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You awaken to the sound of the carriage stopping. You are finally here, in front of a large, ivory mansion, the entrance to the territory of the Ambrosius, a great family of mages and warriors, to meet your pretendent. You, from a minor family, had to be used as marriage material so your patrimony could grow, and seriously, you find it an outrage. Liking it or not, you’re going anyway, so you might as well enjoy it a little. A warning from your father, though, is that you aren’t the only one going for the hand of the young heir of the Ambrosius, as six other families of equal hierarchy as yours are trying the same freaking move. You aren’t intimidated, though. You are confident that it’s you that he’ll pick, because you are the beautiful and talented daughter of the:
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>>41037048
>Aronheim, a prestigious family of blacksmiths and warriors. Your elder sisters are generals or famous blacksmiths, but you, as well, know just how to create giant weapons and to wield them in battle. Magic weapons are not your area, but you know how to put temporary enchantments in them, and maybe one day, your mother could tell you how to create those magic war-weapons she is so proud about... (Write-in: Starts with 2 weapons and medium mastery with them, 2 simple enchantments)

>Yarnham, a famous family of alchemists, going from renamed bakers to legendary assassins, your natural ability with potions and concoctions has granted you the favor and admiration of your parents. When you didn’t made bread for your family’s main shop or sell poisons to assassins and burglars, you would study the ancient art of transmutation, something you know you can learn too, someday soon…. (Write-in: Starts with 4 different venoms or potions)

>Arcelius, formed by a grand array of mages and sorcerers, is known by its natural ability with magic and runes, which you were granted as well. As a child, you could equal or even surpass your cousins and some of your uncles in magic prowess, granting you the fear of them, putting the branch families in their place, knowing how powerful of an heir you are... (Write-in: Starts with mastery in 3 elements and can do 1 type of Line Fusion with them)

>Nyctoeth, an eldritch, but well-know name. Your family is know for commanding a mercenaries guild, but what most don’t know is that every member of this family is also included in their ranks, as assassins. You, with your brothers, also participated in some missions, and you are proud to have made a name to yourself, even if they’ll never recognize you as it… (Write-in: Starts with high mastery with 1 weapon, medium mastery with shadow magic and 1 more element)

>Write-in family. Be creative, if you want something else...

Also, what’s your name?
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>>41037064
>Arcelius, formed by a grand array of mages and sorcerers, is known by its natural ability with magic and runes, which you were granted as well. As a child, you could equal or even surpass your cousins and some of your uncles in magic prowess, granting you the fear of them, putting the branch families in their place, knowing how powerful of an heir you are... (Write-in: Starts with mastery in 3 elements and can do 1 type of Line Fusion with them)

name
>Joanne
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>>41037064
>Aronheim
Flamberge and Morningstar
Vorpal and Lifeleach

Name: Yvonne
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>>41037064
>Nyctoeth, an eldritch, but well-know name. Your family is know for commanding a mercenaries guild, but what most don’t know is that every member of this family is also included in their ranks, as assassins. You, with your brothers, also participated in some missions, and you are proud to have made a name to yourself, even if they’ll never recognize you as it… (Write-in: Starts with high mastery with 1 weapon, medium mastery with shadow magic and 1 more element)

Mastery in the crossbow
Element: air
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>>41037299
>>41037356
>>41037540
It's a tie, so i'll wait for another 10 minutes. Also, Joanon, the write-in.
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>>41037693
Just roll a d3
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>>41037740
If the tie isn't resolved in... 7 minutes, it's exactly what i'll do.
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>>41037740
Agreed.
It's simpler.
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>>41037770
So, you ran any quests before?
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Rolled 3 (1d3)

>>41037771
>>41037740
Oooor... Maybe not. Rolling.
Also, sticking to the basic ''Fire, Ice and Lightning'' combo if Arcelius, and the Line Fusion we'll decide through the quest.
>>41037791
No, it's my first time, so please be gentle.
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Rolled 1 (1d2)

>>41037937
Mkay, Nyctoeth it is. Rolling for name and i'll star writing.
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>>41037937
>>41037967
At least the second best background and name won.
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>>41037048
Yes, you are Joanne Nyctoeth, the young daughter of a great family of mercenaries and the kind. For anyone who look at your pale and smooth skin, your short and elegant onyx hair, and your alluring dark-purple eyes, it's difficult to imagine that you even once touched a weapon, much more used it. It's a shame, really, that they'll never know just how much of a devil you once were. You remember very well, in the dark nights of your childhood, you would separate yourself from the rest of the group and go up the high trees, and wait, wait through the dark, until you saw something and with a simple flick of you finger...
Ha, good times those were. But now is not the time to reminiscence, your are not a vile assassin, no. Today, you are a fine dame who's going to drop some jaws.
The door to your side opens, and your loyal butler, Hart, extends his hand to you.
''Come, Lady Nyctoeth. It's time.''
He delicately descends you to the ground, and now you have a clear vision of the Ambrosius mansion.

cont.
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>>41038314
It's a tall and white house, with a great door of dark wood as the entrance. You see that it's composed of three floors, and from the windows, you can see some corridors, rooms, and others facilities. It's a big house, and from what you heard, it get's bigger. You are now at the front of the house, in a small garden, and looking around, you don't see another carriage. Hart looks a little nervous with this situation, different from his usual self.
''M-milady, don't you think it's time for us to... To go in already? Sir Ambrosius is most likely to be waiting for you, so...''

>Yes, let's go. As the first, we have the advantage of getting all his attention.
>No, let's wait. Let's see who are our rivals.
>First, let me ask you about (Write-in)
>Write-in.
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>>41038487
>Yes, let's go. As the first, we have the advantage of getting all his attention.
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>>41038487
>Yes, let's go. As the first, we have the advantage of getting all his attention.
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>>41038487
>No, let's wait. Let's see who are our rivals.
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>>41038613
>>41038617
Ok, going with this. Writing.
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>>41038487
‘’Yes, Hart. Let’s not leave him waiting.’’
With this, you catch his hand and, with him a little calmer, you two go in. The first thing you notice when you enter is not the great hall in which you encounter yourself, nor the stairwells leaving to an upper floor, and not even the various pictures of the old heads of the Ambrosius family, but the loud discussion occurring in a room ahead.
‘’I DON’T WANT TO MARRY ONE OF THESE GIRLS, FATHER!! I DON’T EVEN KNOW THEM!!’’ A boyish voice yells, being followed by a calm, neutral but powerful, voice.
‘’Tristan, calm yourself. You are going to meet 7 of the most beautiful woman of our country, you should be happy. You can act this way now, but me and your mother were no different, so I’m sure you and the one you pick will definitely-‘’
‘’NO, FUCK YOU. FUCK THEM. I’M NOT GETTING MARRIED, NOT IN A BILLIION YEA-‘’
The owner of the voice gets near, and soon you are face-to-face with a boy. He is a little taller than you, with red hair and light-brown hair, and a tanned skin. As soon as he sees you, he is silent and still.

