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Welcome to Not so Glorious Quest!

This is a drawquest and an anything-can-happen (I mean it) wacky adventure, where (you) the player(s), will dictate the actions and decisions of our young 15 years old girl protagonist “Ilin”, in a medieval fantasy-esque setting. Her main objective is to become GLORIOUS! How do you achieve gloriousness? Well, we’re going to find out!

Illin will do anything you guys say. But her chances of success will depend on how well you describe her actions, if they make (some) sense and if she doesn’t suck at it. Have fun!

Disclaimer: My English sucks, mature themes could appear and this will get even dumber.

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Summaries, draws and Information about the characters and setting in our new fancy document: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Q7Cc_ztUb-GhH3B-WAPCFfVyi4pfYFa_v_01ooTafuo/edit?usp=sharing

Last chapter you basically fight a spirit (Mishi) out of your body and annihilated her, then Emily kicked you out for eliminating her mother (Hely) from this plain of existence ( you used her spiritual power (Hely’s idea, you didn’t want to do it) to enter back to your body).

Then you joined forces with your other childhood friend, Shimilia and your two favorite dudes (Wardell and Tinco) to go adventuring! But before doing that you and Shimi wanted to recruit Emily even though she hated you with all her being.

You went to her house and saved Emily AGAIN. This time from being possessed by her dead cat (Mr. Fluffy), then the spiritual power that was her mother fused with the cat’s energy and went inside Emily. At last, she promised you to never EVER leaving you and you are best friends forever and ever.

Your crew boarded a ship to somewhere not specified, but you stopped them because you wanted to confront your evil stepmother (Barbara) who kicked you at beginning of this quest starting all this mess. You went to your original home and had a discussion with her, and then took your dad’s stuff with you (one of the things was a picture of your mother).

Finally you left shore in the good looking boat to the ADVENTURE!!! YEAH!!!

So let’s get to IT!
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(Both Wardell and Shimilia received small appearance changes)

After taking dad’s stuffs back from your stepmother; you a boarded the ship who’s taking you… ehm… You don’t know where, but at least it is not Cacoth.

20 minutes have passed since setting sail. Emily and Shimi are waiting for you to say something about what happened just recently. You left without explaining what you were going to do and haven’t explained them yet what you did.

“So what happened?” Shimi asks you while bouncing around. She is a bit hyperactive.

“Whatever it was, you don’t have to tell us if you don’t want to.” Emily says.

“But that’s boring! And will be stuck in this boat for a looong time! We need to kill time!” Shimi gets annoyed.

“Well, there are better things to do, like asking where we are going, what we are going to do, and such!” Emily gets serious.

“Oh right! Our future! Let’s ask the boys!” Shimi stops moving as fast as before. She looks around and spots Tinco. “Mr. Tinco seems busy talking with the captain… Maybe we should wait.”


>Interrupt Tinco and the captain’s chat. And ask him what the plan is.
>Wait for Tinco to finish his conversation. Then ask him what the plan is.
>Tell the girls what happened with you and your stepmother. Then ask Tinco what the plan is.
>Go and bother the other sailors for fun. Being responsible can wait.
>Write In.
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>>579108
>Tell the girls what happened with you and your stepmother. Then ask Tinco what the plan is.
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>>579108
>>Tell the girls what happened with you and your stepmother. Then ask Tinco what the plan is.
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>>579108

Go bother the sailors; thats how you make friends, or find out if they are plotting to sell you into slavery.
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You decided it’s best to tell the girls what happened! No secrets between friends.

“Getting aggressive! I like it!” Shimi says proudly.

“That skank deserve it” Emily adds with a mischievous smile. She and your stepmother never liked each other either. “Do you want to find your mother Ilin?” She's refering to your mother's portrait.

“Why would she? She abandoned her!” Shimi chimes in.

“We don’t know that!” Emily refutes. “At least we should keep an eye on it.” Emily ends her statement; this is not something Emily would usually say. Maybe it’s her mother’s spirit influence or maybe she’s maturing.

“Mr. Tinco seems like he stopped talking with the captain! Let’s ask him what the plan is!” Shimi gets excited.

Before you could reach him, a loud crashing sound is heard by the side of the boat.

“What was that?” Emily says with scared tone.

“Maybe it was a shark! Angh angh!” Shimi pantomimes a shark bite.

You heard a loud deep voice coming from the side of the boat saying:

“MISS ILIN! I FINALLY FOUND YOU!”

You turn around to see the blockheaded guard from a while ago. He looks furious. This guard and another one were the ones responsible of getting rid of Emily’s dad’s body. The only thing they asked of you was to answer some questions the next day… You never did…

“LADIES AND GENTLEMEN INSIDE THIS BOAT, SHE’S A FUGITIVE OF THE LAW! I NEED TO ESCORT HER BACK TO LAND FOR HER TO RECEIVE HER SENTENCE!”

Uh-oh, things are getting complicated. At least Emily founds it funny…

>Excuse yourself with the guard; it wasn’t your intention not answering his inquiries. Now you will, but you just can’t go back to land…
>”Did you just swim after us?! We’re in the middle of the ocean now…”
>Resort to violence.
>Pretend you don’t know him.
>Write In.
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>>579263
>”Did you just swim after us?! We’re in the middle of the ocean now…”
>Excuse yourself with the guard; it wasn’t your intention not answering his inquiries. Now you will, but you just can’t go back to land…
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this >>579292
inquire as to what the charges are
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>>579263
>>Excuse yourself with the guard; it wasn’t your intention not answering his inquiries. Now you will, but you just can’t go back to land…
Can’t we answer any questions here? It’s not as if she had anything to hide (about that at least).
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>>579263
DID
DID HE JUST
SWIM
MAN
LIKE
SWIM TO THE FUCKIGN BOAT

WWHAT?
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“Did you just swim after us?! What?! We’re in the middle of the ocean now!" You said to the irritated man.

“THE LAW KNOWS NO… wait, the middle of the what now?” His anger is gone. He’s realizing in what he’s into.

You politely excused yourself with him, you said it wasn’t your intention not answering his inquiries, but now you will do it here.

“I mean I should charge you for evading the law but now that you have been polite I’ll ignore it. Let’s sit around here, I need some questions answered. Maybe when we hit land I’ll go back to good old Cacoth.” He’s back into his calm self. It’s kind of scary how well he’s dealing with this. Emily hands him a towel and you and the guard have a small conversation about what happened with Ukhlad. Nothing worth noting. Oh and his name is Oldwid.

After your small chat, Oldwid presented/excused himself to the sailors. They have a big laugh about it, and invited everyone to chat and drink. Emily and Shimi joined the sailors and the guard in their chat. They seem to have forgotten about knowing what the hell we are doing.

As the ONLY RESPOSIBLE ADULT HERE, you went to Tinco is and asked him what the plan is. It took you a while to find him. You ask him about everything.

“Well, we’re going to my hometown. There I’ll teach you girls some stuff, like reading. At the same time I’ll take Wardell to a friend of mine who could guide us in what our next step will be. Don’t worry, it’s a nice place.” He smiles.

That sounds boring. And not adventure-like. Before you could protest or say something against that, Shimi appeared out of nowhere and interrupted your conversation.

“Ilin!!... Come with me!!” she grabs you by the arm, she’s walking with a stagger and smells terrible. “Let… let… let show those Sailors who’s the strongest! Come… with me! You’re going to arm wrestle these fuckers…” she sounds drunk.

They are too many things happening too fast without anything making sense…

“C’mon Ilin!!” she’s getting obnoxious. Tinco looks worried.

>”Not now Shimi, I’m discussing important matters.”
>Ask her to explain herself
>”Okay, I’ll follow you”
>Take care of Shimi. She’s not in good condition.
>Write In.
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>>579678
>Ask her to explain herself
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>>579678
>Ask her to explain herself
>Take care of Shimi. She’s not in good condition.
>CAST ARMWRESTLE
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>>579678
>Ask her to explain herself
>Where the hell did you get booze?
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ou ask her to explain herself.

“Soooo… there was this mother-pleaser! He said… He’s STROOOONG! … I told him… naaaah!... My friend is the STRONGEST HERE!... you’re that friend… hehe… Then he said the only way to FIIIIIND out is with an arm-wrestling DUEL!!... I said bring it!... and now I’m here… hehe.” She sounds dumber than ever.

You ask her where the hell she got booze.

“Booze?! What booooooooze?! I only drink WAAAATER!!” she probably mistaken booze for water.

“Shimilia, you’re in no condition to stand up, let me help you” Tinco gets closer to Shimi, he wants to take care of her.

“Don’t touch me! You SHROOOM!” Shimi has none of it.

“Shroom?!” Tinco gets offended.

“Now LET’S GOOOOO!” she’s getting impatient.

You tell her she’s not in good condition to go with you.

“Oh okay, if yousaidso…” she falls on your chest… she’s asleep. Good dammit, Shimi.

“Well that made it easier” Tinco says relieved. “I’ll carry her to your room, the one you three will be sharing. It was kind of expensive, you know…” You can hear sadness in his voice.

>Let Tinco take care of Shimi! Time for Armwrestling!
>Tell Tinco you prefer taking care of Shimi and to lead you to your room.
>Write In.
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>>579850
>Let Tinco take care of Shimi! Time for Armwrestling!
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>Let Tinco take care of Shimi! Time for Armwrestling!
Why is this even a choice?
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>>579850
>Let Tinco take care of Shimi! Time for Armwrestling!
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Tinco promised to take care of little Shimi and went to the room.

Meanwhile you went your way to where the sailors are; it’s inside the boat in a big room. There are 3 or 4 big tables with 5 or 6 sailors in each. In one of them is Emily, she’s playing cards with them, and it seems like she’s losing.

