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You are Raishō Naori, noted sage and daughter of Uzumaki Makoto and a father who you never knew. But after having been seemingly pulled into a powerful genjutsu, which has created an entire phantom world for you to interact with, you’ve found both your parents to be alive and well.

The genjutsu technique can’t be that sophisticated, or else it’s incomplete, as despite creating this fiction several key details have been overlooked so far that make it entirely unconvincing: most recently, the duplication of the one-of-a-kind meitō blade you carry. Even the ghost of your father understands immediately that what you’re both looking at is a contradiction that can’t simply be explained away.

That’s why you’ve both gone inside, out of the rain, to talk.

“What do you call yourself here?” you ask your mother first and foremost.

“You know my name,” she insists, still obviously troubled by this turn of events. “Uzumaki Makoto. Do you… know your own name, my dear?”

“Raishō Naori,” you reply.

“It should be Uzumaki,” the man you assume is meant to be your father tells you.

“And you are?” you ask him.

“Uzumaki Rai,” he replies. “Before we married it was just Rai.”

“Making my name a ‘treasure that you left my mother’,” you realize, glancing at the image of your mother. “You… yeah no, the you that I grew up with, never told me that.”

“Please, help us understand what has happened to you,” she urges you.

“More than you can know,” you sigh sadly.

You tell them everything. That you’re here by accident, from the world that you consider ‘real’, in which your father was killed by Shimura Danzō and Hanzō of the Salamander when you were a baby and Uzumaki Makoto died from the lingering effects of poison she breathed in during the Third Shinobi World War. You finished growing up in the custody of the nearby shrine, which you could see from their balcony, and when you finished at the Academy you became a kunoichi.

You tell them how you survived hardships from the start, and how you mastered Umekiri’s full potential and learned to handle senjutsu chakra. How you were recruited into Akatsuki, and how you ended up leaving Akatsuki on moral grounds. How you’ve fought against the monstrously powerful Pain, and about Uchiha Obito, more powerful than even Pain.
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But also, you tell them about the people you’ve chosen to surround yourself with since your mother’s death. You tell them about Karin and Fū, about Yugitō, Naruto, and their tailed beasts, about Sasuke and Tsunade and Kurotsuchi and Temari and even Ayame. Yes, you even tell them about the ramen-shop girl who always welcomes you so warmly when you visit.

All the while, they listen quietly, and patiently. Then when you’re done, your father is the first to speak.

“Shimura Danzō was killed in the Second Shinobi World War,” he informs you. “By lord Hanzō. Amegakure largely avoided the worst of the Third war.”

“And with Obito dead in this version of events...” you realize. “Your generation of Akatsuki succeeded?”

He nods gently. “That’s right. About the time you say you remember your mother dying I stepped away from Akatsuki to focus on my family… I had tried to stay relevant with their new powerhouses coming in one at a time, but my storm release could only carry me so far.”

“And when we had you I retired as a courtesan,” your mother tells you. “I became a fashion designer, but I always wanted to nurture your love of the arts… which honestly were the only aspect of my previous vocation I earnestly enjoyed until meeting your father.”

“Naori… I am so very sorry that you had to endure the life you’ve spoken of without us.”

You pause for a few moments, struggling to find the right words to express the feeling. “I… wanted this, but I never allowed myself to think about it. So I’m not crying because it was hard, but because I don’t know what to feel right now.”

“In some ways, it’s harder than when I had to let you go the second time, mother.”

Your father tilts his head in confusion. “What do you mean?”

“I… can use senjutsu chakra and summoning to temporarily call a soul into the living world,” you explain as carefully and thoroughly as you can. “But yeah, no, it would be wrong to bind a soul to the living world indefinitely.”

“Letting go is hard… but sometimes it’s right.”

There’s a long silence after that.

“I see that you raised quite a young woman, Makoto,” your father smiles.

Your mother, for her part, gestures for you to sit near her on the couch she chose when they first welcomed you into their home. When you oblige her, she pulls you in close.

“You may not be the daughter we know,” she tells you quietly, “and we may not be the parents you know, but that does not change how I feel about you. I am certain your father feels the same way.”
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>>4501916
You only vaguely remember crying, your head in your mother’s lap, until you’d exhausted yourself. Rather than wake you your father puts a blanket over you, leaves the room, and turns out the lights.



The next morning you wake to the smell of bacon, pulling off your armor and setting it aside before heading to the table. Umekiri-maru and the Rai Tenryushi you seal into the Raikō Kenka markings on your left palm before sitting down at the table where Uzumaki Rai is already sipping at a cup of coffee.

“You prefer coffee?” you ask, for lack of anything better to say.

He nods. “Better suited to drinking it in the mud than tea.”

“True enough,” you agree. “So, yeah, thanks for letting me sleep.”

“I figured you’d be a bit overwhelmed,” he admits. “Hell, it hit me hard and I wasn’t talking to the dead.”

You can’t help but chuckle. “All this time I’ve never once thought of what I’d say to you if I could, so now that I can I’m at a loss. I’m sorry.”

“You never tried to revive me?” he wonders.

“No one ever found your bodies,” you admit. “The only survivors from the original Akatsuki in my time were Konan-sensei and Nagato-han.”

“And Konan-san was the one who took care of you?” he asks. “Completed your training?”

You shake your head. “It’s more like we took care of each other. We’re still close, even though I’m no longer her student.”

“That’s gratifying to hear,” Rai admits with a smile. “Though I have to say it’s a little deflating.”

“How so?”

“It means my parenting isn’t responsible for my Naori growing up into such a wonderful young woman.”

“Speaking of whom,” Makoto asks you as she puts breakfast on the table and sits, with two cups of tea for you and for herself. “What does this mean about our own Naori?”

>When I return to my own world, things should go back to normal… whatever ‘normal’ means.
>It’s possible we traded places… if that’s the case, MY Konan-sensei will care for her.
>One of my friends who got stuck with me also exists in this world… I’ll help you find your Naori.
>Other?
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>>4501917
>>It’s possible we traded places… if that’s the case, MY Konan-sensei will care for her.
>>One of my friends who got stuck with me also exists in this world… I’ll help you find your Naori.
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>>4501917
>It’s possible we traded places… if that’s the case, MY Konan-sensei will care for her.
but
>One of my friends who got stuck with me also exists in this world… I’ll help you find your Naori.
>Honestly, i'm not really sure how all this works. I've dealt with temporal shenanigans before, but never alternate realities.
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>Naori is a musician in this world
>Hence there shouldn't be much of a reason to arrest her in the first place.
...Well shit.
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>>4501917
>>It’s possible we traded places… if that’s the case, MY Konan-sensei will care for her.
>>One of my friends who got stuck with me also exists in this world… I’ll help you find your Naori.
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>>4501917
>One of my friends who got stuck with me also exists in this world… I’ll help you find your Naori.
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>>4501917
Alright, after thinking things through I think this is the most appropriate response.
>..:I didn't get stuck with Deidara in this world did I?
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>>4501917
>When I return to my own world, things should go back to normal… whatever ‘normal’ means.
>It’s possible we traded places… if that’s the case, MY Konan-sensei will care for her.
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>>4501917
>>One of my friends who got stuck with me also exists in this world… I’ll help you find your Naori.
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“If ‘your’ Naori is in ‘my’ world, Konan-sensei will take care of her,” you insist. “And if she’s just somewhere else in this world, I can at least try to help you find her. Who currently leads Akatsuki and the village?”

“The village head is lord Hanzō,” Makoto tells you.

“And Akatsuki is led by Yahiko-san,” Rai adds. “They agreed to lead the village together, so that lord Hanzō will pass responsibility to Yahiko-san when he is no longer able.”

“And where are they right now?”

“Now?” Makoto repeats.

You nod with a sad smile. “Yeah no, I promised to tell help find your Naori… I think the first step has to be going to Hanzō-tono and Yahiko-han.”

“Yes, I suppose that is true,” Makoto admits quietly.



After the dishes have been washed your… no. That’s not right. The other Naori’s parents lead you to a high tower, which if you remember correctly used to be where Hanzō’s apartments and office were located. And in this world, that’s still what they are.



“Rai-san, Makoto-san!” Yahiko-han greets the pair cheerfully after you’ve been ushered into the reception room. He and Hanzō are both present… the latter seems somewhat less imposing than you’d built him up in your mind.

“This is rare… and you’ve brought Naori-kun! In… armor, for some reason?”

“Go on,” Rai suggests. “Show him.”

You produce a handful of sealing tags, and fold them into origami butterflies in midair. “Yeah no, I need your permission to search the village for… well, for myself.”

Both men stare in confusion.

“When did you learn that?” Yahiko-han asks you.

“As strange as it may seem to both of you, this girl is not the Uzumaki Naori you may be familiar with,” Makoto insists. “Seriously, what we are about to tell you will sound outlandish, but we believe it to be completely true.”

“So please, just listen to what she has to say.”
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>>4502314
“I do believe that something like that is conceivable,” Hanzō admits. “And I can also tell just the same as Rai-san here that the Umekiri-maru Naori-kun is carrying is genuine, which means that not only is it conceivable, but it appears to have happened.”

“So… what do we do about this?” Yahiko-han wonders aloud.

That’s when you produce the scroll. “Tsunade-hime has requested Akatsuki’s help, this is the initial contact. Aside from that I wanted permission to use my origami butterflies to search the village for myself.”

“Very well,” Hanzō nods curtly. “And if you do not find her?”

“Then yeah, no, my assumption has to become that she and I traded places.”



After thoroughly searching not just the village but its immediate surroundings, you determine that the other you isn’t anywhere to be found… you’re forced to call off the search.

“Well, that settles it,” you sigh. “She’s not here, so it’s most likely that she’s with my version of Konan-sensei.”

“Hey, tell me something,” Yahiko-han muses thoughtfully. “In this world you say you’re from, are you part of Akatsuki?”

“I was,” you admit. “The obi, right?”

He nods once. “Yeah, your obi. You still display it proudly?”

“Yeah no, I won’t hide who I am,” you shake your head. “Even though my leaving led to the organization’s collapse, I still believe in many of the things it originally stood for.”

Hanzō, meanwhile, appears to have fallen deep into thought, looking all the while at Umekiri and Tenryushi where they sit at your side.

“You consider yourself a kenjutsu expert?” he asks you.

You nod. “For sure. In my world Umekiri-maru helped me create a style of kenjutsu that hybridizes the samurai Sōkō school with momentary genjutsu, cast through the blade as a medium.”

“Tell me this then,” he continues. “How familiar are you with the Seven Swords of the Mist?”

“I’ve faced two of them,” you recount, “Kiba having left the scar on my eye. I also know Kisame-han has Samehada.”

“And like your father, your affinity is for the storm release?”

“That’s right. What are you getting at, Hanzō-dono?”
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>>4502317
“If someone is menacing two entire worlds,” Hanzō declares, “and you can potentially stop them, then it would be an act of negligence not to give you the best chance possible. And if you are a sage and an Uzumaki, then you certainly do have that potential.”

“You’re talking about giving me the Kiba?” you realize. “Aren’t you?”

“Lend,” Hanzō insists. “Along with the Kubikiribōchō. I would say those would be a sufficiently nasty surprise for anyone who thinks they already know your abilities.”

“… you’re offering to let me carry two of the Shichiken.”

He nods curtly. “If you have truly mastered the Umekiri Ichimonji then these should be no problem for you.”

“I… I’m flattered,” you muse, still somewhat shocked at the direction this has taken. “Are you certain?”

Hanzō nods. “Oh, and be careful with the Kubikiribōchō… I made some modifications of my own, back when I was a bit closer to my prime.”

“How so?”

“I deliberately damaged the edge, and used blood laced with the salamander poison within my own body to rebuild it. You know of the Seversword’s properties?”

“I do,” you nod. “Seriously creepy stuff.”

“And very effective,” Hanzō muses. “The blade is now poisonous to the touch from hamon line to hasaki. Anyone cut with the blade will suffer paralysis, with death occurring within two days.”

>I… I can’t accept these. I have a fighting style that I’d prefer to stick to.
>I think I can work these into my fighting style, with shadow clones and hiraishin.
>Why are you doing this?
>Other?
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>>4502320
>>I think I can work these into my fighting style, with shadow clones and hiraishin.
>Why are you doing this?
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>>4502320
>>I think I can work these into my fighting style, with shadow clones and hiraishin.
>>Why are you doing this?
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>>4502320
>>I think I can work these into my fighting style, with shadow clones and hiraishin.
>>Why are you doing this?
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>>4502320
>>I think I can work these into my fighting style, with shadow clones and hiraishin.
>>Why are you doing this?
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Could Naori get a sample to revive her father once she gets back?
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>>4502320
>I think I can work these into my fighting style, with shadow clones and hiraishin.
>Why are you doing this?
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>>4502320
>Ask if this version of Akatsuki remember the fight in our world from the previous thread.
Could reveal something how this world swapping works.
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>>4502372
I was under the impression we did that when fighting the beast path
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>>4502320
>>I think I can work these into my fighting style, with shadow clones and hiraishin.
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>>4502320
>I… I can’t accept these. I have a fighting style that I’d prefer to stick to.
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>>4502320
>Why are you doing this?

I was hoping we'd make more progress on sage mode combined with the 8 gates before going too ham with weapons. There seemed to be a lot of potential left there. Remember when we did the meditation thing and flabbergasted Sasuke? Good times.
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>>4502679
I mean, we are not getting that training before the fight with the coolest guys and we likely won't be getting the chance to try some legendary weapons in a while so might as well. We can already use gates sage mode in short bursts which is plenty enough.
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Does anyone remember what happened to Kiba in the first place?
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>>4502795
Itachi snagged them iirc
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>>4502320
>>I think I can work these into my fighting style, with shadow clones and hiraishin.
>>Why are you doing this?
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>I think I can work these into my fighting style, with shadow clones and hiraishin.
>Why are you doing this?
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>>4502372
This version of Rai, Naori would be fairly certain IC doesn't actually exist, and nobody she knows has any idea where his body is in her own world.

>>4502795
Itachi and Kisame had them at one point. Where they are now, Naori has never asked.

>>4502679
>>4502707
Eight Gates Sage Mode is basically stacking Kaio-ken on top of Sage Mode, complete with the risk of backlash damage at higher multiplications. It's an imperfect but very powerful combination.

Any higher than the Second Gate would never be worth the consequences.
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“Why are you doing this?”

Your question seems to come as no surprise to Hanzō, who replies immediately. “The adults of this village have worked hard to create peace and stability, and I think it’s time to start entrusting that to the children we created it for. Besides, better that than to let these swords rust away in my possession, wouldn’t you agree?”

“You… aren’t how I imagined, Hanzō-dono,” you admit. “But yeah, no, I’ll accept these swords for now. Between shadow clones and the hiraishin I can probably put them all to good use.”

“So you know the technique of the Nidaime Hokage and the Yellow Flash?” Hanzō muses. “Fascinating if true.”

“Yeah, that one you’re going to have to...” Yahiko begins, only for you to teleport to a hiraishin-marked origami butterfly fluttering behind him, reappearing with the kashira at the end of Umekiri’s hilt pressed lightly against his back.

“… let’s say I believe you now,” Yahiko continues.

You return to a hirashin marking across the room, returning Umekiri and her saya to your hip where they belong. “As I was saying, I think I can make use of what you’ve offered to lend me, Hanzō-dono.”

“I see that,” Hanzō chuckles, evidently amused at this development. “I almost feel sorry for whatever poor bastard will have to fight you now.”



You’re led by a chūnin to a guarded room, in which is an extensive collection of blades… mostly mounted in shirasaya marked with calligraphic inscriptions. Three saya stand out: two are obviously shaped to allow for the prongs of the Kiba blades, and one is large enough to be Kubikiribōchō. So those are the ones you take off the wall.

“So you do know them on sight?” Rai frowns. “I suppose that means the story of you getting your eye cut out is also true… I’m sorry to hear that.”

“It helped define who I am,” you admit, unsheathing the very same blades which in your world did it to you. “The balance feels a bit strange.”

You swing the two swords, first one at a time, then in unison, in specific combinations and movements to strike specific targets and block specific threats. Then you cross the swords and perform the shadow clone, with the clone taking Kubikiribōchō off the wall and drawing it. Your clone hefts the massive cleaver, swinging it with two hands, then with one hand. Then she begins to test various ways of making use of its mass.

She actually goes so far as to make upward swings by kicking the spine of the blade, and by moving her body around the stationary blade instead of the other way around.
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>>4503118
When you step outside you begin channelling lightning chakra through the Kiba swords, you find that they’re a whole different level of responsiveness from Umekiri… for lack of a better way to describe it, you’re much more aware of the fact that the sword you’re more used to is actually resistant to your own chakra, while the Kiba feel almost like they’re drawing your chakra in of their own accord.

You toss one blade into the air, and catch it. Then you do the same thing with the other, observing how they tend to turn in the air when left to their own devices. What you begin to notice is that while the fang-like projections that give the blades their name look and feel somewhat awkward in your hand, they’re ideal for throwing. And you also find very quickly that these weapons in particular hold a ‘charge’ extraordinarily well when they’re separated from you.

As the ghosts of your parents watch, you begin to use the same principles of control that you use on your paper tags to suspend the Kiba blades in midair, spinning like tops until you snatch them by their grips and throw them both through the air. Then you stop them, directing them in wide arcs back to hover next to you. Finally you let them drop into your hands, and lower them.

“Yeah, feels good,” you muse, satisfied at the experience. Then you place one Kiba blade into each Raikō Kenka on your palm, and place Kubikiribōchō into a marking on your right shoulder, where it would be slung were you carrying it normally.

“Your fūinjutsu seems very advanced,” Makoto smiles. “This is… quite different from what I expect from my daughter.”

“It’s one of my strengths,” you admit. “From my mother’s side, as the ranton chakra transformation is a strength from my father’s side. The paper ninjutsu is what my sensei gave to me.”

>I have to go back to Konohagakure now. However this turns out… I’ll be sure to come back before it’s over.
>I can stay a little longer, if you’d like.
>I’d like to speak to some other people here in the village, if you’ll indulge me.
>Other?
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>>4503183
>>I have to go back to Konohagakure now. However this turns out… I’ll be sure to come back before it’s over.
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>>4503183
>I can stay a little longer, if you’d like.
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>>4503183
>I have to go back to Konohagakure now. However this turns out… I’ll be sure to come back before it’s over.
We've had our break, and we don't know the time difference between worlds.
Better solve it ASAP.
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>>4503183
>I have to go back to Konohagakure now. However this turns out… I’ll be sure to come back before it’s over
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>>4503183
>I have to go back to Konohagakure now. However this turns out… I’ll be sure to come back before it’s over.
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>>4503183
>>I have to go back to Konohagakure now. However this turns out… I’ll be sure to come back before it’s over.
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>>4503183
>>I’d like to speak to some other people here in the village, if you’ll indulge me.
Wanna meet alt-Ajisai
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>>4502986
Fair enough. I shall instead direct my interest towards other far-fetched goals like elemental-nature. Could even partner up with Konan to work on those.

As an aside: imagine what sort of Kekkei Tota Konan might have with her 3 elements. I can dream.
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>>4503183
“I have to go back to Konohagakure now,” you admit quietly, not really sure what to do now. “Seriously, I wish I could stay… but your daughter and my friends need my help.”

“Just promise us one thing,” your father insists, shutting his eyes.

“What is it?”

“At least come back to see us before you go… assuming you can.”

“I would like that too,” your mother agrees. “At very least, to say a proper goodbye to my daughter.”

Silently, you draw a kunai marked with your hiraishin, and hand it ring-first to your mother.

“I can only promise to try,” you tell her. “And I do promise.”

After an all-too-brief hug, you teleport back to the marking you left in Tsunade’s office.



“Is something the matter?” Tsunade asks you with a frown. “You look like you’ve been crying.”

“Yeah no, it’s personal,” you insist bluntly. “Are Minato-han and the others back yet?”

“They will be this afternoon,” Tsunade replies.

“And Kurotsuchi-han?”

“Still here,” Tsunade informs you. “I’ve had her under watch since you left abruptly. I think you’ll find her at Ichiraku’s.”



“Hey, you know this girl in the real world?” Kurotsuchi asks you discreetly over a bowl of bone broth ramen.

“Yeah,” you admit. “Why?”

“Is she supposed to be… well, like this?”

You shake your head. “Ayame-han is warm, and friendly, and very open.”

“She’s...” Kurotsuchi struggles with the words. “Not that. At all.”

You glance up at Ayame, who seems to be working silently in back, avoiding all eye contact with any customers she meets and generally keeping her distance. Any time the cooking fires flare at all it seems to startle her.

“This world’s loss,” you shrug. “Personally I’ve seen enough of these little reversals.”
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>>4504301
Eventually Naruto comes to join you, slumping over the counter.

“I’m not cut out for this kinda stuff,” he grumbles, “ya know?”

