This quest is basically a HotD x Lovecraftian Horror crossover. If you've played Bloodborne, you will have a good idea what this will be about. But this has girls with huge racks so its infinitely better.You're the protagonist of an apocalyptic world, where you need balls and gals to thrive and survive, as you pick up bigass guns, hot chicks and superpowers along the way. You'll need them, because all kinds of jank bullshit monsters are coming for you.To start, select three initial belongings. The most popular items will be chosen and we'll start the story.-First Aid Kit: A boxful of useful, albeit consumable medical items. You also know how some basic medical knowledge.-Toolbox: A boxful of tools you can use to craft and fix things. Includes things like a small saw, screwdriver, hammer, etc. You also know some engineering and craftsmanship basics.-Hot Chick: A harem member to start out with. As such, she will have a very large initial affection amount, and have some abilities of her own, and she can develop alongside you.-Blasting Spell: You know how to cast a single very powerful blast-type attack, powered by eldritch energies. Usage causes fatigue, among other, unknown side-effects. You're also familiar with magic.-Badass Katana: A single, good quality melee weapon. Includes sheath. You're also well-versed in melee combat.-Buttkicking Crossbow: A ranged weapon, with a quiverful of ten arrows. You're also well-versed in ranged combat.
>>39850423>-Hot Chick: A harem member to start out with. As such, she will have a very large initial affection amount, and have some abilities of her own, and she can develop alongside you.Hoping for a Saeko Busujima type character
>>39850423Blasting Spell: You know how to cast a single very powerful blast-type attack, powered by eldritch energies. Usage causes fatigue, among other, unknown side-effects. You're also familiar with magic.
>Select 3:So: Hot Chick, Magic and Melee Weapon.Give her gigantic breasts.
>>39850423Hot chick.We should first concentrate on most...Important aspect in every story.
>>39850653>>39850423Magic, Katana, Hot Chick.
>>39850423>-Blasting Spell: You know how to cast a single very powerful blast-type attack, powered by eldritch energies. Usage causes fatigue, among other, unknown side-effects. You're also familiar with magic.
>>39850545Woops didn't see the three part-Badass Katana: A single, good quality melee weapon. Includes sheath. You're also well-versed in melee combat.-Toolbox: A boxful of tools you can use to craft and fix things. Includes things like a small saw, screwdriver, hammer, etc. You also know some engineering and craftsmanship basics.
>>39850423>Hot Chick>Blasting Spell>Toolbox
>>39850423>-Toolbox:I've played enough SS13 to realise vitality of such item.>-Hot Chick:Waifu is a get.>-Blasting Spell:because "You're also familiar with magic." can never go wrong
>>39850423>Bloodborneif>-Hot Chick:makes it, and I'm sure it will, there's only one acceptable option as to who the gal will be
>>39850423>-Toolbox, -Hot Chick, -Buttkicking CrossbowWe can make ammo and other fun things with the tools. Good to have a homie to start with. Then some range and quite combat.
>>39850777I thought it was supposed to be a hot girl, Not that creepy doll
Guys...Magic is obviously going to be a sanity drainer......That's one of the most important things we'll need in an apocalypse
Hot chick, Tools, Magic it is then. Also Saeko personality and gigantic tits.>Writing
>>39850423>HotDWill we meet lots of retarded liberal strawmen who die while trying to hug monsters? It's not HotD without those.
>>39850849>Also Saeko personality and gigantic tits.ALL PRAISE THE CHEESECAKE!
>>39850423>>39850611Changing as i did not notice pick 3Blasting SpellBadass KatanaToolbox
>>39850912To late mate
>>39850423>Hot Chick>Blasting Spell>Badass Katana
>>39850423>Hot Chick>First Aid Kit>ToolboxLet's go the masculine girl, feminine boy route where our character is a non-action guy with a lot of non-combat skills while she fights. She's also a dom in bed who will push us down and mount herself on our cock.
>>39850951Vote's already over>>39850970You can fuck off
>>39850851Can't wait for some otaku-type to run out into a wild field of eldritch abominations because he played saya no uta and wants to recreate haiyore nyaruko san.
