You live in the stone tower city of Valra. It's a Blue city so it is run by the Holy Matriarchal Order. Everything run by the Matriarchy is considered "blue" as it's the Nation-states color.The Matriarchy dictates all men are to be slaves to women. With extremely limited exceptions. But they also believe in equality for all. It's complicated. But essentially men don't have any rights, and women have all the rights, and that's just how things go.They're currently engaged in a longstanding war with the Red kingdom. The Red kingdom has traditional values, and their women are relegated to the kitchen, and assume traditional wife-like duties. They aren't quite slaves, but they certainly aren't on the same level as the men.Anyhow, it's this attitude that has brought upon them the wrath of the Blue kingdom. For a woman to be lower than a man is blasphemy to the Holy Matriarchal Order. So they have been engaged in a long standing holy crusade against the Red kingdom because of it.
>>3311357Your name is Rylan Bonrok, of the esteemed Bonrok family. Some noble houses stem from the Original Lady Saints, and inherit their holy powers through their bloodlines. The Bonrok family attained it's status through military might. Namely your Mother Leanne Bonrok, is a general in the Holy Imperial Army. And while she doesn't see the battlefield much these days. She was prolific in her days. A fearsome monster of death and carnage. She's an honored and decorated veteran of war. And you respect what she's done.However, you only wish that your own skills reflected her legendary status. As her only offspring, you feel deeply compelled to carry on your family legacy. However, even though you are technically of noble birth.. And even though this exempts you from being a slave like most other men would be. It doesn't erase the strong manhatred and stifling negative stigma which has all but consumed you.You are free to do mostly as you wish within the walls. You can visit shops and conduct yourself like an ordinary citizen. However, as a man you're still forbidden from leaving the walls of Valra without certain conditions being met. Most men born within Valra, will die within Valra, forbidden at all from leaving.The only exceptions are if the spouse of the man grants him permission. Or if the man earns the highest military honor. The Wings of the Dove. It's a medal which grants a male every right that a woman has. And is the highest position a man can hold in the kingdom. Every man aspires to earn his wings, and ascend to that height.
>>3311361There is however one slight problem with you earning those wings.. Despite your Mother being a battle prodigy. You as her son seem to have inherited absolutely none of her talent. From the moment you attended Valra Military Academy, you were always the slowest, the weakest, and most feeble bodied warrior. You have trained nonstop. But your mostly female cohorts have far and above surpassed you. And you've become the class joke. It's painful to think that the only thing you inherited from your mother was her jet black hair. That's another thing, most hair in the blue kingdom is blonde, or black. Brown or Red hair is exceedingly rare. Brown or Red haired people generally hail from the Red kingdom. You're proud of your noble heritage, even if you aren't naturally as strong as your Mom.You're on your way to class when you see your blond haired nemesis Vonna. She smugly smirks at you placing her hand on her hip. Her gaggle of female cohorts at her side."Well well, if it isn't Crylan Boncock. Ready to get your precious ass handed to you again?"You clear your throat and respond calmly,"It's Rylan Bonrok. And I don't mind you making fun of my first name. But the Bonrok family name is not to be mocked! My Mother is a hero!"She snickers cruelly,"And you're a zero. How sad that her only offspring was of the worthless male variety." She circles around you in a predatory manner with that pretentiously smug grin of hers."Don't you think the Imperial Holy Army is just a bit too high to reach for someone like you? You could always join the Stoneguard. I'm sure they'd love to have another brainless male slave down there on the walls.""No thanks. I'm not interested."She pulls her sword off her belt still in the sheath and bashes the back of your legs causing you to crumble to your knees. She stands above you towering enigmatically,"Inferior men like you should know your place. I am Vonna Gracewood. Inheritor of the noble Saint bloodline. And you're nothing but a worthless male commoner playing at this like you're even worth anything."You snark back at her,"You sound like those extremists, the Larks."She states firmly,"The Larks are patriots. Punishing male scum who step out of line. Men who get too full of themselves need to be taught a lesson."You stagger, and stand to your feet, your chest pounding as you stare angrily at her,"I won't allow you to besmirch the Bonrok name anymore. I challenge you to a duel after class."She chuckles,"Again? Haven't you already had enough of me crushing you in fight practice?"You firmly growl at her,"I won't stand for it, even if you grind my bones to dust, I'll never surrender to you."She sighs,
>>3311367"You just never learn do you? Well, whatever. See you after class Crylan. Don't chicken out. I want to see the look on your face when I crush you into the dirt."Vonna and her gang finally walk off. And all on her own, you see your darkly dressed friend Schrella sitting on the ledge of the castle wall on this grey overcast day. You climb up to where she sits overlooking it all. She looks at you with concern,"You shouldn't be hanging out with someone like me. I'll lower your status even more."You laugh,"I'm male, I'm already the lowest status there is."You say as you climb up on the ledge with her sitting next to her. She chuckles a bit and then speaks,"You shouldn't let Vonna get to you like that. You know she's just going to beat you down again."You sigh overlooking the pristine green lands which belong to the blue kingdom. And above it, this overcast of clouds painting a beautifully somber picture. You respond to Schrella."I don't understand why they hate men so much.. I mean, I get that men are inferior to women. I understand that the female form is beautiful. And that all women are the true embodiment of God. I try my best to honor them. But they treat me like shit."Schrella responds,"They certainly aren't very saintly are they?""Schrella.."Schrella looks off in the distance. She seems happy, having something of a wistful gaze staring out over the horizon."Wouldn't it be nice if we could get away from here? Go someplace grand? And you know.."She leans back on her wrists looking up at the sky and kicking her feet a bit."The male form, isn't so bad either."You feel confused,"The male form?"She laughs to herself getting up."Forget it.. You know something Rylan?"You look up at her,"What?"She clasps her hands close to her chest, seeming like she wants to say something,"I.."Shes forcing a smile, the wind blowing her long black hair in the wind. Her dark gothic looking armor stands out among the other women in the town."It.. It's nothing I'm just.."She takes in a deep breath,"I'm.. Really happy we're friends you know?"You smile,"Yeah."There's this sort of fading hopeful expression that she's wearing. What's up with her? Suddenly as if to cut the tension you hear a meow from behind you. You look back to see that grey alleycat with the stripes on it's back that people call Stray. It meows and purrs rubbing itself against your leg.You smile picking it up and petting it."Hey there Stray. I guess you're my friend too huh?"Schrella is smiling,"Its weird, Stray never lets any of the women even touch him. He just hisses at them and runs off."Schrella tries putting her hand up to it, but Stray hisses at her. You laugh nervously,"Guess it just likes men. Maybe Stray had a bad female owner or something. Huh buddy?"Stray purrs happily as you stroke its scalp.
>>3311373It's later during a class. You and your fellow classmates are outdoors. Your teacher is speaking."Alright students, today is the day you summon a familiar. It will be with you and it will be your guide from here on out. Familiars grow with their owners, and their shape can change depending on the owners heart."The other students all seem to summon birds. Vonna summons up a regal looking large white dove. And then she looks to you. You're sadly doing the summoning ritual trying to get a bird to come up to you. But there's nothing. All of a sudden you hear a familiar meow from behind you."Stray?"Vonna laughs,"Oh that's perfect. How pathetic. The worthless male has a stray cat as his familiar."The rest of the class laughs. Stray is rubbing up against your leg. And the summoners rune draws itself around the cat bonding the two of you together. You groan.-----It's after class, no familiars are allowed in the official duel. A group of your fellow classmates have gathered around. You and Vonna each have wooden practice swords.She laughs,"Oh I'm going to enjoy stomping you to pieces.. The Bonrok name is dirt, and so are you. So you might as well just admit it Crylan. But you know, if you want to save yourself a beating, all you have to do is just surrender. And agree to be my personal bitch for the rest of your time at the academy. Being a slave is really second nature for a man isn't it? Your only use is just serving your superior female counterparts."--You can't just surrender, the Bonrok family name would be tarnished forever! And Vonna would never let you live it down.--1) Fight Vonna, you can't let her go unchallenged.2) Run away like a coward, it's no use trying to fight a superior female.3) Submit to Vonna, admit the Bonrok name is dirt, and so are you.4) Write-In
>>3311387>1) Fight Vonna, you can't let her go unchallenged.Like hell we'll take this lying down.
>>3311387>agree to fight her, but only if she kisses you after you win. Emphasis on the fact that you WILL win. She's already insulted our honor, let's slight her. At the very least we cant be accused of cowardice.
>>3311357Even if we lose at least we showed we weren't a pussyfag
>>3311387>Fight Vonna, you can't let her go unchallenged.
>>3312009Thank God we finally got another vote
>>3312047I just want to move on so we can get our ass kicked already.
>>3311420>>3311757>>3311938>>3312009>>3312017>>3312047>>3312054The Bonrok family name isn't dirt, and you're going to prove it."I'm not backing down Vonna. And WHEN I win, I want a kiss from you."The entire crowd around you gasps in shock. Vonna herself seems caught off guard for a moment but then chuckles,"Thats amusing. You REALLY think you're gonna win huh?"She smirks,"Alright, if you win, I'll let you kiss me right on the lips. Right here in front of everyone. I'm sure it would be your first since you're such a loser."She flips her hair. The breeze blows it. Her golden shimmering locks swaying enigmatically. Her toned imposing figure, she's the very image of what a strong, forceful Dove of the Blue Kingdom looks like. She's every bit as beautiful, strong, and fierce as the kingdom desires. As far as recruits for the imperial army go, she's probably the toughest among the new recruits.Of course, any girl would be tough for you to beat. This kingdom forces all it's females to undergo intense physical training. Every single woman in this town is a ripped battle maiden who can crush men like grapefruits and blend them up into a bloody pulp.Men are naturally still stronger, but most men don't get the very specialized training that the women get. So in any face to face encounter, the average woman will generally mop the floor with the average weak dummy laborer. And thats how this kingdom prefers it.You might be fortunate enough to have the training. But your muscles lack strength. You train hard, and yet you don't have the gains to show for it. Talk about crappy genetics. But you won't allow your Moms legacy to be tarnished here. You're going to fight her, and you're gonna.. Well you're gonna try hard to win at least.She casually walks forward, sword in her right hand.. You're gripping your wooden sword with two hands. She swings fast, and she hits hard. Most Doves strike fast. They're small and nimble. Whereas in comparison the Red Kingdoms Lions are Strong and Sturdy. But you're neither. You've got muscles like gelatin, and you move like a man caught knee deep in muck.Alright think.. You have to think. She's right in front of you, first she'll.. Do a horizontal swing! Vonna swings her sword horizontally, you take every effort to jump back out of the way. You're impressed you actually dodged it, but that was just a warning shot. She's feeling you out. She seems a bit irritated. She probably thinks you intend to cower. And that would be preferred. Even just blocking one of her swings would be tremendously difficult for you. Dodging it altogether is much safer.
>>3312417She charges at you, as you expected, she's upset now, reading her movements.. Vertical swing! And she swings it, and you sidestep. Diagonal slice now. Duck, roll to the side. You're staggering. Your muscles can't handle these kind of movements.. She grins stabbing down at you. You'll have just one shot.. You roll forward and then thrust your wood sword into her stomach. She visibly gasps getting some wind knocked out of her, but she remains standing. She coughs. You try to swing at her again but she swings back, and the force of her attack sends you tumbling backwards. She clutches her stomach gritting her teeth,"Oh you're so dead now.."She delves into a wild fury of slashes. There's no time to read it! You can't run, or dodge! It's hopeless, you try your best to block her attacks. But it's just one wild slap to the face, stomach and legs. Getting pummeled with every missed block. Your vision gets blurry as she gives you one final thrust right into the stomach sending you tumbling over onto the ground. She then steps on your head and yells out,"Yield!" It's over.. You never stood a chance."I.. I yield."There is an eruption of cheers from the audience. Schrella rushes over to you."Are you ok!? Hang in there."Vonna walks back over to you seeing Schrella at your side."Well well, if it isn't the Cursed Crow? How perfect. Clean up this trash will you?"Schrella looks at you with deep concern and then she looks at Vonna,"Vonna you know he didn't stand a chance! You're being a bully, that's not exactly a saintly thing to do."Vonna shrugs,"Listen Shrewla, he asked me to fight. And I fought him. I'm not going to back down to some worthless man."Schrella softly remarks,"He's not worthless."Vonna calls down mockingly,"Aww, is he your little boyfriend now? How cute. The Crow and the loser. The divine grace above really does have a sense of humor doesn't she?"She laughs and walks away with the group. Schrella pulls you over her shoulder and lifts you up."Come on, let's get you cleaned up."You hear a somewhat concerned sounding meow follow next to you. As you and Schrella walk down the street.---
>>3312425Schrella walked you home to your Mom. Your Mom is patching up your wounds. Your Mom is very pretty and has black hair. She found a rare stone of youth during her war days. And has stayed young and healthy looking despite being about double your age."You shouldn't have done that, it was very foolish. You could've been really hurt. What if she'd broken your arm?""Mom, she insulted our family name!"Your Mom looks somber as she dresses your wounds."You know you're not as strong as the others. You need to know your limits. It's not wise to go picking fights.""She was asking for it!""Look, we're here because I fought in the war. The nobles are strong and are very fussy about new blood like us running around on their turf. Just because we live in the upper quarter doesn't mean we'll be accepted. Just be grateful as a man you're able to have these privledges.""But why Mom!? Why does it have to be this way? Why can't women just not hate men?"She stares off at the wall seeming distraught, "It's complicated. The woman is seen as a divine incarnation. And she has been in the blue kingdom since it's inception. And when women aren't given their due respect. That's when we get angry, that's when we start fighting. It's been a long time since women faced any real lack of respect. But perhaps the fear.. It's the fear of what could happen. They keep the men down because if they rose up, they could tear apart the foundations of our society. When they say they hate you.. They don't mean it. They're just trying to keep the status quo."This is the first time you think you've ever heard your Mom talk about men as if they could be a threat.
