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Well, after being inspired by reading the other Kill La Kill quests and CYOA, I wanted to write one.
But not of the Heroines, but of the villain, Kiryuin Ragyo.

I will copy the rules like the other quest, first choice to reach five votes, wins.

Any criticism is welcomed about my writing style as it's my first time writing, well, anything other than smut.

Well then, lets begin.
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from the villain's pov? this I gotta see
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This might be interesting.
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>>35671007
>[blumenkranz instensifies]

IBS HABBENINGS

hopefully I hope this ends up turning into NGE: NOBODY DIES.

I await with bated breath and tight pants
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>>35671007
"So what is this about you wearing your wedding dress?"

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vWZs5POCp0I

"Yes, Mother. I put on Junketsu." Satsuki says in a cold tone.

"That's what I've heard. Why did you put it on so soon, dear?"

"I was getting tired of my old uniform."

Warmly, you say, "Oh... Why didn't you say something the last time we spoke? I could of had something nice made for you."

"Thank you, Mother, but Junketsu will do fine for me."

"Very well. I hope to see you soon. I 'must' see you in that uniform, you probably look adorable!"

"Thank you." Her tone still hasn't changed, cold as ever, "Is there anything else you wanted to discuss?"

"Yes. Is Friday is okay for a visit?"

"A visit?" she says, now sounding like she wasn't expecting you to say that.

Moving your free hand down your body, over your chest, you feel the silky smoothness of your dress in the palm of your hand.

You say, with a slight smirk. "Oh yes. When I want to see you, you know I'll always get my way."

"Very well, anything else?" and back into that cold tone again.

"That's all, dear, just boring paperwork and a meeting in the morning with members of the board. I swear, those old men have nothing better to do than talk about money all day."

"I'll see you on Friday." giving a little sigh.

"Good Night."

Blowing a kiss down the phone, "Sweet Dreams, Satasuki."

You gently place the phone down on the receiver, looking out of your office at the bustling nightlife of Tokyo. The REVOCS HQ is one of the biggest, most elaborate and well lit buildings in the area.
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>>35671007
>30000 KLK quests
>something actually a little different
As long as it's not railroaded along the main plot like every other one, I'm on board.
Failing that... Mmmmm delicious Ragyou.
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>>35671113
You move across the room to lay down in the long, comfortable and stylish couch. As you lie down, you kick off your high heels, resting your glowing rainbow hair head on a pillow, it feels good to take a rest.

Letting out a sigh, "Whatever am I going to do with that girl, so cold to her own mother..."

You hear the door to your office slide open with a hiss. Why you chose to have one of those doors from a science fiction film is beyond you.

"Lady Ragyo."

You slowly turn your body around to face the familiar voice, resting your head in one hand and letting your other hand glide down the side of your hip.

"Ahh, Hououmaru. Good evening."

"Good evening, Lady Ragyo." She quickly bows towards you.

"What are the current percentages of REVOCS' global control of the fashion industry?" You smoothly say, like it's an everyday thing.

Rei briefly adjusts her glasses, "Currently, we are at 60%, and recently opened two more COVERS sewing factories in Africa. Three more and..."

"Just what I want to hear. Anything else?" smiling all the way.

"Just one more thing, we have a meeting in an hour with the Japanese branch of the company."

You nod, knowing you will have to sit down and listen to old men rattle off numbers. You wished you could just forget about the meeting and have some fun. Well, you ARE the CEO, you can do whatever your heart desires, but business is business. Gotta put food on the table.

[]Attend the meeting.
[]Forget about the meeting. Have some fun.
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>>35671151
>[x] Forget about the meeting. Have some fun.
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>>35671151
>[]Attend the meeting.
Business before pleasure
Although our business IS pleasure and it is most certainly a pleasure doing business.
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>>35671151
[X]Attend the meeting.

Rape can wait.
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>>35671151
>[X]Attend the meeting.
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>>35671151
>[]Attend the meeting.
sexual assault comes later
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>>35671151
>[]Have fun

I Wanna be the one to walk in the sun! 'Cause Girls just wanna have fun~
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Incest foursome when?

You know it's going to happen, there is no stopping it, from a canon perspective.
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>>35671240
shhhh, not now. Gotta take it slow with the incest.