>>39851057Bonus points if both us and Not!Saeko laugh our asses off
>>39850905Nothing creepy here, good Hunter.
>>39850970>tfw that is your fetish>tfw when you try to look for it you just find bitches whipping guys or stepping on their ballsStill a bad idea.
>>39851087to a degree, background character quest had that at the beginning, with MC being a scrawny nerdling and best girl handling the muscle
>>39851149Annnnd we're still saying no to it
>>39851078It can't be helped.
>>39851076I know its personal preference, but I prefer to imagine here as not!Meiya. They're pretty much the exact same character, though.
>>39850970Only thing I like about this idea is having a combat/non combat dynamic. It'll be fun to play as a strong support instead of a rip-and-tear badass. Help encourage character development of the mc to become that later. Also it incentives the idea of gaining more combat-capable girls in our party, mainly for strategic defense.
>>39851212The vote's already over
>>39851278I know. I'm not changing the vote. What I'm suggesting is that for our character play a support role with Saeko doing the combat.
>>39851296Or we can both do combat since we know magic
Support, combat, yadda, yadda.As long as I get my gigantic tits waifu and harems, I am happy
>>39851296I vote we let Saeko peg us
>>39851339This man(Or woman, I don't judge) knows what they want in life!
>>39851348I vote you off the island
>OP already ded Thank God
Jeez i hope you faggot's didn't scare OP away.....
>>39851361but that episode doesn't happen until after main series... unless that's a Survivor reference
Day 1, Evening:You're at the school. This morning, the apocalypse broke loose, and all kinds of amorphous creatures and beasts now lurk the streets. You've taken refuge in the gym, for now, after everyone else has paniced and rum away somewhere else.Before going to the gym, you've found a toolbox in the janitor's closet. Additionally, at the moment the outbreak begun, before the beasts took the streets, you seemed to have "learned" a special power. Via mentally spelling a certain nonsense, you've discovered you can shoot out a blast of purple energy. Your hand still feels sore after the first time you used it to blast the gym door open, but after that, you haven't dared to use it again.At the hole you blasted open, you saw a familiar figure. Humanoid. As it drew near, you instantly knew who it was from her figure. The school's boob freak, Mary. Before you can ask her questions, she runs towards you, jigglig frantically along the way until she slammed herself into you, boobs-first, and gave you a warm, squishy hug.This is the first time she had ever interacted with you, and its pretty darn weird. Well, you did know she didn't really talk or socialize much anyway, she was a pretty silent type. You try to pull yourself out, stammering "Excuse me...?" but she replies with a deep kiss onto your lips and a tighter hug, and then, finally, she releases, and stands next to you, looking downwards with an intense blush.What do you do now? You can choose two.>Barricade the Gym>Explore the Gym>Wander into the School>Make out with Mary>Ask Mary questions (specify which)>Write in
For some reason I cant upload pics to my posts. Sorry for the delay.I wanted to post this pic as a Mary ref: http://no.booru.org/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=9310
>>39851654>Barricade the Gym>Ask Mary questions :"Okay seriously, Why did you just kiss me?"
>>39851654>>Explore the Gym>Make out with Mary
>>39851654>>Barricade the GymGym will be our temporary HQ>Ask Mary questions (specify which)What was all that for, don't get me wrong I enjoyed it, but still what the fuck?
>>39851654>>Explore the Gym>Barricade the Gym
>>39851183Just don't forget to get her hairclip back.
>>39851654>>Barricade the Gym>>Explore the Gymin this order
>>39851691Those are kinda ridiculous man.....Might wanna tone it down, Also unless you decide to do this quest in a unserious manner i highly suggest you don't just have it be everyone magically and for no reason craving the MC's dick, Put character first, Develop their personality but have a basis for it first
If someone could post the pics I link, that'd be great, because I cant.
>>39851654>Barricade the Gym>Explore the GymWe should make sure nothing bad is in here (or gets in here) first.
>>39851654>>Barricade the GymCalm your tits girl we don't know each other that well.>Ask Mary questionWhat was that all about and you you have a clue about what's happening?