>>3312431"Back in the war.. There was a time.. When the Lions thought they could bait us into attacking. Rile us up. They had captured a few of our Doves. And they marched up to our walls, and they raped these Doves. Stripped them down and defiled their honor. The ultimate shame to have such proud warriors face such disrespect, dishonor and shame. It caused a great stir within the Blue Kingdom. And rather than be baited into their obvious trap, we pulled back. And we sent a massive force to a far off Red City. One that hadn't seen much action. And in retribution, our Doves razed that city to the ground. There were thousands. Men, women, children. And we butchered all of them. We locked them in, and genocided that entire city, and decorated its walls with the remains."You feel uncomfortable,"Geez Mom, why are you telling me this?""Don't incur the wrath of the women here. That's all I'm saying. Be a good boy. Pay women their respects. And ignore the foul ones who shame the divine ones with their behavior. I want you to live a happy life. No matter what happens, you're still my son."She hugs you holding you close. You return the hug feeling a bit confused by all this."I'll try Mom. I.. I just want to make you proud.""I know. You.. You've already made me very proud. Keep up your good work. The divine ones are surely smiling upon you."-----Well, it's the next day, and you can decide to do whatever you feel like since it's not a school day1) Hang out with Mom2) Hang out with Schrella 3) Train/bond with your Familiar Stray4) Talk to Vonna?
>>3312462+1Bitches need to be taught a lesson. We better kill vonna before we escape
>>3312495>>3312462School shooter time >>3311357How does magic work in this setting?
>>3312434>2) Hang out with Schrella
>>3312434>4) Talk to VonnaWell she's a fucking cunt. No doubt about that. But from what we saw in the fight, she does seem to get riled up rather easily. Simply extending an olive branch isn't gonna work, and that would be a classic protagonist mistake. If we play this smart, I think we can manipulate her. The fact that we even managed to hit the academy's best student is *something*. I say we at least try here. Play off her ego. Our mother, Bancroft or no, is a high ranking noble. Thats a useful connection to have. I'm curious if her pride is bigger than her ambition.
>>3312434>2) Hang out with SchrellaWe need to marry her and get her to protect us
>>3312502Magic is very difficult to use for a layman, it's usable to a select few specialists, but as of this point in time, mostly useless in war.Magical artifacts and other things are scattered about the land. Beasts have begun to be tamed for warfare. Many use familiars as a vehicle for this. But there are larger scale beasts which have been tamed. Examples, dragons, and Giant Rocs. There are also other kingdoms which have different specializations. The Blue Kingdom specializes in Nimble female warriors with a specialization towards holy magic.The Red Kingdom specializes in Strong sturdy warriors with a specialization in fire magic.The Black Kingdom is a kingdom of Traders and Merchants. They deal with everyone, but have a high influx of trade circulating to both the Red and Blue Kingdoms in times of war.There is an uprising of Green nature specialized magicians but they prefer to keep out of conflict.There are other smaller kingdoms but the two biggest Kingdoms covering the most landmass are Red and Blue. The most dominant and prevalent forces in all the land.
>>3312569My current strategy is too manipulate Vonna somehow. She strikes me as someone who's mouth is gonna land her in trouble one of these days. If that should happen, the son of a decorated war hero might have some pull. I think she's probably aiming above her intellect. Let's exploit that
>>3312572>train harderI would tend to agree. But the other students are just years ahead of us. Schrella is...nice? But I see only two options. 1. Just plan a way to escape 2. Find some way to at least squeeze a training deal out of Vonna.
>>3312589But you know who has that pull? Our mom. We might be powerless, but she isn't. On some basic level that should be understood
>>3312576Have any of the smaller kingdoms declared for one side or another? Or are they all neutral?
>>3312572I would agree with escaping if we weren't such a pathetic weak loser. Frankly, we deserve to be dominated.
>>3311357We are villain backstory material if I've ever seen it. I would have two plans we could take 1. We escape the city, defect to the Reds, and do some shit there. Maybe we can find some way to betray our city I'd we come back. Maybe make up some "oh shit I got kidnapped by the baddies" story. 2. We stay and scrimp together some kind of useful living. Whether that is as Vonna's toadie or a Revolutionary I dunno. This is mostly why I'm suggesting we try to deal with her. She looks to be rising high. Maybe we can ride her coattails if we can be valuable. She mentioned the City Guard right?
Lets seduce one of the female higher ups and cause a scandal
>>3312621We gotta find someone to kiss ass too
>>3312654I mean at some point we are gonna need friends who aren't Schrella and her cat
>>3312434>4) Talk to Vonna?
>>3312677>>3312655We are a male. A pathetic example of one too apparently. What female would want us around kissing ass OR as a friend period? What male would want a privileged, soft, son of a noblewoman around? While we were pampered (relatively) they were whipped, beaten, sometimes castrated, and forced to perform hard, demeaning and menial labour.
>>3312678 I have a planLet's talk to Vonna, and enact our master plan. Here's what we do. We will be her personal attendant at school as long as she agrees to fight us every day. Yes its gonna be hell, but if we spin it right(aka make it look like we are just stubborn), we get training from the best fighter in school. We get experience, she gets to wail on us and lord over another noble. Everybody wins. Yes it's not the cleanest, but it might work.
>>3312694In other words we would need to swallow our pride a bit. But long term this is gonna be a positive. Especially if we eventually are able to do something other than flail randomly.
>>3312700Hey if you have some way to kill her you tell me. Otherwise we are gonna just keep being a faggot. As it stands our options are limited
>>3311357Who were the Stone Guard she mentioned?
>>3312434>2) Hang out with Schrella>thinking qm will let us escapelol
>>3312710Schrella is rather useless as an asset. Is she even nobility?
>>3312589Well the only other option is to get Mom to train us. But that seems kind of bland.
>>3312719That's actually a fairly good plan.
>>3312712She might be nobility but most importantly she will help us train.
>>3312719Getting decent enough to put down one of her groupy sidegirls should be our first goal
>>3312735Is she actually decent tho? I feel like if she was useful we would have already asked her
>>3312749I like the way you think. Plan Trojan Horse is a go
>>3312529>>3312569>>3312710You decide it would be best to hang out with SchrellaSo you hang out with Schrella on the wall overlooking the kingdom again."Say Rylan, do you ever get.. Urges?""Urges? Like for what?""Just like, grabbing or touching a woman. Or.. Wanting to dominate a woman at all?"You feel deeply confused,"I'm sorry, what?"She laughs,"I guess that sounds pretty weird doesn't it?""Yeah, could you fill me in? What are you talking about?""I dunno.. I just feel like there's something different about you. When I look at you, there's this pride in your eyes that I just don't see in other men."You scoff a bit,"Pfft, yeah but what good will it do me? Here I am, stuck here with you. Trapped in these walls. You can't help me. The only person who can help me is myself."She walks up seeming concerned,"But I mean.. I care, I can help you.. I-""You can't help anyone. You're just some.. Just some random girl."She chuckles looking at you. She seems to be happy, but you can easily tell that she's been deeply hurt by what you've said,"I guess that's all I am to you isn't it? Just a.. Just a random girl.""Schrella I didn't.. I didn't mean it like that."Schrella walks closer placing her hand on you, you feel your lungs seize up, and the world goes white, your body throbs with this overflowing energy. When you're able to see properly. You can kinda see through Schrellas clothes as if they're transparent. She's covering the important stuff as if preemptively."Schrella, what the hell was that?""I.. I wanted you to see me.. As more than just some random girl. So I gave you my power.""Your power? Schrella what are you talking about?""My eyes can see the truth. And I can use dark energy to fight.""But how?""Its in my blood. The blood of the so called "Cursed Crow". One of the Lady Saints offshoot bloodlines. One that has been ridiculed, and shunned for being an abomination."You keep trying to look away,"H-how do I turn off my eyes? I.. I do not wish to defile your honor I-""Just blink 3 times in a row real fast."You blink 3 times fast. And her clothes aren't transparent anymore."R-right.. C-cool power.""D-did you like it? I mean.. Did you like seeing-""I-i mean, yeah.. It was cool."Schrella clasps her hands near her chest,"I just.. Want to be close to you I.. I hope by giving you my power, you realize that I.."You feel this surge of warmth burn throughout your body, as if reacting to her feelings."Do you.. Love me?"She closes her eyes and quickly nods yes seeming a bit bashful."Its just.. Seeing you stand up for what you believe in. And just.. Being you I.. I like you.. You were always there to talk to me. Even though I'm just the old crow, and talking to me makes you lose prestige."She seems nervous,"I hope.. This doesn't come off as too sudden. I just wanted you to know my feelings.. Maybe now with my powers you can.. Do the things you've always dreamed of."
>>3312784So she gave us x ray vision?
>>3312784God the girl is infatuated with us. We can use this.
>>3312834If so we could use that to spot the weakspots in Vonnas armor
>>3312784Does Vonna have a bloodline power too then?
>>3312784>avoid referencing the love debacle. Ask her if the truthsight would be useful in a fight.
>>3312856She also mentioned dark energy
>>3312784We should be grateful, but concerned, about her giving her power up for us; I guess, as long as one person believes in us, we shouldn't lose hope. Other than that, ask her about how this truesight would be able to help us.
>>3312784"I dream of you."
>>3312894Everybody take note of the fact that if anything goes wrong with our sight and we get almost caught we can just use Crow Girl as a scapegoat
>>3312897Gay. She's already in love with us. We shouldn't commit to anything.
>>3312906Stop posting and commenting on everything you autist. You've posted more than the op already. I'll vote however I like fag.
Ask her if her/our powers can be used to better craft metal arms and armor/appraise things.Think aloud maybe we could learn a craft to toughen up/be useful outside of combat.Thank her for her gift and say you can't say you love her yet but you think she's a great friend and there's nothing stopping you from eventually returning her feelings.
>>3312897Backing. We have one under our grasp, time to make it official.
>reread through the comments>notice everybody wants to make a heel turn right out the gateI don't really feel like we're that far gone, mainly because we still have two pillars of support: Schrella and our Mom. If we REALLY want to go down the path of villainy then we'll have to wait until something absolutely terrible happens to either of them before then, especially Schrella.
>>3312897Support, but quicly add, "sometimes" after saying it.
>>3313187Oh I agree. But we are a skinny white kid friends with an emo. We are also bullied. School shooter material if I ever saw it.
>>3313842But we have a good loving parent.Most of the kids without the pumped up kicks, had horrible parenting and took out their anger and resentment onto the world that was outside of their comfort zones.
>>3313187I think we should train, train hard, then train harder.We have a mother who was one of, if not the greatest warrior in recent times, we can take lessons from her. Then we have a girl who can even help us, Idk what her ranking (in terms of skill and strength) are in the class but its definitely higher than ours.Heck if the machoist wants, we can fight our NOT!girlfriend and our mother, sparring lesson to toughen us up and get stronger.
>>3313912I'm more curious about what spoopy powers our lady friend has. She mentioned "Dark Energy"
>>3312894>>3312897>>3312904>>3312924>>3313187"I dream of you."Schrella gasps. It's quiet for a moment, her long black hair blowing in the breeze. You notice her once brownish red eyes have become blue. You break the awkward silence with,"I-i mean. Sometimes.. Anyhow, your eyes.. They're not red anymore.""The eyes of truth are red, so now your eyes are red.""My eyes.."Hopefully no one will notice your sudden change in eye color.."So wait, you can just.. Give your powers away?"She nods,"Yeah, it's nothing special. All inherited bloodline abilities can be given away. I hear even the Lions have their own special heritage type abilities that they can pass on.""But I mean.. You can get them back if you want right?""Yeah, I could take them back at any time. But.. I think you'll probably get more use out of them than I will.""And the dark energy you mentioned?""It thrives on negative emotion. The darkness is your negative emotions given will. I think.. If you try it could help with your constitution.. If you kind of.. Reenforced yourself with dark energy, you could be stronger.""So that's what the power does?""Well, you can also project it outwards in manifestations of dark light. Doing that would probably clue the other Doves into realizing you have the Crows power.""Project.. Outwards?"She walks up behind you, and raises your right arm. You're facing toward a clay pot outside a shop."Grab that jar.""What?"You try to move but she holds you in place."No, I mean from here.""But.. It's too far away.""Just try it, grasp for it."You feel confused, but try anyway. You grasp at the pot the pot wavers and floats a bit off the ground with a dark fog surrounding it."Now.. Focus, channel your dark power.. Your negative thought.. All the pain, and anguish."You hear this sort of otherworldly deep droning sound, the black fog forms into massive black tentacles which constrict around the pot. They look like giant black octopus tentacles slithering and oozing around it. This power feels.. A bit sickening to use. You feel the energy swell to and fro within you. Like angry waves on the ocean. You feel this toxic power flowing as the tentacles become more wild, and begin to spread around the pot slithering and spreading out. Like some twisted tree made of snakes."Stop, that's enough."You breathe out, trying to release your grip. It takes a few moments, but the power eventually retracts and releases itself from around the jar, causing it to drop to the ground and break. You get this sickening feeling in your stomach. It almost feels like you want to throw up."Are you ok Rylan? You're looking a little sick.""I.. Yeah, I think.."
>>3314103You decide perhaps against your better judgment to visit Vonna. You wanted to get away from Schrella for a while. Shes really nice and.. Well you're not sure if you want her as a girlfriend just yet. So what better way to kill time right?You find her in the upper quarters on a lounge chair clearly meant for the indoors. A male slave is filing her nails, and another is painting her toenails. She sits up in her chair, looking up at you seeming annoyed."What do you want?""I uh.. Just came to.. Talk?"She slouches back down."Get lost loser. I don't have time for worthless men. As you can see.."She points to the men tending to her,"I already have enough men tending to my needs.""I just.. I wanted to know, why you hate men so much?"She raises an eyebrow at you,"You should already know. A woman embodies the true form of the divine. And the male, her lesser was meant only as a slave to the divines will. To see a male as anything more than a slave irritates me."You remember what your Mom said earlier."Is.. Is it because you're afraid?"Her eyes go wide with bewilderment. Even the male slaves turn to you in shock. She waves the male slaves away getting up from her chair. She glares furiously at you,"Afraid!?"She grits her teeth,"How DARE you suggest that. I could crush you like a bug, right here, right now."
