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You are Chitose Sonohara a 17 year yankii delinquent, badass, badboy, and high school student.

You’re currently attending the first semester of your second year at Onimaru Highschool of the Onimaru Trinity Sister Schools located in the dead center of your home-town-of-five-years, Eternal Diamond City on the eastern coast of Japan. While much of your time spent is just dicking around and going to school, you are also currently working part-time at your mentor’s establishment near the coast in the shopping district.

While you might have led quite the rough and tumble lifestyle for the better portion of a decade, it has come to your realization that FUCKING SHIT UP might not lead to the most prosperous of futures…

So super-charged with newfound determination to change your life, you CRASH INTO THE ROLLING MORNING!! Perhaps today will be great progress into a brilliant future of wonders untold!!

>Life has been -fairly- ordinary, but with recent revelations you’re beginning to think a bit more about what constitutes as normal or reality. They are quite deep thoughts for a degenerate such as yourself, but with the recent occurrences it is more than enough to get the gears turning. There’s no actual evidence or hearsay thus far to make you fully reconsider your understanding of the universe… but there has been enough coincidence to make you a bit weary… hopefully this will not hinder you as you continue to strive for a better tomorrow!

>Archive:
http://suptg.thisisnotatrueending.com/archive.html?tags=yankii%20reform%20quest

>Only Quest Text:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1MRFqElPK_oHjjdkrgDL8bEXeorwXrouhgXt70mSh6j8/pub

>Additional Information/Character List:
Coming Soon™

>Ask/Q&A
http://lord-grimsley.tumblr.com/

>Twitter:
https://twitter.com/Lord_Grimsley
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Yeah, just let these assholes come right at’cha! Now that you’re down a few of these wannabe thugs, the odds are -greatly- in your favor. It’s all downhill from here!

Mohawk is still trying to recover from the blow to his knee, but he’s making some real effort to get standing again. His brow is -so- furrowed, you know he understand what kinda shit idea it was to try and tumble with you. Shit, you’ve only hit the dude a -couple- times, and he’s already looking scared.

The Chick still looks like she’s trying to decide if she’s going to get back into the action or not, but she sure as hell isn’t looking towards the door anymore. Perhaps she’s resolved herself to not back down? Perhaps play defence? Whatever the hell it is, she’s got some moxie for not outright running like Shinai-Dude-the-First’s brother.


Broken Nose is still down and out, but by the tilt of his head he shouldn’t drown to death in his own blood. And speaking of Shinai-Dude-the-First, he’s still flat on his face, ass in the air like the little bitch he was. Martial artists, and thugs who can’t take shit blows at all… -this- is why you’ve been able to overcome these wannabe scrubs for so long, even in their greater numbers. They don’t know what it means to throw caution to the wind and say FUCK IT.

“Don’t think ya got me jus’ because there’s still three of ya againt me ya fuckin’ fools against only me! I’LL FUCK YOU UP! Unlike you’s chumps, I’LL NEVER GIVE UP! I’LL NEVER SURRENDER!” You charge forward at Pompadour. The sudden movement was seemingly expected by the pair who also leap into action. With a flurry of three left-hand punches to Pompadour’s stomach you lower down and raise your fist in preparation for an uppercut. “THESE FISTS OF MINE WILL BREAK THROUGH ANY BULLSHIT BARRIER BLOCKING MY PATH! I’LL GO FORWARD UNTIL THE DAY I DIE”

>[1/?]
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“FUGGHGH!” There’s the sound of a crack, and the impact and grinding of bone on bone. Somebody didn’t grit their teeth.

You leap into the air with your fist above you, and see your handiwork as Pompadour’s head is flung back. He lifts a couple feet into the air with the sheer force of the impact, and crashes down to the ground with a dull thud. Perhaps with that broken jaw he’ll finally learn when to shut his fucking mouth.

Your feet don’t even get to touch the ground when your back is assaulted from behind. Skinhead!

The large bastard bullrushes you straight out of the air, and pushes you forward! His manuever nearly floors you, but you’re too quick to react. You spin your body around in time to avoid a nasty kidney-shot from his brass-knuckles. You roll a few feet further and try to kip yourself up, but this time -he’s- too fast.

He pins you with a spreading, nasty grin plastered on his face that screams the fact he wants to fuck you up. Without much momentum, you’re trapped under his bulky mass. You swing at the bastard’s face with all you got, but it’s not affecting him at this sort of range and with the control he has. The position doesn’t hinder him -nearly- as much as you, and he’s able to draw his fist completely back and he readies for a powerful punch; aiming for your face.

CRACK!

>[2/?]
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“GHAAAGH!!!” Blood and splinters is all you see as Skinhead relinquishes his hold on you and goes to cover the back of his head. This is the chance. While he’s distracted and in pain, you wriggle yourself out from under him, and do an agile spin with your hands to swing your feet around in a circle to kick the bruiser in the face. It’s good!

He cries out in pain. The back of his head is covered in blood, and now he’s beginning to spurt blood from his nose. Nose job, indeed. While he’s still trying to regain his senses you rush at him and grab onto the collar of his shirt, and you pull that bastard straight onto your head for one nasty headbutt… then another, and another after that.

