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With each of the three rival magical girls left doubting themselves and their objectives in the wake of Makoto's urgings, the only mystery left remaining appears to be their patron; the deceased magical girl, Black Pepper, of whom you know or understand virtually nothing. Still, with things going well, Makoto and the gang occupy their time with the inter-scholastic festival, in the hopes that Osataka will beat Ichida.

Additionally, Shun Tanakawa encountered yet another magical girl that may be an old ally of Black Pepper. Not that the group had time to linger on that idea- as Umeki Yasuka mistakenly activated the unbound foci, and has begun a transformation!

> Threads #1-8 Archive: http://archive.loveisover.me/d/search/subject/mahou/
> Threads #9 onwards: http://suptg.thisisnotatrueending.com/archive.html?tags=Maiden%20White
> Alt Archive: https://archive.moe/tg/search/subject/maiden%20white/type/op/order/asc/

> Twitter: https://twitter.com/questqyubey
> Ask: http://ask.fm/Qyubey
> Status: http://pastebin.com/342hhN8H

You are Makoto Kiryoka; a teenage boy with a penchant for getting into strange situations. You bear the power of the magical girl Maiden White against the wicked souls that seek to terrorise the innocent.

> Bear with me, computer issues abound for my next few weeks, but I'll try to keep sessions going.
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>>40864876

The shrine erupts with an arcane plume of energy. A dull reddish hue streams out from Umeki's body as she howls a transcendent shriek; somewhere between surprise, pain, and joy. You and the others each step back, blinded by the sudden influx of energy and light that erupts from her form. You can barely hear yourself think over the noise, nor truly place yourself in the situation. But as striking and as overwhelming as the power feels, it ebbs almost as quickly as it began. Your eyes still blink, involuntarily, still blinded by her brilliance. Yuuki flashes his eyes - perhaps rebooting them - but Momoko, Sen, and Shun are not so capable.

"Umeki!" You manage to gasp out as your vision returns, finally catching a glimpse of her. When someone first binds to a focus, they generally corrupt (or perhaps this would be an appropriate use of Mai's 'awakening' term?) before settling down. After that, their emotions and energy build until they reach another summit of power and undergo the same release of energy. Seeing it happen right before you, the thought occurs about whether or not this is natural; what is supposed to happen when someone binds. These power surges do accompany a dramatic rise in ability, after all. But regardless of whether it is natural, the risk they pose is your concern- both to the innocents around them, and to the wielder themselves- as you find yourself concerned about now.

[1/2]
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>>40864987

The normally calm and demure Umeki is gone- replaced with a seething, twitching mass of hair and movement. It's clear she's still very much in the middle of a transformation, as the aura of light engulfing her has not faded yet, merely dimmed. Her arms move unnaturally - as if skipping you were watching a video with frames skipped over - and her face is distraught; eyes awash with that gruesome static whilst her mouth hangs open. The robe she bore before remains, but floats about her body, trailing off with a phantom wind that only graces her. Her hair pulses with a faint, pinkish light, and you hear a rhythmic 'crack' from her every second or so, faint yet noticeable.

"Sis..." You glance over to see Momo, holding a hand in front of her mouth. Must be quite a sight for her- to see her normally innocent sister bewitched by this power and twisted almost beyond recognition.

"A-Are you okay!? Does it hurt? Say something! Umeki! Umeki!!" She calls out, clutching at her sister's robe. At her grasp, Umeki's head turns to face her. Although... turn is hardly an accurate description for that movement. It feels like her head was always in that position, as if your memory is the thing at fault.

"Momo, stay back." Yuuki advises, struggling to keep his cool as he tugs at Momoko's arm. He has the right idea though; there's no telling what kind of powers Umeki just received, or what she might do if you let her complete her transformation. You could purify her right now, and hope it doesn't harm her. Or you could run the risk of letting her figure it out first.

> Wait and see.
> No time, purify now. [Roll]
> Try and talk to her, calm her. [Roll]
> Ask Yuuki for advice.
> Get everyone to safety first.
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AWWWWWW YEAH, BEST TIME OF THE WEEK IS HERE
>>40865118
>Wait and see.
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>>40865118
>> No time, purify now. [Roll]
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>>40865118
>> Try and talk to her, calm her. [Roll]
>>transform into a foxgirl (or foxtrap as it were)
maybe to get +1 die for future use?
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>>40865194
Assuming she'd recognize/care, that might give you a bonus.
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>>40865118
> Try and talk to her, calm her. [Roll]
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>>40865118
>> Wait and see.
> Get everyone to safety first.
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>>40865118
>Try and talk to her, calm her. [Roll]
Hugs
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>>40865118
hey Q correct me if i am wrong but isn't that the focus we pre purified?
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>>40865118
>> Wait and see.
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>>40865159
>>40865166
>>40865194
>>40865316
>>40865350
>>40865375
>>40865440

> Try and talk to her, calm her.

Alright, 4d6 best set of three. Turning into a foxboy will give you an extra 2d, since it uses Makoto's 'BEAUTIFUL' trait.

>>40865395
That was no guarantee, but it does make some rolls easier to succeed.
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Rolled 1, 2, 1, 5 = 9 (4d6)

>>40865512
Rollan
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Rolled 5, 6, 1, 4 = 16 (4d6)

>>40865512
Yes to transform
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>>40865512
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Rolled 1, 5, 6, 4 = 16 (4d6)

>>40865512
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>Umeki got the focus
This pains me beyond measure.
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>>40865596
I'm more annoyed that he forgot that they bind on touch when Yuuki was holding it
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>>40865528
> 2 Fail, 0 Success.
>>40865534
> 1 Fail, 0 Success.
>>40865588
> 1 Fail, 0 Success.

Jesus christ, tg...
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>>40865596
I know, right? Such a waste.
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>>40865620
How is 6 not a success when we roll d6s?
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>>40865620
Wait, 1 and 6 are failures?
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>>40865620
Keh? D6 yo
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>>40865661
Oh fuck, I meant to say d10. I am all out of sorts today.

8d10, since we're transforming. Sorry, not in the best of it right now.

>>40865596
Blame the dice for that one. Yuuki didn't want it, and Umeki was what I landed on.

Who else would you have picked for it, besides the obvious of Shizuko?
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>>40865620
You know you had us roll d6 not d10, right?
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Rolled 6, 2, 9, 1, 8, 3, 6, 3 = 38 (8d10)

>>40865702
So you want us to roll D10's?
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Rolled 2, 5, 5, 3, 6, 5, 4, 1 = 31 (8d10)

>>40865702
Rerolling
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>>40865702
I'm just annoyed that Yuuki got handwaved out of getting it. Personally I want mom to get one
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Rolled 7, 5, 1, 7, 9, 8, 5, 1 = 43 (8d10)

>>40865702
Anyone besides Umeki. I could wait for someone new to join the cast, if needed.
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Rolled 5, 5, 8, 8, 6, 3, 5, 2 = 42 (8d10)

>>40865702
Personally, that's the second time dicegods screw me over Yuuki, so I am salty about it.
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You know, we should actually be sticking to lower dice pools with d10 system. Over 6 dice and the chance of getting a critfail overrides your success rate on a difficulty of 7 or higher
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>>40865702
That reason kinda pisses me off. If you could stop binding to a focus by not wanting it, why would Umeki bind to it by accident?
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>>40865702
I'm alright with Umeki getting it. Would have preferred another person but that's how the dice roll
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>>40865879
But that's the problem. This kind of stuff shouldn't be determined at random
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>>40865728
Yes...
> 2 Success, 1 Fail.
>>40865737
> 0 Success, 1 Fail.
>>40865772
> 2 Success, 1 Fail.

Still not the best rolls however.

>>40865771
Hm, well if it's consolation, Yuuki can still potentially have transformation through science nonsense. He has been experimenting with using machines to replicate the energy (MantiCore) after all. Not exactly magical girl, but should give all the transforming fun.

>>40865826
That is a good point, and we're using 8 or higher currently. I'm still not entirely happy with the dice system I have so alternatives would be welcome if they work.
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>>40865899
Variable difficulty depending on how hard something is
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>>40865899
>Hm, well if it's consolation, Yuuki can still potentially have transformation through science nonsense. He has been experimenting with using machines to replicate the energy (MantiCore) after all. Not exactly magical girl, but should give all the transforming fun.
Yuuki as Kamen Rider when?
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>>40865702
>look if you want to handwave Yuuki point out that he is a robot and his powersorce could count as a bound focus and it takes active effort to bind a second focus but a first is automatic that is how i assumed it handwaved.
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>>40865899
You could just adapt a nWoD system, it already uses a D10 system. Although perhaps without the exploding dice.

