> We're following on from thread #19 since it got cut short.> Hearing Shun's story won over last time so we'll start from there. Don't worry, it's not a terribly long bit but does have some story.With each of the three rival magical girls left doubting themselves and their objectives in the wake of Makoto's urgings, the only mystery left remaining appears to be their patron; the deceased magical girl, Black Pepper, of whom you know or understand virtually nothing. Still, with things going well, Makoto and the gang occupy their time with the inter-scholastic festival, in the hopes that Osataka will beat Ichida.> Threads #1-8 Archive: http://archive.loveisover.me/d/search/subject/mahou/> Threads #9 onwards: http://suptg.thisisnotatrueending.com/archive.html?tags=Maiden%20White> Alt Archive: https://archive.moe/tg/search/subject/maiden%20white/type/op/order/asc/> Twitter: https://twitter.com/questqyubey> Ask: http://ask.fm/Qyubey> Status: http://pastebin.com/2g7PVTxfYou are Makoto Kiry-"Dammit! Let me tell my weird, dog-transforming-into story, Makoto!" Shun whines, shaking her fists up and down."Oh, uh, sure." You say. Shun smiles and clears her throat.-----You are Shun Tanakawa; a bombastic and outgoing schoolgirl. You might not be the sharpest tool in the shed, but you're by far the strongest and most reliable. You bear the power of the magical girl Striker Vermilion against the vile monsters that plague this earth!"That's how you describe yourself?" Makoto asks, raising an eyebrow. Oh, like he can talk.
>>40667012"Whew..." You sigh, pulling the cheerleader outfit from over your head and tossing it to the side. Cheering on for the wrestling squad was a decent workout, especially in something so tight-fitting. Sadly not so much in the chest - Yui evidently didn't have this outfit tailored with you in mind - but hey; if it gets Makoto into his female form and a tight-fitting outfit, it's all worth it. As for the aftermath, Yui and Makoto might have some fun back there but it really isn't your kind of party. Back in the council-room, you're already changing back into your uniform. The male one, of course; you don't get to wear guys clothes very often without having the excuse, so you're taking advantage of it."I guess it's easier for me than Makoto though." You mutter, clipping the skirt on and throwing your clothes over Yui's desk. It'll hold her papers down, you think."Hnng~!" You grunt, stretching out your arms in the empty room. They'll probably be occupied for a while so you've got some time to kill. Unfortunately this ain't exactly culture week where you can just slack off in a student cafe or the like; most students are off performing or participating in sport. Normally something you'd be all for but rest has to come at some point."Well, if they're busy maybe Hiroko and Shizuko..." You mumble to yourself, shutting the door behind you and walking down the hall."Oh, OH, OH! Umeki too! She wanted to see the competitions earlier so I'll bet she's at the arena!" You say, hitting a fist into your hand. That dumb arena Mai built for the fight you guys never had."I wonder if she's still mad about that." You think as you run down the stairs towards the ground floor. "I hope so, hehehe~"[1/2]
>>40667071It's towards the back of the school, but you know a shorter path rather than just running around the entire building. You head out for the pool area, where the swimming competition took place, and slide the door open. With little movement wasted, you run at the fence and grab hold. With a firm grip, you hoist yourself over it, legs kicking out to the side as you vault. For a few moments, you look pretty cool... until your foot hits the fence and you faceplant, that is."Grfrgl..." You spit out some sand and grass from your fail and quickly glance around. "Whew, noone saw that." You say, relieved. Strange, you've jumped plenty of fences higher than that, so why did-"AH!" You squeak as you look behind you and see a red and orange cat, sprawled out on the ground, twitching. It doesn't look visibly injured, but it does look dazed as all hell. Well... that'd certainly screw up a jump, maybe your foot didn't hit the fence? Though you've gotta say; a little cat like this taking a sucker-kick from you and remaining conscious? That's one tough animal.> Freak out.> I'm so sorry, little kitty! *hug it like Makoto*> *Poke it* ...Well, it's moving.> It's gonna turn me into a dog! *punch it!*> It's fine, it's fine. *go to arena*> Dumb cat shouldn't have been sitting there.
>>40667161> I'm so sorry, little kitty! *hug it like Makoto**She must demonstrate that she has been learning the art of hugging. Also that she's totally adorable when no one is looking
>>40667161>> I'm so sorry, little kitty! *hug it like Makoto*this seems her.>against the vile monsters that plague this earth!>[beasthood intensifies]aww man, you just reminded me there's no greatclub in bloodborne.
>>40667161> *Poke it* ...Well, it's moving.> Dumb cat shouldn't have been sitting there.> *hug and pet kitty while whispering apologies*
>>40667161>> I'm so sorry, little kitty! *hug it like Makoto*Warm my heart, please!
>>40667161>It's gonna turn me into a dog! *punch it!*The meta in this option is too great.
>>40667161>*Poke it* ....Well, it's moving>I'm so sorry, little kitty! *hug it like Makoto*
>>40667161>so sorry, little kitty! *hug it like Makoto
>>40667183>>40667258>>40667333>>40667339>>40667550>>40667601>>40667646> I'm so sorry, little kitty! *hug it like Makoto*Writing>>40667258I beat Bloodborne. Shun would not do well (at first). Yui or Makoto as the doll seems fitting though.