>>3314106Your eyes see these colored auras around her furiously dancing, as if swelling with her emotions. You see mostly a red fury, but there are twinges of green, some type of.. Fear or hesitation."You are scared. You don't want the men to rise up do you?""Men are MEANT, to be slaves to the superior divine form. Why else would you be made ugly, and sturdy for labor. Lacking in the social wit and charm that only one of divine nature could possess? From our wombs is birthed the life. And you, merely the bearers of our seed within those sad pathetic little balls of yours. You're meant to supply us with seed when and if we choose to grace this planet with the gift of life."Shes really starting to irritate you."Enough, I know women are superior. You don't need to tell me.""Good. I feel I've already wasted enough of my breath conversing with someone so beneath me. Men are meant to be seen and not heard after all. They're terrible at entertaining good conversation. Dull, stupid. Just like you.""Yeah yeah, I get it, I'm worthless. I just wanted to hang out with you though. Just like your classmates? Can't we just be friends?"She turns back to you seeming caught off guard by this gesture."What? Why would I be friends with some worthless male?""If I really am just a slave, then maybe I could be your slave. I may not be as strong as your other slaves. But I was raised in the upper quarter same as you. I'm clearly a cut above these other men wouldn't you say?"She folds her arms seeming annoyed,"You assume that I NEED men at all."She pauses to think for a moment. The silence is unnerving."I suppose a manslave in the upper quarter couldn't hurt. Even if your heritage is.. Less than pure."She really knows how to get under your skin.."After class tomorrow. You can have the honor of being my attendant for the afternoon. I need someone to pour my wine."1) I made a mistake coming here, I'd never bend my knee to someone like you.2) Sure thing. Whatever you want.3) Write-In
>>3314112>2) Sure thing. Whatever you want.She's vain. We could use it to our advantage.
>>33141121) I made a mistake coming here.No.Just why? This will only come to bit us in the ass, and will take away any ability for us to train or get stronger.On top of that it will embarrass our family and name and our mother.I'd rather serve our mother instead if people wanted some femdom.
>>3314112>>3314149Exactly this. We should have spent our time training after Schrella gave us her eyes instead of going "Wouldn't it be funny to pretend to be her slave instead of actually trying to elevate ourselves to her status? Just for the hell of it".
>>3314112>1) I made a mistake coming hereFind Schrella and make her our girlfriend. Ask her to teach us to wield dark magic and fighting skills.
>>3314183And holding hands.
>>3314164Granted it was more along the lines of:>Wouldn't it be funny to go to the most hostile female in our class and try to befriend her, instead of improving ourselves in order to humble her?, but still.
>>3314188....... How would that work? Wouldn't it just feed her ego and narcissism, especial since at a whim, she could beat us into a bloody pulp if we embarrass or try to take her down a peg?
>>3314183I can think of some fun ways to experiment with her magic, to feed her "darkside" :p
>>3314183Support. Let's hold her hands in private
>>3314112>2) Sure thing. Whatever you want.We should go along with this. We need to play the long game. At some point her arrogance is gonna be useful. Her spite would at least be redirected away from us. If we can use our new powers to help her we can make ourselves invaluable. Like I dunno, point out a flaw in her next dueling opponents form.
>>3314136Changing to this >>3314183
>>3314112>her winesomething tells me someone is gonna poison her wine.
>>3314112>This power feels.. A bit sickening to use. You feel the energy swell to and fro within you. Like angry waves on the ocean. You feel this toxic power flowing as the tentacles become more wild, and begin to spread around the pot slithering and spreading out. Like some twisted tree made of snakes.That's dark magick if ive ever seen it. Schrella is tainted.
>>3314220we just got tentacle powers. Expect full abuse of that.
>>3314192That's why we improve ourselves.>>3314216>powered by negative emotionsAll part of the greater catalyst to becoming the villain, I just hope that we don't end up shallow as a puddle.
>>3314235shy girl with big tits no doubt
>>3314230I am very interested to know if there are other bloodlines we should know about. Schrella had Crow's Blood. It was mentioned that Vonna's eyes changed color briefly. Maybe her power is triggered by anger?
>>3314226>>3314235The group ended up agreeing to kiss Vonna's ass regardless of the end; this wasn't the QM railroading us, in fact they're giving us an [are you sure] pop-up right now.
>>3314261The idea is to improve ourselves enough that we can at least be a valuable cronie. We have fucking superpowers. That's gonna be useful especially since Vonna doesn't know. We can always betray her later once we are stronger. History is full of great villains who swallowed their pride for a greater cause.
>>3314261Just vote no.I think it only came up some dude suggest it to get close to her but in hindsight this is a pretty bad idea.
>>3314278And when we do "join" Vonna, how do you think Schrella is going to react? What if she orders us to bully the Crow with her? Schrella can take our speshul eyes away just as easily as she gave them.
>>3314282we could use our truth eyes to look over Vonna's weaknesses. Being her beta squire is unappealing but I doubt she's smart enough to figure out what we are doing.
>>3314183Support, let's not be a cuck and bow down to that bitch. We already have someone willing to embrace and teach us already.
>>3314286Schrella will understand. The girl is infatuated with us. If anything it's only gonna make her increase her desire to go school shooter
>>3311357Do we have a library at home? Or at least one we can use to look over the basics of magic?
Quick Note: Yes I did want to give you all the option to serve Vonna. I believe I remember seeing a few posts indicating a desire to get on Vonnas good side. And I gave the character a GPS map to say the right things to get into her graces. Yeah it's degrading but if you had wanted to get on her good side, you have to feed her ego a bit, and play her game.Warriors of both Blue and Red tend to find magic a sort of cowardly act. But magic with enough time can be mastered and used. There is a library in town with tomes. Only members of the church and learned folk really even read them. The others generally just rely on brute strength.As far as accusations of "railroading", I certainly do have a vision of where the story will go, and there are story beats I want to follow. But I also want to give the players a comfortable amount of choices as well.And to the accusations of "waifu", I don't really view it that way. I think adventures in general are best traveled with friends and companions. And even better if that journey is with someone you love. I suppose given the nature of it, you can extrapolate a sort of "loose harem" formula, but that's not why I chose to write it this way. Many of my decisions have been for the purposes of art or aesthetics, or simply because I thought it was cool. I certainly don't consider it smutty in any way. This is extremely tame for the sorts of things I usually write. I hope we can all just relax and have some fun in this setting.
>>3314371And I presume we can access this library as we are noble?
>>3314378Even commoners can access the library. But mostly only women ever actually read the books. The men generally being slaves don't have much of an interest in reading. And a few slaves have difficulty reading and learning in the first place.
>>3314390so btw. Schrella the only one with x ray eyes? Or are there other Crows?
>>3314371Sadly QM, all I'm really feeling from the setting is the inordinate urge to cause an Uprising and overthrow the kingdom.That's not a bad thing, by the way. Far from it.
>>3314446Hey if we take this thing in the direction of bullied future Dark Lord and his eldritch gf take over the kingdom that's totally cool. It does seem kind of cheesy tho. Like its a bit obvious that we have these dark powers and eventually chimp out using them.
>>3314419Her family has them as well. Although she is the last in her line. Her blood trait will be passed to the next generation assuming she has children.Blood traits adhere to a specific power or trait, but certain inheritors of those powers can see them morph or shift especially when undergoing some kind of strong personal character growth.If two different bloodlines mix, a hybrid of powers can be made.>>3314446I'd simply remark that there would definitely be other interested parties outside the kingdom that would LOVE to see that happen.
>>3314468Clearly, the only true answer is to establish a Democracy through rebellion.Like America. I mean, we've been at this for several hundred years, so we've got to be doing SOMETHING right.
>>3314476or we could just establish a less autistic monarchy.
>>3314476>USA>democracyI didn't think we were for becoming a revolutionary.
>>3314468also, you mentioned several smaller kingdoms that are not blue or red. The blacks are merchants, but have the minor kingdoms taken a side in this war? That would be good to know, who supports who
>>3314497Yeh democracy is not gonna fly with these people. At some point e are gonna need to decide if there is anything here worth salvaging. Welding together some kind of moderate coalition power base is our best option. Assuming we dont become evil.
>>3314513Hero if GoodKing/Queenslayer if NeutralDemon King if Evil (not a DEMON Demon King, unless there are well-known bonafide demons in this quest)
>>3314499Calling these smaller groups "kingdoms" is a tad too glamorous I think. More like one or two large cities a color. Their influences will mainly be in the form of trade or just siding with whatever color happens to offer them benefits.I'll be honest and admit that I haven't actually thought of what each color would have that would make it unique. Maybe if Anons have some cool ideas for what the other colors can represent, we can just add it in and pretend it was my plan the whole time :^)
2) Sure thing. Whatever you want.
>>3314112>1) I made a mistake coming here.In what fucking world would I ever obey a bitch like this? Let's just get magically stole and punt her off the tallest tower at a later date.
>>3314112In case I haven't made my position clear:>1) I made a mistake coming here.Politely decline and be on our way.
>>3314476>DemocracyFuck that, idiots shouldn't have right to choose shit>>3314112Supporting getting with the pinkeye niggeress
>>3314497America is a Republic
>>3314538OP what are the demographics like in Blue? Like Male to female ratio. >>3314659>NegressWhat?
>>3314149>>3314164>>3314183>>3314187>>3314204>>3314614>>3314643"I made a mistake coming here, I'd never bend my knee to someone like you."She seems confused,"Well fine then! Get out of here! I don't wanna see your wretched face ever again! I make you a once in a lifetime offer to be my personal slave and you turn it down. Most slaves would give their arm to be under someone so glorious and benevolent."You mutter,"Benevolent my ass."You walk away from her, she goes back to her chair, snapping her finger and calling her male servants back to her side. You regret even coming here. What the hell is wrong with you? Why should you be a footstool to this stuck up girl, serving her when she clearly doesn't embody the divine. When you COULD be serving the darkly divine woman who treats you well.-----(Warning, there is a slight femdom fanservice scene ahead, if this offends you, please feel free to skim past it.)You're at Schrellas home. The decor is dark, wooden, and somewhat rundown. Although still pretty fancy. Having luxurious black furnishings. Schrella is sitting on a black fainting chair in front of a fire. The fire is the only light on in this dark house. Painting the scene with a dark romantic mood.She's wearing a silky black nightgown which is very short and shows off a lot of leg. Not something you'd walk out of the house in.You sit knelt at her feet, kissing her leg and thigh subserviently. She nervously remarks,"Rylan.. You don't have to do this.""I want to. Talking to Vonna made me realize you're the only goddess in my life.."
>>3314665I dont see us Turning this place into knight America.
So if i am getting this right, the point of serving the obnoxious snob is to use the powers our friend gave us to see what she doesn't like, right? So why can we just do that from afar, like watch her from a distance?
>>3314676And a Goddess she is. Pearly alabaster skin. Thick and supple. Her bust is present and accounted for, but doesn't hang overly so and offend the eye. Her milky white cleavage through her silken nightgown is a sinful candy for the eye. This shapely womanly beauty. You see the true glory of women. You see why the men would bend their knee to such a wonderful being.Knelt here, paying your humble tribute to her body. She smiles sweetly as you take your time, laying each kiss upon these legs of hers, gently, and sweetly."So you.. Accept my feelings then.. You're not just doing it because my body resembles the divine right?""Of course I accept your feelings.. I think.. I was just too shy to admit it. I'm sorry for being so careless about it."She nods no stroking you behind the ear. She beckons you up to sit with her."I wouldn't have given away my family's birthright to just anyone. I could always see the true man that you were. Even if everyone else couldn't.""The true man huh?"The light of the fire flickers. She continues,"Have you.. Ever felt any different from the other guys?""Of course, I mean.. Growing up in the upper quarter, I always knew I was privileged.""But you.. Didn't notice it in other ways?""Other ways?""I mean.. With your desires and all.""Desires? There you go again with that. What do you mean Schrella?"She seems worried."M-maybe I shouldn't say anything.. I mean, you're happy here right? And.. You'd never do anything to hurt women right?"You wrap your arm around her,"Of course not. What's gotten into you?"She sighs."Maybe you don't know, have you tried looking in a mirror?""A mirror? Listen, I'm not sure I follow with this whole metaphor thing. I guess women really are smarter than men."She chuckles a bit,"No, it's just.."She sighs leading you to another room with a mirror. She grabs a candle lighting the dark room. She holds it close to your face. And you see in the mirror yourself. But there's a strange difference. You have.. Brown hair.--------1) Write-In
>>3314682>ask her if this is a side effect of the bloodline being transferred
>>3314682>You have.. Brown hair.A shocking revelation: we're a fucking mix!I'm >>3314643 btw, in case IDs changed.
>>3314682Also she seems really fucking worried that we want to "hurt women". She's brought it up repeatedly. There is something she isnt telling us.
So we are trying to be a footstool anyways? Just not to the more snooty girl.
>>3314711I am getting a bit confused myself. Like I get what we are kinda going for. But we literally just cashed down. Crow girl already gave us super powers. I dont know what else she can do for us
>>3314682>3314682Ask her to break our ribs and cuddle the pain away
>>3314711>>3314721>Not kissing the thighs of a woman you love.
>>3314731Will there be a zip up bodysuit and riding crop soon?
>>3314731Shouldn't that be the mc's mother?Even then that would still be weird.
>>3314743Cant wait till the degenerates vote to use our tentacles in imaginative ways
>>3311357Guys I feel like we need to establish some kind of end goal so we can form coherent plans in the future.
>>3314755We have to take this slowly.Anyway, this is quite a shock. Is this another reason why we have been mistreated so? Why hasn't or mother told us about this? Are we even her
>>3314765I'm just baffled at the moment. I can only assume it's a side effect of our gf's dark magic.
>>3314755just fade to black.>degenerateDidnt you want the mc to become a gimp?
>>3314774Nah I wanted the MC to play the long game by infiltrating Vonna's circle. My point is we are kinda floating around atm
>>3314682>Keep pushing as to why she is so worried>>3314781Why infiltrate her inner circle with your wit when you can infiltrate her hot, wet brain matter with your rigid longsword?
>>3314799I'm all for killing her. But hanging around with Goth Girl isn't exactly a training arcIf we are gonna learn Dark Magick that's another story
>>3314781I feel like growing strong enough to run away together would be a decent goal... you know, before the despair (if any).
>>3314819Let's train with Schrella and our mum to become a Dark Knight.
>>3314826Spellsword isnt a bad idea actually. As it stands we are just a pussy boi with basic icky magic. Eldritch knight is probably the way to go. We are never gonna match Vonna naturally. So we match her unnaturally.