>’’Hello, my name is Joanne. I think I’m here to meet you.’’
>’’Why, am I not beautiful enough for you?’’
>’’Hey, little prick, what did you just said about me?’’
>Write-in.
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>>41039173
>>’’Hello, my name is Joanne. I think I’m here to meet you.’’
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>>41039173
>"Oh my~! Talking about ravishing me this soon?"
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>>41039173
>’’Hello, my name is Joanne. I'm sorry you feel that way.’’
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>>41039268
Fuck that, this write-in is to good. >>41039264
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>>41039173
>"Oh my~! Talking about ravishing me this soon?"

Good way to prevent people from realizing what we're really like, though this is probably also a social faux-pas
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>>41039296
I'm not sure about the advisability of attempting to reenact scenes from chinese cartoons in this circumstance.
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>>41039352
It's a fitting response to his last comment.
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>>41039385
...this is an amusing pun, now that I think about it. All the more reason to go ahead with it.
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>>41039264
>>41039352
>Edgy teenage lordling yelling "FUCK YOU" to his parents that instantly shuts up in the presence of a woman.

Clearly a weeb, this will appeal to his chinese cartoon fetish. The only problem is that he won't know how to respond to a woman who says this IRL.
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>>41039385
It seems to me to imply that we are a slut with little sense of propriety, but at least it probably has a better chance of endearing us to him than the Navy Seal copypasta option.
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>>41039264
>>41039296
>>41039333
>>41039413
Writing for this. Just so you know, you guys are genius.
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>>41039446
I love the feeling when my writein is supported
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>>41039173
You grin, and it’s fucking malicious. This is a unique opportunity, and you are fucking using it.
"Oh my~! Talking about ravishing me this soon? How lewd…"
The look at his face is priceless. For a split second, his eyes are devoid of life, and then he starts sweating. If not tremendously hilarious, it is kind of cute.
‘’S-shit. I-It’s not like that, I… I…’’ And then, he star babbling incoherent things, apparently hyperventilating about the situation. Looking at Hart, you see him trying his all to not giggle like a teenager. It’s good to see him calm again, but now, you have the civil obligation to tease the fuck out of this boy.

>’’Well, that’s too bad. Only after the marriage, as my father often said. But we can fix this very fast, can’t we?’’
>’’Anyway, sorry. Not happening.’’
>’’It’s just a joke. Calm yourself, I don’t bite. Yet.’’
>Write-in.
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>>41039720
>’’It’s just a joke. Calm yourself, I don’t bite. Yet.’’
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>>41039720
>’’It’s just a joke. Calm yourself, I don’t bite. Yet.’’
Mentioning the marriage will probably get his guard up again.
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>>41039720
>’’Well, that’s too bad. Only after the marriage, as my father often said. But we can fix this very fast, can’t we?’’
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>>41039720
>’It’s just a joke. Calm yourself, I don’t bite. Yet.’’
We better be showing our teeth when we say this
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>>41039720
>’’It’s just a joke. Calm yourself, I don’t bite."
>"Unless you ask nicely."
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>>41039720
>Pinch his cheek (on his face, you l-lewd person) and say, "Oh, I was only kidding. Your reaction was just so cute, I couldn't help myself!"
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>>41039748
>>41039753
>>41039813
>>41039825
Writing for this.
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>>41039720
‘’It’s just a joke. Calm down, I don’t bite. Yet.’’ And, with this, you grim. He is still for another split-second, but soon he calms himself and rubs his head, laughing a little.
‘’S-sorry, it’s just that, this situation… Well, anyway, you said you are Joanne, no?! My name is Tristan, nice to meet you.’’
He takes you hand and softly kiss it, looking back at you with a calm smile.
‘’Well, I think it’s time to go, we need to discuss… All of it…’’
‘’AHEM. And you think it’ll be just you two?!’’
He shudders at the statement, and your blood starts to boil. It’s a familiar voice, beautiful but sharp as a razor. You know this one, and your suspicions are confirmed when you see, standing in the entrance;

>Mary Aronheim, that fucking tomboy. She was always trying to pick a fight with you, with that crude hammer of hers. She is even with her armor on, clearly she don’t know how to be a proper female. If she wasn’t a little cute behind all that, maybe she wouldn’t be competition.

>Selena Yarnham, the talk of the people, for her unmatched beauty and her ability with potions and the sort. But you know, behind her blond hair, her gentle expression and her big… Things, you know she is a viper. You once got your hands on one poison of hers, and damn, that thing was potent.

Cont.
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>>41040422
>Aria Arcelius, a genius mage and some other things that she likes to talk about. She is a pain in the ass since you two were kids, as you never saw her as more than a little child that wanted attention. She always tries to impress you or something, it’s like she tries to prove something to you, but it’s just plain annoying.