Even with all the blows to his head, it seems like he’s still only dazed. This fucker is actually some tough shit. Probably would be much better if he wasn’t rolling around with Pompadour, but you guess the pussy needs some actual muscle in his crew. Not that it helped him deal with you, though.

You crouch down and grab his legs out from underneath him. He falls ass-backwards onto his head, but you’re not done here. No. You keep hold of his legs, positioning them on either side of your torso as you stand while turning your body. As you spin more and more quickly, you’re able to gain enough momentum to lift his ass up into the air. With a good several more rotations you finally release him from your hold and he flies across the rooftop, and goes straight into the stairwell entry. With a loud thud you hear his body make contact with the ground. It is soon followed by the sound of skidding, rolling, and then the sound of his ass falling down the stairs.

>[3/?]
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“Good. I ain’t want to see your ugly mug when I finally get m’smoke in.” You brush your hands off on one another, and turn towards the last two standing along with you. Mohawk, and the Chick.

“Shit! No! I surrender! I’m sorry, Sonohara-sama!” Mohawk geneflects. He’s crying now, and bowing his head deeply as he kneels before you. Pitiful. He’s not worth your time anymore. “Please don’t hurt me!”

You instead direct your attention towards the Chick who’s breathing heavily, holding the broken handle of her baseball bat… Ah! That’s what broke over Skinhead’s skull. A quick scan reveals the rest of the bat is indeed bloodied and splintered near where you were when Skinhead had grappled you.

“Piss off Mohawk, and drag these clowns outta here.” You motion to the three unconscious bodies scattered around the rooftop. “I dun want them stinkin’ the place up while I get m’air, got it?”

“Yes sir!” He salutes and scurries off to begin draggin the rest of his crew off with him. The Chick also jumps with your command, and goes to grab for Shinai-Dude-the-First.

>Tell her to stop. She’s staying here.
>Let her continue
>Other [Suggestion]?
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>>42960317
>>Tell her to stop. She’s staying here.
Why'd youse break your bat over HIS head steada mine?
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>Success! (Overtime) Due to some crossed wires and a lack of attention, you’ve gone one round of Overtime and were -still- able to manage a Success! You burn 1pt of Hotblooded, and gain 1pt of Spirited!

>EVENT GET! (Positive): Spirited Threshold of 6 has been surpassed! Your never ending, manly spirit has caused sway in the battle! You’ve inspired one of your enemies to yeild by sheer determination, and cause another one to change sides! While your Spirited attitude was strong enough to better your situation -this- time, -too much- Spirited can cause an uproar when you might not need it. Gain 1 additional point of Success.

>Success (7/5)/Failure (4/5)

>[+0]Hotblooded: 4pt (Down from 5; Lose +1 bonus to primary roll)
>[+1]Spirited: 7pts (Secondary Roll receives a +1 bonus)
>[+2]Justice: 8pt (Target DCs have been lowered by 1)

>ASSKICKING COMPLETE!
>Pool Overflow!: You’re in Overflow of Success Points! The next Encounter Critical Success will instead yield a Grand Total of 4 Success Points rather than the usual 2, OR the next Critical Failure will be Negated and will instead result in Success! Success breeds success!

>[5/5]
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>>42960317
>Tell her to stop. She’s staying here.
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>>42960317
>>Tell her to stop. She’s staying here.
sup girl
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>>42960505
>You guys make me grin so very hard, just to let you know.
One of the girls we met has fluffy tails in her true form, doesn't she?
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Okidoki then...

I was pulled away before I was able to answer questions yesterday post-thread, so I'll go ahead and rectify that now!

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>Anon: also since it was 3/4 shouldn't we get 1 success for our roll and 1 success for our event and win at 5 success since we got +2 that turn?
>Spectral: Wait... Shouldn't we have 5 success now?

Yes on both counts. Exhaustion led me to not tally up Success. Good eye Anon and Spectral! Thus, rather than stripping you guys of a good roll and the effort, I continued the round with the results as was and added to the Success Pool. Overflow was a thing that I had thought of beforehand, but only now realize it wasn't placed in the Rurus. This will be fixed.

>Stuff about Fluffy Tails
You guys make me grin so very hard, just to let you know.

>That last rolled 1
This is hilarious. Are you the same dude? If so, keep rolling. You're bound to run out of 1's eventually! ROLL WITH MANLY SPIRIT!

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That said:
>Writing

***

Deleted/Reposted, because Anon deserves to be thanked too!