>>40667806"Aaagh! I'm sorry!" You immediately squeal, running on the spot in a panic. "I'm so sorry, little kitty!" You reach down and pick the cat up, holding it carefully as you hug it to your breast. This always makes people better when Makoto does it, so maybe it'll work for you. True, your skin isn't as smooth and lovely as his, but you've got the strength to make up for that! You squeeze the cat until you feel it squirm back."Oh, you're awa- ACK!" You screech as you feel something dig into you. You wince, but continue the hug. It continues to scratch you and growl."Rrrg- LET GO!""Eh?" You blink, just before a particularly nasty scratch causes you to recoil and unlock your arms, freeing the animal. It lands a few feet from you and pants, still turned away. That couldn't have been real."Did... did that cat just speak?" You ask, sitting dumbfounded on the groun------===-----"What!?" Makoto asks, staring at you in surprise."Hey, no interrupting!" You snap back at him, puffing your cheeks up. Makoto shrugs and sits back. Umeki doesn't seem to interrupt; mostly because she's marking out at the thought."Talking... little cat..." She mumbles, her hands intertwined and stars in her eyes."Uh... Umeki?""WHY WOULD YOU KICK IT!?" She shrieks at you. If not for her personality, you'd swear she was ready to punch you."I-I didn't mean to... Can I keep going?" You ask. She sighs and nods. "O-Okay, but just so you know, this cat was a jerk."[1/2]
>>40667936Faced with your surprise and curiosity, the cat actually looks back in surprise, then glares."...Ngh, you heard.""AAH!" You squeal, slamming your hands on the ground and leaning over to it. You're on all fours now, but just due to amazement. The cat flinches away from you."A-Are you like some hyper-intelligent animal, or magic?" You quickly ask. "Are you our magical familiar thingy!?"The cat slashes at your nose."AAGH!" You tumble back, holding your face and rolling back and forth."That's a level of hell I would never volunteer for." It mumbles, pulling its claws back in. Dammit, this little kitty has got some nerve. It continues to stare at you, eyes squinting whilst it thinks. Is it trying to figure something out about you? Oh, it's probably trying to figure out who you are."Well, little... talking... cat, my name is Shun Tanakawa!" You introduce yourself, sitting cross-legged in the dirt.> What's your name~?>> Can I call you Whiskers? Or Mochi!> So how do you talk?> Are you a magical girl?> Don't be a jerk and turn me into a dog.> Well, it's been fun, cat, but I got some hot babes to meet.>> Unless you're like, secretly a hot cat-girl. Then I can stay~
>>40667993> So how do you talk?> What's your name~?> Are you a magical girl?
>>40667993>> What's your name~?>> So how do you talk?
>>40667993>> Are you a magical girl?> Well, it's been fun, cat, but I got some hot babes to meet.>> Unless you're like, secretly a hot cat-girl. Then I can stay~
>>40667993>Don't be a jerk and turn me into a dog.Come faggot, do it!
>>40667993>> What's your name~?>> Well, it's been fun, cat, but I got some hot babes to meet.>>> Unless you're like, secretly a hot cat-girl. Then I can stay~
>>40667993> What's your name~?> So how do you talk?> Well, it's been fun, cat, but I got some hot babes to meet.>> Unless you're like, secretly a hot cat-girl. Then I can stay~
>>40667993> What's your name~?> So how do you talk?> Are you a magical girl?>> Ohh are you, secretly a hot cat-girl?
>>40668017>>40668030>>40668055>>40668096>>40668121>>40668140>>40668249> What's your name~?> So how do you talk?> Well, it's been fun, cat, but I got some hot babes to meet.>> Unless you're like, secretly a hot cat-girl. Then I can stay~Writing>>40668096No meta story breaking por vu, anon. Though it is in character for Shun to just rewrite history to make herself look cool.
