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Totally unrelated, but I decided to start a web novel, and have a few ideas already which I would like your opinion about.

1) Aura, Lyann and Stella as heroines, in yet another anotherworld story where they start as rock musicians and get transported to another world. I was thinking of something silly and slightly overpwered as they get the ability to summon "props", ie stuff that have appeared in rock videos at one time or another, so I guess lots of fake(?) weapons, cars, and such. It costs prop points and they earn them along with exp after fighting-

2) They're warrior witches from a norse fantasy setting a la Slaine or Conan (more Slaine-like, though), and get transported to modern world canada or the US and end up living with a local and eventually get the ability to go back to their world at will so basically a "weekend adventure" type of story where the guy goes to fantasy adventure land from time to time. Also, you KNOW Stella will beat a kodiak bear and wear its skin.

3) As above, but more so. J/K I was thinking on having the MC go into the fantasy world and getting sort of adopted by them instead.

4) As any of the above, but with smut. Stealing from cheesy stuff like Maou No Testamento, the whole Fate/Crack-4-fans sex = mana thing, to make a genuinely sex, rock & violence story, because I really want to throw in rock in there. You already know how I write sex like, so there.

Anyway, Im taking inspiration from old Simon Bisley art. Pic related

>>1849210
here

>>1849210
Here can I get a thread description for EP013

>>1849323
How's "We move a peach (tree) and work in Mako's court" ?

>>1849210
Miellewds-guy here.

Aurora and Kianna are in the harem. Kya, I was thinking a relationship like Dawn's.

>>1849348
sounds good.

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After this post im gonna wait for an answer to the question I posted at the beginning.

<-- This guy's art really sparks my imagination

***

Dusk leads us to Okaba's old office, currently Kya's, to wait for her mistress. In the meantime, she pours us tea and brings out some sweet cakes.

I wonder where they get their milk from...

"Aurora made these." - she says as she gestures towards the pastry.
"Oh, then, please let me taste them."

They're pretty good. A bit sweeter and fluffier than we'd like, though. I'm sure they must be very popular with children and girls, thopgh.

"And Kiriani?"
"She's good at cleaning."

Does that mean she's no good at cooking? Well, Aurora is pretty good at chemistry IIRC, so I guess that helps?

What a considerate boss. Rather than point out her subordinates weaknesses, Dusk pointed out their strenghts, it seems.

After a while, Kya shows up, dressed in a similar outfit to the teachers at the university. Well, it looks nice on her. A plaid short skirt and a silk shirt tucked under it... I think its cut its meant for someone more, erh... modest in her sizes than Kya, however, giving it a slightly ero feel.

Well, it probably had to be modified to allow for her wings to pop through on the back, but is hard to tell since she keeps them folded tightly (and in fact has them secured/tied with a wide silk lace. It has a ribbon, whish is somehow uncharacteristically girly of her).

"Thank you for visiting." -she starts- "I am sorry for making you wait."
"Please don't be. I dropped by unnanounced, after all."
"Is that so? Thank you. Can I ask what this visit is about?"

>I wanted to take Aurora and Kiriani with me to check on the succubus.
>And ask you to come along.
>Other

>>1849551
>>I wanted to take Aurora and Kiriani with me to check on the succubus.

>>1849551
>I wanted to take Aurora and Kiriani with me to check on the succubus.

As for the question you asked, 2 and 4 are my personal choices, though I don't know if it would be popular.

>>1849551
>>I wanted to take Aurora and Kiriani with me to check on the succubus.

>>1849273
1 and 2 both sound interesting to me. 1.) with its summon potentially absurd weapon or gadget and 2.) with its fantasy worlders learning to live in our world.

Fantasyworlders using magic in a tech-only world isn't done as much as the other way around.

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Oh I just realized 3 & 4 are slightly messed up in order somehow, and i moved around bits of one into the other somehow. Rewriting for clarity.

1) All female rock band gets transported to fantasy world.