I just wish we'd be able to be able to roll to affect the outcome of certain actions. That fight at the start of the Quest for example, could have been won, maybe, if we'd gotten a good roll.
>>3314781like how the ugly fat girl tries to hang out with the popular cheerleaders, and becomes queen bee one day. Yeah that never happens.
>>3314876To be fair we did managel to wack her once. Which is more than we expected >>3314826Mwahahahahahahahahah
>>3314885We could have wacked the shit out of her even more if we'd gotten good rolls.
>>3314891Just hope it picks up soon. We need to hit gud
>>3314876You know, this post reminds me of something I meant to bring up. Maybe it's just this QM's style, but everything here feels very restricted, as if we have little choice. We haven't been allowed to roll for things, and we have long updates that, while more entertaining to read than short ones, make us go longer without choosing an option for ourselves. And what's with the sudden choice to become Schrella's not-really-bitch-but-kind-of? The option for this route was just to ask for training in dark magic, not get dominated right off the bat if at all. Not gonna lie, sometimes it feels a lot like pic related.
>>3314914Welcome to the Magical Realm
>>3314914Couldn't the cow just go around sideways
>>3314914We should summon a demon and let it possess the stray cat
"What is this? Is this an effect of your bloodline?"She nods no,"It's not. You've always been like this. I don't know why your hair is like that. I was disturbed at first. I had heard that only Reds have Brown hair. And that Reds are beasts of men with endless sexual appetite."Your jaw drops, she goes on,"You're a Red aren't you? Most Reds have had sex before. You don't get any urges to rape women or anything right? I mean, if you ever do get an urge like that.. You can always come to me. I'll relieve your barbaric Lion urges so you don't cause trouble..""WOAH, I mean HOLD UP. I am NOT, a Lion ok? I'm a Dove! I've been a Dove since the day I was born. I'm a proud member of the Bonrok family!"She seems concerned,"So.. You're not some kind of super secret Red spy or something?""NO! I'd never betray the Blue kingdom! And my urges.."She grins seductively at you. You shake your head,"M-my urges are normal! I'm not some monster Red rapist."You groan,"I can't believe the reason you were worried was because you thought I was some Red deviant. I can assure you, I'm normal."She seems a little disappointed,"I mean.. I would be ok with it if you were just a deviant with me.."You groan,"Enough! This isn't the time.. I'm not a Red, I can't be! This is ridiculous. I'm going home!""Wait, Rylan! What about our romantic night togeth-""It'll have to be some other time!"
>>3314914I have to agree. I'd much rather we deal with being able to roll. If we fail, then it's our fault, not because the QM decided that we fail because we picked the wrong action.So far, the Quest hasn't been very... Enjoyable like it is now.
>>3314939You arrive home, your Mother is there chopping some carrots."Welcome back Rylan. How was your day?""Mom! I.."She looks back at you with concern,"What? What's wrong?"Suddenly she notices your eyes,"Your eyes, son you-""Am I even your son?"She sighs,"I always dreaded this day would come. I had hoped to raise you here in blissful ignorance.""Mom! It's not true, tell me it's not true! I mean, I'm a Dove! I'm your son!"She looks to you with those sad blue eyes of hers,"18 long years ago, there was unrest within the Blue Kingdom. The entire place was in an outrage at the rape and degradation of some of our most decorated Doves. Defiled by those pigs for all the world to see. The Kingdom was falling apart at the heartbreaking decision to leave them in the hands of the enemy. The rage boiled into blind fury. We wanted revenge, and retribution. We would do something so foul and vile, that the Red Kingdom wouldn't dare to try something like that again. We marched on the Red city. It wasn't a fight, it was an execution. We swiftly rode out to the Red City, and we took the city swiftly and with little resistance. We killed every last one. Man, woman, child. We even killed babies. Not a single life would be spared in this blood purge. We would sate our rage, and make the Red Kingdom feel our fury with everything we had. It was in that time that.."She stops briefly to collect her thoughts, but then continues,"There was this couple.. I barged into this house. And they begged me for mercy. They offered me everything. But I wouldn't hear them. And I killed them both without a second thought.."She takes in a deep breath,"Those people, were your parents. And then I heard it, the little cries of an infant. I saw you there in the crib. I tightened the grip around my sword, I almost did it. But something in me just wouldn't let me do it. I was overcome with emotion. The sounds of the screams outside. All of it. I lost myself. I sheathed my sword. And grabbed you out of your crib. And through the fire and chaos I escaped the city with you back to Valra."Your Mom looks somber,"And that's the truth of it. You're the only surviving citizen of that entire city. Everyone else was purged. I cast a magic spell on you. One that changed your hair to look like mine. But in the process crippled you. I wanted you to live a normal life."She waves her hand in front of your face. It glows, and you feel suddenly your clothes becoming tight, as your muscles start bulging wildly. Your hair growing into a long brown mane. You run and look into the mirror to see your shredded muscles and jacked appearance."This is what you really look like. With all your training, you.. You're truly a Lion.""Mom-!"She hands you her sword. She gets down on her knees."I killed your parents. And tore you away from your home. Nothing I do will ever cleanse these sins. If you want to kill me for this. You have every right."1) Write-In
>>3314955Oh it’s you Rose. I do hope Rose and Thorn are at least happy together.
>>3314955I thought it was established we had black hair
>>3314939See this? This is exactly the kind of shit I'm talking about! Where's the choice to stay or leave, QM? Where's the involvement of the players? Because right now this feels less like a quest and more like a fucking visual novel!
>>3314955>She waves her hand in front of your face. It glows, and you feel suddenly your clothes becoming tight, as your muscles start bulging wildly. Your hair growing into a long brown mane. You run and look into the mirror to see your shredded muscles and jacked appearance.RYLAN SMASH(Flexes)
>>3314965>he doesn't readWhat did Schrella give us?
>>3314955Jesus, every man woman and child? These Blues are fucked in the head. Let's get the fuck out of here, before our new appearance gets us fucking executed.
>>3314969Also, this I also have to agree with. We're being given pretty nonexistent amounts of options that we actually WANT.
>>3314955>Spare her and say that it doesn't change the fact that she's your mother The woman raised us and gave us nobility. Besides if we kill her we are fucked.
>>3314955>“My parents...”>Cry>that is a lot to take in, but they were dead the moment it was decided that the town be razed. At least “mom” saved us though. But she’s not the one bearing most guilt for the atrocity.
>>3314975I'm sure she can just put the glamor back on. Although we might could fake a prisoner exchange and sneak out that way Also we swole now
>>3314987>>3314995A mix of these two.
>>3315007And what did she give us among those powers?
>>3315014We have "true sight", and we can also apparently project spooky tendrils
>>3314996apparently the illusion also made mc a wimp
>>3315014Lets us see through solid objects - may extend to things like illusions and even lies at some point in the future - and lets us use something like pic related.>>3315026Maybe illusions in this world work more like seals that chance things physically instead of just being advanced smoke and mirrors?
>>3315046Well we are unsealed now. I suppose if we find a way to flip it on and off we can just publicly present it as a magic trick rather than our true form.
>>3314955Spare and forgive.She may not have birthed us, but she raised us and that means more. Also, she spared us, so we could at least return the favor.
>>3311357>I haaave the Powaaaaa>t.Rylan in a few seasons
>>3314955Forgive her for reasons previously stated.
“My parents...”You cry dropping the sword. Your Mom gets up and hugs you. "I'm so sorry.""I forgive you. You may not have birthed me.. But I love you, you raised me. And you'll always be my Mom.. Mom."She grips you a bit tighter. You and her hug for a while. After that she waves her hand in front of your face. And you feel your muscles shrink again."I've.. Put the seal back on. You'll never blend in looking like that.""Mom-""I care too much about you to let you get caught now.. You're my son. And thats all that matters. No one needs to know.""But my strength..""No buts. I won't hear it. If there's an emergency, come to me and I'll undo the spell. Otherwise you'll stay like this."-----You decide it would be best to train your dark powers under Schrella, and your physical fighting skills with your Mom. After a few days of training you get approached by Vonna,"Hey Crylan. How about a rematch?""Why now?""Oh, no reason. Just saw you training with the Crow and I thought it'd be nice for a rematch with you and your fancy new powers.""Yeah? Well you're on. When and where?""In the upper town square outside the school just like last time. We'll go right now. And we'll settle this.""I'm still getting that kiss if I win right?"She snickers,"Suuure. As if you actually could. But you know, I should ask for something if I win..""Ok, shoot.""If I win, you have to walk through the entire upper quarter naked with a big sign around your neck that says 'I'm a loser'."You growl,"No way! If I have to do that, just for the possibility of a little kiss?"She looks at you seeming irritated,"Why does it matter ugh. Fine whatever, I'll makeout with you for a few minutes or something."Well, you doubt you'll get much more than that out of her..1) I'll take the bet, you're on.2) Uh, you know I think I hear my laundry calling (run away)3) Grovel pathetically4) Write-In(In this match you actually get to roll for the win, it won't be easy, but at least the possibility is there.)
>>3315180Best of three for the roll?
>>3314955EXECUTE HER, and then return to the Red Kingdom, our true Fatherland, slaughtering every Blue in our path. Especially making sure to kill Vonna.
>>3315198Yeah sounds fair
>>3315180>Wouldn't you settle for something that would be only bemeaning to me personally and not cause outrage against Mom? Like have me do chores for you for a week or something.
>>3315180ok nevermind, we went for the cucked and bluepilled option, worshipping the bitch who murdered our parents, kidnapped us from our Fatherland and pretended to be our mother our entire life. I'm out of this retarded femdom thread.
>>3315207Vonna doesn't seem the type to care about that sort of thing.Let's just kick her ass.>>3315202Going over to the Red, or perhaps what's left of it from what we've been told, sounds for the best. Staying here in the Blue isn't good. Not with knowing our true heritage.Let's... Restrain ourselves though. For now, at least.
>>3315207This, her deal is way too one-sided as it is. We need to haggle.
>>3315180Use our new powers to create tentacles around Vonna's neck and strangle her to death with them.
>>3315180>we will become her manservant at school if we lose. That's a long term thing. Certainly worth more to her than making us walk with a sign once.
>>3315220>Doing anything in Blue turd as a Redbased retard
>>3315267That is much worse deal. No.
>>3315202>>3315220>2 posts by this ID>One post is voting for the obviously retarded option that will get us killed before we can say "fuck you mom">The other is bitching about how we're attached to someone who has raised and loved us like her own instead of throwing that away and beheading her because we learned she killed two people we don't even rememberAnd nothing of value was lost.
>>3315207I'd support this as long as it doesn't leave a permanent impression, like a brand or anything like that would.
>>3315204Ooc how bad are the odds
"Come on, you want me to streak through the entire city? Thats unfair!"She groans,"Just fight me already!""But I don't like the deal we've-""Alright fine, you only have to get naked for everyone watching. Happy? Doesn't matter anyways, you're gonna get stomped, and you're gonna get stomped hard. I hope you've prepared yourself Crylan. Cause you'll be crying all the way back home, back to your Mommy."You sigh,"Right, whatever. Lets do this."----------You're in front of the school, and a huge crowd has gathered at the scene. Schrella is cheering you on. And even your familiar Stray has shown up to watch.You're stretching and warming up. This body is weak. You probably still won't stand a chance. But this is for honor. If you lose here, you'll be completely shamed in front of your class, and there's no coming back. And Vonna will probably continue to lord it over you for a long time.Vonna is grinning confidently."Get ready to strut your stuff for us Crylan. Maybe we'll even throw some coins at you for your 'special performance'."--------Best out of three rolls. Don't fuck it up.
Rolled 26 (1d100)>>3315356*Nervous sweating*I'm gonna assume you want d100s.
Rolled 4 (1d100)>>3315356
Rolled 79 (1d100)>>3315356What's the worst that could happen?
>>3315379I just hope that this lets us pass the roll.
>>3315379We are doomedWe gonna be scrubbing toilets for the golden Girl All semester
>>3315379wew, probably below the success threshold but not by much
>>3315379I swear to god, if this isn't a passing roll I'm going to be very pissed.
>>3315282> she killed two people we don't even rememberYeah, they were total nobodies, it's not like she killed our parents or anything.The premise of this quest was actually quite interesting to me, playing as a man in a medieval fantasy matriarchy. Too bad it turned out to be nothing but a femdom fetish thread.
>>3314676Well we ended up being a wimp anyways>femdom fanserviceGonna throw in some futa fanservice while your at it?
>>3315390I suspect the DC to be between 70-90, considering that we're wimpified again and girls have plot buff in this realm.
>>3315395We live to love our adopted mother.We subvert the kingdom from the inside.Since this is now a fetish oriented quest, I insist we breed everyone, we have no blood relatives.
>>3315395>Too bad it turned out to be nothing but a femdom fetish thread.Blame the other anons for that; they wanted to kiss some major ass, not the QM.
>>3315405>>3315397If we lose anyway, I vote we stab her in the neck. This is getting genuinely irritating.
>>3315409Our wand should be a riding crop
>>3315395The were our biological parents.>>3315417Too late, QM made it clear its gonna have fanservice, and was willing to write light smut, which will degenerate into full on smutfest.
>>3315413That's true, the players themselves have a fetish. But clearly the OP has experience writing this disgusting shit.
>>3315395We don't even remember them. They have played no part in our lives for the vast majority of our 18 years of living. We don't even know their names. And you want us to kill the woman who acted as our mother without batting an eyelash and then get killed like a bitch by whatever army this place has?I agree with cutting out the the femdom fetish stuff though, I'm trying as hard as I can to steer away from that. That would just end up being creepy and no fun.
>>3315427If he's going to railroad us into this bullshit, then we vote the total opposite of what he wants.
>>3315439We should sacrifice Goth Girl and her cat to blood summon a demon
>>3315445...Okay the summoning demon part is a 'little' far, but still.
>>3315427> The were our biological parents.I know, I was sarcastic.> Too late, QM made it clear its gonna have fanservice, and was willing to write light smut, which will degenerate into full on smutfest.Yeah I know, I wish I was here from the start. I might have been able to uncuck this quest. Oh well.>>3315432>We don't even remember them. They have played no part in our lives for the vast majority of our 18 years of living. We don't even know their names. And you want us to kill the woman who acted as our mother without batting an eyelash and then get killed like a bitch by whatever army this place has?I don't know about you, but I'd be pretty pissed if a woman murdered my parents when I was a baby and then kidnapped me and pretended to be my mother.