>>40668310"What's your name~?" You ask, presenting a cute smile to the cat. It continues to leer at you"...Cinnamon." You stare back with the biggest eyes you can muster, and it takes a step back. "W-what?""THAT'S SO CUTE!" You squeal, hugging it again. "Cinnamon! Widdle Cinnamon!""Aaagh! Would you STOP THAT!?" It shouts back, digging claws in again. You call out in pain as it frees itself once again. Dammit, how does Makoto manage all these hugs?-----===-----"Well I don't hug an animal that already attacked me, Shun." He replies bluntly. You leer at him."Then clearly I am the braver... more... brave hugger... than you!" You say back. He's still trying to figure out what you said. The fool!-----===-----"So, uh Cinnamon, how do you talk?" You ask, perched on your knees. "Are you a magical girl?" You ask. Makoto always said magical girls could 'sense' one another, but you haven't tried it yet. You try staring really hard at the cat, puffing up your cheeks and squinting your eyes. You don't know if this is actually working, but you have a gut feeling this cat is super magical!"W-What's wrong with your face?" Cinnamon asks, genuinely concerned."I'm trying... to sense you." You say, twitching your fingers as if casting a spell. The cat is unimpressed.[1/2]
>>40668504"Right... You're one of Maiden's friends, aren't you?" It asks. "Maiden White?""Huh?" You blink."Hm, I see. Given how casual you are I'd guess she's still fine. That's good." It muses, scratching behind an ear."Whadda you want with Makoto?" You ask, crossing your arms. With Pepper and Mai, you can't be trusting every magical thing that pops by. It smiles, however."Nothing that need alarm you. Just here for an old friend." It flicks its tail back and forth."Bein' all vague and stuff, you better not be trying to trick me. Cause it won't work." You tell the cat. Hopefully it buys that, because you have no idea what it meant. You stand back up and stretch out."Well, it's been fun, Cinnamon, but I got some hot babes to meet." You tell it. "Unless you're like, secretly a hot cat-girl. Then I can stay~" You say with a smile, bobbing back down again."I wouldn't say that's a secret." It replies. OH!"So you ARE a magical girl!" You point at it. Detective Shun has solved the case! "So you can transform into one then?""Of course." It says, laying a paw at your nose. "See for yourself.""Hu-" You feel a sudden jolt of strange sensation through your body, as if someone just threaded a needle through your veins and robbed you of all volition for the moment. You twitch and sudden as your vision blurs in and out, and you collapse to the ground. The sensations wash over you as you see the cat continue to hold it's paw to your face, eyes awash with arcane light.> Help! Help me!> Jerk cat! *punch it*> D-Dammit... *try and phone call Makoto*> Run away!> W-What are you doing?
>>40668504>Well I don't hug an animal that already attacked meI dunno. I recall a mindless berserk armor that Makoto clung to once.
>>40668551>> Jerk cat! *punch it*or at least attempt to
>>40668551> Jerk cat! *punch it*
>>40668551>> D-Dammit... *punch it*W-What are you doing?
>>40668551> W-What are you doing?> Jerk cat! *punch it*
>>40668551>W-What are you doing?>WOOF
>>40668551>> D-Dammit... *try and phone call Makoto*This has to be adorable because we know it wont work. I suspect we have paws.spess cat?
>>40668551>Jerk cat! *punch it*
Best quest is on right now. I'm conflicted. I want to participate, but I also love reading these at work to kill the time at my shit job. wat do?
Well we're paused for now whilst I get some work done. Hopefully won't take too long.
Alright anons, what kind of Dog did Shun transform into?Personally, I'm inclined towards Corgis.This is totally not an excuse to post pics of dogs.
>>40670265Something big and manly. Though I think she'd make a good golden retriever.
>>40670265What about a papillon? They tend to be hyperactive and barky.
>>40670360I'd go for any dog with red fur
>>40670717So, an Irish Setter?
>>40670265A somewhat large dog, maybe a pit bull terrier?
I dunno about big. I kind of like the more small and yappy for Shun.
>>40670753KeplieSetters are too floppy
>>40671362Hey, that looks nice. Also, back and writing now.I don't think the breed matters that much (nor would she be learned enough to recognise it herself [Shun: uhh, brown dog?])
>>40671680Well, what is Shun's favorite breed anyway? Wouldn't she default to the first thing she thinks of when she hears "Dog".
>>40671717Probably something big and reliable, with lots of hair.
>>40671735It's anime land, you could probably make up a breed, such as a golden retriever but dyed red.If Osataka is in Hokkaido, huskies and akita are big, reliable, and fluffy
>>40671778Da fuck?!?!?!? No seriously the hell is that? It's like a lion raped a dog
>>40671803No you can't break the first law of immersion. Magical girls, gender swapping body, traps, talking animals, and sentient robots are okay. Miscolored dogs? Come on man, you're breaking my immersion.
>>40671948This brings a good point, we have it on good authority that Shun probably dyes her hair to look cool. Does hair dye propagate to fur or other transformation paraphernalia?
>>40671964at what lvl does it evolve?
>>40671778> Shun: That's a lion, silly anon.>>40671773> Probably. And Makoto can be dressed up all in fluffy white."AA-gh, d-dammit..." You slur as you attempt to pull yourself back up. "J-Jerk cat!" You yell at Cinnamon, still holding onto you. She doesn't respond, but you know you have to do something. She could be trying to steal your powers or even kill you. With what strength you can muster, you flail your arm up and try to swat the cat away. Cinnamon sees your strike coming and quickly jumps back, evading you. With her paw removed, you feel the sensations start to subside and your strength return, but you still feel incredibly groggy. You slowly try and rise to your feet, but find yourself unable to get very far, just collapsing back down onto your hand and legs."D-Dammit," you think, breathing hard, "she must have sapped my strength somehow." You glance back up at her, growling as you do so."Hm, turned out better than I expected." She comments, tilting her little cat head. This little-"ARF!" You bark at her. Wait... were you planning to say that? That's a terrible come-back, even for you."Arf, arf! Oooo!" You howl at the cat. You cough and gag, but that's all you can muster up. Maybe... maybe if you try again you------===-----"Okay, okay, I think we've all heard the 'realising you're not normal' bit before, Shun. How long did it take you?" Makoto asks, rudely interrupting again. Your eyes dart around in your head."...N-Not very long." You lie. You actually chased Cinnamon around for a while before you noticed. Yes, on all fours and barking. In retrospect, it's probably good you were a dog at the time. "Anyway, once I realised-"-----===-----"[Change me back!]" You bark at Cinnamon, managing only incoherent noises, perched atop a fence just out of your reach. For whatever reason, she turned you into either a puppy or a small dog, and far less nimble than her. You try and swat at her tail as it swings back and forth.[1/2]
>>40672025That looks like a midpoint evolution, on its way from cute dog to Kodiak bear.