>>42960535
Maybe. Could be? Possibly!
Insert hope here.
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>>42960648
>tfw I was anon

inserting hope
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>>42960648
I will bring the fluffy tail to this quest with BURNING JUSTICE!!!
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>>42960729
my money is on our student council friend having the fluffy tail
inserting hope
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>>42960795
I was thinking the small redhead who gave us the glasses back, but any kind of fluffy works.
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>>42960795
I'm throwing my hat at Princess and her family being fluffy tails.
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>>42960952
Unlikely since they're magi and youkai busters. I'm betting long name girl and nurse's assistant are youkai.
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>>42960795
>fluffy tail
>not the girl who can't seem to learn how to dress like a human
Fluffy tail goes best with fluffy, messy hair.;
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>>42961024
In hindsight idk why I thought this but I was guessing she was an oni. I agree though she would be the best fluffy tail.
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“Oye Chick, I ain’t told -you- to clean up.” She freezes in place when you say that. Her brow furrows as she directs her terrified gaze up at you. You motion towards a -cleaner- portion of the other side of the roof, in an area furthest away from the door. “You’s stayin’ here wit me.”

Her knees begin to shake as she looks down to the ground, and then over at the stairwell. Her eyes linger at the possible escape route where Mohawk is bringing the bodies of his friends. He dares not look up at you, -or- over at the Chick.

“Don’t think ya can run. I can outrun over half of the Track and Field team.” Her eyes widen at this information. You happen to know this personally from the few times Tina has roped you -into- running with them. You’re as athletic as it gets, even if it’s waisted being a degenerate. “Don’t worry… too much. I saw ya helped me out back there. I’s just like to has a talk wit ya.”

Her demeanor calms, but she still looks quite nervous. She -does,- however begin to head over to where you directed her.

You reach down and fish out a pack of smokes tucked into the waistband of Pompadour’s pants. It’s still pretty intact, and you’re in need since Skinhead fucked yours up. After grabbing the cheap smokes up Mohawk comes by to colled him as well… that being the last of them. With a hasty retreat he returns to the stairwell and closes the doors behind him.

“Again! I’m sorry Sonohara-sama!” And the doors slam shut. Finally. A bit of peace and privacy.

“Oye, Chick. I’ve gotta thank ya fer helpin’ me out there. Why’d ya do it?” You light a smoke up, and feel the smoke enter into your lungs as you approach her. It feels good, and the effects of the nicotine and tobacco are immediately felt as you feel your body loosen up a bit.

>[1/4]
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>>42960990
I don't know. Just because their Youkai/magi busters, doesn't mean they aren't themselves.
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>>42961102
Oni are usually more exuberant and loud. Like Chitose. She had that monotone voice which is unlike oni.

>>42961150
They'd not be a rich and respected family if they were. Also since they are so well known and famous there would be rumors if they were.
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>>42961177
>Oni are usually more exuberant and loud. Like Chitose.
That's actually one of the theories I had about Chitose.

>>42961102
One other option is the cat senpai, who may turn out to be a nekomata or something.
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>>42961228
That'd explain her hair buns, perfect way to hide ears.
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>>42961177
checked and I was talking about our messy haired classmate not fangy's monotone friend.
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“My name is Nakamura… Azami Nakamura…” She reaches up and takes off the surgical mask that obscured her face. With it now uncovered, you’re able to see her full frown. “I.. I did it because what you said… How you said it… I could -feel- the emotion… I could -see- your drive… you… You’re not just -any- punk, are you? Not like Bushida-san’s crew.”

“Fuck no. Pompadour ain’t shit. He’s just a small-time wannabe. He’s got no drive, no spirit, and no reason.” You take a strong drag of your cigarette. It doesn’t taste -nearly- as good as yours, but the effects are still nice none-the-less. You allow the smoke to linger inside your lungs for a few seconds before finally exhaling it. “He don’t got no guts. He’s all bark, and no bite.”

“Is that so… I thought that he was bigger than that from how he talked… I guess I was wrong. Wha?!” Her expression is so deep and concerned, perhaps regretful. Despite whatever thoughts are going through her head, you lift her up, and bend her over your knee. “What he hell are you doing?!”

“Sorry Chick, I don’t know yer circumstances, and I’s grateful that ya helped me and all, but…” You take a firm grip of her waist and lift up her long skirt to reveal her ass. “Ya still ditched yer own crew, and that shit ain’t cool. Pompadour ain’t gonna take ya back, and nobody else is gonna teach ya this lesson, so it’s gotta be me.”

>[2/4]
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“Let go of me you stupid pervAHH!” She struggles, probably thinking you’re about to do lewd things to her, but instead you swiftly bring your open-palmed hand down on her panty-covered butt. You spank her, and do it hard. While she -seems- to have repented to some degree, this disloyalty shit’s still gotta be punished. You ain’t gonna beat her. You ain’t gonna tie her up to anything. Shit, most things you -could- do would result in possibly -worse- outcomes by other people taking advantage of the situation. While you -too- feel that this is a bit on the perverted side of things, this bitch needs -some- form of punishment or else she won’t learn that turning traitor is the single worst offence committed by mankind. It needs to be stopped. “UnhanAHHH!!! NO!! Let gAHHH!! Shit I’m soAAAAAHHHrry! PervAHHHrt!! BastAAAHrd!! RAAAAAHpist!!”

“Shut the fuck up and take yer lickin’s. I could do -far- worse to ya, like what you’s probably -originally- feared when I told ya to stay.” You continue spanking her until you can hear her voice weakening, and the sobbing begins to start up. “There.”