There is a big congregation of sailors in one of them; of course, because it’s the armwrestling one. Oldwid is with them. You get between them; one of the sailors spots you and says:

“That’s the girl the little rascal was talking about, she has the devil’s horns” she points to your hair. You smile. There are 2 normal looking sailors squaring off. But everyone else is paying attention to you…

>”WHO DARES CHALLENGE ILIN THE GLORIOUS?!”
>Politely ask who made the challenge with Shimi.
>Ask for a challenge, you want to participate next.
>Write In
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>>580026
>Politely ask who made the challenge with Shimi.
That will only make the effect bigger when we trounce them.
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>>580026
>Politely ask who made the challenge with Shimi.
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>>580026
>”WHO DARES CHALLENGE ILIN THE GLORIOUS?!”
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You politely asked who made the challenge with Shimi. Your soft voice made most sailors lose interest.

“Don’t worry little cutie pie, it’s not necessary for you to break your nails for your friend.” The sailor who made the fuzz is mocking you.

You ask again, without changing your tone.

“Oh, you’re serious! I thought brave people just didn’t ask like cowards!” He keeps belittling you. “Behento! She’s the one!”

A big tough looking sailor appears in front of you. I mean, compared with these chumps he looks tough. But you for sure can take him out.

“So you’re the demon girl from Cacoth? Pathetic” He looks down on you. “There is still time for you to decline.” He feels pity.

>”I don’t decline challenges, mister. So let’s do this.”
>”Yeah, I’ll have to decline. Sorry for bothering you.”
>”YOU’RE GOING DOWN!”
>Write In.
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>>580137
>"I'm sorry, mister, but you can't weasel out of this. Your challenge is accepted, you can't back down now."

Be polite. Be professional. Have a plan to armwrestle everyone you meet.
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>>580137
>>580160
This
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“I’m sorry, mister, but you can’t weasel out of this. Your challenge is accepted, you can’t back down now.” You tried your best to be polite while saying this.

“Aw right, little cheeky cunt. Don’t cry when it’s all finished” He extremely mad. You think it’s because of you daring to challenge him hurt his ego.

The other sailor tells the guys to prepare the table for you two. You stand by one side of the table and your opponent in the other. Everyone is mocking your opponent for facing a little girl. He gets angrier and threw one or two insults at you. You couldn’t hear him because of all the noise.

Oldwid gets by your right and starts coaching you. But it’s still difficult for you to hear him. Too bad.

One of the sailors as referee asks you two to hold hands. Then he signals for you two start wrestling.

You without much effort, beat him. It wasn’t even a match worth talking. After your unanimous victory the room went silent. They couldn’t believe what you just did. Some sailors start whispering in fear, until the room went silent once again when you spotted a bigger and tougher sailor coming across the room.

“Now it’s my turn. I only lost once in my life, little girl, and now it’s your turn to feel the same.” He stretches. He looks like a tower.

You can see hope in every sailor face. He’s probably the hero around here.

>”I’ll accept your challenge, mister.”
>”I can’t do this, my hand kind of hurts a bit… he he.”
>”I’ll make you feel the same again”
>Write In
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>>580278
>”I’ll accept your challenge, mister.”

It's one matter to be beaten by a little girl, but to be beaten by a polite little girl...
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>>580278
>”I’ll make you feel the same again”
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>”I can’t do this, my hand kind of hurts a bit… he he.”

Guys, don't let them measure us. It could be bad.
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>>580290
This.

Let's shame him
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>>580278
>>”I’ll accept your challenge, mister.”
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You politely accepted his challenge.

“I feel bad for what I’m about to do… But every challenger deserves respect and my 100%”

The Sailor referee asks you two to hold hands. You look at your opponent dead in his eyes and say:

“I’ll make you experience defeat the same again” with a politely smile too. This will probably throw the giant dude out of his game.

The referee signals for you two to start the match.

You took your chance and with all your strength clutched victory in an evenly match between you two. Every sailor looks more defeated than ever before. You can hardly believe you have done it, but girl, this is the power of being SWOLE.

“Dang, I can’t believe I lost twice in one day.” Did he just say… in one day?, “You’re the real deal, lady, but there is one last challenge for you.”

You see every sailor here moving aside for your ultimate challenge. Who is none other than… Wardell!!! That’s probably what he was doing all this time.

“Sorry Ilin, but it’s time to make you humble.” Wardell says with confidence. He’s your ultimate test; one part of you thinks this is an impossible task for you now. Unlike every other instance you have seeing him before he looks cocky, happy and ready to take you down; maybe this is his true nature! Or maybe this is the first time he’s having fun!

This is no good…

>Politely decline, your arm hurts after the match and it’s better for you to save face.
>Politely accept, sorry Wardell, but you’re going 3-0 tonight.
>He took your first kiss! You’ll take his streak! You’re going down fucker!
>Write In.
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>>580505
>He took your first kiss! You’ll take his streak! You’re going down fucker!
Let's make this a match to remember
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>>580505
>Politely accept his challenge.
Put our all into it and fuck him up.
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>>580505
Oh god we are getting rekt
>write in
Get up and stretch while saying. "Don't wanna make you feel bad. Later, maybe."
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>>580505
>>Politely accept, sorry Wardell, but you’re going 3-0 tonight.
Channel your cool into your swole,
And activate your stand once more, using your inner most will power
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Against your better judgment, you politely accepted Wardell’s challenge. You’re still mad about him stealing your first kiss and you want to fuck him up good.

Oldwid grabs your arm and tells you that this is a bad idea and Wardell easily beat the guy you just barely defeat. You don’t care, you don’t decline challenges!

Referee asks you both to hold hands. When you did, you felt something weird, like your hand burning for a second, but that was it.

“Huh, remind me to talk about his later” Wardell yells at you. The crowd is getting too rowdy. He may have felt the same thing.

The Official signals for you two to start the match.



This is an evenly match!



Nobody knows who could win!



Neither of you have move a single inch!



You’re channeling your cool into your swole!



He’s moving! You’re maybe strong enough to defeat him!



You use your inner most will power and tried to activate your stand once more!



You feel the energy going through your body! It’s [Mother] back?!



Just kidding, Wardell fucking man handles you. He didn’t even try. You feel pathetic. Everyone is cheering for Wardell and patting his back. They starting to call you out as the loser you are. Wardell laughs at you and your puny attempt of defeating him. Feel the shame of defeat Ilin, because it sucks. You are about to cry… You couldn’t handle the banter and left the place.
Outside you broke into tears; maybe everyone in Cacoth was right when they called you a failure…

How do you cope with defeat?

>Cry in your room.
>Cry outside while looking at the moon. Nobody’s here anyway.
>Climb the mast, and cry there.
>Write In.
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Great job, you fucks.
>Climb the mast, and cry there.
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>>580848
Burst into tears while performing a series of push ups, pull ups and squats.
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>>580848
>>Write In.

Climb the mast, and then shout your best roar! The SWOLE code compels you to be awesome even in defeat
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>>580848
>Climb the fucking mast and start swolling. Turn your anger and sadness into fuel your workout. You will beat him. Defeat is a lesson on how to improve.
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You decided to climb the mast and began crying there, after a minute or two you shout your war cry to the sky! It’s sounded like a wimp, but you’ll get this roar thing better next time… Now you start swoling in sadness. Defeat is only a lesson on how to improve. It was the saddest exercise routine you ever did.

At some point sadness got to you again and you stopped training, then you fall asleep.

Its early morning, you waked up after hearing a loud scream. You look down from the mast and see someone stabbed bleeding near the door to the captain’s room, whoever it is, stopped moving. He’s dead. You couldn’t see who did it or who died. People are gathering near the crime scene.

You go back down, and see the body with clarity. It’s Oldwid, poor guy will never return to his motherland.

“Who did this?” one of the sailors asks. You’re here with 3 of them; they are too forgettable for them to have names. After a minute, everyone on the boat appears at the scene of the crime. You, Emily, Shimilia, Tinco, Wardell, The Captain, the first sailor who lost you, the massive sailor who also lost to you, the referee, the drunk asshole sailor and another 10 Sailors.

“I think everyone is here” the captain says while scratching his beard. He starts researching the body. “I never saw a sword like this…”

You look at it, and it’s your dad’s sword. Uh-oh.

“Who’s the owner of this sword?” Everyone is looking at each other, nobody says anything. “I guess we have a mystery in our hands.”

Oh no…You're still sad about your defeat and now a murder?!... what do you do?

>Say it’s your sword, but tell them you didn't do it and you slept in the mast all night.
>”DETECTIVE ILIN IS ON THE CASE, CAPTAIN!”
>Remain silent, you don’t want to look suspicious.
>Confess!... Even though you didn’t do it.
>Write In.
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>>581183

forgot the pic.
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>>581183
>Say it’s your sword, but tell them you didn't do it and you slept in the mast all night.

Also state we couldn't possibly have a reason to kill him. After all, he let us go.
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>>581183
>Say it’s your sword, but tell them you didn't do it and you slept in the mast all night.
We should be able to get anyway with this option. What kind of murderer voluntarily tells people that the murder weapon is theirs?
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>>581183
>>Say it’s your sword, but tell them you didn't do it and you slept in the mast all night.
Who the fuck touched dad's sword
>Try to communicate with the spirit.
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You told everyone that’s your dad’s sword. But you didn’t do it, because you were sleeping in the mast all night.

“I see, so you did it!” the first sailor who lost to you says. He’s holding a grudge.

“Mhmhmhmh! Don’t be a fool Mr. Sailor!” Shimi appears from the crowd with a smug expression on her face. “What kind of murderer voluntarily tells people that the murder weapon is theirs?”

“Ngh!” The sailor seems nervous.

