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The woods are silent. They should be, the knights the King had seconded to you were thorough and brutal. They found the boy as easily as you found the last few. Gods and Depths, what a thankless duty. One rides to bring the corpse to your feet your feet. Your horse snorts his displeasure at the sight. His blank face is youthful, hardly a boy of 16, but what you sook nonetheless. A waste, to be sure, but not the first.

These creatures must be brought to death, the honor of Althimura demands. Every one has singularly raised a rebellion or revolt and commanded unnatural skill. For this purpose you were raised up. Leader of the Beholders, the King's own internal spy network. These newcomers have brought untold chaos to the realm and must be stopped.

You ride back into your own home, Castle Barython, as you ponder for not the first time your place in this world. As the Captain General of the Beholders, you both wonder where these boys come from, and what power draws them against your Liege, Emperor Alkaign.
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Rolled 3 (1d10)

>Repel the goblin onslaught
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>>5187631
You are

> The Scion of a long noble line, able to call on connections, but perhaps not popular with the new kind

> An upstart, popular with the new king, but resented by older retainers.

> An old hand, once tortured and maimed by foreigners. No one could claim you a traitor but many claim you incompetent.

> An outsider. The King met you on an excursion, and gave an offer you accepted. This alienates you from the court but gives you options elsewhere.

> Trusted Warrior. You are the best of the young king's entourage, he expects you to end this threat straightforwardly. But not all threats are so straightforward.
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>>5187639
>> The Scion of a long noble line, able to call on connections, but perhaps not popular with the new kind
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>>5187639
> An old hand, once tortured and maimed by foreigners. No one could claim you a traitor but many claim you incompetent.

Let's stay under the radar.
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An old hand, once tortured and maimed by foreigners. No one could claim you a traitor but many claim you incompetent.
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>>5187639
> The Scion of a long noble line, able to call on connections, but perhaps not popular with the new kind

Having connection with the establishment is worth more than having an in with the newer blood, stagnation and mental deficiencies such as laziness or privilege among our allies can hopefully be overcome through player input and if we need to bridge the gap between the older retainers and the new then we should have the advantage there as the more connected old guard in regards to tempting them to integrate with our views.

Interesting concept QM.
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>>5187639
> Trusted Warrior. You are the best of the young king's entourage, he expects you to end this threat straightforwardly. But not all threats are so straightforward.

In every quest anons pick some pussy shit with connections to avaid confrontations and play some political game.
A blunt character going straight to the point, taking no bullshit from anyone can be fun for once and lead to just as interesting encounters.
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>>5187686
By the very quest's premise we have to eventually confront the isekaiied people and kill them, this choice seems to simply be about how the emperor retainers view us or who we are connected to. It's a reputation thing. If the time comes to fight we'll be fighting regardless and if we need to wrangle around for resources to perform the kill then we'll have to do that anyways regardless of who we are if our resources aren't sufficient.

Wouldn't mind being a warrior though.
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>>5187639
>> Trusted Warrior. You are the best of the young king's entourage, he expects you to end this threat straightforwardly. But not all threats are so straightforward.
Let's be badass.
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>>5187639
>Trusted Warrior. You are the best of the young king's entourage, he expects you to end this threat straightforwardly. But not all threats are so straightforward.
The enemy cannot collapse your kingdom if you disable his life.
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>>5187706
What good’s a soldier when the entire kingdom’s army is doesn’t trust you?
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>>5187639
>Trusted Warrior. You are the best of the young king's entourage, he expects you to end this threat straightforwardly. But not all threats are so straightforward.
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>>5187639
>The Scion of a long noble line, able to call on connections, but perhaps not popular with the new kind
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>>5187631

> Trusted Warrior. You are the best of the young king's entourage, he expects you to end this threat straightforwardly. But not all threats are so straightforward.
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>>5187639
>Trusted Warrior. You are the best of the young king's entourage, he expects you to end this threat straightforwardly. But not all threats are so straightforward.
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Op here from hotel wifi. Update tomorrow, for Im stuck out of town with car trouble.

Does look like Warrior has it but vote remains open, only fair. For anyone skeptical I'll confirm this post with the original ID when I get home.
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>>5187686

You began your long service in the northern territories, home of long and grueling campaigns against the savage Clansmen of Ard Negh. The northern duchies of Althimura were said by the soft southern Lords to much resemble their hated enemies from the clan lands. Its an accusation you resemble, with your preference for a Ard Neghian hand and a half blade and avoidance of cosmopolitan Imperial fashion in favor of the Tartan shared by both the Northern nobility and the savage Clans themselves. Your young life saw much combat, but little in the way of what the peacocks of the capitol Althimur would name refinement. That is not to say you lacked cunning, and this was what drew the attention of the then Heir: Alkaign.

Travelling incognito with his closest knight and friends, the Heir was waylaid by Neghian raiders who had crossed border earlier that week. At the critical moment your band rode in, slaughtering the savages before they could overrun their prey.

His men thanked you profusely, but Alkaign had your measure. "Well met, sir, but you were following us for so long, why wait to help?" Momentarily flustered, you maintain your composure and explain the stratagem. "It's risky, but this way we got them all, because they were committed."

To your shock, he wasn't angry, and instead offered a feast of thanks to your band and yourself. Ever one to seek out new talent, he revealed himself to you that night, and you entered his service soon after. As his retainer he valued both your battle skill and sound strategic mind. The final forms were filed later upon return to Althimur. You stared at the page for some time. You were actually a good hand at your letters, but you felt the weight of the document you were to sign.

> Your name and Title

> Sir Faerghus Macallan, knighted upon your joining with the Heir

> Lord Uilleam Campbell, lord of a minor northern smallhold

> Captain Logan Smith, commoner, unknighted by due request

> Write in
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>>5189243
> Lord Uilleam Campbell, lord of a minor northern smallhold

Campbell sounds alright. Lord of minor house is likely subtle enough for most.
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>>5189243
>Lord Uilleam Campbell, lord of a minor northern smallhold
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>>5189243
>Lord Uilleam Campbell, lord of a minor northern smallhold

Guessing we make a pretty mean soup on top of our fighting skills
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>>5189243
> Lord Uilleam Campbell, lord of a minor northern smallhold
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>>5189243
>> Lord Uilleam Campbell, lord of a minor northern smallhold
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You signed your title, Lord Uilleam Campbell, and then your life was forever changed. The next few years were a whirlwind of new experiences, you found yourself thrust into a circle of bright rising leaders from across the Althimuran Empire. There was Sir Elpest, a childhood boon companion of Alkaign and nearly as fine a warrior as yourself, possessing boldness in as much quantity as you held cunning. The Honored Xia Chen, a woman from a far off land who had found a home in the Heir's confidence, a true prodigy at numbers, money, and the manipulation thereof. Old Sir Graven, slowing in his old age but of unshakable loyalty and of a paramount tactical skill even you were unable to match. Lastly the Lady Alys, Alkaign's sister by blood. Women do not inherit in the Empire of course, but she was not a mere heiress to be married off for political cause. At her own insistence, she was trained in the subtle arts of assassination, poison, and interrogation.

Together you continued on Alkaign's task before you met him, traveling across the Empire as mundane if well armed travelers. The Tundra of your home, the green heartlands of Althimura itself, the dust of the eastern Khana scrublands, the craggy canyons of western Bolo and it's sparse but hardy people, and finally the southern deserts and their vast oasis cities, the jewels of the sand. It was to be the culmination of Alkaign's long upbringing as heir, finally putting a face to the people he had read and studied all his life in preparation to rule. You watched in comradely satisfaction as he rose to the occasion, respecting every esoteric tradition, a true friend to the people who he would be tasked to protect and guide. You only knew the reality of your own smallhold; a tiny motte and bailey overlooking a humble town by a frozen river, but you judged him up to the task.

Over the years the Heir grew to trust you implicitly and care for you as a friend as he did all of his retinue. You returned his esteem humbly. But there was one you would call a closer friend than the others, one you found yourself in a shoddy tavern in the Althimur City on the night the Heir returned to report to their father. A fateful night, indeed.
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>>5190341

You sat with your closest friend of the last few years:

> Sir Elpest: You admire his fighting spirit and his upbringing as the ward of a hardened battle commander from the central Empire, a man who sounds much like your own father, a hard man who died in a Ard Negh ambush the same year you were knighted.

>Honored Xia Chen: You had been intrigued with the foreign woman, and you ended up bonding with her over both being relative outsiders to the retinue mostly filled with those from the Imperial heartland. You respect her keen mind, and her reserved manner reminds of the stoicism common at home.

> Sir Graven: Like the father you had lost, Sir Graven had wisdom and advice to spare. He tempered your more reckless instincts and his hundreds of stories never failed to bring a smile.

> Lady Alys: You were aloof from her at first, seeking not to offend your new liege, but over time she came to you. You share in an appreciation for intellect, especially when it comes to deceiving enemies and earning friends. Perhaps the only person in the retinue you can truly consider your intellectual equal, besides perhaps the Heir himself.
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>>5190347
>> Sir Graven: Like the father you had lost, Sir Graven had wisdom and advice to spare. He tempered your more reckless instincts and his hundreds of stories never failed to bring a smile.
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>>5190347
>> Lady Alys: You were aloof from her at first, seeking not to offend your new liege, but over time she came to you. You share in an appreciation for intellect, especially when it comes to deceiving enemies and earning friends. Perhaps the only person in the retinue you can truly consider your intellectual equal, besides perhaps the Heir himself.
We're described of being a more tactical minded person, So I would say it only makes sense we would be interested in court-craft
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>>5190347
>Sir Graven: Like the father you had lost, Sir Graven had wisdom and advice to spare. He tempered your more reckless instincts and his hundreds of stories never failed to bring a smile.
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>>5190347
> Lady Alys: You were aloof from her at first, seeking not to offend your new liege, but over time she came to you. You share in an appreciation for intellect, especially when it comes to deceiving enemies and earning friends. Perhaps the only person in the retinue you can truly consider your intellectual equal, besides perhaps the Heir himself.

Her subtle skills could be useful as a black ops operative
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>>5190347
>Lady Alys: You were aloof from her at first, seeking not to offend your new liege, but over time she came to you. You share in an appreciation for intellect, especially when it comes to deceiving enemies and earning friends. Perhaps the only person in the retinue you can truly consider your intellectual equal, besides perhaps the Heir himself.
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You sit next to Alys as the business of the tavern livens up. It's about the time most in the city would begin seeking to drink off the day's toil. The others are, of course, attending Alkaign as he reports to the Emperor. But you hate ceremony, and Emperor Albrecht had ever been cold to you and disdainful of your northern origin. As such you found elsewhere to be. There is a far off look on her fair face as she cradles a thick ale in one hand, her crimson braid falling out of the dark hood she keeps up habitually even indoors. You note, not for the first time, that Alys is effortlessly beautiful. Even obscured, even uncleansed after a long travel, her elegance radiates.

"Will, you're not with the others? Can't say I'm surprised." She smirks as she snarks at you, as she is wont to do. You don't correct her about the nickname, she is a princess after all. "My Lady, I feel I would be unwelcome at the palace just now. But I have never once felt unwelcome at your side." She smiles graciously and motions for you to sit next to her. The tavern keeper deftly slides an ale to you to match Alys'. You take a swig and grunt at the appreciable quality of the brew before speaking. "I am more surprised by your own absence. Surely you would be welcome before your own father?" She shakes her head with mirth before taking yet another sip. "If I was so welcome do you think I would willingly travel with you brutes?" Her sardonic grin is enchanting. "No, I am here for the very same reason as you. Father would be discomforted by the presence of his wayward daughter." There is real sadness in her eyes as she says this, and you wish futilely you could wipe it away. Alys has been a boon companion to you these last few years, her wit and sardonic approach a counterweight to the sometimes over serious demeanor of the others. Not to mention her knifework, which to your practiced eyes borders on the supernatural.

"Anyway Will, I wanted to say, before Brother is made Emperor, we-" The door to the tavern bursts open and a guardsman in tattered armor stumbles in. "Lord Campbell! Lady Alys! Come quick! The throne is under threat! Lord Alkaign sent me, he is still in combat!" Alys looks to you with a shocked expression, clearly anxious for her father and brother.

