>other
>>29090490>Inquire about itDepending on his response....>Call to that thing
>>29090490>>inquire about it>>stare the human down and continue>>call to that thingIn that order, we are a fucking Orc.
>>29090490>inquire about itlets hear what is it.>>29090463Lone wolves respect each others territory as long as they are not forced to cross paths for a reason.
>>29090490>call to that thingStupid, possibly.But we are orc, and I want to see with my own eyes what exactly makes everyone so afraid of it.
>>29090492>>29090495>>29090497As you look down to the human, quite some feet shorter than you. He reflexively pulls back his hand."What is it?""A Lizardfolk from the Dwarven country. They were holding plenty of them at my prison.""They let them roam about in your cities.""No, no. They have been capturing them from the swamps for over an year now. They ship all of them to the prison."You:>continue asking about the Lizardfolk>inquire about something else>call for food and water>try chatting with someone else
>>29090520>continue asking about the LizardfolkWhy are they so large? Do they even know how to speak.....whatever language we speak?
>>29090520>Go sit in a quiet place and wait.
>>29090520>>continue asking about the LizardfolkThis can be a fellow warrior friend.
>>29090534Are orcs even vaguely reptilian in this setting?
>>29090540I'm going off the orc image posted plus i like the idea of large monsters hanging out with each other.
>>29090524"Are all of the Lizards this large?""The ones I saw were all over nine feet, I don't know, maybe the bounty hunters only capture the big ones. But all of them are fucking immortal.""The fuck are you babbling about?"The man, of the scrawny sort, recoils at your words. "I m-mean, you stab with them a sword, right? And that shit heals in minutes. You set them on fire and the skin grows back."You hear a soft, mellow voice behind you, "They say Lizardfolk tribes don't even use weapons in wars. They try to eat each other alive. Their battlefields are one big buffet."What do you do?
>>29090558"Sounds fun" Laugh and then do >>29090529>Go sit in a quiet place and wait.
>>29090558Say hi to the lizard, he sounds like a type of warrior an Orkh'un would love to fight/befriend.
>>29090558>call to that thing
>>29090558Let's try approaching the lizard. Take a closer look at it.If it was truly as dangerous as the human said, it would be in chains. Otherwise, it can die just like anything else.
>>29090554>>29090274Oh hey.Do we have monkey feet? Can we grip things with our feet?
>>29090567>>29090576>>29090579You decide to approach the Lizard. As you move nearer to the Lizard, a minor commotion ensues behind you as everyone tries to get as far from you as possible. Makes you wonder if that would capsize the barge.You notice a blood-red, reptilian eye fixed on you.What do you do?
>>29090602Ask what he is in for, and for his name.
>>29090602How many have you killed?Let's see how our high scores (ie; kill count) match up against each other.
>>29090602stare it down.Be prepared to headbutt if necessary
>>29090602Go for >>29090616
>>29090616I hear you're from a race a warriors like my own, have you any tales of battles fought or numbers of foes slain?
>>29090643Not necessarily warriors.Let's try to gauge what it's like first before we assume anything of him.
>>29090611>>29090616"Well met, Lizard. You have a name?"Only a hiss is audible. You kneel down and face him. He looks drugged. Probably why he isn't busy making lunch of the rest of the convicts."What did you do, how do you get caught?"The voice is guttural and deep, "The pinkskins hunt. The pinkskins capture. Now we eat pinkskins. Blood calls blood."What do you say?
>>29090643>I hear you're from a race a warriors like my ownThe orcish for "hello, you're from a race of warriors like my own" is <punch in the face>
>>29090657Punch him in the face
>>29090657"They are like ants though. No matter how many nests you trample, you'll find a dozen more."
>>29090657You are alone. Where we go, you will die if you pursue blood. Are you willing to face death for your honor?
>>29090657>>29090704Ah, wait....feels like that could be phrased better.Well, you get the gist of it.
>>29090696I think that's the point. He was hunted by humans. They captured him. Now he bears a grudge against their race.
>>29090696>>29090704"You are alone. Where we go, you will die if you pursue blood. Are you willing to face death for your honor?""Far from home does it matter, live - dead, it all the same now.""The humans aren't worth it, they are such as ants, dig around and you'll find a dozen more."You see the lizard smack its tail on the floor. "Says you. Servant of pinkskins. Lizard sees your people fight for them. Lizard smells you reek of them."You do what?