>>39851654>>Make out with Mary
>>39851753>Also unless you decide to do this quest in a unserious mannerDid you not read the intro?
You start by asking her "Why?..."She remained silent, and starts to look aside. "The world is ending" she said. "I wanted to do that before it did."And then she stared right at your face with a deep blush, as if her face would speak louder and clearer than her words. You blink a few times, and then take her word for it."If the world's ending, we need to keep ourselves safe." you say, in quite a masculine, protective manner. You start to gather heavy sports equipment, such as benches, stacks of matresses, mobile basketball hoops and you clump them strategically around the doors and the hole you made. You feel... Safer. Mary helps out a bit as well, and as she does, you notice that she has a short sheath on her back of japanese design, holding a small katana. >Write in.
>>39852211how did you get that katana
>>39852211Ok This place is more or less secure for now. Wanna explore? Also where the hell did you get a katana from? I mean it's good that you have a weapon but, where?
>>39851753I went to the "Gigantic breasts" tag and took the one I liked most. I'm open to further suggestions/tweaks though.
>>39852236>>39852237Is this not japan?
>>39852266Yes, Doesn't mean there are just katana's lying about though
>>39852237Third.>>39852238Have her breast size just a little smaller than the image, I doubt she'll run far with those around.
>>39852288I would imagine that they are not hard at all to get though.
>>39852266Its Japan, yes. Animu Japan, but Japan.
>>39852300>Have her breast size just a little smaller than the image, I doubt she'll run far with those around.Yup, Ya ask me she's a walking corpse.....Okay you know in what way i mean.....
>>39852328Considering how hard Japan cracks down on weapons? They can be. You really shouldn't have them on school grounds. That being said her having one may save our ass, and her tits.>>39852238Smaller might be good, too big and her movement speed will drop a lot. Also carrying her is nigh impossible with how top heavy she is. So if she gets wounded we're screwed.
>>39852377On the other hand her family might totally have them lying around and Since the world is ending I doubt anyone in school cares.
>>39852416True but she was at school, meaning she'd have had to bring it here one way or another.
>>39852328>>39852377Could be boken, MC just can't tell on first sight.
>>39852329So no guns unless military, yakuza, magical girls or crazy gaijin ?
Lets go with this then http://no.booru.org/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=9303
>>39851795I don't even understand how that's considered attractive. Those are way too big
>>39852433>>39852445Man we just learned magic for no reason at all, why would we be bothered by a sword?
>>39852485Still makes me think "how doesn't her spine snap?"
>>39852492We're a level 1 mage who burned off his one spell for the day. Also the is mythos shit overuse of magic means death or worse.
>>39852485Ehh, it's better.
>>39852492>we just learned magic for no reason at allMagic>why would we be bothered by a sword?Not magic
>>39852485that's... actually even worse
>>39852485Still in the same casualty rating if you ask me
>>39852515But we dont know that. We literally learned like two minutes ago. Compared to that a sword that must be pretty common in your county would be nothing.>>39852549Exactly how often do you see not magic? Every day.
>>39852512"Gigantic Breasts" is a requirement, due to >>39850653There will be more girls in the future, don't worry.
is the pic really the point where your suspension of disbelief breaks?
>>39852583Uh.....Only one person voted for that though....>>39852592Yes, Yes it is
>>39852592Ok lets do this. Post your own pics, I'll be writing. Decide amongst yourselves.
>>39852636Dont forget that "Saeko Personality" and "Gigantic Breasts" are still requirements.
>>39852583>literally one vote for oversized baloon tits>it's canonIs this a ruse?
>>39852592yep, even the doll animated by MAGIC would be easier to accept
requesting next harem member to be a loli.>>39852668first come first serve.
>>39852636my suggestion, decent size but not enough to get in the way.Tactical boobs
>>39852694I second this motion.
>>39852694>first come first serve.Is always a shitty move, It creates a shitton of problems.Also drudging through safebooru atm
>>39852636Here's an amazonian women.
Ok found a pic i think fits
>>39852636Closes I could find, in my pics, with out going non-modern.
how about this
>>39852805Going to have to second this
>>39852824She looks strong. I vote for this one.