You:

> Press for details, no fight should be fought with bad intelligence

> Go at once with Alys, your oath demands no less

> Gather more men, whatever the threat, overwhelming force will end it
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>>5191295
>> Go at once with Alys, your oath demands no less
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>>5191295
>> Gather more men, whatever the threat, overwhelming force will end it
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>>5191295
>Gather more men, whatever the threat, overwhelming force will end it
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>>5191295
> Press for details, no fight should be fought with bad intelligence
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>>5191295
> Gather more men, whatever the threat, overwhelming force will end it
It's curious that we're being sent for if there is a threat to Alkaign. He IS with the Emperor, so there's bound to be guards with them for the ceremony.
Which means they're being overwhelmed somehow, and need reinforcements now
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>>5191295
>Go at once with Alys, your oath demands no less

Send the guard to rally men, we must act
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>>5191295
>Go at once with Alys, your oath demands no less
>>5191784
This, and ask for details on the way.
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>>5191784
+1, good idea
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>>5191295
>Go immediately but ask for details and then send him off to fetch more men
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You and Alys rush past the exhausted soldier, no confirmation or elaboration needed as you speedily travel up the central hill the Imperial Citadel sits upon to answer the threat. Your only word to the man is to gather more men to meet the enemy, no battle was ever lost by having forces too numerous after all.

You leave the man to it as you and Alys hurry to the throne room. Along the way you pass dozens of dead, some even sliced nearly in half. Who could have done this? Alys gives you a worried look as you approach the throne room. The door to the last corridor you need to pass is thrust open by the two of you, and you witness utter carnage. The Imperial Guard lay utterly decimated, many of them in several pieces. Only some sort of monster could have done this. Behind you is the conglomeration of the reinforcements you have called, dozens and soon to be hundreds ready to defend their ruler. The doors to the throne room were easy to open, revealing the truth.

The Emperor is dead, his head separated from his body and lying with its surprised expression some dozen feet from it's body and the throne. Alkaign and the rest of the retinue fight a pitched battle against the enemy, a young man of little more than teenage years clearly getting the better of the Heir. You know the man to be a strong warrior, and detect something supernatural in the invader's strength.

You:

> Call on Alys and both aid her brother

>Tell Alys to aid the others and fight Alkaign's attacker solo

> Destroy the lesser threats before aiding the Heir
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>>5192041
>Destroy the lesser threats before aiding the Heir
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>>5192041
>Call on Alys and both aid her brother
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>>5192041
> Call on Alys and both aid her brother

From the picture, I assume we’re armed with a longsword?
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>>5192041
>Call on Alys and both aid her brother
Protect the emperor!
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The young man about to slay Alkaign is your first target. With a nod, you and Alys split up to engage the enemy, your bastard sword angling towards your foe, a blow he easily deflects and answers with his own swing which you deftly dodge. The next strike you meet with your own blade, a fateful mistake.

In agony, you feel every bone in your right arm break apart as the unnatural strength of your opponent meets yours. You cringe backwards, spying Alys calling out your name as she carves through the lanky compatriot of your enemy, concern and despair writ large on her face even obscured by her hood. Your dominant arm disabled, your foe quickly disarms you, and a subsequent strike sends you to the ground.

"I will end the tyranny of this empire!" the boy says, sparking confusion in your mind. Albrecht had spent most of his time on infrastructure and culture, hardly a Tyrant by any measure. His sword sweeps down to end you, but Alys intervenes, her own opponent now dead, and tackles him away from you. You spring up, blade in your off hand, and seek to aid her in bringing his end.

> roll 1d100 best of three
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Rolled 94 (1d100)

>>5192849
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Rolled 80 (1d100)

>>5192849
Let's hope I rolled this right, I always froget how to do it
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Rolled 17 (1d100)

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>>5192849
Update tomorrow guys, I just had a birthday and my uncles had me out drinking. Ill not give you a drunken update if it can be helped. Be good out there.
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The boy is unspeakably strong, but any warrior worth his salt knows that strength isn't everything in a fight. Sometimes it comes to skill and long experience, and something tells you the boy lacks both despite his monstrous strength. Alys has his attention for now and you quickly take advantage, slipping to the side of the young warrior and slipping the blade between your foe's ribs. He cries out and you twist the knife before taking it out of his side as you deftly move aside from the wild swing he takes at you in response.

This was a fatal blow, one you had seen undo many a warrior in your years of service. So you struggle to believe your eyes as an ethereal glow surrounds him as he sinks to his knees just for a moment, a young woman in what you think is religious garb holding out her hands towards him. You do not understand what's happening just now, but your going to stop it.

"Alkaign, the girl!" You shout, hoping your meaning comes across. He nods, disengaging with a nearby enemy garbed in Ard Negh furs and swinging a massive hammer. In a moment he is there and momentarily incapacitated, your enemy is unable to respond as the Heir lops her outstretched arms off at the elbow with a mighty downward swing. She screams and falls to her knees, the glow fading from the warrior as blood gushes from her ruined limbs in place of the unnatural healing. Your wounded enemy, deprived of her aid, calls out in concern. "Vera, no! Damn you!" The affection in his voice might stir emotion if you were not locked in mortal combat. Combat about to end in your favor as reinforcements flood the throne room. The girl's voice somehow becomes even more shrill as her ally sinks to his knees as more blood pours from the gaping wound you had delivered, and peaks into a wail of despair as Alys slips behind the boy and pulls his unarmored head back and scrapes her knife across his bared throat, opening it from ear to ear. Surprise is clear on his face as he claws at the wound, gurgling blood before Alys releases his hair and collapses face down into a rapidly spreading pool of his own blood. The fight seems to go out of the others, the brute with the hammer all but letting Alkaign and Sir Graven wear him down and disarm him, several of the arriving guardsmen taking him into custody shortly after. The danger subsides, but now questions remain. How and why?

Alkaign cleans his blade, his eyes and drawn expression looking over the corpse of his father. You step forward but Sir Graven motions for you to keep your distant. He moves to where Albrecht's head sat on the stone floor, and tenderly removed the Imperial Circlet. As the healing woman and the large hammer wielder were ushered out he held up the jeweled headwear. "Emperor Albrecht is dead! All hail Emperor Alkaign!" The blank look on Alkaign's face does not waver as the old man places the Circlet on your liege, nor does it when the guardsmen acclaim him with enthusiasm.
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>>5195130
It takes him a few moments to return to normal, but you see the grim purpose on his face as sheathes his sword and nods at Sir Graven, who looks as stony faced as ever. You note that Alys is silently crying over their father's body, and though you begin to walk to her side, you are interrupted. "Lord Campbell, attend me." You are unused to the commanding tone of the new Emperor's voice, he had always been more relaxed with you in the past. "My Emperor." You bow formally as you approach the man, his face now a stony mast of command. He points to the limp body of the young assassin. "That boy was unnatural in ability, as was the girl I disarmed. Find out where they came from, and why. Found out how they came to possess such power. This is my first order to you." His cold gaze moves to Alys, still silently weeping on her knees. "Alys, go with him, provide any aid you can. I command it." She wipes her tears away and stands shakily. She nods, her quiet voice responding. "Of course, My Emperor." She comes to your side, and you look on her with sympathy. Her father had been aloof from her, you knew. Now they would never reconcile this side of the Depths. Alkaign consults with Sir Graven. "Bury Father in the crypt. Swear the men to silence. He passed in his sleep, a long ailment. Word of this outrage cannot spread. We must find the truth of this night." Graven moves to follow the command, gathering the surviving guardsmen and giving them their new orders. Alys follows silently as you move away from the Emperor, pondering your first move. Your arm pains you, but duty demands action.

> Examine the bodies of the fallen assassins. Perhaps some physical cause is visible

> Begin interrogations immediately. The woman may not survive her injuries for long and you fear suicide from the other before you can speak

> Question the surviving Imperial Guards. Maybe one is guilty of treachery

> Write in
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>>5195151
>Examine the bodies of the fallen assassins. Perhaps some physical cause is visible
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>>5195151
>Examine the bodies of the fallen assassins. Perhaps some physical cause is visible
And ask Lady Alys to interrogate the dying ones, or the contrary if she doesn't feel comfortable doing that now.
And have someone gather and count the guard for interrogation later, so that nobody escapes. Treachery or not they must have seen something.
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>>5195293
+1
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>>5195151
>Examine the bodies of the fallen assassins. Perhaps some physical cause is visible
Quickly before evidence can be damaged/lost. Also send someone to bring s healer we need to get our srm splinted asap
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>>5195151
>> Begin interrogations immediately. The woman may not survive her injuries for long and you fear suicide from the other before you can speak
bodies don't change over minutes, but people do. in grief they are more vulnerable, but only until they recollect themselves
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>>5195151
>>5195461
Support.
> Begin interrogations immediately. The woman may not survive her injuries for long and you fear suicide from the other before you can speak
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>>5195293
Supporting. Leaving the interrogations to Alys would be best, since we need to do so much in so little time
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>>5195151
>> Begin interrogations immediately. The woman may not survive her injuries for long and you fear suicide from the other before you can speak
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"Alys, follow the prisoners, I'll join you soon. Get what you can out of them, but try to keep them alive." You say. The woman, Vera you think, is likely near death. You think the Northerner probably suffered little more than a few broken bones. If you hurry your task here you can likely see Alys at work, grim as it may be. She crooks her head and her breathy whisper shows concern rather than the emotional devastation of before. "I'll get my tools and tinctures. But I'm also getting you a healer, your arm isn't supposed to bend like that, Will. Don't go anywhere before they find you, please." You grunt. "No time, and I wont let them drug me. But if it's so important for you I shall wait around for whoever you send." She gives a wan smile and pats your uninjured shoulder before briskly striding away towards the cells. You first search the lithe man Alys had killed before aiding you with young warrior. She could have been the dead man's own counterpart, you found many blades and vials of what you expect are poison. You are careful to not touch any of the bare metal of his weapons, fearing a contact agent. There is nothing too obvious on his body, could be any thug or hired knife in a dozen Imperial cities.

Instinct tells you anything worth finding is on the boy. You step over still spreading pool of blood pouring from the young warrior's neck, your eye for wounds telling you Alys' blade scraped bone. Not how you'd want to go out, but he made his choices tonight. Having one good arm makes a thorough shortage a bit harder, and Alys had yet to send a healer, but you manage. You rummage around. Mundane items abound: a whetstone, some rope, a journal you pocket later in case it has anything worthwhile written between it's covers. Then you strike what you are looking for.

"By the Depths..." Secured in an innermost fold of the light leather armor the boy wore in place of the more traditional chain or plate is an item of known provenance. Perhaps related to the unnatural ability of the warrior and his girl? Part of it seems to be some sort of dark mirror, though cracked. And there are unfamiliar runes. You fiddle with it, but it appears to be damaged. Who knows if this happened in the fight or some time before. You pocket it with the journal, uncanny trepidation filling you. Who was this man?
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Rising from the body, you see the old surgeon Neremis enter from the direction Alys left to. She must have sent him back from tending to the prisoners. He attends you before any of the other wounded, confirming your suspicion. "My Lord, I will be needing to set that or it will heal wrong." He reaches for a bottle you recognize as a poppy concoction for pain relief. "No, surgeon, I need my wits. Just set it." He looks skeptical, but his deceptively strong hands begin their task.

CRAAAACK

You would like to say you don't scream out but you absolutely do, the adrenaline that had let you fight on in the battle now faded and the pain retaining all it's edge. But it does pass, receding to a more dull though still considerable ache. He huffs. "I'll need to look at this later, but I understand you have a task to attend." You nod as he feels your maimed arm to confirm his results, and he steps aside. Alkaign's cold gaze follows you as you leave the throne room, all warmth gone.