>>3315445A trap Incutebus!>>3315439We voted again being a groveling mangina 5-2 I think, but we ended up as one anyways.
>>3315453We have no memory or reference of them. All we know is from our adopted mommy, which I insist be our gentle busty loving futamommydom!
>Waaaah, why does the QM do what we collectively ask him to?Maybe stop voting on being such a submissive faggot from here on out, eh?>>3315454>We voted again being a groveling mangina 5-2to the bitch, but not to Schrella, somwhow
>>3315453>I don't know about you, but I'd be pretty pissed if a woman murdered my parents when I was a baby and then kidnapped me and pretended to be my mother.Oh, no, I would definitely be pissed. However, if said parent raised me as well as the MC's mother raised him with all the love and attention he needed, I would definitely hesitate before doing anything drastic. Even then, I probably wouldn't kill her. Thing is, if it were up to me the MC would've been a little more torn upon realising it. His parents are dead by the hand of the woman in front of him, who just so happens to be the person that risked everything to defy her orders to save her and then proceeded to raise him as her own. That's quite a bomb to drop on a kid, and not one that would be recovered from in five seconds after a brief meltdown and an "I love you, mum"
Quick Note: I don't really feel that I should have to justify how I write my story, but given the inherently controversial nature of it I suppose this comes with the territory.There seems to be this crazy idea that I want to railroad you. I took your suggestion and gave you dice rolls. I am trying to work with you, but you're attacking me. And I don't much appreciate that.As far as the fetish thing, a little light femdom every now and then won't kill you. Relax. I'm not gonna start dropping futashit or any of that crap. So you can relax. If you can't handle the more mature themes of this quest, well I'm sorry but you may have to find another.HOWEVER. My main focus is NOT on the fetish stuff. I do plan to tell a coherent story. Not all stories with sexy themes are inherently bad, or even invalid. You're playing a quest where women rule the world. Try to relax and have a little fun? If you don't like those scenes, feel free to gloss over them and continue to the more plot oriented story elements.I suppose my pleas will fall on deaf ears, because nuance doesn't exist on 4chins. And talking things out rationally like adults also doesn't exist. I fully expect everyone to get super angry, misunderstand me, and just become completely unreasonable.Again, I care about the setting. But I'll probably throw a little light femdom in every now and then to keep things spicy. Please just relax and enjoy the story my dudes, I appreciate everyone here for taking the time to read.
>>3315467>which I insist be our gentle busty loving futamommydom!cease
>>3315474>That's quite a bomb to drop on a kid, and not one that would be recovered from in five seconds after a brief meltdown and an "I love you, mum"Yeh, I guess this QM is like a monkey's paw; we will have to be more specific in our (re)actions from now on.
Wait, I just realized Schrella's been ogling us for the longest time now.
>>3315478>My main focus is NOT on the fetish stuffI'm not gonna start dropping futashit or any of that crapThanks for clearing that up, I was worried for a second.>I took your suggestion and gave you dice rolls. I am trying to work with youI noticed and appreciate this. It's far nicer to have a larger measure of control over where the story goes, and a great improvement over the earlier style. I'll definitely keep playing.
>>3315498Agreed. The added control is something everyone will appreciate, regardless of our feelings on how much of a total pussy the MC is.If the dice fail us, that's our fault and not the QM's.
>>3315478I'm afraid there's no going around it, some people will take exception to way you do things, especially if you haven't outlined system you'll be using to begin with. Plus the topic is very sensitive to some of us.I'm afraid you'll just have to endure some frustration.
QM's been doing alright, for the vague choices that we've been giving him. It could definitely be worse.>>3315529I guess, but I hope they sperg out about it too much. Let's just stop going too far off-topic now; we've been eating the bumps.
>>3315467>which I insist be our gentle busty loving futamommydom!WTF is wrong with you?
>>3315498I'll try to keep my eyes open as the QM to the concerns of the players. I just want everyone to have some fun.>>3315529>some people will take exception to way you do things, especially if you haven't outlined system you'll be using to begin withYeah, I don't like a hard numbers system. It just.. You know it feels too mechanical to me. But dice rolling, I can deal with that. Adds a little spice to the story.>Plus the topic is very sensitive to some of us.Yeah I figured it would be. I wish that it wasn't but I can see why it becomes a touchy subject. >>3315560Thanks man.I'm gonna take a lunch break, stretch my legs. I'll be back in like a half hour, maybe less. Have an unrelated free qt goth girl pic.
>>3311357I presume we lost
>>3315603Don't give up hope yet, son. Besides, if we fail there's a possibility that the illusion will break under the stress so we can pose menacingly.
>>3315478Why can't we have light futa with light femdom?
>>3315583Wait, are people upset we didn't go on some 'tard rampage, kill our adoptive mother, and are now blaming it on anons being fetish fags???
>>3315624Did someone suggest we go ramp and kill people?So far that's only been the NPC fetish projection of our only girlfiend.
>>3315636I think so far people are just expecting OP to break out the paddle and handcuffs at any moment
>>3315624Sure, being a total submissive cuck and licking the feet of 3 different women is a much better idea, right?
>>3315726I thought the only thing people were upset at was the mistreatment we were subject to.
>>3315726YesSoon we will be strapped to a glorious X post in nothing but our underwear.
>>3315726Well, one of them could only sound good to the most low functioning of retards, while the other is merely unpleasant.
>>3315478You can't expect to go around trying to run a quest without a reaction when you drop fetishes in it, especially when most of the players essentially voted against it that option, then get indignant when players react to it. Saying its no big deal makes it look like your being defensive of it.I really wanted it to be like >>3315395 said >playing as a man in a medieval fantasy matriarchy.But it basically is turning into this.>Too bad it turned out to be nothing but a femdom fetish thread.Would have been nice to see a serious attempt at it.
>>3315796That guy literally wanted to go on a rampage because he found out he was adopted. I don’t think that would fly well in a “serious” story either.
>>3315583Most of my problem with this quest isn't the femdom or fanservice which I fully expected for a quest like this. The problem is that we don't have any control what happens after each scene ends. For example, we didn't have a vote on whether to spend our first night with Schrella and immediately went back to mom.
Your nerves are tensing up. You take a deep breath. You grip your wood sword with two hands. You have your magic.. That's your edge here. Not to mention, you've fought her before. Just be calm, predict, dodge and counter. But then what if she rushes in and starts swinging wildly again?What are you supposed to do about that? What are you-"Vonna is spinning her wood sword around casually strutting towards you."You gonna move, or am I gonna have to come to you?"Fuck the battle plan, you're gonna do something unexpected. You charge in and attack. It works! She's caught off guard. She blocks onehanded and shoves you off pushing you back a bit. You yell loudly running at her again. She gracefully blocks each attack. You keep pushing, gritting your teeth, all offense, striking wildly like she did last time. Left swipe, she blocks, right swipe, she blocks. Dammit, she's still too fast. Suddenly her blade comes through stabbing you in the stomach sending you flying back.The crowd laughs and cheers for Vonna. Dammit, this isn't doing anything. Alright, time to bust out the trump card. You raise your hand and try to grip her. She stands perfectly still and doesn't even seem to care about moving. The dark tentacles wrap around her, coiling along her skin. Alright, now just to squeeze and-Suddenly a bright shine eminates from her so blinding that it obscures everything. Suddenly through the fog of light, her wood blade surrounded by an aura of light. You dodge away to the side. The light fog clears itself, your tentacles are gone. Dammit all, she was prepared for this.She snickers,"Was that all?""Not by a long shot!"You charge at her again. She yawns, effortlessly blocking you with just one hand."You're starting to bore me. Are you even trying?"Damn this bitch.. If only she knew you were fighting with a handicap.. You grit and try to swing faster. She counters your heavy strike and throws an uppercut punch into your feeble body. You wheeze and tumble backwards. Fucking hurts..
>>3315936"If this is all you're capable of, you might as well strip here."There's no way you'll be fast enough to penetrate her defenses like this. Gotta find a way to slow her down. Wait a minute.. Maybe there is. You charge in again. She laughs,"This sad thing again? How many times are you going to try the same old trick before you just give up?"You focus on making a black tendril appear just out of her view. You aim to strike, and just as she's about to block, the tentacle grabs her arm. She can't block, she's open! You slam your wood sword as hard as you can into her stomach. She coughs gritting her teeth. You hit her again but as you do another bright flash obscures your view. She tackles you to the ground and starts smashing your face with the wooden pommel of her sword. It's horribly painful. You focus on making tentacles, focusing all these negative feelings you have. The tentacles grab her and pull her off you suspending her into the air. You stagger to get back on all fours, and then back to your feet. You feel dizzy. Your mouth is bleeding. Face dripping in blood. You scream charging forwards recklessly. You feel your sword hit, but the blade doesn't stop. Blade pushed all the way through her stomach, piercing her body, squirting blood violently onto the ground. You stop the tendrils, letting her fall to the ground. The crowd gasps. She coughs blood. Some guards come and take her away to get aid. You stand there, battered and beaten. The crowd seems unnerved by you and quietly disperses.Schrella comes up to you,"Well, you won! Congrats!"You turn to her."I.. I guess I did."
>>3315941It's later that night. You had come back home to get some rest. But, there's this noise which has awoken you. It's dark outside. And you're not sure how many hours have passed. You realize your body.. It's back to it's muscly self. You hear screaming out in the city. You grab a sword and a blue cloak draping yourself in it and rush out. Red army troops are here invading.You rush through the chaos seeing hundreds of Red Army attackers everywhere. Houses are on fire, people are screaming. How the hell did this happen? You see innocent Blue citizens being cornered and slaughtered. You run in a panic through the streets not knowing what to do. You see Vonna being dragged out in her nightgown with that wound on her stomach. A bunch of brutish Red Army thugs have her suspended by the arms. They're laughing piggishly,"Hey look at this one, just pulled her out of bed. Look at the fine ass on this one."She seems weak, and covered in bruises. The wound you gave her must have had her sent to the hospital. They rip off her gown exposing her nude body to the night. One of the guys goes to the back and unfastens his belt."Heh, I think I've earned this one. Hold her still boys. Been dying to get my dick wet with some good Blue kingdom pussy."The once proud warrior Vonna is suspended, powerless by these brutes. One of the men slashes her long beautiful hair letting the locks fall to the ground. The grizzled looking Red grabs her by the neck and speaks softly into her ear,"Time to show you what a real man can do. Don't worry, in time. You'll learn to enjoy it."She struggles a bit but it's useless.1) Remove your Blue cloak, Join the Reds.2) Stop them from raping her. Defend your homeland, push back these evil Red invaders.3) Write-In(You'll have to roll after you choose)
Rolled 61 (1d100)>>3315954>Stop them from raping her. Defend your homeland, push back these evil Red invaders
Rolled 59 (1d100)>>3315954>1) Remove your Blue cloak, Join the RedsRAPE THE BITCH
Rolled 78 (1d100)>>33159542) Stop them from raping her. Defend your homeland, push back these evil Red invaders.
This escalated quickly.
Rolled 86 (1d100)>>3315954>2) Stop them from raping her. Defend your homeland, push back these evil Red invaders.A threat to our home is a threat to Schrella and a threat, and a threat to Schrella is as good as dead.
Rolled 61 (1d100)>>3315772Who?>>3315853There's a difference between just being adopted, and being adopted by the person who murdered your parents.>>3315954> 1) Remove your Blue cloak, Join the Reds.FUCK YES! NOW THAT'S WHAT I'M TALKING ABOUT!
>>3315970>>3315981>>3316013 WinrarYou remove you hood which obscures your face. The Reds call out."Hey, isn't that one of us? Hey come over here and help us get this bitch."You unsheath your sword. You charge at the men. You catch one off guard and run him through the chest."He's one of them, get him!"You use your negative feelings to hold them down with your tendrils. You cut each of them down easily, decapitating them. Compared to Vonna. These guys are nothing.You kneel down to the nude and exposed Vonna covered in wounds and bruises. You pull off a red cape from one of the Reds and drape her in it."I might have seen a little, I'm sorry."She laughs through tears,"That.. Doesn't matter you dummy."You help her to her feet. She speaks,"We.. Need to get to stop the invasion.. We need to-"You cut her off."We need to get you away from the battlefield."You lift her up and carry her away in your arms."I'll get you to safety, and then I'll go join the front lines."Vonna looks up at you weakly."Rylan.. You got.. So big.""I know.""Why do you, look like them?""It's a long story. I'm on your side though, I promise."Vonna seems a little embarrassed and doesn't respond. You get her to the church where other citizens have holed themselves up. And hand her over to them. Then you charge out to the frontlines. You're gonna slaughter these Red army brutes.
>>3316202You arrive at the frontlines to see your fellow students in the academy fighting there already. Your classmates look to you,"Woah is that Rylan?""How'd he get so big?"You smile and focus your attention on the frontline. You chop at the horde of Red Army invaders. This thing feels like a butterknife, it's so lightweight. It used to feel so heavy. You're slashing through their formation. Sidestepping their attacks and using your truesight to aim for weaknesses in their armor.One by one, you bloodily carve through them. As the night goes on.. Archers, swordfighters. Cavalry. You fought them all. ---After hours and hours of tireless battle. The invaders mostly died as the morning came. The rest of them retreated. Fading off into the horizon.You almost got arrested by your own people, but as the guards were hauling you away, Vonna stuck up for you. Vonna brought you before the Popette, her holiness. And you were given the Wings of the Dove.
>>3316208Vonna and you are walking along the steps together on your way to see Schrella."I.. I've reconsidered your offer. For friendship that is."Vonna seems to be trying to stay composed. But she still seems uneasy."Oh? Not upset that I'm a male? I thought you didn't want friends of the 'worthless male variety'."She stops and looks down."I'm sorry. I.. I was wrong, about you I.. You saved me when I was about to.."She starts tearing up. You put your arm around her and comfort her. She hugs you and holds onto you for a bit."It's alright.""There.. I said it.. I was wrong ok? So.. Don't hold it against me forever.""It's ok."She sniffles,"I think.. Maybe some men.. Can be ok.""More than slaves?"She nods her head yes,"Yeah.""Good. Well.. Maybe things will start to change around here and uh.. Maybe men could get some better treatment?"She's looking down at the ground."Maybe I can.. Pull some strings. Talk with people. See what happens.""Wow, really?""Men will still be less.. But..""That's fine. Though I think easing up on the whole male slave thing might ease tensions around here."Vonna smiles."I.. I hope I'll see you later.. At school.""Y-yeah."