>Hyllia Valliant. Daughter of a saint or something along these lines, she was bestowed with holy powers and a huge sense of justice, as she likes to put. Once, as she was working as a healer with a group of soldiers, she saw you on your own post, and ever since she tries to make everyone see how ‘’you are a devil, an assassin, and how you should be punished with death’’. It’s a shame that no one believes her, poor girl…
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>>41040445
>Hyllia Valliant. Daughter of a saint or something along these lines, she was bestowed with holy powers and a huge sense of justice, as she likes to put. Once, as she was working as a healer with a group of soldiers, she saw you on your own post, and ever since she tries to make everyone see how ‘’you are a devil, an assassin, and how you should be punished with death’’. It’s a shame that no one believes her, poor girl…
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>>41040422
>Mary Aronheim, that fucking tomboy. She was always trying to pick a fight with you, with that crude hammer of hers. She is even with her armor on, clearly she don’t know how to be a proper female. If she wasn’t a little cute behind all that, maybe she wouldn’t be competition.
LESBIAN TSUNDERES
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>>41040422
>Hyllia Valliant. Daughter of a saint or something along these lines, she was bestowed with holy powers and a huge sense of justice, as she likes to put. Once, as she was working as a healer with a group of soldiers, she saw you on your own post, and ever since she tries to make everyone see how ‘’you are a devil, an assassin, and how you should be punished with death’’. It’s a shame that no one believes her, poor girl…
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>>41040422
>>41040445
>Mary Aronheim, that fucking tomboy. She was always trying to pick a fight with you, with that crude hammer of hers. She is even with her armor on, clearly she don’t know how to be a proper female. If she wasn’t a little cute behind all that, maybe she wouldn’t be competition.
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>>41040422
>>41040445
>Aria Arcelius, a genius mage and some other things that she likes to talk about. She is a pain in the ass since you two were kids, as you never saw her as more than a little child that wanted attention. She always tries to impress you or something, it’s like she tries to prove something to you, but it’s just plain annoying.
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>>41040445
>Hyllia Valliant. Daughter of a saint or something along these lines, she was bestowed with holy powers and a huge sense of justice, as she likes to put. Once, as she was working as a healer with a group of soldiers, she saw you on your own post, and ever since she tries to make everyone see how ‘’you are a devil, an assassin, and how you should be punished with death’’. It’s a shame that no one believes her, poor girl…
This sounds to fun not to pick
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>>41040445
Forgot my trip.
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>>41040445
>Hyllia Valliant. Daughter of a saint or something along these lines, she was bestowed with holy powers and a huge sense of justice, as she likes to put. Once, as she was working as a healer with a group of soldiers, she saw you on your own post, and ever since she tries to make everyone see how ‘’you are a devil, an assassin, and how you should be punished with death’’. It’s a shame that no one believes her, poor girl…
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>>41040483
>>41040519
>>41040532
>>41040543
Writing for the delusions of a poor maiden. That smites demons.
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>>41040668
I asume we'll meet all of them in due time?
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>>41040777
I assume this is just establishing which one of them we have already had some contact with.
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>>41040817
And who is going to be the second girl to enter the scene, obviously,
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>>41040422
>>Aria Arcelius, a genius mage and some other things that she likes to talk about. She is a pain in the ass since you two were kids, as you never saw her as more than a little child that wanted attention. She always tries to impress you or something, it’s like she tries to prove something to you, but it’s just plain annoying.
>>41040445
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>>41040969
Votes over mate
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>>41041001
she deserves love to
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>>41041032
At least I wasn't the only one to vote for her, even though you were a bit late.
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>>41041068
I would have voted for her too, if not for delicious tomboy.
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>>41041133
Tomboy would've been my second choice.
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>>41040445
‘’Hyllia, sweetie, how are you?’’ You ask, feigning innocence, when you see her running and separating you two.
‘’Stay away from him, demon!!’’ She says, looking coldly to you, and meeting you gentle glare, pitying her. She them turns to him.
‘’Don’t you see?! She is an assassin, I just saved your life from this vile being.’’
‘’Wait, what??’’ Is just what he can answer before she drags him to the room ahead.
You notice too, some other footsteps behind you. The others are coming as well, it seems.
‘’Well, if it isn’t little Hyllia and… Joanne…’’
‘’What?! Joanne is here too? THAT Joanne?’’
‘’What Joanne were you expecting?’’ You say, as you turn to see;
>Pick 3
(Sorry for the wait, captcha is a bitch with me)
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>>41041378
>Mary Aronheim, the tomboyish but cut heir of the famous family of blacksmiths. She was the one who made your crossbow, and some of your bolts, even if she doesn’t know. When you two were kids, you used to spar, and you two have a friendship of sorts.

>Aria Arcelius, mage, scholar, and an old friend. You two used to be inseparable, and she even had you learning magic for some time. As you joined the stealth corps, you two stopped seeing each other, but you know that you can count on her, by the way she is smiling in seeing you.

>Selena Yarnham, the gentle lady that commands the main bakery of her family. She is not a friend, but you can say she is a close person. She, too, know about your past, but you two are sort of ‘’business partners’’, so she is quiet about it. Her poisons are really neat, too. When you look at that innocent smile of hers, you forget what her concoctions have made with your enemies in the past…
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>>41041378
>Pick 3
Aren't there only 3 choices left?
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>>41041437
>Belle Allacium, of the giant ‘’family’’ of dancers, musicians, poets, and others… She looks so much like her parents that is hard to see that she is adopted, but it’s the Allacium you’re talking about, so it’s pretty obvious. You saw her show once, she saw your work once, and that’s it with the interaction. She seems friendly enough with you, but it’s not good to low the guard…

>Lyan Orthrus, one hell of a psycho. She comes from a family from the exact contrary of the Valliants, and the first time you encountered her, you knew it would be an awesome relation. She from the necromancers, and you from the assassins. Actually a good combination, you two built reputation together in the ranks. But she can be a little problematic sometimes… Yeah…

>Nym Umberoot, your declared rival. She with the ranger’s bow used to compete with you in ‘’’who’ll kill more’’, and when you were bored, you two would duel with sabers. You respect her, she respects you, and you know you can leave your life on her hands, as well as hers in yours. At least, in her good days…

>>41041450
This seems good to you?
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>>41041378
>Mary Aronheim, the tomboyish but cut heir of the famous family of blacksmiths. She was the one who made your crossbow, and some of your bolts, even if she doesn’t know. When you two were kids, you used to spar, and you two have a friendship of sorts.

>Lyan Orthrus, one hell of a psycho. She comes from a family from the exact contrary of the Valliants, and the first time you encountered her, you knew it would be an awesome relation. She from the necromancers, and you from the assassins. Actually a good combination, you two built reputation together in the ranks. But she can be a little problematic sometimes… Yeah…

>Selena Yarnham, the gentle lady that commands the main bakery of her family. She is not a friend, but you can say she is a close person. She, too, know about your past, but you two are sort of ‘’business partners’’, so she is quiet about it. Her poisons are really neat, too. When you look at that innocent smile of hers, you forget what her concoctions have made with your enemies in the past…
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>>41041437
>Mary Aronheim, the tomboyish but cut heir of the famous family of blacksmiths. She was the one who made your crossbow, and some of your bolts, even if she doesn’t know. When you two were kids, you used to spar, and you two have a friendship of sorts.
>Aria Arcelius, mage, scholar, and an old friend. You two used to be inseparable, and she even had you learning magic for some time. As you joined the stealth corps, you two stopped seeing each other, but you know that you can count on her, by the way she is smiling in seeing you.
>Selena Yarnham, the gentle lady that commands the main bakery of her family. She is not a friend, but you can say she is a close person. She, too, know about your past, but you two are sort of ‘’business partners’’, so she is quiet about it. Her poisons are really neat, too. When you look at that innocent smile of hers, you forget what her concoctions have made with your enemies in the past…
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>>41041437
>Mary Aronheim, the tomboyish but cut heir of the famous family of blacksmiths. She was the one who made your crossbow, and some of your bolts, even if she doesn’t know. When you two were kids, you used to spar, and you two have a friendship of sorts.

>Aria Arcelius, mage, scholar, and an old friend. You two used to be inseparable, and she even had you learning magic for some time. As you joined the stealth corps, you two stopped seeing each other, but you know that you can count on her, by the way she is smiling in seeing you.