Moments later you arrive in the cells, both prisoners chained with extensive restraints. Alys is with the woman, her ruined limbs apparently sought to by the surgeons before your arrival. You still don't rate her chances. She lost too much blood. You note the large Northerner is unconscious. Alys turns as you approach. "Ah, Will, welcome. The big one cannot be roused, it's like all that brute strength fled from him and now he's too exhausted to even hold himself up. The guards told me they had to carry him." You notice Alys' "special tools", blades and liquids and all sorts of concoctions. Seems you'll both be working on the Vera woman first. "And the woman? I see her staring." Vera strains against her chains and glares at Alys with the purest look of absolute hate you think you have ever seen. Alys shrugs. "She doesn't seem to want to talk to me for some reason. Maybe you'll have better luck? Most of my tools might kill her in this state. It's a last resort." You make your way into the cell, gently stepping in front Alys to meet the prisoner's gaze. "You healed the warrior when I struck him. Why not heal yourself?" Something about what you said brings tears back to her eyes, her lips quivering in despair. You decide to show her the broken mirror. She screams when she sees it. "HOW DARE YOU TOUCH HIM! YOU ANIMAL!" You produce the journal next after wiping the spittle from your face and burying the desire to slap the maimed woman with your mailed fist. It confirms your other suspicion as you pull it out. The text is nothing you have ever seen. You speak and read Imperial and Ard Negh fluently, and can recognize the languages of most countries with no issue. This is alien to you, but you do note the runes on the mirror resemble the handwritten scrawls in the pages of the book. You cup the woman's face in one armored hand, and you hear Alys approach softly to your back in concern. "What are these scribbles? How can I read them?"
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The sobs begin again, heavier this time. "They are not yours to read, Imperial bastard, they're our story." Maybe your getting through after all, not that you didn't guess that it was a form of journal. You turn and show it to Alys. "Any idea?" She shakes her head. "I speak every language on the continent and I have no idea what that is. Maybe a cipher of sorts? We can find out after we are done here. Speaking of..." Alys walks past you with a grim look and examines her tools. "There are a few options here now that she's not being cooperative. Tools, maybe nightshade essence to loosen her tongue. I do not think despite her defiance she would last long under the question, but she might die of her wounds at this rate. Normally I'd let her rot for a while, but Bro- I mean the Emperor strikes me as wanting results as soon as we can get them. The Nightshade has its own risk, her blood is thin and too much will just put her under never to rise. I am, as always, at your disposal, Will". She whispers quiet enough not to clue in the girl on your discussion. You suppose you could also try talking again before getting down to business, but you have your doubts what you could get from the distraught prisoner that way.

> Tools

> Nightshade

> Negotiation(Say what)

> Write in
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>>5195861
> > Negotiation(Say what)
Ask her why the Empire is evil and tyrannical in her eyes. She’s emotional, so it’ll come easy for her to insult us. If we aren’t going to learn who they really are, then we could eventually learn what the motives of the entity that brought them into this world, and if there are more coming from some sort of vengeful god/dess/es with an excess of bus’d teenagers
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>>5195861
>> Negotiation(Say what)
Nightshade would be a mistake, making it so she'd be too weak or out of it to speak clearly. Using the tools would be the most practical option, but considering how she is now emotionally, she might just bite her tongue out of spite.
The best we can do is try and rile her up emotionally and she what she lets slip. Telling her how she is likely to bleed out soon might be a good idea too. She also seems to have a strange sentiment toward the broken mirror for some reason
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>>5195861
Supporting >>5195885 and >>5195888
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>>5195885
Yeah something like this she'll probably be willing to rant about their cause and at least learning why they're doing this could be useful.

Also as a suggestion for alternate interrogation tactic; the big guy should be able to handle a lot more punishment and if she cares about her comrades we might be able to get her to talk by mutilating his unconscious body if she doesn't cooperate
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You scratch your bearded chin in thought. No option is perfect, but the woman is so very pale. Well acquainted with blood loss, you see all the signs. A sigh leaves your lips, admittedly performative. "Hold off for now Alys, I have a few ideas." She blinks as if surprised and you approach the prisoner again. "Vera, was it?" The girl looks surprised you bothered to remember her name. "I'll be honest, I've been on battlefields most of my life. I've seen wounds like that and I doubt we'll get to execute you even if my liege comes down here and does it himself this very night. Tell me something useful, anything but this insipid silence, and I'll have the surgeons do what they can. I cant give you much, but I can give you a chance." She looks green at this news, which surprises you. Was she not a healer herself? Surely she saw her own dire condition. "I suppose you'll also promise me a reprieve, you lying murderer?" Her voice is broken, but you almost respect the commitment to act. Still, this was little more than a child playing at hero, you suppose. You chuckle without mirth. "No, I shan't promise you what I cannot give, lass. I doubt anything you give us will change the final result. How you get there, how painful it is, that's the difference." You shrug to her still unconscious companion. "That goes for him too, you seemed so very close with your friend in the throne room. So if what mercy I can give you doesn't appeal, we can always see how much of him my friend here can remove before he bothers to wake up. Not that it would stop her." The fury again, this time directed at you. "Harain is defenseless, you disgusting creature!" You sigh again. "I doubt that headless old man upstairs put up much of a fight. He was old, spent most of his life building roads and aqueducts. Hardly a warrior you lot killed. Who's the murderer here, Lass?" The answer, you, was clear on her quivering features. "I've been patient, but your time is going to run out before my forbearance does in any case. Answers, now, and no harm will come to him or you. At least until the Emperor sees fit to deliver justice."

She bites her lip, clearly fighting with herself over what you have offered. You've made your play, now to see the outcome.
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>>5196830
Roll for Vera Defiance

DC 20 and over is good outcome for you guys

You picked her buttons well and there is another hidden factor that makes the prospect of imminent death more unpalatable for her. Honestly I expected torture o clock, maybe you guys are going to not be total edgelords.
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>>5196832
Unpractical edge is boring, I didn’t really see the point in torturing her, why did you think we’d go for it? Is it because of the quests theme or something else?
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>>5196832
She sobs, and falls limp against the restraints, her head droops and and the once defiant eyes will meet yours no longer. The voice is no barely more than a whisper, and you worry Alys again as you lean close to hear. Depths woman, she doesn't have arms and I'm twice her size, you think silently. "... I'll tell you. I'll tell you what I can, but," She looks up again, the ghost of defiance faint but present. "...you killed the only person who knew everything. Reiji was," She coughs another sob. "Never ready to tell us everything. Now we'll never know, Ill never be able to tell..." She trails off. Tell who? No matter, first things first. "Tell me Vera, the mirror, what is it? Where did it come from?" She smiled sadly. "It was a window, into a better world. The hateful hierarchies people here impose over and over, all things of the past. Everyone was free to do whatever they wanted, I could have been a warrior, Harain a priest." Women warriors and male Clergy? Sounds like some nightmare dreamed in the Depths. "You're no warrior lass." She shakes her head. "I wouldn't want to be be, but there I could be, and that's beautiful." You raise an eyebrow. "This better world, it's real? Not some mad manifesto? Is that where this language and the mirror come from." She scoffs. "Of course it's real, you'd know for yourself if you hadn't broke this gift he gave us all. Reiji came from there, there were pictures like you were standing just where he was. Maybe even you would have been persuaded like we all were." You highly doubt that. "This language, you can speak it?" Regret is clear in her voice. "It was one of the things he kept secret, he made it sound like there was something that stopped him. I know he at least wanted to teach me." You nod. "Take a moment to rest then, we will continue shortly." Something she said is bothering you, along with how she blanched at the prospect of death being so near. You step back as the girl says not another word.

"Alys, do you have something to keep her awake? I want the surgeons sent in as a show of my word." She reaches into her satchel. "Of course, I'll have to lessen the dose because of the blood loss but she'll not sleep even if desperate to do so." She cocks her head in that way she does. "Why do you look like something's bothering you?" A grimace twists your face. "I always look like that." She smiles. "I suppose there's a truth there, but I know you." You have to put some things together, she's right.

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>>5196838
/qst/ is wildly unpredictable when it comes to edge. Not going to say there wont be edge here given the premise, of course. If you had chosen old hand in char gen that would be the edge choice. It was a less than subtle reference to one Sand dan Glokta
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Don’t get me wrong, I’m cool with edge, just not needless random edge.
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>>5196856
Basically what >>5196858 said, I'm fine with going to some dark places but edge for it's own sake is boring and childish. Also playing with someone who's more interested in being effective than cruel is more interesting
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>>5196921
I personally stay away from edge unless the quest is clearly made for anons to go edgy, there are exceptions of course
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You stop mid stride as you and Alys leave to get the surgeons, the guards stepping back in to watch the prisoners. "Sudden question, but do you have means to detect if someone is with child?" She blushes for a moment, surprising you, before composing herself. "Yes, that is within my capabilities. You don't mean?" You nod. "The way she reacted when I said she was dying, I expected resignation, but there was a deep fear there. Seeing how close she was to this Reiji, I made an assumption. This complicates things, but it also gives us more leverage. Do you think she knows Imperial Law requires the unborn be brought to term before execution of the mother?" Alys snorts. "Do you think dear brother cares? You saw him before, he's never been like that. He's furious." No doubt. "Rightly so. But the wound is fresh and he has ever been reasonable. I can make the case to postpone things when his blood is cooler. It sounded to me she knows more than can be imparted in just the time before a regular execution is carried out. I would like to find out just what. This better world worries me. The girl, Vera, is garbed as a priestess of the Deep Lady. I actually don't think it a mere disguise, as she has the temperament for it. The big brute is clearly an Ard Negh, savage fighter like them all. Something that could turn the two of them into fanatics against Imperial order has a power we cannot ignore. The Emperor can be convinced to utilize all resources to their fullest, I'm sure." She sighs, shaking her head, her hood briefly falling to her shoulders and revealing crimson locks before the woman habitually brings it back up over her head despite there being no need for anonymity in her own home. "Better you than me, then, Will. I don't think I can handle an audience with the Emperor just now, I'm barely together as it is." You give her a concerned look. "I can handle the rest tonight if you need rest." A cold glare. "I do as the Emperor bids." You shrug, but the concern remains. Battle has taught you what can happen when someone doesn't know when they need to stop.
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The both of you quickly gather the surgeons and return to the cells. They set about Vera's wounds as Alys gathers what she needs from her satchel for the matter you had discussed earlier. It's at this moment that the door to the cells bursts open, and two of the remaining Imperial Guard enter carrying a limp form between them, led by an officer you recognize as Captain Osric. Odd, you were sure all the assassins were here or dead on the floor from the battle. Then you see his face. At first you think him beaten, but it becomes clear he's just unbelievably drunk. You stop Osric, leading the two carrying him to the cells. "Why are you arresting Sir Elpest? Did he have something to do with this? I find the suggestion offensive." The Captain cringes as you get in his face. "It's yet to be cleared up, Lord, but we found him in the hay with the stablemaster's daughter. Again" One of the men carrying the wayward knight sniggers for a moment before a look of pure malice from Osric silences his amusement. "My lord, I figure it just a youthful indiscretion, but the Emperor was wroth. He nearly had us kill him on the spot before Sir Graven advised otherwise." Good man, Graven. You'll have to thank him, and maybe intercede for the young man yourself. He's too valorous a knight to waste such, and you have a feeling Althimura will need every one of those it has and soon. Your mouth closes into a tight frown. "Very well, Captain, I understand. He's probably safer here for now anyway. I'll give him a talk on overconsumption when he's lucid again." Osric is visibly relieved. "Aye, my Lord. I'll tell the gaolers not to molest him." He and his men proceed to deposit Elpest in the furthest cell from the other prisoners, the drunk man's groggy eyes loosely focusing on you as they carry him, though no words come before he is allowed to collapse on the straw cot of his new quarters. With a bow, Osric and his fellows leave, and you return to the night's duty. The surgeons have cleansed the wounds and replaced the bandages, and Alys is looking worriedly towards you, her hands wringing. She approaches. "Will, you were right, what you said earlier. To think, I was more than willing..." Her eyes dart to her tools still arrayed on the nearby stool in the dank cell before she shakes her head free of the dark thoughts. "You have to take this to brother, for the reasons you claimed of course, but I am a trained midwife as well. I could not be party such barbarity." A grave nod is let out. "I gave the girl my word she would not be harmed until justice comes. I keep my word. I hope you know that." She doesn't smile, meeting the gravitas of your demeanor instead for once. "Yes, Lord Campbell, that I do."
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Alys tells you the tincture to keep Vera awake has been ministered, and will not adversely affect her condition in her experience. As she tells you this, the large man begins to stir. You could question him as well, you speak his language as does Alys, though the House Campbell tartan you wear over your mail hauberk names you the blood sworn enemy of the Clans from which he hails. Maybe better to have Alys speak to this one, as you stood in her place with Vera. The matter of Elpest is a thorn in your mind. In the back of your head you imagine an enraged Alkaign turning back on Graven's advice and sending the Guard back down to lynch the poor man, one more body to try and weigh out his father's. You shake that thought, though maybe it would not hurt to appeal on the knight's behalf sooner than later. Vera already looks better, color returning to her, though the despair remains and you know infection is never far for any amputee. Continued questioning while she is still lucid is an option, though you are hoping you have more time for that over the coming weeks as she may improve considerably and perhaps come to terms with her situation. You also have your newfound knowledge of her coming child to use as it suits you.