The main thing WoD does it change the dice pool size with actions. A single success is generally considered a success for most quick actions, while 5 or more successes is a critical success from what I remember.
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>>40865826
i believe you are mistaken i did and posted the math few threads ago and that is not what i got for pools up to it think 8

>>40865898
i agree

>>40865999
both new and old WOD have shitty dice mechanics IMO
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>>40865998
> I think that is how I hand-waved it on ask. Yuuki has the most knowledge of them so logically he'd have ways of moving them around without activating them. I just don't think it's a very satisfactory explanation without a specific reason why.

---===---

Do we want to retcon Umeki getting the focus?

Normally not something I'd offer, but it doesn't seem like the majority like the idea, and it was a random thing I sprung so I'd be willing to pull it back if that's not a thing people want. (I'm not 100% on it myself, but I do know some directions I could take her having powers).

If we want this, it'd be best to do it now. The weird thing is, there's an actual in-universe explanation I could even use.
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>>40866222
>spoiler
What, really? If that's the case, then hell yeah, do it. I want to know what this thing is.
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>>40866222
I'm indifferent. she probably has cute powers, but she is also cute as a grounding character
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>>40866222
I'm indifferent to the point of not caring. I don't know why people are kicking up a fuss.
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>>40866222
I'm happy with her having it, she'd be cute
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>>40866222
I don't like retcons, really don't and the consolation thing sounds cool...but I am very salty about this, so I'd like this change.
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>>40866222
I don't really mind, to be honest. I kinda wanna see where this goes first.
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>>40866222
Don't retcon unless it was something that just happened on like the post before. That way you can at least delete it.

Keep what's happened.
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>>40866222
I'd be happy with that.
>>40866330
It did happen on the post before, technically.
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>>40866394
Yeah, but it kinda started off in the last thread.
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>>40866222
I'm leaning in favor of it. It's the only unbound focus we could hand out, and the person who was selected for it didn't use it.
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>>40866222
No retcon, let her have it
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>>40866222
No retcons. It shall be as it is. Other characters take actions we may not agree with. Its fine.
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I don't like Umeki, I'd rather she didn't have the focus. Or any focus at all, ever.
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QB, move on before samefagging ensues. Assuming it's not happened yet.
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>>40866222
if you can keep umeki from having a focus with an in setting justification that would be ideal it you have an IC reason for this tat tells us more about the setting IMO it is not a retcon and i am in favor of it just dont contradict anything we know happened in narrative
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>>40866770
Dude, your english, what happened to it? I men, I can understand what you are saying, but...
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>>40866222
It''s fine as is, no need to retcon. Honestly don't see why people are upset about it, really.
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this is me >>40866283
so you know i'm not samefagging and thus dont count this as a vote.

I have a question which is only tangentially related, up until now, Umeki has been our friend who wasn't embroiled in magic nonsense, the 'normal' character so to speak, and this was an interesting dynamic. Would that now fall to Shizuko? or are we headed towards turning all our friends into magical girls?
i feel like shizuko probably would have liked to have magical powers, but either of them are pretty cute as the non-magical friend
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>>40866911
Shizuko can have the robot-musume suit.

After all, she probably knows about technology, and it resembles a cosplay.
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For
>>40866261
>>40866298
>>40866330
>>40866394
>>40866667
>>40866770

Indifferent
>>40866283
>>40866297

Against
>>40866307
>>40866317
>>40866487
>>40866544
>>40866654
>>40866869


Never fails that we tie on a decision... Alright, I'm going to proceed and present how this'll work, which will come with the option to just let things slide. Retcon is probably the wrong word because we're still moving forward, but also backwards.

Its complicated...

Unfortunately, the internet I thought would be stable is going to be wonky for the next hour or so. (using phone right now) So bear with me...
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>>40867558
Personally I'd count the indifferents for it being fine as is.
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>>40867558
I think you should go with whatever you have written.

I'm pretty late, though, but, well, it's just my opinion.
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>>40867558
Bring it.
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>>40866864
my glasses frames are broken and i am waiting for the glue to set. so i only have one eye and one hand at full capacity plus i felt rushed sorry.
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>>40867698
Indifferents should be counter for changing.
>>40867732
Alright then, good luck with that.
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>>40867558
Waiting warmly.
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>>40867758
>>40867698
ether way is biased i think some of the no comes from hate of retcons which Q has said was bad phrasing on his part. so on that i would lean >>40867758
but honestly >>40867713 may have the best
alternatively Q just do what you want it will be fine ether way.
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>>40867887
haters gonna hate
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Seriously, just stick with Umeki having it, it already happened so why waste the time deciding whether to change it to please a couple upset anons.
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>>40867951
lovers gonna love
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>>40867975
Because it was a shit thing to happen, that's why.
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>>40867975
Shut up and wait for QB to do his thing. Whining now won't mean anything.
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i dunno, lightning werewolf Umeki sounds kinda cool
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>>40867558

Given her almost energy-being-esque state, there's a chance you can still calm her down before she fully transforms. You need something try and ground her; bring her mind back to a conscious and controlling state before her emotions override her. But you'll need to grab her attention first. To that end, you rustle around in your bags quickly and retrieve some items. With the false tail at your waist, your magic quickly contorts it into a real, swishy foxtail, along with the ears with some more outfitting. Now firmly as something Umeki would never overlook, you step forward.

"U-Umeki, can you hear me?" You ask, trying to nail down her vision. In that same irregular, unnerving method of 'movement', her head shifts to face you, staring with those static-filled eyes. You gulp.

"Umm... aren't I cute?" You ask, smiling and flicking your tail back and forth.

"MAKOTO!" Shun squeals, incredulous of you.

"N-No, it's an idea." You assure her. She continues to not believe you as the light on Umeki ebbs further, solidifying her. You turn back to her.

"Umeki, it's me, Makoto. It's okay, I know you're scared but," you reach out your hand towards her, "just focus on me, alright?" You ask, placing a hand at her shoulder(?). You feel a sudden crack of noise throughout your body as soon as you touch her, and the world goes white. Immediately you falter, feeling your body stretch as your hand struggles to pull itself away from her body.

"Argh!" You grunt as you rip it back. The minute you do so, the world snaps back into place. You pant, catching your breath after that fiasco. You're back in Umeki's room; you must have stumbled into there when you pulled your hand away...

[1/2]
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>>40868313

"STOP LAUGHING, MAKOTO!" You hear Shun screech at you suddenly. Your head jerks back up and you spy Shun sitting there, amongst the blankets of Umeki's room- naked, again!?

"S-Sorry..." You mumble, but stop in your tracks when you spy Umeki beside her- most notably not illuminated in her magic light. She is seated next to Shun - also naked - and more than a little embarrassed. Something about this... feels familiar.

"...Momo... got to confirm your gender twice today." You say, narrowing your eyes. Shun growls, with her cheeks puffed up. Now that you definitely remember, but what the heck is going on? Last you recall, Umeki was transforming and now... she's fine. You're all back in her room, naked. Not a situation you hate, but what on earth-

You flinch as you feel a tug at your tail.

"AAAI! So fluffy~" Umeki exclaims, hugging it. You shiver as the sensation travels up into your body from her tender, loving touch.

"Come on, stop interrupting!" Shun whines, pleading her lip at you.

"I'm not-" You're lost.

"When did you even have time to pull that out?" Shun mumbles, tugging at your tail herself.

"Does it matter~!?" Umeki asks, running a hand over your head and ears.

> Why did you two get naked?
> Where are the kids?
> Where's the focus?
> You got to lick Umeki though. That was nice, wasn't it?
> Stay silent.
> Scan Umeki for magic.
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>>40868411
>> Why did you two get naked?
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>>40868411
> Why did you two get naked?
> You got to lick Umeki though. That was nice, wasn't it?
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>>40868411
>> Where's the focus?
HolyCrackers.jpg
Lightning AND time manipulation?
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>>40868411
>Where's the focus?
Wut
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>>40868313
>Time travel
I'm okay with this

>>40868411
> Where are the kids?
> Where's the focus?
Good work QB
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>>40868411
> Scan Umeki for magic.
Wait, what.
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>>40868411
> Why did you two get naked?
> You got to lick Umeki though. That was nice, wasn't it?
Umeki got time powers? Niiiiiice, that has soo many good uses.
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>>40868411
>Why did you two get naked?
>Where are the kids?
>Where's the focus?
>You got to lick Umeki though. That was nice, wasn't it?
>Scan Umeki for magic.
I am puzzled and confused.
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>>40868411
> Where are the kids?
> Where's the focus?
> Scan Umeki for magic.
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>>40868411
>Scan Umeki for magic.
>You got to lick Umeki though. That was nice, wasn't it?
Oh shit, time magic. This is never good.
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>>40868411
> Niiiice.
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>>40868411
>You got to lick Umeki though. That was nice, wasn't it?
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>>40868587
It's fine, she's on our side. Nothing to worry about.
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>>40868477
>>40868484
>>40868485
>>40868498
>>40868501
>>40868535
>>40868569
>>40868578
>>40868583
>>40868587
>>40868629
>>40868661

> Why did you two get naked?
> Where are the kids?
> Where's the focus?
> Scan Umeki for magic.
> You got to lick Umeki though. That was nice, wasn't it?