2) Trio of warrior witches get transported to the real world and drop unto a frontier guy who gets to go with them on adventure from time to time, alternating between the modern world and fantasy land, so he can get time to stock up on shotgun shells for his "boomstick".

3) The MC gets transported to fantasy world and is adopted by the trio of warrior witches.

4) As any of the above options, plus sex-powered magic. You already know how I write those scenes like.

There, sorry, I re-read the options and realized they were a confusing mess somehow.

Anyway I guess we can have someone get the ability to summon props either way. I just think it would be cool to have a cadillac-riding adventurer party ram into a dragon while the girls wield ridiculously oversized weapons.

You know, fantasy/rock look of the 80's

Oh and what about our succubus and lessons into night service with Dusk and/or Kya?

***

"I need to borrow Aurora and Kiriani for a while. I'm going to check on their tribe's village, after all."
"Uhmn. I see. I think you should drop the tribe bit, though, and just refer to it as their village, though. We want them to interact normally with other people after all, so anything that classifies people as 'other' is a bad Idea. At least, I think so."

>I think its a good thing for them to keep their own cultural identity.
>Well, their culture was to eat strangers after exhausting them first, so I guess you have a point.
>Other

>>1849726
>Well, their culture was to eat strangers after exhausting them first, so I guess you have a point.
>Night services
They should be trained extensively by Dusk and Kya.

>>1849726
Still want 2 and 4.

>>1849726
seconding >>1849793

definitely interest in 2 and maybe some 4.

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>>1849849
>>1849811
So fantasy drops in on somebody and he gets to go on weekend adventures into fantasy world, while keeping the witches powered up through old fashioned male-to-female energy transfer?

***

"I will keep it in mind. Thank you."
"Alright, I will call them for you, then."
"Much appreciated."

After a short while, we are leaving with Aurora and Kiriani, albeit Dusk gives them a list of grocrries so they can go to the market on their way back.

"Honestly, I don't know how long we'll be gone, Dusk."
"It is not urgent, but if they're not back to tomorrow evening, I will go shop myself."
"Alright."

We [Treestride] to Opal, the dwarven city, and introduce ourselves at the craftsmen guild with Honoria's letter.

The dwarves treat us quite well, though they seem a little surprised about our succubus maids. Well, they were monsters until a fe weeks ago, after all. Chances are they had never seen a succubus that wasn't trying to eat them.

In several ways.

Anyway, the guildmaster recommends us craftsmen to build the furnaces for us, and we agree on a fair salary before using [Treestride] one more time and finally arriving at the town.

Ah, fashion has changed again for them, I see. Now they're mostly unto long clothes, though with a deep cut at the back for their wings and tail, I see. Hmm, its a nice contrast, as it looks quite conservative and clean when you talk with them face to face, and then surprises you with its exposure when they turn their back at you.

Well, its still at a barely safe level, so I guess it's fine. Some are still wearing the uniform-like fashion, though. I guess they're developing their own tastes.

Anyway, we take the dwarves to the inn, and find that it barely has any room, as several parties of adventurers have booked most of the rooms... I want to think there's nothing weird going on, here...

For now, we talk with the town matron to have a space assigned for the furnace and glasswork to be built at, and find that they are crafting some basic goods on their own.

There's no fooddeon in town, though, so I guess they're hunting nearvy monsters? Either way, these materials look too exotic for local monsters, so maybe they made them using their natural abilities.

For now, lets buy some ingots and study them later.

>Take Aurora and Kiriani and have them show us the town
>Have them show us their training by having them clean our old house (their now).
>Other

>>1849941
>>Take Aurora and Kiriani and have them show us the town
>>Look into establishing their own dungeon

>>1849941
>Take Aurora and Kiriani and have them show us the town
>Other: talk with the matron about setting up a foodgeon.

Oh, we need a quick way for Aurora and Kiana to get between Albion and New Hope.

Maybe we should make a personal network of teleport platforms with an easy means of shutting them off.

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>>1850105
>>1850058

"Yes! ---ah, but isn't this Master's home town?"
"But I want to see what you girls have done with it."
"Understood. Then, let's go."