Afterall, foreplay is important
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We don't need another Kill La Kill quest. We really don't need any more quests at all, but definitely not a KLK quest. Please don't.
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>>35671189
>>35671201
>>35671209
>>35671218

It's been ten minuets.
And it's like you don't want her to have fun.
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>>35671266

>Raygo makes them love it
>It actually is based off of love and not just a power trip.

This changes everything.
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Anyone else want to take hounnouji academy, and replace all schools with it across the world so we can encourage all of the schools through a series of Olympics to go into space so we can implant other planets directly with life fibres instead of going the wasteful normal way, which also means Satsuki and Ryuuko won't be too opposed to us/
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>>35671340
There has been a decline in new quests until just recently and there are fewer and fewer quests running consistently and at once. Participation across the board also seems to have dipped off in the past few months.
While this is typical with school in session, I have reason to believe the quest era is slowly coming to a close.
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>>35671382
Don't be silly, that would mean logical thinking.
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>>35671151

[X]Attend the meeting.
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>>35671340


you know what we do need though?

worm quests
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>>35671340
What do "we" need then? That guy thread #585654? Another single-post help-me thread?
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With the main antagonist being the protagonist now, does this mean the heroes HAVE to lose?

Not that I'm opposed to the idea but still.
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>>35671476


nonsense, why would our beloved daughters possibly disagree with us?
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>>35671476
Just go with >>35671382
Then no one is villains
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>>35671382
Actially I want Life Fiber verson of Pacific Rim+Evangelion+Knights of Sidona with the Entire planet earth turning into a space-faring Generational ship powered by Life Fibers after Senketsu/Junketsu-Gestalt becomes the new intellectual core of the OGFiber

And then Ragyou gets REIped
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>>35671476
As long as we're not regurgitating the show point for point like the other quests have done, I'm down for whatever.

OP also needs to read a few more quests and books. The writing is kind of clunky so far.
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>>35671497
That sounds really cool, but fucking impossible considering what we know.
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>>35671382
as long as it goes full G Gundam because that shit would be cool as fuck
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FK9Y_8GN2h0
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>>35671501

This on both counts.
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>>35671526
What do we know?
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>>35671533
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KXOCzB35kFY

WITH THE HELP OF RAGYO!!!!
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>Foron quest
This gonna be good
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>>35671616
Who the fuck is Foron?
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>>35671646
Namefag that frequents the KLK quest threads. He's an okay dude, not like Catpoolfag.
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>>35671646
The guy running this quest
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>>35671669
>He's an okay dude, not like Catpoolfag.
Annoying as those were, I kinda miss catpool.
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>>35671599
life fibers with devil gundam cells......NOPE!
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>>35671344

You give a heavy sigh, looking disappointed but a job is a job. Maybe it's better if you do it now then later.

"Hououmaru, call the members to the black room."

"Yes, I'll get right on it."

She bows and leaves the room, leaving with the same hissing noise as she entered.

"Well, lets get this over with."

You put your high heels back on, adjust your dress and walk out the same door Hououmaru left through, entering the elevator with a bell boy, waiting for you."

"Fifth floor."

"Y-yes, Lady Kiryuin!"

The doors to the elevator begin to close, and you notice the young man trying his best not to shake in his boots. Maybe we could tease him a little, make his evening. Then again, you don't have much time to play around.

[]Tease the bell boy.
[]Keep a clear head.
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>>35671769
>[x] Tease the bell boy.
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>>35671724
Yeah, even tough he did beat on his dead horse maymay, he did bless us with some decent shoops.

like this one pic related

>>35671769
>Tease the boyo
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>>35671769
>[]Keep a clear head.
Kiryuin's ain't sluts
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>>35671769
[X]Tease the bell boy.
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>>35671769
>[]Tease the bell boy.
let him TASTE THE RAINBOW
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>>35671769
>[X]Tease the bell boy.
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>>35671769
Bully the bellboy

>>35671786
No, but exerting your power and manipulating people is. Most often through our sexuality. after all, all life fibers really do is keep you in a near permanent state of near ecstasy. It's pretty much a slaanishi daemon.
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>>35671778
>>35671785
>>35671791
>>35671806
>>35671828

Well then...
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>>35671835
>fter all, all life fibers really do is keep you in a near permanent state of near ecstasy. It's pretty much a slaanishi daemon.
wat
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>>35671849
>dat image
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>>35671849
IT BEGINS!!!!!!!!!