Writing

>>40868501
Originally intended it for Yuuki for age-based shenanigans. Also to go with the theme of giving children the most overpowered abilities.
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>>40868411
>> Why did you two get naked?
King Crimson? Another One Bites the Dust?
What's happening? did we just get It just Works?
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>>40868690
>Also to go with the theme of giving children the most overpowered abilities.
Dope
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>>40868718
Sen - Mind Control, Momo - Animation. They're pretty OP.

>>40868690

"Why did you two get naked!?" You suddenly ask, unable to hold the question back any longer. The two seem more confused by your question than anything. "N-Not that I'm complaining..."

"Well I was getting to that..." Shun mutters, angrily.

"And I, uh, I always sleep like this." Umeki admits, tapping her fingers together. Shun gives her a lingering, perverted look before wrenching herself away before Umeki notices her lust.

"No, I know that, but why would you just get naked in front of the kids!?" You ask.

"W-What!?" Shun squeaks, tugging the blanket up to her chest and looking around. Umeki squeals as well, covering herself.

"Momo! What are you doing in here?" She shouts, staring around the room. "Momo?" Seeing none of the three younger ones around, the two girls sit there, baffled.

"...Oh, ha-ha, Makoto." Shun groans, letting the blanket fall down again. "Very funny." Umeki glares at you as well, but her gaze is somewhat undermined by a reluctance to stop caressing you. You yourself glare back, but for a different reason; scanning her for any signs of magical residue. Surprisingly, there are none- she's as clean as she's always been.

[1/2]
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>>40868962

"That's impossible..." You SAW her bind to the focus, get engulfed in light. You couldn't possibly have imagined that... could you? "Where's the focus?" You ask them.

"The what?" Umeki blinks.

"The focus." You repeat to her, slowly.

"...OH." Shun exclaims, sweating. "I... I think I left it at school." She admits, sheepishly. You blink at her. How...

"I left the bat in the council room when I changed. I was just in such a hurry. S-Sorry Makoto." She apologises, mistaking your question for HER focus. that's not what you meant, but you doubt they're going to have a good answer for you. For whatever reason... you've either imagined the future or gone back in time. If that's the case, then that focus must have some kind of time powers! Right!?

"You..." You gulp, ready to test something, "got to lick Umeki though. That was nice, wasn't it?" You ask with a smirk.

"Well, I didn't know it was Shun." Umeki replies. Perfect! That's exactly what she said before. As on cue, she then fumbles and says "N-Not that you being the dog would have changed anything! I'm happy you licked... Ohh..." and buries her head in the blankets. As adorable as before.

> Listen to Shun's story, keep the timeline going.
> Tell Shun's story yourself, word-for-word.
> Tell them about the TIME POWERS.
> So... you don't remember anything, Umeki?
> Go tell Yuuki.
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>>40868987
>TELL THEM ABOUT YOUR TIME POWERS
>WAHAHAHAHAHAHA WEEP MORTALS BECAUSE I HAVE BECOME A SEXY SEXY GOD
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>>40868987
> Tell Shun's story yourself, word-for-word.
> Tell them about the TIME POWERS.
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>>40868987
>Tell Shun's story yourself, word-for-word.
>Tell them about the TIME POWERS.
>tell Yuuki
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>>40868987
>> Tell them about the TIME POWERS.
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>>40868987
> Tell Shun's story yourself, word-for-word.
> Go tell Yuuki.
Timelines fucked anyways.
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>>40868987
>>Tell Shun's story yourself, word-for-word.
>>Tell them about the TIME POWERS.
>>tell Yuuki
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>>40868987
>> Tell Shun's story yourself, word-for-word.
>> Tell them about the TIME POWERS.
I only just realized very recently that the thread intro is about wicked souls, and shun's was about terrible beasts.
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>>40868987
>Go tell Yuuki.
YUUKI TIME SPACE IS BEING FUCKED WITH
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>>40868987
> Go tell Yuuki.
Robo will have a meltdown.
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>>40868987
> Listen to Shun's story, keep the timeline going.
massage head in preparation for the time shenanigans
> IF anyone asks what's wrong
>> "Time shenanigans" *give deadpan look*
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>>40868987
>> Go tell Yuuki.

Give an excuse to leave, we back in time now and ain't no realization or explanation gonna unfuck that
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>>40868987
>Tell Shun's story yourself, word-for-word.
> Go tell Yuuki.
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>>40868987
>Go tell Yuuki.
>Niiiice
Damnit, I want my niiice in.
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Just realized I forgot to re-put my name on this computer. Time shenanigans.

>>40869027
>>40869040
>>40869042
>>40869043
>>40869069
>>40869073
>>40869078
>>40869089
>>40869108
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>>40869111
>>40869118

> Tell them about the TIME POWERS.
> By telling Shun's story yourself, word-for-word.
> Go tell Yuuki.

TELL EVERYONE ABOUT TIME POWERS.

Writing

>>40869179
We'll go back in time and do it. Hell, we'll go back to ALL OF THE TIMES AND SAY IT!
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>>40869207

The thought of simply following the timeline as is occurs to you, then you could really interject and prevent from accidentally binding. But forcing it on her suddenly surely isn't the best way to go about that- at least this way, you could even offer her the choice, or find someone better for it. This is a big power, after all; you can't let just anyone have control of time. In any case, this timeline is pretty screwed so you decide to break it.

"A-And then Umeki said I was a good girl..." Shun mumbles, holding her cheeks and blushing slightly as the two of you listen to her story.

"Ohhh~" Umeki whines, burying her face deeper.

"And then what did she say?" You ask, sitting back in the room.

"We didn't scratch all that long, because Umeki-" Shun says
"We didn't scratch all that long, because Umeki-" You repeat. She blinks and stares at you.

"The bath." You state.
"THE BATH!" Umeki exclaims, her head jerking up with your tail atop it. Then she blinks and stares at you. "Wait, h-how did you know."

"Because I've heard this story before." You say simply. Shun scoffs.

"Really? Did someone else turn into a dog and feel up Umeki?" She asks, crossing her arms. Umeki tilts her head and Shun starts sweating, begging you to just continue.

"No, it was you, but you've told me this story before." You say.

"I... what?" Shun asks, baffled.

"I..." you say, holding your finger up, "am from THE FUTURE!" You announce. Their blank stares continue.

"Hokay, 'Future Makoto'." Shun says, using air quotes. "I don't know what's gotten into you but-"

"Are there jetpacks in the future?" Umeki asks you, nuzzling your tail to her face.

"Probably." You say, shrugging. "I'm only from a few minutes ahead. Want me to prove it?" You ask with a smirk. Umeki smiles and nods, but Shun is still a disbeliever. You smile and start to recount Shun's story- the parts she hasn't told yet. Her face quickly moves from a dull look into complete astonishment.

[1/2]
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>>40869969

"...And you drifted off to sleep, the feeling of Umeki's breasts at your paws." You finish reciting. The two are hanging off your every word right until the end.

"That was a beautiful story, Makoto." Umeki says wiping her eyes with a smile.

"PFT- THAT WAS MY STORY!" Shun exclaims, fuming with anger. Come to think of it, you did just rob Shun of her Umeki-back-massage. Poor girl, this is a bad timeline for her.

"Anyway, from the future and with, ironically, little time to lose. I'll be back!" You say, jumping to your feet and throwing the door open as the two of them call after you. You thunder down the halls, heading for the kids room to head them off. Luckily they're not completely up yet, and you spy Momo in the doorway, wearing a cute nightgown. The room ahead is similar to Umeki's, but notably filled with children.

"Just because you'd be a girl doesn't mean you'd get all the bits. Shun-chan doesn't have breasts either." Momo says, pointing down the hall. Good thing Tanakawa wasn't here to hear that. Sen and Yuuki are inside, also in their respective pajamas. They didn't manage to shove Yuuki into a nightgown, sadly.

"I just don't think it's the best- Makoto?" Yuuki asks, noticing you standing behind Momo. She glances back and notices you too- then notices your tail.

"Ooo~ pretty." She says, grabbing for it. You flick it out of her hands every time she grabs for it, which seems to amuse her at least. Sen seems similarly dazzled and amazed by it, and starts to try to grab it as well. You sigh, amusing both girls.