Uhm, this has a nice date-like feel to it, but they are properly showing us the changes in town. To start with, they are trading materials for foodstuff.

Its good that they already have a local industry and a way to stay afloat. If this became a prosperous trading town, that would be quite nice.

Ah, but they are running an adventurer's guild in the old watch tower... well, the commision desk is on the first floor, and the upper floors are office buildings. It doesn't has an attached bar at the moment.

It feels like an adventurer's guild should have somewhere to eat and drink attached to it. That's just my feelings on the matter, though.

Let's check what sort of quests they have.

"Good evening." - a pink succubus with short horns and pale white hair in two braids greets us from behind the counter.
"Evening. I'm just checking the quests."
"Please go ahead."

They placed the desk where dad's desk used to be. I wonder if they know about, and are using, the secret compartment as a safe box?

Anyway, all of these are gathering or collection quests for foodstuff. I guess we really need to take care of starting a foodgeon here.

Well, even in Albion, we don't have enough devadashi. To the point that Lyann and Zoe had to help the local church when they built the new foodgeon a couple of months ago.

Let's see, we need 6 of them... We could probably get Aritsu to take some Devadashi levels easily enough, but we'd still need three more. I guess we'll need to hire some, but from what I understand, its surprisingly expensive...

>Let's level up some of our girls (who?) as Devadashi
>Let's just pay for some church devadashi to come help
>Other

>>1850198
>Let's level up some of our girls (who?) as Devadashi
Miel II
Crema
Mocha

We can switch them back to their Monster levels once we're done with making a foodgeon, right?

>>1850303
I'm tempted to make Stella get some Devadashi levels.
It might be an interesting experiment to see what happens to Sikya if we change her Class/Job from Succubus/Carmilla to Slave/Dancer.

It's too bad that switching between Monster and Civilized Classes means we lock out abilities from the other. Maybe we should just hire 3 more Slaves and make them into Devadashi. Once their work contract is complete, they could pretty much get a job anywhere with a Devadashi Job.

>>1850198
I can't decide.

>>1851684
Supporting that slave idea

>>1857979
We could hire 3 slaves, and knowing Eldric's unstoppable libido they'll also be pleasure slaves.
Or we could ask for volunteers from among our elven maids.

So, pretty slaves, or pretty maids?

>>1858060
Either slaves or maids, or slave maids, we'll need to bring Lyann or she'll get super jealous again.

So Lyann, Zoe, Stella, Miel II, Crema, Mocha and Sykia are 7. Remember Zoe has devadashi levels already.

We would actually need 1 less, so no need to change Sykia?

>>1865964
I still think we should do it just as an experiment in doing Monster-Class-Monster, and whether stat bonuses from raised Jobs will also stack with Monster level bonuses.

Also, it's a chance to see her dressed up in Dancer clothes; does Eldric need a reason?

But we aren't going to buy slaves/ask for maid volunteers to make into Devadashi? I can easily see Eldric wanting more Devadashi of his own so that he can do it without taking away Aritsu, Lyann, and the others from their assigned jobs.

>>1865971
That sounds fine to me. What does the rest think?

>>1865975
I was thinking that having his own personal Devadashi party would be a small investment that would be enough of a time-saver later for Eldric that he would buy the slaves/ask for volunteer maids.
Because switching from Monster to Class and back again requires using the specialized containment field, while the Devadashi are just a Treestride away. And he could also have them be Archdruids to Treestride themselves, so that they can go where ordered on their own, or even accept new dungeon contracts on their own as a side business.

As for why we would need a team to make new dungeons, we need a foodgeon for New Hope, one for the Auroc town in the Empire, we need to make one for the Minotaurs we civilize on the Eastern continent, and maybe a small one for the Miel Hegemony hives.

>>1865975
I think I'm a little mixed-up the plane is to buy slaves and or ask the maids?

>>1866010
That's what I thought, too.

I was suggesting that we still make our Pets into Devadashi as an experiment, but we still get other slaves/volunteers to be a full Devadashi team that's on call for us. It's not too difficult for us because of our leveling tricks.