>>29090737"I fought no fight i did not want."
>>29090737Growl."The Orkh'un serve no one. We fight because it is our way. Humans may pay us to war for them, but I would not suffer a single slight from them no matter how much they paid me."
>>29090752"I choose my battles.""Why fight for pinkskins then?""They pay well.""Gold shine well. Chase the shine and lose yourself." The lizard turns his back to you.Seems like this is all he is going to say. Sighs of relief do the rounds as you head back. An elf, a webwork of green and red tattoos running over his face and arms, gets up and claps. His vulpine face meets your gaze."Ah, Larsimmer, did not brag when he wrote about your kinds bravery in "A Broken Sword.""What do you do?
>>29090804Give him a look then ignore and go sit somewhere till something of worth happens.
>>29090804"There is nothing courageous about approaching a beast that's lost the will to live, elf."
>>29090833This works for me.Also say this while leaving>>29090781
>>29090847Eh. I'd say the moment has passed for us to say that second quote.
>>29090876Its to clarify to him that we aren't slaves to gold like he implied.
>>29090955No, I'm just saying that.....it just wouldn't fit in the flow of the drama anymore. It'd be like....fighting over who gets to say the zinger.Besides. We've already gone back to our seat.
>>29090955This.We orcs desire Gold so that we may practice our craft, many items of wonderous beauty and power have come from Orc foundries.Gold is simply the means with which we can expedite our Art.
Ignore the lizard, it's an asshole.
>>29090985We don't even refer to ourselves as orcs. WE ARE THE ORKH'UN!>>29091002It's broken. Hate him not, but pity him. He has lost the fire in his heart.
>>29091009I was doing fluff.> it's broken.In it's heart I see the hate, the spite it feels towards the humans. The Lizard could be a powerful ally still if we can bring it to it's senses.
Everytime a disconnect occurs, I can't post for hal an hour because the IP changes. Sorry about that.>>29091009The Lizard is drugged.You stare down the elf as you head back to your spot, "There is nothing to fear from a beast without the will to live."The elven face keeps smiling at you, "Ah, look a philosopher! Perhaps you head to the island in search of the meaning of life?" Laughs follow behind as you make your way back. As the hours pass, you hear tidbits of information about the destination. Apparently the place is under a magical spell.Then finally, the trapdoor opens, a man in a helmet peeps in and shouts, "You scum are about to reach the lovely haven that awaits you with open arms. Work hard and you may yet live another few years."You do what?
>>29091039We have no need of allies. We are not meek sheep. We do not crowd together at night to feel safe. We are the wolf, the hunter, the conqueror. We take what we need when we need it, and we serve only when it is in our fancy to do so. We shall not baby the beast. If he is not willing to fight for himself, to live and take and want for himself, then let him wither away.
>>29091088Is it time to head out?Let's go ahead and take a look at our new home, then.
>>29091109Not yet, a couple of hours remain.
>>29091088Sit and wait till we get to the island.
>>29091120Oh, well, any windows from where we sit?If not, let's just wait. I don't really see any other option for us to take now. Except chat with the other prisoners, I suppose, but it seems our character has developed towards not being needlessly chatty.
>>29091088>Everytime a disconnect occurs, I can't post for hal an hour because the IP changes. Sorry about that.The curse has taken root, it seems....
>>29091122The soldiers leaves with the trapdoor open, and gets back with a coil of chains. "We drugged the Lizard for you fuckers. But mark my words, that cunt will make for your flesh the moment it stops feeling high. Want to live? Then fucking tie it up."There is a loud noise as the coil hits the floor. The Lizard does not budge.Several men get up and start unwinding the iron chain. They all look at you with expectant eyes.You do what?>>29091130No windows.
>>29091213We refuse, the lizard will be our best friend/first victim one way or the other, and tying him up will accomplish neither of those things.If they get pissy, suggest that the laughing elf should tie him up.
>>29091213We take the chain from them and then strangle anybody who attempts to take it from us and tie up the lizard with it. Or we murder everyone except the lizard on the boat with the chain. Murder-Orc go
>>29091213Take the chains. Walk to the lizard. And talk to him."Lizard. You called me a servant of the humans before. I will prove to you that I am not. I will not chain you. No. I will warn you. If you attack, I will kill you. If you do not, you will enter the island free of chains and with your dignity intact. Although I would not judge you if you preferred to meet death at my hands instead."