>>39852805ThisAnd those aren't burrito's captcha....
"How did you get that katana?" you ask, trying to make time as you can hear faint roaring outside."It was in the principal's office" she said. "When the outbreak started, he asked to go there for, uhm, an 'official matter'. Then I got it. That's it. I don't believe more details are required"She started to cover her breasts with her arms nearly unconciously.Appearently the question isn't a comfortable matter. You remember from the corner of your memory that the principal really liked history, so him having a katana on a shelf - or a replica of one, along some other decorations of that theme wasn't too unlinkely.>Write in.
>>39852934Yeah I really don't want to know either. Lets explore make sure there isn't any other ways in here. Maybe we'll get lucky and find some supplies while we're at it.
>>39852636Here's a good one. She looks /fit/.
>>39852934>"So...Want to see what we can find here?"Aka explore the gym for stuff
>>39852934>Start exploring the gym for a weapon
>>39852934>"It was in the principal's office" she said. "When the outbreak started, he asked to go there for, uhm, an 'official matter'. Then I got it. That's it. I don't believe more details are required">She started to cover her breasts with her arms nearly unconciously.official matters is code for molestation by middle aged man?
>>39852934>Search for more supplies.The gym teachers office might have a first aid kit.
>>39852934Loot the place like we're of African origin.
>>39852992Okay that made me laugh way to hard, +1 internet point to you anon
You nod, and detach yourself from the conversatiom by saying "We need to be prepared. I'm gonna check what we have on here."You wander around, finding the shelves with sports equipment. Most of them were harmless - they designed to be as such. Balls of all kinds, hoola hoops, foam matresses, badmington rackets, etc. But then, you found a couple of wooden baseball bats, along some baseballs and mits. They weren't the best weapons around, but they would do.You also raid the teacher's office, finding several boring papers about reports and budgets, and a incomplete first aid-kit. It had some desinfectant, sticky tape and cotton swabs.The roaring outside continued. You could hear a high-pitched cry outside, followed by a sudden and loud thump onto the ground and then the sound of splatter. Then all was silent again.>Write in.
>>39852934"I's the principle still around?">>39852914Pic related
>>39853166To the rooftop, let's get overview of the situation.
>>39853166>"Well....That doesn't sound good....Any ideas on what might be happening?"
>>39853166Go to rooftop survey situation. See if the teacher had any binoculars too.
>>39853166Well shit, best arm our selves and see what's out there. Any chance we can make it to the roof or something?
>>39853166Find a window and see what happened outside.Alternately talk with Mary and comfort her.Headpats are optimal.
>>39852805So this won??
>>39853386I think it might be a mix of>>39852805And>>39852696
>>39853408Just wondering because>>39852805 has three votes including the poster as a vote btw, Whereas>>39852696 has two including the poster again
If anything I go for this>>39852696
>>39852636>>39852696>>39853576Variety is the spice of life.you need some boob monsters, you need some C cups, you need some DFC.stop arguing about which is better when the obvious answer is all of the above at once
You try to find a way to the roof, but from in here, you couldn't. Instead, you decide to use a bench to boost yourself up to a window and look out from there.You saw the frontal area, and the gate. It was getting quite dark, and the street lights weren't turning on. Most of the floor and walls was coated in red splatter and gore of different tones, but it was otherwise oddly deserted.You go back down and wander back to Mary, who was trying to make calls with her phone. "Lines are down" she said, before storing away the phone again, looking nervous. Your reply to that was to approach her and hug her, and in the embrace, pat her head. You couldn't help but to notice how ample her massively generous chest really was, pressed into yours."Thank you" she said, in a warm, small voice."Everything will be OK" you add. "We can figure things out."Your stomach rumbles slightly. You haven't had dinner yet, and at this rate, you likely won't, unfortunately.>Write in
>>39853630>Check our bag for our Bento, We do have our bag right?
>>39853630>Plan out and execute a scavenge mission to the cafeteria
>>39853630Barricade that window. It's a way in.
>>39853630Plan out then execute a sneaking scavenger mission to the cafeteria.