>>1865975

>>1866022
Sure I guess i'll support that.

>>1866032
>>1866022
>>1866010

Alright so we're going to get some of our elf maids to turn devadashi so we can use them to build foodgeons as needed, right?

So, go to the island and get that started now? Do you want them each to have names and detailed background or do we just refer to them as our devadashi team in the future?

>>1866039
Can we buy more slaves with Lyann? I don't want to shorthand the working staff of our manor and we can always make the new slaves wear maid uniforms when they aren't making a new dungeon.

Ah, but would this be against Eldric's push to reform the slave trade?

>Detailed vs No details
I would like names and descriptions, but not too detailed yet. I was thinking of them as women we will have sex with, but not make into wives. So more like sex friends. They're our sex slaves with a limited term of service, guaranteed severance pay, and guaranteed medical and time off benefits.

>>1866039
3 maids and 6 new slaves that will cross-train as maids for when they're not actively making a dungeon. That way even if some take time off, we will still have a full Devadashi party.

Or is this too much extra work for you, King?

>>1866039
seconding >>1866062

>>1866062
>Ah, but would this be against Eldric's push to reform the slave trade?

Well, we could just as well change it by making it so that people can "rent" themselves for a 5-year contract rather than sell themselves.

May not sound great to completely place yourself under the thumb of your employer for 5 years but its a hell of a lot better than becoming property forever, you know?

Sort of a small step. I think just changing it completely in a single move would cause a lot of troubles.

Anyway, so going to the slave market with Lyann to buy 6 new (elf?) girls, then?

>>1866096
Oh, the slave markets in Mantequira or Eliopolis? We could get Mr Lee to help us in our discreet procurement in the Imperial slave markets.
While elves are always nice, maybe we can get some variety? One each of Humans, beastkin, dwarf, and the rest being elves?

>>1866096
To help shepherd this along, let's check the slave market in the Empire. Bring Lyann and Mr. Li along, since he's our Head Butler of Imperial holdings, and he also handled the previous round of slave purchases so he already knows which slavers to go to for the kinds of slaves we're looking for.

>>1866096
>>1866108
Also let our Head Maid know that we would like 3 volunteers from among the Maid staff that would accept becoming Devadashi in addition to their normal Maid duties.

If we can't get 3 volunteers, we'll just buy more slaves.

>>1866108
There's no slave markets in Eopolis. Criminals become anonymous when they are sentenced (to slavery by default) so that family of any possible victims can single them out for purchase. They are instead sold by bathces to foodgeon groups/enterprises.

In Mantequira, they (the skave markets) are a heritage from the previous minister of the left and his policies, though we already dismantled slavers. Now you cannot catch and sell people, they can only be criminals or people selling themselves, usually to help their families.

If you want to get old-fashioned slaves that were captured illegally, or worse, breed for slavery, you need to buy them in Bastion or any of the eastern countries in our starting continent.

Interesting enough, in Okaba's country, slaves (succubuss) have always been complete property of the king and assigned as rewards, not sold, though they were still slaves in every way until Okaba made their children into citizens, so the current generation of succubuss are 'still' slaves, but under Okaba's handling.

He did it that way so they wouldnt just end up on the streets after being raised with a specific mentality and tradition and way of life, but their children will be born and grow with options in mind.

So, want to buy slaves in the black market (because that's a thing still), or the open market in Bastion, or ask Okaba for some succubus? Other ideas?

>>1866151
I would like Mantequira, with specifically looking for people that sold themselves to help their family. Maybe a criminal if it was a non-violent crime like stealing food to feed their family or something like that.

While I'd like to buy some pleasure slaves from Bastion, I don't want to financially support that slave trade. And we're too easily recognizable to do something like that.

>>1866151
Or...hmm, would buying a girl from the black market that was to become a sex slave, in order to save her, be a thing that Lyann would approve of since it fits with the kinds of romance novels she reads?

>>1866151
Im ok with anything.