> Supervise Alys interrogating Harain. She can speak, you can come up with questions. Obviously no tools or harm, you gave your word. Unless that means less than you let on...

> Question Elpest. You really doubt any malice was involved, but in situations like this it pays to be paranoid. Armed with knowledge, you can make his case to Alkain, or not. You doubt he will be able to convincingly lie in his state, after all.

> Continue to go after Vera, breaking down her defenses further. You've broken her resolve, but perhaps some more days down here will make her more willing to talk? Or is it better to double down on your momentum?

The Emperor will be expecting your first report soon. Last choice in the dungeon.
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>>5197672
> Question Elpest. You really doubt any malice was involved, but in situations like this it pays to be paranoid. Armed with knowledge, you can make his case to Alkain, or not. You doubt he will be able to convincingly lie in his state, after all.
Alys can handle herself, and Vera needs to simmer in her juices for a while.
unrelated but the carian knight set is so good looking. It’s such a cool set for spellswords.
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>>5197672
>Question Elpest. You really doubt any malice was involved, but in situations like this it pays to be paranoid. Armed with knowledge, you can make his case to Alkain, or not. You doubt he will be able to convincingly lie in his state, after all.
Being a bloodstone enemy will probably just make the interrogation of the northerners harder (plus we did give our word and having a reputation as an honest man can be very useful), and the girl is likely too weak atm to be up to much talking.
Best to make sure there isn't anything to this other matter before we plead it before the Emperor. I have a nasty suspicion that while he probably isn't knowingly involved his tryst may have been arranged as a way to get him quietly out of the way.
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>>5197672
> Question Elpest. You really doubt any malice was involved, but in situations like this it pays to be paranoid. Armed with knowledge, you can make his case to Alkain, or not. You doubt he will be able to convincingly lie in his state, after all.
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Appreciate the interest folks and please do respond to the last prompt. Just want to ask: what are your thoughts? Not my first quest but I always want feedback. I figure I've got five or so regs and my philosophy is to do what the people want. Feel free to ignore this post, but if you have an issue be not afraid. I do have a concern im being too edgy, which I have tried to address, but let me know.
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>>5197672
>Question Elpest. You really doubt any malice was involved, but in situations like this it pays to be paranoid. Armed with knowledge, you can make his case to Alkain, or not. You doubt he will be able to convincingly lie in his state, after all.
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>>5197854
As I said earlier, touching on sensitive topics and/or going to dark places is fine just so long as the edge is there for a reason other than simply being edgy. For example I like that our protagonist was fulky on board with the potential of torture as it's entirely realistic for the setting and situation but I also really appreciate that he was smart enough to know the limitations and to take the less edgy but more effective methods.
Also personally I'm finding the base concept interesting, one of the things that always annoyed me about so many Iseki was just how stupid the antagonist factions are so the idea of playing as an actually competent opponent for some stereotypical Japanese high-schoolers has some interesting potential.
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>>5197908
The entire concept of this is isekai running into a stable and somewhat responsible gov so glad you got that.
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>>5197854
I don't really have any criticism since this is just the first thread, but I do like the main idea and pacing of it so far
I guess the only thing I can say is that I hope you find that fine line between it being realistic and exciting, since introducing the idea of Isekai to a more Medieval setting can have it's issues. Still, looking forward to how it goes!
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>>5197854
No real issues I've noticed so far, keep going, doing great.
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>Question Elpest. You really doubt any malice was involved, but in situations like this it pays to be paranoid. Armed with knowledge, you can make his case to Alkain, or not. You doubt he will be able to convincingly lie in his state, after all.
>>5197854
I like it so far QM, my one and only nitpick are your big fuck off paragraphs. I'm not trying to sound rude but I'd rather you separate them a bit, it's a bit rough to read. Otherwise? Top notch stuff, keep up the good work.
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You leave Alys and the surgeons to their tasks and approach Elpest's cell. Better to get his story quickly, there might not be time later. The knight looks miserable, his rumpled smallclothes covered in sweat. His head hangs low as he moves to a seated position on the rough cot. You make yourself known by lightly rapping on one of the bars. His head shakily raises and his bloodshot eyes meet yours.

"You picked a great night to do this, Elpest." You say, shaking your head. He chuckles dryly, but you don't see the humor in this. "Lord Uilleam, ever the hatchetman." You're not in the mood for snark tonight. "Just give me your story, I'm not taking a hatchet to anyone until I hear it." He grunts. "What's there to say? We just got back, I was celebrating. I got drunk. I fancy Aeflyn from the stables, you all know it, I invited her for drinks and we ended up doing what couples do hidden in a haystack." Rubbing your nose, you fight off a migraine. "The Emperor needed you Elpest, needed us all." He laughs sharply, derision clear on his face. "Saved him yourself did you? Save me the righteousness, Lord Campbell" He turns your title into a sneer. "I wasn't the only one out at a tavern with girl he fancies, was I?" This idiot is really making you regret considering helping him. "It's not like that." He doesn't look like he believes you. "And we could be found, Elpest, we came when called. You couldn't even stand." He tosses his arms up in exasperation. "And that makes me a traitor? Alkaign, my sworn brother, tried to get Graven to behead me, Uilleam! Right there on the floor before the throne. They weren't done cleaning up the blood already there and he wanted more of it!" He's scrambling, and you see the desperation behind his lashing out. He truly thinks himself condemned, and you are not convinced he is wrong. In this moment, despite his words, you decide to do what you can.

"I'll tell him what you said. I don't see a traitor here, just a drunk fool. We don't hang those." You turn away from the cell. "Don't let them hurt Aeflyn!" He calls out to your back. "They took her too!" You stop for a moment. "I can't make promises for yourself, but if what you said is true no one will harm the girl on my watch, you have my word as a knight."

You have to leave it at that, as two Imperial Guardsmen enter the dungeon, walking with brisk purpose.

"Lord Campbell, The Emperor sends for you." There is only one answer to that. "As he commands." You leave with the men, not missing Alys' worried glance nor that she was not sent for.
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The throne room is full when you return, a horde of lords and advisors fighting to divide Alkaign's attentions. You spy the Honored Xia Chen with a long scroll near the throne, almost certainly amidst the thankless task of balancing Imperial finances. The flurry of activity in the hall dies down as the Emperor raises his hand for silence. "Lord Campbell, I trust you have news?"

You sink to a knee. "Aye, My Emperor, I do." He motions you to approach, and you begin telling him what Vera has given up. It takes time, and you leave no detail out, even throwing in a few of your own theories for good measure.

"Another world? You believe this girl?" Alkaign seems less incredulous than you might think. "I believe she believed it, my Emperor. And I gathered items from the boy's body that support her story." You look up upon the throne and note a spot where some of Albrecht's blood had yet to be cleaned from the gilt metalwork of the ornate chair. The Emperor notes the movement of your eyes, and his eyes fix on the spot, a small show of sadness crosses the Imperial mask that has replaced your liege's face. It is gone in a moment. "Their powers? You arrived late to see it with the Lady Alys, but they had some sort of glamour about them when they entered. Fath-" He stops himself. "-the former Emperor never expected one of his own guardsmen to take his head. By the time they were revealed they already had us on the back foot. You say the strength of their leader, and the brutish endurance of their Northerner. Did the prisoner say from whence it came?"

"No my Emperor, but she will. I have little doubt the girl will tell us all she knows. I suspect their abilities faded when Lady Alys and I slew the one from their so called better world. The girl's life was fading but she made no attempt to heal herself. The northerner is so exhausted its like he just marched across a mountain range carrying a full pack. I believe he was the keystone and once it was struck the fortress of their superior powers fell quickly, and I believe the girl will confirm this when she is strong enough for more questioning."

He rubs his brow just under the Imperial circlet. "So it's true then, you brought healers to her? Seems a waste, Lord Campbell, I'll have her head upon the battlements as soon as you have wrung her dry." You close your eyes for a moment. This is the hard part.

"My Emperor, I would never place myself between my Liege and due justice, but please heed my words. The girl is clergy, and with child-" His first slams down on the throne, to his right Sir Graven gives you a worried look as Xia Chen jumps back, startled. "Damn the priestesses and damn that bastard's vile spawn! I thought better of you, Lord Campbell! Such softheartedness. Did they show father mercy? Would that boy have thought for a second had he taken your head and not shattered your arm? I think no, my Lord, no I do not think so."
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Sir Graven is pale with shock at the outburst, but the old man is stalwart as ever and steps close to the Emperor, coming to your aid. "My Emperor, Lord Campbell has the right of it. You cannot begin your reign by violating the law and putting a woman with child to death. The clergy would also surely have much to say of you executing one of their own without consultation. You have Imperial primacy over them of course, but the Priestesses can cause you no end of grief in many ways. Lord Campbell has risked your righteous wroth due to his loyalty, I humbly suggest you reward him with consideration." Graven nods towards you as Alkaign seethes, but the Emperor does wait for you to finish.

You bow your head in respect to your liege. "Justice will come my lord, but wait until the child is born. It will also give us time to wring all possible information from the prisoners. Once it's done, we make them face the Depths for what they've wrought."

Alkaign's fingers rap relentlessly on the throne's armrest, and it is several moments before he speaks. "So be it. Damn the Lady for saddling me with the world's most damnably moral northerner, and the world's most silver tongued knight." He nods towards a relieved Sir Graven. You do not budge, and Alkaign soon notes it. "I imagine this is the part where you plead mercy for Elpest as well?"

He sounds less angry, but he spits Elpest's name like a curse. "It is, my Emperor. I believe his story. He's a drunken fool, but no traitor. And the girl he was with is innocent, just lovestruck." Alkaign waves away your concerned look with a hand. "Bah, I know it. I had them release her already. I recognized the girl, they've been courting for years at this point. As for Elpest, he will be punished. But I am convinced to be merciful. Honored Chen?"

The diminutive woman steps forward. "My Emperor?"

"Strike Sir Elpest from the lists. He is an Imperial Knight no longer." She nods, and steps out to find the documents, no doubt. "You may release the fool from the dungeon, Lord Campbell, but he is to be gone from Althimur in a fortnight on pain of death. If I see that lout again his head will join the two I already placed on the battlements tonight."

"Your mercy abounds, My Emperor." Alkaign snorts. "Against my better judgement. Thank you for your report Lord Campbell, you may leave, I will call for you again soon."

You rise to leave, noting Graven's nod of respect as you make your way back down to the cells to inform Elpest of his fate. The imbecile has more luck than sense it seems.

Alys is still there when you arrive, clearly relieved to see you, and obviously the prisoners remain. The northerner is now awake, and straining futilely at his bonds. You note Vera seems to be trying to calm him down, the guards allowing it as they don't want to deal with the giant themselves. You call them over, as they don't seem busy.
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"Elpest is to be freed by order of the Emperor. Open the cell. The doors creak open as the former knight rises unsteadily. "Uilleam, you actually convinced him? I don't know what to say." He wince. "Don't thank me. You've been struck from the lists and banished from the capitol. It's a better deal than you could have got, so take it well." He looks stricken. "I'm not a knight? But Uilleam, what will I do? I don't have a trade? Where will I live?"

> Take on Elpest as a man at arms. The man is an ass but a fine warrior, and whatever task the Emperor gives you next will need men like him. He can leave for your retinue at Hold Campbell.