>Captcha: ummillio boiling
Even captcha knows whats next!

>>35671724
I think I saved some of his pics. You want them posted, or would that be grounds for banning?
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>>35671849
Does this mean little sister soon?

>>35671896
Your call, anon.
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>>35671849
And that's how Nui came into being
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>>35671933
I actually had my own fanfic story behind Nui being born. It was much more violent, had more murder and ripping pregnant women open. Was thinking of making it a quest, but decided not to since my writing sucks.
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>>35671438
Please stop acting like those are the same as or worse than quest threads.
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>>35671996
Please stop acting as though they're any better.
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>>35671930
>Does this mean little sister soon?
Or dramatic twist!
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>>35671340
>>35671438
>>35671996
>>35672037

Girls Girls, you're both pretty. Now stop clogging up the thread with chatter.

>>35672037
Dont respond to him, it will only make things worse and bloat the thread
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>>35671849
Well depending on how this goes i may already be at a stopping point

>>35671933
Or, preferably, someone less annoying and more interesting


Although now that I think about it, a full lewd KLK quest would certainly be different and even in character.
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How many kill la kill quests do we need?
I think there are enought already.
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>>35672210
They've been over for months
It's almost like you rarely browse /tg/ or something or can't shift click in the catalog
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>>35672210
Please, there's been one thread in the last two weeks.
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>>35671835
>Bully the bellboy
Will this quest be bully central or a no bully quest?
Both options are fine by me.
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>>35672292
Exactly its enough,thats what I´m saying thank you.
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>>35671849

Move behind the bell boy, placing your hands on his shoulders, making him jump.

"M-miss Kiryuin?!"

"Miss? My, you're a smooth talker, aren't you?"

You press your bosom against his back and slowly run your hands down the side of his arms he's holding by his side.

"Why so tense, dear?" you whisper into his ear.

"I-I... Y-you're the b-b-boss..."

"Indeed I am, now follow my lead."

You grab his wrists and pin him to the wall of the elevator.

"Keep them there."

"Y-yes."

"Good, now let's unbutton this uniform."

Running your hands along his side, you feel his young, fit body in your hands. You slowly unbutton his uniform with skill and grace, one brass button at a time.

"My goodness, you're a fit one, aren't you? I like that in men who take care of themselves."

The bell boy doesn't say anything. Little panted breaths are the only things that come out of his mouth.

"Now... for the main event. If you do well, maybe you'll be more than a simple bell boy."

You reach a hand down to his pants, with one hand you give him a firm spank on the rear, now eliciting a little yelp from him. With the other hand, you grab the zipper, pulling it down slowly.

The elevator rings and a voice speaks out, "Fifth floor."

Straightening yourself up, releasing your grip on the boy.

"Well, thank you for getting me to my floor, have a good night." Saying as you leave the boy confused and flustered.

That was fun. Teasing people like that always leaves you a warm feeling inside, but you bet that poor bell boy was expecting a 'happy ending'. Too bad you don't have much time to play. Well, you can always make time.

[] Go all the way.
[] Business before pleasure
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>>35672850
>[x] Go all the way
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>>35672850
>[] Go all the way.
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>>35672850
>[] Business before pleasure
exactly
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>>35672850
>Business before pleasure

We had our chuckle, let let him feel awkward for the rest of the night
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>>35672850
Business before pleasure
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>>35672850
[X] Business before pleasure
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>>35672850
See
>>35672885

Denial is ecstasy. Not to mention he has done nothing to warrant such physical pleasure.
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>>35672850
>[X] Business before pleasure
Must stay loyal to our waifu
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>>35672884
>>35672885
>>35672902
>>35672921
>>35672927
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>>35672850
[X] Business before pleasure
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>>35672927
And then there's this trash

And /tg/ not going for lewd? What?
If it ever does happen, I hope the QM goes to read some of h 1d4 smut fics in Oder to get an idea of how to do it proper. I recommend scarlet.
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>>35672927
This is thread one.. how do we have a waifu?
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>>35672996
Our only waifus are our daughterus
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>>35672927
There still a chance for that. Well, you even missed a chance to do that earlier.