>>29091243Ach. Wish I had more time to phrase this better. But whatever.Let's go, noble savage!Also, when I say take the chains, I mean to take all of it ourselves. We're strong enough to carry it all, right?And if it really does come to us having to fight the lizard ourselves, the chains would come in handy as a weapon.
>>29091243Oh snap, this. And THEN tell that laughing elf to fuck off if he gets pissy.
>>29091243Lets go with this, Lizard friend shall be our best friend. It will be a great fight to the death!
>>29091213>>29091243>Although I would not judge you if you preferred to meet death at my hands instead. If you've no fire left in your heart and no longer wished to live, then better that you be felled by a true warrior than one of your slavers.Just something to tack on to the end, to make my meaning clearer.
>>29091283just say warrior, not true warrior, since that implies the lizard isn't a true warrior like us.Other than that, it's perfect.
>>29091213]>>29091243>>29091283Ah fuck it. Messed up that last phrase. I'll just go ahead and repost the entire thing to make it more coherent.>Lizard. You called me a servant of the humans before. I will prove to you that I am not. I will not chain you. No. I will warn you. If you attack, I will kill you. If you do not, you will enter the island free of chains and with your dignity intact. Although I would not judge you if you preferred to meet death at my hands instead. If you've no fire left in your heart and no longer wished to live, then better that you die by my hand like a true warrior than under the heel of those slavers you despise so much.>>29091288Mm. Yeah, realized that.
>>29091238>>29091239>>29091243You get up snatch the chains from two Hobgoblins who stare at you with their mouths agape. You walk to the Lizard and drop at its feet. The barge goes silent as you feel all of their eyes on your back."This was for chaining you, but it seems you already have made a prisoner of yourself. Keep your distance and all will be fine."The Lizard gets up, well, tries to gets up and retches, it manages to puke out a severed hand with faint fumes arising from it."Hmph. If you've no fire left in your heart and no longer wished to live, then better that you be felled by a true warrior than one of your slavers."As you head back, you hear the groans, the snarls, the threats aimed at you. You haven't earned yourself any friends by doing what you did. "Kill it now, if you want to kill it, you son of a bitch!", someone shouts.
>>29091302Fight him yourselves is your so eager to end his life.
>>29091302Ignore them and sit next to our Lizard friend with the chains in our lap. The yapping of the weak are not worth our attention.
>>29091321He is no friend of ours. He has yet to earn our respect or any sense of kinship.No, this is but the courtesy of one warrior to another.
>>29091302I bet it's that fucking elf at it again.Tell them >>29091319 and keep an eye on the lizard as we sit down and watch what happens.
>>29091362I think the elf would be more....dramatic about it.Anyway, I think we're just waiting for the next post, since he didn't end with an ask for a prompt.
>>29091319>>29091321A stare is enough to silence most. "Forget not you speak with an Orkh'un! Wish to see the Lizard Chained..."A tremor goes up the barge. It is a first of many that go up the vessel, you can hear the wood creak and groan. And then you start feeling the pressure, as if you are being crushed by the air surrounding you."And so our doom begins. Welcome to the Island, brothers. There is no going back now." says a human with missing hands.The tremors keep occurring for another hour before they stop. You feel something sticky run down your ear. Blood.What now?
>>29091382>"Forget not you speak with an Orkh'un! Wish to see the Lizard Chained..."I can't comprehend this sentence FPQ.
>>29091382>The tremors keep occurring for another hour before they stop. You feel something sticky run down your ear. Blood.Did we start bleeding from our ears because of the pressure?Are we.....diving?>>29091390I think he forgot to add an "If" at the beginning and we got interrupted at the end by the tremor?
>>29091390He was about to say "do it yourselves" probably, but was interrupted by the tremors.
>>29091382Yawn, to pop our ears and wipe away the worse bit of the blood. Fashion earplugs from some spare cloth. The Elf does not need that much of a shirt.
>>29091390Sorry about that, the frequent disconnects have fucked my shit up.The MC is asking others to be mindful of who they are making threats against. He got interrupted by the shaking.>>29091396>Are we.....diving?No.