“Maybe the real murderer is trying to incriminate someone else!” Shimi adds to her conclusion while pointing directly at him.

“Are you calling me a murderer?” the sailor answers

“I mean, you couldn’t beat a little girl in arm wrestling, how we can expect you to kill someone?” Shimi smugly throws a burn (how does she know?). Everyone gasps, with some sailors laughing. Little Shimi turns around and face the captain, then she says:

“Don’t worry captain! DETECTIVE SUPERSTAR LIGHTING SHIMILIA IS ON THE CASE!” she strikes a pose.

While everyone is busy with Shimilia’s dumb act. You tried to communicate with the spirit of Oldwid with no avail. Emily spots you doing that and gets closer to you.

“I can’t sense his spirit either. I have a bad feeling about this.” Emily tells you. She has more spiritual energy than you, since her cat and her mother are inside her now.

“ASSISTANT ILIN! COME WITH ME! WE NEED TO SEARCH THE BODY FOR EVIDENCE!” Detective Shimilia shouts.

>Play along with Shimilia.
>Do your own investigation with Emily.
>Join forces with Tinco. He’s by far the smartest man here.
>Maybe it’s better for you to not intervene.
>Write In.
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>>581567
> Play along with Shimi
She is a superstar detective, your nail this case in record time. Also
> Ask Emily to confer with Tinco
Just as a backup team though
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>>581567
>>Play along with Shimilia.
She seems surprisingly capable.
Have the othe two do an investigation together
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>>581567
>Play along with Shimilia.
Try and find a Deerstalker for you and Shimilia to wear.
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>>581567

>Play along with Shimilia.
This can't go wrong.
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“I’m going Miss Detective!” you shout to her, but before going by her side you told Emily to team up with Tinco to do an investigation by themselves. She nods and tells you to be careful and that whoever did it, it’s not normal. You nod at her and left.

“Let’s inspect the body!” Shimilia says enthusiastically. She doesn’t seem fazed by anything that has happened so far. She’s a brave person… or too stupid to comprehend the severity of things.

Shimi does a quick glance over the body and starts stating facts.

“I don’t think this sword is the murder weapon. At the very least was used as an overkill move. He seems to be bleeding all over the place for what I think were strikes!”

It’s true, Oldwid’s body is severely wounded everywhere full of bruises. Maybe Shimi is not a fraud after all.

“There is small trail of blood on the floor. Assistant! Let’s follow it!”

You, Shimilia and the captain follow the clue. It goes to your room.

“Of course! This is where the murderer found your sword! Maybe it all began here!”

“Didn’t you slept there miss detective?” The captain asks while getting away from Shimilia.

“Huh, I don’t remember anything! I was very sleepy yesterday! Now that you mention it, I don’t recall any blood inside when I woke up.”

That’s weird. Whoever the culprit is, he needed to trespass here and take your sword. The captain calmed down a bit and the 3 of you entered inside your room.

“It’s clean as a whistle… too clean I might add” the captain states.

You ask him what he meant by that.

“I mean, nobody uses this room, it should have some dust in here.”

“Indeed! Maybe the killer cleaned the room off evidence!”

But that should mean this is the true crime scene. But you heard the scream outside. You said this to them.

“Maybe the scream was a fake… It was a way to gather attention!” Shimilia puts her fingers in her chin.

“But why he needed people to see the body? Isn’t that stupid?” the captain asks.

“Perhaps, he needed a distraction while he intended to steal something important in this boat. Is there something of value inside this boat, captain?”

“Not really…” Captain thinks with Shimilia.

“What do you think Assistant?” Detective Superstar Lighting Shimilia asks you.

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>>582080

>We don’t have enough information to know who exactly did it.
>Tinco did it. He was the only one who had access to this room and had time to search for the weapon. You know he’s very educated so it wasn’t hard for him to clean this room and made this plan.
>Emily did it. She had access to this room, she knew about the weapon and it’s only one who knows how clean blood. Perhaps she holds a grudge with Oldwid.
>You did it, Shimi. Stop playing around. You’re trying to act smart to deflect the blame, you’re the only one who knows about the sword, who had access to this room and probably held a grudge with blockhead. And the only fast enough to run away to safety and pretend not doing it.
>Wardell did it, we don’t know what he’s exactly capable of, but we know he’s too strong.
>One of the sailors did it. Maybe to blame you, since they pretty much hated you for embarrassing them.
>Stop playing fool, Captain. You know everything about us and the boat. And you were MIA all night.
>Write In.

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>>582091
>>We don’t have enough information to know who exactly did it.
>We need more evidence. Who last saw the victim and did he have any know enemies. We should check the room further and
maybe we should inspect the body closer. check it"s possessions.
I do feel a bit suspicious of how shimi knew about the outcome of our arm wrestling. Let us ask her
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>>582091
>Emily did it. She had access to this room, she knew about the weapon and it’s only one who knows how clean blood. Perhaps she holds a grudge with Oldwid.

It's blatantly obvious!
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>>582091
>>We don’t have enough information to know who exactly did it.

And suggest that either was somebody with a lot of strenght, or it was a group of people as to be able to overpower Oldwid
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>>582091
>We don’t have enough information to know who exactly did it.
Maybe start interviewing everyone on board, try and get some alibis.
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You told her that you don’t have enough information to know who exactly did it, and maybe we should check the room further and maybe inspect the body closer. Like checking its possessions.

“Fine statement, Ilin! Not for nothing you’re my assistant” Shimi says proudly. “Let’s go!”

Your group went to the probably fake crime scene. Shimi started searching the body.

“Well, there is blood! Huh… nothing really. Well, the space where they usually keep their daggers is empty. Maybe that’s somewhere around here. We have a clue to find, gentlemen!”

That was somewhat useful, I guess. It wouldn’t be weird if he just forgot to bring it here…

You say to Shimi to come closer; then you ask her how she knew about the outcome of your arm wrestling match.

“Because you’re a beast! Duh! I mean, you didn’t take care of me so I assumed that you did the match” she looked uncomfortable answering your question.

Emily appears in the scene, she gets near you two and starts talking about the information she found.

“Well, we and Tinco interrogated everyone on the boat. The last man who saw Oldwid was the kind buff looking sailor. He said Oldwid wanted to check on you after hearing a weird scream outside.”

That scream must have been your roar… You asked if she found a dagger around here.

“No, not really. Why did you ask?”

“Because we didn’t find Mr. Oldwid’s one” Shimi says.

“It’s important?”

“Maybe, at least to figure out where he really died. We have our doubts, you see…” Shimi explains to Emily everything that you guys found. While explaining, Tinco arrived too.

“It seems you girls have exchanged information. I think we should stick together from now on…”

You ask Tinco to explain himself.

“It seems those “sailors” are conspiring against us. That includes the captain in our group by the way. I don’t know why, but it’s something Wardell told me. He’s basically our double agent now… but…” Tinco doesn’t sound like he’s totally trusting Wardell.

“Guys, I think I found another clue!” the captain yells, he was searching the body. “He has another stab wound. From something smaller.”

“The Dagger!” Shimi exclaims.

So it’s indeed here…

>Time to Interview everyone on board, time to get some alibis.
>Search for the dagger. This will lead us to our murderer.
>Go back to your room. You didn’t search it enough.
>You know who did it. And his/her/their name is/are “__”
>Write In.
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>>582524
> search for the dagger
Maybe we should just pin it on Wardell, he is a suspicious character and after he has walked the plank we will be the most SWOLE on the boat.
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>>582524
>Search for the dagger. This will lead us to our murderer.
Should help narrow down the suspects.
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>>582524
You know who did it. And his/her/their name is/are “__”
Emily. She's a cat, and cats are mean.

SCIENTIFICALLY
PROVEN
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“Let’s search for it!” You told your crew. Everyone (including the captain) goes their own way to find it.

“But we should stick together!” Tinco yells; no one really paid him any attention.

In a moment of brilliance or maybe luck, you went to the captain’s quarter to search for it. You sneak inside without much trouble, and on his desk you found the dagger, it’s all splatted in blood.

“At least I found you!” It’s Tinco, he followed you. “What?! That’s the dagger! You found it! What is it doing here?! “

You kind of shrug and tell him it’s basically the same situation with your sword, the murderer it’s trying to pinpoint someone else.

“So the captain is basically innocent? If we go by that logic you’re also innocent” wait, he still doubted you?!

“Sorry! I know you’re smarter than you seem, so I thought the sword could have been a way for you to ditch the blame… My bad. Maybe I’m overthinking this quite a bit.”

Wait a minute! Of course!

A drunken Shimilia…

Dad’s sword…

The soul disappeared…

The trail of blood to your room…

The dagger…

You know who exactly did it!!! Well, not really! But fuck it! We’re going to guess it ANYWAY!

(Failing horribly this answer could mean something very, very, VERY bad. So beware)

>Emily.
>Shimilia.
>Tinco.
>Wardell.
>The Captain.
>Sailor who pointed you out of the crowd.
>Behento, your first opponent.
>Muscly Kind guy, your second opponent.
>A group of sailors.
>You.

(Last Reply of the day, see you guys tomorrow!)
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>Search for the dagger. This will lead us to our murderer
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>>583222
Whoops, my bad. Ninja'd.

>>583163
Shit this is a tough call...
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>>583163
You're mean OP! Wardell use magic to beat us in an arm wrestle? That cheater!

I'm having thinking of motive to be honest, and with no witnesses we kinda need that.

Maybe the captain is smuggling some shit (dakis?) and the cop confronted him about it ... And then tried to frame us? But why not just throw the body over board?

Could have been Emily trying to protect us from the law, but why would she leave the sword there?

Shimi might have been possessed our dune shit but the guy shows bludgeoning damage.