"Yuuki, I need to talk to you about the focus." You say, pointing at it. You can see it nearby to him, sitting amongst some blankets and pillows on the floor.

"...What about it?" He asks, narrowing his eyes.

> You should TOTALLY BIND TO IT.
> It's time!
> Umeki just bound to it a minute ago!
> I mean a minute to-go.
> Why are you not in cute pajamas?
> Nothing. Nevermind~
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>>40870000
>You should TOTALLY BIND TO IT.
YOU SHOULD
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>>40870000
> You should TOTALLY BIND TO IT.
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>>40870000
>Umeki just bound to it a minute ago!
IT HAS TIME TRAVEL POTENTIAL

ITS TOO DANGEROUS

IT MUST BE DESTROYED

also
>Why are you not in cute pajamas?
This is a very pressing issue as well. Future Yuuki likes cute pajamas.
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>>40870000
>You should TOTALLY BIND TO IT.
> It's time!


>it's time to acquire powers to fuck time
Heh
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>>40870000
> You should TOTALLY BIND TO IT.
Future Makoto is amusing
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>>40870000
> Why are you not in cute pajamas?
>You should TOTALLY BIND TO IT.
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>>40870000
>> Umeki just bound to it a minute ago!
>> I mean a minute to-go.
>> Why are you not in cute pajamas?
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>>40870000
> Nothing. Nevermind~
Altered timeline? What altered timeline?
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>>40870000
> Why are you not in a nightgown?
> It's time!
>You should WEAR ONE!
> Also, You should TOTALLY BIND TO IT.
Priorities.
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Really, you guys want to deprive Umeki of her very own fluffy tail? The worst.
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>>40870000
Just noting that shizuco would do well with the time power as it would let he have do overs on social stuff where she flubs
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>>40870168
Masturbation is bad, if she wants fluffy tails, she will have to grab Makoto's.
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>>40870168
I agree we shouldn't force him. our whole group should sit down and talk this out.
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>>40870024
>>40870035
>>40870036
>>40870047
>>40870070
>>40870095
>>40870117
>>40870136
>>40870147

> Umeki just bound to it a minute ago!
> You should TOTALLY BIND TO IT.
> Why are you not in cute pajamas?

Writing
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>>40870000
>You should TOTALLY BIND TO IT.
> Why are you not in cute pajamas?

>> I mean a minute to-go.
I don't understand what this option is for.
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>>40870219
Whoop, sorry > Umeki just bound to it a minute ago! isn't one of them, not enough votes. Added it accidentally.
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>>40870224
>>> I mean a minute to-go.
time travel and temporal tensing is weird.
She will have bound to it.
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>>40870219

"You should TOTALLY BIND TO IT!" You exclaim, wringing your hands. "Also why are you not in cute pajamas?" You ask as well, glaring at him. He coughs and stares at you.

"P-Pardon?"

"Yeah, listen to your brother, Yuuki!" Momo exclaims, un-distracted by your tail for the moment. "Become a magical girl!"

Despite Momoko's sudden bout of excitement, Sen continues to stare at you. It unnerves you for a little at how she looks, and you'd swear she's emitting some energy. Suddenly, she blinks and steps back, eyes wide and in awe of you.

"You... he..." Sen mumbles, looking over at Yuuki. Judging from her reaction, she probably just read your mind and learnt about the focus.

> Leave her alone.
> Hey, stay outta my head!
> Don't you wanna see cute Yuuki, Sen?
> You be quiet.

"Ugh, Makoto, what's with you all of a sudden?" He asks as Momo throws herself ontop of him, rolling around and trying to push him onto the focus.

"I know what it does, and it's a really cool power. It'd be super useful for you as well~" You state, kneeling down in the room and moving your hand through some of the clothes and blankets on the ground.

"Oh? And what is that?" He asks.

"A nightgown." You say, holding up a small dress. "You wouldn't mind this on Yuuki, would you Momo?" You ask her politely. She smiles, mouth open wide.

"Yeah! Cute Yuuki in a cute dress!" She exclaims, hugging him tighter.

"I MEANT THE POWER!" Yuuki says, resigned to be pinned to the floor by Momo for now.

> I dunno.
> Time control.
>> If you don't want it, then I can just go back and stop you.
>> Umeki used to have it, I've come back FROM THE FUTURE!
>> We should all discuss it.
> The power of manliness.
>> I guess if you don't want it, you love being girly.
> Put the dress on him.
>> Future Yuuki loves dresses.
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>>40870539
> Leave her alone.

> Time control.
> If you don't want it, then I can just go back and stop you.
> Umeki used to have it, I've come back FROM THE FUTURE!
> We should all discuss it.
> Put the dress on him.
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>>40870539
>Don't you wanna see cute Yuuki, Sen?
> Time control.
>> I guess if you don't want it, you love being girly.
> Put the dress on him.
>> Future Yuuki loves dresses.
Shiiit, I want all this
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>>40870539
>Hey, stay outta my head!
Scolding and playful. Not too harsh

>Time Control
>If you don't want it then I can just go back and stop you
>Umeki used to have it, I've come back from the FUTURE
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>>40870539
> Don't you wanna see cute Yuuki, Sen?
> Time control.
Dresses later, focus first.
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>>40870539
> Don't you wanna see cute Yuuki, Sen?
> Time control.
>> If you don't want it, then I can just go back and stop you.
> Put the dress on him.
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>>40870539
>>40870539
>> Leave her alone.
>Time Control
>> If you don't want it, then I can just go back and stop you.
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>>40870539
>Don't you wanna see cute Yuuki, Sen?
Gotta encourage her about this.

> Time control.
> Put the dress on him.
>> Future Yuuki loves dresses.
Hue.
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>>40870539
>> Time control.
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>>40870539
> Leave her alone.

> We should all discuss it.
> Future Yuuki loves dresses.
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>>40870539
>Don't you wanna see cute Yuuki, Sen?
> Time control.
> Put the dress on him.
Damnit, I don't know what to choose for the suboptions. At least putting the dress on is an easy one.
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>>40870539
> Time control.
>> If you don't want it, then I can just go back and stop you.
> Put the dress on him.
>> Future Yuuki loves dresses.
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>>40870810
Derp, forgot the first poll.
>>40870539
>Don't you wanna see cute Yuuki, Sen?
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>>40870617
>>40870632
>>40870645
>>40870658
>>40870666
>>40870672
>>40870691
>>40870715
>>40870741
>>40870759
>>40870810
>>40870904

> Don't you wanna see cute Yuuki, Sen?
> Time control.
>> If you don't want it, then I can just go back and stop you.
> Put the dress on him.
>> Future Yuuki loves dresses.

Writing

>>40870658
Blasphemy.
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>>40870985

>>40870985

With Sen in the know about the Time focus, and her own mixture of fear and confusion about you, there has to be a quick way to deal with her hesitation. You sure don't want Mai, Naru, and Pepper finding out you can potentially control time. You turn towards her and smile.

"Don't you wanna see cute Yuuki, Sen?" You ask, tilting your head. She blinks, and you see that fear slowly be replaced by a demure desire to see just that. Yuuki looks at her with big, pleading eyes.

"I-I... want to see the cutest Yuuki." She mumbles, pulling her hair down over her face as she blushes. Her desire to see your little brother in a dress probably matches that of Momoko, but she's a lot more shy about it. Between the two of them, you're surprised Yuuki is lasting this long.

-----=====-----

"Oh, well the power is time control, as far as I can tell." You inform him, waddling over to where Momoko has him pinned, on your knees.

"You're kidding..." He asks, amazed. "The Time focus?" He asks.

"I know for a fact, because I," you stand up, "am from THE FUTURE!" You announce.

"Really!? Are there jetpacks in the future?" Momoko asks, wide-eyed.

"Probably." You shrug.

"That's incredible." Yuuki says, enthralled in this discovery. "The Time focus was one of the most valuable of those we held. Royale herself kept it segregated under lock and key, unwilling to even bind it to anyone. Even if I looked it up, I doubt we'd even have any real data on it." He explains. The thought occurs to you that maybe they did get data... just not in this timeline.

"Well, since it can send me back, if you don't end up liking it, we can just reverse and stop you from binding to it in the first place." You suggest.

"I don't think we should be that trivial when messing with time, Makoto." Yuuki advises, genuinely concerned. True, too much screwing with time could mean some bad things. There's no guarantee that you could jump back again anyway.

[1/2]
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>>40871672

"Hm, maybe. We should think about this..." You pull the dress back up, "Right after you put this on."

"Argh!" Yuuki starts struggling again.

"Come on, I know for a fact Future Yuuki just loooves dresses." You lie to him. He flinches.

"Y-You're kidding?" He asks. You shake your head.