She scrambles to her feet when you release her and hastilly covers herself. Her cheeks are flushed, her eyes filled with tears, and she’s biting her lower lip. Of course she’d be pissed. “Who the hell do y-you think you are doing this to an underclassman like me?!”

“Chitose Sonohara, the biggest, baddest mother fucker in this school. Nice to meet’chu.” There is no smirk, there is no expression. You answer her question honestly and truthfully without even a hint of bite. You didn’t do this to her because you -spite- her, nor because you -enjoy- it… well… not in this capacity. This was punishment. P-U-N-I-S-H-M-E-N-T!

>[3/4]
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“No you’re a dickless, pervert, bastard who doesn-AHH!” You toss up the cheap pack of smokes and the lighter for her. You don’t know if in particular if she smokes or not, but it’s worth offering. Not like they’re any good anyways.

“Just sit yer ass down and relax. I’s did it because you’s got got spunk, a good mind, and because I think I could respect ya. I ain’t respectin’ a traitor who ain’t repented, though.” You motion towards the spot next to you, as you turn and flop down. You lean your back against the railing as your body is quite tired and beaten. The pressure stings, but is much better than the alternative of staying on your feet.

“Fine… Whatever…” She walks over to where you motioned, and slowly lowers her beaten bottom to the ground, wincing in pain as it makes contact with the cement there. After a moment of trembling she calms, and takes out one of the cigarettes. She looks at it for a moment before placing it between her lips, and clumbsily lighting it. She’s no expert in this.

This is proven when she begins to cough. This is probably her first smoke. It’s kinda funny.

>Say/do something?

>[4/4]
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>>42961342
Since she's new to this give her a rundown on the dos and don'ts of deliquinting. She's got spirit, but that ain't enough by a long shot alone. Also check that cut we got from the shinai kid, make sure it's not bad enough for us to see the nurse over.
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>Talk of Youkai
Your guys' theories are delicious, and hilarious at the same time.

Your musing is where I get much of my own entertainment.

Also, gonna be stepping out here for a bit in a few minutes. I'll get to writing upon my return.
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>>42961342
"Stick wid gum, kid. It's safer long term, and youse still look badass."

Should we carry her ass when we meet up with Kamiko-senpai? One chick wasn't a problem, we need to work on our girl carrying capacity.
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>>42961342
voteing>>42961416 with no carrying that is for friends which she isn't yet
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>>42961387
>Also check that cut we got from the shinai kid, make sure it's not bad enough for us to see the nurse over.
Should also remove the studs that got stuck in the wall. Don't want the school to have any hard evidence of the fight.
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>>42961442
But that isn't a veto for carrying the ones we do consider friends, right?
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>>42961416
>Should we carry her ass when we meet up with Kamiko-senpai?
No, she's not a friend yet. She might be an underling like Fangy soon, but she's not earned carrying rights like senpai has.
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>>42961442
>>42961471
Speaking of which, what's our upper girl lifting capacity, Grimmy? Can we upgrade it eventually?
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>>42961491
I imagine it varies by girl. Bun head and the American are tiny, where's as pres is taller than most guys. Granted she's tiny to us but we're a monster of a man.
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>>42961342
>>42961416
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>>42961605
I thought bun head was pretty thick though?
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>>42962011
Nope, she was muscular due to being a martial artist, but she's a legit midget.
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>>42961342
Finish our cigarette, then head back to class.
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>>42962130
Well, he said she had big boobs. I remember that.
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>>42962651
Being a midget doesn't preclude a bust anon.
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>>42962723
No, but I usually put big boobs on slightly thicker girls. Not a skinny midget. Probably means she's not a skinny midget.
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>>42962785
Doesn't mean she weighs that much either, Mc noted she was very light.
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>>42962011
>>42962130
>legit midget
Pffffft!!! But, this is correct. She's lean muscular. There's definitely some compacted weight in that tiny body of hers, but she's still teeny tiny. She's not -completely- slim, and does indeed have a bit of bulk to her; not -only- in a muscle sort of way. She eats and drinks like a beast.

>>42962651
>>42962723
She does. She's one of the two characters with the largest busts of the current cast. She's tiny, but she's packing some mighty mammaries. She's the second biggest, while Prez is the largest.

Proportionally Kamiko's are larger-looking.

>>42961491
Pretty damn high, and yes.
Chitose is buff. Not Shizuo-tier, but he's pretty fucking strong. As of the moment, depending on how many Hotblooded Points you obtain in a fight, you can -start- doing more ridiculous shit with that strength, but not to the point of lifting/throwing vending machines. On the upper tiers, he'd be able to knock down/uproot a street sign.

>>42962870
Very light, yes.

But this is also in comparison to a pretty buff delinquent who stands about 183cm. Technically Souichi is also pretty light to Chitose.

You guys stand about 2-3 steps away from being Monster-tier. But I'll leave it to your guys' imagination to why instead of just being fairly light, she's -very- light.

>Writing
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>>42963001
SHE'S KIRBY!
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>>42963001
Grim why do you set off my shadowruns like this, are we like half oni which is why we are so strong an rowdy? is she a youki of some kind too? are they everywhere? we have to know!
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>>42963001
She's a fluffy tail!