“Yeah, no, you’re not the only one who’s had a rough time with it,” you frown.

“Yeah?” he turns to glare at you. “That so?”

“In this world my parents are both alive, too,” you tell him. “So yeah, that’s so.”

“… I’m sorry.”

“Don’t worry about it.”

“It’s just that I know this isn’t real,” Naruto insists, “but they seem so… so much like what I expected them to be. It feels real, and I can’t shake it.”

“My ‘parents’ in this world know I’m not ‘their’ daughter,” you admit quietly. “But they were kind to me, welcomed me into their home, and comforted me. They understood what I told them, and backed me when I took that information to Hanzō.”

“But they’re not real,” you remind him. “For sure they’re not. My parents died, a long time ago, and left me as their legacy. So even if part of me wants to stay here, I can’t. I’m sure you know that too.”

“Yeah,” Naruto admits. “You’re right. But it’s not easy.”

“So what’s this big mission the Fourth took you all on?” Kurotsuchi presses to change the subject.

“Some scroll involved in this toad geezer’s prophecies,” Naruto sighs.

“A prophecy… by a toad?” Kurotsuchi wonders.

“A senile toad,” you add. “But evidently one who’s usually right.”

“Great,” Kurotsuchi grumbles. “You’re really selling me on this.”

>So we’re expected to just sit tight until the conditions of this ‘prophecy’ are in place?
>I think we can keep taking action on our own to prepare for a battle. Let’s go over what we know.
>Where’s Sakura, anyway? I’d understand if YOU wanted to live in this world a little, but her?
>Other?
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>>4504311
>>I think we can keep taking action on our own to prepare for a battle. Let’s go over what we know.
>>Where’s Sakura, anyway? I’d understand if YOU wanted to live in this world a little, but her
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>>4504311
>>I think we can keep taking action on our own to prepare for a battle. Let’s go over what we know.
>>Where’s Sakura, anyway? I’d understand if YOU wanted to live in this world a little, but her?
character development for the pinky? lets hope so
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>>4504311
>I think we can keep taking action on our own to prepare for a battle. Let’s go over what we know.
>Where’s Sakura, anyway? I’d understand if YOU wanted to live in this world a little, but her?
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>>4504311
>Where’s Sakura, anyway? I’d understand if YOU wanted to live in this world a little, but her?
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>>4504311
>>I think we can keep taking action on our own to prepare for a battle. Let’s go over what we know.
>>Where’s Sakura, anyway? I’d understand if YOU wanted to live in this world a little, but her?
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>>4504311
>Where’s Sakura, anyway? I’d understand if YOU wanted to live in this world a little, but her?
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>>4504311
>>I think we can keep taking action on our own to prepare for a battle. Let’s go over what we know.
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>>4504311
“We should go over what we know so far,” you suggest. “Hey, Naruto… where’s Sakura? Seriously, between the two of you I wouldn’t bet on her being the one to wander off.”

“I don’t actually know,” he admits. “We… kinda had an argument.”

“Really?” Kurotsuchi frowns. “I wouldn’ta thunk it. What’d the two of you end up arguing about anyway?”

“I think… this is all starting to bug her,” Naruto admits. “I don’t wanna think about it this way, but I think she feels like maybe I’m not giving it my all cause I have parents in this world.”

“Are you?” you ask him. “Giving it your all I mean?”

There’s a long pause. “I was.”

“… I think I understand,” you nod. “Though I also think you need handle that feeling if we’re going to get out of this.”



You use your paper butterflies again to search the village, as well as set up a few stations at varying distances outside the village. You don’t really suspect that Sakura has run off or anything like that, but it sounds as if Minato-han and his team have brought home something really troublesome and it remains a frustration to you that all of the markings you should have available are gone.

After a brief search you find Sakura’s chakra signature at the Konoha hospital, one of the few buildings that looks the same as when you left its ‘real’ counterpart back in your own world. She’s inside one of the wings, treating Tenten for what you presume is a series of self-inflicted kunai wounds.

“This is so surreal,” Tenten muses as she watches Sakura work. “Since when do you know healing techniques?”

“Since when do you fumble kunai?” Sakura sighs. “Okay, done. And if you want my advice? Take the rest of the day off.”

As she leaves the room, Tenten pauses. “Hey Menma-kun, you know Hinata was looking for you?”

Naruto looks visibly worried. “Please don’t tell her you saw me.”

“Are you having a fight or something?”

“Somethin’ like that.”

“Well, best of luck to you!” Tenten smirks.

There’s a prolonged silence as the four of you stand in the now otherwise-empty hospital room, as though each of you is waiting for someone else to say something first.
>1/3
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>>4505807
“Yeah no, I’ll go first then,” you declare. “What we already know is that in this world personalities have been drastically changed. So just because we have Tsunade-han and Minato-han on our side doesn’t mean we’re in any stronger a position, because both of them are weaker than we’d expect.”

“Why do you say that?” Sakura asks with a frown.

“I suspect it’s because in this world Minato-han declined the position of Hokage,” you guess, “out of a sense of guilt for what happened to his students during the war. I’ve also learned that the ‘masked man’ we’ll be facing is most likely Menma.”

“Wait, it’s this version of me?” Naruto demands. “How the hell do you figure THAT?”

“I fought him briefly,” you explain. “He used a rasengan with tailed beast chakra… so it’s pretty clearly you. I do have some good news though, when I went to Amegakure Hanzō lent me two of the Seven Swords of the Mist… the Kiba and the Kubikiribōchō.”

Kurotsuchi whistles in appreciation. “Wow, really?”

“The what and the what?” Naruto squints.

“Kubikiribōchō was Zabuza’s sword,” Sakura reminds him.

“Wow, really? But how’re you gonna use all four...”

“Five,” you interrupt. “Kiba is a pair of swords.”

“All five of those swords at once?”

“Shadow clones,” you shrug. “Though to be honest I can probably use the Kiba blades remotely… it’s just a lot to focus on all at once.”

“So with all that and the scroll,” Sakura muses, “this should go in our favor.”

“The one thing I’d be cautious of is Obito,” you point out.

“That’s right,” Sakura agrees, “I’d almost forgotten, since we haven’t seen him so far.”

“Yeah, what’s up with that?” Kurotsuchi and Naruto ask almost in unison, before glaring at each other.

“It’s possible that if he’s not in the genjutsu he can’t take physical form,” Sakura suggests.

“For sure,” you agree curtly. “But yeah, even if he can’t that doesn’t make him powerless.”
>2/3
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>>4505808
“So how do we fight him?” Kurotsuchi wonders.

“Yeah no, I suspect I’m here because I’m right,” you allow yourself to speculate a little. “If he is the same Obito who gave his left eye to Kakashi-han, then it makes sense that his right eye would work on similar principles. So instead of pulling targets into a separate dimension at a range he can only do it to himself or things he’s touching. That’s totally consistent with both of the times I’ve fought him.”

“So how does he go intangible like that?” Naruto asks curiously.

“He doesn’t,” you shake your head. “Only the parts of him that would normally have been struck are affected, and those are simply transported to the same dimension as Kakashi-han’s Kamui.”

“So he has to switch modes to attack,” Sakura realizes the implication immediately. “Leaving him vulnerable… the timing must be especially tight.”

“My hiraishin is faster,” you nod curtly. “I’ve confirmed it in combat. So if he tried to pull me into that dimension I’d simply teleport and leave a Shiyō Kubaku tag behind to get drawn in. Then I’d teleport back and use a hiraishingiri… even if he could evade it...”

“… he’d be teleporting his body into a series of explosions,” Sakura completes your thought. “So he can’t use that technique on you.”

Naruto and Kurotsuchi simply stare with increasingly vacant looks as you pick up from there. “Yeah, no, it’s worse for him… either by using Uchiha Shisui’s technique, the Kotoamatsukami, or by using Kakashi-han’s Kamui, I don’t even need him to try it.”

“Are you getting any of this?” Naruto asks Kurotsuchi.

Kurotsuchi frowns. “Let’s call it half?”

“So if we fight him,” Sakura muses, “you can kill him?”

>He may not even physically be here with us, remember?
>It’s possible, but I’d prefer not to show my hand until it’s sure to work.
>I doubt he’ll act directly. We need to consider dealing with ‘Menma’ first.
>Other?
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>>4505831
>>He may not even physically be here with us, remember?
so >I doubt he’ll act directly. We need to consider dealing with ‘Menma’ first.
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>>4505831
>I doubt he’ll act directly. We need to consider dealing with ‘Menma’ first.
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>>4505831
>He may not even physically be here with us, remember?
So
>I doubt he’ll act directly. We need to consider dealing with ‘Menma’ first.
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>>4505831
>It’s possible, but I’d prefer not to show my hand until it’s sure to work.
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>>4505831
>1d6
>High roll, taking the first three
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>>4506056
Working on an update but it'll probably be tomorrow.
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>>4505831
It’s kind of impressive that Sakura can follow Naori’s techniques to that extent.
>He may not even physically be here with us, remember?
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>>4506177
“We’ll need to deal with this masked man first,” you decide. “And Obito himself may not even be physically here… you can come in at any point.”

After a few seconds, Namikaze Minato steps into the room with a slight bow. “My apologies for eavesdropping. I know it’s not very gentlemanly.”

“I did offer to share information,” you sigh. “You wanted to know about Uchiha Obito?”

“That’s right.”

“Yeah no, in our world he is a terrorist,” you explain. “We haven’t verified his identity, but his Mangekyō abilities are very similar to Kakashi-han’s.”

“Is that so?” Minato-han frowns. “I find that hard to believe… he wasn’t the brightest student I had, or the hardest worker, but he was always sincere and he cared deeply for his comrades.”

“Something changed,” you shrug. “I don’t know the details of what happened next.”

“What happened next is that Nohara Rin was killed,” Minato-han explains. “After Kirigakure kidnapped her and put one of their tailed beasts inside her… she died at Kakashi-kun’s hand.”

Seeing that nobody in the room is able to put their thoughts on that into words, Minato continues. “It was her choice. In stepping in front of Kakashi’s chidori like that, she saved our village.”

“For sure… that may be the reason,” you admit. “I know a little about the sharingan. If the Uchiha Obito in our world awakened his Mangekyō at that point, he’d be a different person than he was before.”

“Wait, explain that to us,” Sakura insists.

“The sharingan’s development involves changes in the brain,” you clarify. “The Uchiha clan knew about the risk for generations… some have been better at dealing with those changes than others.”

“Yeah no, I thought Sasuke-kun would’ve told you about this?”

“Nothing like that,” Naruto admits. “Just that he needed space, ya know?”

That I guess shouldn’t surprise me,” you shake your head, before turning to Minato-han. “So there’s your explanation.”

You deliberately omit the fact that your enemy here, in this world, is actually his son and the version of Kurama sealed inside him. Because in this world, you don’t know for sure what will happen if he and Kushina-han find out about that… it could send them into a panic, and that wouldn’t be helpful to anyone themselves included. It feels strange having to micromanage the emotional states of two grown adults like this, especially given how highly they’re regarded in your world.
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>>4507035
Minato-han frowns at you. “I can tell you’re hiding something from me, but I can’t tell what. I suppose I’ll just have to trust in your intentions.”

“Menma,” Minato-han greets what he still thinks must be his son, “we’re having dinner at six, so be sure not to be late, okay?”

Naruto looks awkwardly at the floor. “Right. Sure.”



You, Sakura, and Kurotsuchi all end up having dinner together, having no one to invite you into their home… though you suppose your own parents in this world might offer, that would just hurt more in the long run. You think that they understand that.

So instead you find a barbecue place and sit down at a booth… it’s still a weird way to eat to you, but you’re not in the mood to see what this genjutsu has done to Ayame meaning that noodles are out.

“Don’t look now,” Kurotsuchi mutters, “but that crazy white-eyes chick is here, and she looks pissed.”

“So I hear you’ve been spending a lot of time with Menma,” this world’s version of Hinata growls.

“Who’re you talking to?” Kurotsuchi glares back.

“You, the redhead with the gross scar,” Hinata declares. “You’d better...”

>He and I are cousins, you moron. Now leave me alone.
>She can see your chakra, right? Sage mode it is then.
>You can leave voluntarily, or with my fist in your face.
>Other.
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>>4507044
>He and I are cousins, you moron. Now leave me alone.
>She can see your chakra, right? Sage mode it is then.

Nonchalantly slip into Sage mode while eating
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>>4507044
>>She can see your chakra, right? Sage mode it is then.
And then as a parting shot:
>He and I are cousins, you moron. Now leave me alone.
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>>4507044
>He and I are cousins, you moron. Now leave me alone.
>She can see your chakra, right? Sage mode it is then.
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>>4507044
agreed, that should get her of our back
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>>4507044
>supporting
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>>4507044
>"Yeah, no. My hair isn't just red, it's the exact same shade as his mother's. Because he and I are cousins. Or maybe you aren't actually close enough to Menma to have met his family?
>Also, while I understand the Hyugas have some 'strange traditions' when it comes to family, let me assure you that such things do not extend to the Uzumakis. I have less than no interest in him romantically.
>Lastly, and this is the really important part." Sage mode, "Fuck off."
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>>4507044
>He and I are cousins, you moron. Now leave me alone.
If she doesn’t
>She can see your chakra, right? Sage mode it is then.
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>>4507044
>>4507253
>>"Yeah, no. My hair isn't just red, it's the exact same shade as his mother's. Because he and I are cousins. Or maybe you aren't actually close enough to Menma to have met his family?
>>Also, while I understand the Hyugas have some 'strange traditions' when it comes to family, let me assure you that such things do not extend to the Uzumakis. I have less than no interest in him romantically.
>>Lastly, and this is the really important part." Sage mode, "Fuck off."

Naori had just about enough of genjutsu-land.
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>>4507044
“Sit down.”

“I’d rather...” Hinata begins, only for you to interrupt as you enter sage mode… it was her mistake for thinking that she could intimidate you by using the byakugan from the start.

“Yeah no, that wasn’t a suggestion.”

After a few moments of silence, Hinata takes a seat diagonally across from you.

“So yeah, listen,” you insist, staring straight into the eyes. “I’m only going to say this once: ‘Menma’ and I are cousins on our respective mothers’ sides. Sakura and ‘Menma’ are teammates. Kurotsuchi-han met ‘Menma’ two days ago.”

“Your insecurity is your own problem. Not mine.”

“… insecurity?” she repeats.

You nod. “For sure. It’s because your spoiled-princess ego couldn’t survive it if he turned you down. Am I wrong?”

The way her face twitches tells you that you’re not.

“Now, do yourself and the rest of us a favor,” you declare. “Go home.”

“I...”

“Again, that wasn’t a suggestion.”



After Hinata has slunk off, Sakura sighs dramatically. “Would it kill you to at least try playing nice?”

“It’d kill someone,” you frown.

Sakura seems at a loss for words, but eventually decides to simply move on. “To be fair it’ll be a lot nicer to live here without a crazy version of Hinata breathing down our necks.”

“No kidding,” Kurotsuchi grumbles. “I’m actually really glad I never went back to Iwagakure, I don’t think I could handle this if it was all people I knew.”

“Yeah no, it doesn’t speak well to Obito’s ability to get his genjutsu to work on everyone that he can’t get it to work on just four of us,” you admit. “Does it?”

Sakura cradles her head in her hands. “Oh for the love of...”

“Who is it this time?” you grumble.

“It’s Shikamaru, Ino, and Choji,” she informs you.

“Hey guys!” Shikamaru greets you. “Sakura, and… the two of you that aren’t Sakura. It’s been so long since...”
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>>4507333
“We’ve never been introduced,” Choji interrupts.

“Ah,” he grins stupidly. “That’d explain it! Whew, that’s way less awkward!”

“I’m starting to hate this,” Sakura grumbles mutinously.

“I don’t see anything different,” you quip.

“That’s not fair and you know it.”

“So, Sakura-kun,” Ino muses. “Aren’t you going to introduce us to your new friends?”

“Well, the one with the dark hair is Kurotsuchi-san,” Sakura-kun begins, and Kurotsuchi raises a hand to offer a brief wave.

“And the one with the red hair is Naori-san, from Amegakure,” she continues, and you offer a slow nod.



After a mercifully short conversation with the alternate version of Team Asuma, you and the others manage to meet up with an unusually quiet Naruto on a residential street.

“This was… nice,” Naruto admits quietly.

“We’ve just had a run-in with Hinata and Shikamaru’s team,” Sakura shakes her head. “This place… I can only guess how you feel right now, but we can’t stay here. It’s nothing but a really weird dream, that’s all.”

“You’re right,” Naruto nods. “I just wish...”

The sound of an explosion in the direction of the Hokage’s office cuts his thoughts short, destroying the origami butterfly you left there.

“Can you use hiraishin?” Sakura asks you immediately.

You shake your head. “Not anymore.”

“Then let’s go!” Naruto declares.



When you arrive, you find that several jōnin and Tsunade are facing off against Menma and a number of masked figures… most with animal-like features to them. Clearly not humans.

>Charge in and try to kill Menma in a single shot. It’s the quickest, easiest, but also dirtiest solution.
>Charge Menma and try to catch him in a full paralysis genjutsu. No one here knows about your sharingan.
>The more of those masked figures you can take out the better your chances are. Shift the odds a bit.
>Other?
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>>4507354
>>Charge Menma and try to catch him in a full paralysis genjutsu. No one here knows about your sharingan.
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>>4507354
>>The more of those masked figures you can take out the better your chances are. Shift the odds a bit.
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>>4507354
>Charge in and try to kill Menma in a single shot. It’s the quickest, easiest, but also dirtiest solution.
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>>4507354
>>Charge Menma and try to catch him in a full paralysis genjutsu. No one here knows about your sharingan.
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>>4507354
>>Charge Menma and try to catch him in a full paralysis genjutsu. No one here knows about your sharingan.
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>>4507354
>Charge Menma and try to catch him in a full paralysis genjutsu. No one here knows about your sharingan
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>>4507354
>Charge Menma and try to catch him in a full paralysis genjutsu. No one here knows about your sharingan.
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>>4507354
>1d6, best three of four
>high roll
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You decide that the quickest and easiest way to end this fight is to put ‘Menma’ under a sharingan genjutsu, something that in this fake world only you are capable of doing… since this world’s Sasuke is apparently useless, and Itachi-han isn’t here.

So you throw a handful of hiraishin-marked origami shuriken at him, which thread their way between the bodies of his summons in a way only sharingan-guided weaponry could, until one passes right in front of him.

You catch him completely off-guard, as you suspected you would: nobody in this world even knows that you have a sharingan, so of course Menma wasn’t on guard expecting it. You see that for a moment his eyes lose focus.

“Gotcha,” you smirk, only for Menma to abruptly reawaken and smash you across the face with his arm, almost too quickly for you to raise your hand in self-defense. The blow sends you flying through a wall, which while admittedly an unpleasant experience is merely enough to disorient you for a moment.

He must have much better control over his version of Kurama than Naruto does… what a pain.

“Shadow clone!”

When you burst back out from your improvised cover there are three of you… one armed with Umekiri and Tenryushi, one armed with the Kiba, and the third armed with the Kubikiribōchō. Even as Minato-han and Kushina-han shout for Naruto to run and save himself, you begin the slow process of stealing back some momentum, not willing to tip your hand yet.

Each of the masked summons seems pretty strong… but not strong enough to be a match for any of the Akatsuki, let alone for the level you’re at now. A humanoid with a skull-mask and a wicked scythe tries to match against your clone with the Kubikiribōchō, but it struggles to keep up with the speed she can show with her acrobatic half-swording techniques. A serpentine, almost puppet-like creature tries and fails to capture the clone carrying the Kiba, only to be diced into several pieces by the lightning-sharp blades.

In sage mode, you blast a masked white tiger back with a trio of Shiyō Kibaku shuriken, and as a dragon-masked beast tries to attack you from behind the afterimage melts away just as the ranton-enhanced edge of Umekiri’s blade to take its head off.

“Ranton: Rekuyemu!”

To your surprise the dragon and the snake disappear into bursts of smoke, which clear to reveal a pair of black-tailed foxes, each of which has had a mask strapped on over its head. These then fade into a black chakra that rejoins with Menma.

“So that’s how your technique works,” you muse as your Kubikiribōchō-wielding clone dispatches the reaper-like summons with a momentary illusion.

>SP: 6/6
>ES: 1/2 (2T)
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>>4508511
He warned me not to take you lightly,” Menma growls from behind his mask while Naruto, Sakura, and Kurotsuchi fight the remaining beasts… these seem to be giving them more trouble, particularly Sakura whose movements are obviously powerful enough to demolish buildings but far too slow to land. “Those swords of yours are trouble… and that sage mode is even better than Jiraiya’s.”

He rises into the air as the various summons that are still fighting revert to chakra and re-enter his body. “I’ll need to take care of you first and foremost. I’ll kill you and seize the Red Moon Scroll with a single technique.”