>>35672963
I'll give it a read. I can only use "This is my first time writing" for so long.
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>>35672963
Not everyone is a soulless slave to their dick. Other people fine meaning and enjoyment in doing things other than strangle thier meatcicle.

Personally I want this thread to be less smut, more crazy.
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>>35673015
Well I've walked in and seen that we're Slaneeshi essentially. So we better molest them.
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>>35673025
You're saying "Forget about the meeting. Have some fun" actually meant "Have some Houoooououomaru"?
Then I know what I'm voting for in the future.
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>>35673042
But anon! Ragyo is pretty much the whole package. Crazy AND smutty.

>theLink assez
the captcha speaks truth!
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>>35673042
You can have both.
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>>35673186
"I want only the most fashionable dress. It should also be able to transform into a full body skin tight catsuit with mech like features AND constantly stimulate my breasts, pussy and ass. Chop chop."
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>>35673255
seconded
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>>35673255
I'll totally not steal this idea for later.
Back to writing.
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>>35673255
That's definitely my fetish.
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>>35673255
She's absolutely into exhibitionism as an art form
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>>35673255
>catsuit
>it actually gives her kitty ears and a tail and paw print gloves. Her giant stiletto heals even have little paw prints on the bottom and it's got a little fur trip around the leg, arm, and neck cuffs
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>>35673606
YES! FUND IT!
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>>35672938

After walking a short distances down a very well lit corridor, you stand before a large back doors. As you enter the doors, opening to reveal a long, black room. There are lights that run along the sides of the room and above and below a long, granite table, giving the already gloomy room some needed lighting. In the middle of it is the aforementioned table that is surrounded by eight black leather chairs and one large white oval podlike chair that one more thing that would be suited best in a science fiction film that sits at the head of the table. This is your chair.

You move around to sit inside the pod, it's very comfortable for something so odd looking.

Hououmaru Rei enters shortly after you, "Shall I call in the other members?"

"Unfortunately, yes. Please do, dear."

Hououmaru leaves for the doors down the far end of the room, calling in the eight other executives of the Japanese branch to come in.

"Let’s get this other with." you say, running down a hand over your bust and resting it on your thigh.

She comes back into the room, followed by seven bald, fat and old men that look almost identical to the last. The eighth and actual last one however, has a full head of dark hair and looks too young to be an important member of REVOCS.

Each of the men enters, bows towards you and sit down around the table. Hououmaru moves to stand by your side, her oversized phone at the ready to take notes. Maybe you should give her one of those iPhones that are all the rage one of these days.

As one of the members was about to say something, you interrupt him, "So why have I been called to this meeting? I'm sure you fine gentlemen can handle the day to day workings of a fashion company, right?" sternly saying while glaring at the men. All but the youngest one bow their heads down.
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>>35673700

"W-well... You s-see Lady Kiryuin, there h-has been a breach..."

"Hmm? A breach?"

"Y-yes! Information about how we distribute our line of clothes and our backroom deals on buying out other companies has been leaked..."

"Do we know where the information was taken from?"

"Uhh… it was at..." he turns to face the youngest member around the table, pointing at him, "At this building."

"You, do you know anything about this!? Explain yourself!" One of the other men near him speaks up.

The man begins to sweat, "I don't know what you mean! My office is safe as all of yours!"

"Don't lie to us, boy! We have evidence that the leak came from your office! Your computer logs show you transferring large amounts of data to an outside source!" One of the other bald men says in a gruff tone.

You clap your hands loudly, "Silence!" A roll of thunder is heard in the distance. How fitting, you think to yourself.

The men all go quiet, turning to face you.

"It looks like I may have to discipline you, young man. I don't take matters like this lightly. Now, I'll give you a chance to explain yourself before deciding what to do with you." with a slight grin on your face.

The man shrugs, "I-I don't know what you m-mean! I-I did everything b-by the books, I-I don't know how a sp-"

He closes his mouth quickly.