>>3316202>>3316208Welp, the cuck fetishists won once again. That was our last chance to save this fucking thread, I am actually out of here now. Enjoy your fendom "quest", degenerates.
>>3316212You're with Schrella in her home cuddling with her. Stray is there with you cuddling with you as well. Purring happily."So you really saved everyone huh?""Where the heck did you go?""I hid in the cellar with my parents. I don't have any powers remember.""Oh.. Right, yeah that is a predicament. Wait, you can't fight good without your powers?""Its.. More difficult. But anyhow, now you're free to leave Valra aren't you?""Yeah.. I guess so.""Where are you gonna go?"-----1) I'm gonna stay here, work on things from the inside. See if we can't make things more equal for all men.2) I'll take the fight to the Reds, this won't end till they're taken care of.3) We should set off on our own. Travel the land. We're finally free after all.4) Write-In
>>3316225>1) I'm gonna stay here, work on things from the inside. See if we can't make things more equal for all men.Fuck her, take her like a man that she craves
>>3316225>1) I'm gonna stay here, work on things from the inside. See if we can't make things more equal for all menLet's fuck
>>3316225I'm honestly torn between staying and leaving, busy trying to figure out which one would leave more potential for a (reasonable) heel turn while still being interesting.
>>3316221What a fucking retard>>3316225>I'm gonna stay here, work on things from the inside. See if we can't make things more equal for all men.
>>3316282We can always leave once we made things equal and fair
>>3316298I guess you're right, I would be outnumbered anyway.
>>3311357>go on a deep cover mission to infiltrate the Reds. Tell only Vonna and Emo GirlWe look like them. Let's use that. How the fuck did that get inside a walled city? We just gonna ignore that. If there is a traitor that's fucking important info.
>>3316225Holy I need to sleep but I want you to know I've enjoyed this so much. You're an inspiration and I sincerely hope to see more.
>>3316225>3) We should set off on our own. Travel the land. We're finally free after all.Let's exercise our new rights and see the world with our own eyes, fuck the matriarchy.
>>3316225Wtf happened while I was gone?4) Write-InSpend some more time finishing our traning at the very expensive school our step mom paid for, then spend some time with mommy, learn a few neat things as her student, and try to see and explore some of the world and maybe ask Schrella if she would come with us.The newer posts feels like we are just going through the motions.>>3316221At least have some merit when you make such claims. Seems like QM really "lost the wind in his sails".
>>3311357kek a white knight quest
>>3316225>1) I'm gonna stay here, work on things from the inside. See if we can't make things more equal for all menTime to take advantage of our new station to act as the voice of the unheard.However we gotta take it easy. We’re not fighting only against stereotypes but against cornerstone dogma of the national religion.If this route becomes unviable, we can always leave later.
>>3316208>Vonna sticks up for you and you get the highest honor possibleOP I like this quest but I'll be honest you fucked up here. Had a real good chance for a short courtroom drama defending your honor kinda deal.
>>3317097Same, everything happened WAY too fast here. It feels like we skipped an entire arc or something.
>>3317109Feels to me like OP is trying to navigate into situation where most people will be comfortable with.
>>3317109Yeah I was kind of excited to stand before the highest court in the matriarchy and defend why we shouldnt be executed for simply being a red.
>>3317072Yeah I know this Quest is ridiculous.
>>3316225Gotta say, there's been riots in the chats for the past 24 hours thanks to your quest and a particularly steatfast edgy incel.Your quest will be memed forever because some light femdom killed a poor fool's mind and revealed him to be a traitor to everything that raised him. Thank you. His insanity will stay with us all.
>>3316845>>3318990I truly appreciate these words of praise. As much as I would truly love to make an update tonight, I have a prior arrangement. Hearing these praises makes it all feel worth it. It gives me life. As a writer, I live for these rare moments. I have many new plans for where the story will go. I believe you all will probably appreciate the direction I take it in.Stay safe out there everyone. Relax and enjoy yourselves. Sometime tomorrow I'll give you all a well deserved update, (if all goes well that is) complete with a sex scene (within a pastebin, because muh blue board)And many other new plot things to unfold. I'm giving you all the complete package. Because with praise like this, how could I not offer you my very best?
>>3318990Pray tell, where can one find this meltdown. >>3319066Post pics of Schrella
>>3319066http://suptg.thisisnotatrueending.com/qstarchive.html?tags=SOMNIUSJust to let you know, your quest was misarchived as "Dragonball Quest #181" at the very bottom of this link. People are working on contacting Lord Licorice now to try and fix this, but.
>>3319077On the qtg discord, you just need to look for posts by this guy.You guys deserve this meme, we wouldn't have it without you. May it warm your hearts.
>>3319086Did someones finger slip? Or is it like when people post at the same time, images might get swapped?
>>3319275Pretty sure it was deliberate by someone disgruntled. I shot an email to LL to see if he can help. I'll keep you posted.
>>3319066Holy, can you do a multiple protag story like the first try? I want to play as a female in the blue kingdom too. The stoneguard captain from the first thread is interesting.
>>3319288This thread does kind of read as a fetish novel not an actual quest. I only saw a few of votes called for, the QM blatantly ignored 2 of them and wrote what he wanted anyway. Just put this on fan fiction com or some shit. It’s not a quest if votes mean nothing and you can’t pace it correctly.
>>3319287Sorry, but I find it's easier writing from one characters perspective.>>3319288>>3319304>>3319342You seem to be under the presumption that I mispaced anything. I don't like formulaic storytelling. You wanted to see the MC struggle, and fight, and blah blah blah.Well fuck it, I don't care. That's not what the story is going to be about. My story is constantly evolving in it's own way. I don't need your formulaic corporate garbage to tell me how to write my story. Write your own fucking story."YOU DIDN'T WRITE IT HOW I WANTED REEEEE"I'm not a bad storyteller just because you didn't like how the story turned out. This story is about constantly evolving, the continual and rapid climb of the MC. Let me put it another way. It would have been completely predictable for me to write the story slow, and consistently getting shit on, again, and again, same old shit till he finally got the Wings of the Dove. But fuck it, I don't care. That's not what I wanted my story to be about.Again, I'm making this story go where I want, and fuck your idea of what you want as pacing. Shove your unwanted bias up your ass, and get out.Those who can actually appreciate what I'm doing will still be here.
>>3319445>So you admit you’re not making a quest threadI admit that this is a quest on a board for quests. And I'm the QM, and I'm the captain of this ship, and I'll steer it how I want. And if you don't like it. Leave.>You’re writing your own shit storyWell gee, I'm sorry your highness. I didn't realize you were the arbiter of what was good and bad. I guess my thread is shit just because you say so. It doesn't matter that anyone else enjoys it, or if I'm having fun. No, it's all about you. I've given my players plenty of freedom, and there are others who enjoy this quest. Stop being so salty because boo hoo it didn't go your way.>then why not post your thread in /lit/ instead of /qst/?Uh huh. Yeah, go on, keep crying dude. You're fucking pathetic.>Since there’s not an illusion of choiceWAAHH MOMMY HE WON'T LET ME CHOOSE>Just a story. So post your story on the appropriate board and stop pretending it’s a quest thread.Dude, it's still a quest, you're rolling dice, and making decisions. Just because you don't like it personally doesn't make this quest shit.Your opinions. DO NOT, EQUAL OBJECTIVE FACTS. GET OVER YOURSELF YOU PRETENTIOUS COCKNOB>>3319462I'm gonna keep going with it, and if you don't like it, hey there's like 60 other threads you can shit up instead. Do me a favor and fuck off will you? I don't need your toxic shit in my thread ok? I'm trying to have a good time, and have some fun. And this is what I get.DO I AS THE QM OF THIS QUEST, HAVE PERMISSION TO WRITE THIS STORY HOW I WANT? BECAUSE I'M PRETTY SURE I CAN WRITE IT HOWEVER I FEEL LIKE, AND THAT'S FINE.
>>3319474Dude fuck off and leave my thread, don't ever fucking come back because you're not welcome.
>>3319489>shitting this boardBecause we need the room for all those dead civs right?
>>3319489>Wow you get pretty damn salty over being called outNo, I get pretty mad when two ignorant assholes tell me the QM, how to write my own fucking quest.>correctly I might add, for shitting this board upThat's your opinion dude. Everyone runs their quest different, theres a hundred different other quests, be an adult and find another quest.>Just go back to Akun or wherever the hell you came fromHA, so hilarious dude. Comedy gold here. You're so fucking original, and not at all a derivative bitter little shitweed, so filled with salt and angst, you can't help but shit up someone's thread.>Fuck off from /qst/ and don’t come backCry some more dude, you're being real mature about this whole thing.
>>3319489You're >>3316221, aren't you? I saw what happened at the discord.
This quest just keeps on giving.
>>3316362Fucking hell, my ID changed again.
>>3319503Go back to AO3 or whatever cesspool you crawled out of if you ain't willing to actually write a quest instead of your fuckin Telltale-game-ass railroad-ass shit-fetish-ass bullshit.
Gloryhammer we know that's you.
>>3319524You're lying your ass off, Gloryhole.
>>3319524Yeah, I guess. Turns out >>3319523 is him.
>>3319503My dude, this isn't a good look for literally anyone. Attacking people for raising criticism, valid or no, doesn't seem like a good idea to get a bigger audience.
>>3319523>Go back to AO3 or whatever cesspool you crawled out of if you ain't willing to actually write a quest Oh my God how many times do I have to say it? I'm writing a quest. Ya best start believing in quest threads, cause you're in one dude.Just because it's not the type of quest you enjoy, doesn't mean its not a quest.>your fuckin Telltale-game-ass railroad-ass shit-fetish-ass bullshitWell aren't you just a smug pretentious critic? Can you please stop with your incesant crying and just leave?60 other threads for fucks sake, and you had to come to this one just to take down your trousers and drop a load.>>3319530Get lost dude, I don't give a fuck about your oh so insightful "criticism". Your thinly veiled """"""criticism""""" is just an excuse to bitch at me.>B-but it's helpful and you're bad if you don't accept criticismNah, fuck off mate. Don't care. I'll write the story how I want. And the players can input their actions when the times arise.
>>3319535>quoting me after saying "Okay, I guess you're not him, this guy is"
>>3319542Lmao get the fuck off this board asshole. People didn’t like your quest because it’s not a quest. The end. If you want a better reception for your story post it on a short story board, not a quest board.
>>3319501One earnest quest, no matter if it doesn’t cater to your particular tastes or triggers you with its topic, is much more valuable than a “joke” quest like “Ure a stick man with big dick wat do”.
>>3319542You need to learn to accept criticism even if you don't believe it to be true, or even if it's indeed "an excuse to bitch at me". Why? Because then you look like a decent person, your actual critics are happy, and the trolls get bored and leave.You are feeding the trolls. You are driving away people who actually care. And you look like a moron and an asshole.
>>3319542so, uh, if you look at the little 'ID' thing next my post, you can quite clearly tell that that was my first post in the thread, so there's... like, *actually* zero reason to go off on me besides defending what's left of your clearly quite fragile ego.
>>3319548Stop glory, how many more ips are you going to burn through?
>>3319548You don't like my thread? You're entitled to your own opinion. You think my thread is a piece of shit, well good on you mate. But that doesn't give you the right to come in here and berate me, and shit up this thread with your autism.Act like an adult and find another thread.
>>3319566Nobody likes your thread. It’s not a quest. Fucking Penismancer quest and the months long Nigger Quest are better quests than yours. Worse stories, but that’s because you’re writing a damn story not a quest.
>>3319555>You need to learn to accept criticism even if you don't believe it to be trueHow about you accept my criticism of you then? You're a shit person and you need to leave. Remember, you're a bad person if you don't accept it.>Why? Because then you look like a decent person, your actual critics are happy, and the trolls get bored and leave.I don't care about my reputation on an Anonymous image board.>>3319556>quite fragile egoDude you're so full of shit. I could give a fuck. I just don't want people shitting up my thread.>>3319570Correction, YOU, don't like it. You don't make up the majority. You and that one other loser can leave. Please and thank you.
Now that I've sufficiently told the retarded trolls to fuck off. I'd love to get back to writing for the people who actually care about my stuff.
>>3319570I'll admit that I read this quest for laughs mostly but it's infinitely better than a gorillion dead civ and stick figure whatdo threads.
>>3319577Sorry I wasn't here earlier Holy. Second time faggots ruined this quest.
>>3319577>he thinks it's overBy the way, you've quite sufficiently proved my point about your fragile ego by refusing to allow any piece of 'criticism' however loosely related to you as it is, to go unresponded to
>>3319581Dude, fuck off. Go become a Youtuber or something if you want to critique people for a living. I'm not a professional writer, and I never asked for your shitty ill-informed opinions.
>>3319575>How about you accept my criticism of you then?>Remember, you're a bad person if you don't accept it.>he says, while refusing criticismC'mon, QM, I really want to be on your side here...
>>3319575You’re the one who went full sperglord because some people didn’t think this was an actual quest. If you want to see what a real fucking quest is then check out Into the Skies or something on suptg.
>>3319583It's ok man. I'm just glad to know there are people who actually care about my stuff.>>3319585Yeah dude, you proved that if you say enough stupid shit, you can make a QM over the internet pretty pissed off.Congrats.
>>3319585>people have opinions about things they potentially care aboutwow
>>3319587The funniest part?This is all the same level of logic the original discord autist was spouting. "You're mean to me so you're a bad person who deserves bad things to happen to them."Holy, please, why let yourself get baited? Chill out
>>3319587Just turning his retard logic back on him. I'll admit I'm tired and sick of these retards coming in here. And I just want them to fucking leave.>>3319589"real quest" "fake quest" what the hell is this meme?You don't get to decide what a real quest is and what's not.I'm telling you as the author of this quest, that Its as real as it can be. I made this with the intention of being real. And you can take that however you want.>>3319596>Holy, please, why let yourself get baited? Chill outBecause yelling at retarded trolls is helping me to get out my anger and frustration with life. It feels good to tell people to just fuck off every once in a while.>>3319598Good and bad are subjective dude. Art is subjective. Get that through your thick skull.