On a more serious note I have no idea. Probably magic but YOU HAVEN'T TOLD US ANYTHING YET!!!
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>>42963117
>wanting to have the whole mystery spoiled before even the first twist is revealed
Shame on you, anon!
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>>42963117
I personally like the idea we're either the supposed great evil dude or we're the outsider with the power to disrupt whichever massive ceremony is happening in a week or two.
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>>42963089
This mental image is fantastic. I can't stop grinning like an idiot.

>>42963117
Yes. You do. Soon, my child thous't shall know, and you will probably -still- be terrified by the sheer number of possibilities of events that -could- unfold around you. At. Any. Given. Time.

>>42963134
With all good things comes patience. Also, yes. You guys -are- still in the dark about the goings on of the world.

Have you guys considered if magic was potentially a -good- thing, or an inherently -bad- thing?

Have you guys considered if being mystic -requires- a form of inhumanity?

How about the chance that Sonohara -is- some malicious demon-lord waiting to be awoken by the Chosen Ones?

Have you guys even shadowrunned the name of that street gang?

There are infinite possibilities within infinite possibilities; including that this all very well might be the fevered illusion of a madman within an asylum, or that this first day is a dream.

Does Chitose -actually- have an older or younger sister?

There's also the possibility that there is no magic. There is no youkai. There is only ancient lore, legend, and imagination.

These are the things that keep me awake at night, because I don't think you guys are shadowrunning hard enough.
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>>42963337
Yeah... I think you're a bit more imaginative than I am.

I don't shadowrun until I have something to shadowrun about, seeing as how there's nothing we know besides something is up.

For all we know it's the moon people from Centauri Alpha.

So no shadowruns because it's all useless until there's something to anchor it in.
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>>42963337
...
What was the Gang's name again?
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>>42963525
I honestly can't find it, I don't think he included it.
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>>42963337
Not enough reasons to shadowrun yet, Grim. Need to hear some bad rumors, see more spooky stuff or notice that a previously prominent character has suddenly vanished before we start getting paranoid.

>>42963525
The Chosen Ones, I think.
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>>42963551
>>42963568
>Yankii Reform Quest 1

>Apparently streets are clear of any other thugs who might want to encroach on your turf, but he found some strange graffiti by what he thinks is a gang who call themselves “Chosen Ones”.
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>>42963601
Enh. Didn't make the connection between them.
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>>42963601
I had a San Juan at one point.
I wanted to name it The Chosen Juan.
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Nah, perhaps it wouldn’t be so good to tease her. She honestly looks like she’s trying. Perhaps -too- much.

“Eh, stick wit gum, Chick. It’s better fer ya in the long run.” You reach over and grab the cigarette out of her fingers as she continues to cough. She tries to look over at you through teary eyes as she feels the little, white stick leave her fingers, but is unable to keep them open for very long through each hack. Yeah. This is for the best. “Plus ya can still look badass. Shit’s actually pretty true wit most shit.”

“B-but!” She coughs a while longer as you take the current cigarette out of your mouth, and take a drag of hers to keep it lit. Like hell you’re just gonna let it burn out like that… plus you were probably going to have a second one anyways. It seems like her coughing fit dies down after a bit, though. “But, how am I going to be taken seriously if I don’t even do something on *cough* on this level?...”

“Ya kiddin’ me? Dirty Bart doesn’t smoke, and he used to be pretty big shit.” You alternate back to your original cigarette. Damn. Smoking this way is actually kinda hard. It leaves a lot less room for oxygen. “He used to run wit the Three Warlords.”

>[1/2]
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“Three Warlords? Dirty Bart?” She squints her eyes a bit, and stares at you in confusion. Man. She -really- doesn’t know. Poor girl. She must only recently decided to take up this cause, because she doesn’t even understand the underground lore of this city… not that you’re one to speak, not knowing the -whole- background of the city.

“Yeah. The Three Warlords. There’s Dirty Bart, the Crimson Scythe, and The Kid.” You count them off with your fingers as you go. Recounting each of their nicknames, or titles as some would call them. “They used to run this town some several years back when -they- were Onimaru students.”

“R-really?! Onimaru graduates?!” Her eyes widen in disbelief. She scoots closer to you and leans forward, eager to listen.

“Yeah. They’re still kickin’ round actually. They mostly stick downtown, by the shore these days.” You lean further back, fully relaxing your back against the railing. This talk fully reminding you on how much you’ve opted to not learn, in place of learning further delinquencies.

>Tell her more.
>Invite her to meet them.
>Other [Suggestion]?
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>>42963850
>>Tell her more.
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>>42963850
>Tell her more.
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>>42963850
>Tell her more.
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>>42963850
>Other
Get to class. Jesus man, you can't even stay on the wagon for one fucking day?
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>>42963956
We would but we look like crap and are still smoking.
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>>42963956
Man, we gotta take it at the proper pace. The fact that we made it to school and even tried to pay attention is like a 1000% improvement from what we usually do.
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>>42964055
>>42964004
>>42963956
>Pic Related
>This is -with- the improvements. I think you're doing pretty good.