A leak? In this company? This could end very badly if this information is made public, and this young boy has directly or indirectly weakened your plans by letting such information out. Maybe it's worth showing him and the others the price of incompetence within REVOCS. On the other hand, he is young. Maybe it was a one-off mistake?

[] Let him off.
[] Discipline him.
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>>35673732
[X] Discipline him.
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>>35673732
>[] Discipline him.
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>>35673732
Discipline and investigate

Also like the others are saying, read some books or short stories before you run again and always proofread before you post.
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>>35673732
>[X] Discipline him.
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>>35673732
>Discipline
Make an example, but don't kill him.
Break his pride and remold him as a new and completely loyal tool
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>>35673732
>>35673778
Seconding this interpretation
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>>35673778
>>35673606
>>35673255
Oh sweet sweet lord...
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>>35673752
>>35673763
>>35673773
>>35673774
>>35673778

She doesn't take leeks like this lightly...

>>35673773
Damn shame my proof reader has gone to bed.
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>>35673732
>>35673763 This is me

>>35673778
add this amended

>>35673817
AMEN!
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>>35673821
>leek
shove it up his ass
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>>35673817
This is completely sick, messed up, and all manner of unethical. Only a sick would allow this.

Lets do it anyway. My body is ready, my fear boner is armed
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OP: http://1d4chan.org/wiki//tg/%27s_Smut_Index
http://suptg.thisisnotatrueending.com/archive.html?searchall=Fuck+quest
https://archive.moe/tg/thread/35654335/
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>>35673989
>fuck quest
>a standard to be imitated
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>>35673989
>Fuck quest
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>>35673880
I agree, it's totally in character.
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>>35674007
>>35674021
>>35674030
Not him, but to be honest, I've always wondered what was wrong with fuck quest. It seemed to be very popular.
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>>35674007
For the lewd. It is absolutely not any sort of standard, but it is presented as an example of how to do lewd somewhat decently in a quest type setting

The moe archive is a sample of (mostly) great quest writing. It's floral enough to paint a great picture for the reader, but simple enough to quickly process and respond to.

The smut archive should be obvious. While there is a TON of trash, there are quite a few examples of genuinely good writing like that one anons mention of Scarlet.

>>35673821
If you need a proof reader to catch glaring errors like that even after reading through your own post before uploading it. It may be a good idea to do some writing exercises.
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>>35673817
"You're going to sit there. Blind folded and gaged with headphones. I will be sitting over here wearing this and pleasuring myself. You are not to move. Afterwards you will be whipped, receive a reduced sallary and shares, and we will perform a top down investigation of your records and personnel. If anything is amiss, you will be ousted from the board and charges will be pressed. Among hem slander and for leaking falsified documents. You will become a pariah and a social outcast and yet through all of it, you will know that you once had the pleasure of being in the same room as me. Of smelling my scent. Tasting it in the air. And that is all you will have."
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>>35673821

The last thing the young man in sees is a flash of your smirk before stand in front of him on the table, holding him firmly in the air by the scruff of his neck.

The other men around the table gasp, seeing you appear from one place to another so quickly.

"Gah... ah...ghhk!" he gurgles out as he gasps for air.

"And how does that make it any better, deary? Information like that could completely destroy this company that I built with my own hands."

"P-please..."

You sigh as you release your grip on him and let him land firmly on his feet.

"T-thank you, L-lady Ragyo..."

You kneel down to meet him at eye level, piercing him with your unnaturally red eyes as you read him like a book and smile.

"W-what is it?"

You grab him by his tie and pull him in for a deep long kiss, with your tongue swirling around in his mouth as he does nothing to stop your assault. Finally stopping to release him you say;

"You're fired."

"Wha-"

Before he can finish his sentence, you swing a needle blade you pulled seemingly from out of nowhere in front of him, sending his head flying into the air, landing in the middle of the table. Shortly after, a fountain of blood rushes out of his neck. The other men scream at the grisly sight before them.

The now lifeless body slumps down onto the floor, followed by silence.
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Soooo...
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>>35674843
>"You're fired."
>decapitates him
You should have set him on fire Ragyo, then the entire board would have been obligated to laugh at his demise.
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>>35674843

"Now, just to show you how serious I am, the next few things I'm going to say are going to be said in French." you announce as you stand from your kneeling position.