"I would never kid about such a thing." You continue to lie. You lay the dress on him and watch as he stares at it.

"I'm guessing I probably bound to the focus, s-so if I were a girl wearing a dress, that'd be-"

"Nope." You say, shaking your head. "100% boy, future Yuuki is."

"N-No way." He says, looking over it. It's not the look of anger or fear, but instead of wonder. Hehe, how far can you take this?

"Oh yeah, and you just love dressing up. You and a human girl Manti are perfect girlfriends; getting all dressed up, hitting the town, flirting with aaall the cute boys-"

"OKAY NOW YOU'RE SCREWING WITH ME!" He yells, throwing the dress behind you.

"No," you snicker, "it's the *snnk* truth, pfft..." It's really hard to hold your laughter back with Yuuki this red and blushing. He takes a breath and calms down.

"I know, I would never, ever-" He says, holding his arms out as Sen approaches him from behind, quietly slipping the dress over his head, "wear that!"

The thee of you stare at him whilst he stands there with a blank expression.

"SEN!" He yells, as the purple-haired girl sits down behind him, trying to hide her joy.

"Yaay! You did it!" Momo exclaims, hugging Sen around the neck as Yuuki glares at the pair of them. Future Yuuki is born, you think, nodding. Now you just need Manti and the cute boys.

"Anyway," he grumbles, tugging the gown over his head, "what do you think we should do, seriously this time?"

> I think you should have it. I can trust you with it.
> I think Umeki should get it, she had it before.
> Let's keep it on ice for now. Time powers are dangerous.
> I think you should keep the dress on.
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>>40871739
>I think you should have it. I can trust you with it.
Yuuki, just do it already.
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>>40871739
> I think you should have it. I can trust you with it.
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>>40871739
>I think you should have it. I can trust you with it.
> I think you should keep the dress on.
Whynotboth
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>>40871739
>I think you should have it, I trust you with it
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>>40871739
> I think you should have it. I can trust you with it.
>>
>>40871739
>> I think you should keep the dress on.
...
oh you mean the focus
>> Let's keep it on ice for now. Time powers are dangerous.
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>>40871739
> I think you should have it. I can trust you with it.
> I think you should keep the dress on.
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>>40871739
>I think you should have it. I can trust you with it.
> I think you should keep the dress on.
Become cutest.
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>>40871739
>> I think you should keep the dress on.
>the choice is yours but if you don't want it Umeki has claim.
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>>40871739
>I think you should have it. I can trust you with it.
> I think you should keep the dress on.
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>>40871739
> Let's keep it on ice for now. Time powers are dangerous.
> I think you should keep the dress on
No fucking with time without a damn good reason!

Shits dangerously unpredictable yo
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>>40871739
> I think you should keep the dress on.
>I think you should have it. I can trust you with it.
Priorities first.
Also, Sen is growing on me so much.
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>>40871739
>Let's keep it on ice for now. Time powers are dangerous.


On a dead serious note, introducing time travel is always a dangerous notion to any series, show, etc. Too many variables. I'd rather not risk it, to be honest.
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>>40871739
> I think you should have it. I can trust you with it.
> I think you should keep the dress on.
>>if only long enough to pose with me for a picture
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>>40871739
>> I think you should have it. I can trust you with it.
fuck it, we've already got mind control and forced transformation, let's get a reset button going too
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>>40871739
>>if only long enough to pose with me for a picture
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>>40872260
adding
> I think you should keep the dress on.
>>if only long enough to pose with me for a picture
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>>40871739
>> Let's keep it on ice for now. Time powers are dangerous.
Hella dangerous
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>>40871739
>I think you should have it. I can trust you with it.
> I think you should keep the dress on.
>>if only long enough to pose with me for a picture
>>pose for Yui
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>>40871759
>>40871802
>>40871829
>>40871830
>>40871836
>>40871841
>>40871852
>>40871870
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>>40872621

> I think you should have it. I can trust you with it.
> I also think you should keep the dress on.
>> If only long enough to pose with me for a picture

Yuuki doesn't seem the sort to fuck around with time powers, does he?

Writing
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>>40873168
Foci still shape their power based on the user, right? and start out weak? One person's time powers could be The World and another person's King Crimson, and it depends on the user?
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>>40873528
I bet Yuuki's time powers will only work when he is wearing strawberry panties.
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Oh shit I wasn't expecting my favorite quest so soon! I'm really glad you managed to pull something together Qyubey.
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>>40873528
> Yeah, but given time, practice, and fortitude it's feasible to acquire both. You're not even sure if when Yuuki binds he'll be capable of time travel.

>>40873618
> Now canon.

>>40873168

You calmly place a hand on Yuuki's shoulder, smiling as happily as you can.

"I think you should have it, Yuuki." You tell him, firmly believing it. "When it comes down to it, I believe you're the most trustworthy person when it comes to these powers. Especially for something this dangerous, I need to have an absolute faith in the person that will wield it."

"Makoto..." He mutters, looking up at you in awe and disbelief.

"I also think you should keep the dress on." You add at the end.

"Makoto." Yuuki replies bluntly.

"If only for long enough to pose with me for a picture." You ask, clapping your hands together in a plea. His eyes narrow and he glances away, still holding the thin gown above his head. Slowly, but surely, he starts to lower his arms until he places the gown back on his shoulders.

"Maybe a little while..." He mumbles, clutching one of his arms. You smile and pull off his pants, causing him to squeal. Momo tumbles back, laughing.

"They were ruining the look." You tell him in a factual tone as he continues to glare at you. For the next few minutes you take out your phone and snap a few pictures with Yuuki. You, in your school uniform and fox features, and he in a darling nightgown. At first he seems hesitant, but slowly you see a smile start to grace his face, until he's posing with as much exuberance as you.

"Aww, you two are adorable." Shun says, peering around the door. Yuuki flinches and buries himself i the blankets as Umeki and Shun sit down in the room. "Aw yeah, pictures! Show us!"

"I'm getting these framed~" You giggle, flipping through the pictures for the two of them. Umeki calls the two of you 'precious' more than once and Shun alternates between laughing and 'd'aaw'ing.

[1/2]
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>>40873740

You briefly wonder if you should tell Umeki about her initial bind with the focus. You've given it to Yuuki, but she presumably still doesn't know. However, as if on cue, you hear him.

"A-Alright. I'll do it." You turn your head in surprise to see him holding the orb. "I mean... for something this dangerous, I have to take responsibility

Strange that he doesn't bind on an initial touch, but as you watch him you see that only one hand is holding the orb, and even then only by the tips of his fingers. Maybe being an android he requires a better connection than a pure human, or maybe it's just difficult altogether? In whatever case, both Sen and Momo look elated by this but hold their tongues. Shun and Umeki have no objections, and you already gave your blessing.

"Okay." You say, crossing your arms. Yuuki nods and gulps, holding the orb steady. His other hand clamps down and you see him press the orb to his chest, clutching it firmly. Rather than the instant with Umeki, it actually takes a while to see any reaction here, but when it starts, you prepare for that same plume of light. Everyone is instantly blinded by it, but you know better, and manage to see his body consumed with light. He turns slowly; and you actually see the outline of his metallic frame for a little before it disappears.

"Aggh, what's happening!?" Shun grunts, trying to regain her vision as the light fades. Again, you see his body embraced with a bright, energy hue; his hair pulsing with a pinkish light. His eyes are filled with static and his mouth is open- just like Umeki. You purified the focus before, but this is still a lot of energy flying around. It could still be harmful.

> Yuuki, you okay?
> Show him pictures of him in the dress.
> Touch him LETS DO THE TIME WARP AGAIN!
> Purify [Roll]
> Get everyone out for safety.
> Wait and watch.
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>>40873789
>Yuuki, you okay?
> Show him pictures of him in the dress.
He shouldn't have a release/limit break, interesting.
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>>40873789
>> Yuuki, you okay?
> Sen, status report on his mind.
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>>40873789
>> Yuuki, you okay?
do you need a hug fail to remember that touching him will get us time zapped
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>>40873789
>> Yuuki, you okay?
>> Show him pictures of him in the dress.
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>>40873789
>Yuuki, you okay?
>Show him pictures of him in the dress.
Pictures are super effective, r-right?
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>>40873789
> Yuuki, you okay?
> Show him pictures of him in the dress.
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>>40873789
>> Yuuki, you okay?
the pictures might awaken something. or maybe corrupt.
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>>40873789
>> Yuuki, you okay?
>> Wait and watch.
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>>40873789
>Yuuki, you okay?
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>>40873860
>>40873862
>>40873873
>>40873882
>>40873933
>>40873972
>>40874045
>>40874057
>>40874060

> Yuuki, you okay?