>3 confirmed>>39852785>>39853519>>39853576>2 probable>>39852763>>39852914This pleases the ellie
>>39853630We have tools and a bat, look for a vending machine. We shale try to break into one, quietly if possible.
>>39853630Check the staff room for food, failing that check our bag.If no food is found, prep for mission to cafateria.
>>39853706I was just voting for boob size, not the girl as a whole
>>39853630>>39853695This. If stealth fails, I'm sure we can resort to violence.This is reminding of the beginning of SMT: If.
>>39853695>>39853683Great minds think alike
>>39853750I guessed, but L-85 size is best size.
>>39853386Lets go with this>>39853611You're right. I'll compromise. Plus I suspect samefagging and post-gaming so I'll play it safe for now and make a better system for deciding this shit next time.Mentioned winner appearance but with initial monster boob size, because I've already written it as such and I dont like retconning. We can always add more girls later on, so how this girl is isnt much of an issue. Plus, she could always die and be replaced *shrug*.
>>39853812I hope this is a hard quest where any survivors we encounter could potentially die
>>39853804Well you never really started, fuck knows why you'd even mention your dropping it considering you've had no input. So good, loser.
>Next girl deciding systemWrite a single detail, and a 1d2. If you get a 1, its in. If not, its ignored. Rerolls allowed. The more active and popular an option is, the more diecrolls it gets, hence probability, but it isnt tyranny of mayority either.You may start rolling as we play, until the story introduces her.
Rolled 1 (1d2)>>39853892Smart
Rolled 1 (1d2)>>39853892a good medic
Rolled 1 (1d2)>>39853892Muscular
Rolled 10, 2, 2 = 14 (3d10)>>39853812>Plus, she could always die and be replaced *shrug*.How hard is the quest going to be?
Rolled 1 (1d2)>>39853892Loli
Rolled 1 (1d2)>>39853892This sized rack>>39852696
>>39853922>>39853930OH FOR GODS SAKE NO
Rolled 1 (1d2)>>39853892Amazon
Rolled 1 (1d2)>>39853922
>>39853892Reaaaaal good system you got going there buddy......See what kind of mess you just made?
>>39853903>>39853912>>39853915>>39853930>>39853934>>39853944>This many 1sWhat the holy fuck?
Rolled 1 (1d2)>>39853892That's one detail, right? Not necessarily one word?>Track team sprinter
Rolled 1 (1d2)>>39853973>No Legs
>>39853989Because we have any fucking clue what that means, Also really good goddamn system you got going, Let's EVERYONE FUCKING INCLUDE THEIR FETISH TO THE POINT WHERE IT'S AN UNHOLY ABOMINATION!
Rolled 1 (1d2)>>39853951>>39853941yes
>>39853989How about roll 1d20, all rolls over 10/15 are selected.Conflicting results have the one with the highest number selected.
Rolled 2 (1d2)>>39853892Fast
>>39853989Honestly you should make the girls or this will devolve into circlejerking fetish bait fast.
>>39854037Holy shit the first 2 in a dozen rolls
>>39854029How about no? Because shit that people don't like might be included in this then, Say someone includes a scat fetishist and he rolls a 20, Y'see why that's a bad idea?
Rolled 1 (1d2)>>39853892Yandere
Stop rolling. I'll limit it beforehand next time but yeah, we got a girl!I might have to exclude some shit.
>>39854083Exclude loli for the love of god also get a goddamn better system
>>39854075Oh, that's a good point.>>39854083Can we please not have a loli.
>>39854083Don't exclude loli
>>39854083Get a better system and no loli
>>39854083Can we have the loli?
>>39854083Loli means useless death bait, please exclude, at least until we can drag her around without getting us killed.
>>39854083How about we keep the system, but no fetishes are allowed, only actual traits.Not allowed>loli>amazonAllowed>smart>fast>>39854113>>39854111What's wrong with a loli? I down for banning all fetish-claims so we don't end up with a personified /d/ but what is so horrifying about a little girl? If OP wants to add a token loli then let him.
How about we have a loli with high-magic abilities? Would you not complain about protecting her then?