Hououmaru does a word for word translation as you speak. Truly this woman has many talents.
>"En tant que votre chef, je respecte tout ce que vous avez fait pour moi et pour cette entreprise, et c'est pourquoi je vous fais tous confiançe pour vous occuper des affaires et échanges de l'entreprise. Mais je vous promets, içi et maintenant, que si une situation identique se reproduit ultérieurement, le prix de votre incompétence a tous sera votre tête."

"As your boss, I respect everything you have done for me and this company, and this is why I put my trust into you all to take care of my dealings. But I promise you, right here and now, if anything like this happens again, the price you pay for your incompetence, I'll collect your fucking head."

Placing a foot on the severed head on the table,
> "Comme cette enflure, là. Maintenant, si vous avez quoi que ce soit a avouer, c'est le moment."
"Like this fucker here, now, if you have anything else to say, now is the time."

All the men stare up at you with terror in their eyes.

"This meeting is adjourned."
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And this will be the all from me for tonight.

I will take everything that has been said on board before coming back for part two.
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>>35675017
>I will take everything that has been said on board before coming back for part two.
>>35673778 <---
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>>35675034

Don't worry, plenty of men in the sea.
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>>35675051
I suppose.

Thanks for running.
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>>35674957
>"Like this fucker here, now, if you have anything else to say, now is the time."

*Raises hand
"Can I go to the bathroom?"
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>>35675017

Killing that guy aside (Which felt in-character, if a brash thing to do), this quest has promise; I'll try to be back next time.
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>>35675162
But what if he was a Nudist Beach agent?
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>>35675017
When exactly is part 2? I don't see a twitter.
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And suddenly everything is Kill Bill

So I guess Nui would be Mamba,
and either Satsuki or Ryuko would be The Bride.

Oh well, what shall happen next? Personally I was hoping for>>35673817 to happen
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>>35675212
So was everyone else that voted for it.
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>>35675201
Soon™.

I need to plan and well, git gud, I will invest in a twitter soon.
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>Ragyo quest
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I'm gonna ask, Will we be getting Pirate Wench Nui anytime soon?

http://youtu.be/hBh5kFy_T28
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>>35675295
Halloween is coming up, so I guess anything can happen.
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>>35675162
This
Decapitation did seem a bit extreme though.
>>35675236
Good to hear you're taking critique to heart. I'll keep posted to this thread for when and if you get a twitter. Looking forward to you improving and running again. Just don't pull a tentacle quest and start something somewhat interesting and disappear forever.
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>>35675212
>>35675234

Don't worry, I'll make a note of it, just need to work it in somehow.

>>35675295
Maybe for Halloween?
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>>35675386
The suit can happen sure. But making a tool is a bit out there as the guys head is cut off.
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Oh and this has been saved.

http://suptg.thisisnotatrueending.com/archive.html

It's the first one as of now as someone managed to save it for me.
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>>35675399
Ragyo will probably rebuild him as a cyborg with a Life Fiber head.
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>>35675399
>>35675467
Just stitch him back together with life fibers
Problem solved and even sort of makes sense in canon.
as long as we don't end up with any /x/ level sewing monster bullshit like that one session of SJQ
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We bothering to archive this at all?
Personally I'd wait until OP has a twitter so we know there's some committal.

>>35675384
It was the language used that was off.
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>>35675581
I'm working on making one as we speak.

>It was the language used that was off.
Okay, I'll take that on as well, constructive critique is best critique.
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>>35675627
Good stuff, looking forward to more, especially if you come back stronger and better.

>>35675581
Now that you mention it, I can't recall her cursing at all in the show. It has been quite some time since I last saw it though.
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>>35675627
Aaaaand now I'm off to find Ragyou 34, only to realize there's nothing new outside of pinups, then go looking for doujins only to see that there's still only that single one that features her and has great art, but I can't stand futa.
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And the twitter.

https://twitter.com/RagyoQuest

>>35675694
I don't think she did.