> You want no part of an unreliable man. Tell him to see if his girl will still have him and leave the city with her, find some way to get by.

> Write in
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Carpal Tunnel is a bitch for writing guys
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>>5198533

> Take on Elpest as a man at arms. The man is an ass but a fine warrior, and whatever task the Emperor gives you next will need men like him. He can leave for your retinue at Hold Campbell.

>>5197854
Actually, this update reminded me that you should probably write the entire update and then post all at once instead of writing and posting piecemeal, especially if you ping the voters with the update. It's much smoother that way. Good job on the spacing btw.
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>>5198533
>> Take on Elpest as a man at arms. The man is an ass but a fine warrior, and whatever task the Emperor gives you next will need men like him. He can leave for your retinue at Hold Campbell.
poor elpest, thrown away by his lifelong companion. to be fair to him it was meant to be a celebration and he couldn't have known this would happen, but still...rough
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>>5198533
>Take on Elpest as a man at arms. The man is an ass but a fine warrior, and whatever task the Emperor gives you next will need men like him. He can leave for your retinue at Hold Campbell.
Make it clear that he's still on thin ice so his behavior had better be impeccable.
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>>5198533
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>>5198533
> Take on Elpest as a man at arms. The man is an ass but a fine warrior, and whatever task the Emperor gives you next will need men like him. He can leave for your retinue at Hold Campbell.
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You think for a moment. Whatever problems you have with his personality your time on the road with him showed Elpest to be a fine warrior. You do not have many men at arms in your small hold, but there is surely room for another. Devoid of trade and without his knightly stipend, you expect Elpest can do no better.

“Alys,” You call. “Do you have a parchment and quill?” She silently approaches and hands you what you ask. You scribble down some directives and seal the letter with your signet upon a red wax seal. A surprised Elpest receives the letter in confusion. You look him in the eyes. “It's a letter of introduction to Captain Laphroaig at Hold Campbell. I'll take you on as a man at arms, he'll see you quartered. I will give you one free morsel of advice Elpest, behave yourself. I keep in correspondence with my mother and sisters and I will be asking after you.”

He pales. “L-lord Uilleam, you are generous, and I accept. But what of Aeflyn?”

“The girl is free and unharmed, Elpest, the Emperor knew her by sight. If you plan to see her again I would go to her soon. You have a fortnight to be gone from here in perpetuity. It's not my business, but I know how close you are. If you can convince her father feel free to take her north with you. Honestly, if you have someone keeping you from making an arse of yourself when you get there I'll sleep better trusting you around my womenfolk. If not, well, you have some days to say your goodbyes.”

Elpest nods vigorously, his look that of a man saved from drowning but unsure of how to get to shore. “I'll go right away, my Lord. Thank you, thank you so much.” He effuses his gratitude at you, and you motion for him to get going. He hurries from the dungeon as you hear Alys giggle at the sight.

“The ever magnanimous Lord Campbell! You save any more wretches or maidens tonight and I might be tempted to swoon.” She says with a sly grin.

You grunt. “If I have to carry you out of here I am not letting you forget it.”

She smiles radiantly. “Why would I want to?”

You scratch the back of your head and turn to the remaining prisoners. “I should let Vera know the Emperor agreed to my terms. Shouldn't leave her in suspense.”

Alys has produced one of her knives and is fiddling with it, cleaning a fingernail you note has no need of such attention. “I won't stop you, Will. I think I am going to find some food before the kitchens are cleared out. Good luck.” You understand she is likely leaving as to not put Vera on edge.
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Appreciating her intent, you nod as she turns to leave and make your way to the shackled girl. Her attentions turn from calming the northerner to you.

“Vera, you should know. The Emperor, in his mercy, has agreed to what I offered. You will live, for a time. We will speak daily, as long as it takes to learn all you know, and you will be spared undue discomfort as will your Ard Negh friend. This is not a pardon, I want you to know, at the end of this road is death. But you will arrive there with dignity.” You speak gravely, wanting no misunderstanding of the girl's situation for the next few months.

She sinks, realistically she could not have thought other outcomes were likely, but you detect an outside hope has been crushed. “Okay, okay, I can do this. Do you want to start now?” You shake your head.

“It's late Vera, and I'll have food brought for you and Harain. We have many months to work at this, I think.” You sigh. “You could have said you were with child. I would never do anything to harm an unborn if I had the choice. We are not monsters, nor is the Emperor.”

She blanches. “I thought you would use it against me! I've seen what happens to those who step out of line, you expect me to believe that was below you?” You look at her sadly. This young girl was bought with promises of a foreign world. If she would have just been a priestess of the Lady in her proper place, would she have been happy? You think maybe so. What a waste that her youthful rebellion ended so destructively.

“The child will be brought to term, Vera. I can promise little beyond that. But I will do what I can. I hope you see now I am a man of my word.” Against your better judgement, you place a comforting hand on her slumped shoulder. Either out of lack of will or strength, she does not throw you off. You hardly believed she had tears left to give, but perhaps the ministrations of the surgeons have given them back, as they fall once again.

“It's not fair, it's not fair! We were supposed to be heroes...” You turn away. Not in disgust, but in absolute pity. This girl will meet a bad end despite what of her and the dead boy you have managed to salvage. Her own culpability in this fate does not make you at peace with the part you will surely, and have surely played in it. But duty always has a cost. Tonight there is nothing left to say, and so you close the cell door behind you and leave without another word. It will be a long several months.
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>>5199775
You haven't eaten all night, and hunger pains you as you enter your palace quarters, thinking after washing the blood and grime from your body you might go to the kitchen yourself to beg at least some bread at this late hour. Refreshed from the cleansing after some time, you leave the side room to find a fresh meal of mutton and a hearty soup on the table near your door, a note and some ale beside. You break the nondescript seal and read.

Will,

You've been going without ceasing. Please, eat and rest. I admire your determination but no one wants you to collapse mid day because you kept going when you should not. Rest your arm, and your mind, we will begin again tomorrow. If you swoon next time we are in the dungeon, I quite literally will not be able to carry you.

Yours, Alys

The chair creaks as you sit into it, and begin to lay into the food and drink. Alys is right, of course. You have ever neglected yourself for your duty, but there would be no one else to blame were you to weaken or fall ill because of your own bullheaded negligence. You resolve to thank the woman when you can. Far away from the only family remaining to you it's clear she is the one who seems to look out for your health. You take comfort in this as sleep claims you moments later, sprawled across the bed with the sheets given no mind.
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>>5199777
Six months pass...

You remain in the capitol, questioning Vera and even occasionally Harain, though the northerner unsurprisingly gives a hated enemy little of value. Neither attempt escape, and Alkaign is pleased with the steady progress of your fact finding. You confirm that the strange powers faded with Reiji's death, that the Better World is indeed as vast as your own, and not simply some foreign and unknown isle or remote continent. She spoke of technology and magic beyond Imperial reckoning, horseless carriages, metal avians to carry passengers to cross long distances, weapons of war that boggle the mind. But you could hardly get her to cease speaking of this world's strange and horrifying political systems. Radical “equality” between the sexes, surely destroying social order. Giving even the lowliest a say in politics, ensuring only demagogues could hold any office. Worst of all, the rightful masters paying their lessers to continue to exist. You are horrified that this young girl and her savage friend were susceptible to such madness, and that they saw it viable here in the Empire. Over time, useful information dries, and you begin to hear of nothing but anecdotes of the life Vera and Reiji shared. Humoring this is your only option, you fear if it became clear all use was exhausted Alkaign might kill the girl on a whim, and then your word and honor would be broken. They met years ago, both but children. Reiji seemed beyond his years and Vera was smitten, despite already being in training to join one of the more restrictive orders of the Lady of the Depths. On her sixteenth birthday she was to be sworn to her final vows, but they ran away together. Taking in a roguish thief from a southern desert city they sojourned in for some time named Deris, the other dead man in the throne hall, they then travelled north and met Harain. To your worry, she described how the new ideology of the Better World had taken root nearly everywhere they went, whispered among the smallfolk and the unfortunate. This seems to be a brewing long term threat.

Things continue much the same for months. It becomes clear that whatever his other faults this Reiji had some concept of keeping secrets. You find out little more than you did the first few weeks. Alys and you work together to do what you can, but it feels like more an effort to keep Alkaign satisfied than anything truly productive. You do receive a letter from your eldest sister Ava, noting the arrival of Elpest and his new wife the name of whom she could not get due to the man's overprotectiveness. He is nonetheless sworn in as a man at arms, and Captain Laphroaig notes his ability and dedication. Maybe the wastrel has turned a corner after all.
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It is, of course, not long before the birth comes. Alys demands to be there to aid it, despite the enmity Vera still bears her. You wait outside, your current duties at the capitol beginning and ending with the prisoners for now. It is some hours, and you reflect on not ever being present for a child's coming before, being away training for your younger sisters' births. You find yourself nervous despite your detatchment from the child. You worry for Alys, who surely must be conflicted delivering the child of a woman who hates her, and you even find a surprising pang for Vera, who you will very shortly deliver to her end regardless of the outcome of the birth. You find you really want a drink.

You are surprised to find yourself asleep, a hand on the pommel of your sheathed bastard sword, when the screams of the girl's agony come to be joined by the shrill cries of an infant. A quick glance at the infirmary window tells you it is early morning, the sun only cresting the horizon. You slept through most the night, a long labor, you reckon. Standing, you take your former place near the door, waiting patiently for any call. It's not long before the door bursts open. It's Alys, her arms covered in gore, her eyes red with open weeping. She doesn't need to say a thing, you enter the room.

The assistant midwives crowd Vera, covered in her blood as much as Alys is, and not nearly as much as the bed. You have never seen a birth, but you know the battlefield. Vera is dying, and very soon. One of the midwives holds the newborn, the cord cut, as Vera limply reaches for it.

You shout. “For fuck's sake, woman! Give the poor girl her child!”


The midwife startles and shakily hands over the infant. Vera's pale face lights up at the baby's crying face, still red and pink all over. “My son, my little boy.” You would rather face the Depths than ever see another dying woman hold her infant again. Your face remains immovable, but your soul screams. Vera hugs the child to her breast, this girl barely more than a child herself playing the mother to a son doomed to orphandom. You stand, like an idiot, just inside the door as she takes her fleeting joy from a son she will never see grow. Her head turns to you, the last thing you ever wanted to see here. Her weak voice the last thing you wanted to hear.
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>>5199780
“There will be more like Reiji, you know. Many more. He told us that. I don't know how he knew, or who they are. But they're coming.” She laughs softly. “I think they'll win. But you let me have my son, so I'll warn you.” She hands off the boy to the midwife and musters her strength to sit up, clearly straining herself. “ I hope when they win, they show you the same MERCY-” Her voice breaks as she screams the word. “- as you showed us.” Her eyes turn to Alys, who you notice is leaning against the doorway, still bloody with Vera's birth. Her voice is fading as Vera says, “I hope they don't show her any mercy at all...” Her head falls slack as one of the midwives and one of the surgeons rush over. They take only a moment before they look you in the eye, shaking their heads. She has bled out. Vera is gone.

The midwife holding the child approaches you. “Lord, what of the child? The Emperor made no decree, I do not know what to do.”

> I will take him as ward. The Emperor will accept that and my sisters will welcome a little brother no matter his origin. I will speak to the Emperor of it.

> A royal ward of course, it is the Emperor's job to decide what becomes of the child.

> Consult Alys

> Take the child before Alkaign before deciding

> Write in
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This was an experiment in both spacing and characterization. Hope you guys enjoyed it. And to the one anon, not only is this first post in a separate word processor this is the first update not done on my tablet as my laptop is finally back from the shop.
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>>5199781
> Consult Alys
Difficult choice here. I don't like taking him before Alkaign, he has already stated that he doesn't really care what happens to the child, and was partial to execute Vera while she was still pregnant; I doubt anything fruitful would come from that meeting. Taking him on as our ward is a lot of responsibility, and I'm not sure we're in the position to be raising a child with more of these guys coming. What if more pregnant party members arrive? Will we take them all in personally? I'm not entirely sure what a 'royal ward' entails, but if it means being raised by the Emperor, then almost certainly not. Alkaign would resent us for ladening him with this child of his hated enemy. I think Consulting Alys for more wisdom on the situation is a good move here.