Also:
>Writing
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>>42964318
Glad to know we have nice hair.
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>>42964502
Gotta keep that glorious mane looking good man.
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>>42964502
Kind, loving, and righteous hair, indeed.
We probably shouldn't shave it.
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>>42963337
I wouldn't mind if there was really nothing supernatural going on but chitose goes off the deep end with paranoia trying to find it.
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“Yeah… Dirty Bart was well-known as a womanizer, and an awesome face-guy. Dude could spit words that could make yer head spin ‘round. He’s gotten out of -so- much trouble due to a silver tongue. They could be breaking traffic lights, have been IDed by a witness, and get out of it ‘cuz he’d put a nice spin on how the witness is high or some shit.”

“The Kid was well known as a gearhead, and sooped up their bikes and shit. He got a kick outta makin’ something, and then using it for whatever the hell they wanted. Shit, he even created a special suit fer the Crimson Scythe that earned him his title! Rumor has it that he was some genius-shit that -used- to work for some secret society or some shit. But he’s kinda a nut.”

“Then the Crimson Scythe -himself!- He was -the- badass of the decade. He led the three of them into glory! He was super strong, super quick, and gave zero shits about the law! He’s tagged this town up and down, he put the gangs of their time in their place, and fucked up all the shit he possibly could! Destroyed streetlights, traffic signals, broke all the windows on mainstreet, and then some! His destructive terror was most known when he scrapped from atop his bike! He wouldn’t use normal weapons, he’s just stick out his arm and closeline any bastard who’d get in his way! With some special armor-shit that the Kid made, the Crimson Scythe could even bust holes through metal shit!”

Oh shit, you’ve gotten -much- too excited. By the time you’re done recounting the names of your heroes, you notice that -both- cigarettes have been smoked down to the butts. Well. You had to go back to class -some time.- You’ve had your two smokes, a fight, and took care of a lot of other shit. You stand up.

>[1/3]
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“Woah! Seriously?! They’re still around?! I’d like to meet them someday!” Azami stands up after you with her fists tightly clenched at her chest. Her eyes are glimmering in the afternoon sunlight, and filled to the brim with excitment.

“Well, they’re still kickin’ round so ya just might.” You begin to walk back to the entryway. You reach an arm around to feel the varrious areas where you were struck to make sure you’re not in -too- bad a condition. It feels like most of the blood has begun to solidify, sealing themselves up. Good. You won’t have to head back to the infirmery again.

“Hey! Sonohara-senpai! Where’re we going?” Azami follows after you like a little duckling. She steps in tune with yourself.

-”I’m- headin’ back to class after cleanin’ up. I suggest you do the same.” You glance back at her with a glint of minor irritation. You’re still trying to be a -good student- afterall. With a quick look at your watch, about half this period has gone by. At least you -probably- didn’t miss too much...

As you reach the stairwell, you stop before heading back inside to inspect where you lost the studs to your glove, but it looks pretty lodged in there. You -might- be able to get them out if you had some time and some tools… otherwise they are dug in too deep. You could possibly come back and retrieve them later.

>[2/3]
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“Class? But we’re delinquents! Aren’t we ‘sposed to be ditching and doing cool stuff instead?”

“Some would. But, shit. I’ll be damned if doin’ it yer life’ll ever amount to anything. While being destructive is fun, I’d like to try’n make somethin’ of myself.” You give her a wave as you head on down stairs. “Check ya later, Chick.”

“My name is Azami! Azami Nakamura!” She calls out after you. She doesn’t seem to be following you, perhaps she’s going to try and keep ditching. Whatever. You reach into your pocket and pull out a pakage of gum you brought today -because- you were going to try and be a decent student and not ditch for smokes; turns you you didn’t need em. Since she doesn’t smoke, and you advised her to, you toss her up the package. “Here, take these Red Ass.”

“What?! Don’t go calling me weird n-ahh!” Her face reddens with your comment, matching the hue you expect her -other- set of cheeks. You still don’t know much about this weird girl, but this seems to be a start. Her words cut off as she reaches out to catch the gum and fumbles with it a bit midair. “Th-thank you!”

You piss off from the rooftop, and head back to the second floor where you and the rest of the second-years belong. With a quick pitstop into the restroom to wipe the blood from your face, and to cool some of your wounds with water you head on back to class. It’s Japanese Lit.

>How do you enter?

>[3/3]
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>Dem typos
Never before have I felt like pulling an arch...
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>>42965090
Don't make a show about it and just take a seat. Show the teacher the note if you get asked. Act totally normal and try not to laugh at the others being weirded out.


Also we're part Oni.
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>>42965090
Quietly. If the teacher asks about our wounds, be honest.

What's next in terms of possible love interests, one of those yuki-onna as our Japanese Lit teacher?
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>>42965113
How do you find these pictures, Grims?
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>>42965090
Just head on in. If the teach asks, we show the note.
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>>42965197
This. It's what we got it for after all.
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>>42965196
Search up Nameneko.
I've actually -no- idea where I got the first two, but through some slick google-fu I've done found the source.