I should probably stop engaging but: QM you posted your writing in a public place. You posted it in a public place known for blunt honesty and vitriol. Criticism is a given.You can't come in here and say "YEAH YOU CAN'T CRITICIZE ME BECAUSE ART IS SUBJECTIVE AND I CAN DO WHAT I WANT ANYWAYS". Which is like: okay, fine. I can write all the Penismancer Quests I want and it's just as good and valid as Banished Quest, I guess. But consider: maybe it means people have legitimate issues that, if you fixed, would both improve your personal skill and the enjoyment of the reader? You want reader interaction, right? That's the point? If it isn't, why are you here?
Good lord, I was asleep for eight hours. What the fuck happened in here?
>>3319614Maybe QM wants this kind of reader interaction. I’m starting to think he’s just trying to troll /qst/ but he’s just better at it than Penismancer. I try to offer helpful criticism and somehow I’m a retarded troll.
wew somehow I expected a dumpster fire when I opened this thread
>He's still goingImagine I posted a picture of a smug anime girl laughing or something, because this guy isn't worth the effort to go find a picture to attach.
>>3319620This is only the top layer. There's so, so much more going on.
would it be helpful if I wrote out a timeline for any out-of-the-loop anons
>>3319629Please do! Holy is also out of the loop, might as well tie all this autism together
>>3319613No dude, you don't get to narrate how the argument went. I replied earnestly and sincerely, to each and every half baked, ill informed, and completely ignorant post you made.You don't understand art. You are not smart. And I do not, and will NEVER respect you. You're a complete brainlet with the mind of a child, who doesn't comprehend subjectivity. You don't understand that every quest runs differently, and that I as the QM have every right to write this story how I want.This is your last (you) so enjoy it.>>3319617>>3319618What happened was two trolls acted completely retarded. And were surprised that I not only responded to them, but called them out on their ignorance.And this is the last (you) I'm giving to any one of you pseudo-intellectual faggots. Go back to plebbit, or wherever the fuck you came from. Go to /r athiesm or some such shit, /r thedonald. Go to the 66 other fucking quests. Fuck, maybe actually go outside, and leave the people who want to be creative, to their own devices rather than shitting up my thread with your oh so precious "criticism" which yes, is a thinly veiled excuse to bitch at me and spew your noxious bile into my thread.Not a single thing you uttered was even remotely intelligent, and conversing with you made me lose braincells.
>>3319642>he thinks there's TWO trollssee, i made the joke about how IDs work earlier but now i'm thinking you *actually* don't get how they work.
>>3319642Lol this faggot calling someone else a reddit nigger. Get the fuck out of here you pretentious asshole. I tried to be nice and give honest, objective criticism. The fact that you can’t handle criticism and start attacking people for criticizing you shows that you shouldn’t be a writer. Definitely don’t quit your day job to pursue writing.
>>3319642holy shitnow THIS is QMing
>>3319652This. Counted all the negative posters. Two of these are 1-ID so potentially samefags or irrelevant, but...>CmbL5G8K>9cgIqxDC>APeV+4c8 >LKP/jd1A>k2TGFV9e>kBDAkqDw>8vYxRtNA...counting them there's at least 7 critics in here, discounting them there's at least 5.OP doesn't understand IDs.Timeline coming.
Get on Discord, OP's in VC.
>>3319795I don't go to discord, what happened there
>>3319848QM's airing his dirty laundry and Freud is rolling over in his grave so fast that he could be used to power a perpetual motion engine.
update OP's venting about his unsatisfying relationships in VC
>>3319424You should communicate this if you want your story to move in a certain way or talk/inform to the players about what you intend or the goals on your story you aim towards.I agree your not a bad writer, everything up to the point of "That scene" was imo well written enough with interesting characters. Wish that had continued.I will say that that kind of twist may not be necessary bad storytelling, but its definitely not good QMing.A little criticism won't kill ya.>>3319469Arguing or insulting with the players never works out well since its always the quest that suffers including other players who just want to play regardless.>>3319479>>3319503I am not worried about what future posts I will hold. Going down the list catching up since I was sleeping.>>3319523Did anyone else glass the huntsman by mistake?>>3319566Its not so much that he can't, its more like no one can really stop him and its best to ignore if its trolling. Not even mods can stop trolling or even different options, and shitposting. I mean we are on a site very well know for a few things, and good behavior isn't one of them.>>3319605>Art subjective. To people yes perhaps, to cultures and values, not so much.>>3319642Okay, this post made it official. Quest is fucked dead 66 days and ways till Sunday March 5th. Should never get overly political or highly defensive, its like broadcasting to sharks there's a tailing pond of blood in the water.
update OP writes a porn akun quest, doesn't understand why this is a fetish questlikes we're still going come join
>>3319919Which one? Every quest on akun is a fetish quest
>>3319919>>3319924Wait what? Did QM really go over to Akun to continue this?
>>3319928no he is running one simultaneously to this (or it may be dead idk) >>3319924don't wanna derail but if you go into the discord it's linkedmore: QM admits quest and femdom fetish may be based off of his childhood trauma
>>3319795Don't have discored dunno what vc is.>>3319849Quick, someone grab jumper cables and hook the other end to this thread!>>3319936TMI. But I guess it explains why he got so defensive. He inserts a bit of himself in the story, and when people criticize it, he sees it as something against him and treats it more like people are criticizing him, and attacking him personally when really they are talking more about the quest.>>3319940I don't mind playing the weakling, its partly what mad the premise fun. It was giving us a strong motivator to say NO, and do our best to persevere and prosper.Gary Sue can be fun too if you do it right with Mary Stew!
so, are we saving this city and killing the reds or what?
>>3319642kys out of /qst/, cuck
what the fuck happened in the last half of this thread
>>3320234QM entered tard mode
Not gonna lie, this thread made me believe that my own quest isn't that horrible.
Well, RIP this quest I suppose. Anyone wanna take the concept and try again?
>>3320289I can run this quest and not make it look like a fetish, but I'm a little swamped on IRL responsibilities so here's OP's theme song.https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oFBbOHohwR8
>>3320716Why don't you fuck off and make your own quest then?
>>3320716nah dude, it would either be femdom fetish or rape fantasy, the fetish fuel is too high
>>3320723Or just remove the fetish and actually live up to the maternal promise of a kingdom mostly run by babushkas, wizened crones, grandmas, and soccer moms.>>3320720I already have a questIt's about maintaining my job IRL
Quest should be archived for posterity.
>>3320727now that's a kingdom I would fight for
>>3320727>a kingdom mostly run by babushkas, wizened crones, grandmas, and soccer momsBy the Light how horrifying
What the fuck happened here?
>>3320842OP got called out on some stuff, went ape for a while and promptly fucked off. Apparently some shit is/was going down in the Discord, but I don't use it.
>>3320845The discord is full of overly sensitive faggots. Including the spergy admins. Who WOULD use it? XD
>>3321027Tu madre, cunt.
Fucking hell, this was something
>going to discordStage 5 gay
>>3312462>elliot rodger likes this
Has this been archived yet? I feel like it should.
>>3325289Nothing of value would be lost if it wasn't.
>>3325289Some ass misarchived the greatest thread in qst of all time
>>3325333Really? What's it archived as?
>>3325342Dragonball quest #181
I have to ask: Why is qst the way it is? What is it you guys truly want?
>>3325547For you to stop being a nigger and a faggot. A niggot.
>>3325547you are going to need to elaborate that question more.
>>3325547For this particular quest? The majority seemed to want more choice and to not be forced into femdom hell.
>>3325761I for one want the choice to enter femdom heaven.
>>3325823Well shit, we had the choice, didn't we? It was the forcefulness of the QM's posts that didn't sit well with everyone. No matter what, we seemed destined to get femdommed.
>>3325732From QMs. From qst as a whole. Put all the memes and insults to the side and answer that question.
>>3325870Memes. Actually good quests with participation mattering. A story driven by the players, not the QMs bizarre femdom pegging fetish. An actual quest thread with choices and votes. Not the illusion of choice where all roads lead to femdom asspounding
>>3325878>>3325884So if you got those things and a QM who was putting in effort (Note: I didn't say the best writer evar; I said EFFORT) you'd all calm down and not pitchfork them off the board like FemmeQM here?
>>3325967Definitely. At least I would, I can't speak for everyone else.
>>3325967I have never seen a quest or qm explode like this, and I've been doing participating in quests shortly before they got kicked off /tg/.What I'd want is a reliable qm that is immune from qm curse and communicates with its players with small things like when we can expect they will run, and as little railroading as possible.The qm here didn't really get pitchforked, he just couldn't handle criticism and was overly defensive.
>>3325974Might take you up on that.>>3325979>What I'd want is a reliable qm that is immune from qm curse and communicates with its players with small things like when we can expect they will run, and as little railroading as possible.QM curse is a part of life. That's just how it goes. Though you're plenty old enough to know that (we're all grown men here). Everything else is more than agreeable. I'd wager that it's the standard for questing, or should be at its most basic level. I've done that for my quests which is, I'm sure, partly why I had at least three regular voters at any given time.>The qm here didn't really get pitchforked, he just couldn't handle criticism and was overly defensive.That's dishonest. I don't see anything that would suggest him getting overly defensive. What I see is the maxim "If you don't like it, don't read it" being employed.
>>3326060Well trolls aside it didn't seem like he was getting pitchforked to me, there were some people who came in afterwards who weren't really even players but people who seemed to join in on the trolling.
>>3326060>What I see is the maxim "If you don't like it, don't read it" being employed.See, I'm not sure that applies here. "Don't like, don't read" tends to apply to various genres and people's opinions towards them. Don't like fantasy? Don't read LOTR. Stuff like that.In this case, however, the QM actually broke one of the unwritten rules of questing in that his quest was very restrictive and misleading in its options, and that the QM often got the say in what happened where. My favourite example would be where we left the goth girl's house in anger despite being given no choice to. Had we been given the vote I would have wanted to take a stand and clear things up with her misconceptions rather than storming off, but we didn't. In much the same way, I believe that the Anons called the QM out for this reason. I likely would have simply shrugged and stopped playing if we went the femdom route on our own terms, but the fact that every door seemed to lead to it pissed everyone off. When we brought this up the QM started to get annoyed and yelled at everyone, saying they can't judge his art since art is subjective or something along those lines, deflecting all criticism in the process. This is where the "overly defensive" stuff came from. I can understand and condone ignoring your critics to a certain extent, but the extremes OP went to here were a little OTT in my opinion.
The thing I never get about these settings is the biology of it all. This is true in A Brother's Price as well. It's just not possible for a woman to compete on the same level as a man in a contest of pure strength, assuming both opponents have trained to be as strong as possible.Like, if we were clumsy and ungraceful, with shit form despite how often we practiced, I'd get it. But straight up being weaker than not just this specific woman, but most women? After training our entire lives to be strong and resilient? It goes beyond suspension of disbelief.
>>3326111Well there's magic and woman in this setting being given advance training and education, also our stepmom apparently suppressed all our power with magic.>>3326060>That's dishonest.I think we have very different views and definitions.I could claim the same about your response, but I think its really just a matter of how our views and understanding of things is just fundamentally different.
>>3326100I don't mind the QM ruling the character acts emotionally in such situations. If it were up to anons they'd just be an altruistic robot.>>3326111Magic
>>3326111It's a fantasy setting set in a different dimension where the biological anatomy of male/female genders have switched save for the process of procreation.There, easy enough. Are you such a stupid, uncreative small-minded simpleton that the simple act of imagination is too much for you? And that's just not the case for this man, but most women in general. Even if women train all their lives, they would still only be stronger than 60% of males because of their innate physicalities, you mouth-breathing neanderthal.
>>3326111Seriously? that's where you draw the line? there are quests about literal inanimate objects doing magic and shit and you are complaining about a fictional world where girls are stronger?This just seems like you don't like the idea and doesn't want anyone playing it because it offends you in some way or something.that being said, QM, you shat the bed in some ways in this thread1 if you want your story to go a certain way where the players can choose how to do things but the general theme is defined you have to tell them, there is no problem in having a path set, the players just need to know it so they can judge if they like it and want to continue playing2 people WILL criticize your quest, and some times those critics will be constructive and other times they will not, you'll have to lear to just roll with it and ignore it or you'll never be able to run, even more if your quest deals with sensitive subjects.3 stop whining, quests are to be fun, if you are not having fun doing it just stop and drop. let the players know you don't feel like it and move on with your life
It doesn't matter, the horse has already sailed and the QM has a cuck for a dad.
>>3326145>QM has a cuck for a dad.Care to elaborate?
>>3326133>>3326137If the anatomy of men and women has switched then fucking portray that nigga. The art the OP posted for these characters was big tiddy fuckpigs from Chinese cartoons. They ought to be broad shouldered and powerfully built.Like at least make them full on Amazons, y'know? Or hell, even draw inspiration from the myths surrounding Scythian warrior women. Have them cut a tit off or something.
>>3326154>have them cut a tit off or somethingI can't fap to that
>>3326100Ah. Well I never said QM was perfect. Generally, railroading is poor form, though I do approve of it when trolls/racists flock to the votes in an attempt to derail things (like in that new anti-demon UN quest or whatever). You have to know when to ignore shitpost votes and "railroad" to get things back to square, and when to roll with the punches that you weren't prepared for. But I digress. I must've misread the railroading bits. If QM truly did that, then I'll rescind my argument. I for one find railroading irksome, so I understand why it would bother you.>>3326119>I think we have very different views and definitions.Mine being the correct (as deemed by social lexicon) definition, I'd agree.>I could claim the same about your responseYou could, but it would hold no validity so I'm not sure why you would.>>3326137This, minus some parts. Personally, I seek criticism, as long as it's genuine and not gimmicky.
>>3326157Frankly you're not trying hard enough.
>Guy who fantasizes about a matriarchy>turns out to be a huge oversensitive cuckwhy didn't i saw this coming?
>>3326145I know you are one of those discord cucks. Just tell us all you know and heard from there
>>3326154What are you huffing, abo? Did you not read what I just said? Anatomy is more than physical appearance, it's about what's inside that counts.a·nat·o·my/əˈnadəmē/nounthe branch of science concerned with the bodily structure of humans, animals, and other living organisms, especially as revealed by dissection and the separation of parts.a study of the structure or internal workings of something.Two seconds into google, you unwanted brian-dead backseat child.