Then he starts to gather a tremendous amount of chakra into his hands, forming a rasengan with a sort of chakra that feels different to you. Even from here you can tell that this is a technique powerful enough to level an entire city, and he intends to drop it right on your heads.

>Catch it using a Kongō Fūsa barrier and teleport it to one of your markings outside the village, where it’ll go off harmlessly.
>Catch it using a Kongō Fūsa barrier and teleport it back to the marking you left on Menma when he smacked you. Return to sender.
>Catch it using a Kongō Fūsa barrier and try to seal it into a tag for later. If transferring a tailed beast without killing its host is possible here anything is.
>Other?
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>>4508512
>>Catch it using a Kongō Fūsa barrier and try to seal it into a tag for later. If transferring a tailed beast without killing its host is possible here anything is.
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>>4508512
>>Catch it using a Kongō Fūsa barrier and teleport it back to the marking you left on Menma when he smacked you. Return to sender.
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>>4508512
>Catch it using a Kongō Fūsa barrier and try to seal it into a tag for later. If transferring a tailed beast without killing its host is possible here anything is.
felt like stealing chakra from an alternate universe, might set up a zero point energy device later
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>>4508512
>Catch it using a Kongō Fūsa barrier and try to seal it into a tag for later. If transferring a tailed beast without killing its host is possible here anything is.
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>>4508512
>>Catch it using a Kongō Fūsa barrier and try to seal it into a tag for later. If transferring a tailed beast without killing its host is possible here anything is.
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>>4508512
>>Catch it using a Kongō Fūsa barrier and try to seal it into a tag for later. If transferring a tailed beast without killing its host is possible here anything is.
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>>4508512
>Catch it using a Kongō Fūsa barrier and try to seal it into a tag for later. If transferring a tailed beast without killing its host is possible here anything is.
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>>4508512
>Catch it using a Kongō Fūsa barrier and teleport it back to the marking you left on Menma when he smacked you. Return to sender.
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>>4508512
After sending some extra chakra to your legs you leap into the air, and as you hit peak forward movement you hurl a hiraishin shuriken ahead of you. Then you release your Kongō Fūsa from your outstretched left hand and teleport to the hiraishin marking to close the distance even faster.

You create a barrier ahead of you that the mass of dark, dense chakra collides with, and produce a sealing tag from your Raikō Kenka seal on your left palm. If you’re right, and this thing is infused with tailed beast chakra, at least in this world this should work. The chakra is pulled across your Kongō Fūsa barrier and into the tag, before you teleport back to the ground.

In that time Menma manages to escape, but then again you’re simply allowing that for the moment anyway. He’s been marked with your hiraishin formula, so your fight is essentially over already. You could kill him at any point… but you’re not entirely sure that’s how this should go.

“What happened to that attack?” Minato-han demands.

“I sealed it into a tag,” you explain. “So yeah, I figure it may come in handy later.”

“What was that guy?” Kurotsuchi wonders aloud. “That technique was so strange.”

Naruto remains silent, clearly deep in thought about what he just had to fight against… a version of himself with unusual powers and no qualms about destroying all of Konohagakure for basically no other reason than to show off.

“I believe the time is right to explain the situation...” Tsunade-han coughs into her hand, having taken a bad hit in the melee. “Minato-san, Kushina-san… that was Menma-kun.”

“There’s no way...” Kushina tries to insist, before turning to her husband. “Right, Minato?”

Minato-han’s frown tells you what he thinks. “I’m not so sure. Those fox summons, his age, that chakra, and the attack based on a rasengan… I don’t want it to be true, but all evidence suggests that it probably is.”

“I marked him,” you admit. “I could probably kill him right now… but I don’t feel that’d be doing it the right way.”

“What do you mean, kill him?” Kushina demands, and you raise your hands to defend yourself.

“Yeah no, it’s just like I said,” you sigh. “The last thing I want is to become judge, jury, and executioner. But that option's on the table.”

Kushina starts to say something, only to stop when Minato-han puts a hand on her shoulder.

“I appreciate your position,” Minato-han informs you. “But if you decided to kill our son I’d be forced to stop you, with whatever means are at my disposal.”

Then you notice the markings at the corners of his eyes… Namikaze Minato is a toad sage, like his master was before him and his son is after him.

“Whoa, wait a minute,” Naruto realizes what his father has done. “Since when are you a sage?”
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“I hardly use it,” Minato-han admits, “because I’m honestly not that good at it.”

“But you’re as good as I am, ya know!” Naruto protests.

You chuckle. “Oh, the implications… but for real, Naruto, your father is the type to play himself down.”

“Thanks,” he mutters.

“Though you could use a bit of practice to do it faster.”

There’s a short pause. “Thanks.

“Any time, cousin.”

“So what is your decision?” Minato-han presses impatiently.

“It’s a prophecy made in your world,” you admit. “I’m inclined to do things your way… and besides, I don’t see how Naruto having parents would turn him into a psychopath. Something here doesn’t add up.”

“It’s a pain,” Kurotsuchi admits, “but I’m not keen to make an enemy out of the Yellow Flash in this or any other world.”

>Naruto, there’s one thing that I need to do… I need you to let me talk to Kurama.
>Sakura? Naruto? Will you agree to just do this their way?
>You don’t really need Naruto’s permission, and you don’t want the others to know, so you can just talk to Kurama using the sharingan.
>Other?
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>>4510095
>>Naruto, there’s one thing that I need to do… I need you to let me talk to Kurama.
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>>4510095
>>Naruto, there’s one thing that I need to do… I need you to let me talk to Kurama.
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>>4510095
>>Naruto, there’s one thing that I need to do… I need you to let me talk to Kurama.
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>>4510095
>Naruto, there’s one thing that I need to do… I need you to let me talk to Kurama.
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>>4510095
>Naruto, there’s one thing that I need to do… I need you to let me talk to Kurama.
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>>4510095
>>Naruto, there’s one thing that I need to do… I need you to let me talk to Kurama.
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>>4510095
“Naruto,” you muse, “I need to speak with Kurama for a moment.”

“… why?” he demands warily.

“You’ll see in a moment,” you promise. “Just look into my eyes.”



The inside of Naruto’s seal is still vaguely familiar to you… dry this time, and not quite so dark, but with the same locked bars and the same gargantuan fox behind them. And he does not look happy to see you.

“You, devil woman,” he grumbles. “What do you want?”

“Yeah,” Naruto agrees. “What do you want?”

“Seriously, same as you,” you insist bluntly. “Not to get stuck in this genjutsu.”

There’s a long pause. “You have my attention.”

“Yeah, so Sakura-kun is just this side of useless if it comes to a fight against the other Kurama in this world,” you explain. “Kurotsuchi-han can probably look after herself, but won’t do much else. And you know as well as I do Naruto-kun won’t be fighting at full when he has to look after Sakura-kun.”

“That’s not...” Naruto begins to argue only for Kurama to interrupt.

“I hate you, Naruto,” Kurama insists curtly. “And I hate this Uzumaki woman, perhaps as much as Minato. But those words would convince me even coming from his mouth.”

“To avoid being trapped here inside a dead host, waiting for that Uchiha whelp to come back for me, I will cooperate with you… once.”

“Wait, are you serious!?” Naruto demands. “You’re not gonna try taking over like you always do?”

“The enemy of my enemy may not be my friend,” Kurama growls angrily, “but it does pay to be clear on your priorities. And right now mine is escaping this genjutsu. On that you have my word.”

After considering it for a few moments, Naruto nods once. “Alright. Just this once, I’ll put some trust in you when the time comes.”
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>>4511369
“We’ll have Kurama’s cooperation,” you declare upon releasing your genjutsu. “So yeah, that’s good news.”

“You’re on first-name terms with the nine tails?” Kushina asks you skeptically. “I don’t understand that, even I don’t call him by name.”

“Maybe you should’ve,” you shrug. “Either way, we’re probably ready to go.”

“I want you to take us with you,” Kushina declares.

>No. That’s a bad idea.
>Sure, but stay out of it.
>Why?
>Other?
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>>4511380
>Sure, but stay out of it.
>That being said though, why?
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>>4511380
>sure, but stay out of it.
That said, are you certain you want to see this?
Its not gonna be easy
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>>4511380
>Sure, but stay out of it.
>That being said though, why?
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>>4511380
>>Sure, but stay out of it.
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>>4511380
>Sure, but stay out of it.
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>>4511380
“… okay,” you quietly agree. “But stay out of it.”

Again Kushina looks like she wants to argue with you, but Minato stops her. “May we hear your reason for that demand?”

It takes you a moment to consider your reply. “I had the privilege of fighting alongside the Namikaze Minato my history remembers. The man before me has his face, his voice, and his skills. But I can tell that you don’t have his heart.”

Minato-han seems to be completely at a loss for words, but you get the impression that Naruto doesn’t disagree. Whatever else he knows, he at very least is aware of the fact that his parents gave their lives not just for the village, but for his future.

“If you agree to those terms,” you declare, “we can go at any time. But yeah, no, don’t expect me to land an immediate attack… teleporting all of you will take some focus.”

“Shall we?”

After a moment, Minato-han nods curtly. “Kushina?”

“I agree too,” Kushina-han agrees.



The first few seconds after you teleport onto the gently-arching bridge are extraordinarily confusing, and turn entirely on instinct and liberal application of the shunshin technique. Naruto is almost immediately ready to attack Menma, who moves to place their mother between them as a defense and throws a handful of kunai at her. Minato uses the regular body flicker at this range to grab Kushina and dive off the bridge, which places Sakura in the path of the kunai, which are deflected by a handful of shuriken which you throw past her from behind.

“Move it!” Kurotsuchi shouts, having leapt up by kicking off the bridge’s railing, still weaving hand signs. “Yōton: Sekkaigyō!”

Menma creates a rasengan in one hand… meaning even this world’s version of Naruto is better than Naruto at it… at the same time as you draw Umekiri and Tenryushi. It’s the Tenryushi you attack with, slipping to the left to get clear of Naruto and Sakura.

“Kasukēda!”

The water you launch hits Kurotsuchi’s quicklime, hardening it like cement only for Menma to use his rasengan on the bridge under his feet, dropping through the hole it creates.

“Shit!” Kurotsuchi hisses. “Sorry Naori, but that was my shot… don’t figure he’ll give me another.”

“This isn’t over yet!” you counter, jumping over the railing to land on a crescent-shaped lake at the foot of a cliff. So this is where his hideout was?

Naruto follows you, already in sage mode, and Kurotsuchi floats down to hover a few feet above the water’s surface.
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Several explosions raise pillars of water, behind which Menma hides for a moment as he unseals his summons again… so this fight has gone from three against one to ten against three, assuming Sakura does the smart thing and stays out of it. You can tell even from here that it’s taking everything Minato has to stop himself or his wife from charging in recklessly and making the situation worse.

“You’re outnumbered three to one,” Menma observes curtly. “Hand over the scroll and only one of you will have to die!”

“Yeah, no, I don’t think so,” you sigh, sheathing your swords for a moment to unseal and charge the Kiba blades before throwing them at the masked summons and going to work.

You quite simply lose track of the number of times you use hiraishin in the ensuing fight. Explosions from your Shiyō Kibaku technique, the whirling windmill blades of the Kiba swords, flickering illusions created through Umekiri… to an observer it must seem as if you’re everywhere at once. The proximity of the water lets you create geysers using your exploding tags, which when you line one up under one of the masked summons Kurotsuchi can use her quicklime on to encase the offender in a concrete block that immediately sinks into the lake.

Meanwhile Menma retreats into the training caves, with Naruto in pursuit.

“This is getting to be annoying,” you grumble, as Kiba’s edge splits through the mask of another of Menma’s summons.

“Then let us handle it,” you hear a familiar voice.

Kurotsuchi stares in wide-eyed shock. “What the hell is Akatsuki doing here!?”

“We were sent by the Hokage,” Itachi-han informs you, jumping down from the ruined bridge to meet you face-to-face as you reseal Kiba. “I see Yahiko-san’s reports were acc...”

His words are cut short as you smack him across the face.

“… I can only assume I did something to deserve that?”

“You, maybe not,” you grumble. “But the you I knew, yes.”

The rest of the organization goes to work immediately… Sasori-han uses his three old puppets in this world, the ones that Kankuro now owns, though everyone else is pretty much the same as you remember them. Hidan is a loud idiot who immediately goes after the masked beast with the scythe, and Deidara summons a bird made from his explosive clay to take to the skies.

“Even Deidara-nii is here?” Kurotsuchi muses.

“Will you be okay out here?” you ask no one in particular.

“The others will be safe with us here,” Itachi-han insists. “Go on and fight the other one who went inside… that is what you want, or am I mistaken?”
>2/3
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>>4512779
You nod curtly. “No, you’re right.”

“Then good luck,” he bows his head politely. “And one more thing… I assume based on your obi and your eye that you and I were close where you come from?”

“… maybe not as close as I’d have liked,” you admit. “But for my part at least, yes.”

“Then I should apologize on his behalf,” Itachi-han insists. “I can’t see any version of me making friends or getting close to anyone easily, so if what I’ve inferred is correct… he did care about you, in his own way, even if he wasn’t able to express it clearly.”



With that thought in your mind, you head deep into the training caves. The machinery inside is complex, with multiple training dummies on mechanized tracks, each moving through basic variations of taijutsu movements with the appearance of randomness. Or at least, some of them are. A substantial amount of the training area has been ruined by Menma and Naruto’s fight as they passed through, for example a gap in the line of dummies about thirteen long where all you see is their ‘feet’ at most.

Down below, you find a cavern… a large cave room with a lake inside it. And in that cavern, Naruto is fighting a losing battle against a black version of Kurama, with Menma riding atop its head.

Umekiri-maru is your single greatest treasure. You’re convinced that it’s low-key the greatest sword ever forged for Kirigakure, even if it was foolishly rejected by them for being ‘too subtle’. But it may not be the right tool for this job.

>Use Umekiri-maru together with Kongō Fūsa. Your role here is control and suppression.
>Use Umekiri-maru together with the Kubikiribōchō. Combine those two styles into one.
>Rely solely on the Kubikiribōchō. It was designed with giant summons like this in mind.
>Other?
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>>4512796
>Use Umekiri-maru together with Kongō Fūsa. Your role here is control and suppression.

Let's do what naori does best, and take down that tailed beast.
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>>4512805
>>4512796
What he said
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>>4512796
>>Use Umekiri-maru together with the Kubikiribōchō. Combine those two styles into one.
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>>4512796
>>Use Umekiri-maru together with Kongō Fūsa. Your role here is control and suppression.
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>>4512796
>>Use Umekiri-maru together with the Kubikiribōchō. Combine those two styles into one.
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>>4512796
>Use Umekiri-maru together with Kongō Fūsa. Your role here is control and suppression.

Kongo Fusa is the main thing. Other than controlling a bijuu with the sharingan, there isn't a quicker I-win button against a jinchuuriki in the entire setting afaik.
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>>4512796
>Use Umekiri-maru together with the Kubikiribōchō. Combine those two styles into one.

We're missing out on pottery here.
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>>4512796
>Use Umekiri-maru together with the Kubikiribōchō. Combine those two styles into one.
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>>4512796
>Use Umekiri-maru together with Kongō Fūsa. Your role here is control and suppression.
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>>4512796
>Use Umekiri-maru together with the Kubikiribōchō. Combine those two styles into one.
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>>4512796
>1d6, DC 10
>taking the first three
>SP: 6/6
>ES: 0/2
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Rolled 1 (1d6)

>>4513353
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Rolled 4 (1d6)

>>4513353
ROLL HIGH!
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Rolled 3 (1d6)

>>4513353
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>>4513353
>Spend 2 SP to pass
>Spend 1 SP and take 1 ES to pass
>Take 2 ES to pass
>Fail
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>>4513363
>>Spend 2 SP to pass
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>>4513363
>>Spend 1 SP and take 1 ES to pass
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>>4513363
>>Spend 1 SP and take 1 ES to pass
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>>4513363
>Spend 2 SP to pass
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>>4513363
>>Spend 2 SP to pass
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>>4513363
>>Spend 1 SP and take 1 ES to pass
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>>4513363
>Spend 2 SP to pass
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>>4513363
>SP: 4/6
>ES: 0/2

Will continue tomorrow, it's already past midnight.
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>>4513363
You quickly create a shadow clone and toss her Kubikiribōchō. “You’ll know when to use this.”

“Well yeah,” she replies sarcastically. “I’m you, remember?”

“Hey. None of your sass.”



Once you’ve left your clone behind, you take Umekiri in your right hand and charge headlong into the fray. A trio of Kongō Fūsa chains burst from your sleeve, lashing at the black nine tails at a distance as you close, keeping it from crushing you as you approach. Unfortunately what you find is that its physical strength is greater than yours, which means if you wrap your chains around one of its limbs it can still sling you around even if you’re in sage mode. But that being said, you feel like you fare much better than most shinobi would have any right to expect, tripping the black nine tails up, evading its attacks, and even landing a few deep slashes across its flanks and limbs. Little more than harrying cuts, but still much better than you get in return.

You hold out well until Naruto returns to the surface of the lake with the Kurama you’re more familiar with, making that two nine-tailed beasts now fighting in the same place. Massive blasts of chakra tear the entire mountain apart from the inside, and cause small tsunamis within the cave that cause the walls to start to crumble. The two beasts dart about at unreasonable speeds that occasionally bring them close enough to bite and claw frantically at each others’ hides. Alarmingly, it feels like the black Kurama is stronger… and significantly so.



Meanwhile, outside the cave, your fight is being watched from a healthy distance.

“This is a bit too flashy, hm,” Deidara mutters disapprovingly as another blast of chakra bursts through the ground.

Kisame shakes his head, Samehada now propped against one shoulder. “Does seem like something smart people’d do better to stay away from… I want a piece of that personally, but I know I’m not smart. So it makes sense coming from me.”

“You and I are simple men,” Kakuzu muses. “Even if we’re different in all other regards.”

“I just can’t believe that girl was evidently my student,” Konan shakes her head in surprise. “How did things really differ in her world, I wonder?”

“It makes little sense to speculate,” Itachi decides. “All we need to know is to stay out of it.”

“We’re definitely not getting paid enough for this,” Kakuzu agrees curtly. “Though I am curious to see how it ends.”
>1/2
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>>4514215
As the mountain finally crumbles away and the battle takes to the surface, with the same intensity as before, the spectators watch as a lone figure emerges from the devastation alongside the two tailed beasts. Armed with a sword and trailing three golden chains from her left arm, she’s carried aloft on white wings of paper.

Powerful clusters of explosions complement the single blasts from the tailed beasts, the chains continually pressure the black nine tails whenever the red one is too far away, and her movements don’t seem to be entirely possible as she flickers from one spot to the other, always one step ahead of the tailed beast’s attacks.

“There has to be something we can do!” Sakura protests.

“Not right now,” Itachi admits. “That girl… is strong. And the craziest thing is she’s smiling right now. She’s enjoying this.”

A powerful clash of two tailed beast balls fired into each other at point-blank range illuminates the land for miles around, and by the time the light fades you’re standing on a tree branch just next to Kurotsuchi.

“That was close,” you admit, and Kurotsuchi lets out a surprised yelp.

“Naori!” she gasps. “The actual hell is wrong with you!?”

“Good to see you too,” you grumble.

Both Naruto and Menma are now falling to earth, their respective tailed beasts having been blasted backwards hard enough to dispel each other. The moon glows red, perhaps by some trick of the atmosphere after it was disturbed by such a powerful explosion.

>Now is the time to teleport to Menma and make sure he stays down.
>Catch Naruto, make sure he can stay on his feet.
>Wait and see what happens next.
>Other?
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>>4514217
>>Catch Naruto, make sure he can stay on his feet.
family first
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>>4514217
>>Catch Naruto, make sure he can stay on his feet.
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>>4514217
>Catch Naruto, make sure he can stay on his feet.
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>>4514217
>Use a shadow clone and catch them both
>Bind Menma with the Kongō Fūsa
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>>4514217
>Catch Naruto, make sure he can stay on his feet.
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>>4514217
>>Wait and see what happens next.
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>>4514217
>>Wait and see what happens next.
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>>4514217
You leap from your perch, paper wings carrying you to meet Naruto on his way down so that you can slow his descent. The strong feeling you have in your heart is that he still has some role to play in this before you can escape, and so you need him in as good a condition as possible for whatever may happen next.

By the time you land Menma has already hit the ground.

“You can put me down now, ya know,” Naruto observes after a few seconds of being princess-held.

You quickly drop him the rest of the way. “Okay yeah, sorry. I was already thinking ahead.”

Then you reach down to help him to his feet. “Whaddya mean, thinking ahead?”

“I mean...”

What you mean is exactly what happens in that moment: Menma rolls to his feet and charges with one last burst of speed, creating a large black rasengan along the way that carves a deep furrow into the ground as he moves.