>>39854144Because a lot of us arent pedophiles in hiding
>>39854144I agree with getting rid of the fetishbait shit,Also do you really REALLY expect a little kid to survive a apocalypse? No they're probably some of the first to die
You decide to try to access the cafeteria. You look outside through the window once more, seeing nobody, and then you squeeze yourself carefully out of the gym through your barricade. Mary follows clumsily, having to hug her boobs down with a hand to be able to push herself though. Once she exits, you both dash across the asfalt to the cafeteria, close to the walls and the shadows of the late evening, but as you do, you suddenly feel a deep warmth nearby, and then you hear a grunt, and a exhale that blows onto your neck. You turn around, seeing nothing, but then that "nothing" roars into your face, pushing you into the wall.Mary draws her blade.>Write in
>>39854243Grab the things neck and force it away.
>>39854182>>39854189>>39854208See >>39854170It can work if she's helpful in the setting. Or we could be an Eldritch monster Saya no Uta-style. A loli doesn't always have to be sexual fetishbait. It could be platonic love, you know. A symbol of innocence and hope in an apocalyptic land.
>>39854243>>39854243Blast it faggot.
>>39854271Let me guess you're from /a/ and your a pedophile?
>>39854243>Hold him down so Mary can finish him.
>>39854243Cast magic missile on that SOB
>>39854306Why does it matter who I am? We're on 4chan. Our identities don't matter. Why don't you stop with the ad homs and reply to my suggestions?
>>39854243Study what the fuck 'it' is. We need to know how to kill it or haul ass.
Actually, what IS the name of our spell? If this is supposed to be an anime-based quest we'll need names for all special attacks.
>>39854416That's obviously the first one that came to all of yours but to be honest it sounds really lame in a Lovecraftian setting.
>>39854428I'm not good at naming magic shit, so suggestions would be nice.
>>39854428>all of yoursall of us*I need to sleep.
>>39854428>a Lovecraftian settingYou would prefer Nigger Missile?Fish Missile?The Color From Outer Space?
>>39854517>The Color From Outer Space?I'm down for this. Right now we only have purple but we will learn new colors along the way and each has a special effect.
>>39854517>Tekeli-li Missile>Negromatic Sphere>Color Spray From Outer Space
You mentally chant the verbal pattern that was previously branded into your mind, and sparks started to grow from your hand, and you directed it towards the origin of the push, and BOOM. A discharge of alien energies emerged from your palm, hitting *something* at point blank, causing it to roar in pain loudly. After the blast, your right hand (the one used in the blast) feels terribly numbMary tried to attack "it", failing miserably as she slashed around, sending her mammoth juggs ondulating like wild flan under her chin. She then raced to the location you blasted it at, and attacked the air, with no effect."Where is it?!" she exclaimed.>Write in.
>>39854560Re-group and head for the canteen.No reason to waste time.
>>39854560Continue with the food mission, but proceed with care.
>>39854560Retreat to the food place.Also magic has a rising cost, try not to use it too much.
>>39854560We best move!We must find a place with food and some way to funnel 'it'.
"No time to waste!" you say, and you march on towards the canteen. Mary nods, but she continues to look around, cautious and her katana up and ready to strike.You arrive at the cafeteria's front door, and you try to open it, but its locked. You wander off to the back doors, and again, locked. There is no immediate way in.And whatever that invisible thing was, it was back. You could see what seems to be a faint wolf's head with a tremendous, protruding brain. And that brain was starting to spark, similar to how your hand did before the spell. You could identify that it wasn't the exact same spell you use, but no other details."I can hear it" Mary says, looking around, despite the floating wolf head being in plain sight. Couldn't she see it? "But where is it?" she wondered, with a hunter's voice.>Shield Mary>Use Mary as a human shield from the attack.>Slam the door, beg for help.>Intercept the blast with a blast of your own>Write in
>>39855194>Slam the door, beg for help.Hoping someone locked it from inside
>>39855194>Intercept the blast with a blast of your ownU wot m8?