I wonder if it was merciful that she died in childbirth rather than however Alkaign would have her executed.

>>5199798
I'm liking it, QM. Keep up the good work.
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>>5199781
>Consult Alys
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>>5199781
> Consult Alys
I think we should take him as a ward but a second opinion can't hurt.
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>>5199781
>Write in
If more of these unnatural enemies are coming and could be in any walk of life than I suggest we start some long term planning: petition the emperor to start a program to take in orphans and begin training them from early childhood as spies and assasins to monitor the population for signs of these outsiders and end their threat before it can blossom. Besides I'm sure the idea of turning the spawn of his enemy into a tool to use against them might help temper any desire of vengeance he might feel against the child
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>>5199812
A royal ward is effectively a hostage against good behavior. In this case you would not know against who, if anyone, it might have value, but it was a common practice.
Considering circumstances Alkaign might view it as a hold on Uilleam if anyone.
For note: both William Marshal and Vlad Tepes were at one point such hostages. Marshal even at one point was all but strung up on a makeshift gibbet made of a trebuchet. Tepes was forced to participate in war on his own country.

I dont intend to force either of these things on the poor boy if this is your choice, only wanted to show what this option allows.
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>>5199781
>Consult Alys
Also are there no orphanages at all in this country?
Could we just give him to some farmers or something? Historically so long as there wasn't a food shortage childless families were happy to adopt healthy babies to ensure future workers and someone to care for them when they got old
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>>5199918
That's totally an option!

Alkaign will likely not appreciate it if he finds out.
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>>5199781
>> A royal ward of course, it is the Emperor's job to decide what becomes of the child.
the ultimate good in monarchy is the will of the king/Emperor. submitting himself to the Emperor's will speaks well of Uilleam, even if it does bind him. it also would give the kid a somewhat better life than most other options.
I don't see why Alys would have any clue what would be best and she's obviously not in a good emotional place. straining her is not the move. it's Uilleam's place to make a decision, and he can't waffle
>>5199862
this plan relies on a very modern state apparatus with clearcut identities and institutions. without those things, either the kid is raised where the court/Uilleam can see him and therefore has some kind of 'loyalty' and knowledge impressed upon him; or he is raised where they can't, and his allegiance is left to chance.
while we don't know for sure how premodern spying worked due to the nature of the job, I definitely don't think it would work like a 20th century sleeper-agent story.
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>>5199918

You look to the midwife. “Let me think for a moment, see to the child's comfort.” The woman nods as you walk towards the doorway and the bloody woman leaning against it with a pensive expression. Your hand reaches Alys' shoulder as you leave the room. “Walk with me, Alys, let's get you washed up.” She follows at your side as you move down the infirmary halls to the water basins. You arrive, and she begins to wash her hands.

“You don't know what to do, do you Will?” She says softly, her voice barely carrying over the sounds of the water basin.

You shake your head. “I had a few ideas, but I don't know anything about children. I was never around while my sisters grew up.” Father had you training with his men and himself, travelling throughout your lands and beyond, learning your trade against Ard Negh incursions. You love your sisters but you were only an intermittent presence as they grew.

She looks over as the basin turns pink and then red. “We have a few options. I don't think we should leave him with brother, he'll see the assassin in him as he grows and it will only take one bad day and boy's fate is sealed. We could find somewhere obscure, but I worry about what Vera said about the tales of the Better World spreading throughout the populace. Especially with more like that boy coming. If they find the child he could be a rallying cry. Not to mention brother would have our heads if we snuck him out to hide him.”

You scratch your beard idly. “A ward then, somewhere more secure? Maybe someone we trust?”

She shakes her head. “Runs the same risk, if they find him it will be no end of trouble. I think I know what we can do, though. We need to obscure his identity. We can swear the midwives to silence, claim the child stillborn. No one will question it considering the fate of the mother. We send the child to a hold was ward, announce them as ward later when enough time has passed to not raise suspicion.” She grimaces.

“What is it, Alys? We'll have to tell the Emperor, won't we?”

She nods. “We will, but that's not it. I'm sure he will see the wisdom in it. To keep the child safe, he can't just be some nobody or someone might put it together. We can't trust anyone but us for this either. So my solution is simple. We send him to your hold, and you claim him as your bastard.”
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“What!?!” You cry out louder than you intended. She places her newly cleansed hand over yours.

“Calm down. Think about it. You've been gone more than two years since the Heir's party last passed by Hold Campbell. It would hardly be unheard of. You're unmarried, so it's not too much of a hit to your reputation, and the Emperor favors you so it's not like anyone will speak out on the matter anyway.”

You scoff. “My mother would never believe it. My sisters...”

She stares into your eyes. “I know how important your honor is to you, Will, but if you want to protect the child this is the best way. If your mother doesn't believe it, fine, I'm sure you can come to an understanding.”

This option troubles you deeply. The logic behind it is clear, but you will be sacrificing your honor, or at least the appearance of it, to sell it. Not to mention outside of your closest confidants you will have to lie about the boy constantly. You are unsure you can maintain such a deception.

“Alys, I'm a warrior, and I am sworn to the Emperor. I cannot raise a child.”

She laughs softly. “Since when have men bothered raising their children? I'm sure your sisters will enjoy having a little one around, and your mother struck me as imminently capable.” When you passed back through the area a little more than a year into your journeys with Alkaign, Alys and your mother, the Lady Moira had got on famously. You were a little glad to leave, because you feared mother might be angling to make things awkward on your relationship with your liege by trying to foist you as a marriage prospect for her. In fact, you have little doubt they've been in correspondence since, though you've respected Alys' privacy by refraining from bringing it up.

You have to make a decision. The Emperor gave no directive about the child, only telling you to see to the matter satisfactorily. Alys' option will likely not raise his ire. And, to be honest, you don't know if your own trepidation is coming from an honest place or, vile though it may be, an attempt to avoid an unwanted responsibility.

"We need to report to the Emperor, Alys." You say, your waver quavering slightly.

"Don't change the subject, Will. We do need to report. So we better know what we plan to do, no?" The sardonic grin returns, though you do note the redness of her eyes remains. She's pretending not to be affected but it's clear Vera's death, and perhaps her last words, are bothering her. You second guess her much as you did yourself. Is she thinking clearly? Or do you just want an excuse to discount her?

> Go with Alys's suggestion

> Another option is best(choose which one)

> Write in
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>>5200641
> Go with Alys's suggestion
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>>5200641
>Go with Alys's suggestion
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>>5200641
>Another option is best(choose which one)
Have our new man at arms and his wife foster thr child. He owes us for saving his ads and a new couple having a child is hardly going to raise suspicion
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>>5200641
How well do we know Elpest would >>5200726 work?
Because if so I'd like to back that suggestion
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>>5200726
>You scratch your beard idly. “A ward then, somewhere more secure? Maybe someone we trust?”
>She shakes her head. “Runs the same risk, if they find him it will be no end of trouble.

This won't work apparently. I'd rather not go behind the Emperor's back or have a lingering liability for the rest of our life.

>>5200641
> Go with Alys's suggestion
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>>5200641
> Go with Alys's suggestion
There really isn't a better choice than this, aside from getting another of the Emperor's circle to raise him as their own. And considering we'll most likely be dealing with this otherworlder problem, we would do best to keep him close to us
Though it might be a problem when he eventually finds out the truth
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>>5200726
>Support
It's the exact same thing since he will be on our hold and under our watch, except the excuse is more believable.
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>>5201028
If it's the exact same thing, then we should not do it, because it's been said that the Emperor would view it very negatively if we offloaded him onto someone else.
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>>5201045
>>5200855
But the option of going behind the emperor's back is the one of giving him to a farmer or orphanage, all of the wards ones have to go through him. The problem of sending to another hold is that it's out of our control, and making him a royal ward puts the child at risk.
She points out that a ward somewhere else would risk being found out, and that only we can be trusted. However it would not be us that would raise the child anyway, but our sisters amd mother.
Sending the child to be raised by Elpest has the same result becuase it would still be in our hold, he can become our ward, and his identity is obscured, without having to make a lie that everyone that knows us will see through.
The only risk is that the emperor is angry at Elpest, but we can claim that since he is to avoid showing his face to the emperor ever again, so will the child, and by one being our man at arms and the other our ward, they become our responsability.
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>>5201063
Basically, it is Alys' proposal, but instead of the excuse being that he is our bastard, the lie is that he is Elpest' newborn, because it's a bit more believable to people that know us.
And the child can still become our ward or page, since the oarents don't need to be dead and it can be (relatively) voluntary as well.
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>>5201063
Alright then, that's a good idea as long as the child is explicitly our ward and this isn't a secret from the Emperor. However, people who know the Elpest couple would know that she didn't get pregnant recently, and they've been over there for 6 months by now. It might be believable if they had just arrived with the child, but babies don't pop out of thin air. Though perhaps we could say that they just adopted the child.
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>>5201199
Hmmmm, maybe they could hide the child until she does have one, and they say they are fraternal twins?
The one year age difference will throw it off at the beggining, but eventually it would become neglible.
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Okay, I'll admit, I'm at a loss here. Love the discussion guys but I can't really tell if anyone has fully convinced the other so with the exception of

>>5200685
>>5200720
>>5200888

Who all seem locked in can I get the rest of you to reply in greentext with your choice between Alys' proposal as is or the anon's write in involving Elpest? Sorry for the trouble, but I absolutely do not want to misconstrue anyone's vote.
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>>5201439
Appreciated QM
>Have our new man at arms and his wife foster the child.
on the condition that they are our ward and this idea is neither scandalous to nor hidden from the Emperor. Otherwise:
> Go with Alys's suggestion
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>>5201439
>Elpest will raise the child, claiming it's. He will become our ward or page when he grows up. He will be our responsability, same as Alys suggestion, but he is not our bastard. Make Elpest's wife a handmaiden to one of our sister if nescessary to keep them inside our hall where the child can be looked over.
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why do we care about this child at all? it's the kid of the crew that murdered our former liege, make him a royal ward if we have to but why stain our reputation for the sake of some bastard?
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Leaving the vote up another night or so. Hell or high water I will take the majority I have tomorrow and write it.

Have a good one folks.
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>>5201460
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>>5202001
Please put which one of those you support in greentext because they do have differences and I don't want an aneurysm tomorrow.

Guys, I dont want to be anal about this. But I think from now on votes will have to be greentext. This kind of stuff just adds unneeded confusion. Please do your votes from now on in greentext. As always, write ins are welcomed.
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>Turn the kid over as a royal ward.
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>>5202016
>Elpest will raise the child, claiming it's. He will become our ward or page when he grows up. He will be our responsability, same as Alys suggestion, but he is not our bastard. Make Elpest's wife a handmaiden to one of our sister if nescessary to keep them inside our hall where the child can be looked over
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>>5200641
>Go with Alys's suggestion
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By my count it's

3 for Elpest

1 for Royal Ward

4 for "Bastard"

Close vote. I'm closing it here so no one gets any last minute desire to samefag. For those suspicious of 1ID voters I understand but I did just advertise in /qtg/ for the first time so I cannot discount them. Update later tonight when I get home.

For what it's worth the Elpest write in was clever and not an option I thought of. Though maybe not thrusting parenthood on the cad right away will be for the best.
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>>5202791

You clasp your hands behind your head in exasperation, pacing before a clearly amused Alys, before all but falling down upon a nearby bench and laughing bitterly. “Alys, you really are too good at this, I keep looking for reasons to say no to that and all it's doing is giving me a migraine.”

She laughs as she softly sits beside you on the stone bench. “See, you do keep me around for a reason.” Her happy expression drops as you both see two of the midwives pass by the doorway, a shawl covering the burden they carry, a pale handless limb swaying from the movement of those carrying it down the hall. You hear her sigh, the long exhalation breaking into a quiet sob, and feel her head rest softly on your shoulder. “She hated me, the entire time, she hated me. Hated you. Even though we helped her.”