We still need to talk to Wardell about that weird sensation when we wrestled him.

Could have been one of the sailors, maybe the drunken asshole one because ... he's a drunken asshole.

Shit I have it! We can just rule it a suicide, no-one will miss this guy anyway! Well, maybe his swim club.
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>>583163
do we really have to guess???

here is my current thought process:
-he was killed in our room: only tinco and shimilia were there and possibly emily
-he came to check up on us because of our swole cry last night
-he was killed that same night in our room
-we wake up to a scream in the morning
-dead body is extra slashed by our sword outside, blood trail in our oom
-dagger is used framing the captain
-if shimilia was drunk and knew about our involvement with the father's death, there is a good chance shimilia might had said something to the guard about it
-possibly leading to the guard being killed by someone to protect us?
-missing soul spirit detection
-only soul person we know is emily

I can only see this being emily or tinco, not really shimilia since she was drunk, possibly they worked together, but I don't see why they would do extra bloodletting with your sword, assuming one of them took his dagger and killed him with it.

or its some unknown third party who really hates the captain and wanted to frame him that we do not know.

theres just not enough info for us to scooby doo this shit.
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>>583163
It might have been Emily’s crazy ghost cat. Souls gain power by consuming other ghosts and both the can and the mother are extremely protective of Emily.

The scenario I imagine is this: The sailor entered Emily’s room for some reason. The two souls felt threatened. The attacked the sailor and ate his soul. Emily wakes up. Emily tries to hide the murder by cleaning the room, removing the body and pretending it was stabbed to death instead of soul-killed.

In this case, the stab wounds only happened after the body was already dead. Therefore, it should have bled only a little?
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>>583893
If the killer wanted to protect us, then I think we should pin the blame on a ghost
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It was technically us because mishi'ssoul isn't gone?
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>>583953
Except our sword was left at the scene of the crime.
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>>583982
>he thinks ghosts can't grab swords
topkek pleb lrn2>>>/x/
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>>583982
That'd totally fit mishis' wants, to get us killed
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Side note 1: No ghost is the culprit. This is a detective case! I’m not bulshitting you with a murderer that didn’t show up until the end. I think it’s against the rules of writing detective stories. One of the men or women in this boat is the killer.

Side note 2: Ghosts are spiritual energy/power with consciousness, for them to become pure spiritual energy/power they have to lose their consciousness forever and can’t return to their previous state (Unless someone with a strong spiritual power can turn them back for a little while).
This is what happened to both Hely and Mr. Fluffy, they both became pure spiritual power and are inside Emily. You have some leftovers of Hely’s spiritual power in you, but that doesn’t mean she’s living inside you like Mishi was. It’s just energy now, at best they can react to some stuff sometimes, but it’s out of instinct, not because they are conscious about what’s happening, hence why they will never rest in peace.

Since these “small” details kind of fucked up people’s judgment (my bad!), I’m going to give you guys more clues, narrow the suspects and give you the option to give up and stay alert for the worse… And don’t worry; this is will be last time I’ll do a detective case…

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>>584331

“Hey Ilin… what’s up with that face? Did you really found out who the murderer is?” Tinco asks you. He seems enthusiastically nervous.

Most clues you found were placed by the murderer; it seems every single one of them was basically an alibi for the persons he was trying to blame, since he tried to blame 2 different people with 2 different murderer weapons. That takes 2 out of realm of possibilities: You and the Captain.

But why would he/she blame you two? You don’t have anything in common and are not even friends… Maybe he/she wasn’t trying to blame you two… he wanted a reaction… That’s it! It’s about who you are, not because he/she hates you! Everything makes kind of sense if you think about what he/she did after the murderer! Or perhaps what he didn’t do… THE MURDERER IS...!

>Behento! Your first opponent! He tried to stir up shit with you after the murderer! He expected you and your friends to act hostile against the crew and create animosity between everyone. He also put blame on the captain so he could join us and he could finally get rid of him too! He also befriended Wardell thinking he was the strongest of all! Remember he did have delusions of grandeur.

>Shimi! She was the only one who you know for sure it was in the real crime scene at the time. Don’t be fooled by her charm! She’s as stone cold as they get! Out of your group of friends, she was the most hated at Cacoth, and seeing the guard here (plus being drunk) made her hate flow through her and killed the poor guy. She played detective because she was hiding clues, made you guys look at the wrong places and to create doubts in everyone else about you two since you never give anyone your alibis, remember she quickly befriended the people she was trying to blame.

>Tinco! You did it. You were at the room at the time of the murderer; you are the only one creating animosity between us and the sailors. He didn’t stop you from armwrestling, he let Wardell arm wrestling too (knowing full well he’s nuts), he befriended the captain, told us about Wardell’s information about them hating us… in fact you put the captain in our block because it’s the only one of them you need to direct the ship. He blamed you because he wanted a violent reaction from you and for your crew (with Wardell) to defend you; he wanted to take the sailors out of the ship for some reason… And the biggest clue of them all is… he followed you where the real murder weapon is… but why?

>Emily! It’s the only one of the suspects that can cleanse a spirit! And one of the few with access to you room. She also knows how to clean up blood, where the sword was, and that guards have daggers… but why?

>Wardell! We don’t know what he’s exactly capable of, but we know he’s too strong and have some magical shit!... but why?

>Give up and stay alert for the worse…
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>>584337
It's obviously Behento
Tinco is a nice guy
Shimi is obviously too weak to cause such damage
I'm pretty sure Emily can't control here spirit powers, plus her Dad's spirit didn't appear after he was killed
Wardell is a cool guy, is magic and doesn't afraid of anything

Whereas we don't know Behento
He could possibly have a grudge on the ship's leadership
And so far, he plans his kills like someone who barely knows us
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>>584337
>Give up and stay alert for the worse…
I suspect it's Emily but I don't know.
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>>584356
I'll second this anon.

Not very good at shit like this but he's made a convincing argument.
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>>584337
>>584337
Ok. The only people with soul powers we're acknowledged of are Ilin, Emily, and probably Wardell. The fucker is versatile.

Let's assume we're innocent on this one.

Something happened our room, at the very least, somebody took the sword. Shimi was too drunk to notice anything, but what about Emily ?

Emily is most likely the culprit here. But I kinda like her, and she still has no motive.

About wardell... He sure could have done this, but not the whole cleaning the room without waking Emily up.

I think it's Emily, but my detective skills are far too shitty for anything else.

>Give up and stay alert for the worse…

But be very wary of those two.
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“The murderer is… I don’t know… Behento? Maybe?” you said out loud with no confidence at all. Maybe it’s better for you to keep your guard up and expect the worse.

“Who’s Behento?” Tinco asks confused. You tell him who this guy is and what he did. “He’s the bald guy with a goatee, got it… Well, let’s show the rest the dagger; I think we know who our murderer is.” He believes Behento did it.

You two left the quarter in pursuit of Behento. Even if he’s not the culprit, he could lead us to him. In the deck of the ship, where the body is, everyone of your group (Emily, Shimi and the Captain) is waiting for you two.

“Did you find it?” Shimi says meekly.

You raised the dagger as a signal of victory!

“Then my suspicious were correct.” The captain draws his sword and attacks you. You dodge it. Good thing you were prepared for the worse!

“What the hell are you doing?!” Shimilia yells. Then she jumps at the back of the captain and starts biting his head. Emily tackles his stomach making him fall down, and then you and Tinco restrained him.

“Calm down, captain!” Tinco tries to reason with him. “She didn’t do it! She just found it in your quarter!”

“Of course she did! I hide it there! Only the murderer would have known!” What kind of fucked up logic is that? He sounds insane!

“Wait you did find it?!” Emily gets furious. “Why didn’t you told us before?!”

“My men find it! You rascals are not getting away with this!”

“Your men?” Tinco says confused. As soon as he finishes his sentence the group of sailors appears around you and Tinco. They grab you both by the neck, then the arms and finally the legs and drag you away from the captain. You tried to resist to no avail. There are too much of them.

“We got them, captain!”

“Throw them in the cell! We’re going to figure out what we’re going to do with them later!”

“Stop! you’re making a mistake!” Emily yells furiously, she’s punching the sailors in back. Shimi bites the captain again…

“Stop that or you’re going with them!” the Captain says to Shimi, she stops.

They get you inside the ship and throw you in bad looking “jail”, Tinco promptly follows.

“Assholes!” Tinco says. He’s really mad. “Now what do we do?” he’s scratching his head.

>Let’s wait. We’re going to have a fair trial, right?
>Let’s find a way out. Maybe we could mutiny, and take the boat!
>Let’s find a way out. We’re going to get that bastard murderer to his knees!
>Write In.
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>>585310
>>Let’s find a way out. Maybe we could mutiny, and take the boat!
This is really not looking good for us.
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>>585310
This situation makes no sense. We should wait and find out what's going on.
Have Wardell talk to the sailors since he seems to get along well with them.
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>>584356
Thirded. Hope you're right, the reasoning is sound.
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My brains hurt.
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>>585310
>Try to communicate with someone outside. Our friends will surely visit us soonish, right? Right!?
Dealing with the mentally unhinged is so frustrating sometimes…
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You haven’t done anything wrong yet. So you decided to wait.

“I guess waiting is not a bad idea.”

After 2 hours of waiting, doing basically nothing productive (except for exercise). The captain showed himself down here.

“Oh thank the goddess of the sea, you didn’t escape” he seems relieved.

You ask him what the hell.

“I’m so-sorry! It’s a long story of good decisions meeting bad circumstances! Long story short, my men are rowdy bunch, and lately they have been scheming against me since things aren’t going our way. So I figure it out that the only way to have their trust back is following their demands. So they came up with this idea of baiting the killer into finding his own murder weapon in my office. Brilliant, Am I right?” He smiles.