>>1866170
>Or...hmm, would buying a girl from the black market that was to become a sex slave, in order to save her, be a thing that Lyann would approve of since it fits with the kinds of romance novels she reads?
That sounds pretty good to me

So we're going with that, then, and visiting the black market to rescue some girls?

>>1866192
Yes, sounds good, with some additions.

Visit the Black Market in disguise, buy up some sex slaves to save them, then have the place raided by a surprise military police assault aided by our Pets (especially Squidward as the Fantasy Reaper) as we make our escape in the chaos.
Go full Chinese period drama with it.

Lyann gets to see her romantic dream experienced by other poor girls, we get our Devadashi and sex slaves, the City Guard get to brag about arresting major black marketers, and Tanis gets to cut loose and show off why she was a Terror some hundred years ago. Everyone (except the slavers) wins!

>>1866207
Oh, maybe some of the Shadows that are being trained at that Shadow village we took from the old Minister can take a field trip to help the police raid?

I want the focus to be on the slavers. I'm not too concerned with the people dealing in other contraband.

>>1866192
sure

>>1866192
>>1866207
Oh, Eldric was pretty bad at disguising himself the last time he tried it. Maybe we can ask one of the Shadows for advice?

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>>1866192
Im gonna assume your silence means yes.

>>1866207
alright im gonna change it just a little.

***

We cause our beautiful redhead to cry out in susprise as we sneak up to grab her from behind and kiss her neck and shoulder.

"A-aah!" - she cries out sharply and drops the document she was reading

The paper spread on the floor at the feet of her chair, and she turns around to us slightly upset. So we give her a kiss.

"Fuu- that's not fair... you scared me, you meanie."
"What are you doing? I want you to come with me."
"I am checking the numbers of the power shield research team, and-"
"I need to build a foodgeon in New Hope, so I thought to buy some girls and---" (we explain. This takes a few minutes)

We don't let her go, of course. Why wouldn't we hug our Lyann, after all?

"Isn't that too complicated? Just raid the place and confiscate the 'goods' for a work program. Once they are a proper devadashi, they'll have a safe future, right?"
"Oh."

>Let's go with her version
>But--- I wanna have a undercover and flashy operation
>Other

>>1866238
>But--- I wanna have a undercover and flashy operation
This is one of the rare times I want something impractical and over the top, than pragmatic.

>>1866238
>>But--- I wanna have a undercover and flashy operation

Just remember that doing the flashy thing means we gotta play through that stuff. Lyann's suggestion is faster and easier, and has less chance of things going wrong.

>>1866270
>>1866257
>>But--- I wanna have a undercover and flashy operation

"...alright." - she gives up with a sigh

We kiss her again, and take her with us to Mantequira.

"Alright, this is my plan. I'm going to go into an illegal auction and buy some slaves to raise as fevadashi so we can start several foodgeons as needed. After that, we have troops storm in and arrest the slavers, while rescuing the captives."
"I... fuu... alright."

She really indulges us, right?

We go to general Li and explain why we need troops and what we want to do with them, and he loans us 60 troops without any complaints.

Now we---

>Need to contact the shadow's training village
>Contact some shady characters and head to a illegal auction
>Other

>>1866369
>Need to contact the shadow's training village

>>1866369
>>Need to contact the shadow's training village

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>>1866393
>>1866387
>>Need to contact the shadow's training village

We meet with Ren, briefly. We actually need to talk with Mia so she can put us in contact with her teachers, which she agrees to do, but it will take at least a few days, since the message travels at the speed of its bearer, after all.

Well, that's only to be expected, I guess. Not everyone has linked journals. Not yet, anyway.

Well, that means we have some time free after all.

>Since we're here, let's go work with Yin
>Other

>>1866444
>Since we're here, let's go work with Yin

Will make a new thread tomorrow.

Was also thinking that while we are here with Lyann, maybe we could or even should do something slightly lewd with Ren in preparation for you know what

>>1866444
Linked Journals would help so much.
We should start producing them for governments and organizations.

>>1866583
Yes, I like the idea. Maybe also involve her Shadows again.

Anyway, see you tomorrow guys