>Selena Yarnham, the gentle lady that commands the main bakery of her family. She is not a friend, but you can say she is a close person. She, too, know about your past, but you two are sort of ‘’business partners’’, so she is quiet about it. Her poisons are really neat, too. When you look at that innocent smile of hers, you forget what her concoctions have made with your enemies in the past…
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>>41041437
>>41041471
>Mary Aronheim, the tomboyish but cut heir of the famous family of blacksmiths. She was the one who made your crossbow, and some of your bolts, even if she doesn’t know. When you two were kids, you used to spar, and you two have a friendship of sorts.

>Aria Arcelius, mage, scholar, and an old friend. You two used to be inseparable, and she even had you learning magic for some time. As you joined the stealth corps, you two stopped seeing each other, but you know that you can count on her, by the way she is smiling in seeing you.

>Nym Umberoot, your declared rival. She with the ranger’s bow used to compete with you in ‘’’who’ll kill more’’, and when you were bored, you two would duel with sabers. You respect her, she respects you, and you know you can leave your life on her hands, as well as hers in yours. At least, in her good days…


>we missed our chance for tryhard kohai mage
FUCK
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>>41041378
Mary, Aria, Lyan
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>>41041378
Counting votes and writing...
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>>41041437
>>41041471
>Mary Aronheim, the tomboyish but cut heir of the famous family of blacksmiths. She was the one who made your crossbow, and some of your bolts, even if she doesn’t know. When you two were kids, you used to spar, and you two have a friendship of sorts.

>Aria Arcelius, mage, scholar, and an old friend. You two used to be inseparable, and she even had you learning magic for some time. As you joined the stealth corps, you two stopped seeing each other, but you know that you can count on her, by the way she is smiling in seeing you.

>Nym Umberoot, your declared rival. She with the ranger’s bow used to compete with you in ‘’’who’ll kill more’’, and when you were bored, you two would duel with sabers. You respect her, she respects you, and you know you can leave your life on her hands, as well as hers in yours. At least, in her good days…
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>>41041471
You see Selena and Mary, smiling at you side-by-side, just before you are tackled and fall on the floor. It’s Aria, who is embracing you fiercely.
‘’Joanne, how long has it been?? You don’t come anymore to visit me, you don’t write to me… It’s so good to see you.’’ She says, smiling at you from behind her long, crimson hair.
‘’Hey, Aria. You’re here to marry a man, not poor Joanne.’’ Mary says, when Selena just giggles, and Aria stands just as fast as she jumped at you, blushing insanely. The others approach you, slowly.
‘’Hey, ol’Joan, how you’re doing?’’ Mary asks, with her usual carefree smile.
‘’I’m good, I’m good… But, as it seen, we’re going for the same guy, no?’’ You say with a smile.
‘’Yeah, It is… But, tell us, Joanne, he is… Worth it, in some way? We saw him being... Pulled from here, but we didn't had time to meet the guy.’’ Selena asks, looking a little curious.

>’’He is a little cute. I had a lot of fun teasing him.’’
>’’He is a little charming. Not my type, though…’’
>’’No. At least, that’s my impression.’’
>Write-in.
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>>41042155
>’’I had a lot of fun teasing him.’’
>’’No. At least, that’s my impression.’’
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>>41042155
Fun to tease but a bit of a ponce. WAs throwing a massive fit about never marrying any of us.
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>>41042155
Important factor in our answer: is Tristan still right behind us?
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we're a lesbian, we don't need no fucking worthless man.
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>>41042155
>’’He is a little cute. I had a lot of fun teasing him.’’
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>>41042265
Dude, this is literally titled Fantasy Harem Member Quest, so I'm afraid you're going to have to accept that our wife can also choose to have a husband on the side.
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>>41042155
>’’He is a little cute. I had a lot of fun teasing him.’’
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>>41042155
>’’He is a little cute. I had a lot of fun teasing him.’’
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>>41042155
>’’He is a little cute. I had a lot of fun teasing him.’’
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>>41042265
Piss off back to /u/
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>>41042310
being with a male is filthy and wrong. Yuri is pure love and wholesome.
What are you? a filthy Homophobic?
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>>41042365
You're in the wrong quest, buddy.
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>>41042155
I like /u/. Yuri is love, Yuri is life. Also, writing. Joanne isn't interested in romance for the time being, so only this quest will say for what team she'll play...
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>>41042444
If we just ignore his posts he'll hopefully leave on his own accord.
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>>41042472
Team Yuri or fail as DM.
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>>41042472
Please no yuri, or at least just make the MC bi
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>>41042538
Oh shut up and stop trying to force it. if it happens it'll happen.
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>>41042538
This is why no one likes /u/fags. Because annoying faggots like you have to force every girl to be a lesbian.
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>>41042155
>I had a lot of fun teasing him, but he didn't seem overly excited about this whole thing
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>>41042583
>>41042587
Don't feed the troll, It's rule number one you idiots
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>>41042577
Bi MC is even worse.
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>>41042663
>Not playing a pansexual, gender-transcending demikin plural system who identifies as a half-demon, half-dragon wolfkind and shares headspace with Severus Snape, but as a teenager.
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>>41043086
...
...
...wut?
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>>41042472
‘’A little cute, fun to tease. Until now, it’s not a bad impression, so…’’
‘’Hmm… Interesting… Mostly the ‘fun to tease’ part…’’ Selena smiles…
‘’You two are really scary sometimes, you know it?! It’s because of this and other things that I’m glad that I’m not a boy…’’ Mary says, retreating a little.
‘’Ahh, but you act like one!’’ Aria says, with a cheeky smile, before Mary picks her in an arm-lock.
‘’Well… Let’s go?’’ Selena asks, with her usual innocent poker face now ‘’You don’t want to be here when those two get here, don’t you?’’
Oh.
She’s right.
As things are going, you already know who are the last two, and just the though of it makes you cringe. They’ll soon be here, entering through that door;
>Chose 2. The rest MAYBE will appear during the quest.
Chill out, i'll not railroad you, it'll be really the voice of the people here. You can damn well marry that guy, as well as you can keep one girl as a lover for some reason, or you can actually find another pretendent. Who knows? Surely, not I.
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>>41043336
> Lyan Orthrus, the necromancer. She used to reanimate your enemies for fun, and she even tried to sacrifice you once. She enjoys killing even more than you, but what she enjoys the most is making them suffer. You, at least, gave to all your marks a quick dead, but she would experiment, torture, she would play with them until they broke.

>Nym Umberoot, an archer. She used to pick your marks out of fun, and there were a lot of times when you had to complete some job on the run, panicking that she would get the target first. Many times, too, she got you with that hooked arrows of hers, granting you a lot of scars on your back and on your belly.