It’s not clear to you why, but Naruto’s immediate response is to take out the Red Moon scroll, the thing Minato-han risked his neck to procure and which Menma was ready to destroy Konoha to take. When Menma gets too close Naruto throws the scroll at him in desperation, taking a leap backwards… and in the very instant when Menma’s vision is covered you use the hiraishin marking you left on his body.

Your own Tenrangiri, this one not enhanced by senjutsu, hits Menma’s rasengan, completely overwhelming it and blasting Menma backwards. The scroll simply disappears, and after skipping twice across the ground Menma rolls to a stop.

This time he doesn’t get back up.

He’s not dead, you can tell that much from here. But as his parents hold him his black hair starts to fade, returning to the familiar messy blonde.

“I guess that phony geezer’s prophecy had something to it after all,” Naruto muses. “The scroll did help.”

“I have a promise to keep,” you insist curtly. “I’ll see you soon.”



When you teleport to the hiraishin tag you left with Makoto-han and Rai-han, you already know that your body – your physical, tangible presence in this world – has started to fade away into nothingness. It’s clear that you don’t have any time to spare, so you keep it brief.

With a sudden embrace, while you still have something left to do it with, you say what you need to.

“I have to wake up now,” you explain to them both quietly, “but at least it was a lovely dream while it lasted. Goodbye father. Goodbye again, mother.”

They can no longer embrace you back, so they hold each other in your last moments.

“Good luck, my sweet,” your mother wishes you.

“I can’t imagine a world,” you father tells you, “where we wouldn’t both be proud of you.”
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The Kubikiribōchō once held by your clone is embedded in the ground a few feet away from you when you come to, standing together with Kurotsuchi-han in the streets of Konoha’s newly-rebuilt hot springs district. It slowly fades away on the breeze, attracting only a few confused stares from passersby who don’t understand what they’re looking at. You can tell that the tag you’d sealed the first black rasengan into is gone now too, as are the Kiba swords.

Like the last memories of a half-forgotten dream, melting away with the morning light.

You silently flip Umekiri’s hanaseki saya into the air with your toe from where it’s fallen to the ground, performing the sheathing and returning both to your hip with a single smooth motion of your right arm.

“Are you okay?” Kurotsuchi asks you. “You’re crying.”

“It’s fine,” you insist curtly. Then to make sure you’re in the right place, you reach out to your hiraishin network with your senses… and find something alarming. So alarming in fact that you teleport there without even saying anything to Kurotsuchi-han first.



What you find sends you into a near-panic. Konan-sensei is floating face-down in the shallows of the lake outside Amegakure, with little wisps of diffused blood surrounding her in the water. You instantly grab her and teleport her to the floor of Tsunade-han’s office in a wet mess, turning her on her side and using water manipulation to pull the water out of her lungs. You manage to find a pulse, and she starts breathing again, but you can tell that she’s badly hurt.

“What happened?” Tsunade demands, already crouched next to you. You’re not even sure when she got here, or if she was in the room when you arrived.

“Obito happened,” you growl angrily. “He was here, in the village… he put myself, Kurotsuchi-han, Sakura-kun, and Naruto-kun under a powerful genjutsu that created an alternate world. This must’ve been why he did it to me too… to give him a chance to attack my sensei.”

“To what end?” Tsunade-han presses.

“To get Nagato’s body,” you realize. “Damn.”

“Then he would’ve used an interrogation genjutsu similar to the Tsukuyomi,” Tsunade-han informs you, standing up and putting a hand on your shoulder. “Let me handle things from here. I’m the only one with the skill necessary to help a patient recover from mental damage on this level… I did the same for Kakashi when Uchiha Itachi left him nearly catatonic.”

“She’ll be in good hands, I promise.”

It… takes you some time to let go of her, and even then you linger in her room for a while after Tsunade takes her to the hospital.

That’s where the others eventually find you, probably after having met Tsunade-han and given her a report on what happened.
>2/3
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>>4515352
“… go home,” Kurotsuchi tells you after a few minutes. “There’s nothing more you can do here.”

“That’s not true,” you counter quietly, unsealing some paper and creating stemmed flowers with them in whites and blacks. These you place into an empty flower vase, and place by your sense’s bed. You also leave a hiraishin mark on the back of her hand, just to be extra certain.

Now there’s not much else I can do here.”



You take Kurotsuchi home first, and essentially collapse into bed in your Grass hideout. For the first time since your mother died, you find yourself literally crying yourself to sleep. The others, perhaps sensing that something is very wrong, give you a certain amount of respectful space. They don’t try to talk to you that night.



The next morning you slink into the kitchen, still completely downcast but now looking forward to what needs to be done now.

>Someone needs to take over in Amegakure, and that someone is you.
>You have other duties. Amegakure should be run by the council of elders.
>There IS your old sensei, Yao, who runs the academy. He’d be a good choice.
>Other?
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>>4515356
>>There IS your old sensei, Yao, who runs the academy. He’d be a good choice.
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>>4515356
>There IS your old sensei, Yao, who runs the academy. He’d be a good choice.
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>>4515356
>There IS your old sensei, Yao, who runs the academy. He’d be a good choice.
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>>4515356
>Someone needs to take over in Amegakure, and that someone is you.
>There IS your old sensei, Yao, who runs the academy. He’d be a good choice.

Every able leader requires a firm second in command. Yao could run the daily operations and do the paperwork as he has more experience with it, while Naori as the strongest shinobi in the village handles the diplomacy and protecting the village.
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>>4515356
>>Someone needs to take over in Amegakure, and that someone is you.
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>>4515356
>There IS your old sensei, Yao, who runs the academy. He’d be a good choice.
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>>4515356
>>4515458
supporting this.
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>>4515356
>You have other duties. Amegakure should be run by the council of elders.
>There IS your old sensei, Yao, who runs the academy. He’d be a good choice.
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>>4515356
>There IS your old sensei, Yao, who runs the academy. He’d be a good choice.

Considering our current duties and Naori's emotional state, I'm thinking you guys are biting off way more then you can chew.
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>>4515356
>Someone needs to take over in Amegakure, and that someone is you.
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>>4515356
>>There IS your old sensei, Yao, who runs the academy. He’d be a good choice.
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>>4515356
>>Someone needs to take over in Amegakure, and that someone is you.
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>>4515356

>>There IS your old sensei, Yao, who runs the academy. He’d be a good choice
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>>4515356
>There IS your old sensei, Yao, who runs the academy. He’d be a good choice.
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>>4515356
You decide to find Yao-sensei at the academy, who is so far as you’re concerned the best remaining candidate to do what you know has to happen next. He seems shocked by your sudden appearance at his office door, but quickly recovers and offers you a seat.

“It’s been a long time,” he muses, “since well before you joined Akatsuki. What brings you here today?”

“Konan-sensei was attacked last night,” you explain curtly. “I took her to the hospital in Konohagakure where lady Fifth will be looking after her. While I’m confident she will recover, it may take a while.”

“Until then you will lead the village. I’ll continue representing us outside the village.”

“Why aren’t you intending to lead?” Yao-sensei wonders with a frown. “You’re the strongest in Amegakure without question, and you already command respect from the other villages.”

“Yeah no,” you sigh, “part of that recognition is for my neutrality. If I take the role of village head in Amegakure I risk losing the recognition of the Lands of Grass and Waterfalls. For the sake of our new alliance I can’t allow that to happen.”

“I see your point,” he nods once. “I agree to take over until Tenshi-sama returns.”

“Thank you,” you bow politely. “I assume you’re up to date on her plans for the war?”

“I am,” he replies calmly. “I can pick up right where she left off if you’d like.”

“No, yeah, that’d be best,” you agree. “Good luck, Yao-sensei.”

“And to you, Naori-sama.”



That having been dealt with to the degree it can be, you finally return home to take some deep breaths. Eventually Fū pokes her head into your room, warily, like a cat who thinks she’s getting into someplace she really shouldn’t be.

“… hey Nakkun, you okay?”

“Come in,” you insist. “I’ve had some time to calm down a bit.”

“What happened?”

“My sensei was attacked,” you explain. “She was hurt badly. I had to take her to Konoha for treatment… and she may not wake up again for a while.”

“That Obito guy did it?” she asks.

You nod. “While he had me under a genjutsu. Gave him just enough time.”

“She’ll be okay, right?” she asks. “And you did everything you could as soon as you could?”
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>>4517185
“As much as I was allowed,” you nod. “Yes.”

“Then I’m sure she won’t hold it against you,” Fū insists. “It’s okay.”

“You’re right,” you admit. “But it still bothers me that I couldn’t be there when she needed me.”

“You’ll just have to beat that Obito jerk twice as hard then,” Fū smiles, “right, Nakkun?”

“Yeah,” you nod in agreement. “Thanks.”

“Hey, don’t mention it! That’s what friends are for, right?”



“So how are your preparations going?” you ask all three of them at the table over lunch.

“Well,” Karin replies thoughtfully. “Though the medical relief teams haven’t actually met yet.”

“I’ve been meditating a lot,” Yugito offers. “I expect to be sent off someplace with B and that Naruto kid, so keeping calm is going to be a challenge.”

“I’ll just be guarding the medical unit,” Fū shrugs, “so if they haven’t met yet I’ve got nothing to do either.”

>If you want to spar a little I’d be happy to oblige you both.
>I need to speak with the members of my unit, so I’ll be leaving for a while.
>I haven’t been to Suna in a while. I wonder how preparations are going?
>Other?
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>>4517223
>>I haven’t been to Suna in a while. I wonder how preparations are going?
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>>4517223
>I haven’t been to Suna in a while. I wonder how preparations are going?
>offer to spar with them when we get back, along with our unit
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>>4517223
>>If you want to spar a little I’d be happy to oblige you both.
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>>4517223
>>If you want to spar a little I’d be happy to oblige you both.
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>>4517223
>>If you want to spar a little I’d be happy to oblige you both.
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>>4517223
>>If you want to spar a little I’d be happy to oblige you both.
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>>4517223
>1d6
>taking the best three of four
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Rolled 3 (1d6)

>>4518124
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>>4518124
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>>4518124
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>>4518124
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>>4518124
“If the two of you wanted to spar a little I’d be happy to oblige,” you offer.

“Well this is rare,” Yugito-han muses. “Mind if I watch?”

“Not at all,” you shrug.



You teleport the four of you to Rōran, and after politely greeting the Queen and princess you head outside to find some open space in the warm sunshine that will be suitable for taijutsu practice. After starting with the traditional seal of confrontation, the match begins: two-on-one, with techniques like sage mode and the inner gates being prohibited.

Fū is exactly as you’d imagine her, a dynamo of limitless energy that comes at you chaotically, seeming to follow no cohesive plan or obvious structure. But no matter how the two of you are spaced she always seems to find a couple of different ways to attack, choosing her strategy one moment at a time depending on the distance and relative positioning between you. And in contrast to her total lack of strategy, her discrete movements show a much higher degree of technical polish than you remember.

It’s almost like watching a drunken boxer. She actually gets you pretty good a few times, though there are also a few times where you can pretty easily toss her around… once nearly straight into Karin.

Speaking of whom, you can’t say whether you’re especially happy with where Karin is in terms of taijutsu. She reacts well enough, but she also keeps her space much more diligently, hanging on the very edge of what she’s calculated to be your reach. It means she has enough time to react, but that her own attacks are laughably simple for you to block or evade.

What becomes clearer after a few exchanges is that she’s using a particular style focusing almost solely on positioning herself with her footwork and attacking and blocking with her hands, which are open with the fingers extended. If she’s been practicing her medical ninjutsu you reason that she could be working on a taijutsu style that relies on the chakra scalpel technique… an attacker would be exposing themselves to cuts to their ligaments and muscles every time they throw a punch, and every kick would risk crippling their footwork.



Once Karin is tired enough that her movements become sloppy, and Fū is left panting from exertion, you call an end to the match and make the traditional reconciliations.
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“Yeah, so I’m absolutely happy with what you’ve shown me,” you admit. “Great job, you two!”

“Really?” Karin replies from her knees.

You nod and smile. “Though you will have to be careful not to show your hand too early… the first time you use the chakra scalpel you’ll have to land a crippling blow.”

“Ooh, whadja think of me!?” Fū demands excitedly.

“I’ve never seen anyone use drunken boxing like that before,” you admit. “It’s actually really impressive!”

“Thanks!” she replies. “That means… hey, wait a minute, whaddya mean ‘drunken’ boxing?”

“It’s one of the imitative styles,” you clarify, “pretty rare these days and never really seen as a stand-alone style. Most schools only include one set or stance. It’s meant to be unpredictable and unconventional… you’d do better if you learned to move your waist a little more.”

“Try working some flexibility training into your schedule.”

>Now then, Fū, let’s see how you’ve progressed with your pseudo-jinchūriki abilities.
>Yugito-han, do you want to get in on some of this? I’m in a good mood right now.
>Karin, have you given any thought to the Kongō Fūsa? It’s a very useful technique to know.
>Other?
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>Now then, Fū, let’s see how you’ve progressed with your pseudo-jinchūriki abilities.
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>>4518256
>>Karin, have you given any thought to the Kongō Fūsa? It’s a very useful technique to know.
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>>4518256
>>Now then, Fū, let’s see how you’ve progressed with your pseudo-jinchūriki abilities.
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>>4518256
>Karin, have you given any thought to the Kongō Fūsa? It’s a very useful technique to know.
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>>4518256
>>Now then, Fū, let’s see how you’ve progressed with your pseudo-jinchūriki abilities.
>Karin, have you given any thought to the Kongō Fūsa? It’s a very useful technique to know.
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>>4518256
>>Karin, have you given any thought to the Kongō Fūsa? It’s a very useful technique to know.
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>>4518256
>>Yugito-han, do you want to get in on some of this? I’m in a good mood right now.
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>>Now then, Fū, let’s see how you’ve progressed with your pseudo-jinchūriki abilities.
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“So have you worked towards the Kongō Fūsa at all?” you ask Karin as she sits to take a breather.

“It’s strange,” Karin admits, “I’m just not very good at fūinjutsu, even though I can create the chains.”

“Really?”

She nods slowly. “It’s a bit disappointing, really. But I guess my chakra is just different from yours. Or maybe you just have talent that I don’t?”

“You can use the enclosing technique,” you point out.

“And you know that’s not strong enough to be useful with the Kongō Fūsa,” Karin counters… and quite correctly. “It can’t disrupt a target’s chakra.”

“Well how about the Isshi Tōjin?”

“I learned nothing in Kusagakure,” Karin reminds you quietly. “Since you took me in I’ve been working hard just to get my basic abilities up to the level of a chūnin. And if I’m honest… learning the Isshi Tōjin won’t let me use the Kongō Fūsa either.”

You can’t help but frown. “Karin… you’re almost talking like you think you’re a waste of my time or something.”

“Sorry, I should have known you’d hear it that way,” she admits, “and that’s not it. I know what you’d say next, that we all have different skills and talents. I’ve just had to accept that fūinjutsu isn’t one of mine.”

“I’d be happy to work on it with you… after this war is over. But until then there are other things I should be doing.”

“So… am I right in thinking you’re saying no?” you muse.

After a moment Karin nods. “Sorry, Naori-san.”

“Don’t apologize,” you insist with a smile. “I’m actually glad… you’ve come a long way from begging me for help.”

“I trust your judgment.”

After a moment, Karin nods in acknowledgement. “Thanks, Naori.”

A few moments later, Yugito-han coughs into her fist to get your attention. “I think Fū has something she’d like to show you?”

When you turn your attention back to Fū you can see she’s practically bouncing with nervous excitement. “For real? How could you tell?”
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“So, Fū,” you muse. “I take it you’ve been working on your pseudo-jinchūriki abilities?”

She nods emphatically. “Yup!”

“Well let’s see it then,” you smile. “Show me what you’ve got!”

Her transformation is as swift as it is dramatic: not only does she sprout the wings you’ve seen her use on plenty of occasions, but her forearms are transformed as well. Insectile plates cover from her wrists to points a bit past her elbows, and connected to those by a very biological-looking joint near the wrist are two blades… like the claws of a mantis. Her entire body is surrounded by a thin cloak of orange chakra, coming to a horn-like point at her head and forming two tails behind her.

“Still tickles,” she admits. “I can only use the first version, cause the second would burn my skin off, but it’s still pretty cool, right?”

“Very,” you admit, closing your eyes and focusing on Umekiri and her sheath. “Yeah, no, so I’d be willing to bet you want to test it out?”

“Totally!”

>Restrain yourself significantly, fight from a slight disadvantage.
>Only pull your punches a little, but give her a ‘real’ fight.
>Give her an honest, fair match.
>Other?
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Only pull your punches a little
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>>4518607
>Restrain yourself significantly, fight from a slight disadvantage
The best way to hone your skills is by not relying on power boosts as a crutch
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>>Only pull your punches a little, but give her a ‘real’ fight.
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>>4518607
>Restrain yourself significantly, fight from a slight disadvantage.
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>>4518607
>Only pull your punches a little, but give her a ‘real’ fight.
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>>4518607
>>Restrain yourself significantly, fight from a slight disadvantage.
amp it up later
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>>4518607
>Only pull your punches a little, but give her a ‘real’ fight.
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>>4518607
“Then let’s give it a real test, shall we?” you muse, entering sage mode and taking Umekiri off your obi. However, you don’t draw her from the saya, instead channelling your chakra into a blunt form around it.

Fū seems to instinctively take a half-step back… can she sense your senjutsu chakra that well? But just as you start to think she’s ready to quit, she steels herself.

“Yeah,” she replies. “Let’s do it!”



That being said, she remains still for a few seconds, as if she’s actually trying to work out in her mind how you’ll respond to various plans of attack. She takes a slow circle to your side, watching how you shift your posture to match, eventually working her way around a hundred and eighty degrees before stopping again.

A sudden gust blows loose desert sand across the flat you’ve selected as a sparring area, and in an instant Fū comes to you.

Her speed is nothing like what it was before, adding to the difficulty in fighting against her chaotic and improvisational style of taijutsu. Even harder now, you have to quickly learn how these ‘claws’ she’s grown work… at first it’s almost like she has two new arms to deal with.

But as you parry her quick jabs and scything cuts you start to get the hang of it, and turn in close after a parry to quickly hit her twice, once with your elbow to her sternum, then with the back of your fist to her cheek.

She loses her balance, but manages to land a counterblow to your backwards kick… the force you meet turns your body as you push off with your right foot, turning you to face Fū as her own force actually corrects her balance. The next time you try to get in that close she tucks her arms in and strikes with the backs of her claws, tightening her guard while still attacking.

But while her strength in this form is phenomenal and her speed is totally respectable, it’s still not on the level of sage mode. Eventually she’s forced purely on the defensive, and that’s when you start fighting her for real.

“Tsubamegiri!”

You attack with a charge in tonbo-no-kamae, Umekiri held high over your right shoulder. And just after Fū commits to a defense, that’s when the genjutsu takes effect, for a moment you dull her awareness of the passage of time, shifting your posture and lowering your arms to strike instead in a rising arc from waki-gamae.

To Karin and Yugito-han it must seem like Fū simply blanked for just a moment, but to Fū… there was an instant where she could probably see both attacks, both being equally ‘real’ to her.

She clutches her side for a moment as she takes a leaping step back to reassess her situation, but you don’t let up. The illusory afterimage you left fades to show Fū that you’ve stuck with her. She watches intently…

“Dōjigiri Raigen!”
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The bright flash forces her to raise her arms to defend against the attack she thinks is coming, a downward slash to her right shoulder, only for your attack to instead come as a kick to her upper left arm that sends her crashing across the desert sand.

A rain of blows pummels her guard, which protects her above and to the sides but keeps her on her knees. Eventually she seizes what she thinks is an opportunity, only to find that you’ve rolled back with her momentum, throwing her calmly over your shoulder and hitting her with Umekiri’s hilt in midair. This time she catches herself on her wings before she hits the ground, and for a few moments manages to take the offensive again with a series of slashes and jabs.

You put a stop to that by driving Umekiri’s porcelain saya into her gut, then smacking her in the chin with it as she doubles over.

“That sage mode of yours… it’s really something, isn’t it?” she pants, having fallen to her knees and lost her chakra cloak. “Just can’t seem to catch up to it!”

“Yeah no, look at it another way,” you insist, offering her a hand that she doesn’t immediately take. “I haven’t had to take that many people seriously lately. Pain, Danzō, Obito… just now, that was me taking you seriously.”

After thinking about it for a moment, Fū smiles and takes your hand.