There are videos as well as pictures, and I fully intend to watch them later.

>>42965176
The Japanese Lit teacher is a ________

>Writing
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>>42965090
Head inside and set the note on the teacher's desk.
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>>42965292
My god.
SHE DOESN'T EXIST!
PANIC!
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>>42965292
>Nameneko
I just found this after I typed the name in.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-scI4-W_Iqw

If nothing else, thank you for letting me discover this. It's beautiful.
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Well then… Even though class is going full-swing right now, you can even hear the teacher’s voice reading from some book that you’ve missed the first half of already… Dammit. It honestly reminds you that you’ve actually gotta devote some time to reading -outside- of school now too… and homework. Being a respectable citizen is suffering.

Without any sort of flair or drama, you calmly slide the back-door of the classroom open, and enter. While you -could- go through the door situated near the -front- of the class, it would probably only make things stop even faster.

When the door makes the familiar clunk of it being unable to open any further you step into the classroom, and as you’d expected most of the class’ eyes are on you now; including those of the teacher.

You simply walk on in and sit your ass down in your seat located in the back row. Tina turns to wave excitedly at your entrance, and even opens her book and points at the page number for you. While you’ve never really accepted her help, today you are a different man. Her eyes widen, as does her smile, as you follow through and grab out the reading material from your bag and open it to the specified page. You’re also pretty sure you heard a squeal come from the sweater with feet.

Delilah has a look that is expression a mix of horror and surprise at your entrance, and her eyes dart back and forth between you and the teacher. She probably wasn’t expecting you to show up or something, or possibly is shocked at your audacity to return after skipping out on half the class. Keeners.

>[1/4]
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“Sonohara-chan, I don’t mean to pry, but I suppose it’s my job, but where have you been?” The teacher asks in her gentle and soft voice. Her heels click against the hard floor as she approaches you. She’s a very friendly, and caring teacher who loves and respects all of her students; even a lowlife like you. Her dedication and care really drive home the reason why she and Boris get along so well, and why they’re husband and wife. She nears your desk and places a hand on her hip, upon her professional-looking skirt’s surface. She then proceeds to waggle a dainty, little finger in your direction as she puts on her ‘mean face’. It’s about as mean as a newborn kitten trying to be intimidating. Her long, ebon hair is braided and slung over her shoulder; it dips down and brushes your desk. “You’ve already missed half the class, young man.”

“Yeah. I did.” You say calmly, leaning back into your chair. No reason to be scared of such a gentle creature. She doesn’t even have a loud enough voice to properly yell at you, though you can tell she’s trying. You hand her the note provided to you by Victoria-sensei. “Here. I actually had to carry my kohai to the infirmary, and get him all checked in. He was unconscious. Then I had to deliver some stuff to the Student Council Office.”

“Hmmm…” She takes the paper from your fingers and reads it. Her eyes scour the paper and seem to read each character one, by one with scrutiny. “Vikki-chan’s handwriting is so messy… But, okay.”

She raises her eyes from the paper and sets them back on you, and she smiles. She reaches out and pats you on the head a couple times, before quickly retracting her hand.

>[2/4]
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“Wait! But you look like you got into a fight, and it shouldn’t have taken you -that- long to run your errands. Sonohara-chan?” Yup. This is Sayako Pisuov. The gentlest creature in the entire world. She tries to resume her ‘death glare’ of puppies and rainbows. You’re able to stifle a chuckle, mostly because you know she’s trying to be serious. Tina, however, cannot do the same.

Tina’s holding her hands up to her mouth and trying to hold in the floodgates of laughter at the sight of Sayako-sensei trying to be uber serious. It’s probably only because of the supreme fluffiness of her sweater that no noise escapes.

“Yeah. I -did- get into a fight.” You sigh. “I’s went to the roof fer some air, and then ended up scrapping wit a group of kids on the roof. We had a strong disagreement about me being there, and things only went south from there. I kicked their asses, and that’s that.”

You probably cannot escape the wrath of the system with the evidence left behind, as well as the investigation that’s -sure- to be launched with how you look to find out if the fight was on school grounds… of course there’s still a shit-ton of blood, hair, and probably even clothing shreds on the rooftop. It’d be easy for them to spot it out, as well as discover the newly-made hole in the wall with your studs lodge within it… not like anybody else wears that same style like you. Not exactly, anyways. But, you can take solstice that Shinai-Guy’s bamboo sword is still up there, as Mohawk didn’t grab it. You’re not going to snitch on him directly, but if he’s stupid enough to leave it there for somebody else to find, he’s gonna get caught. His punishment will probably be worse, as you’ve come clean yourself.

“Who were these other children you were fighting with?” Sayako-sensei tries to grill you.

>[3/4]
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>>42966493
>Pisuov
>Piss off
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“Ain’t nobody worth talkin’ bout, other than Red Ass…” Shit. That probably sounds pretty bad. Oh well… Rome and all that shit.

“Red… Ass?” Her brows furrow.