>Belle Allacium. That dammed dancer escaped your bolts once, and since then, she is you avid fan. Too bad that she demonstrate it trying to kill you. The paranoia, the lost sleep… She was going to try again, you were sure, and the problem with it was that she was good with it…

>Diana Asthros, from one of the branch families of the royal lineage. She was seen as a noble person, talented general, but she had you on her black list for apparently no reason, and next to you, she was herself truly. You remember she putting your tent in fire, killing your old butler… She was a spoiled psycho with a princess complex and she really got to get away with it...
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>>41043365
> Lyan Orthrus, the necromancer. She used to reanimate your enemies for fun, and she even tried to sacrifice you once. She enjoys killing even more than you, but what she enjoys the most is making them suffer. You, at least, gave to all your marks a quick dead, but she would experiment, torture, she would play with them until they broke.
>Diana Asthros, from one of the branch families of the royal lineage. She was seen as a noble person, talented general, but she had you on her black list for apparently no reason, and next to you, she was herself truly. You remember she putting your tent in fire, killing your old butler… She was a spoiled psycho with a princess complex and she really got to get away with it...
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>>41043336
>Diana Asthros, from one of the branch families of the royal lineage. She was seen as a noble person, talented general, but she had you on her black list for apparently no reason, and next to you, she was herself truly. You remember she putting your tent in fire, killing your old butler… She was a spoiled psycho with a princess complex and she really got to get away with it...
> Lyan Orthrus, the necromancer. She used to reanimate your enemies for fun, and she even tried to sacrifice you once. She enjoys killing even more than you, but what she enjoys the most is making them suffer. You, at least, gave to all your marks a quick dead, but she would experiment, torture, she would play with them until they broke.
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>>41043365
Man, all of them are pretty scary.
> Lyan Orthrus
> Diana Asthros
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>>41043365
>Diana Asthros
>Belle Allacium

No love for yandere yuri obsession?
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>>41043336
Lyna, Diana
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>>41043501
We need to sleep sometime
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>>41043501
It doesn't have to be a sexual obsession.
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>>41043365
>>41043421
>>41043434
>>41043446
>>41043510
Writing for necromancer and princess.
And CAPTCHA, WHY YOU SO BITCHY?
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>>41043713
It doesn't, but you know that everyone's going to try for it anyway.
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Quest dead?
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>>41044630
We've waited longer for posts. Be strong Clarence, be strong for Mother.
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>>41043741
Hey, you still breathing?
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>>41043741
You dead?
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>>41045823
I think OP is kill.
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Ive consumed the OP and gained his powers.

Now none of you will be able to stop me! I will sink the /u/-boat before it can leave the harbor!
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>>41046298
I can accept this.
If the quest was going to devolve into /u/ it deserves to be sunk.
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And here I was, excited for a quest that came from a new(?) perspective.
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>>41045867
Well fuck
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>>41042472
Romance doesn't have a whole lot to do with marriage, especially a political one.
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>>41046298

Yeah, I'm going to vote for making the MC as hetero as possible.
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>>41043741
Where art thou
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>>41043741
You didn't tell us you were a faggot OP.
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>>41042365
>being with a male is filthy and wrong. Yuri is pure love and wholesome.
>What are you? a filthy Homophobic?
I should not have clicked. T'HERE IS NO SUCH THING AS PURE LOVE YOU TAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARD.

[rage intensifies]

Love is inherently messy. Love is inherently about compromises. Love is inherently about letting some piece of the other touch you, changing you in the process.

Fuck you kid, nothing, and I mean nothing about any kind of relationship is 'pure' unless you are one of those utterly retarded shitcunts who prefer lesbianism simply because they can't fucking stand the idea of even a fictional male being more manly than them.

Goodness I fucking hate your kind, and I arguably run a yuri quest myself and really love reading it from time to time.

Seriously, fuck you, you're the reason it has such a terrible reputation.

>u mad
I MAD SON.
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>>41047813
Well damn.
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>>41047813
Dude, I'm pretty sure he was either joking or trolling.
Most likely joking
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>see curious premise for playing a waifu rather than typical harm MC
>but OP is kill
It cannot end like this!
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>>41049009
I have half a mind to take over.
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>>41049023
W-why do OPs explode like this?
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>>41049221
>W-why do OPs explode like this?
Mix of shitstorms and dread exacerbated by said shitstorms.
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>>41049231
Or the rare cases where something happens irl.
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>>41049009
>Opportunity for /tg/ to 'be' the yandere
>OP is kill
Looks like the gold standard was just abolished.
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>>41049288
There's been Yandere quests before.
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>>41049288
>>41049328
There has also been "Play as the waifu"-quests before.
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>>41049473
I miss Twen.
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>>41049236
OP will tell us when he reterns.
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>>41049489
It was fun while it lasted.
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>>41049494
I find your optimism comforting.
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>>41043741
Sorry, my internet fell and came back just now. Tomorrow by noon i think i'll resume it. Sorry again.
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Or today by noon, i dunno...
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>>41050463
Noon in what timezone?
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>>41049547
Optimism rewarded! I'm not even him, too.

>>41050463
Up to you. There will probably be people around.
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>>41050476
Mine. Around the time i began the quest, i'm not good with timelines, sorry...
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>>41050448
>>41050463
>>41050501

Yer lucky it didn't fall off.