>These three are going to be just fine. See if you can’t get in touch with Suna.
>Yugito mentioned making her own preparations. Does she know something you don’t?
>You could do worse than collecting your unit and conducting some kind of training.
>Other?
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>>4519289
Yugito now too, fair is fair.
After we can think of our own unit
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>>4519289
>>Yugito mentioned making her own preparations. Does she know something you don’t?
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>>4519289
>Yugito mentioned making her own preparations. Does she know something you don’t?
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>>4519289
>Yugito mentioned making her own preparations. Does she know something you don’t?
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>>4519289
>>You could do worse than collecting your unit and conducting some kind of training.
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>>4519289
>Yugito mentioned making her own preparations. Does she know something you don’t?
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>>4519289
You all head back to the hideout, since it doesn’t seem that sparring is what’s on Yugito’s mind right now. Inside you take a seat in an old-style floor chair, with Karin and Yugito both sitting across the low table from you. Fū flops down immediately and almost seems to fall asleep with her head in your lap.

“You didn’t come out with us,” you observe as Ajisai comes out of the kitchen to join you with a plate of dumplings. “Are you alright?”

“I’m fine,” she insists. “Still thinking about what you said to me before, about joining your team.”

“So yeah, we can talk after lunch if you’d like,” you muse, resting your hand on Fū’s head. “Yugito-han, you said before that you were making your own preparations?”

“That’s right,” she confirms. “You may not have noticed this about me, but I don’t like being cooped up. I mind it a lot less if it’s with pleasant… and quiet… company. But B isn’t that, and I gather Uzumaki Naruto isn’t either.”

“Tell me about B,” you wonder. “All I know is he likes to rhyme?”

“Consider Fū’s energy,” Yugito muses, “but without any of the things that make her endearing. That’s B.”

“And I suspect you know where you might be sent for ‘safety’?”

Yugito nods slowly. “There are a few places. The hardest of them to find would be Genbu.”

“Genbu?” Karin repeats.

“The island turtle,” Yugito clarifies. “Basically, a moving island… even I couldn’t tell you where it is right now. It’s where I was trained.”

>…can I ask you about that? Matatabi seemed to have some pretty strong feelings.
>Let that one go, at least for the time being. Try to change the subject.
>Finish eating, and take Ajisai to meet with Maki. There’s a point you’d like to make.
>Other?
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Can I ask about that? ...
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>…can I ask you about that? Matatabi seemed to have some pretty strong feelings.
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>>…can I ask you about that? Matatabi seemed to have some pretty strong feelings.
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>…can I ask you about that? Matatabi seemed to have some pretty strong feelings.
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>>…can I ask you about that? Matatabi seemed to have some pretty strong feelings.
Ajisai after maybe
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“…would it be okay if I asked you about that? Matatabi-dono seemed to have some pretty strong feelings.”

Yugito-han doesn’t respond right away, which just makes the curiosity more obvious. Even Fū seems to be listening closely, a little like a lazy dog perking its ears up. Eventually Yugito does begin to offer an account.

“It wasn’t what you’d call a positive experience,” Yugito explains. “I was selected at the age of two after extensive testing… I don’t remember any of that, but I’m told that several candidates died at that stage. What I do remember is the survival training on Genbu, the mandatory isolation from other children my age, the strictly controlled diet and exercise regimes. I remember the first time I was told to kill at the age of seven.”

“I spent three years in seclusion at the Falls of Truth… confronting all the fears and insecurities and self-loathing of a child thrust into something so far outside her control. At the age of ten I fought against Matatabi for her acknowledgement, and earned it. By training myself relentlessly I began harnessing the tailed beast transformations, pushing my body so hard I routinely spent weeks at a time in the hospital.”

“Having burned your skin,” you sigh quietly.

“Or broken my bones,” Yugito-han adds. “Matatabi’s power is a lot to handle for a ten-year-old, and the pressure to excel was… rather oppressive.”

“You ended up succeeding,” Karin observes. “What has your relationship been like with your village since then? Did they ever really acknowledge what they put you through?”

Yugito-han frowns. “It wasn’t always good. It took me several years to figure out how to even talk to people again, and by that time my heart had already hardened. If I can be honest with you for a moment I envy people like Fū, who can still be so kindhearted.”

“That’s not right.”

There’s a short pause after Fū’s interruption before Yugito pursues it. “How do you mean?”

“We’re supposed to be enemies, right?” Fū continues, almost sounding half-asleep. “You, me, that Naruto guy, Gaara-kun?”

“On paper,” Yugito-han admits. “We’re meant to balance each other’s power and give our villages an edge in battle.”

“But we’re friends now, right?” Fū smiles, rolling onto her back before settling back in. “It’s ‘cause you know what we’ve all been through. Doesn’t sound ‘hardened’ to me, nope. Not one bit.”

“Yeah, so for what it’s worth Fū’s got you pegged,” you agree. “You’re not as hardened as you seem to think you are, Yugito-han. I think you should embrace that more.”

Yugito-han stares at you in surprise for a few seconds, before eventually nodding quietly. “Yeah… maybe.”
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“Lord A would say that would make me weak,” Yugito-han admits.

“Yeah no, if I buried my ‘weakness’ like that,” you muse, “you’d be dead, Konohagakure would be gone, and Akatsuki would probably be ruling the world right now.”

“You really think so?” Ajisai muses.

You nod curtly. “Oh for sure. I’d never have let Kakuzu die...”

“What about that Hidan guy?” Fū wonders.

“What about Hidan?” you roll your eyes. “Anyway, between me and Pain Konoha would’ve been wiped off the map and we’d have captured Naruto-kun. Then we’d have done the same to B, and that’d be that.”

“You seem confident,” Yugito-han observes.

You shrug. “No yeah, with Kongō Fūsa, sage mode, and even a single Mangekyō, wouldn’t you be?”

“Probably,” Yugito-han admits. “So by ‘embracing’ your kindhearted side, you basically saved the world is what you’re trying to say?”

“I think that would be overstating it,” you shake your head. “But it saved both of us, and that certainly has to count for something.”

There’s a short silence before Yugito-han chuckles. “Alright, you have me at a loss there.”



After eating you slip out from under Fū, and create a shadow clone to help with the cleaning. Your ‘real’ body grabs Ajisai by the shoulder.

>Take her to train with Maki, your team’s fūinjutsu specialist in Suna. That'll help Ajisai understand that she IS exceptional.
>Take her back to Rōran, practice sealing with her personally. Try and build her confidence.
>Offer to help her seal some elemental ninjutsu into scrolls to prepare. That suits her style well.
>Other?
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>>4520406
>Take her to train with Maki, your team’s fūinjutsu specialist in Suna. That'll help Ajisai understand that she IS exceptional.
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>>4520406
>Take her to train with Maki, your team’s fūinjutsu specialist in Suna. That'll help Ajisai understand that she IS exceptional.
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>>4520406
>Take her to train with Maki, your team’s fūinjutsu specialist in Suna. That'll help Ajisai understand that she IS exceptional.
>Also train with her personally, because we're still more experienced

She just has some catching up to do.
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>>4520406
>>4520436
This
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>>4520406
>>Take her to train with Maki, your team’s fūinjutsu specialist in Suna. That'll help Ajisai understand that she IS exceptional.
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>>4520406
You teleport Ajisai to the hiraishin marking outside Gaara’s office, and wait for a moment to step inside. “Do you have a moment?”

“I do,” Gaara confirms. “Did you need something?”

“I’d like to ask you to summon Maki-han here,” you request.

Gaara frowns slightly. “You are her commanding officer. Did you not give her a hiraishin marking?”

“I did,” you admit. “But yeah, no, Maki-han could be taking a shower or something.”

“I see your point. In that case feel free to use the jōnin standby station,” Gaara offers.



“So how well do you know Gaara?” Ajisai asks you as you wait.

“There was that time I nearly killed him,” you muse. Then you notice someone arriving… it’s Baki, Gaara and Temari’s former sensei. Something’s different about him…

“Someone has a new arm,” you muse. “Baki-han. Have you been keeping well?”

“I have,” he nods curtly. “Yourself?”

“Not bad, for sure,” you reply calmly. “Is that hanaseki porcelain?”

“It is.”

“Very nice. So… how are things going here otherwise?”

“Gaara-dono has been very busy, of course,” Baki explains curtly. “Temari-san has been stubbornly training in kenjutsu to better wield the Hishō Shōken, and Kankuro-san received a strange gift a few days ago… a new puppet. Highly advanced.”

“A new puppet?” you repeat.

“Yes,” Baki nods. “Bearing the mark of Sasori of the Red Sand.”

“Well… have a nice day,” Baki-han tells you rather blankly.

“You too,” you incline your head politely.

“What was that about?” Ajisai asks after Baki leaves. “It was tense.”

“I’m the one who cut that arm off,” you explain.

“Ah,” Ajisai nods in realization. “I see how that could be awkward.”

“He was doing his job,” you sigh, “and I was following my own convictions.”
>1/?
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>>4521470
“Apologies, Naori-san,” Maki eventually apologizes as she arrives at the standby station. “I was in the shower.”

“Ajisai, this is Maki-han,” you gesture. “Maki-han, this is my friend Ajisai. Maki-han is a master of the Nunoshibari technique. Ajisai, have you ever used cloth-binding?”

Ajisai shakes her head. “That’s a Suna technique.”

“Maki-han,” you nod curtly. “I’d like you to teach that technique to Ajisai.”

“I’m… not much of a teacher,” Maki admits.

“Then both of you will learn something from this,” you smile. “Oh, and I want it done by noon tomorrow.”

“You’re crazy,” Ajisai insists immediately.

“Yes,” you agree. “But not about this. Tomorrow afternoon we’ll work on creating your own modified version.”

“Naori-san, a moment?” Maki gestures to you, wanting to speak in something approaching confidence. “Naori-san… the Nunoshibari can’t be taught in a day.”

“Show me,” you insist.



“This is how it’s performed,” Maki-han tells you, unsealing a roll of plain, naturally-colored cloth and unrolling it at high speed, where it wraps around a volunteer she brought in for the purpose. It’s another man from Sunagakure, with odd tattoos on his cheeks, who looks like he knows Maki-han somehow. She only introduced him as ‘Nonota’.

After being wrapped up thoroughly, Maki-han loosens the cloth and forces it to roll back up on itself. “Once it’s wrapped the target you can place a sealing tag onto it.”

“So like this?” you unroll the cloth yourself, wrapping a visibly-panicked Nonota with it almost exactly like Maki-han did moments before.

Maki stares at you in surprise. “How did you… from having seen it once?”

“So yeah, watch closely,” you insist, “both of you.”

You unseal twelve black paper tags, marking each with the appropriate components of the sealing formula in white, and let them hang in midair for Ajisai and Maki to watch as you fold them two at a time into six paper shuriken. Then you seal five into the sixth, let it drop into your hand, and throw it at the wall. As it flies the other five unseal, and all six embed themselves about an inch and a half into the outer wall of the building.
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“So what you’re saying,” Maki-han realizes as Ajisai pulls one of the paper shuriken out of the wall, “is that you learned the Nunoshibari method because it’s easier than things you can already do?”

“Yeah no, not in as many words,” you shrug. “But yes. And it’s my judgment that the same is true for Ajisai… who should really have more confidence in herself.”

>You’ve been told that Temari is struggling with kenjutsu. This piques your interest as a way to pass some time.
>Kankuro evidently got a ‘gift’ from Sasori… you’d be curious to know more about that situation, if he’ll tell you.
>You kind of want to do both of those things. There’s absolutely a way to pull that off without SEEMING like a busybody.
>Other?
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>>4521489
>>Kankuro evidently got a ‘gift’ from Sasori… you’d be curious to know more about that situation, if he’ll tell you.
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>>4521489
>You kind of want to do both of those things. There’s absolutely a way to pull that off without SEEMING like a busybody.
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>>4521489
You kind of want to do both of those things
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>>4521489
>>You kind of want to do both of those things. There’s absolutely a way to pull that off without SEEMING like a busybody.
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>>4521489
>>You kind of want to do both of those things. There’s absolutely a way to pull that off without SEEMING like a busybody.

I know the obvious answer here is shadowc clones, but I'm imagining hiraishin hijinks where Naori teleports whenever Temari or Kankuro aren't looking
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>Kankuro evidently got a ‘gift’ from Sasori… you’d be curious to know more about that situation, if he’ll tell you.

Stop being a busybody.
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>>4521489
>You REALLY want to do both of those things. There’s absolutely a way to pull that off without SEEMING like a busybody.
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>>4521489
>Kankuro evidently got a ‘gift’ from Sasori… you’d be curious to know more about that situation, if he’ll tell you.
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>>4521489
>>You kind of want to do both of those things. There’s absolutely a way to pull that off without SEEMING like a busybody.
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Ours clan is showing with this pick.
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Some interesting things have happened in Sunagakure from the sound of it, and you’re curious enough about them to get involved in both of those interesting things. But you can already predict how things will go if you get too involved… if Temari wanted a few pointers in how to use a sword properly she need only have asked you, but she hasn’t.

Ajisai needed your encouragement. Unlike the ninja of Konohagakure who Nagato killed and then revived on the same day, she was dead enough for the people she knew to grieve, to come to terms with the loss, and to reconstruct their lives without her in them. And tomorrow, after she’s learned the cloth-binding method you’re going to teach her how to use the paper tags she keeps sealed away on her person to do her own version of it… not just because it could prove very effective, but because it’s a way to rekindle a relationship. To show that you can still learn from each other, and push each other to be better, like you did at the academy.

To show that you do want her in your life again.

Temari on the other hand doesn’t need any encouragement from you. She’s too proud to cast herself in the role of kōhai, and romantic or not, your fondness towards her would make you seem like a rather patronizing sensei. You’d be willing to bet that she knows that already, and that in refusing to ask for your help she’s avoiding a situation that might make her resent you.

Then there’s Kankurō, who basically has never liked you and probably never will. It’s possible that the guy knows his sister has a crush on you, and it’s also possible that as a natural puppet-user he’s just far more cautious than his other siblings. Or it could be that he’s still mad that you never apologized after taunting him for playing with toys in his pajamas… which to be fair, you haven’t retracted because it’s still substantively true.

But then again, if his new puppet really is Sasori-han’s work Kankurō is likely to have questions for you… your understanding is that Sasori-han left him for dead the one time they ever met, so he’d have very little reason to trust a gift from his senpai.

“Gaara-han,” you smile pleasantly upon returning to his office. “Could you do me a favor?”

“That depends entirely on the favor,” he admits.

“Could you offer to let me stay for dinner?”

Gaara looks at you in momentary confusion. “If you’d like to stay for dinner, you may?”

“Thank you,” you reply with a curt nod. “I think you’ll understand why.”
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>>4521489
After spending some time in Rōran together with Fū, Karin, and Yugitō, who queen Sāra seems increasingly fond of, you go your separate ways. Fū, Karin, and Yugitō all remain at Sāra and Sēryū’s insistence while you return to Sunagakure and replace the shadow clone you left to mill about in your place.



“What are you doing here?” Kankurō asks you curtly.

“Gaara-han invited me,” you tell him. “Isn’t that right?”

“That is true,” Gaara admits.

“I’ll get the dishes out,” you muse thoughtfully.



“So...” you muse. “How are things going?”

“I’ve been...” Temari begins awkwardly, taking a breath. “I’ve been working on my kenjutsu. I’ve had the Hishō Shōken for a while, but before that I never really learned much taijutsu beyond the basics.”

“And?”

Temari frowns. “And what?”

“And how’re you doing?” you clarify.

“It’s… coming along,” she offers hesitantly. “Slowly.”

“So yeah, good then,” you shrug, carving off a bite of roasted game-hen. “So long as your technique is solid, you’ll improve at your own pace.”

“And, can I ask what your ‘own pace’ looked like?”

You shake your head and smile. “I’ll tell you when I’m done.”

As you’re offering just about as much advice and encouragement to Temari as it’s wise to, Gaara is focused more on Kankurō. “Are you going to mention it, or should I?”

Kankurō frowns. “So I got a puppet a few days ago, and we think it was made by Sasori of the Red Sand. You know anything about that?”

“Yeah no, nothing specific,” you admit. “I know he survived the fight with Elder Chiyo and Sakura-kun by transferring his core to a different puppet.”

“So he is alive...” Kankurō grumbles. “Bet you’ve been having a laugh behind our backs this whole time, haven’t you? Where is he now!”
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“No clue,” you shrug dismissively. “Out there, somewhere, apparently tinkering. This puppet he sent you… was it one of his human puppets?”

“No,” Kankurō replies curtly.

“Then I don’t see what the problem is,” you shrug. “If he stopped making human puppets I’d say just leave the guy alone.”

“Of course you would,” Kankurō grumbles, crossing his arms. “He was your teammate, wasn’t he? Your buddy? Your pal?”

>He left Akatsuki before I did. So far as I was concerned at the time I was fine with that outcome.
>We had a good working relationship. He respected my ability, I respected his experience. That’s it.
>In a sense he was my senpai. He and I butted heads over methods though, sometimes.
>Other?
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>>4522691
>We had a good working relationship. He respected my ability, I respected his experience. That’s it.
>In a sense he was my senpai. He and I butted heads over methods though, sometimes.
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>>4522691
>>We had a good working relationship. He respected my ability, I respected his experience. That’s it.
>>In a sense he was my senpai. He and I butted heads over methods though, sometimes.
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>>4522691
>We had a good working relationship. He respected my ability, I respected his experience. That’s it.
>In a sense he was my senpai. He and I butted heads over methods though, sometimes.
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>>4522691
>>We had a good working relationship. He respected my ability, I respected his experience. That’s it.
>>In a sense he was my senpai. He and I butted heads over methods though, sometimes.
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>>4522691
>We had a good working relationship. He respected my ability, I respected his experience. That’s it.
>In a sense he was my senpai. He and I butted heads over methods though, sometimes.
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>>4522691
>>We had a good working relationship. He respected my ability, I respected his experience. That’s it.
>>In a sense he was my senpai. He and I butted heads over methods though, sometimes.
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>>4522691
“In a sense he was like my senpai in the organization,” you shrug, before taking a sip of cool water. “Sure, we butted heads sometimes over methods, but yeah, no, at the end of the day he respected my ability and convictions, and I respected his experience.”

“If you want to spin that as me still being your enemy somehow go for it, you’re entitled to your wrong opinion.”

You don’t have any firsthand experience with this of course, nor does anyone you know really when you think about it, but Kankurō responds with a look that you’d imagine an eight-year-old would give his father after a good scolding.

Somebody in this family has to be suspicious of you,” Kankurō grumbles.

After a few moments, you return to the subject. “So yeah, what sort of puppet did he send you?”

Kankurō glances at Gaara, who nods. “If she was partnered with him, she may have some answers for you.”

“Alright then,” Kankurō nods curtly. “It has a human form, but it’s made from ordinary materials with plates of hanaseki porcelain over certain key areas. It also has a number of weapons I can’t quite figure out, since they don’t match up with either the Black Secret that most modern puppeteers use or the White Secret that Elder Chiyō uses.”

“Sasori-han used what he called the ‘Red Secret’,” you explain with a frown. “Describe the weapons.”

“Some of them I can figure out,” Kankurō explains. “In its right arm are two devices, one a tube with sealing script covering it, the other an expanding chakra shield like what Elder Chiyō keeps in her prosthetic.”

“The tube probably either shoots high-pressure water jets or flames,” you explain. “Two of Sasori-han’s favorites.”

“So you do know something about his designs?” Kankurō narrows his eyes. “Those are familiar, we’ve studied the puppet body he left behind. One setting shoots water jets, the other produces an electric charge.”

“You were testing me?”

“That’s right. More unusual are the chain launchers and the poisoned shuriken launchers, both of which are weapons he never used to use, and the sealing tags placed all over it. The latter is what we haven’t been able to figure out.”

You have a hunch. “Kankurō-han, this puppet wouldn’t happen to be styled as a red-haired woman?”

Kankurō frowns. “How could you know that?”
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“Yeah no, it’s me,” you observe. “I asked Sasori-han once if he intended to make a human puppet out of me and he said no… he thought it would be disrespectful. So instead he tried to create a traditional puppet that mimicked me, to a degree. It’s probably both a powerful tool for you, the top of this generation’s puppeteers, and a message to me.”

“What kind of message?” Temari wonders aloud. “Also that’s seriously creepy.”

“Probably an indication that he’s considered what I told him about his human puppets,” you guess. “That even if they preserve a body’s abilities, they can’t reflect a person’s soul.”

“Instead, he’s created a puppet the old-fashioned way… showcasing his artistry, empowered by his cleverness, and communicating his intent. Creepy or not, I have to admit it’s a gratifying end to our conversations.”

“And you read all this from his one action?” Gaara muses.

You nod curtly. “That, and I know the only other time Sasori-han did something like this, mimicking a specific person without using the human puppet technique.”

“That’s ‘Mother’ and ‘Father’, isn’t it?” Kankurō realizes.

“His own parents...” Temari’s gaze drops to a spot on the table just past her plate.

“That is how you read his intent,” Gaara nods thoughtfully. “Then I’ve decided… I won’t renew the bounty on Sasori’s head. At least, not just yet.”