“Being quite frankly, that plan doesn’t make any sense, and besides, doesn’t that mean you basically lost your power as a captain? What’s the point in doing all this?” Tingo says, you can feel the disappointment in his tone.

“What do you mean? I still have my cap! They still follow my orders! Well, most of them do! I’m their captain and leader!... And their role model! You murderers!”

You ask him who made the plan.

“I told you my men!”

You mean specifically.

“That’s confidential, miss. And I’m ashamed for both of us for you asking such a dumb question.” He gets mad. Oh god, he’s fucking stupid. A new level of stupid. “Well, my men want you dead and they ordered me to let you know, so I hope you’re ready to die tomorrow, nothing personal.” He leaves.

You yell if he can bring one of your friends here. He didn’t pay attention.

“I’m sorry, Ilin… I should have picked a better ship…” Tinco adds in a sad tone, he starts gently bashing his head into the bars.

>Let’s keep waiting. Our friends surely are making a plan to save us!
>Let’s escape this dump. If we wait for our friends, they must likely do something reckless to save us.
>Write In.
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>>586038
> squat Tinco
> bend bars
> rampage until you find Behento
> make him squeal and confess
> use SWOLE powers to counter the massive amounts of stupid
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>Squat TINGO
>Bend bars
>Squat bars
>Rampage until you find Behento
>Squat Behento until he squeals and confess.
>Squat stupidity as a concept.

Also

>Let’s escape this dump. If we wait for our friends, they must likely do something reckless to save us.
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>>586038
>Let’s escape this dump. If we wait for our friends, they must likely do something reckless to save us.
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You used Tinco for a squat session. He kind of lets you do that, but you can feel he’s paralyzed in fear. You hear him whispering “pleasedon’tthrowmepleasedon’tthrowmepleasedon’tthrowme”. Now you put him aside, and then you tried to bend the bars… You didn’t succeed.

“Oh, you wanted to bend the bars! Lucky for us, they didn’t take my stuff. Here” He hands you a bottle with a weird substance inside.

“Drink it; it’s going to make you feel stronger for an hour. It’s a really rare and expensive potion I bought a while ago from an alchemist” Tinco smiles. You drink the mysterious potion and feel incredible power going through your body! It’s like a burning sensation.

You try again bending the bars and it was easy, HAHA! You’re super strong now.

“Good job! Too bad that was the last one I had, Now we have to find the… WAIT!”

You run away, you’re going to find the fucker Behento and make him pay. You tried to open the door but you ended up destroying it… Oh well, it’s not your boat. One sailor spots you.

“She… escaped… Gu-gu—“ you interrupted his speech with a punch through the floor. Then you make direct eye contact with him and smiled.

“Wha-wha…” You gesture him to shut up, then you ask him where Behento is.

“Inside the sailor’s quarters, please don’t hurt me…” he’s about to cry. You get inside the ship looking for the bald piece of garbage. You found him discussing with Emily and Wardell.

You…

>Beat the shit out of him until he confesses.
>Use him for squatting until he confesses.
>Just intimidate him until he confesses. Perhaps he didn’t do it.
>Write In.
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>>586315
SQUAT
THE
MAN
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>>586315
>>Use him for squatting until he confesses.
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>>586325
Yes lawd yes
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>>586315
>What the hell are they talking about?
>Threaten to squat him if he doesn't spill everything he knows
>Actually squat him if he doesn't take us seriously
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>>586315
>>Use him for squatting until he confesses.
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“What are you doing here?!” The bald man exclaims at seeing you. You jumped where he is, and grab him by the side and start using him for squatting.

“Ilin!? What are you doing?!” Emily screams in mix of happiness and surprise.

“MAKE…

HER…

STOP…”

Behento yells to his fellow sailors every time he reaches the top. They start approaching you, but Wardell intimidates them with his glare.

“Take that you bald idiot!” Emily insults the fucker.

“PLEASE…

STOP…

I’’LL…

DO…

ANYTHING…” He pleads for your mercy. You told him he needs to confess.

“OKAY! I’LL ADMIT IT! IT WAS MY IDEA TO BLAME YOU WITH THE DAGGER! PLEASE HAVE MERCY!” He admitted one of his sins.

You tell him to keep confessing, you’re squatting quicker. “I WAS THE ONE SCHEMING AGAINST THE CAPTAIN! I’M SORRY!”

It’s not enough; he needs to confess his ultimate sin. “BUT THAT’S EVERYTHING I DID, I THINK I’M GOING TO PUKE” You started going even faster and at the point where you saw his tears fall, you drop him. He puked after reaching the floor.

“Wait, if he didn’t do it, who did?” Emily asks shocked.

“Elementary, my dear Emily” Detective Superstar Lighting Shimilia appears from the shadows, she’s using your trusty long branch (from the first chapter) as a long pipe. “He didn’t do it. In fact, our killer escaped after the fact. That’s why we couldn’t find him, but we did find the clues.” She adds.

Shimilia gets closer to you and whispers: “We know the truth, we’re going to tell you later.”

I guess this is case closed…

In the aftermath, both the Captain and Behento went to the cell because Tinco is a resentful man. Muscly kind Sailor was appointed as the new captain, but Tinco and Wardell are the true guys in charge until you reach shore. All the sailors asked you for forgiveness, but you didn’t give it to them. Shimilia was praised as the greatest detective ever. And Emily prepared a delicious banquet for you 6 (includes the new captain).

After your delicious dinner, its night, Tinco told you that tomorrow you finally will reach your destination. You have some free time now.

>Let’s ask Shimilia who the fuck did it.
>Let’s spend time with Emily.
>Let’s ask Wardell for a rematch. You know he cheated.
>Write In.
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>>586666
Beautiful satanic quads my friend!

>Let’s ask Shimilia who the fuck did it
>Ask Wardell what was up with the burning sensation back when we arm wrestled
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>>586666
Quints
REMATCH WARDELL. WE ARE THE SWOLE
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>>586666
> Ask Shimi why she killed the guy
> Fuck you Wardell
Hail Satan!
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> Ask Shimi why she killed the guy

Because srsly.
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You know it’s not case closed, time to ask Shimi for answers! You went to the deck of the ship and asked her who did it. Shimi was looking at the sky, she turns her petite head around with a grin on her face.

“I didn’t hear you right! Did you ask Detective Superstar Lighting Shimilia for answers?” she’s teasing you. Her ego tripled just for the praises she heard today.

You ask her why she killed Oldwid.

“Wha-wha-what?! No I didn’t! You don’t trust me?! I thought we were a team!” Shimi is crying. You told her that you’re teasing her.

“THOSE! JOKES! ARE! NOT! FUNNY! I told you!!! MEANY! MEANY! MEANY!” She punches you in the arm with all her strength for every word that comes out of her mouth. She’s so weak; it ended being a funny moment. She wipes her tears and began her tale.

“You weren’t totally wrong about your assumption. That fateful night, after drinking so much water and being left alone in our room. Our great detective Shimilia decided to go to pee. Without realizing she was naked!” You don’t like where this is going. “Emily was undressing our heroine to put her pajamas! But no great hero uses pajamas! So I left the room looking for the bathroom while Emily was chasing me for SEXUAL INTERCOURSE.”

“Shimi, stop bullshiting her.” It’s Emily, she sounds furious.

“Emily! I thought you were doing… girly… things…” Shimi is evading Emily’s stare.

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>>587151

“No, no, no! Let me tell you what really happened!” Shimi seems uncomfortable. “So I arrive to our room and this knucklehead was puking everywhere. Tinco couldn’t deal with her anymore and told me to take care of her and left me with all this vomit! Of course I had to clean after her! When I finally got back after throwing all that shit out, Shimi was jumping around everywhere like a monkey. I tried to stop her, but then she started hugging me by the back and telling me to show her my fat tummy! SOMETHING SHE SHOULDN’T KNOW.” now Emily is glaring at you.

“We don’t have to indulge in such details.” Shimi coughs.

“Okay, then I tried to stop her so I started tickling her to the point of exhaustion. Then I tried changing her clothes because of course she has vomit all over her. But when she was wearing only her stupid shirt she run away! Now I know it’s because this stupid apple-head wanted to pee.”

“Heroes have needs, you know?” Shimi is completely embarrassed.

“When I was chasing after her, blockhead appeared in front of us asking where you were or something. But Shimilia jumped right in front of him showing her purity, and called ME a sexual harasser or something! And tried to protect Shimi. She probably confused me for a boy.” Oh right, her short hair. “Then we two struggle a bit until… you know, I stab him…”

That explains neither the bruises nor the sword.

“Oh, believe me, it does explain the bruises. The trail of blood was me trying to clean myself from the blood at our room” Emily says. “Now, the sword…”

“It was my idea!” Shimilia says. “Emily left the body there and I stab him with your sword! I was drunk, don’t ask me why!” She’s hiding something.

You ask them why she didn’t remember the sword or being involved in this thing at the beginning.

“You really think she remembered? Of course I told her while you were in prison.” Emily answers.

What about the scream? Why did she play along if she was the culprit? Why did she didn’t told anyone?

“The scream… that was funny, that was Wardell when he found the body. Maybe he got triggered or something” Emily shrugs. “I didn’t know what to do, so I followed people around. I knew I was fucked. And I wanted to tell you, but you were always with someone else.” She stares at the floor feeling guilty. “I’m sorry.” Emily ends her tale. Shimi tells you sorry too.