You shake your head slowly, careful not to disturb the woman overmuch with the movement. “Alys, we were only ever going to be the people who killed the father of her child. She was young, and angry, and dying. Her last words shouldn't have been an affirmation of hate, but Vera isn't around to realize the last thing she ever said should have been words of love for her son.” Your confidence in your actions keeps your voice steady. “We did the right thing, even though it was hard and thankless to do so. She got to hold her boy, and Alkaign didn't lash out and do something I am sure he would come to regret.” At least, you hope he would have. The man you traveled with for years and the Emperor ever seem to be divergent people.

“Hmm.” She hums, not moving from her spot against you. “Maybe someday I'll believe that.”

“We should head up to the council chamber soon, Alys.”

“You're right. Soon.” It is some more moments before she budges, and you don't begrudge her the time as she breathes softly against you.

Albrecht had always preferred to do all business in the throne room itself, placing some importance on doing the business of government in the relative open of the large audience chamber containing his office's ornate chair, both throne and room a result of one of his many renewal projects. Alkaign broke with this, doing most everything save formal audiences and ceremonies from the far less grand closed council chamber. At least it's more private, you suppose. It's there you find him and his councilors, in the middle of Xia Chen giving what sounds like a report on tax revenue.
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“ -southern revenue is down due to the missing collectors the Lord Constable mentioned. I suggest increasing guard on their caravans and hiring more locals to the Imperial Revenue Service. Alternatively-” She is cut off by the Emperor.

“Ah, Lord Campbell! Lady Alys! If you're both here, then I assume I can finally end the life of your damnable charity cases?” The Emperor spreads his arms wide from his seat in welcome.

You both bow, and you meet Alkaign's eyes. “You will need only one gibbet, my Emperor. Vera did not survive the birth.”

He fails to hide his disappointment. “A better death than the whore deserved. The child?”

Alys speaks up. “My Emperor, we have a proposal about that...” She proceeds to explain the fate you had chosen for Vera's son, and why you both felt such an approach was wise. To your surprise, Alkaign required little convincing. He seems to even find it amusing.

Only you, Lord Campbell, are so honorable as to sacrifice your honor.” He says, a sardonic smile that resembles Alys' across his aquiline features. “Maybe having the child around will get your sisters to find a match before your hold becomes some sort of sanctuary for spinsters.”

Alys takes this opportunity to relate Vera's final warning of the coming of more foes like Reiji.
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“More then? I suppose it couldn't be simple. There have been a number of growing issues these last few months, from missing tax collectors to unseasonal northern raids. Could they already be here? We have to find out. Which brings me to the other matter at hand.” Alkaign holds out his hand and a sealed document is placed into it by Sir Graven, as always standing behind his liege. “My grandfather was a man of military bearing, his campaigns gave us the northern duchies you call home, Lord Campbell. His extensive war spending was of course unpopular, and revolts happened with some frequency. He had an answer for this: The Beholders. An autonomous spy organization tasked to maintain public order and protect the Empire from internal and external threats. It was very successful. Too successful, if my father disbanding it is any indication. I wonder how many bridges he built off of what used to be the order's budget?” He unfurls the scroll he holds, clearing his throat. “I, the Emperor Alkaign, in Imperial Year 630, declare the reinstatement of the Order of Beholders. Lord Uilleam Campbell, of good name and faithful character, is named Captain-General of the Order immediately. Castle Barython is relinquished from Imperial stewardship and bequeathed upon the holder of the office of Captain-General and all successors to the office henceforth.” He closes the scroll.

Every eye in the room is on you, and you have a hard time hiding your surprise. “My Emperor, this is too much honor.”

Alkaign barks a laugh. “Honor? This is work, Lord Campbell. You'll be cursing my name in nary a month. These damned visitors are going to be Depths' damned hard to root out. And the job is yours. I can't be barking at shadows my entire reign. So you will do it for me.” He points at you. “My first command to my Captain-General is to ride to Barython and take command. The garrison and staff are yours, as is the budget I'm having Honored Chen carve out of the treasury. Get the Order settled in it's new home, and then destroy these subversives by any means necessary. I'll expect a report when you first take one of their bastard heads.”

You rise. “It will be done, my Emperor, on my honor.”

“Considerable as it is.” He holds up a finger like he remembered something he forgot. “Oh, and do take Lady Alys with you. That stare of hers would put me in the grave short a month if I didn't send her with you. Now get you gone, I'll spare you the next few hours of Chen's damnable numbers and figures.”

You and Alys leave the council room as you hear Xia Chen dive back into her exhaustively detailed list of revenue changes and suggestions on how to increase the treasury. The heavy oak doors close behind you both.
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“So,” Alys says, humor evident in her voice. “-a castle.”

You nod. “I have no idea how to run a castle.”

“It's like your hold, just bigger.”

You massage your temple. “Mother runs my hold.”

“Thank the Lady for that. I've seen what your tent looks like on the road.” She teases as you both walk down towards the stables.

"Hey I know where everything is at least."

You find a number of knights saddling up when you arrive. One in the livery of Alkaign's household approaches you.

“Captain-General, Lady Alys. I am Sir Friedrich. The Emperor has bade my men and I to accompany you on the road to Castle Barython. A number of functionaries newly sworn to your Order are also preparing to travel via caravan alongside us.”

You accept the knight's greeting and return his salute as he places his fist over his chest.

“Will, I'll go get the child. We'll ride with the functionaries. Go ahead and get your horse saddled, I'll return shortly.” You nod, and the woman leaves, her dark cloak swishing in the stale stable air as she turns to leave.

“Child?” Sir Friedrich inquires.

“My bastard.” You say it for the first time, a scowl almost coming to your face at the word.

“... I see.” Friedrich looks disapproving, but knows his place. You doubt you'll hear about it from him again.

Your horses readied after some time, you and the knights ride out into the courtyard where the caravan is preparing. It consists of a few dozen of Chen's legion of civil servants. Now sworn to your service to fill out the nascent bureaucracy of the Order. You see Alys, cradling a small bundle, in one of the first carts Making conversation with a man in the gold-rimmed robes of the Revenue Service. Likely to be your Order's treasurer, by your reckoning. The knights and Friedrich join you at the head of the lead cart, forming into marching order.

“I defer to you, Captain-General. Barython is to the north, of course. How will we take the road?” Friedrich has one of his men bring the two of you a map.
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>>5203182

> Keep off the main roads. You will be slowed but the reports of missing tax officials and increased raids make you cautious. You'll be sure to find the time to stop by Hold Campbell without much additional delay, to gather more men and deliver the child.

>Keep to the Imperial Roads. May as well take advantage of old Albrecht's fixation on civil engineering. Much quicker, even your detour to the Hold will not hold you long from arriving in good time. However, the caravan may be vulnerable to hostile activity on the road.

>Scout ahead with knights and send the Caravan via the roads. A compromise, the knights will be able to flush threats ahead but this is still slower than traveling as a group. The knights will be vulnerable to ambush themselves. Your knights will arrive first, but you will have to wait at Hold Campbell for the caravan to catch up.

> Write in
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>>5203183
>Keep to the Imperial Roads. May as well take advantage of old Albrecht's fixation on civil engineering. Much quicker, even your detour to the Hold will not hold you long from arriving in good time. However, the caravan may be vulnerable to hostile activity on the road.
Worst case scenario, we do our job a little early.
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>>5203183
>Keep to the Imperial Roads. May as well take advantage of old Albrecht's fixation on civil engineering. Much quicker, even your detour to the Hold will not hold you long from arriving in good time. However, the caravan may be vulnerable to hostile activity on the road.
I don't see any reason to not travel with the caravan
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>>5203183
>>Scout ahead with knights and send the Caravan via the roads. A compromise, the knights will be able to flush threats ahead but this is still slower than traveling as a group. The knights will be vulnerable to ambush themselves. Your knights will arrive first, but you will have to wait at Hold Campbell for the caravan to catch up.
It's what the knights are for.
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>>5203183
>cout ahead with knights and send the Caravan via the roads. A compromise, the knights will be able to flush threats ahead but this is still slower than traveling as a group. The knights will be vulnerable to ambush themselves. Your knights will arrive first, but you will have to wait at Hold Campbell for the caravan to catch up.
Let's get a measure of these knights
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>>5203183
>Keep to the Imperial Roads. May as well take advantage of old Albrecht's fixation on civil engineering. Much quicker, even your detour to the Hold will not hold you long from arriving in good time. However, the caravan may be vulnerable to hostile activity on the road.
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Update may be a bit later than usual. I lost a bit of sleep on the last one and I'm exhausted tonight. So I am going to sleep a bit. I'll see you guys soon. Im thinking a good writing session with tomorrow's coffee/whisky combo.

In the mean time, feedback always welcome. One of my big priorities with this quest is characterization, something I have lacked in the past. I hope it's come through. Thank you all for reading.
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Sleep well QM. Characterisation is pretty good. I'm really getting a feel for the dramatis personae. The atmosphere of medieval intrigue almost makes me forget the quest is about dealing with OP japanese teenagers at times.
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>>5203422

"We keep to the roads, Sir Friedrich. Our Emperor will brook no delay. Prepare your men and I will see to the caravan."

He nods. "Of course, lord! Men, marching formation!" The knights move into a loose wedge as you ride to the carriage holding Alys and the child.

"How is he?" You ask with no small amount of trepidation.

"He is well, Will." Alys replies. "I found a reliable nursemaid from the castle, she will see him fed till he arrives." Her lithe, athletic build precludes her own participation in succoring a child. You nod and sigh. "At least I will have some time to figure this out then. Keep an eye on the functionaries, anyone could be an enemy now."

Despite Alys' demands, the child is not named. The northern tradition is to wait a full year and if you are to claim the child it will be no different. On the way back you do pass the holy city of Avighon. the city of saints, where holy heroes are consecrated. A plan strikes you.

> Subject the infant to the trial. If he succeeds, he will be seen as a chosen of the Gods.

> Ignore the local beliefs. The infant deserves it's own life.

> Subject yourself. Recruitment will skyrocket\

> Punish your men for any occultism

> Buy supplies in town
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>>5204206
I apologize for the relatively anemic update. Really had to sleep tonight and still do. Glad I got something out though. Blessed night, everyone!
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>>5204206
>Subject yourself. Recruitment will skyrocket
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>>5204206
>Subject yourself. Recruitment will skyrocket
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>>5204206
> Ignore the local beliefs. The infant deserves it's own life.
I don't think it's a good look if we were to fail
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>>5204206
>Subject yourself. Recruitment will skyrocket
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Avighon was a medium sized town, unremarkable save for one characteristic. Where many Imperial towns have a keep or castle overlooking their more urban sprawl, Avighon boasts a massive cathedral. The Bastion of the Depths is the center of Imperial religion, home of the Prioress of the Faith, and the center of learning for all of Althimura's clergywomen. Looking upon it's majesty for the first time, you have both a passing regret for your own lack of attention to piety and a wonder that somehow the path that led Vera to her death passed through this very place.

Friedrich speaks up, riding at your side. “Avighon, Lord. Many have sought the blessing at the Lady's cathedral upon being knighted or receiving a new duty. Perhaps you seek the same?” His tone remains polite, but it's clear the knight thinks you unworthy of such consideration from any deity. Probably the whole “bastard” affair, you suppose.

“Perchance I do? Worst that can happen is nothing, and who can say? I am sure the Emperor would be pleased with divine approval of his reinstatement of the Order.” Friedrich gives a smile that does not quite reach his ears, and thinks better of goading you further. The last few days of travel had been awkward between you and the head knight. To you, it seems your favor in the eyes of the Emperor coupled with what Sir Friedrich must view of the dishonor of claiming a bastard must have rankled the man. Too well bred to ever bring it up, Friedrich none the less has made his distaste for you known in a dozen ways, though none rising to an offense you could honorably answer. Unable to answer this disdain, you grew frustrated.

As your caravan enters the town, your new fellow order members make their own arrangements for accommodation. It's not long before you are approached by both the town's mayor and the Prioress of the Bastion. The woman is an older sort, faded blond hair framing her face from a grew hood of the same hew you have seen many times before. The man is exactly as you pictured, a balding functionary whose unremarkable build screams bureaucrat.