>>29091302they can all fuck off, i like the lizard, call on the elv though, see if he can get through to the lizard. is there any of you guys that are particular intereste in the humans we've met. we need to make the most awesome latino themed prison gang. having hobgoblin servants and all. we need some human to get a good realtionship with the guards as well.icetoPr Lord - and we have a name for the bbeg :) fucking captcha, but hey atleast now we also have the underboss:lieutenants tssigano
>>29091382>>29091400Eh. No need to pick a fight with the elf, unless he starts provoking us.But good advice.Also, let's keep our ears peeled. Listen for the Lizard. We've taken responsibility for it. If it starts moving around more, we take a glance at it. If it seems like it's going to attack, then we prepare ourselves to fight.
>>29091428Only if he goes to fight us. Let him have his fill of the others. Snag a bit of cloth before it goes down his gullet, we could use it as earplugs.
>>29091414Why would we get the elf to "get through" to the lizard?Right now, we're just in an introductory sequence, so I don't think we need to worry too much about how we're going to cozy it up with the guard. But going by what we've done so far, I think we should try to go for becoming a top-class leg breaker and maybe try to move up to prison boss from there. I just don't think social maneuvering is our thing.>>29091441Eh, we already stated our terms clearly. If he makes a ruckus, he's going down. Gotta be honorable and all that. I like the idea of partnering up with the lizard too, but we gotta be tough.
>>29091414>>29091428You realize that the others will hold you responsible for whatever the Lizard does now.Nothing that you can't handle.As you wipe the blood off from your ears, you feel the pressure life. Seems like you have made it across.An hour goes by, it seems the barge isn't moving anymore.You are just getting accustomed to the stillness when the trapdoor opens once more. It's an Orkh'un this time.With a voice like an avalanche, he says "No ones dead? Now that's a miracle."
>>29091487Excuse the tail. I uploaded the unedited one.
>>29091487Let's take a look at how the lizard is doing.If nothing seems wrong, time to disembark.
>>29091487>>29091501We should exit right after Mr Lizard. Stay behind him and on guard for the attack. Keep the chain, have it wrapped around our shoulder bandoleer style.
>>29091529If the drugs have already worn off and he hasn't attacked anyone yet, I think we can forget about having to fight him. And if we do end up fighting him anyway, well, our hands will hopefully be enough.
>>29091501"ELVES! Fucking Elves! Get the fuck out." The Orc roars as he drops a ladder.The elf from before, with the green and tattoos, gives you a mocking bow as he climbs up with the rest."The Lizard seems to be doing alright. He manages to stand up, and now you can see that he towers over even you. He is easily over 9 feet. The Elves start clambering up the ladder now.He doesn't move much other than swish his tail. "Another of your kind. Seems stronger than you."
>>29091565*red tattoosDo you wait with him, or do something?
>>29091565"Do not underestimate me, lizard." Then stare him in the eyes
>>29091565how about: "they all do at first"
>>29091565>>29091574Wait with him and comment that appearances can be deceiving.
>>29091565>The elf from before, with the green and tattoos, gives you a mocking bow as he climbs up with the rest."Seems like he took us risking everyone's life well enough.>>29091574Let's go ahead and wait with him while watching the rest clamber up."If you say so, Lizard. Although, if I cared about appearances, I would not have threatened to kill you myself had you chosen to make a ruckus."
>>29091565I don't totally hate the elf myself. He seems quite Puck-like, although we haven't really seen all that much from him. Might be fine to give him the benefit of the doubt for now, guys?
>>29091631fuck that shit, break his neck.Feed him to the lizard
>>29091653I'm not sure the Lizard would appreciate being treated like a trash compactor, though.
>>29091631The elf is weak! That alone is enough to hate him!
>>29091653Might I remark about how horrible of an idea that is. We already have the hatred of everyone, Lizard included, who would do their level best to stop us. Not to mention the GUARD standing at the only exit with who knows what kind of backup. This course of action will only serve to get us killed.
>>29091698>This course of action will only serve to get us killed.Slavery IS death.
>>29091698I think he's just expressing his disdain of the tattooed elf.I don't think the Lizard hates us, although I wouldn't go as far as to say that he likes us either. He's probably.....ambivalent, I guess?
>>29091706The lizard probably respects us enough now to think twice about eating us, which is better than before.