>Forgive them, and search for Wardell, we need to settle your duel.
>Forgive them; it was a tough day for them too.
>Play hard to get, it’s time for them to appreciate how good of a friend you are.
>Tell them what they did is unforgivable, and that your friendship is over.
>Write In

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>>587167
So... They just sort of murdered him for no reason? That's... not great, but eh, we've done worse.
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>>587167
>Write In
What the fuck.
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>>587167
>play hard to get
I mean hey we sorta destroyed a guys mom's soul, things happen
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>>587167
>>587214
Seriously Emily, what the fuck?
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>>587167
Seriously Emily, what the fuck?
he was just trying to help the almost naked drunk girl
>Play hard to get, it’s time for them to appreciate how good of a friend you are.
next time try not to stab people as a frsit thing and try to talk it out liek god dam
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>>587237
>>587231
>>587200

Well, this IS the "Not So Glorious" Quest after all.
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>>587167
Emily that was worst story, nothing in it made sense. I think in getting dumber just from hearing it so I am going to forget it and pretend that EVERYTHING IS NORMAL.
> forgive then, go find Wardell.
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>>587320
That's the spirit!
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“What the fuck?” you said to both girls.

“It kind of happened… I’m really sorry” Emily keeps staring at the floor.

“Yeah it wasn’t great! But I swear we will never do that again!” Shimi smiles nervously.

You look at Emily and said: “Seriously Emily, what the fuck?”

“Stop judging me! You have done by far worse!” Emily is getting upset. “I mean, I didn’t want to kill him you know!” she begins to cry. “He was hurting me and… and… and…”

You told her to calm down, and for the next time to try to talk it out before getting to the stabbing part.

“You think I didn’t try?! I’m not a monster!!” She gets away from you. “He forced himself on me! I was scared! I didn’t want to die and even less after cleaning vomit for hours! I couldn’t sleep because of it! It’s all Shimilia’s fault!! I thought you would understand! You idiot!” Emily storms out of the deck in direction to your room. Great! More drama!...

“Trying to making you feel guilty about what you just did, so she doesn’t feel as bad about her crimes. What a low tactic… Am I right?” Detective Shimi chimes in with delusions of grandeur. She’s trying to make herself look good when it’s all her fault. You look daggers at her.

“What? I said I was sorry.” Shimi looks at you confused.

>Go and talk to Emily. Man, she’s such a pain…
>Make Shimi feel guilty. At least someone has to pay for making you suffering all day.
>Tell Shimi you haven’t forgive her and go with Wardell, You’re going to deal with the girls tomorrow.
>Write In.
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>>587498
>Write In.
Get Emily and Shichimi, make it clear that we haven't forgiven them for what they've done, but we need to move past it. Once the ship touches down in the port everything changes. We need to turn over a new leaf, we can't let something like this happen again.
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>>587498
Tell Shimi to go to her room. Go find Emily and ask her to judge you match with Wardell.
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>>587498
>>Go and talk to Emily. Man, she’s such a pain…
saying sorry is nice and all but it wont change what has happened to everyone on this ship
but thanks for saying it. also emily dosnt have a fat tummy, its comfy
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>>587498
>>Go and talk to Emily. Man, she’s such a pain…
Jeez, Emily, don't do things we'd do...
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Talk to the Emily.
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You said saying sorry is nice and all but it won’t change what has happened to everyone on this ship. Shimilia looks guilty.

“I didn’t… I wasn’t trying to… I…” She’s lost on words. You thanked her for saying it anyway and grabbed her by the hand. You drag Shimi with you to your room.

“Huh? What?! We’re following her after all?!”

You told her it’s everyone’s business to resolve.

“Oh okay.” Shimi sounded sad. She’s starting to understand what she really did.

You knock your room’s door, and asked if Emily’s inside.

“What if I’m inside?! Huh?!” Emily yells, she’s mad. “Tell me Miss ‘too tough to relate to your friend’!” oh c’mon, what a drama queen.

You yell to pay attention, then you make clear that you haven’t forgiven them for what they have done, but you three need to move past it. Once the ship touches land everything changes. You three need to turn over a new leaf, you can’t let something like this happen again.

Shimilia is looking down, you see tears on her face. Your speech moved her.

“I’m sowwy!” She barely can say those words. You hear the door slowly opening, it’s Emily peaking outside, it seems your speech worked on her too.

“I’m sorry too, and you’re right… but...” but what? “Can you forgive me for something else?”

You open the door, Emily kind of falls on her butt… Oh no... she ate your strawberry cake… all of it. The one you were keeping in your stuff.

“You didn’t leave a piece, you piggy!” Shimilia says. “You’re only making your fat tummy bigger!”

You correct Shimilia and told it’s a comfy tummy.

“What did you slept on it?” Shimi asks confused.

“STOP TALKING ABOUT MY TUMMY!” Emily shrieks in despair, she composes herself and says: “Please forgive me again, Ilin” She looks disheartened. She knows she fucked up again. Shimi tries to hide her laugh.

>Forgive her about the cake, take her to Wardell, she needs to referee a match.
>”I thought we went through this…” in a disappointed tone. Then scold her before leaving for the match.
>Storm out. Leave to where Wardell is. You can’t handle this shit anymore.
>Write In.

(Last reply of the day, tomorrow we continue in a short session. Thanks for playing!)
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>>587899
> forgive her
The cake getting old anyway. Tell Shimi she shouldn't be judging someone for over indulging considering this hole debacle is because she can't hold her water-we, rum.
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>>587899
>Write in
Sigh, smile and leave. It's the universal sign for "you know it's fucked and it's up to you". Get Wardell's.

THEN WRECK THE FUCK
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>>587899
>>Forgive her about the cake, take her to Wardell, she needs to referee a match.
so she a comfiy eater
she can redeem herslf by refing this arm match
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>>587957
Why the hell not. Seconded.
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Also thanks for running!
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thanks for this
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>>587899
>>”I thought we went through this…” in a disappointed tone. Then scold her before leaving for the match.
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“I thought we went through this…” you said with a somewhat disappointed voice while looking at the ground.

“Well, habits die hard, you know.” Shimi joins you in your disappointment.

“Stop… don’t… I’m…I didn’t…” Emily is broken inside.

You tell Shimi she shouldn’t be judging someone for over indulging considering this whole debacle is because she couldn’t control her bladder.

“Ngh!...” Shimi looks at you completely embarrassed, she covers her… pee zone with her hands. You made both feel bad, as they should.

You told Emily, she has a chance to redeem herself a little.

“Wha-what I can do to help you?” Emily looks at you with glimpses of hope in her eyes. You said it’s time for the rematch of the century and you need a referee.

“Wait! What rematch?” Shimi asks confused.

“You mean with Wardell? He told me about it when Tinco and I interrogated everyone.”

“Wait! He beat you?!” Shimi is surprised. “And I was so high on you…” She’s teasing you now. You answer her that she’s not going to watch it for being annoying.

“huh?! HUH?! NO!” Shimi is in disbelief.

“That’s for being a terrible friend, Shimi!” Emily attacks her as well. “Let’s go, WE have a score to settle!” Emily teases Shimi with a grin in her face. Little Shimi gets so mad that she jumps on the bed and buries her face in a pillow. You can hear her crying.

Emily and you leave the room. You tell Emily you’re still mad with her.

“I know…” She’s evading your sight.

You two arrive to the captain’s quarter. Tinco and Wardell are inside. You talk with Wardell.

“hey, Ilin, did something happened?” a stoic but somewhat happy Wardell says. Tinco waves at you both, he seems busy reading something.

>”About the arm wrestling match… When we touched our hands, what was that?”
>”Motherfucker, it’s time for a rematch.”
>Politely ask for a rematch.
>Write In.
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>>593436
The guy doesn't know his magic; he barely even knows anything. He's just a happy kid in a big body with too much magic. So, if we rematch, he's break our arm without even knowing how. So

>Politely ask for a rematch.

because why not.
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>>593436
>>”About the arm wrestling match… When we touched our hands, what was that?”
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>>593436
>Politely ask for a rematch.
Then
>>”About the arm wrestling match… When we touched our hands, what was that?”
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>>593436
>”About the arm wrestling match… When we touched our hands, what was that?”
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You asked about your incident when you two touched hands.

“good thing you remember, I needed to talk you about that. when our hands touched, I felt despair, suffering and sorrow for an instant. the sound of a loud shriek in absolute pain went through my mind. like some sort of vision… so I needed to ask you. what the fuck was that?”

You came here for an explanation, and you’re the one giving them now? Huh… You look at him puzzled.

“You didn’t felt that?” Wardell is confused; he’s touching his forehead like trying to remember something else.

“Maybe it was a side effect of the potion I gave you.” Tinco overheard your conversation and adds in new information.

“Excuse me, what potion?” Emily asks.

“I gave him a strength potion for him to beat those sailors in arm wrestling matches. I told him to have fun, but he wanted to win… our Wardell is a scumbag cheater. Ilin drank one too on the cell, that’s how we escaped.” Tinco explains to Emily disinterested. He did fucking cheat.

“you told me it was a lucky charm and to drink it. you didn’t told me what it was.” Wardell says annoyed.

“I didn’t tell you what it was? huh, I thought I did… weird.” He keeps reading his book.

>Ask for the rematch politely.
>Call Wardell a cheater and demand a rematch.
>Ask Tinco why he gave Wardell the potion.
>Explain Wardell what the sensation really was…
>Write In.
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>>594077
>Explain Wardell what the sensation really was…
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>>594077
>>Explain Wardell what the sensation really was…

Just knowing your SWOLE didn't fail you is enough, better to bury that incident and continue.
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>>594077
> demand a rematch
There are no magic potions to save you now!
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>>594077
>Explain Wardell what the sensation really was…
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You told Wardell what you think it was. Maybe, just maybe, those were the remains of the spirit of Mishi, the soul who once possessed your body and you eliminated from existence with the power of SWOLE.

“How that even works?” Tinco asks perplexed.