“Yeah. I ain’t remember her name, and even if I did I wouldn’t tell ya. You got my side of things. Can we resume class now?” You pick up your book, trying to change the subject.

“Ahh! Yes. We can. Thank you for your honesty Sonohara-chan. I’ll make sure your punishment is just for telling the truth, but you’re still in trouble mister.” She starts back to the front of the room, which is now a murmur with the sounds of people whispering about “red ass” and what it could mean… nosey ass people.

Ah!... Tina is full on breaking down into her sweater, in a mix of laughter and blushing. Shit, you’re not going to hear the end of this one… Oh well, time to study.

>Roll 1d20
>Time to Study, best of 3!

>[4/4]
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Rolled 19 (1d20)

>>42966575
LEARN, BRAIN! LEARN!

(slams head into book)
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Rolled 12 (1d20)

>>42966575
Ha! Ha! Time for yet another nat 1!
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Rolled 19 (1d20)

>>42966575
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Rolled 1 (1d20)

>>42966575
WE ARE THE BEST AT LEARNING!
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>>42966629
fuck
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>>42966629
Well, you aren't, but at least Chitose is...
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>Alright boys! We’re done here!

Alrighty then, now’s the time for questions if you have them!
I’ll try my best to get to them tonight before I have to fully pack up and head out!

Also I’d appreciate a bit of feedback to potentially better you Question Experience! Critique is what helps us progress forward as people, afterall!
>Likes/Dislikes about the quest
>Did anything feel off about the Combat System?
>What is it that actually brings (and keeps bringing) you to this quest?

**

Also:
>>42966608
>>42966617
>>42966621
It looks like we get to do some learning this time.

>>42966629
This is hilarious, though. Wow!
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>>42966608
>>42966621
>>42966617
>>42966575
I am ever more convinced we need to be a brainy fighter.
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>>42966629
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>>42966660
Like the fighting system, like us teasing the girls. Hate the ones. I come for the buttkicking, headpats, teasing and introspection of occult shit that may not exist.

>>42966629
So glad this is best of 3
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>>42966660
Are you taking a drink for every 1 that's been rolled so far?
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>>42966660
You write well and your characters are interesting plus your setting has a great mysterious occult vibe going for it. It feels like we are slowly solving a mystery every time we play.
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>>42966608
>>42966617
>>42966621
Take that studying! We showed you!
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>>42966660
>What is it that actually brings (and keeps bringing) you to this quest?
Bosozoku kittens, mainly. SO FUCKING ADORABLE!!! Some of the interactions between MC and the girls are cute too.

>Did anything feel off about the Combat System?
Honestly, I'd prefer a 3d10 rolling system, especially after the truly ludicrous amounts of ones we rolled. 5 and lower are critfails, 26 and above are critical successes.
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>>42966660
There would be less ones if we used a d100 system.
As it stands we have a 15% chance of rolling a one, and likewise with a twenty.
If we used a d100 it'd be reduced to 3% each, which is much closer to d20 statistics.
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>>42966608
>>42966617
>>42966621
WE LEARNDED

And all it took was minor brain damage from slamming our face into a book.
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>>42966863
>>42966824
3d10 also works well.
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>>42966660
I like the quest, it's clear you're having fun writing it, I enjoy reading it. Cuteness is great, I can't wait to see what comes next.


>Dislike

I think you have too many characters. Don't get me wrong, most of them seem to have a background that you have in mind. But you've been introducing characters faster than threads. I feel like I don't have any connection with them, despite what's supposed to be there. If you're planning on keeping them around I don't feel like we'll have enough time to actually flesh them out. If you're planning on letting some of them slide, well I guess we'll see what happens.
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>>42966709
No, but now that you say that it -does- have potential.

>>42966688
>>42966780
Thank you. I'm glad that my writing, interactions, and the overall mystery of the world are appealing to you.

>>42966824
>>42966863
>>42966902
I'll take this into consideration. Whilst I rather like the d20 system for what it's worth, but there's been a STRONG presence of 1's

We'll stick with it fer at least one more go, and if Eternal Diamond City is still haunted by then, we'll switch over.

>>42966916
The intention of how many grills are in this quest is -almost- intentional. Some of them -might- not be able to continue on without as much interaction, but as it stands I'm running the quest with a VN mindset, although with a forward kinda attitude.

The story -will- progress no matter where you decide to go, what you do, and which direction yo choose to take. Each choice is another fork in the road.

I will not lie, when I say that some of them "might not be able to continue", it's more along the lines of them not going along with Chitose.

There are other things going on in the world that aren't our little Yankii MC.

The world moves on. Eternal Diamond City is a living, breathing entity where life continues on at many different speeds.

And yes. Each of them -do- have backgrounds, and I plan to flush out -some- of it through the use of flashbacks in the future.

Look forward to them!

Alright, if that be that! We're done!

>Twittersheet for them updates:
https://twitter.com/Lord_Grimsley

>Tumblr/Ask page for further questions:
http://lord-grimsley.tumblr.com/

I'll be back again TOMORROW MORNING!! Three days in a row, baby!

HOOWAH!!



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