The internet. It won't stop fucking with me. I'll try and wrap this up within half an hour, guys, because it doesn't look like it's gonna get any better.>>29091578>>29091580>>29091582As the Humans start following the Elves through the trapdoor, you look back and stare hard at him, "Appearances may be deceiving, Lizard." "Name given is Salaasenn. Meaning Pride of the Father. Our tribe only will name those who are worthy. What is name given to you?"The Orkh'un by the trapdoor does seem to look about as strong as you.Once the barge is empty but for you and the Salaasenn, the Orkh'un motions you to stay where you are as he starts climbing down with a bale of rope and a greataxe."Faateh Dhvann'kur", your eyes now back to the ladder.What now?
>>29091705We are yet breathing, there is a chance for an escape. Don't throw away our life without knowing the weapon pointed at our neck.
>>29091729We stand proud and tall and wait for our turn to exit. They are going to be putting Salaasenn into binding, but tell the Orkh'un it is not needed, that we shall walk out of our own power.
>>29091729Ask the other orc what he means to do with the rope.Oh, and it's cool to end the thread soon. It's already pretty late for me, so I might as well turn in soon.
>>29091729You have a twitter/schedule for next run?
>>29091729>>29091831Yeah, I'd be interested in knowing when your next run time will be too.
>>29091747>>29091749"I was expecting it to be tied up and bound. A drugged up Lizard should not pose much of challenge to an Orkh'un... if he is strong.", he says as he walks up to your slowly, staring hard at you.So it begins, the Thruum. That mix of intimidation, respect, camaraderie and recognition with which the Orcs form hierarchies amongst themselves. Usually it involves the two Orcs circling each other noting scars and muscles and the other's 'presence'. But in exigent circumstances such as this, a stare will have to suffice.Shit. It sames you rank lower than him in Thruum."Dhvaan'kur, eh? The dwarves are too short for me to dull my blade on their necks. The name is Bathoot Bhara'kwi" Trollbane. He throws the rope at you, I'll cripple, circle around and tie it down."You look first at Salaasenn then back at Bathoot, "He doesn't seem to be resisting.""The women of our kind tending toward... slow anger."The fucking what?The Bathoot looks taken aback too, for a brief moment. "A pity, we finaly get a lady, and she's a fucking demon."Some moments later you find yourself walking side by side with Salaasenn. With Bhara'kwi following close behind.Some meters ahead the other prisoners are being escorted by men who don't exactly look like guards.What now?
>>29091844>>29091831Gonna run a session tomorrow at the same time, unless the internet goes tits up again.@FantasyPrisonQ
>>29091865>"The women of our kind tending toward... slow anger."FPQ, would it surprise you to know that I was totally expecting/hoping for this?I can't explain my exact thought processes, but somehow I just came to the conclusion that the Lizard would be a woman.Anyway, ending now?
>>29091876Cool.Also, hope that you don't mind, but I went ahead and archived the thread for you.http://suptg.thisisnotatrueending.com/archive/29089977/
>>29091879I guess that it is about time to call it a day. I apologize for the slow post speeds. And I apologize if anyone feels like he wasted his time.Being my first Quest Thread, I think it is evident that I have a lot to learn and improve upon. I thank all those who stuck with this thread for 5 hours. I really do appreciate it.
>>29091895Thanks, mate. I'll go through this thread again and try to improve. I know this thread kind shit compared to the decent ones out there, I'll try my best to give you guys something worth investing in.
This thread makes me want to play Of Orcs And Men again.
>>29091902>>29091912It was a fun introduction, don't worry about it. You'll only improve with time, as long as you work for it. See ya' next time.If you're worried about the length of your posts, you're quick enough as is (not counting the times when you've been disconnected from the internet) that it doesn't matter that they're short. Although you may want to add some possible actions we could take at the end of your posts. They help to mark the places where you're asking for prompts and they also assist in guiding the story.
>>29091929I know. It's just that I was writing as fast as I could, trying to get the post up before another disconnect occurred.Hopefully this won't be the case tomorrow.
>>29091902>Being my first Quest ThreadThis is the first time I've followed a quest that wasn't run by a veteran QM.You're my first virgin, FPQ.
>>29091950I hope the ride gets smoother now that the cherry's popped.
>>29091865It makes me laugh a little to find out that Salaasenn is a female.Since I was there in the QTG's when you were brainstorming your quest. Heh.
>>29091967It will, at first. But if you ever get better, you'll find that your followers will start to resemble an abusive lover the more popular you become.