>>40672202"Now, now, calm down," Cinnamon sighs, watching you. "I can't have you running off and telling everyone about this. Be a good girl and maybe I'll think about changing you back." She suggests. You continue growling at her."...Plus whatever time I think is fitting for kicking me when I was napping." She adds. Oh, that's it! You lunge at the fence and bite it, swinging it back and forth, quick enough that Cinnamon can't react and tumbles down onto your side. With her on the ground, you give chase through the school grounds. The two of you dart through a hole in the fence and quickly end up outside, running across roads and through gardens. In your smaller size, you move a lot quicker but have a lack of experience running like this, and Cinnamon easily outpaces you."Haa~ haa~ [Stupid cat...]" You wheeze, having chased her for at least an hour or two. You can't see her on the garden you stopped in, did she escape?Glancing just ahead, you see her on the sidewalk, out of breath herself. Heh, thank god your endurance carried over! You burst through a hole in the fence and lunge at her. She looks just in time to watch you slam ontop of her, pinning her to the ground."[Finally! Beat you!]" You think, panting happily and wagging your tail. Wait, no, stop that, you're supposed to be angry."Ugh, I said it before, but I'll say it again..." She mutters, closing her eyes as you feel a weird pulse coming from her. Your vision is suddenly flooded with a orange light that flickers, pushing you upwards. When it solidifes, you find yourself sitting on the head of a naked woman, who quickly plucks you from it."Indomitable, aren't you?" She asks. Despite the human form, she still seems to retain some feline features; notably the ears atop a massive mane of hair that reaches the floor, claw-nails, and a long tail. For the most part, though, your eyes are drawn downward to her naked form. > Change me back!> Pant.> Pleeease!> Bite her.> Whimper.
>>40672269>> Pleeease!We may be a bitch, but we're not a bitch.
>>40672269> Whimper.> Pleeeeeease!> Lick her.
>>40672269>wan wan>>bark bark bark
>>40672269> Change me back!> Whimper.Makoto would never do lewd things with us again if we stayed a puppy! Probably.
>>40672295>>40672305>>40672324>>40672331>>40672355>>40672380> Pleeease!> Whimper.Writing
>>40672269>> Whimper.>> Pleeeeeease!>> Lick her.it is frustrating knowing this can not work
Shun is dangerously cute. We need to save these things for special occasions.
>>40672269 cinemon...black pepper... we are on the lookout for spices
>>40672551So you could be saying that we're looking for the Spice Girls, am I right?
>>40672564God damn it, Carlos.
>>40672564someone has too much thyme on their hands.
>>40672564> DAMMIT CARLOS>>40672423As aroused as you could be about a naked woman holding you, you're much rather be human for this. You wag your tail and try to look adorable to Cinnamon, whimpering sadly."Hmph, trying to melt my heart?" She asks with a smirk. Her fingers let go and drop you to the sidewalk. "Another time, and maybe I would be all over you. But not right now."You glare back up at her as she scratches the ears on her head, still maintaining some animal mannerisms. A few people in the street are also staring, but she doesn't even seem to mind their gazes, regarding them with either disdain or boredom. Cinnamon holds out the palm of her hand as it flashes with an orange glow."The spell should hold you until I'm done on this planet. It's safer if you just stay like this, no doubt you'd run to Makoto's rescue if I changed you back." She mutters. What the hell is she saying? Not from this planet? Does she... does she have something to do with Pepper? Now that it occurs to you, their names are fairly similar."Just keep out of trouble for a few days." She advises you, throwing out her hand as it bursts with feathers. You jump back in surprise as the rest of her follows suit, shifting into a brilliantly orange bird that quickly takes to the skies, leaving you behind. Fast as you are, you doubt you can catch her like that. Not only that, but you feel exhausted and those scratches from earlier still sting. You take a deep breath and think. There's nothing you can do right now, you should head home and try...Wait, where are you? You chased after Cinnamon, running through gardens and across roads, but this place doesn't look familiar. There are people around, but it's not like you can ask for help. Even if Makoto or Yui passed by, there's no way they'd tell it was you."[A-Alright, calm down]," you tell yourself, "[Calm down, y-you just have to find something familiar]."[1/2]
>>40672710Why do we feel the need to waste time cumin up with terrible puns?