Writing
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>>40874100

With the arcane energies swirling before you, your concern for Yuuki rises higher and higher. There's no telling exactly what could happen if he transforms- it might not even get properly with his metallic parts. If you were to grab him, touch him right now you could reverse it, but where would that leave you but an inordinate amount of time in the past. You only went back a few minutes, but what if you went back days- weeks- years even!? You hadn't considered it before, but you really know nothing about how this works.

"Yuuki, are you okay?" You ask the swirling mass of energy. As with Umeki, it moves if it was always in that position- maybe it's even rewriting time so that actually is the case, or is just pausing it. Either way, it's really unnerving to look at. He's not responding either, dammit, if you could only get inside his head you-

"Wait..." You DO have a way of getting inside his head. You turn your attention to Sen; sitting nearby with a stern look, and eyes of a magical hue. She's doing it already! You frown and move over to her.

"Sen." You say, firmly. She shivers and shakes, blinking until her eyes return to normal.

"I-I wasn't doing anything to him!" She claims, shrinking in your presence. You ignore her pleas and just calmly speak.

"I need you to connect with Yuuki's mind. Find out if it's going alright, and tell him to be calm." You ask of her.

"Y-You want me to go inside his head?" She asks, incredulous.

"If it'll help, please." You ask her, showing your concern. She nods and looks at Yuuki, her eyes lighting up again. It isn't long before she speaks again.

"He's really scattered right now, but that's normal when this kind of thing happens." She tells you.

"This kind of thing?"

"Oh, uh, awakening." She clarifies. "I always used my powers to calm them down when they underwent one. I can do that now, for him."
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>>40874571

It's not exactly purification, but you can tell that he's not erupting into the same level of huge energy and light that you usually see. Keeping his mind and emotions in check, not that bad a way of dealing with this, as it turns out. Finally you hear Sen sigh and the light fades, leaving Yuuki in its place. Well, not exactly.

Still roughly the same size and shape as Yuuki, the girl that now sits there in that negligee bears some distinct differences from the brother you remember. For one; his hair reaches the floor (similar to your own) but sports streaks of silver instead of the black. It's almost chrome or metallic in look. Yui'll probably think he's trying to look like her. Apart from that, the same slender features and petite looks sport his form, even with perhaps a subtle chest.

The biggest change you'd say is the outfit; something Yuuki would never wear, it's a long flowing gown with shimmering reds and pinks, along with gloves and thigh boots. Aww, he's even got a little clock in his hair as a pin! How cute. Overall it's not actually that different from your own magical girl outfit; albeit the pinks are lighter and whites are more silver, probably as a result of the nightgown actually.

Dammit, now you want thigh boots and shimmering stuff.

"Mnn~" You hear him mumble in a higher, feminine tone. "Ma... Makoto?" She, as you suppose is more appropriate right now, asks, the flowing gown beneath him shimmering in the light

> You. Are. Adorable, Yuuki-chan!
> Take more pictures.
>> As sisters.
> Hug (and purify a bit)
> Thank you, Sen.
>> But stay out of our heads.
> Do time stuff, Yuuki!
> What does everyone think?
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>>40874620
>> Thank you, Sen.

>> You. Are. Adorable, Yuuki-chan!
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>>40874620
> Thank you, Sen.
> You. Are. Adorable, Yuuki-chan!
> Hug (and purify a bit)
> Take more pictures.
>> As sisters.
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>>40874620
>> You. Are. Adorable, Yuuki-chan!
> Hug (and purify a bit)
> Thank you, Sen.

Wait I thought the maiden white outfit did have boots?
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>>40874620

> You. Are. Adorable, Yuuki-chan!
> Take more pictures.
>> As sisters. and a couple as 'sisters' for Yui now that Yuuki has a new outfit
> Thank you, Sen.
>>and thank you for staying out of Yuuki's head until I asked, that was very mature of you


ask Sen if she wants to try and work with us. maybe we can mix structures and purification a little to help make Yuuki more stable?
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>>40874620
>> You. Are. Adorable, Yuuki-chan!
>> Take more pictures.
>>> As sisters.
>> Hug no (purify)
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>>40874620
>> You. Are. Adorable, Yuuki-chan!
>> Take more pictures.
>>> As sisters.
>> Hug (and peek into soul matrix(that's what i'm calling it))
>> Thank you, Sen.
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>>40874620
> You. Are. Adorable, Yuuki-chan!
> Take more pictures.
>>As lovers
Oh, nice
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>>40874620
>You. Are. Adorable, Yuuki-chan!
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>>40874706
i am >>40874715
can you add the write ins from>>40874706

I am all for looking at Yuuki-chan with our purification power but i dont want to touch his power without permission or something obviously wrong.
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>>40874793
you're not me :-( or are you?
are there jet packs in the future?
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>>40874871
sorry wrong post >>40874793
should point to >>40874711

i think it was because i wanted to second you look dont touch idea
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>>40874649
>>40874667
>>40874693
>>40874706
>>40874711
>>40874715
>>40874729
>>40874754
>>40874793
>>40874871
>>40874969

> You. Are. Adorable, Yuuki-chan!
> Hug
> Thank you, Sen.
> Take more pictures.
>> As sisters.

Writing
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So, anyone else realize there might be a rouge Umeki in the time stream? Could she be the actual Fox guardian for the shrine throughout time?
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>>40873740
>Now canon.
Hehe, that's awesome
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>>40875189
refer to >>40869110
time migraines
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>>40875189
> A timeline with no Makoto to purify either.

>>40875055

Now properly solidified and in control of herself; the newly christened magical girl Yuuki is primed and ready. She seems hesitant to look down at first, but she can't resist for long, as her eyes droop further and further. She rubs her fingers together, feeling the material of the gloves, and attempts to stand, only to stumble and fall to her knees.

"Wh-Why can't I stand..." She mumbles, trying to steady her feet. Aw, he can't walk in heels. God, it's gonna be fun trying to convince him he needs lessons in THAT. Strangely, she doesn't object to the outfit as much as you thought she would. Aesthetically, at least.

"Ngh, why is it so long?" She asks, running a hand down her dress. Eventually she blinks and notices all of you. "So... h-how does it look?"

"You. Are." You nudge yourself along on your knees, then throw your arms around her, "Adorable, Yuuki-chan!" You exclaim, hugging her tightly.

"You said I was adorable as a boy as well!" She shoots back, helpless in your grasp.

"You are!" You reply. "Adorable either way." You quickly take out your phone and snap a couple picture, but unfortunately Yuuki isn't as amicable this time around.

"Come on, we can do sister pictures now!" You suggest, shifting into your regular Maiden White outfit. It's been a while, you realize.

"Mng... fine." She relents, allowing you to take the shots. Aw man, Yui's going to freak when she sees these. You release Yuuki, leaving her to the mercy of Shun, Umeki, and Momoko. A 'so cute!' there and a 'amazing dress!' here and she's already trying to bury herself under blankets. You much prefer this kind of binding, rather than the chaos of Shun's first time. And you'd suppose... you have Sen to thank for that.

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>>40875401

"Sen," you say, grabbing her attention. She isn't with the rest for now, at least keeping her distance whilst admiring. You smile at her.

"Thank you for being so mature. I know you're scared of me, but the fact that you could look past that to help Yuuki means a lot." You tell her. "I can admit when I'm wrong. Your powers can be useful."

"I... um..." She mumbles, toying with her dress below her. "T-Thank you."

"Hehe, I thought I was the one thanking you?" You ask. "Oh! You know, if you'd be up for it, I'd love to get to you to help out with Yuuki."

"How?" She asks.

"Well, you know about structures, right? I'm sure making Yuuki's powers and form more stable would be a big help for him, so if you're up for it, how would you like to work together?" You propose to her. Despite the offer, she still looks reluctant.

"I... can't." She mumbles.

"...Mai?" You ask, wondering if Pepper's orders are still holding her back.

"Ngh, kinda." She says, rubbing her arm. "We're supposed to hate you. Working together... feels like going against my friends."

> Nevermind then, it's fine.
> Your friends are shit.
> They don't have to know.
> Pepper isn't your friend. She's using you.
> I'd love to work with Mai and Naru too.
>> I mean, dual traps! Yui would just die, right there.
> I know Yuuki would love it~
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>>40875434
why do any of us have to fight though? none of us actually want to
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Rolled 9 (1d20)

>>40875434
> I'd love to work with Mai and Naru too.

roll for composure.