“Don’t get me wrong,” you admit with a wry grin. “I don’t think for one minute he won’t kill anyone who came after him, so it’s probably a wise decision. Whatever his artistic sensibilities are right now, Sasori-han can only ever be Sasori-han.”

>That’s enough serious talk for now. Just end things a little more pleasantly then be on your way.
>Mention ‘tachikaze’ to Temari. It’s NOT widely known but it seems relevant to her interests.
>Ask Gaara how things are going… assuming he’s allowed to talk about it at the table.
>Other?
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>>Mention ‘tachikaze’ to Temari. It’s NOT widely known but it seems relevant to her interests.
then
>That’s enough serious talk for now. Just end things a little more pleasantly then be on your way.
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>>4524116
>Mention ‘tachikaze’ to Temari. It’s NOT widely known but it seems relevant to her interests.
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>>4524116
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>>4524117
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>>4524116
>Mention ‘tachikaze’ to Temari. It’s NOT widely known but it seems relevant to her interests.
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“… I do have one last thing to say,” you muse, “at least, work-related. Temari, do you know the term ‘tachikaze’?”

“As in ‘sword-wind’ you mean?” she asks.

You nod curtly. “Yes.”

She shrugs. “I can guess? Tell me.”

“It’s a word for the sound that a sword makes when you swing it,” you explain, “when the bo’hi disturbs the air. So yeah, I know that the Hishō Shōken don’t have bo’hi, but the principles should be similar… do with that what you will.”

“You used that?” Temari muses. “How?”

“As a medium for genjutsu,” you explain. “I just learned about it myself, and figured it might interest you.”

“You’re right,” Temari admits. “That is an interesting thought… I have to admit, you know a lot more than I do about kenjutsu… more so than I even realized.”

“I’m an expert with swords,” you shrug, “you’re an expert with fans. But even if just to a small degree they’re not completely different, at least.”

“I should have just swallowed my damn pride asked you,” Temari sighs. “But thanks for not pushing the issue.”

“Not a problem,” you insist. “I knew you had your reasons.”

“Too bad they’re not any better,” she sighs.

“Reasons are reasons,” you shrug. “So, dessert?”



After a dessert of silky-smooth peach jelly, you offer to help with the dishes.

“I assume you’ll be leaving soon?”

Temari is washing dishes in the sink next to you, but it’s clear that she’s thinking about something else as she does.

“So yeah, people are counting on me to get them home,” you admit.

“You could have a shadow clone do that, you know,” she points out.

“That’s true of course. But the things that you really care about you should do yourself. Would you be happy if you realized you’d gotten the clone?”

“… no,” she admits. “Probably not.”
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“You’re my friend,” you admit. “I’d even say a closer friend than most. But yeah, no, I’ve practically adopted Fū and Karin… and after I take my ‘sisters’ home I’ll be visiting Konan-sensei in the hospital.”

“Your sensei was hurt?” Temari frowns. “This is the woman in Akatsuki, right?”

You nod curtly. “Formerly. Obito created an opportunity to interrogate her with genjutsu… she barely survived. Tsuna-han is treating her.”

“That I can understand,” Temari admits. “Actually, knowing that now I think I’d lose some respect for you if you stayed.”

“Thanks for understanding,” you bow politely. “See you later.”



Sāra and Sēryū, as something like an adoptive sister and niece to you, also understand your reasons for not wanting to stick around through the evening. With a promise to do so later, maybe over board games and cocoa some evening, you excuse yourself and teleport the others back to the hideout. Before you turn around for Konohagakure, Karin catches your attention on the patio.

“All three of us are a bit concerned, Naori,” she tells you quietly. “Could you please promise to try to come back and get some actual sleep tonight? Even you can’t keep going at this pace.”

>You plan to go personally, maybe freshen up her room. Doing so personally is the best way to put yourself more at ease.
>You’ll stay there a little while, but you intend to leave a shadow clone there. That should cut the stress involved.
>This, a shadow clone can probably do. The odds that she’ll wake up tonight aren’t high, and you need to take care of yourself.
>Other?
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>>4525690
>>This, a shadow clone can probably do. The odds that she’ll wake up tonight aren’t high, and you need to take care of yourself.
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>>4525690
>You plan to go personally, maybe freshen up her room. Doing so personally is the best way to put yourself more at ease.
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>>4525690
>You’ll stay there a little while, but you intend to leave a shadow clone there. That should cut the stress involved.
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>>4525690
>You plan to go personally, maybe freshen up her room. Doing so personally is the best way to put yourself more at ease.

Using shadow clones now wouldn't be appropriate
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>>4525690
>You plan to go personally, maybe freshen up her room. Doing so personally is the best way to put yourself more at ease.
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>>4525690
>>You plan to go personally, maybe freshen up her room. Doing so personally is the best way to put yourself more at ease.
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>>4525690
This, as you just an hour or so ago suggested to Temari, is something that’s better done in person. And if you’re being honest with yourself, your mind wouldn’t be at ease unless you did so… sending a clone couldn’t relieve your worry until it returned. So that’s why you teleport to the hiraishin marking you left in Konan-sensei’s room, finding it dark. You switch on a table lamp and work by that dim light.

You brought incense for the occasion, and it fills the room with a gently-sweet fragrance before the smoke filters out through the window that you leave open just by the width of your finger. As the incense burns you take a little time to wash your sense’s face and hands, and to put just a little bit of aloe on her hands and lips to keep them from drying out too badly. It’s all these little details that you came here specifically to see to, understanding that the staff of the hospital have no time for such things considering how much else they already do.

Once you’ve done this, you spend some time just sitting in the room with her, doing your own work. While in sage mode, you begin the time-intensive process of creating more powerful Shiyō Kibaku shuriken from sealing paper. Your seal produces five explosive tags at a time, meaning that your typical version explodes once, then five times, then twenty-five times, for a total of thirty-one explosions. That’s more than sufficient to kill or wound an entire four-man squad, especially if you use your chakra control to delay the explosions and spread the tags around a little rather than forcing them all to go off the second they’re unsealed. At that level you don’t even really NEED to prepare them in advance.

But for the purposes of countering Obito’s close-range Kamui they won’t be sufficient. A fourth level of sealing adds another hundred and twenty-five explosions, a fifth adds six hundred, a sixth adds three thousand. This is where you decide to stop… creating three thousand, seven hundred and fifty-six explosive tags is an insane amount of effort even by your standards, leaving you feeling very tired after forming just one such weapon. But given your naturally fast recovery rate and your use of senjutsu chakra, and factoring in the use of shadow clones, you can probably prepare three of these a day while still functioning at the level the fledgling alliance and your own unit deserve.

In a prolonged battle you could probably use it three times so long as it’s not consecutively, but preparing beforehand should mean you’ll never need to… in fact, short of using these against tailed beasts or Obito it’s hard to even suggest a use for them.

“But Obito’s reason enough,” you grumble to yourself.

Then you step out, and sit against the wall by the door to her room. “You could have come in.”
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“I didn’t think it would be appropriate,” Kakashi-han admits quietly. “I imagine you’ve been blaming yourself, at least a little bit, for what… Obito… did.”

“Yeah,” you admit. “And I can guess you feel the same.”

He nods once. “I once told Naruto-kun, Sasuke-kun, and Sakura-kun something, that ‘shinobi who abandon their comrades are worse than trash’. Those weren’t my own words… those were Obito’s words to me.”

“The sharingan can change people as it matures,” you sigh. “My understanding is that he fully intended to die on the day he gave you his eye, and that you had no reason to believe he had survived. So yeah, no, what happened to him after that isn’t your fault.”

After a moment, Kakashi seems to relax slightly. “You know, your sensei told me something similar.”

“Speaking of whom,” you muse, “why are you here? This job could be done by chūnin.”

“I volunteered,” Kakashi admits.

“So I guess that means my ‘feminine intuition’ was correct?” you smile.

After a moment, Kakashi acknowledges defeat. “How would you feel if it were?”

“Yeah no, nobody’s ‘good enough’ for Konan-sensei,” you frown, only to replace that frown with a smirk. “But I think you come close enough. So yeah, I’d be happy for both of you… even if it’s really none of my business either way.”

“I think I can understand why Konan-san speaks so highly of you,” Kakashi-han replies thoughtfully. “If you were just highly skilled she wouldn’t consider you as being like family. No… that sort of affection and respect you had to earn.”

“Sensei is very subtle sometimes,” you admit. “I knew that. But it’s still nice to hear… and it’s good to know you’ll be on guard. I’ll sleep a lot easier.”



It’s two days before Konan-sensei wakes up… and thankfully you happen to be there when she does.

After orienting herself, she asks you the obvious question. “How long?”

“Three days,” you tell her.

>Apologize, and explain why it was that you were unable to come to her aid.
>Ask her what Obito was looking for, and whether she thinks he got it.
>Neither of those matter. What’s important is that she’ll be okay.
>Other?
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>Neither of those matter. What’s important is that she’ll be okay.
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>>4526852
>hug her you fool
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This and then
>Apologize, and explain why it was that you were unable to come to her aid.
>Neither of those matter. What’s important is that she’ll be okay.
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>>4526852
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>>4526852
>>Ask her what Obito was looking for, and whether she thinks he got it.
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Since she’s not sitting up yet it would be… inelegant to follow your initial instinct. So instead of trying to find some less awkward way to hug her you clasp her hand tightly in yours.

“Obito had me in a genjutsu,” you explain quietly, still holding her hand. “With Naruto-kun and two others… a whole simulated world we had to fight our way out of. That’s why I couldn’t be there the way I should’ve… I’m sorry, Konan-sensei.”

“Tearful apologies and pointless self-recrimination don’t suit you,” Konan mutters. “But your experience is troubling.”

“So yeah,” you muse, still holding her hand in both of yours. “It really does suggest he plans to make good on his threats, doesn’t it?”

“It also tells me that he isn’t ready yet,” Konan-sensei muses. “He needs something else to complete his plans… and that is why he attacked us the way he did.”

“I have to...”

You keep her from getting up… which takes very little effort on your part. “You have to recover sensei. Tsunade-han has been seeing to you, she should be here at some point. But please remember she was briefed on this three days ago.”

“He stole Nagato’s body,” Konan-sensei tells you. “That was what he was looking for.”

“Then you’ve confirmed what we assumed,” you reply. “So please try to think of yourself now?”

“You’re the last person I want to hear that from.”

“Yeah no, we’d be saying the same things if the situation was reversed,” you admit. “But in the end I’d listen to you because I’d know you were right.”

Konan-sensei sighs, and settles back into bed. “I hate this feeling.”

“I know,” you agree, finally releasing her hand. “I would too. I’ll let Tsunade-han know you’re awake… Kakashi-han too, if you want me to.”

“… that would be nice.”



After Tsunade checks on her patient she steps out of the room, and Kakashi-han steps in. Tsunade motions for you to sit on a chair across the hallway, and sits in the chair next to you herself.

“It’s going to take a while,” she admits. “This is a lot like the after-effects Kakashi-san suffered after being caught in Uchiha Itachi’s tsukuyomi. If you hadn’t disrupted Obito when you did, she might not be alive right now.”

“But as things stand...”
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“… it’s incredible that Konan-san is conscious after just three days,” Tsunade-han admits. “Kakashi-san was unconscious for a month before I began treatment, and it took him another week to regain consciousness. After that it took him three months to recover physically.”

“So yeah, do you have any idea of how long it will take for Konan-sensei to recover?” you wonder. “I mean, based on your experience?”

Tsunade-han shakes her head. “I can tell you that your sensei is a strong-willed woman, but on the other hand the genjutsu used on her was stronger than the one used on Kakashi-san. Unless I’m mistaken, it was Obito whose genjutsu killed the previous Mizukage, Yagura?”

“That’s my understanding.”

“Then this is a dangerous man,” Tsunade reminds you, “with dangerous abilities. I have to ask you to remain vigilant. You are after all responsible for one of the three remaining jinchūriki, essentially by yourself.”

>I have a solid plan to kill Obito, but I’ll need Kakashi and his kamui backing me up to be totally sure it will work.
>I’d like your permission to move into Konohagakure. I’m confident, but backup would be nice to have close at hand.
>Obito may have failed, but that just means he’ll probably send Kisame next. I think we need to discuss our security.
>Other?
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>>4528034
>>I’d like your permission to move into Konohagakure. I’m confident, but backup would be nice to have close at hand.
>>Obito may have failed, but that just means he’ll probably send Kisame next. I think we need to discuss our security.
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>>4528034
>>Obito may have failed, but that just means he’ll probably send Kisame next. I think we need to discuss our security
I don't think moving into a major shinobi village is the play here
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>>4528034
>Obito may have failed, but that just means he’ll probably send Kisame next. I think we need to discuss our security.

>>4528057
Yeah, we're better off using the hiraishin to create new bases at extremely long distances from eachother.
Maybe have tsunade send courier ninjas carrying markers in every direction, planting them at distances that are impossible to travel in just a week.
Then, we move once a week, never going to the same hideout more than once.
And of course, the couriers should believe they're delivering a message rather than a marker.
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>>4528034
>>Obito may have failed, but that just means he’ll probably send Kisame next. I think we need to discuss our security.
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Does Naori have any fuinjutsu for protecting an area from unwanted intruders? Or at least warn when someone is intruding? I thought she did, but now I can't remember if she did that for Konan's room.

Add to the list of cool stuff to do: work out a way with senjutsu or something to allow us to perceive the area around hiraishin markings so we can check for nasty surprises or just keep tabs on a distant location.

This has been an insomniac's loopy rambling. We now return you to your regularly scheduled quest thread.
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>>4528215
She can sense the areas around her hiraishin markings, and can create barrier ninjutsu. It's just that it's rare for her to encounter a need to use barriers on the fly, so the only time she really relies on that skill is in setting up hideouts.
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>>4528034
>Obito may have failed, but that just means he’ll probably send Kisame next. I think we need to discuss our security.
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>>4528034
>>Obito may have failed, but that just means he’ll probably send Kisame next. I think we need to discuss our security.
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>>4528034
>Obito may have failed, but that just means he’ll probably send Kisame next. I think we need to discuss our security.
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>>4528034
“While Obito may have failed this time,” you frown, “that just means he’ll probably be sending Hoshigaki Kisame next. So yeah… I think we need to discuss our security strategy.”

“I have a meeting scheduled with the Raikage this evening,” Tsunade explains to you. “He plans to be here with the eight-tails jinchūriki and an armed escort. I was going to invite you to attend.”

“That’s what I had in mind,” you admit. “So I’ll be there. Your office?”

“My office,” Tsunade confirms. “At seven.”



After updating your sensei, and confirming that your eyes weren’t fooling you when you saw a little chemistry between her and Kakashi-sensei, you send a clone to your hideout to inform Yugitō, Fū, Ajisai, and Karin about the meeting this evening. Once those details have been taken care of you take to the streets for a nice, relaxing walk to release the tension you’ve been building up over the last few days as Konan has been in the hospital.

As you pass the academy you become aware of someone following you, and so you lead the unknown person around several corners in a zig-zag to be sure.

Finally, near the entrance to a small wooded park a child… no, you remember his face. This is Sakura’s replacement on Team 7 from the chūnin exams held in Amegakure?

“Why have you been following me?” you frown.

“My name is Sarutobi Konohamaru, grandson of the Third Hokage and Naruto-niisan’s favorite pupil!” he declares. “Accept my challenge!”

“Why?” you ask curtly.

“I don’t have to give my reasons!” he insists. “Do you accept my challenge nor not?”

“And I don’t have time for this,” you yawn. “I could be doing something productive like taking a nap, or shopping for clothes.”

“Fine then!” Konohamaru insists, “I’ll just have to make you take me seriously!”

He leaps into the air, weaving hand signs for some sort of fire-release ninjutsu. “Katon: Haisekishō!”

You’ve seen him use this before, so you already know what to do when the gunpowder ash cloud starts to expand towards you. You toss a trio of origami shuriken with rasengans sealed inside them, and use those to disperse the cloud before Konohamaru can set fire to it. You could have used an exploding tag to blow the whole cloud up before it reached you and blast it back at the brat, but you’re not entirely sure he could survive that.

After landing wide-eyed at your near-perfect counter of his technique, he throws a handful of shuriken and weaves the signs for another technique you already know. “Shuriken Kagebunshin!”
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You could just step out of the way of course, but there’s no need for that. Instead you unseal one of the less-used tools you keep stored away in your palms: a wooden training sword. Just by flowing chakra around it and rotating it, you find that you’re able to effectively shield yourself from this level of attack. Which isn’t to say you’d ever rely on it… the Kongō Fūsa could do the same but better. But then again, using that would be more than a little bit overkill.

It could also make him think he’d made you take him seriously, which as anyone who’s seen you fight could attest you’re absolutely not.

By the time the shuriken have been dealt with Konohamaru has moved on to full-body shadow clones, about thirty of them if your quick count is correct, all wielding kunai. These you dispel almost effortlessly, his own taijutsu being woefully inadequate for the task. His best chance is to get in close and try to take your weapon from you, but you know this as well as he does and so you’re ready to counter his attempts with various weapon retention techniques taught as a part of aikidō, as well as infighting techniques borrowed from the samurai.

As many clones go down to simple elbow strikes, kicks, and throws as swings and pokes from your wooden sword. Not one manages to hand anything remotely resembling a hit, and you still haven’t actually made an attack of your own.

Finally, a last act of desperation: a rasengan that he still needs a clone’s help to perform. It’s actually fairly powerful if you remember, but not nearly powerful enough or fast enough to be a threat. And so you form your own rasengan in your left hand and counter his, the technique disappearing before his astonished eyes.

“Yeah, no,” you muse. “If I ‘took you seriously’ that first move of yours would’ve been your last.”

>Kick him into a tree. He needs to learn the lesson, and he seems like the kind of idiot who won’t get that unless he can FEEL how outclassed he is.
>Seal him using the paper style wrapping Ajisai learned a few days ago, leaving his head uncovered. Humiliate him a little, then hand him over to his sensei.
>Just bop him on the head with your sword and walk away. He’s acting like a spoiled brat, so it’s best to just treat him like one and deprive him of the attention.
>Other?
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>>4529699
>>Kick him into a tree. He needs to learn the lesson, and he seems like the kind of idiot who won’t get that unless he can FEEL how outclassed he is.
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>>4529699
>Kick him into a tree. He needs to learn the lesson, and he seems like the kind of idiot who won’t get that unless he can FEEL how outclassed he is.

Shits about to get real and this childish attitude of his is going to get him and his team killed. A bruised ego and a few broken bones now to realize his stupidity is better than him realizing it with everyone he knows dead and a kunai through his heart.
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>>4529699
>>Seal him using the paper style wrapping Ajisai learned a few days ago, leaving his head uncovered. Humiliate him a little, then hand him over to his sensei.
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>>4529699
>Just bop him on the head with your sword and walk away. He’s acting like a spoiled brat, so it’s best to just treat him like one and deprive him of the attention.
Act like a brat, get treated like a brat. If he tries to push this further though, an object lesson will be in order.
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>>4529699
>"You've got a long way to go, kid."
>Just bop him on the head with your sword and walk away. He’s acting like a spoiled brat, so it’s best to just treat him like one and deprive him of the attention.
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>>4529699
>>Kick him into a tree. He needs to learn the lesson, and he seems like the kind of idiot who won’t get that unless he can FEEL how outclassed he is.
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>>4529699
>>Kick him into a tree. He needs to learn the lesson, and he seems like the kind of idiot who won’t get that unless he can FEEL how outclassed he is.

Talk shit get hit
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>>4529699
>Other

Just hit him with a basic, non-sharingan genjutsu that'll make him think he's still fighting you and possibly shake him up a little. Leave.

Optionally, if we care enough, leave behind a shadow clone to inquire and get to the bottom of what this is really about and/or give him false hope that he can try again.
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>>4529699
>Kick him into a tree. He needs to learn the lesson, and he seems like the kind of idiot who won’t get that unless he can FEEL how outclassed he is.
>Put a sealing tag that reads: "I'm a spoiled brat" on his head just for good measure.
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>>4529699
>>Seal him using the paper style wrapping Ajisai learned a few days ago, leaving his head uncovered. Humiliate him a little, then hand him over to his sensei.
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>>4529699
>Just bop him on the head with your sword and walk away. He’s acting like a spoiled brat, so it’s best to just treat him like one and deprive him of the attention.

"By the time the shuriken have been dealt with Konohamaru has moved on to full-body shadow clones, about thirty of them if your quick count is correct"
Holy shit how much chakra does this guy have wtf
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>>4530086
He is a Sarutobi, so a lot by most people's standards. But not even at the level of Naruto during the chunin exams arc.