>>40672713You spend the next few minutes scouring the street for anything you recognise, but your unfamiliarity combined with a different perspective makes it impossible to tell. S-Stop panicking, you're fine, y-you're fine. You're just lost, stuck as a dog, and no-one knows you're here."... [S-Shit]." You whine, holding your head to the ground as you shiver in the evening air. You're getting hungry too; why did you skip lunch!? Oh, right, to cheer-lead with Makoto... who you'll never see again. "[W-What do I do, what do I do!?]" But just then------===-----"STOP IT!" You hear Umeki cry out, just as she hugs your head to her chest. Makoto snorts in surprise, and you feel a similar shock as she nuzzles your head against her bare flesh. "Stop it! Stop it! Even if you aren't a puppy anymore, I can't stand to hear something like that!" She whimpers, actually tearing up."T-That's just what I was getting to; when you showed up!" You quickly assure her, making no effort to move. Hell, you're naked and being hugged by a similarly-naked Umeki; this is heaven. She blinks and realises, face still wet with tears."O-oh, right. Guess I was pretty fortunate, huh?" She comments, releasing you and holding her hands together. Somehow it feels like she was the fortunate one..."Anyway..." You say, leaning back over towards Umeki as Makoto watches on with a smile.-----===-----"No collar." Umeki comments, holding a hand to your little neck. Bless you, Umeki Yasuka! You, who among the hundreds passing by, actually stopped for you. Momo rubs her hand on your head, softer than you expected, with a childish smile as Yuuki and Sen are behind her."She looks pretty scratched up." Momo comments, smooshing your face."Oh, poor dear." Umeki says, picking you up. "Do you want to come with us?"> YES *wag*> Licks.> There's a crazy magical girl from outer space!> It's Shun!> No, I'm fine. *act cool*> Use your focus to transform!
>>40672742>Licks.>>Lick the kitty
>>40672742> YES *wag*>bark bark>>bark bark bark bark
>>40672742>> YES *wag*>> Licks.
>>40672742>> YES *wag*>> Licks.>> Awoooo~
>>40672742>YES *wag*> Licks.> There's a crazy magical girl from outer space!
>>40672722no idea. they're not even that oregano.
>>40672795Stop it, I can't dill with all these puns.
>>40672766>>40672774>>40672778>>40672783>>40672792> YES *wag*> Licks.> Dog noisesWriting>>40672710>>40672722>>40672795>>40672820Are you happy, Carlos? ARE YOU?
>>40672837Don't worry, we'll Gingerly stop doing those awful puns.
>>40672837"[YES]!" You exclaim, though only through animal noises. How can you say no to Umeki the savior!? She smiles and hugs you close, allowing you to happily and thankfully lick her face."Aw Ahaha!" She laughs, smiling even wider as you express your gratitude. "You're so cute~!""What kind is it?" Momo asks, holding her hand up and grabbing hold of your-"ARF!"" I was right, it's a girl." Momo says, crossing her arms proudly. "I think she's in heat too."----===-----"STOP LAUGHING, MAKOTO!" You exclaim as he rolls around, giggling to himself. Umeki taps her fingers together and blushes."S-Sorry," he giggles, wiping an eye, "Momo got to confirm your gender twice today.""Mnn." You growl, puffing up your cheeks."You got to lick Umeki though." He comments, pointing at the pair of you. "That was nice, wasn't it~?" He asks, smirking."Well, I didn't know it was Shun." Umeki mentions, glancing at you. She quickly freaks though. "N-Not that you being the dog would have changed anything! I'm happy you licked... Ohh..." Umeki just settles for burying her head in her blankets. It's too adorable.-----===-----"Here we are, little pup." Umeki says, gesturing to the shrine in front of you. You've... already been here."Come onnn, Yuuki!" Momo whines, hanging off of Makoto's little brother. "Do it, use the foci!""Argh, I already told you, I-""I agree!" Sen exclaims, also smiling. "I can't wait to see what powers it has.""I..." Yuuki whimpers, backing off as the two girls advance on him, smiles wide. That little wimp..."Hehe~ You kids have fun, but don't stay up too late. School tomorrow." Umeki waves to them, heading inside with you. "Haa~ it's nice Makoto has her little friends.""[Or his little harem]." You woof, unintelligeble to her.[1/2]
NSFW: http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=2600458"Who's a good girl? You are!" She exclaims, scratching you behind the ear. S-Shit, now you understand why dogs like this so much, heheuerhee~"Oh, you like that, don't you?" She asks, moving her fingers to your belly. "What about... here!""[Y-Yeahh~!]" You pant, letting your head just sit in her lap until-----===----"Ohhh~" Umeki whines, her head digging deeper into the blankets."And then what did she say?" Makoto giggles, enjoying this gleefully. The little minx..."We didn't scratch all that long, because Umeki-""THE BATH!" She exclaims, pulling her head up with a pillow atop it.-----===-----"Hmph, you're filthy." Umeki comments, shutting the door to the bathrom behind her."I suuure am~" You think, still on a high from being scratched. She sets you down and you stretch out for a few seconds, just before a shirt covers your face."Hehe~ Sorry." Umeki giggles, pulling it off of you. Your eyes suddenly bulge as you gaze upon the magnificent sight of Umeki's bare breasts; shining and full in the dim, moody light of this traditional bath. Her innocent smile and happy face only adds to the charm, causing your legs to wobble and nose to bleed."[N-N-Naked...]" You whimper, staring up at her chest."Oh, even from the nose; that must have been some scuffle you got into." She mutters, wiping it with her finger. "It'll be faster if we both bathe, right?" She asks you, not expecting an answer.> BE SILENT.> You make a lot of sense, Umeki.> I...I...I...> Noooo, she's too pure!> Run, you can't take it. You'll die!