>>39855194Have an excerpt of what a hunters voice sounds like?>Intercept the blast with a blast of your own>AIM FOR THE SHINY BRAINY BIT
>>39855194>>Intercept the blast with a blast of your own
Let's try not to use our magic too much. It seems to have a rising cost and "unknown side effects". We could possibly be sacrificing our humanity.
Rolled 70 (1d100)>>39855194>>Write inAlright if you can't see it ... I will hit the balls with this bat at it!I know it sounds dumb, but trust me. I will aim you to where it is and do my best to say what it's doing.
>>39855194>10 pound Cast iron pan shield
You charge up another bolt in your left hand - your right feels like toast. But the brain's bolt shoots out before yours, and you're inable to parry it completely, but you do manage to deflect a large part of it. The other part, scathes Mary's head, messing up her hair a bit in that area, but otherwise, apparently unharmed.She and staggers in place before standing up again, clumsily, and uncoordinated.The head remained there, charging up another blast.>Write in
>>39855608>Tell her where it is, What it's doing and where it's brain is quickly!
>>39855608>>39855674backing, charge it with the bat and bash it while we're at it.
>>39855608I'm here to shank and smile!>Smash its head in with a homerun.
>>39855608Bash its face in with the bat.
Both of your hands hurt like if they had been pressed under an anvil, but you grabbed the bat anyway, aimed, and slammed the fucker in the skull, stopping the spell and causing it to fall to the ground with a loud slam, defeated.Mary however, had been damaged. Mentally.She sheathed her sword back in with a clumsy demeanour, and when her eyes look upon you, she makes a wide, innocent smile, and wobbles up towards you and gives you a boobs-first hug. It wasn't easy, given that she had to smoosh her ridiculous front into your chest in certain way before he could wrap her arms all around you, but she insisted until she did."...Mary?" you ask, surprised and concernes."Mewi want huhg" she says. "Hug, hug you, more, more"The brain damage had put her in something akin to drunk-like state, of some kind. Some neurons just weren't working, similar to what alcohol does to your brain - so currently, she had no kind of social inhibitions or shame whatsoever.You're in front of the barricaded cafeteria, a bit hungry, your hands both hurt quite a lot, and Mary had been brain damaged by the previous blast attack.>Write in.
>>39856175Bang on the cafeteria door, shout to whoever's inside (hopefully someone's there) that we're injured, have a mentally injured girl, and just defeated a monster
>>39856175We need to RTB.Get our asses back to the gym and baracade the shit out of it.
>>39856175Hey someone let us in ... we have ... candy!
>>39856246SecondGod i hope Mary isn't going to be like this for long...
>>39856246Are there windows? can we smash one in?
Theres a girl in there, but Im thinking of how to choose her details. Either I go with the results of the bs system I made last time or I give options and you choose, hrm.
>>39856882Or make her yourself?
>>39856882Give options we choose, Or make her yourself
>>39856882Just make her and we'll deal.
>>39856882Come up with your own. You're the QM, and it's your quest. If a lot of people don't like her, you can always kill her off or sideline her. I expect this will have a massive harem so you can take your time figuring out "our" tastes.Alternatively, just continue to make harem members as you wish.
>>39856984as long as she isnt complete shit, i think she'll be ok.
Alright. I'm going to end it here, and continue tomorrow. For then I'll have someone thought out.So, how was it? Anything I can do to improve?Where did it suck and where did it go well?
>>39857363Try to have things thought out beforehand so things make sense. For example, the girl inside the cafeteria. It's barricaded, so clearly she must have some level of physical strength. It wouldn't make sense for her to be some kind of weak book nerd.Also, you should make us roll for combat and other actions. That's pretty much a must-have for quest threads.
>>39857363create you characters yourself, /tg/ cannot be trusted to make their own NPCs.
>>39857363When is the next thread?
>>39857363Getting a twitter should be a top priority for youIs Mary going to be braindamaged because of this? Because i can tell you she's deadweight then and less interesting as a characterMaybe cut back less on the over the top kinda stuff? Most quests i've seen that do that kind of stuff either mellowed out or died and i honestly like the setting you came up with
>>39857595Tomorrow, similar time.I'll have a Twitter by then.
This getting archived?