His main advantage compared to Naruto is that he actually has talents that go beyond rasengans, shadow clones, and chakra boosts.
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>>4529699
>Just bop him on the head with your sword and walk away. He’s acting like a spoiled brat, so it’s best to just treat him like one and deprive him of the attention.
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>>4529699
>>Kick him into a tree. He needs to learn the lesson, and he seems like the kind of idiot who won’t get that unless he can FEEL how outclassed he is.
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>>4529699
>Just bop him on the head with your sword and walk away. He’s acting like a spoiled brat, so it’s best to just treat him like one and deprive him of the attention.

Teaching him a lesson or not, the village probably should have as many Shinobi fighting fit as possible.
That and we really need the rest.
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Well he was good enough to fight a path of pain as a genin, but damn.
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>>4530423
If you can call it a fight. That Path was separated from the others, standing perfectly still facing a wall like an idiot, because Nagato just didn't see this kid as a threat. He may as well have had a sign on his ass saying "insert rasengan here".

For me, the takeaway is Nagato got sloppy when he couldn't cheese the shared fields of vision.
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>>4530532
Makes sense
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>>4529699
It’s just a simple kick, but it sends the poor dumb kid slamming into one of the trees at the edge of the nearby park, where he slumps to the ground: a distance of some thirty feet, and he’d have gone further if it weren’t for the tree.

… you may need to reconsider what “holding back” actually looks like for you.

His two teammates come running out from the nearby alleyway where they’ve been watching from, shouting his name as they run past you. Then they put themselves, hesitantly, between you and their teammate.

“So yeah,” you frown, “would either of you care to tell me what this was about?”

“You… you big bully!” the girl protests angrily… though she’s also clearly terrified.

“Y-yeah!” the dopey-looking boy jumps in, though he can barely bring himself to stand between you and your idiot attacker. And of course, that one interjection doesn’t actually go anywhere.

You can’t help but sigh, leaning your wooden sword against your shoulder. “I asked the brat what this was about and his answer was to try to blow me up. If he were an adult he wouldn’t have gotten off so easily…”

“You… weren’t fighting me seriously?” Konohamaru wheezes, trying to force himself back to his knees at least.

“What adult would fight seriously against children?” you counter. “Even if you’re a Sarutobi like Hiruzen-tono, and even if you can use the rasengan like me and Naruto can, you’re still just a bratty kid.”

“You take that back!” he shouts. “I could fight out there just as well as anyone else can!”

So that’s what it’s about.

“Why did you become a shinobi?”

Konohamaru seems taken aback. “What do you mean?”

“Yeah no, it’s a simple question,” you frown. “Why did you become a shinobi?”

“… because of my grandpa.”

“You respected him?”

“A lot,” Konohamaru admits.

“Why did he become a shinobi?”

“… to protect the village?”

“Don’t ask me,” you insist sternly. “Answer me.”

“He talked about the village, and the villagers, like they were his family. He wanted to protect them.”
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>>4531031
“Tsunade-han decided that you’d be staying here, didn’t she?” you guess.

Konohamaru nods.

“Then for real, start acting like a shinobi and complete your mission,” you glare at him. “Or is protecting the village Hiruzen-tono gave his life for so far beneath you?”

He winces, in a way that you doubt he’d have done even if you actually struck him.

“No.”

“Good,” you nod curtly, re-sealing your training sword. “Go get yourself cleaned up, you’re a mess.”

Before you walk away, you make a single admission. “Some day you may become a man worth my time, so try not to get yourself killed before that day comes, Konohamaru-kun.”



After he and his friends slink away, having been thoroughly chastised, you sit at a nearby tea shop within sight of the park and order a cup with a wagashi. What it comes with is a skewer of candied ginger and lemon… very nice.

“Are you sure you weren’t too hard on him?”

Ayame-han takes a seat across from you with a slightly uncomfortable look on her face, and you wave to an attendant for a second cup of tea before addressing her concern.

“I’m sure,” you sigh wearily. “I couldn’t hold back much more than that without just letting all his attacks hit me.”

“Sometimes I forget how strong you are,” Ayame admits quietly. “The rumor is Konohamaru-kun took down one of Pain’s bodies.”

“Yeah no, that’s not impressive as it sounds,” you clarify. “You could kill me in my sleep, but that wouldn’t mean you could fight at the level I do.”

“I guess most of us who aren’t shinobi don’t really understand a lot of what goes on,” Ayame shakes her head. “Honestly, we only know what the Hokage or jōnin are willing to tell us, and I know we don’t get the whole story most of the time.”

“So tell me, if you can… what was it like to fight against Pain?”

>Fighting against him was easier than I anticipated, but I underestimated how far he was willing to go out of spite.
>It’s rare that I have to take a fight seriously anymore… but ‘Pain’ deserved his reputation for overwhelming power.
>Just recount the events accurately, excluding the role of your reanimation technique. Try not to editorialize.
>Admit that you can’t tell her the full truth, and so you’d prefer not to lie to her by omission.
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>>4531092
>Just recount the events accurately, excluding the role of your reanimation technique. Try not to editorialize.
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>>4531092
>>Admit that you can’t tell her the full truth, and so you’d prefer not to lie to her by omission.


There are things people are better off not knowing. Suffice to say it was scary, but we were more concerned about the damage he could do to the people we care about than him.
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>>4531092
>just recount the events accurately, minus the reanimation, but admit you had to leave one thing out for security purposes
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>>4531092
>Just recount the events accurately, excluding the role of your reanimation technique. Try not to editorialize.
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>>4531092
>Just recount the events accurately, excluding the role of your reanimation technique. Try not to editorialize.
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>>4531092
>Just recount the events accurately, excluding the role of your reanimation technique. Try not to editorialize.
>Admit that you also used some forbidden techniques you aren't allowed to speak about
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>>4531092
>>Just recount the events accurately, excluding the role of your reanimation technique. Try not to editorialize.
>>4531148
This is good point too
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>>4531092
>Just recount the events accurately, excluding the role of your reanimation technique. Try not to editorialize.
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>>4531092
>>Just recount the events accurately, excluding the role of your reanimation technique. Try not to editorialize.
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“So, to tell you the truth...” you admit with a frown, “the Hokage has asked that I not discuss certain aspects of that fight. So yeah, that means I can’t tell you the whole truth. But I can at least offer you enough to begin to understand how I’ve been living lately.”

“That would be enough,” Ayame-han agrees, leaning closer over the table.

“Pain wasn’t his real name,” you begin. “His real name was Nagato, and he and my sensei were once orphans in our homeland. They founded Akatsuki as an organization dedicated to ending the civil war there, until they were almost entirely destroyed by an alliance between Hanzō the Salamander and… a certain politically-connected man in the Land of Fire. My father was among the dead.”

Ayame furrows her brow as you deliberately exclude Danzō’s name, though you’re certain that even for her it would be the reasonable assumption. So you continue.

“So Nagato-han possessed a dōjutsu called the rinnegan… my understanding is that it’s a primal precursor to all other dōjutsu including the sharingan and the byakugan. He himself was crippled fighting Hanzō as a teenager, so he wielded the rinnegan’s power through six corpses called ‘Paths’, each strong enough to kill an average jōnin.”

“How could he do something like that?

“Each Path had some abilities in common,” you continue to explain. “A shared field of vision, increased durability, and the ability to create black rods from chakra, each hard as steel. Nagato-han used those to control the Paths. In addition, each Path was given one of the rinnegan’s more exotic powers.”

“Nagato-han divided these into two groups; three specialized in combat, three in support. In the former group one specialized in pure attractive and repulsive forces… like magnet release but far stronger. One specialized in summoning techniques, and the third could create extraordinarily lethal weapons from its own body, like an undead puppet. Of the three support Paths two specialized in information gathering and interrogation, and the last could summon the King of Hell to fully restore any damaged Paths.”

“And the one Konohamaru-kun killed was one of the support Paths?” Ayame-han muses. “Wait, no… not ‘killed’, right?”

You nod. “No, yeah, you’re exactly right. Nagato-han just restored that one afterwards and then I had to fight it… alongside the others.”

“That was the rumor,” Ayame admits. “That you fought a bunch of the Pains.”

“That rumor is true,” you insist quietly. “And I was winning. But he managed to escape by withdrawing the Animal Path, which specializes in summoning… he teleported the other Paths to safety so he could use his most powerful Path to destroy the village.”
>1/?
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>>4532309
“I tried,” you sigh, recalling the feeling again. “I tried so hard… but none of my techniques were designed to stop an attack like that. I can protect myself and those immediately around me, and if it was a single mass of chakra I could have teleported it out of the village. But no… all I could do was protect as much as I could.”

“I… can’t explain what it’s like to be able to feel nearly three thousand people dying all at once. And I’d never want anyone else to know either.”

“But… it turned out okay in the end,” Ayame observes quietly.

“I could’ve killed Pain,” you admit. “It would have been hard, but I know it’s true. And I also know that even together Sasuke-kun and Naruto-kun would have had trouble doing the same. But I was counting on Naruto-kun to save Nagato-han instead… while I helped in that, it’s mostly because of Naruto-kun that nobody who was killed that day stayed dead.”

“And that’s the truth… at least, in as much detail as I can give you.”

“What I’m hearing is that regardless of what Lord Danzō tried to insist,” Ayame eventually replies, “you are a hero who helped save our village and everyone in it. And I want you to know how grateful those of us who do know that are to you.”

“You don’t need to thank me,” you insist. “It wasn’t all that heroic… all I did was what I thought was right.”

“And that’s what a hero is to me,” Ayame insists with a smile. “Someone who does what they know is right even if it’s dangerous, or thankless… I think that’s always been who you are, it’s just now that people are starting to see it.”

“Ayame-han...” you begin, almost at a loss for what to say. “I...”

“Gero.”

You falter.

“Gero?” you repeat.

From the floor, a toad about the size of a housecat hops onto the table. “Gero gero.”

You stare at it with a frown. “What are you doing here, toad?”

“Gero.”

As it hops towards the top of your head, you unseal a hiraishin-marked kunai that embeds itself point-first into the table in front of Ayame-han, who responds with a surprised yelp at the sudden blur of activity.

“Hang onto this for me,” you sigh. “I’m probably about to...”
>2/3
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>>4532488
“… teleport,” you finish the thought with a sigh as your surroundings change to a small hut… somewhere. “Well that’s a thing that happened.”

“Ah, so this is the shrike girl!” a new toad greets you… he looks vaguely familiar, and very old. “I only got a quick look at you the last time… really quite stunning. Reminds me of Kushina-kun and Mito-kun!”

“So this is the girl?” another old toad with strange, curly blue hair, muses. Her voice sounds female but… honestly, it’s hard for you to tell. “She has a bit of a meaner look about her than Kushina-kun ever did.”

“Yeah no, maybe,” you muse, letting your body take in natural energy and entering sage mode even as you speak, “it’s because I’m a little annoyed? Usually it’s considered polite to invite your guests rather than abducting them while they’re having tea with a friend.”

“You could leave now if you were that offended,” the first toad muses. “You have the hiraishin technique.”

“But you’d just send another toad after me later,” you reply. “Or am I wrong about that?”

“No, you’re not wrong,” the toad admits. “I am Fukusaku, but you can just call me ‘Pa’. It’s what everyone else does.”

“Except for Naruto-chan,” the other toad adds. “He just calls us both the geezer toads… I’m Shima, but you can just call me ‘Ma’ if you’d like.”

You gesture for them to continue. “So… why am I here?”

“The great honorable geezer requested it,” Pa informs you dutifully. “Seems he’s had a prophecy and it involves you this time.”

“It wasn’t that hard to figure out who he meant,” Ma adds. “All the sage clans know about you.”

>… I’m not going to meet with some geezer like this, honorable or otherwise.
>Ask me properly.
>Alright, I’ll bite. I already know a little about Gamamaru-tono’s prophecies.
>Other?
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>>4532556
>Alright, I’ll bite. I already know a little about Gamamaru-tono’s prophecies.
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>>4532556
>>Ask me properly.
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>>4532556
>>Alright, I’ll bite. I already know a little about Gamamaru-tono’s prophecies.
*sigh* cause Ayame will have to wait for us ... again ....
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>>4532556
>Ask me properly.
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>>4532556
>Alright, I’ll bite. I already know a little about Gamamaru-tono’s prophecies.

This is a pain but we might as well go over this.
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>>4532556
>Ask me properly.
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>>4532556
>>Ask me properly.
Gotta keep up the feud between frogs and shrikes
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>>4532556
>>Alright, I’ll bite. I already know a little about Gamamaru-tono’s prophecies.
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>>4532556
>Alright, I’ll bite. I already know a little about Gamamaru-tono’s prophecies.
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>>4532556
“I know a little about Gamamaru-tono’s prophecies,” you sigh, “so I’ll hear him out… on one condition.”

“You’ve been offered a prophecy of the future by the great honorable geezer,” Fukusaku-tono frowns, furrowing his incredibly bushy brows, “and you’re trying to attach a condition to it? Whatever for!?”

“I am Naori,” you declare sternly, “of the Uzumaki clan, sage and ally of the Shrike clan of the forest. I go where I am needed, I follow my own conscience, and I listen to those whom I respect. I am not a child to be taken lightly, nor am I luggage to be transported back and forth across the world at the whims of the toads, prophecy or no.”

“You are strangers to me and I am your guest,” you insist. “So yeah, Fukusaku-tono, you should either speak to me with common civility or not at all. The choice is yours.”

“Hmmm...” Fukusaku-tono strokes the area below his mouth that you guess you can define as his chin.

“Well, I never!” Shima-tono tuts indignantly in your direction.

“No, Ma,” Fukusaku-tono eventually admits. “I think she’s got a point… she’s a shrike contractor through and through, so it’s only natural she’d be different from Naruto-chan and Jiraiya-chan. You know how they are… very polite, but not exactly forgiving of slights.”

“Now Pa, you know we meant no disrespect,” Shima-tono insists.

“I know that,” Fukusaku-tono agrees, “but we’re still the hosts here, and it’s our job to make sure we treat our guest right.”

Then he inclines his head politely, a move that his wife reluctantly matches. “Sorry for the way we brought ya here, Naori… -san. Our clan’s not exactly the most formal in the world, and I can’t even remember the last time we brought another clan’s contractor here. So I’d like to offer you the chance to hear what the old geezer saw about your future. I think it could be important.”

“Thank you for the offer,” you incline your head politely. “And for making the effort. By all means, lead me there.”



The two old toads lead you out of their home and through the bizarre land that is Mount Myōboku, with garishly-colored plant life and giant bugs everywhere, along with the most bizarre assortment of amphibians you’ve ever seen. But beneath the veneer which makes it hard to take seriously, you sense the same powerful natural energy as you’re led to what looks like a temple. But instead of being in the air, you sense that it’s concentrated in the plants, and most notably in the water.
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>>4533680
Inside you meet with a massive toad, eyes barely opened to see you with, and a massive formal hat not unlike those you’ve seen old daimyō depicted as wearing. On a bead necklace around his neck you see the same character for “oil” that Jiraiya once wore.

Fukusaku-tono and Shima-tono leap to the tops of smaller platforms to his left and right sides.

“Oho!” the ancient toad muses. “So you’ve finally come… you… who are you again?”

“This is the sage-girl from the shrike clan!” Fukusaku-tono insists curtly. “Remember you senile old geezer, she’s the one you asked to speak to!”

Then Fukusaku-tono clears his throat. “Sorry about that, Naori-san. Please try to remember that the toad you’re speaking to is over a thousand years old… so his mind tends to wander a bit, back and forth as it were.”

“Yes,” Gamamaru-tono replies thoughtfully. “This time I was thinking about the past, but I remember now: I asked you here to speak with you about the future. Please listen closely.”

“I’m listening,” you nod.

“I have seen your future, Uzumaki Naori. In my dream I see three youths standing at a crossroads. One is a dark young man, with power in his eyes but uncertainty hidden within his heart. One is a loud-mouthed sage, born of hope and prophecy, whose limitless optimism lifts up all those around him. One is a red sage, skilled and elegant, who lets her actions speak for themselves.”

“These three shall inherit great power and face an ultimate trial together: the first two are to determine whether the effort is successful, or if it is in vain. This is not your role in things… instead your choices will shape the future in triumph, or determine what may be saved in defeat. Both your actions, and your inactions, will carry great consequences.”

“But won’t determine whether we win or lose?” you muse.

“That is what I see,” Gamamaru-tono reiterates. “I see that it is entirely possible for even a decisive victory to be rendered meaningless in the long run.”

“Yeah, so that’s… troubling,” you admit.

“Many of my dreams are,” Gamamaru-tono tells you. “Asking to speak to you about this one is an unusual measure, but it’s because you are the one who must be told… you are the only one.”

“So you don’t plan to tell Naruto-chan about it?” Shima-tono demands. “Blast you, you old geezer! What could you be thinking!?”
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>>4533713
“Strange and dark have been my dreams of late,” Gamamaru-tono admits. “Many I have I keep to myself… for it would be all too easy to misread a prophecy drawn from the dreams of a senile old toad to whom the past and the future are one and the same.”

“I have judged that this young lady is the only one of the three who truly understands the risk of foreknowledge, and so I am confident that she is the one who should know. I understand that this is a terrible burden, but I also know that you are the type of person who chooses to shoulder such burdens willingly.”

“How do you know that?” you frown.

“Those of us who can tell, can tell,” Gamamaru-tono smiles broadly. “One day I think you will understand, and on that day we will speak again, one final time.”

>What point is there in telling you any of this if foreknowledge of it is so dangerous?
>You’re not sure what he expects you to do with this, but you’ll do your best when the time comes.
>You can only ever do what you believe in. This prophecy changes nothing for you.
>Other?
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>>4533738
>You're not sure what he expects you to do with this ...
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>>4533738
>You can only ever do what you believe in. But when the time comes you'll do your best.
Merged option, unlike the Time Travel scenario where she had some idea on how the present would turn out we're dealing with a vague future. So acting on the Foreknowledge right away is definitely the biggest risk.
What we can do is keep a eye out on places where we should intervene and honestly? We already kind of do that.
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>>4533738
>You can only ever do what you believe in. This prophecy changes nothing for you.
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>>4533738
>>You can only ever do what you believe in. This prophecy changes nothing for you.
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>>4533738
>You can only ever do what you believe in. This prophecy changes nothing for you.
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>>4533738
>>You can only ever do what you believe in. This prophecy changes nothing for you.
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>>4533738
>You can only ever do what you believe in. This prophecy changes nothing for you.
We do what we think is right.
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>>4533738
>You can only ever do what you believe in. This prophecy changes nothing for you.
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>>4533738
“So yeah, this changes nothing,” you admit. “If you’re right and my decisions will be that important, the last thing I want to do is start second-guessing my own judgment or my own moral compass. I’ll keep doing what I believe in until the day I die, for sure.”

“That is exactly the right attitude,” the massive toad chuckles, half to himself. “Now then, when is it we were supposed to meet with that sage girl from the shrike clan?”

Fukusaku simply leads you out rather than adding any commentary.



“Now, I take it you can see yourself home?” he muses. “You probably have any number of hiraishin markings lying around.”

“No yeah,” you admit, “I can teleport right back to the table your messenger toad found me at.”

“Then I suppose this is goodbye and good luck, for now,” Fukusaku inclines his head politely. “And remember… no spoiling this to Naruto-chan.”

“Understood,” you sigh. “As for you, keep taking good care of the little knucklehead, you hear me?”



“Sorry about that,” you apologize to Ayame-han as she starts again at your sudden reappearance, sitting across from her once more. “Amphibians… can’t trust ‘em.”

“What… was that just now?” Ayame wonders aloud.

“Naruto’s summoning clan wanted to talk to me for a moment,” you explain. “I’d have told them to wait until I was done here… but they’d just keep pestering me with messenger toads until I agreed.”

“Thanks,” you add, holding out your hand. After a moment of confusion, Ayame-han picks up the kunai you left with a flourish before handing it to you pommel-first.

“You must have had some training,” you muse.

“A little,” she confirms. “I was never any good with ninjutsu or genjutsu, but a knife is a knife… and knives are something I’m pretty good at.”

“And you thought you’d rather cook with them,” you guess.

“I wasn’t comfortable with the idea of hurting people,” she shakes her head. “I’d probably fight to protect myself or my dad… but with an attitude like that I just didn’t have it in me to keep learning taijutsu. I’d have been a burden at best.”
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>>4535825
“You did what you thought was best for your village,” you assure her, “even if it might not have been what you’d wanted in the beginning. That deserves respect too.”

After a few moments Ayame-han smiles at you. “Thanks… that means a lot coming from you.”

“I… have other stuff I have to get done today,” you admit with a sigh. “Sorry… but that means I’ll have to excuse myself a bit earlier than I’d prefer.”

It’s a strange feeling you have to confront: you’ve grown so used to popping into and out of people’s lives that you don’t always think about it, but now that you feel like your time with one of them is being cut off? It feels awkward. You have to wonder if this is similar to how it feels for people when you disappear on them so quickly… at least, for the first few times.