>>40673046> Agh, edit. "It's nice Makoto has her little friends" supposed to be Momo.>Writing too quickly. Too many M names.
>>40673112>> You make a lot of sense, Umeki.>> I...I...I...
>>40673112>> BE SILENT.
>>40673112>wag tail>wan wan
>>40673112> You make a lot of sense, Umeki.> Wait...> Run, you can't take it. You'll die!
>>40673112> You make a lot of sense, Umeki, but...> THE PURITY, I CAN'T HANDLE IT.captcha no das lewd
>>40673112> BE SILENT.
>>40673112> You make a lot of sense, Umeki.> I...I...I...> Noooo, she's too pure!
>>40673112>> Noooo, she's too pure!
Little weird, considering we now have a character named Cinnamon, but too good to pass up.>>40673136>>40673148>>40673149>>40673150>>40673164>>40673168>>40673264>>40673268>>40673296>>40673310> You make a lot of sense, Umeki.> I...I...I...> Noooo, she's too pure!Writing>>40673168It's official, quest makes robots horny.
>>40673320D-Do you have to it ears?Grandmas Boy reference.
>>40673320That poor cinnamon roll. Surely this profane Earth has already smothered its lustrous battery body and glinting glaze.
>>40673442Robot ears. Damn phone auto correct.
>>40673320Umeki's right; bathing separately would take up unnecessary water and time. Clearly the only logical choice is for you both to bathe, and as close as possible-"Wan wan wan!!" You bark, grinding your face against the floor as Umeki strips down further. Nooo, this isn't right! She's too pure, you can't possibly soil her by taking advantage of her lack of knowledge. With that in mind, you proudly sat outside the bathroom for the entire time, not taking a single peek at the naked Umeki within. She was very proud of your decision to-"You're not buying any of this, are you?" You ask Makoto, who just stares at you with a blank face."Nope.""Right..." You say, hanging your head. Umeki scratches her cheek, blushing slightly."Well, it's not that bad, I think." She assures you. "We're both girls, after all.""Y-Yeah, good point. If it were a public bath, it'd be no big thing at all." You affirm, nodding. "Totally normal!""Mhm, I'd be glad to bathe with you anytime, Shun. Just ask~!" She says, nodding. This time, you hide under the covers. My heart... Too pure, too goddamn pure!"If anything shouldn't you be more self-conscious about me?" Makoto asks, pointing to himself. "I am a boy, sitting with two naked girls." The two of you stare at him for a moment."I-It's really weird, isn't it?" He asks, sweating a little bit. You promptly flip up Makoto's skirt and watch him squeal, pushing it back down. Umeki might have missed it, but you saw everything. How lewd, Makoto, going all naturale."Nope." You say. "You're too feminine to be worried.""No, not really, you're quite lovely." Umeki shakes her head."But-""Sorry Makoto." You say with a shrug. "The way you look, I kind of doubt you'd draw any suspicions in a ladies bath.""Nnngh... wanna bet?" He mutters to himself, looking down.> ...Hoho, you BET I DO!> Hehe, nah.-----===----[1/2]
>>40673585So, uh, yes, you did end up bathing with Umeki- BUT in your defence, you never once tried to look. Not that you had to, Umeki made sure to scrub every inch of you and that meant holding your small body very close to her."Haa~" She sighs, leaning back in the bath with you sitting on her chest. Like this, you can feel her breathing beneath you and the slick, wetness of her bare skin. Just below the water line, you know her privates lie, but you're so embarassed you can barely move."Oh, poor thing. Must be terrified of the water." She mumbles, still showering you with love and hugs. Dammit, if only you were getting this as a human~! The bath seems to last just long enough to not kill you and she soon towels both of you off. Haa~ you survived, at least now she'll put you outside and you can calm do- Why is she carrying you into her room?"It's much warmer in here, do you want to sleep with me?" She asks innocently. Okay, now you can die happy. Effectively frozen and unable to reply, Umeki takes it upon herself to tuck you into the covers with her, keeping you close at hand and safe. M-Maybe staying her pet wouldn't be so bad, you think as you slowly drift off to sleep, the feeling of Umeki's breasts at your paws...-----===-----"And, uh, t-that's about when you showed up, heh." Shun finishes, trying desperately to avoid Umeki's gaze. "So uh, C-Cinnamon sure is a concern, huh?""That was a beautiful story, Shun." Umeki comments, rubbing Shun's back and smiling. She tugs the blanket over her head again, hiding a no-doubt pure red face. You sigh, tilting your head as you continue to hold your skirt down against any more surprise upskirts from Shun.> You really are way too pure.> Transformation focus... sounds dangerous.>> We need to befriend her so she can show us how to transform better.>> Call Robo about her.> No idea how you turned back?> Still want to be her pet?> Man, why can't I sleep with Umeki?
>>40673601> ...Hoho, you BET I DO!> Transformation focus... sounds dangerous.>> Call Robo about her.> No idea how you turned back?
>>40673601>> ...Hoho, you BET I DO!>> We need to befriend her so she can show us how to transform better.>> Call Robo about her.> Man, why can't I sleep with Umeki?