https://archive.moe/tg/thread/41007848/#41007889_571

Here, read. Spooky are shitters but I feel that some of the criticisms are very much valid.
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>>41050509
Delete that shit
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>>41050501
In roughly 9 hours or so, then?
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>>41050525
Sorry, just shut down the machine I made the post on and aren't getting back within the hour. Why even?
No I am not going to run late by getting back up the apartment complex, switching the PC back on and delete it just to appease someone on the internet for reasons I don't understand.
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>>41050551
Basically.
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>>41050448
As I said the OP did return to us and he did explain.
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>>41050580
Sweet
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>>41050448
Sweet, Yuri will arrive soon.
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>>41050580
Well I'll be waiting with interest.
Also, standard QM advice: get a twitter to announce threads.
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Is thread ded
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>>41054433
Thread should be alive again in about 3,5 hours
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>>41054941
bump for op
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>>41056964
Bump
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>>41050580
>>41058152
>>41056964
>>41054941
>>41054577
>>41054433
OP LIED, PEOPLE DIED.
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>>41058208
Patience young one. Give him at least 15 more mins.
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>>41058381
Time is running.
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>>41058426
>>41058381
TIME IS UP.
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Im here, im here...
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>>41058769
Ah, wonderful!
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>>41058769
That dammed necromancer Lyan, you can still remember the sound of the screams of her victims. You remember, in that hellhole she called a ‘’tent’’, a thousand pleading eyes following you… When she released her ‘’sons’’ on the battlefield, even you could not look in the general direction of the soon-to-be carnage…
And that semi-princess, and her lectures about ‘’one thousand and one reasons to kill peasants who look my way’’. She was always over-confident, thinking she was way better than others. Sometimes it was funny, but others… Hart trembles at the sound of her name, and you know damn well why. You were there, when she let the headless body of your previous bodyguard to rot by the sun when you were on a patrol. Poor guy… she gave so much reasons… ‘’He raped me! He beat me! He talked ill of me!’’, but you know that it was all to affect you, and she made it…
That dammed necromancer Lyan, you can still remember the sound of the screams of her victims. You remember, in that hellhole she called a ‘’tent’’, a thousand pleading eyes following you… When she released her ‘’sons’’ on the battlefield, even you could not look in the general direction of the soon-to-be carnage…
And that semi-princess, and her lectures about ‘’one thousand and one reasons to kill peasants who look my way’’. She was always over-confident, thinking she was way better than others. Sometimes it was funny, but others… Hart trembles at the sound of her name, and you know damn well why. You were there, when she let the headless body of your previous bodyguard to rot by the sun when you were on a patrol. Poor guy… she gave so much reasons… ‘’He raped me! He beat me! He talked ill of me!’’, but you know that it was all to affect you, and she made it…
[1/2]
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>>41058879
I sent it two times?! It happens...
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>>41058907
Sensing you tense, Hart puts his hand on your shoulder.
‘’Milady, let’s go, yes?’’ He says, trying to sound calm.
‘’Yes… Yes… Let’s go…’’ And then, the four of you go into the room… There, you see a large table, in one side sitting the boy, Tristan, and a tall man with silvery hair, probably his father, and in the other, an ill looking Hyllia, what brings a smile to your lips.
‘’Hart, be just outside, okay?’’ It’s what needs to be said to your loyal butler for him to silently turn and go out, muttering ‘’Thank you’’ on his way.
You then sit, at the side of Hyllia, what makes her stiff. Mary, Selena and Aria sit to your left then, occupying the middle chairs, and letting the two of the sides to the two others…
After some time, the man spoke.
‘’So, you must be… The heirs of the Valliant, Nyctoeth, Aronheim, Yarnham, and Arcelius, no?’’ he asks, the incarnation of neutrality.
‘’Yes’’ you all say, almost at the same time, earning a chuckle of the boy.
‘’Well. This boy here, this rebellious and disrespectful boy here, is my son, Tristan Ambrosius. I’m Zachariah Ambrosius, and I’m here to discuss with you a marriage proposition. You see, my son don’t have a talent. Not a single thing he is good at. He is my first born, and as per tradition, he has to inherit my place, as the head of the Ambrosius family. So, here is the deal: You have one year, the one who can turn this good for nothing into… Something, can have the right to marry him. It doesn’t matter who likes him more, or vice-versa. Any questions?’’ He says, coldly.

>’’No. I’m good with it.’’
>’’Actually, I wanted to ask about (Write-in)’’
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>>41058931
Define something. Anything is technically something, A pervert, a lech, etc.
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>>41058995
I second this.
Even good for nothing brat is something.
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>>41058931
Doesn't his feels play into this? I would hate to enter a marriage where there is potential infidelity already.
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>>41058995
>>41059206
Mkay. Writing.
Also, twitter is @Etro_Tan
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Should we describe how other girls look while writing goes on?
It is not like I might have a thing for girl necromancers or a-anything like it!
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>>41059621
I'll put it in the pastebin, with the atributes and other things...
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>>41059684
So the descrptions are already done?
Cool.
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>>41058931
‘’Actually’’ You start, calling the attention of the others. ‘’Can you… Define ‘something’? Also, the… Feelings part… If he, let’s suppose, ‘like another one’, I’ll have to marry him knowing that there’s potential infidelity in the relationship?’’ You say, and everyone seems deep in though. Moments later, Zachariah speaks again ‘’Well, with something, it’s not ‘anything’, but something good, I want you to make him someone worth of being the head of this family. Teach him magic, archery, alchemy, anything, so that he’ll find his place in this world. And, about the feelings…Well, I have faith. I’m sure that if he stops to hear what one of you has to say and teach, it’s already something.’’ He smiles softly, and then stands ‘’But, well, I think what I had to say is already conveyed to you, so… Get to know each other!’’ And then, he goes out, leaving his son looking terrified.
‘’Oh, my~ It seems that now it’s just we, how pleasant… I’m Selena Yarnham, pleased to meet you.’’ Selena says, with her usual and neutral smile.
‘’Mary Aronheim, and the lil’one here is Aria Arcelius.’’ Says Mary, with Aria still in that arm lock.
‘’Hyllia Valliant, p-pleased to meet you…’’ The one at your side mutters, looking to the floor, blushing… Wait… Don’t tell me that…
‘’And…. Joanne?’’ Tristan asks, looking at you and breaking your line of though.

>’’Oh, yes. I’m Joanne Nyctoeth, pleased to meet you.’’
>’’Nyctoeth. Mercenaries, assassins, that sort of things…’’
>’’Don’t you know?! Well, I’ll let you guess.’’
>Write-in.
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>>41060420
>’’Oh, yes. I’m Joanne Nyctoeth, pleased to meet you.’’
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>>41060420
>’’Oh, yes. I’m Joanne Nyctoeth, pleased to meet you.’’
Are handshakes a thing in this universe?
Should we offer a hand to shake/kiss, or handholding is considered lewd?
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>>41060420
>’’Oh, yes. I’m Joanne Nyctoeth, pleased to meet you.’’
Give an "Innocent" smile, You know the fake ones
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>>41060420
I want to go full teasing
>’Don’t you know?! Well, I’ll let you guess.’’
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>>41060420
>’’Oh, yes. I’m Joanne Nyctoeth, pleased to meet you.’’
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>>41060619
Boys shake hands, girls just do their thing, it's really relative. It's normal for a man to kiss the hand of a lady, but intimate couples usually do more...
>>41060659
Who don't?
Also, writing for it.
Sorry, tease-anon.
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>>41060735
Aaaaand there goes my trip. Again.
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>>41060420

>’’Oh, yes. I’m Joanne Nyctoeth, pleased to meet you.’’
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>>41060420
‘’Oh, yes.’’ You say, giving one of the best innocent smiles you have. ‘’Joanne Nyctoeth, pleased to meet you.’’
‘’Oh, yes, you’re from… The Nyctoeth… Wait, you’re from the mercenaries?! But you… You…’’
‘’Yes, Joanne is quite the tricky one, isn’t she?’’ Says Selena, with the same expression. Mary soon follows.
‘’Yes, yes, knowing her well, you stop judging someone for their looks, right?’’ And Mary, which finally escaped from the arm lock of doom, completes.
‘’Right!’’
‘’Wow… So you three are… F-friends, right?! Haha…’’ He seems nervous, awkward with the situation.
‘’Yes, yes. But, now, let’s talk about you.’’ Hyllia says, finally looking at his general direction, but still with that blush in her cheeks.