> I know Yuuki would love it~
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>>40875434
> I'd love to work with Mai and Naru too.
> I mean, dual traps! Yui would just die, right there.
> I know Yuuki would love it~
>I dont know for sure but im worried that Pepper using you.
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>>40875434
> I know Yuuki would love it~
> I'd love to work with Mai and Naru too.
>> I mean, dual traps! Yui would just die, right there.
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>>40875434
>>40875481
>this^
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>>40875434
>I'd love to work with Naru too.
>>> I mean, dual traps! Yui would just die, right there.
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>>40875434
> I know Yuuki would love it~
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>>40875434
>> I'd love to work with Mai and Naru too.
>>> I mean, dual traps! Yui would just die, right there.
>> I know Yuuki would love it~

PUSH BUTTONS
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>>40875570
Also, adding on this >>40875481
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>>40875481
this, plus
> I'd love to work with Mai and Naru too.
>> I mean, dual traps! Yui would just die, right there.
hell, if I could convince Yuuki that'd be a triple threat...
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>>40875534
well... except for Mai and I, but that's complicated
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>>40875626
yeah but we don't want to fight her mostly because tournament arcs bore me and that was her idea of how to fight we just want to prove to her that we're better at everything
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>>40875481
>>40875487
>>40875492
>>40875494
>>40875534
>>40875540
>>40875549
>>40875570
>>40875587
>>40875621
>>40875626

> Why do any of us have to fight though?
> I'd love to work with Mai *twitch* and Naru too.
>> I mean, dual traps! Yui would just die, right there.
> I know Yuuki would love it~

Writing
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>>40875673
hence "complicated"
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>>40875681

"Why do any of us have to fight?" You ask her simply. "As far as I can tell, none of us even want to."

"Be... Because..." She actually seems to be straining her brain a little bit, searching for an answer. "Because you work for bad people." She finally settles on.

"I don't work for anyone!" You quickly reply. "I know Pepper is convinced Yuuki and Robo are some kind of demons from beyond the stars, but that's just not the case. I mean, you know Yuuki. He'd never hurt anyone."

"Yeah..." She admits.

"We just do what we think is right, and try to help people that need it." You try to explain to her. "Hell, if she could get off her high horse for five minutes, I'd love to work with Naru!"

"And Mai?" Sen asks, excitedly. You smile back.

"...Let's not get head of ourselves." You mutter back to her. Your reluctance seems to dampen her spirits somewhat. "W-Well... then again, with Mai we could be dual traps! Yui would just die, right there." You say, waving a hand.

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>>40875869

"Traps?" She asks, raising an eyebrow,

"Yeah. You know; boys that look like girls?" You tell her. She just stares back in awe.

"...Mai is a boy?" She asks. You twitch and realise you may have let something slip there. Naru didn't know either, come to think of it...

"I, heyud- HEY, I bet Yuuki would love it if you helped us." You suggest, very quickly changing the subject.

"Mm~" She hugs her legs closer to her body, with a hint of scarlet on her cheeks. "I'd like that too."

"I... Can I think about this?" She asks.

> Sure.
> No, answer now.
> You really didn't know Mai was a boy?

"MAKOTO!" You hear Yuuki squeal, finally tearing herself away from the girls. "Help me."

"Okay, lets give Yuuki-chan some space." You sigh, holding Momoko back.

"Stay a girl at school!" She calls out, flailing in your grasp.

"That's a little too much for... Oh." You suddenly recall that you have school today. With the amount of time you've wasted here, you're practically late already.

"Ahh, crap! We need to go!" You say, dropping Momoko onto the padded floor.

"Aaii!" She squeals before hitting the ground. Shun glances down at her robes.

"Not exactly school attire, but my clothes are already there." Shun says, sticking a tongue out. Ugh, this girl...

> Change at school, Shun.
> Take one of my uniforms.
> Just wear this *throw random uniform*
> Head off for school first.
> Wait for the others.
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>>40875889
>> Sure.

>> Take one of my uniforms.
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>>40875889
> Sure.
> ...You really didn't know Mai was a boy?
>Take one of my uniforms.
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>>40875889
> Sure.
> Just wear this *throw random uniform*
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>>40875889
> Sure. but it might be best if we do it now so she doesn't have an awakening at school today.

> Take one of my uniforms. (it is our last day to freely crossdress right?)
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>>40875906
>>40875925
>>40875929
>>40875966

> Sure.
> Take my uniform.

Writing (probably the last update of the session)
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>>40875889
>> Sure.
> Just wear this *throw random uniform*
this couldn't POSSIBLY go wrong
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>>40875889
>Sure.
>You really didn't know Mai was a boy?
How can you trust him/her if he/she didn't share that with you? You'd think it's important...
> Take one of my uniforms.
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>>40876081

"Sure." You tell Sen, running a hand gently across her head. "Take all the time you need."

"Mhm." She nods, avoiding your gaze.

"Oh, but just to make sure she doesn't 'awaken' at school, do you think you can keep an eye on her?" You ask, gesturing towards Yuuki. "I mean, unless you think him suddenly turning into a girl would be exciting~?" You ask, wondering if that elicits any reaction from her. To your surprise, and joy, it does; and she blushes.

"I-I'll make sure!" She says, shutting her eyes and balling up her fists as she raises her voice. You're not exactly sure what she's going to make sure of though...

-----=====-----

"We don't have time for this, just- here!" You say, pulling a uniform out of your bag and handing it to Shun. "Just take one of mine." She grasps it and looks at it for a little bit.

"Hehe, okay." She mutters, taking it outside. "Might be a little small though."

"You can change into your own later!" You shout at her, pushing her out of the room and back to Umeki's- the miko herself in tow. At your urging, Shun changes fairly quickly and you all step outside. True to her assumptions, your uniform proves itself fairly small on her broader body. Thankfully this is one situation where having a smaller chest actually comes in handy.

You stand outside with her, waiting for Umeki to escort the girls (and you do mean girls- Yuuki's still fiddling with his own transformation, but thankfully still has his male uniform) down to the bus. You feel Shun's arm loop around your waist, grinding her body against your back.

"Mnn~ Shun c-come on, we're already late." You tell her, actually resisting a lewd advance for once in your life.

"Hey, settle down. Unless you were planning to attend as little fox-Minako?" She asks, nibbling at one of your fluffy ears. You twitch and realise you hadn't taken those aspects off.

"T-Thanks..." You mutter as you shift back to your regular uniform.

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>>40876452

"You're too frantic, honey." Shun says, continuing to caress you. "It's just that dumb competition there today. It'll be nothing but Mai acting pompous, convincing people to vote for you." She suggests. You feel her toned chest pressing against your back, along with her small but firm breasts.

"I bet we can have a lot more fun together~" She suggests, sliding around to your front and planting a kiss on your cheek. Okay, now you can barely resist, maybe it would be okay-

"Ehh, I'm not to sure about that." You hear a woman advise. The two of you flinch and look to the right to see one of the shrine maidens, clad with a hood on her head and sweeping robe, sweeping the trail. She looks at the two of you with a dull expression,

"...Excuse me?" You ask, still in Shun's embrace. The shrine maiden shrugs.

"I'm just saying, might not be the best thing to skip today." She advises the two of you, cracking her back and sighing. "My bones always get stiff on days like this. Means something bad is coming." That's... weirdly cryptic.

"Who-"

"Makoto!" You hear Umeki call out from the base of the hill as the bus arrives.

"Ah! Nevermind, come on, Shun!" You say as you tug her along. She groans but ultimately following suit of you, leaving the maiden behind. she continues sweeping the path, watching the two of you leave.

"...just what are you planning, Peps?" She mumbles to herself, a catlike smile adorning her face. "You won't last much longer in 'that'. How exactly is the Void going to save you?" She starts walking back up to the shrine but stops and glance back down at the bus.

"...Unless Makoto isn't your only target." She giggles, walking back up to the shrine. "Whatever it takes, indeed."

END OF SESSION
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>>40876555
Oh dear, did Shun have such a lady boner for Makoto she didn't realize she met this animal lady yesterday, or izzit acutually something else?
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>>40876555
>"...just what are you planning, Peps?" She mumbles to herself, a catlike smile adorning her face. "You won't last much longer in 'that'. How exactly is the Void going to save you?" She starts walking back up to the shrine but stops and glance back down at the bus.
>"...Unless Makoto isn't your only target." She giggles, walking back up to the shrine. "Whatever it takes, indeed."
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please tell me she'll just be the villain for the next arc we already have too many characters
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>>40876649
It seems like that.
Are we going to "lose" Sen after this arc?
I love her. She is fucking cute.
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>>40876689
Sen can stay as a minor character in Yuukis harem as long as we get to break at least one of Mai's ribs before her and Naru leave forever
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>>40876708
while i am less hostile i agree i want Sen to stay in Yuukis harem and Mai's and Naru to become people we almost never see or hear from. though i can see them being cool features in other arks as long as they vanish for a while first.
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>>40876708
I'd wanted to see an idol pair between Makoto and Mai.
I dont dislike them, tbh.
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>>40876708
can it happen during angry hate sex?
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=m2t8fpR2z4U
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>>40876745
That's fair. I'm still hostile because I think Mai was kind of poorly thought out and only made to torture Makoto and Yui, and that even though the rest of the characters introduced in this arc appeared to revolve around her goals until a couple threads ago she's by far the most one-dimensional
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Good session. Female Yuuki is cute. Female boys are usually cute though.
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>>40876779
If angry hatesex happens we need to break Mai's teeth with a ball gag that's way too big
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If Shun wrote Maiden White Quest...