>>40673601> ...Hoho, you BET I DO!> You really are way too pure.> Transformation focus... sounds dangerous.>> We need to befriend her so she can show us how to transform better.
>>40673585>> Hehe, nah.>>40673601>> Transformation focus... sounds dangerous.>>> Call Robo about her.
>>40673601> ...Hoho, you BET I DO!>> Call Robo about her.> Still want to be her pet?
>>40673601> ...Hoho, you BET I DO!>> Transformation focus... sounds dangerous.>>> Unless that's something we can do already.>> Call Robo about her.> No idea how you turned back?>> Sleep?> You really are way too pure.> Secretly be heartbroken about why we can't sleep with Umeki.
>>40673601speaking of foci where is shuns bat? and phone... kinda important
>>40673619>>40673621>>40673622>>40673623>>40673652>>40673664>>40673678>> ...Hoho, you BET I DO!> Transformation focus... sounds dangerous.>> We need to befriend her so she can show us how to transform better.>> Call Robo about her.Writing>>40673678She lost her clothes when she changed back, so probably back at school.
>>40673585>> ...Hoho, you BET I DO!> Transformation focus... sounds powerful.>> We need to befriend her so she can show us how to transform better.>> Call Robo about her.> Maybe Robo can answer why you turned back?> Man, why can't I sleep with Umeki?> Maybe if you wanted you could still be her pet?
>>40673601> ...Hoho, you BET I DO!> You really are way too pure.> Transformation focus... sounds dangerous.>> Call Robo about her.> Man, why can't I sleep with Umeki?
>>40673714>>40673717And these, I guess.> +Whining about sleeping with Umeki
>>40673712>>40673722"Hoho~" You smirk, watching Makoto stew in his own inadequacies, "you BET I DO!" You say, pointing at him. "Next time we're at a public bath, you're coming in the female side with me!""Shun!" He squeals, blinking. "That's insane, I'd-""Oh, that sounds like fun!" Umeki claps her hands together. "Think of all the things we could do in a big bath together.""Yeah, think about them, Makoto." You order him, smiling as you prop your head up with a hand. Makoto stares ahead for a second before covering his crotch with his hands and looking away. He sure thought about that.-----===-----"Sounds a transformation-focused... focus." You say. This is getting needlessly obtuse. "Sounds dangerous. There's no telling who or what she could be now.""Yeah, and it sounded like she was gunning for you, Makoto." Shun adds, looking concerned."Lotta people have been lately." You sigh, grimacing. "If she's here to support Black Pepper, we could be in some serious trouble.""Unless..." Umeki juts in, surprisingly. "W-We befriended her?""What?" The two of you ask."W-Well, you did that with all of us!" She points out, defending her suggestion. "Even Mai and her friends don't seem beyond friendship. If she truly wanted Shun dealt with, she wouldn't just turn her into a dog. She'd..." Umeki gulps, "D-Do worse."It's a decent point; she could have done a lot worse to Shun. Pepper seems restricted by her 'death' in some way, but Cinnamon seems free to roam. There's no reason why she wouldn't turn Shun into a rock or a slug or something, unless she didn't want her to be like that permanently. Specifically for you, maybe."It would be nice to learn more about our transformations." You think, rubbing your chin. "But she said it'd last for a 'few days' with Shun. You turned back in less than one.""Heh, maybe I've got like super-resistance or something." She suggests.[1/2]
>>40673880"Or... you slept." You suggest. For your crew, sleeping seems to be a reset trigger, but not so for Mai and hers. If Cinnamon was the same, she wouldn't expect sleep to revert her. Shun blinks."Oh, or that, if you think I'm lame, I guess. You're just mad I got to sleep with Umeki, aren't you?" She asks, smirking. You flinch and attempt a smile."N-Not at all." You lie through your teeth. She keeps smiling."Maybe we can all have a sleep-over sometime?" Umeki says, trying to defuse the situation. You already had one and she slept alone then, dangit."L-Look, that's not important." You say, standing up and opening the door. "You two get dressed. We still have school, y'know?""Ugggh!" Shun groans, throwing herself back under the covers. "Mry clrthes rr at scrrl." She grumbles."Then throw something on and get them later." You sigh, slamming the door behind you. With your phone in hand, you call up Robo. "Robo? Do you know a magical girl named Cinnamon?""Another one? Getting the data on Pepper was difficult enough." He replies over the phone."Well she has transformation powers, and we think she's an accomplice.""...I'll see what I can dig up.""Please be quick about it." You say, flipping your phone down. You'd like to minimize the amount of crazy magical girls as much as possible. You hear the door behind you slide open as Umeki emerges, clad in a simple robe. It looks good on her though. Shun follows behind, also dressed in a similar robe."I miss my jacket." She mumbles, trying to get comfortable in the robe as you hear the kids thundering down the hall."I gave it to you, Yuuki! You can't say no!" Momo whines, pushing against your brother, Sen behind her."I said no, come on!" He whines back, pushing against her. The focus is between them; sounds like Yuuki gave it up. Pity, he would have been cute.> Alright, break it up you two.> Come on Yuuki, do it!> Momo, just take it back.> Ignore the idiots.
>>40673930> Alright, break it up you two.
>>40673930>> Alright, break it up you two.