“I don’t know. But believe that things do happen.” Emily looks kind of embarrassed. She may have remembered her incident with Mr. Fluffly.

“I mean, if Wardell can spit fire. I can believe in ghosts no problem.” Tinco adds.

“You spit FIRE?!” Emily gets excited and jumps around near Wardell.

“Yeah, that was the only good thing that Fat ass could teach to Wardell” He’s referring to Rufo, the illusionist/magician from Cacoth. The adoptive son of the soul you crushed.

“This is not okay, Ilin.” Wardell get serious. “You cannot decide what to with spirits. It’s neither your realm nor your duty. She was a poor soul searching for his son.” It seems Wardell can relate to Mishi’s wishes.

“I mean, it’s too late for that now, don’t you think?” Emily looks at Wardell with a sad face. She doesn’t like to think about mothers losing their sons.

“It’s never too late. She’s still there.” He points to your left hand. The one you didn’t use for the arm wrestling match.

“Wardell, Rufo told you about not dealing with the dead.” Tinco tries to calm the big guy. He has none of it and holds your hand.

“Don’t worry; it’s only going to hurt for a bit.” Wait what is he doing?! Is he trying to make Mishi back?! But you can’t bring a soul back from being a spirit form!!

“Yes, they can’t return to their form forever. But only for a little time is enough!” Wardell screams, he using some spiritual power bullshit and its working. You feel your hand burning. You are trying to escape but he’s holding too tightly.

“Stop! Wardell!” Emily is punching Wardell in the face. He’s unstoppable.

“Oh no! That fatass was right! You’re some kind of dark sorcerer!” Tinco tries to stop Wardell too. But it’s useless.

The burning sensation turns into extreme pain! You see a soul forming out of your hand! It’s Mishi’s spirit! She looks like Hely and Mr. Fluffly before entering Emily’s body! It means she’s just pure energy or just a plain strong spirit! It’s a lot bigger than you remembered! The ghost thing smiles at you displaying her tooth gap.


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>>594749

She jumps on Emily!! And gets repelled… The warm aura of Hely and Mr. Fluffly appears around Emily, they are still protecting her.

“Wait, spirit! This is your chance to tell us your wish for us to accomplish!” Wardell tells Mishi. She ignores him, sees her opportunity and jumps now into Tinco. Poor guy couldn’t resist her influence.

“I’m back, ILIN!” It’s Mishi! But its Tinco’s voice… this is weird. “Don’t worry, brat! I don’t want your body! Dealing with you is such a pain!”

“Wait! Spirit! You’re not strong enough to inhabit a body! You’re just wasting the little time you have!” Wardell tells Mishinco(?).

“What? Are you stupid? That’s not how spirits work, you dummy! Yes, maintaining our spirit form takes a tool on us. But being inside a body doesn’t waste energy!” Mishinco starts laughing. “Thanks for the third chance, big boy! This time I’m going to find my dear Aiden!”

You can’t feel your left arm, but you tried to restraint Mishinco anyway. Obviously she evades you and then punches you in the gut. It didn’t hurt much, but it incapacitates you anyway. You fall on the floor.

“Ilin!!” Emily screams.

“Sorry, brat! I hope you understand! Now I need to find me a girl’s body. I don’t want to have a dick.” Mishinco runs from the captain’s quarter. Emily and Wardell just looked at her go, like a duo of idiots…

>”What are you guys doing?! We need to chase after her!”
>”Shimi is in trouble! We need to get to her!”
>”She will try to get a sailor’s body so she can hide from us! The girl thing was a lie!”
>”Wardell you’re a fucking IDIOT!”
>Write In.

[2/2]
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>>594798
>>”Shimi is in trouble! We need to get to her!”
If a sailor gets got, who cares. we need to save our friend!
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>>594798
>”Wardell you’re a fucking IDIOT!”
>”What are you guys doing?! We need to chase after her!”
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“WARDELL, YOU’RE FUCKING IDIOT!” you yell to the poor man who only had good intentions.

“I’m sorry…” His voice is so calm and relaxed that you felt it wasn’t sincere. You change your focus, your friend is in danger.

“Shimi is in trouble! We need to get to her!” You yell again from the floor in impotency. Wardell and Emily look at you for a second, then nod and both left the room to protect Little Shimi.



Well, you’re slowly getting up. For some odd reason the punch really took a tool on you…



I guess a chasing scenes suck when you’re not actually chasing anyone. Well, let’s redeem that by actually getting out of here…

You left the captain’s quarter. It’s still night and is hard for you to see anything. You stumble your way through the boat until you reach your room. It’s locked. You yell if anyone is inside.

“Ilin! It’s you!” It’s Emily’s voice, she sounds relieved. “Let me open the door for you!”

“No!” Shimi screams inside. “She may have got possessed. We can’t trust her!”

“Shimi, that makes no goddamn sense.” Emily says pissed off.

“She got possessed before! Why wouldn’t she be now?!” She has a point. But still…

>Yell an embarrassing secret of Shimi that only you both know.
>Yell an embarrassing secret of Emily that only you both know.
>Just ask to get inside again…
>Write In.
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>>595306
> tell an embarrassing secret of Shimi
"Remember that one time you wanted to play doctor.. "
Fucking dark lord Wardell, we should put him in time out in the crow's nest for the rest of the trip.
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>>595306
>>Yell an embarrassing secret of Shimi that only you both know.
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>>595306
>Yell an embarrassing secret of Shimi that only you both know.
>Yell an embarrassing secret of Emily that only you both know.
You know, just to make sure that we completely convince them. Totally the reason I'm voting for this.
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>>595878
>Someone needs to recover Tinco’s body. Without him we don’t have a plan when we get to land.
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You decided to tell embarrassing secrets of your friends.

“Hey Emily, remember that one time you decided the best way to confess to Frederick was to show him the dumb looking altar you made of him, yes, the one with the dumb doll you made that looked exactly like him! And he laughed at you, like for months! And made you a shut-in just out of fear of seeing him around town! ” (You didn’t finish the story, but Ilin knows the full story and by extent, you)

“SHE’S ILIN! LET HER IN!!!! LET HER IN!!” Emily yells in panic interrupting you.

“I don’t know! She may have known that from the time she possessed Ilin!” Shimi is a non-believer. You continue with Shimi’s one.

“Hey, Shimi, remember that one time you wanted to play doctor, and you wanted to do a *** operation, so you tried to see if that cucumber fit yo— “(Shimi’s one is NSFW, so you’ll have to imagine it.)

“PROCEED! PROCEED! PROCEEEEEEEEEED!” Shimi yells in embarrassment. Emily opens the door.

“At least you told her secret too... But I don’t remember that playing the doctor involved cucumbers.” Emily looks like her soul escaped her body. Wardell and Shimi are inside, she’s tied up.

“It was her idea…” Emily explains with absolute shame.

“Brilliant, am I right? This way I’m an undesirable target for the ghost!” She says proudly while moving around in her cocoon form.

“After I get off of these ropes, I’ll be a beautiful Butterfly! You guys will call me The Butterfly Detective Superstar Lighting Shimilia!” She proudly smiles.

“So what do we do?” Wardell asks you. Does anyone here have some leadership skills? Yeesh…

>Let’s stay together here for the night with the door locked. The ship is on his course to land and you highly doubt that’s going to change. And besides, you think she will leave Tinco’s body for a safe escape. So you will recover him anyway.
>Someone needs to recover Tinco’s body. Without him we don’t have a plan when we get to land.
>Write In.

(Oops, I deleted the post…)
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>>595935
Tell Wardell to keep an eye on Shimi and only open the door for the password (SWOLE) while we and Emily go hunting. Just remind her not to cross the streams.
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>>596018
I'll second this Anon.
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>>596243
I'll second the seconding of this anon.
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You told everyone that you need to recover Tinco’s body. If you don’t, all we have planned goes to the dump. So someone has to do it. You told Emily you two are going hunting.

“You’re in no condition to move. You can’t even move your left arm.” She’s right, whatever Wardell did; it’s still hurting you… and you’re starting to feel a bit dizzy.

“But if she doesn’t go, who will?” Wardell asks.

“Are you dumb, mister? You go! You’re a massive dude! And you have weird spirit powers!” Shimi says. “I mean, are you seriously implying that one of these defenseless girls have to sacrifice their LIVES to save Mr. Tinco?! C’mon, be a macho, shoo, shoo.”

You tried to interfere, but your body is failing. You think you have a small fever.

“You’re right. I’ll go.” Wardell relaxed tone stays the same after his resolution. “You girls lock the door. I’ll take care of it.” Now he sounds confident.

“Be careful out there” Emily says worried. Even if he’s a strong massive dude… he’s still a happy kid in the inside. You said to him to be careful too. He smiles when you said it… Before he leaves you tell him that the password is “SWOLE”. He nods.

After Wardell left the room, Emily quickly closes the door.

“C’mon! Are you two seriously worried about him? He’s going to be fine! What’s the worst that could happen? Him getting his body possessed?” Shimi tries to relieve the tension.

After she says that you and Emily tried to open the door. If somehow Mishi gets Wardell’s body it will be a disaster.

“He’s not going to lose his body, you dummies! He’s probably strong spiritually than you both! There is no way he’ll get possessed!” She’s right. You both stop trying to open the door…

Your arm starts hurting more and you’re feeling more tired than ever.

“Ilin, you don’t look good. Come here, get in the bed” Emily helps you to the massive king side bed in the room. You were supposed to sleep there with the girls yesterday, but the cry of Swollenness didn’t let you. Emily gets some bandages from her stuff and takes care of your arm. Then she puts her hand in your forehead.

“You don’t have any fever” Emily says. Good, it’s only your tiredness that’s making you feel like poop. “I’m scared” Emily says while holding your damaged arm. “Is this how adventuring is going to be? Us trapped in fear?”