>’’Wow, already entranced by his charms, isn’t you?!’’
>”Yes, yes. Tell us about (Write-in)’’
>’’Why don’t we go first, Hyllia? We could tell him about (Write-in)’’
>Write-in.
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>>41061211
>’’Wow, already entranced by his charms, isn’t you?!’’
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>>41061211
>’’Wow, already entranced by his charms, aren't you?!’’
>’’Why don’t we go first, Hyllia? We could tell him about The noodle incident."
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>>41061211
>’’Why don’t we go first, Hyllia? We could tell him about that time you splashed me with holy water and got surprised I didn't melt.’’
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>>41061256
>>41061292
>>41061340
Writing. This one will be good....
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So are we just gonna end up being the cool sisterly one that nonetheless just likes to fuck with him because lulz?

I'd be down for that. I'd be down for that super hard.
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>>41061844
Sure why not
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>>41061211
"Wow, already entranced by his charms, isn't you?" You say, a sadistic smile spreading through your lips. She notice this, and you don't know if the red in her face is from embarassment or anger. "Well, why don't we go first? You know, tell him about those times, like when you splashed me with holy water and i didn't melt, for an example."
At these words, everybody else starts to chuckle, and Hyllia only stares at the floor, muttering "S-shut up..."
"Ohh, or i could tell them about... The Incident..." And, at these, the room is silent. All eyes are on you, even Hyllia's glare.
"You wouldn't...."
"Say 'I dare you' if you can." You reply, looking at her with the same innocent smile.
Unfortunately for you, the door opens, revealing two silver haired females. One of them is tall and proud in a golden armor, her glare piercing your soul. The other, small, thin and a little arched to your direction, with her vile claws poking out of her dark robe.
"Joooaannee~" the small one almost yells, slowly walking to your direction and sitting to the side of an uncomfortable Hyllia, smiling insanelly to you. The other just sits, and the silence is there again. Her eyes. On you. You feel it. Dammed Lyan.

>"Hello, Lyan, Diana. What a beutifull coincidence, isn't it?"
>"Being this late, you two won't have a husband too soon..."
>"Ohh, what do we have here?! The little princess and the gloomy midget, huh?!"
>Write-in.
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>>41061998
>"Hello, Lyan, Diana. What a beutifull coincidence, isn't it?"
>You do realize being late is unbecoming of a lady, oh wait I guess it doesn't matter then does it?
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>>41061998
>"Hello, Lyan, Diana. What a beutifull coincidence, isn't it?"
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>>41061998
>"Hello, Lyan, Diana. What a beutifull coincidence, isn't it?"
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>>41062034
Second, Deleting old vote
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>>41061998
>>"And so this strange circus is complete."

>>Sotto Voce: "The mad clown and the hilariously bad actor have arrived."
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>>41062034
>>41062063
>>41062088
Writing for this.
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Nice to see you're still alive OP. Too bad I couldn't rejoin the thread earlier.
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>>41061998
"Hello, Lyan, Diana. What a beautiful coincidence it is, no?! But, you two, this late... Not unbecoming of a lady, if you would ask me. Not that it matters, or does it?"
The silence. Here's the same as in the battlefield. It's not good...
"I would sugest you to guard your filthy words to you only, Joanne. It would be indelicate of my part to prive you of your big tongue." Diana replies, not even looking at your direction.
"Hey, y-you two... Why don't you stop fighting and..." Tristan starts, but is soon cutted off by Lyan.
"Heeey, Joanne....? I'm getting bored, why don't we play? I never got to show you my latest trick... It's so wonderfull...." She says, and you notice her hands around her black grimoire, trembling in antecipation.

>"Calm yourself, Lyan. We're not here to fight."
>"Soon, Lyan. Very soon... But now, let's be civilized, shall we? For him"
>"It's not a bad idea. Yeah, you cleaning the floor with your face will be entertainment enough."
>Write-in.
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>>41062658
>"Calm yourself, Lyan. We're not here to fight."
>"If you want to have a go at me I'd prefer it if it wasn't in front of my future husband."
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>>41062658
>"Calm yourself, Lyan. We're not here to fight."
>"If you want to have a go at me I'd prefer it if it wasn't in front of my future husband."
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>>41062658
>"Calm yourself, Lyan. We're not here to fight."

>"I'm certain we'll have more than enough time to engage in our...usual discourse later on.
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>>41062658
>"Calm yourself, Lyan. We're not here to fight."
Fuck, I thought the options that didn't provoke the crazies won.
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>>41062658
>Not unbecoming
That double negative makes it a positive

>cutted
The word is cut
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>>41061998
Hmm maybe we could see if dumping some holy water on Lyan would work
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>>41062758
>>41062768
>>41062770
>>41062796
Writing for NO FIGHTING!
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>>41062948
At least not yet
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>>41062948
"Calm yourself, Lyan. We're not here to fight, not in front of him, at least. We'll have time, you'll see..." It's the best reply for this situation, even as your blood boils.
"Ooohhhh, you're noo fuuun!!" She says, pouting like a little children, but soon returning to her usual insane smile, and Tristan soon talks again, trying to sound calm, in vain.
"So, you two..." He starts, berofe being cut again, this time by Diana.
"Oh, sorry. I'm Diana Asthros, pleased to meet you." She says, with an proud smile. "And this-"
"Hey, I'm Lyan. Nice to meet you!!" She yells, with a childish smile.
"W-well, now that everyone is here, i think it's time to-"
"What's your name?" Lyan asks, tilting the head to the side.
"Tristan... Tristan Ambrosius..." It's apparent that even he is a little annoyed with her. Good. "But, as I was saying, i want to know more about you. What is your favorite color, hobbies, you know? I'm really curious about you all." He smiles.
"I like blue" Lyan screams to Hyllia's ear.
"My hobbies are fencing and horse-riding." Says Diana, composed.
"I'm a blacksmith's daughter, what would you expect?!" Mary tells, laughing for no reason.
"Culinary and mathematics." Selena says with a serious expression, and then looks at you.