>>40673930>> Alright, break it up you two.we can find someone else deserving not to mention he can still dress like a girl anyway.
>>40673971I vote for the store clerk girl.
So, now that Shun knows, is she mischievous enough to try and cause tent pitching all day long, or is that more something Yui might try?
>>40674003i second this motion
>>40673930"Yuuu-ki!" Momo continues to whine, acting like a spoilt brat. Considering her upbringing, that'd probably be an un-spoilt brat though."There are better people to have it, Momo! Give it to them!" Yuuki answers back, pushing the orb back onto her."But those people are dumb!" She argues."You have no idea who they are!" He argues back."Yeah, cause they're dumb!" Flawless logic.Sen seems to be on Momoko's side (unsurprisingly) but is a little wary around you, hiding behind the two of them without talking. She looks pretty adorable in a pyjama dress though, you have to admit."Alright," you sigh, "break it up you two... HEY! I said break it up!" You call out to the pair. Unfortunately, they're not heeding you right now; far too absorbed in their own quarrel. You growl and quickly reach down towards Yuuki, trying to tug him away. His robot strength prevents you from budging him though (so why is he struggling with Momo!?) and you step back."Dammit, don't ignore your nee-san!" You whine, throwing your hands up and down."You mean nii-san?" Shun asks."Y... Yes." You look down, realising your mistake. Thankfully, Umeki steps forward."Momoko Yasuka!" She yells in a stern voice. Momo freezes up and looks up at Umeki in fear. "Stop this, RIGHT NOW!" She demands."B-But...""Right. Now." She seethes. Momo puffs up her cheeks and keeps trying to foist it into Yuuki, but just slower. That's... that's not helping, Momo."Oh, for heavens sake," Umeki says, snatching the focus. "If you neither of you can act like an adult with this, then no-one gets it!" She exclaims, glaring down at them. The two of them are just staring at her with their mouths open."...What?" She asks, raising a hand in front of her mouth. She glances at you and Shun, similarly gaping wide."The focus..." You mutter."Binds on touch." Yuuki completes. Umeki looks down at her hand to see the orb has vanished."Where did it-" Then she bursts into light.END OF SESSION
>>40674045>>40674003They can share, i'm sure.
>>40674082AWWWWW YEAH, CHAMPAGNE YEAHMAGICAL GIRL ONEE-SAN UMEKI
>>40674082>>40674105 nope it seems they cannot
time to teach Umeki about lewdness
>>40674128NO. She is too innocent.We must go about this gently and lovingly....in time though, she'll probably end up on top.
>>40674082I blame Carlos.
Found another idolmaster character that looks like my mental image of female Makoto. This series just keeps on giving.> Status: http://pastebin.com/342hhN8H> Twitter: https://twitter.com/questqyubey> Ask: http://ask.fm/QyubeyAaand that's this thread to a close. The Shun flashback was fun, just because I wanted to introduce Cinnamon properly. She has appeared a few times before now, but never been lingered upon. Friend or foe, remains to be seen.Did not realise until now the villains were going to be Spice Girls. I started out with Zodiacs, then said "eh, that's overdone... Hm, flowers... oh, spices sound cool!"Did not... realise until now.Also, Umeki has a focus. Won't find out what she becomes until next thread though, which I'm still tossing up whether to run this Saturday. Friday will be my birthday, so I'll likely still be hung over or tired (or building my computer). Will announce on twitter.Anyway, thank you all for attending! Shun says woof.
>>40674212I do hope she turns into the shrine goddess, ears and tail. But completely lewd in her purity
>>40674242Well, it's been a while since someone corrupted/awakened, but as a refresher:No inhibitions, all desires and wants made manifest.How repressed do we think lovely, little Umeki is?
>>40674212>"AAAIIRJGH!"Oh god does it hurt.Also I think I figured out Makoto's mom's secret. Her real name isn't Hana.
>>40674257Makoto is HanaAoi is RomiEveryone is their own mother.
>>40674250>No inhibitions, all desires and wants made manifest.What were Makoto's wants and desires again?
>>40674364i believe it was murder Mai as slowly and painfully as possible up until we got Yui back then degraded to merely wanting to beat the crap out of her and now i think we're close to wanting angry hate-sex
>>40674414Is that it though? Yui's focus makes her more open about wanting ropey fun times, but Makoto didn't really have any overwhelming desire come to the surface when he first transformed, except I guess to save Robo?
>>40674250Thanks for running as always.having cute animals seems too obvious, maybe all she wanted all along is to see the world outside the shrine?>>40674364Fashion? Sex? Sexy Fashion?
>>40674443stuff is only brought to the surface by corruption. It has been hypothesized that, should we corrupt, we would go merciless Templar mode
>>40674364Befriending EVERYONE to the point where EVERYONE is FRIENDS with EVERYONE.
>>40674546but where would we get a magical laser canon with enough firepower to blow up the earth?
>>40674519I like that theory. Judge Kiryoka sounds pretty badass, but I think it would work better if we had the suit to go with it.
>>40674635I personally think Dame Kiryoka sounds better. Knight if you want to be more neutral.
>>40674719Judicator KiroyokaFor JUSTICE
High-fantasy half-breed harem anime?
>>40674781umeki needs elf ears