You create a shadow clone. “I have to prepare for a meeting with the Raikage and Hokage… but if you’re okay with it, I can finish our conversation like this? I know it’s not the same as being here personally, but still...”

“It bothers you to even offer?”

You and your clone both nod quietly. “Yeah. Kinda.”

“You don’t need to consider my feelings like that,” Ayame admits calmly. “And you don’t need to worry that I’ll think you’re pushing me off onto a clone. Honestly, I’m just flattered that you’re putting a second cup of tea with me on anything like the same level as meeting with two kages.”

“Well,” you muse, honestly taken aback at her understanding response. “As you keep reminding me, you’re a good friend. So you deserve it.”

You pause before disappearing this time.

“… you two have fun now.”



You exchange the incense stick in Konan-sensei’s hospital room for a reed diffuser, hiding it inside the paper bouquet you left for her. And after checking on her one more time, you return to your hideout to inform your cohort what will be happening.

“Yeah no,” you muse, “the preparations will be simple. It’s just a matter of...”

You pause as the memories of your clone’s tea and chitchat with Ayame-han catch up to you.

“Are you okay?” Fū asks, peering into your eyes. “You looked like you kinda blanked out for a sec there.”

“Clone memories caught up to me,” you explain. “Like I was saying, it’s just a matter of dealing with the Raikage.”

“Always,” Yugitō-han sighs.
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>>4535944
You decide that it’s best to leave Fū, Karin, and Ajisai out of this for the time being. Instead you ask Ajisai to keep Konan-sensei company for a little while and take Yugitō alone with you to the Hokage’s office where you can already sense the Raikage and the jinchūriki “Killer” B are waiting.



“Hey, ain’t that great!?” Killer B greets Yugitō-han cheerfully with a fist-bump, looking exactly how you expected right down to the sunglasses, at night, indoors. “Been a while since we could congregate, yeah?”

“It certainly has,” Yugitō-han replies with a smile. “Since even before that business with Akatsuki. And you must be Naruto-kun.”

Naruto, who’s also here, seems to be feeling a bit standoffish. “Ah, so her you’ll talk to? Guys have their pride too, ya know.”

“Please excuse B,” Yugitō-han sighs. “He can be a little rough around the edges… ah, and this is Naori-san. You’ve met before.”

“Finally a time and place,” B frowns at you, “for us to meet face-to-face.”

“Uzumaki Naori,” you greet him politely. “My sword-name is Raishō.”

“Uzumaki Naori,” he repeats, still frowning. “With your style so flowery, givin’ us headaches hourly, ya fool!”

Then he grins, and holds out his fist. “But you’re an honest fool, and good inside. So what say we just let it all slide?”

After a moment, you return the gesture. “Sure. Sounds good to me.”



Shortly after that, Shizune-han comes out to find you in the hallway. “Naori-san, please head into Tsunade-sama’s office. Yugitō-dono, please remain here.”

You share a knowing glance with Yugitō… this is about what she predicted things would be like if the Raikage was preparing to have them sent to a shelter or refuge of some kind, like Genbu the island-turtle.

Sure enough, they’re waiting for you. Both are frowning: the Raikage evidently at you, and the Hokage at nothing in particular.

>I don’t like leaving them out there. This is THEIR future too.
>Genbu is a good idea. Obito needs all three and you can guard them all there.
>Separating them may be a better plan, they should at least consider it.
>Other?
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>>4536047
First off:
>i dont like leaving them out, this is their future too
Then
>was seperating them at least considered?
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>>4536047
>Genbu is the most obvious place, and obito will find it.
>I can take them somewhere much farther, where nobody will look for them. (Offer to shelter them within the shrike forest)

We could keep a house for them there inside a kongo fuusa barrier, if they can't withstand the nature energy in the air out there.
Nobody's going to find them there.
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>>4536065
That's what the barrier is for.
Also adds an extra level of protection if someone DOES manage to find it.
Unless obito himself goes, it'll give naori enough time to teleport them out in an emergency.
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>>4536047
>>I don’t like leaving them out there. This is THEIR future too.
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>>4536047
>>I don’t like leaving them out there. This is THEIR future too.
>>Separating them may be a better plan, they should at least consider it.
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>>4536047
>I dislike having all the eggs in one basket, doubly so since i know Naruto will try to escape to fight.
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“Yeah, so first of all I don’t like leaving them out there in the hallway at a time like this,” you admit. “This does concern their futures too.”

“That’s not your choice to make,” the Raikage insists flatly. “And before you say anything else let me remind you that you are still holding a citizen of the Land of Lightning who is a jinchūriki of my village.”

“I don’t think she’s forgotten that,” Tsunade-han grumbles. “Raikage-san, your posturing isn’t going to win anyone in this room over or frighten them, so don’t waste time with it.”

“Can I at least hear an explanation?” you ask Tsunade-han.

She nods. “I think you know that Yugitō-san isn’t an idiot, and Raikage-san assures me that B will cooperate. But Naruto-kun… is another matter.”

“He is an idiot,” the Raikage grumbles.

“And I don’t think he’s the type to cooperate with us like this,” Tsunade-han adds. “So we decided to make him think that we’re sending him on a mission.”

“Our plans for battle will be finalized after the jinchūriki are sent to Genbu,” the Raikage explains. “And their guard unit will go with them.”

“So it is Genbu,” you frown.

“The location is constantly moving and significantly far out at sea, which makes it difficult to find,” Tsunade-han adds. “So that makes it one of the most secure possible locations.”

“And has it occurred to you that if one can be captured,” you counter, “that all three being in the same spot would give the other side a chance to capture all three at once?”

“You’re clearly overestimating Uchiha Obito’s abilities,” the Raikage frowns. “How could you possibly believe that he could take not just the jinchūriki who defeated Pain, but two others in addition to that?”

“By summoning the Gedō Mazō,” you explain with a frown. “Sorry to say it, but that was probably the reason he went out of his way to find Nagato’s body. He’ll have him reincarnated and use one of his rinnegan alongside his own mangekyō sharingan.”

“How do you know that?” Tsunade asks you.

“I don’t,” you admit. “But yeah no, I do know he found Nagato’s body… and what I told you he’d probably do is the only thing that makes sense in his position.”

“So you would suggest separating the three of them?” Tsunade muses.

You nod once. “That would be my inclination. At least to hedge the bet that you’ll be able to keep Genbu a secret.”

“So where?” Tsunade muses.

>I can set up more safehouses with barriers. Keep a strict rotation.
>Yugitō-han living with me has worked out well so far. I say nothing needs to change there.
>There IS a place… the forest where my summoning clan lives.
>Other?
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>>4537066
>>There IS a place… the forest where my summoning clan lives.
it is incredibly dangerous, but ... not even i know where it even is
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>>4537066
>There IS a place… the forest where my summoning clan lives.
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>>4537066
>>There IS a place… the forest where my summoning clan lives.
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>>4537066
>>There IS a place… the forest where my summoning clan lives.
I would vote for her to stay with us, but if we have more responsibilities
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>>4537066
>There IS a place… the forest where my summoning clan lives.
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>>4537066
>>There IS a place… the forest where my summoning clan lives.
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“So yeah, I want to pursue one specific option,” you admit. “My summoning clan is hidden in a forest where normal people can’t even breathe the air. I want to consider if I could find a way to establish a hideout there.”

“Is the air toxic?” Tsunade-han asks with a frown.

You shake your head. “No, it’s the natural energy concentrated in the air.”

You quickly summon Kijani, and instruct him to take a shadow clone back to the forest with him, while you continue talking to the two Kages.



You are a shadow clone of Uzumaki Naori, and you’ve sought out your summoning clan for advice on something. That’s why you’re at the familiar rocky mountaintop where Nyoka makes her home.

“Nyoka-han,” you smile calmly. “It’s been too long since I came here.”

“Welcome back,” she inclines her head politely. “This one is always happy to receive you as a guest, Naori-san. You seem as though you have a problem?”

“So yeah,” you explain. “What can we do about setting up a safehouse here, in the forest?”

“This one assumes you also mean to have normal humans living in this safehouse?” Nyoka muses.

“That’s the difficulty, I know,” you admit. “Is there any way to make that work?”

“There is a technique for that purpose,” Nyoka-han assures you, briefly stretching her wings. “This one is willing to instruct you in the details whenever you are ready.”



In the forest below, Nyoka-han explains it to you. This will demand heavy use of your sage mode’s inorganic incarnation ability, because you need to somehow approximate the use of earth release… ideally without straining your eyes. At Nyoka-han’s insistence you weave thirty-two hand seals, which lower the surrounding earth by the correct amount and at the same time raises square pillars of polished jade which form the framework of a structure.

“This skeleton will attract natural energy from the environment,” Nyoka-han explains. “By adding a barrier ninjutsu you will be able to essentially create a barrier that will reduce the natural energy in the air to more ‘normal’ levels.”

“So yeah, I have one addition I’d like to make,” you admit. “I just don’t know how to do it.”

“This one is curious,” Nyoka-han admits.
>1/?
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“I’d like to design a barrier that prevents spacetime ninjutsu from crossing it,” you explain. “But yeah, no, I’d have to modify my hiraishin formula to prevent any other spacetimes from connecting with the area bounded by the field… that’s a lot of work to do, so in the mean time I’ll settle for the same barrier design I use everywhere else.”

With another series of hand seals you place the barrier ninjutsu in place that will help collect and redirect natural energy from the air and into the jade pillars, then the barrier that will block any chakra-based sensing techniques, and finally the one-way barrier that will warn inform you any time someone enters the barrier when they shouldn’t. After that you use inorganic incarnation to shape nearby trees into dry lumber that fills out the interior of the structure as well as its roof, pulling the water out of the wood itself and sealing it for later use.

The last thing missing is the tatami flooring, which you send a shadow clone to obtain from Amegakure. When that clone returns, you dispel yourself to update Naori Prime.



You are, apparently, “Naori Prime”, and that went much more smoothly than you could have hoped.

“So yeah, I was right,” you smile. “The shrike clan does know of a technique for creating a barrier that will filter out most of the natural energy in the air… it’s extremely complicated and will work nowhere else.”

“And you created a ‘safehouse’ there?” Tsunade-han enquires.

You nod in confirmation. “Wherever ‘there’ actually is, yes. It’s now an option.”

“An option?” the Raikage repeats. “What do you mean, an option?”

“It means exactly what I said,” you shrug. “It’s an option. If Yugitō-han would rather go on this fake mission with B-han and Naruto-kun that’s her choice and no one else’s. Either way I’ll do what I can to support her.”



When offered a few moments later, Yugitō-han makes the decision you had sort of anticipated she might.

“Thank you for your efforts, Naori-san,” she nods. “I want to go with B-san and Naruto-kun, though my real question though is whether it would be wisest to do so.”

“Do you think it would be better to be able to help them?” you ask. “Or do you think it would be better to keep yourselves separated?”

“I tend to think my being there would be better,” Yugitō-han admits after considering it for a moment. “I’ll tell you why a bit later… and besides, I know that if we do get discovered out there you’ll come running. Or am I wrong?”
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“No,” you sigh. “You’re not wrong.”

“Then it sounds as though it has been decided,” the Raikage nods curtly.



Outside, you find it’s your turn to wait as the Raikage and Hokage explain their orders to B and Naruto, which gives you a chance to speak to Yugitō-han alone.

“I promised you an explanation,” she frowns. “It’s that I know B-san isn’t the best teacher in the world… or the most willing to go out of his way for anyone outside the village. I think that Naruto-kun needs to know how to use Kurama’s power, and Genbu is where our village’s jinchūriki learn to do that.”

“So that’s what you’re thinking,” you muse, handing her a hiraishin kunai. “Pretty sly of you… just, take care of yourself, alright?”

“I will,” she grins. “And them, too.”

>See if Tsunade will let you contact their escort team before they leave.
>You can move into your new hideout now, with a little help from Fū, Karin, and Ajisai.
>Check to see how Ajisai feels now about getting involved with your unit.
>Other?
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>>4538416
>check to see how ajisai feels now
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>>4538416
>You can move into your new hideout now, with a little help from Fū, Karin, and Ajisai.
>Check to see how Ajisai feels now about getting involved with your unit.
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>>4538416
>>Check to see how Ajisai feels now about getting involved with your unit.
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>>4538416
>>Check to see how Ajisai feels now about getting involved with your unit.
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>>4538416
>>You can move into your new hideout now, with a little help from Fū, Karin, and Ajisai.
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>>4538416
>You can move into your new hideout now, with a little help from Fū, Karin, and Ajisai.
>Check to see how Ajisai feels now about getting involved with your unit.
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>>4538416
>>Check to see how Ajisai feels now about getting involved with your unit.
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>>4538416
>Check to see how Ajisai feels now about getting involved with your unit.

Are shadow clones able to circumvent eye strain as they don't stick around?
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>>4539441
Depends on if the strain would transfer with the memories when it dissipates.
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>>4539490
I think logically that sort of thing would have to track across shadow clones to some extent. Otherwise no Uchiha would ever suffer from eyestrain.
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You specifically single out Ajisai when you return to your hideout in the Land of Grass, and for good reason. You don’t need everyone helping to make the new sage forest hideout more habitable, but having one person help to lay the last of the tatami and fill out the interior with at least the most basic furnishings would be great. And you and Ajisai have something you need to talk about.

“How do you feel now?” you ask her tentatively, as you lay another tatami in place. In this room, which is to be your bedroom, you’re going to have to use inorganic incarnation to ‘fudge’ the wooden framing around the edge of the room until it meets the tatami at the center.

“About what?”

“About fighting together with me.”

She lays the last of the tatami, which allows you to now do the work that only you can. “Hesitant. But better.”

“It’s a good fūinjutsu technique you created,” you muse.

She’s quick to correct you. “We. You taught me to move the paper with my chakra.”

“Yeah, and I learned it from Konan-sensei,” you point out. “Doesn’t mean she takes credit for what I’ve done with it since then.”

“And if you don’t possess Konan-sama’s grace,” Ajisai muses, “you consider that you’ve done something wrong.”

“If you can’t do something with grace why do it at all?” you shrug, bumping the wall out at the back of the room to make space for lighting, much the same as in your other hideouts. “So yeah, the jade pillars look somewhat strange when they’re exposed like this.”

“It reminds me where we are,” Ajisai offers. “My understanding of good architecture is it should respect its surroundings.”

“Well, you’re not wrong,” you admit. “Gimme a hand in the next room.”



It’s late by the time you return to the Grass hideout, and so you can hop immediately into the bath since you already ate a long time ago. It’s nice to feel like you made as much progress as you did… by now, creating ‘hideouts’ that are inviting and liveable, like actual homes, feels like much more of a normal thing. And this one has certainly ended up feeling inviting despite its inhospitable location.
>1/2
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Ajisai finds you sitting out on the edge of the patio, having mostly dried yourself, listening to a gentle rain fall on one of this hideout’s two gardens. “What are you doing, Nakkun?”

“Waiting on my clone,” you admit. “I sent one to check on Konan-sensei.”

“I see,” she replies, sitting near you. “I remember you used to do this all the time.”

“No yeah, my mother and I used to do this together,” you explain thoughtfully. “What’s up?”

“I’ve decided that I want to help you,” she declares, leaving it at that.

“I look forward to it,” you nod. “Get some rest, we’ll meet tomorrow.”



The next morning, at Karin’s request, you take Fū and Karin to a staging area near Kumogakure to help set up the centralized medical facilities. These will follow Shizune’s specifications, and starting today she’s supposed to oversee the construction personally.

“I’ll be back after sundown,” you tell them.

“Do you think that’s wise?” Karin wonders.

You nod. “Yeah, no, until they set up better permanent barracks… I have other reasons too, but we’ll talk about that later.”

What you mean, of course, is that Fū and Karin will be the ones observing these developments for you, letting you keep track of how things progress within other divisions and giving you a way to help out on short notice should the need arise. However one thing you must also confess… is that you’ve gotten used to having people around again. You simply prefer to have them around so long as there’s no compelling reason for them to leave.

>Gather your whole regiment together on neutral ground, maybe in the Land of Grass.
>Only gather one member from each of the five great nations. This is hardly ‘official’.
>Just gather the ones you feel are ‘most important’ in handling your expected duties.
>Other?
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>>4540052
>>Only gather one member from each of the five great nations. This is hardly ‘official’.
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>>4540052
>Only gather one member from each of the five great nations. This is hardly ‘official’.
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>>4540052
>>Only gather one member from each of the five great nations. This is hardly ‘official’.
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>>4540052
>>Only gather one member from each of the five great nations. This is hardly ‘official’.
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>>4540052
>>Only gather one member from each of the five great nations. This is hardly ‘official’.
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>>4540052
You only need to gather together the people who either need to know about Ajisai’s involvement or who can’t simply be told about it by someone else. Sai needs to know how many birds he should expect to have to make, and can tell everyone from Konohagakure about it later. Guren needs to be here too as one of your ‘force multipliers’… and one who has no reliable contacts within the village where she’s being held. Omoi can tell Tango about it later, it’s really irrelevant which one you choose to get involved today. But Kiri, Maki, and Ittan are all the only ones from their villages in your unit, so if they don’t hear from you they won’t hear it from anyone else.

So that’s why you gather Sai, Kiri, Maki, Omoi, Ittan, and Guren one at a time from wherever they happened to be, and transport them to your hiraishin marking at the Grass teahouse.

“So yeah, I’d like to introduce you to someone,” you insist with a calm smile. “This is Ajisai-han, an old friend of mine. She’ll be joining us from this point on as a fūinjutsu expert.”

“Ajisai, these are Sai-kun from Konoha, who can create birds for us to fly on out of ink...”

“A pleasure,” Sai smiles, an empty gesture you realize.

“… Kiri-han, from Kiri, our medic-nin...”

Kiri nods silently.

“… Maki-han, who you already know...”

“Good to see you again,” Maki nods politely.

“… Omoi-kun, representing Kumo...”

“Hows’ it?” Omoi greets Ajisai coolly.

“...Ittan-han, from Iwa...”

“Welcome,” Ittan greets her gruffly.

“… and Guren-han, formerly one of Orochimaru’s subordinates in Otogakure.”

“You didn’t have to say that,” Guren sighs. “But yeah, that’s me.”

“So yeah, she possesses the crystal release kekkei genkai,” you clarify. “We also have four other members who aren’t here, but Omoi-kun and Sai-kun can keep them updated.”

“I see,” Sai nods thoughtfully. “But why did you select me?”

“Because your skills are important to our identity as a ‘mobile’ unit,” you observe. “I thought it would be best if you at least met each other.”
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>>4541267
“So, why is this friend of your just joining now?” Kiri wonders with a slight frown.

“Yeah no,” you frown back. “You should ask her.”

“Okay,” Kiri glances at Ajisai. “Same question: why now?”

“I was dead this time last year,” Ajisai replies with a chilly tone. “Pain, of the Akatsuki, used my corpse to commit mass murder in the mean time. I was afraid that someone might recognize me from that.”

You feel your eyes widen slightly, not because any of this is news to you but because she actually said it aloud. It’s the others who are immediately uncomfortable with what she has to say.

“Well I can certainly sympathize,” Guren-han sighs. “I may not know exactly how you feel, but my past with Orochimaru is a bit of a problem for a lot of people.”

“I was on a different mission that day,” Sai admits. “So I would not have known had you not told me. And even though you have, I can hardly judge you for something you weren’t even there for.”

“Which is the part that’s kinda bugging me,” Omoi jumps in. “Whaddya mean when you say you were dead? Are you like… some kinda zombie now?”

“My understanding is that Pain revived everyone who had been killed when he attacked Konoha,” Sai explains. “I was unaware he had revived any of the so-called ‘Paths’.”

“He did,” you clarify. “Just the one… he was using her as a way to get under my skin. It backfired.”

“That’s not surprising,” Guren shrugs. “There’s some things that just can’t be forgiven.”

>Sai, would you ask Sasuke-kun to meet with me and Guren-han later today?
>Sai, I think we should discuss formations and teamwork between the two of us.
>I think that’s enough for today. This is all I really intended to cover.
>Other?
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>>4541348
>>Sai, would you ask Sasuke-kun to meet with me and Guren-han later today?
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>>4541348
>>Sai, would you ask Sasuke-kun to meet with me and Guren-han later today?
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>>4541348
>Sai, would you ask Sasuke-kun to meet with me and Guren-han later today?
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>>4541348
>Sai, would you ask Sasuke-kun to meet with me and Guren-han later today?
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>>4541348
>>Sai, would you ask Sasuke-kun to meet with me and Guren-han later today?
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>>4541348
>Sai, would you ask Sasuke-kun to meet with me and Guren-han later today?
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>>4541348
>Sai, would you ask Sasuke-kun to meet with me and Guren-han later today?
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>Sai, would you ask Sasuke-kun to meet with me and Guren-han later today?
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