>Tell the truth.
>Lie (Write-in)
>Wait.
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>>41063697
>Tell the truth.
But change the fluff

I enjoy being sneaky to I enjoy long walk at night

I enjoy killing targets to I enjoy making the unjust(as dictated by the contractor) pay for their faults (as decided by the contractor)

Teasing politics


Tell the truth without saying it outright.
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>>41063697
>>Tell the truth.
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>>41063697
>Tell the truth.
Our favourite colour is red. Family obligations have mostly kept us from getting too immersed with any hobbies, but we think hunting (with dogs, crossbows and horses) is a lot of fun.
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>>41063843
Second, Deleting old vote
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>>41063697
>Lie

Aw man, Necro girl went from ominous serious enemy to lol so random
She's shit now
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>>41063867
She'd have to have been that in the first place to change
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>>41063882
Oh ok, so she was just shit all along, and hid it for a few posts, rather than being cool for a few posts and then turning to shit. My bad. Still very disappointing.
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>>41063946
Maybe she isn't too bad ones we get to know her?
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>>41063962
Anon's just being salty the character didn't turn out how HE wanted
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Soon you'll see how much she is really bad...
Also, writing.
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>>41063946
I'm pretty sure necromancer and crazy ass princess are supposed to be shit to us.
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>>41064015
>"Tristan... Tristan Ambrosius..." It's apparent that even he is a little annoyed with her. Good. "But, as I was saying, i want to know more about you. What is your favorite color, hobbies, you know? I'm really curious about you all." He smiles."I like blue" Lyan screams to Hyllia's ear.

Seriously? Is this your idea of a good character? Is this the type of character you want to interact with? Are you 12?

>>41064060
They're supposed to be rivals and enemies, not some 12 year old kids OC donut steel.
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>>41064093
> Fantasy Harem Member Quest #1
>Mad about dunut STEEL characters

Really man?
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>>41064093
How about you see actually fucking sit back and watch the QM do his fucking thing instead of being an assuming whiny little bitch?
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>>41064138
He can't just reject his nature anon...
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>>41064125
It's more the 12 year old than the donut steel. We're all supposed to be legal adults here, characters in quests shouldn't have the personality of penguinofdoom.

>>41064138
How about you point out shit where you see it in hopes that the QM will improve, rather than being silent, watching quests you like die, and wondering why everyone left?
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>>41064178
Do you even know where you are? What board you are on? Plus this is the internet, Not everything is going to be fucking serious buddy, You don't like it shut the fuck up or get out simple as that
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>>41064232
>boo hoo I like characters that a 12 year old could write! Constructive criticism is evil!!!

Go back to /mlp/
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Hey Etro, Maybe you should run tomorrow earlier? End the thread for now start a new one tomorrow?
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>>41064359
No need to stop due to one pissy anon
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>>41064359
If my math's right, it's about 6:00 where he is.

Quests tend to run on the QMs schedule.
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>>41064407
Eh just a suggestion
Might get more people tomorrow is all i was trying to say, Since today is a monday
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>>41064383
Yeah I'd rather just get one more update with a shitty personality Lyan and drop knowing the QM won't change, instead of finding the thread tomorrow.
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Ignore the troll and continue
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>>41064436
Just an idea, have you considered that she's trying to not be too creepy in front of Tristan?
We did refer to her as "the gloomy midget"
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>>41064539
Oi rule number 1. Do not feed the troll
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>>41064553
There's no solid evidence he was trolling. He could have a legitimate complaint.

I'm just trying to provide a reasonable thought.
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>>41064494
>>41064553
>someone with a different opinion is a troll
2/10 I replied

>>41064539
And her idea of that is screaming "I like blue" into someone's ear? That's not any better. Instead of having someone with the personality of an autistic 12 year old as a rival she's, actually, still an autistic 12 year old, just in a different way.
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>>41064539
Plus she didn't seem too concerned about seeming creepy when she asked about trying her new necromancy spell out on us in front of everyone, including Tristan.
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>>41063697
"My favorite color is red. Family obligations have kept me from getting any hobbies, but if i could point something, it would be hunting." It's the best you can say with a serious face. It's not a lie, it's just not all of the truth. Maybe someday, you could tell him...
"Singing. I love singing." Says an animated Aria, calling the attention of a blushing Hyllia.
"M-me too...." She says, almost in a whisper.
"That's interesting." He smiles, and looks at Mary. "What do you like to sing?"
From the way she is smiling, you know that they are going to discuss it for sometime. Maybe you should talk to someone else for the time being.

>Talk to Hyllia and/or Lyan.
>Talk to Selena and/or Mary.
>Talk to Diana.
>Interrupt the conversation
>Just wait silently.

You know, i think i'll end the thread in the next update. The first one was so that i could build the characters and their relationships. It's really my first quest, so sorry if it's not perfect, but I'll try to improve with time. [/Spoiler]
Also, signal dies at midnight here. Strange...
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>>41065008
>Talk to Selena and/or Mary.
Both? Both
Also your doing a good job so far for your first quest, There will always be some bumps in the road however, Don't give up though i'm enjoying the quest alot!
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>>41065008
>Mary
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>>41065008
>>41065008
>Talk to Diana.
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>>41065008
>Kidnap the husbando. He'll be yours all yours!

Let's see those bitches get their claws into him now!
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>>41065008
>Talk to Selena and/or Mary.
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Writing with this shitty signal. Maybe i should post the next after tomorrow, so i would have time to fix this...
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>>41065008
She seems to be having fun, so you let her and turn to Selena and Mary, who also turn to you.
"Seems like little Aria has a handicap against us." Selena says, with an amused smile.
"That's because he never heard her singing" replies Mary, giggling a little.
"Yes, she can try, but it'll be hard for her to surpass you, Selena." you say, granting you their laughter.
"Hey, hey. What about the two baddies here? Do you think they have talent?" Asks Mary, a playful smile to her lips, leaving you to imagine.
"Diana probably doesn't even like it, maybe it's 'a peasant's interest'." Selena says, thinking aloud, but not loud enought for them to hear. "And Lyan..."
"Cows weeping probably sounds better." It's just what you needs to say before you three starts to laugh histerically.
Ohh, this day is turning to be a good one, actually. Yes, you got a little sour here or there, but you too got to see old friends, and maybe, it's just waiting to get better...

[End of #1]

Thanks everyone, sorry if some of you didn't like it, I'll try my best to improve myself and gain experience with this. Next thread will be tomorrow or after tomorrow, at the same hour, in this same board...
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>>41065888
Thanks for running!
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>>41065888
Thanks for running hope to see you tomorrow!
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>>41065888
Thanks for running!

Sorry if I was too abrasive about Lyan, but having her randomly scream her favorite color in a conversation is a bit much. I think everyone can agree there is nothing good about a character who has actions like those as their defining trait, with the possible exception of that one other anon who got triggered. I'm happy that you're willing to improve, and look forward to future threads!



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