> Status: http://pastebin.com/muxMm5jc
> Twitter: https://twitter.com/questqyubey
> Ask: http://ask.fm/Qyubey

Finally used the blank focus. I had it planned as Time for a long while, along with some ideas for Yuuki that I WILL get to use, yay!

Apologies for the 'retcon' but I saw a change to pull back something I decided by random and I took it.

Haa~ so got this out, despite computer troubles. Won't be on a reliable system for quite a while but we'll see how I go. Should be good for this wednesday if all goes well.


>>40876605
>>40876649
It's Cinnamon, and she's a minor character for the most part.

>>40876689
Potentially. Mai, Naru and Sen were never intended as permanents; they're not even constant at this school.

I was planning on having them (if they survive) make rare, brief appearances after a while, but most people seem to have so much hate that they might just stay out altogether.

>>40876785
You might have a point, since that was kind of her original intent, but I wouldn't call her one-dimensional. She's vain and air-headed, but not deliberately cruel for sadistic reasons- she had a goal in mind, just a bad way of going about it as a result of Pepper's urging that Makoto is a villain.
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>>40876755
if anything, Mai will show up during at the end of the fight with the real big bad, when we need that extra friendship/justice power to purify the final boss
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>>40876832
thanks for the session as always
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>>40876832
Thanks for the run, boss. See you next time!
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I like Sen but I want her to leave because I hate how stupid powerful her ability is. Same reason I never want Yuuki to fight now. Time alteration and mental manipulation are too strong, almost on par with perfect immortality
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>>40876832
Sen: Temporary! You'll just... think more girly for a while.
And you said she couldn't do mind control
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>>40876832
We haven't been LEWD with Shun in awhile. This must be fixed at the end of the arc.

>http://pastebin.com/muxMm5jc
>"No! I'm at school, you can't follow, Naoki! Aiiee!"
That can't be good.
>"It's working already~! Makoto, that little sneak, will never see this coming."
Or that.
>"Are you concerned about losing your money, or just showing up Makoto?" {Mai: Can't I do both?}
...well at least we know the strategy is working.
>"Don't worry, Yuuki, I'll keep your mind steady. If it helps, I can make you more comfortable being a girl, temporarily." {Yuuki: What... Sen: Temporary! You'll just... think more girly for a while. Yuuki: WHAT?}
We're keeping Sen.
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>>40876832
I'm honestly disappointed that it was Time, and that you included Time at all. literally giving us an undo button kinda removes any tension from this quest
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>>40876950
If we keep her we're removing her focus. Also if that thing with Yui was Mai and not Naoki my murderboner will be back in full force
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>>40876905
it's possible to balance the time stuff by giving it a huge "mana" cost and restricting the rewind window. get an extra chance out of it maybe two
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>>40876996
A free fix every day is still broken. Hell, a free fix every ARC is still broken. Plus the basic ability is going to be haste and slow effects, which are never balanced
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>>40876905
>>40876960
>>40876996
Hopefully that time reversal shenanigans was just a fluke from the raw transformation and Yuuki is limited to just slowing and speeding up time like Viewtiful Joe.
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>>40876905
for Sen she is super op she is super good in a 1v1 fight but not 100% victory but in group conflicts she is much less strong.
as for time powers that depends on what he can and cant do if for example it is just a controlled slow down or spread up effect that wouldn't be to bad. Even a limited time freeze can be fine. but all that said time reversal even at a low level is super broken and parallel time stuff and future sight are heard to game. I hope Q thinks it through but i trust him.

>>40876960
>>40876989
>>40876996
time reversal is not the only possible time power that is a broke ass power but if Q makes what happened before a fluke of the interrupted binding and has a not to hax time power than all good.
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>>40876950
>>"No! I'm at school, you can't follow, Naoki! Aiiee!"
>That can't be good.
>>"It's working already~! Makoto, that little sneak, will never see this coming."
>Or that.
And it's time to void Mai's clothes when she's on stage so everyone knows she's a guy, before we let the perverts have their way with her
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>>40877038
>Even a limited time freeze can be fine
Remember how unbeatable Dio was with six seconds of time stop?
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>>40876989
Don't go murderboner on her, just tell her to let Yui go or we call the cops. She gets no showdown or fancy event, she gets a police investigation and hopefully prison, and that's the end of her stupid shit
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>>40876950
We MUST keep Sen.

Please, Q, do it for Yuuki. Dont make him lose his harem.
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>>40876921
I like to think of it as... suggestion. But again, that was an argument I lost.

>>40876905
I've already gone over this, but it's an overpowered concept, not in practice. Sen's power can be mitigated by having two people attempt to punch her in the stomach, and Yuuki has no idea how to use any time powers currently. It's not exactly The World and that guy from Bleach that everyone hates.

Makoto always felt like the most OP one to me. Dude gets hit by a bus and WALKS. IT. OFF. (Admittedly Yuuki could probably do that too)


>>40876960
I won't give people an undo button. I only did it here because both the players and I myself was somewhat unsatisfied with the random result of who got the focus. In-universe, it was only possible when they were initially binding and literally made of energy.

It might be minor spoilers, but two of the time powers I was considering were being able to tell the history of an object by touching it (Yuuki: Makoto's old skirt? ...OH GOD.), or halting all motion in an object, then compressing the lost time to make it move incredibly fast. There are other things to do with Time.


>>40876989
>>40877110
Oh god, I'm laughing at this random Mai-hate. No, no, that leads off from the previous paste:

Naoki
"YUI, WHAT DID YOU DO TO MY COMPUTER!?" (full of trap porn)
Yui
"Not now, dear brother, must be off to schoool~! *cackling*"

Where Mai comes into this I have no idea, unless it was pictures OF Mai on his computer. Where Yui got those I would love to know...
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>>40877110
That's fine too, I'm just pissed that she fucking went for Yui AGAIN. Mai needs to get a good old fashioned curbstomping, but it can't be public
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>>40877159
Pretty sure the Mai hate came from the Aiee at the end that sounded like it didn't fit even if she got tackled by Naoki. More like a derpy net trap, which Mai would totally do
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>>40876832
>Hiroko Shimada
>"."

what is that supposed to mean?
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>>40877159
Dude, those two time powers are heinous. One removes any need for investigation in a game that's had us looking for clues a lot, and one can send a pencil through a tank.
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>>40877159
>Dude gets hit by a bus and WALKS. IT. OFF.
Isn't that just a magical girl thing? Like, aren't we actually the least durable one?
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>>40877159
If you like Mai or Sen, and you want to develop them, just do it.

I like the three of them, and they seems interesting to me. I would like to know more about them.
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>>40877182
Yui: Oh no, a tiny net!
Mai: Yes, it is a net AND ITS TINY!

>>40877204
Whoop, always one mistake.

>>40877209
Fair enough, but Makoto can already punch through a tank.

>>40877225
Not really, you're more durable but still very mortal. Makoto has enhanced healing factor.
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>>40877246
We can punch through a tank but we have to get close to it to do that. We can't just Chuck a pebble at relativistic speeds and obliterate literally anything we hit with it.
And yes, that is what would happen if you stop and then restart the flow of time around a moving object at all, for any duration
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There are ways to have time powers and not be overpowered.

Like ok what if Yuuki can make a net out of time and throw it at people and all it does is catch things effectively.
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I kind of hope a corrupted Future!Umeki comes back from an alternate time line as a villain.
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>>40877246
Thanks for running as always.

I think Mai is fine, and I'm still thinking of ways to resolve the issue without suggesting something rude like outing a trap in public. Could Yui or Naoki come up with an interesting punishment?
just asking for personal interest, is trial by lewd a possibility? or a contest of lewds? you know, who can take more beads, endurance when faced with onaholes, who can best hum a tune with their mouths full, etc.
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>>40877729
...I'm not sure if that'd be possible in public/at school, but in private perhaps. Mai enjoys the lewds and is competitive with Makoto. They could compete to see which one sucks more.
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>>40877729
>>40877863
Well, now I want that. Fuck.
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>>40877863
>>40879332
only issue I see is that Mai won't really have a chance. pretty sure she has no actual experience, and even if she did nothing is bettr practice than tentacles down the throat and entire alarm clocks getting shoved up your ass



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