>>35675741
Have fun with that.
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>>35675889
Thanks.
Looking forward to the next session whenever that is.
I've got my fingers crossed for in a day or two, but I'm betting on next week at the earliest.
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And some sort of strange passive aggressive faggot archived it
http://suptg.thisisnotatrueending.com/archive/35671007/
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>>35675889
Watching, but not adding since I don't want my friends to know my power level.
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Thanks to running. Check out some of the guides on QTG. QMing's a tough business. Hope you stick with it.
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>>35671007

Really cool to see you running with this idea, Foron. Glad you decided to give it a go.

I'm curious to see if you use some of the noncanon quest 'villains' or will be making your own menagerie.

Partially because I'm curious to see how the players would handle a certain pesky flower/spider that refuses to be stamped out.

Or heaven forbid tormenting the players with Fate/Nui babysitting adventures
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>>35682542
No
No crossover cancer
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>>35682542
>This blatant "p-please write some fanfiction about me sandpie" begging bullshit
If I had any respect for you before, it's all gone now.
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>>35677439
Don't worry, I'll know about your power level~.

>>35678440
Thanks, I'm giving it a read.

>>35682542
I was planning on a cannon Ragyo adventures mainly because you hardly see much of her during the show, so, hijinks and mild lewd awaits, I'd hope.
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>>35682542
I want this, but only if we get to torture and either corrupt or kill his shitty little DONUT STEEL Mary Sue
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>>35684045
Please for the love of god don't just do a by the numbers "gotta follow the plot points of the show tit for tat!" shit that is rampant in every other KLK quest. Let us go off the rails and carve our own destiny.

>>35685844
I'd rather just not have it at all.
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session resume today?
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>>35687601
I could continue with a few odd posts, but I have nothing really planned.

>>35687300
So, a Ragyo alternate universe?
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>>35687651
Check out stuff like Bleach Quest (or the redux) or Eclipsed Moon Quest or even Sacred Jewel Quest to see how others handled anime quests while giving their players freedom. Are they the best quests ever run on /tg/? Far from it, but they gave their players the freedom of choice and changed the worlds to match accordingly.

If you try and railroad shit, you're a bad GM. Plain and simple. Same with table top. Same with questing.

Your players are in this world and they're in control of one of the most prominent characters. Think about how their actions will change and shape the world around them.

Add your own little twists and turns. Maybe some OC to keep things fresh. Do NOT force people along a set path with a few unimportant pitstops. That's not a quest, that's just fanfiction.

This is a game. Let people play and have fun yourself.
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>>35687756
Peter Parker Quest before the retcon is probably a better example. Just think that would happen if characters did certain things. For instance, what if we somehow found out that Ryuuko was our daughter and we managed to get to talk to her. What would happen? Suppose we found out that Satsuki was planning to betray us; what would we do? Maybe Nudest Beach isn't just a joke and an unfulfilled promise like they were in the show.
When it comes to planning have a basic idea of what you want to do, but sort of go with the flow and adapt things as they happen. It's less like writing a book and more like doing a choose your own adventure. Plan too hard and you'll hate yourself because players will almost always go off those rails.
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The problem with the KLK quests was not that the QMs forced the readers along a set path. The way the show's story is constructed forced them along it.

Ragyou wants to blow up the planet, and since you're not playing as her in the other quests, all you can do is side with her, or oppose her. Since Earth blowing up means a pretty shitty bad end, nobody chose the first.

This quest has the opportunity that others did not, simply because Ragyou is the PC.
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>>35687968
But she still wants to blow up the earth since she's under heavy indoctrination and probably close to 90% Life Fiber anyway. Wouldn't that leave even less of a choice?

If gives us adventure room in between, but the end goal is still the same. The only think that will change is what we did and how we got there.
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>>35687946
>>35687756

In short, have a basic plan but be willing to change things up when the players drag it one way or another. Don't make it into yet another author's attempts at fanfiction hiding it behind 'm-m-muh CYOA tho!'
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>>35688000
Her motivation for doing all this is left unexplained in the show (which makes it worse than it could've been), so it's up to the QM what her goal in doing all this is.
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>>35687756
Dude bleach quest was pretty high up there on quests run on /tg/ Cosgrove knows his shit.
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>>35688141
Knew.
He hasn't been able to nail it down again since. Also Peter Parker quest was just flat out better constructed. In both cases however the writing and overarching narrative are rather bare.



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