>>3326154P.S. Lynda Carter has a message for you.
>>3326154SPELL CASTING TOASTERSthat was a quest that was actually played here, and you want to argue about realism on pics?give me a break dude, it's a fucking fantasy world, they can say the girls muscles have stronger fibers or somethin, or they are simply stronger like some kind of wonder woman or such, you don't see her being portrayed as a muscle beast and she is naturally stronger.you just don't like OPs concept, and there's nothing wrong with not liking it, but arguing about genetics and acurate portrails in a quest board where we already played with several little girls with magic powers is beyond stupid dude.it's just how that universe works and that's it, don't bring real-world arguments into fucking fantasy world dude, that shit is retarded
>>3326150>>3326164One day a disgruntled player went on an autistic shitfit about the general nature of the quest, and how the thots in power should be raped for their transgressions. The part where he draws the line is his absolute belief that blood relations (the MC being biologically from the blues) trumps background (the MC being adopted as an infant by the matriarchs); because the MC's mom was mean to him.He was eventually proven right (for completely different reasons) as the QM himself went onto the Discord the following day and spent four hours on the voice chat getting yelled at for why people aren't seeing his "art" and just perceiving his quest as a fetish quest. He then opened the floodgates and revealed his IRL backstory that his mom was cheating on his dad (repeatedly, before dying of causes). Obviously this gave him supreme issues.At least that's what I gathered. I wasn't around for most of it but I saw some from the after-discussion, mentioning that the QM also ran a ton of other quests (and flaking). Anyway, their final verdict is that the QM is diagnosed with SAD.
>>3326166So am I led to believe that women in this setting have only the internal structure of men in ours? Their skin is stretched grotesquely across their oversized skeleton? Their distended liver bulges from their abdomen?Tbh I'd read it.
>>3326185Huh, wow. I feel kinda sorry for OP and his dad now.
>>3326185>the MC being biologically from the bluesDamn it my brain went on autopilot, I meant biologically from the Reds! REEEEDS!
>>3326159What bullshit are you trying to pull here? You are being intellectually dishonest acting as if there were no valid claims and then act as if you are the poor victim of some unfair bashing. Do you really believe you don't deserve any flak for thinking you are right and everyone else is wrong? Seriously fuck off back to your discord, you haven't learned a thing.
>>3326200And there it is. Seeming as how you're unable to have a conversation without giving in to your poor emotional range/control and making things up (haha; no one mentioned discord--you telling on yourself?) perhaps you're not dishonest, but just plain ignorant. As in, you ignore sense and knowledge when offered to you.That's all she wrote, folks.
>>3326187Or, more simply, the physical capabilities transferred between the two while the appearance stayed the same.
>>3326210Quite funny to think that there are quests which ...>feature demons that come from literally nowhere>little girls who fly on brooms and save the world>talking dragons>talking everything else>interspecies reproduction>suddenly superpowersYet it's ass-kicking women that breaches their suspension of disbelief.
>>3326210So its hand-waved away as magic bullshit. That's fine, and it's a perfectly acceptable answer, but it's not interesting.There are so many better ways to write a matriarchy. Fuck, I could do it with my cock in one hand and some degradation porn playing in the background. Draw inspiration from matriarchies and pseudo-matriarchies in the real world. The Mosuo culture of western China, or the Iroquois and Hopi of pre-colonnial America, the Minangkabau of Indonesia, or even fucking Sparta. Mix it up, add in some concepts from other cultures that you want to flavor the final product, then get into the real minutiae.OP probably didn't even fill out Dr. Zahir's Ethnographical Questionnaire. Just lazy.
>>3326209>>3326224>claiming you want a conversation while calling people liars and ignoring what they have to say by brushing it off.Your projecting, you offered nothing but your own shit to smear in order to feel better about yourself. Talk about calling the pot kettle black.There is like at least half a dozen successful quest on this board with ass kicking female characters in them. Your showing your bitter colors again.
>>3326238In all honesty, there's a reason those types of matriarchies aren't described in full, becauseA.) No one cares.B.) They did not advance past the stone age.C.) They were still backed up by the physical might of the men. What you end up with is Judaism, which is exactly what you are describing when it comes to what a matriarchial system would entail, a bunch of interbreeding sociopaths who have to please a mother figure infiltrating a more powerful nation as you siphon resources from the host nation before you are caught, killed, and exiled..
>>3326238And yet you didn't while OP did.
>>3326246Aren't some of those just matrilineal?
>>3326255You can go into the power behind the curtain, you still end up the same basic concept, women cannot lead, because they don't have forward thinking.
>>3326266Well control or influence from behind yes, but I don't believe that is universal. I've met respectable and capable women before, some even in leadership positions that I felt they reached there on their own merits.
>>3326273>outliers don't regress to the mean>anecdotal observation beats empirical evidence
>>3326283>women cannot leadNot what I was saying, but even with a large sample size it doesn't show them unable to lead, just less common or successful.>don't have forward thinking.I think this is a bit more nuanced, rather, their forward thinking abilities are geared or directed towards more family or home and childcare.
>>3326303Yes, how could I forgot all of the wonderful civilizations founded, led, and spread by women, built by women's hands, who brought forth all of manners of innovation, culture, and technology from the simplistic to complicated designs only geniuses could aspire to create in a fervor dream of inspiration? How could I have forgotten all of the female military commanders who led other women into pitched battle to overcome insurmountable odds? Woe to the pitiful creatures who were not taught academia of philosophy, mathematics, and life, which had all been invented by women. Even in the most basic of settings, women are incapable of doing any of the above because of how God made us. There's nothing wrong with that.To an extent. After a certain period of life, the children are no longer taken care of by the mother. Yes, feeding, but not teaching.
>>3326335Is there a point to your rant?All I pointed out was that it was not universal that women cannot lead or be forward thinking, and the few that did were not exceptions to the rule. I suppose one could argue on the outlier statistics but meh, not what I'm interested in.
>>3326375>All I pointed out was that it was not universal that women cannot lead or be forward thinking, and the few that did were not exceptions to the rule.>All I pointed out was that it was not universal that women cannot lead or be forward thinking>the few that did were not exceptions to the rule.>the few that didDid you even read what you typed out before you clicked the post button? You just proved my point. Women leading or being forward thinking is so unheard of that it becomes a statistical anomaly.
>>3326391Missed a word before exceptions should read "were not just exceptions", since there is more to it than that.You didn't answer my question. What are you trying to accomplish by posting about inherent gender differences?
>>3326428You're an absolutist then? Fine."Even though men, having such an overwhelming, overarching, near-complete dominance of history, the arts, mathematics, philosophy, engineering, war, technology, culture, leadership positions, literature, farming, there have been minuscule, almost statistically insignificant, instances in all of recorded history, both oral and written, where women were leading and being forward thinking, while serving under men."There. Does that make you feel better?
>>3326244>Mental illness.Get off my dick m8. Conversation over. You may now return to your regularly schedule shitposting.>>3326246Was with you until all the anti-semetic crap. Though yes, Judaism is about as close to modern-day matriarchy as you can get.>>3326266I mean, to be fair, I've met a small number of women who put modern men to shame. I'd trust my lady to run a country better than most men who wear suit-and-tie. Capable women are out there.>>3326335Leadership or survival. Pick one.
Wow, this quest just keeps on giving.
>>3326461Anti-semetic? But I love Palestinians. Again, you're not being above broad, those women are outside the norm. And they chose neither, while men chose both.>>3326467Stick around. You might just learn something.
>>3326467this is the perfect example of what not to do as a QM
>>3326457The hell are you going on about?>>3326467how many posts do you think we can reach before it dies?
>>3326511Just answering your question.
>>3326519I didn't ask questions on the differences in gender. Only one I asked was about some systems being matrilineal, which I consider different to matriarchal. From what I remember about Judaism I always thought it to be more of the later ie. Jewishness is passed on by the mother. I admit that I am not well versed in "Judaic" knowledge or tradition.Anyways. you won't happen to have a link for >>3326335 with English subs would you?Been looking for one for ages.
>>3326551Then I misinterpreted your question. It's both. And no, I don't.
>>3326484He's long since abandoned his thread, maybe he's already trying a new one, maybe not. Either way he'll try again, maybe in Akun, hoping to achieve the matriarchal fantasy he's never obtained.Knowing him he'll repeat his mistakes.
>>3326569If only you knew. You guys actually gave one of his quests major clout. I won't say which, but it'd shock you if you did.
>>3326597It's the other knight one, right?
>>3326597>I won't say whichLearn to read.
>>3326615Damn. Missed my opportunity for pic related.Thanks a lot.
>>3326597Which one?School of Conformity that got kicked off /qst/ where he through a bitch fit his rape quest got canned?orMarried to a Giant Spider!? where he bitched out and someone else hijacked it to be fun?orTricked by a Witch!? that also died?
>>3326632>Married to a Giant SpiderI miss it.
>>3326632A rape quest sounds fun.
>>3326651Akun has you covered. You've got a shitload to choose from in different flavors.
>>3326641Same. To think what could have been with our beautiful 35 Muffet children
>>3327377>ywn raise your abominable children with you loving, literal spider waifu
>>3326663fiction.liveGo live your rape fantadies there and don't bring them to qst
>>3326632You must not read English. "I won't say which quest".>>3326663It's the better questing site anyway. Give it a go.
>>3327788>akun >better questing sitelel
>>3326185How does that make the dad a cuck?>>3326461Who is this faggot?You do know your homosex fantasies is mental illness from child abuse?
>>3327794It'll give you aids, it the site that keeps on giving.
>>3327785This is /qst/, a board for quests. If the topic of the quest is rape, why is it different from any other quest just because of the subject material?
>>3327794Laugh all you want, but it is. The only thing you guys have on it is the coding. It doesn't shit the best every time you log in. Otherwise...tough shit. No matter how many times your ridicule it, it's better than your Greek salad making tutorial forum.>>3327814The same "faggot" that wasn't talking to you. Might wanna stop running your gob there, cap'n.
>>3328284because this is a blue board and smut is not allowed, simple as that, that's why fiction.live exist, go on, hop there, you'll find your rapey friends there, there's plenty of options for you
>>3328470I know it hurts to hear you do something worse than akun, but better from a QM than a sperg, right?There, there, anon. It'll be okay. You still have pol at least!
>>3328532>muh pol muh QMwhat the fuck are you on about? I just told you that your """site""", it's playerbase (and you, by extension) is garbage
>>3328532Quit being a nigger and fuck off. Go back to your shitty furry pedophile tranny fetish Akun quests. If not liking pedophile Akun faggots makes me a /pol/ack then so what?
>>3328567Not sure why you're quoting that many times (mental illness I suppose), but you can't even point out why it's garbage. Sounds like you have borderline personality disorder. You fly off the handle without any basis.>>3328594>niggerAre racism and ad hominem your only defense? You should see a therapist. Being triggered by a random fiction forum isn't healthy. Take a break before you have an aneurysm.
akuniggers belong in gas chambers 2bh
>>3328456A blue board means no posting of not safe for work images, not words.
>>3328602>racismYou know that's not actually a thing?
>>3328424Says the faggot that won't stop shouting into my asshole. You like having a little brown on your nose don't ya.>Anyone who doesn't agree is /pol/.Quite the boogeyman living in your head rent free.Why don't you make a thread on /pol/ since you want to make things political.
>QM has disappeared ever since his quest got thrashed>Random lurkers continue to shout as if it still matters
>>3329119Except it actually is unless you're delusional. Oh wait. It's qst!
>>3329478Then what is it?
Y'all need some therapy
>>3331526You could get regular sessions from a decent mistress for the same price.
>>3331620>>3331526>>3331276Or QM and the cucks should just stop being faggot cucks. No therapy needed, no mistress needed to peg you. Just don’t be a bitch faggot like QM and his co-fetishists.
>>3326569What is akun
>>3331621>not murdering your mother ab raping someone makes you a cuckSure man, just keep those strangled hookers hidden well, okay?
>>3320727Sounds like shit, lik everthing you do
>>3328602>wuz racixt and shietfuck off newfag
>>3341879Your quest is where?>>3342571Thank you. I'll be sure to do that. But only because you asked nicely.
>>3342779who bitch this is?
This shit's still going on?Someone really needs to either take over this quest or make one with the ideas everyone mentioned. I'm almost tempted to try it.
>>3343200You should do it, the concept is interesting and I would like to play this quest run by someone competent. At the very least, you can't to any worse than the original QM.
>>3342793You got a quest? No you don't.>>3343208Mist was plenty competent. It's your faggotry and religious zealotry that makes him seem the opposite, buttnut.
>>3343219>Religious zealotryI tried to nicely tell the QM what my issues with the quest were, the only time I could be said to have insulted him is >>3314969 and that was because he made a major choice without player input. Religious zealotry is a little harsh a term, don't you think?
>>3320234Spergout of triggered anons and thin skinned OP
>>3343200Try to be creative and make your own, instead of riding someone else's nutsack. We both know you won't though, faggot.
I will obtain the last post of this thread
>>3343248Ok. And you clearly saw me say I won't cut for the railroading. I dislike it as much as you, anon. Don't selectively parse my text.
>>3344513Try to be less of a faggot and I might let you ride mine.We all know you want the nutsack more.
>>3345181Yeah, that's what I thought. All talk. Go jerk yourself off, since you won't have anons here to do that for you.
>>3338470She's literally not your mother. She murdered your mother and your father.
>>3345223For once you say something intelligent and agreeable.>>3345274>discorfagPost irrelevant.
>>3345223Seems someones jerking you off right now.You clearly want this more than anyone else.
>>3345274I can't tell whether you're a psychopath or just a retard. Only biological ties matter to you? Can you explain why people get pets? Love their cats and dogs and whatever else? It's not like they're related so that should be impossible in your world.
>People genuinely playing inferiority complex fetish questWhy don't you guys go outside to get your balls crushed instead of playing this shitty ass quest? I bet it feels better.
>>3347463>playingUh huh, I'm sure the update's coming any minute now.
>>3347463The playing stopped several days ago, the shitposters just caught up to the carcass