“Don’t worry Emily! When Ilin gets better she’ll protect us from evil!” Shimi adds. You didn’t know before, but she really depends on you… both of them depend on you. Cocoon Shimi gets next to you. She’s shaking a bit, she’s worried as well.

>Try to calm them both with words of hope!
>Tell them a joke!
>Tell them to get ready for the worst. You can’t always be protecting them.
>Write In.

(Next is going to be the last reply of the day)
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>>596305
>>Try to calm them both with words of hope!

When one is as swole as you, there's nothing to fear!
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>>596305
>Write in
Hugs!
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You told your friends that they have nothing to fear! You’re swole! You can take on anything! And together you can beat anything in your path! You give your brightest smile and hug your friends. Even did the effort of using your bad arm. Both girls say your name, they are moved. You’re feeling more charismatic as a person doing all these speeches.

“Okay! SWOLE savior of the masses! It’s time for you to rest; we will have your back for the night!” Emily says with confidence.

“Yeah! Future Butterfly Shimilia is not going to let anyone harm you, my friend!” Shimi jumps on the bed.

After hearing their words of confidence you fall asleep.



A loud knocking wakes up from a tiring dream. It’s morning, both Emily and Shimi are inside the bed and both are hugging you. Yes, Shimi took her ropes off. She’s now a beautiful butterfly. Your arm still hurts like hell. You move them aside, and get to the door. You ask for the password.

“Swole” It’s the boring, always in the same tone voice of Wardell.

“Swole?! That’s the password?!” that’s Tinco’s voice. You open the door. He’s fine. He smiles at you for a second; then he bows his head.

“I know why you tried to exorcise her, she’s an asshole! I now feel even worse for not helping you before! I’m sorry! I’m sorry!” Tinco says; he feels extremely guilty from before. He does have a kind heart; at least, he treats you well. “She’s going to pay for this!” He concludes with tears on his eyes.

Wardell pats Tinco’s head and said its okay. Tinco wipes his tears. You ask them what happened.

“She stole a weak looking sailor’s body. But before doing that, she knocked me out and trapped me inside a wardrobe. She left hours ago in an emergency boat. She most likely didn’t arrive here in Pasiturnia… Oh yeah! Ilin, welcome to my hometown!” Tinco smiles again.

At least it didn’t take us years to leave the boat! For a very good reason you feel excited! It’s finally time for adventuring! It only took us 4 chapters for us to finally get to a new town!

What mysteries this place hides? Will you get face to face with Mishi once again? Will [Mother] make another appearance or she’s definitely a onetime joke of the QM? Will we unveil the secrets of Wardell’s past? Did you even care about finding your mother? Will finally something GLORIOUS happen? Will you get rid of that stupid Sea Bass? What will Ilin’s class be? All this could be answered in the next session of Not so Glorious Quest!
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>>596813

Thanks everyone who participated/role-played/read this session of Not so Glorious Quest! I hope I didn’t kill your interest with our little murder case. But at least we’re past it and I’ll stick to my usual shitty storytelling. Like always, I’m seriously grateful you guys stuck with me in this dumb story to this point.

I’m kind of hype because we’re going to pick a class and do real adventuring with Ilin, and finally I have a recurring villain in the story.

I highly doubt I will update the document I made. I don’t even why I made it in the first place…

I didn’t expect being in the boat the whole session, but shit happens and that’s my bad. I hope if we do a next session things will run more smoothly (I can’t confirm it yet (or at all)), but it will most likely happen sooner than later).

Check my twitter for future updates, that’s the whole point of that thing. But if twitter is not your thing (like it’s not mine), I’ll be lurking the /qtg/ if you want to ask some shiiiiet. I finally understand the discord shit. But I don’t feel like it’s necessary. I don’t know about you guys though.

https://twitter.com/91m10

Feedback/Questions/Comments/Insults are always welcome/appreciated.

Sorry if this chapter was a drag, but if there is a next time, it’s going to be hype!... I think.

Hope you guys have a great time, and see you guys in the future!

[FUCK THE ITEM LIST, YOU LOST THE CAKE AND THE BRANCH, THAT’S IT]
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>>596821
When we get of the boat we should go to boat yelp at the port and give ship of madness a bad review.
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>>596821
Calm your tits, man, you doing great! Yeah, mistery case was a bit of a clusterfuck but that's how people learn.
Thanks for running!
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>>596821
This quest is so wonderfully meta.
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>>596821

Dude, you are doing a great job with this quest. Continue being awesome and swole!
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>>596821
The murder mystery wasn’t *that* bad. I wouldn’t mind another one.

There were just two things that really threw me off: One was the lack of spirit, the other was that I didn’t think Emily would keep being so murderous.

Now that I know just how insane the NPCs in this quest can be, I think another mystery would go over far better.
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>>596821
Are you ever going to make an aco thread and throw us some nsfw art.
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>>596892

You know, that’s not a bad idea. Maybe I can make something like that in the quest.

>>597225

Thanks! It was a bit of a clusterfuck because I didn’t have the guts to pull the trigger and show you guys and gals (?) more definitive evidence about the killer. Call me a pussy, but I had to change the real culprit because at some point I didn’t feel that fit the character.

>>597238

Thanks, I’ll take that as a compliment!

>>597285

Thanks for your compliments! And thank you for participating and reading!

>>597476

Good thing you like it! I thought it was a complete disaster. About the things that threw you off:

The first one, ask Emily next session. It’s an important plot point for her. But for general knowledge, some spirits are too weak to be seen, so it wouldn’t be weird if people die and you can’t detect anything. I sometimes can’t decide if telling you guys important details about the setting that your character don’t know. Like the whole spiritual thing. I think I will in the future.

The second one, yeah… It didn’t get across very well, but the whole thing was an accident (it was a long post and I didn’t want to bored you guys with a long sequence about something you know how it’s going to end). Emily by no means wants to be a murderer or enjoyed it. It was supposed to be all Shimi’s fault; she was supposed to be screaming that Emily was a rapist and such, so Blockhead wanted to kill Emily and she only defended herself.

I hope the NPCs being dumb/insane don’t make you guys paranoid. At least I can confirm 100% that merchants, shopkeepers, bartenders and such are not insane and can be trusted, unless stated otherwise. But yeah, this “world” is full of idiots.
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>>597894

Pardon my ignorance, but I don’t know what’s an aco thread. If you explain it to me, I may help you… or not. It depends.

As a big side note about NSFW art/content:

I was ready to draw some as part of the quest (I mean it at the beginning when I said this is an anything can happen adventure), but I found out that it’s prohibited here in this board. I almost dropped the quest when I founded out. Like man, you can kill people but fucking is a no-no? Like my NSFW art sucks, but if you want to suck a dick in my quest, you can suck a dick.

Now I think we’re past the point for being a full lewd quest or for poor Ilin to suck dicks out of nowhere (She will only suck the dick of the man she loves, and only off camera (Well, I don’t know if you guys want her to be a lesbo, but romantic plot is not important for now)). But Ilin (and any character) looking cute and sexy can happen and I’m willing to draw it, but only if the situation warrants it.

At some point I wanted to make another quest on Akun or whatever it’s called, since they permit NSFW content that can be tagged as such. But that website confuses me and I don’t think a drawquest will be well received there. But more importantly, I have this quest and I’m enjoying the hell out of myself doing it, and I’m fully committed to it. So the only free time I had for another one would make for 1 or 2 hours sessions at random times and you guys know I’m a slow replier.

That was a long reply! I didn’t expect that.

Thanks guys again for playing! Like always I’m grateful and I appreciate every comment! (I’m going to still keep an eye on this thread (and the general and twitter) for anyone that has more comments/feedback/questions.)

See you guys next time!
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>>598175
Looking forward to another session, whenever that may be. Btw, are you going to dump the full portraits for Tinco and Wardell too?
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>>598394

If I get to answer another question. Yes.
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>>598175
/aco/ is another board on 4Chan called adult cartoons. It's held quests before such as bang quest which is a good one by all accounts and I recommend all to check it out for some good porn.
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I'll take this as an opportunity to throw the last portrait.

>>598695

Thanks for answering. I guess I can’t help the guy; I don’t draw NSFW and I don’t want to create a quest only about sex there. I do have drawn suggestive imagery, but I don’t think that is what he wants.

Oh, and I don’t know where to check out the quest you’re talking about.
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>>599431
>Oh, and I don’t know where to check out the quest you’re talking about.
I think the archived quest is here: http://bangquest.tumblr.com/post/143974347071/prologue

Alternative archive: https://desuarchive.org/aco/search/subject/Bang%20Quest/type/op/

Akun is definitely… different. There have been popular drawquests there before, so I don’t think finding an audience would be an issue.

If you ever do run a quest there, make sure to clearly mention in the beginning how nsfw you want it to be. People are ok with pretty much any degree or lack of lewdness, but as soon as nsfw stuff appears, there is a certain tendency to very rapidly try to get the MC in as many lewd situations as possible. So, know you limits and make sure to reign in the players if they go to far.
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>>600375

That was pretty fucking rad to read. Thanks. It kind of inspire me to draw this quest a little bit better next session.

About Akun, I'll see what I can do, I may do a trial run. But that website interface looks like a pain the butt to handle.
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>>601591
>hat website interface looks like a pain the butt to handle
It is, from what I’ve heard. Far more options, but occasionally buggy and often unintuitive.

Just saying it’s an option. Personally, I think /qst/ works better for this quest.
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>>607916

I agree. I was not planning on moving this one there. I was thinking about making a new one in my spare time.

I'll take the opportunity to announce that this Friday at 6:00 PM EDT Not so Glorious Quest will return in a new thread.



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