“My Lord Campbell! I am glad to greet you!” The man exclaims, and you immediately peg him as vying for your favor and what advantage an association may bring, The older woman only nods as her goateed companion prattles on. “Welcome to Avighon! We are so pleased to welcome the companion of our dear Emperor! How may we serve you?” The man goes on and on, placing an arm around your shoulder and embarking on a tirade about his home you doubt anyone could match even were they paid for it. The woman is must more circumspect. She takes the opportunity to whisper to you as the mayor goes on.
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>>5205145

“Be at the Bastion after midnight. We will see your fate.”

Immediately after this, she folds back into her role as a long suffering attendant to the mayor's extravagance, not saying a word. But you remember. And you fear. Will the Gods judge you well? You have worked in accordance with your duty. But you condemned a young mother to death. A young man, enemy he may be, to an agonizing execution. You didn't even see Harain's end. Will the Divine forgive you such callousness, even in the name of your sworn word?

Your feet bring you before Alys, where the caravan has stopped in town, She has handed off the child to one of the women of the group, the boy laughing as he is rocked by the frocked functionary among her fellows who all laugh and cajole her about the child's attentions. Alys looks to you, seeming tired.

“I trust them, Will, don't worry. Alkaign chose well.” She smiles at you, radiant as ever.

“I am not worried about that, Alys. I am going to subject myself to the trial.”

She is clearly taken aback. “Why, Will? No one doubts you, not Alkaign, not me, not anyone.”

Thinking of Friedrich you shake your head. “Plenty doubt me. More will. Even if they declare I do not hold favor, at least I will have tried. It will help.” You look to her worried face, and clasp her slender shoulder. “It will be okay, Alys. Let me do this, it will make everything easier.”

She looks down, and nods in affirmation. “I can't stop you, Will. But please, be careful.”

You look at the woman, your eyes digging into hers, “I will come back, Alys. You have my word.” You've never broken it. Yet. Midnight comes before you expect. The woman leaves you with a troubled glance backwards.

In moments you are ushered into the Bastion, and called by an unseen priest to kneel. You will stay in such a post until the priests have declared your submission acceptable. Then you may rise, and swear your faith to the Lady. After, the presiding Priestesses will inform you of whether you have acquired divine aid. You hope your cause righteous, and your actions just. But, only a man, you cannot understand the will of the divine.
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>>5205146
Please roll

1d100 best of 3 DC 40 roll under
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>>5205149
In all other quests I follow, I am a champion of the disappointingly low rolls. I pray my die will roll the same here.
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Fuck this gay Earth.
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>>5205179

Rolls confirmed. Post tomorrow. Have a pleasant night guys. As always any feedback welcome. Especially on characters and the MC. Peace.
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No update tonight. Had a bit too much to drink. Will be around tomorrow.
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Hours pass, your knees screaming in anguish before the altar of the Depths. The agony does not move you, and you remain still before the holy place. No priest comes to tell you of the favor of the Gods, and you do everything you can to not cloud your mind with doubt. You think of the past, the first time Father brought you out hunting, your Mother's tender caress and fair counsel, the girlish laughs of your sisters, the night Alkaign took you unto his service and the first time you and Alys sat by the campfire and talked late into the night. These memories, strong as steel, gird you for the trial. But strong as you are, no man can withstand nearly a day of kneeling on hard, jagged stone. The sun rises on a new dawn before you are relieved, the rough surface of the Cathedral's floor cutting you so deep that blood begins to pool beneath you despite your defiance. The priests have neglected you, and you know deep down the Gods have as well. Your mission is not divine. But it is your charge, and you will not see it neglected.

You make your peace with the lack of divine attention just before you feel a light hand on your shoulder. You refuse to move your head from your attentions on the altar before you, but Alys reaches you nonetheless. “Will, it's okay. Not every duty is holy. We are called to do things the Gods might abhor, but it is nothing more than a necessary burden. Come on, let's get out of here.”

Your hand meets hers on your shoulder, though you never remove your sight from the altar. “Alys, I don't understand. These people, these things, they come across worlds to destroy us. Why will the Gods not endorse us? We only want to protect our ways, our lives.”

She pulls on your hand until you relent and rise. “You don't need them, Will. I know you. I know you can do this. We'll do it together. Come with me.” With only a single glance backwards, you follow her. The priestesses glare at you as you pass, your lack of divine favor clearly coloring them against you. But nothing can be done, and you attempt to ignore their disdain as Alys leads you out and into the streets of Avighon. Troubled by the Gods' inattention, you allow Alys to lead you to a nearby tavern. A full day is between you and your departure, the schedule allowing for your now vain hopes of holy endorsement. You barely notice when a plate of roast chicken and a mug of ale are placed before you. Alys has no food for herself, and looks attentively at your as you slowly begin to eat. “Listen to me. You cannot be like this in front of the men. You need to project confidence, capability. I'm sorry the Gods did not give you their backing, but it doesn't change what you have to do. It doesn't change who you are.”
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>>5207241
You are half through a chicken leg as she says this, and the meat drops from your hands as you consider it. “My path is murder, Alys. Who is to say if these people deserve what the Emperor has bade me to subject them to? I will do my duty, but what if my duty is evil? What if I am evil?”

Being comfortable around Alys for years of association, you are taken aback when she slaps you and charges out of the room sans a word. You feel your reddened cheek, no real damage done, at least physically. You are left alone, the other patrons looking at you in a mixture of amusement, worry, and confusion.

You still have most of the day, having stood vigil the previous night. Hunger and thirst are gone from your mind, anguish your most forward emotion.

>Buy something(for who?)

>Get drunk

>See to your men

>Make an observance to the Priestesses despite your lack of favor

>Go to the mayor's estate and announce yourself.
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>>5207248
>See to your men
The longer we avoid them the more chance they'll start talking about our failure
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>>5207248
>See to your men
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>>5207248
>See to your men
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>>5207248
>See to your men
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Op here from undisclosed shitty motel in Georgia. Update tonight, got caught on the road again. Sorry about that.
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You consider just taking the opportunity to drown your newfound sorrows in relative solitude, but one thing Alys said sticks with you as much as the sharp sting on your bearded cheek. You were not raised to neglect your duty, and what kind of man would you be if you fell short at the first mere setback? Are you some child to need some paternal figure to descend from the heavens and give you a personal endorsement? Of course not. Your mental imagery is filled by the disappointed face of your father, the details indistinct as the passage of years since the man's untimely death wears away his features like the surf does the shore. She's right of course. You cannot just let the men hear of this failure and wonder what in the Depths' you are going to do about it. If these men and women are to pledge themselves to you, you must earn their respect even if you cannot get it delivered to you by the Divine.

On the way out, you have a second thought. You haven't eaten for a day, so you take a swig of ale accompanied by a few hearty bites of the roast to chicken to keep you going before leaving to find where the men are billeted.

Asking around the various stables you think the horses likely to be housed, you soon find that while Friedrich and some of his closest companions have taken billet at a nearby inn, the body of the functionaries and a majority of the household knights have surprised you by expressing welcome frugality outside of the city limits themselves. It it a green, pleasant clearing, easy enough to find. The stable hand who told you of it mentioned that it is maintained by the Clergy for the sake of the many pilgrims who come through Avighon seeking blessing, favor, or to enter Holy Service.

The wagons are gathered together and made into a pleasant makeshift camp. You see your new subordinates milling about, many cooking an early dinner on spits over a number of fires. You see the same nursemaid from before looking after the infant, rocking him softly while using one of the covered carts to stay out of the afternoon sun. Alys is nowhere to be seen. This is unsurprising to you, but you suppose she could have simply booked a room instead. You doubt it though.

It's not long before the man from before in the robe of the Revenue Service approaches you. “My Lord Captain-General, excuse my lack of introduction. I am Arvent Bardus, late of the Imperial Revenue Service and by will of our beloved Emperor sworn to the Order as treasurer, as it pleases you.” You nod in acknowledgment.

“Honored to meet you, Brother Bardus. Is there a financial matter I should see to for the caravan?”

He looks confused for a moment before catching himself. “Ah, no Captain-General, we have plenty to go around. I have been named by the others as the head of our little caravan when yourself or Sir Friedrich are indisposed. The initiates are wondering how your time at the Bastion went?”
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>>5210771
You try not to grimace. Remember, you think, show them why they should believe in you.

>Please roll

> 1d100 best of 3 DC 50 roll under

>A write in of sufficient quality will call another roll with better DC.
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>>5210879
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>>5211023

If any of you three would like to try a write in as offered you have all night. Its late and I need sleep.

I apologize for the delays in updates, life finds a way(to fuck with you)
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>>5211027
"I did not acquire the blessing of the gods, but that was probably to be expected given the nature of our work to come. That we didn't gain their boon changes nothing of our crucial mission to defend our nation, homes, and families from those evildoers that would seek to undermine and destroy them, and I fully intend to carry this out to the best of my ability, blessing or no blessing."
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You bid Brother Bardus gather the initiates, and he sets out to do so. Even many of the knights, not yet sworn to you or the order, follow as a crowd gathers around you. You spot, for a moment, a black clad figure watching tentatively from the wood line, but they are gone by the time you can again turn your attention upon them. Expectation weighs, and you begin to speak.


"I did not acquire the blessing of the gods, but that was probably to be expected given the nature of our work to come. That we didn't gain their boon changes nothing of our crucial mission to defend our nation, homes, and families from those evildoers that would seek to undermine and destroy them, and I fully intend to carry this out to the best of my ability, blessing or no blessing."

Your duty binds you. Will it bind them?

>Please roll

>1d100 best of 3 60 roll under

>Write ins are appreciated and will have similar effects in the future
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>>5211917
let's see if we can get one under 50 after 6 over
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>>5211966
lmao, it succeeds the check but that makes 7 rolls in a row over 50
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>>5211969
Do want to see the other three rolls but I ran the numbers on that and its pretty remarkable
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Sorry guys on the road again. I'll update when I get back in. Might be tomorrow, might be tonight.
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It is moments before you see a reaction among the initiates and knights. But it is soon clear you have touched them. To your surprise, your lack of divine favor does you little damage. The sworn functionaries appear to be behind you as you expected, but to your surprise the unsworn knights also gravitate to you in some numbers after your brief speech. They have questions, and you give assurances, but overall you cannot call this anything but a success. You have Bardus give you a quick rundown on the needs of the caravan, and finding little that draws your direct intervention, you decide to make your own tent up and sleep yourself. It is still the early evening, but you and the others will be leaving tomorrow morning according to your previously agreed schedule, so more sleep is preferable to less.

Sunlight floods your tent as morning comes, waking you from slumber. You wipe the grime from your eyes before standing, taking a drink of water from the small the table you keep while traveling. It is almost gone before you finally notice the dark figure seated in the corner of the tent. You reach for your scabbard as the mug falls, but the figure is too fast and warmly embraces you before you can do anything to stop them. The smell of lavender threatens to overcome you, and you only just manage to resist clasping the woman back.

“Alys, I-”

“Will, be quiet. You did exactly what you needed to. They'll follow you now, forever if you keep that example to heart.”

“I don't know, Alys, I don't know if we have the right-”

“We do, Will, we have a duty. I know you believe in that, if nothing else. And we won't lose our souls to it. If you commanded me, I would have mutilated Vera. You knew better. That's not nothing. It's something amazing, and I will never let myself forget it.”

Her gray eyes stare into yours, and you know that there is no transgression that will drive her from you. If you go too far, she will tell you, if you fail, she will still be there. But when you triumph, she will be by your side. Unshakable. Constant.

And so you return her embrace, and you remain that way for some time, until she gently releases you and returns to her own accommodations with no words, but a glance that says everything. You know now, you have your duty, but also good people and friends who believe in you. The horrors you might commit may weigh on your soul, but letting down those depending on you would be the worse burden by far. Soon you return to your cot and sleep, and it comes easier than it has in months.

Weeks pass as you travel to Hold Campbell. You spend the time with the men, many of them clearly more sold on you as a leader than they were before. You spend your nights dining with Alys and Bardus, both of whom seem to accept your role as leader. Alys has been more familiar than you remember, and you find you miss Elpest and his customary derision of the closeness you share with the cloaked woman. A strange observation.
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But of course it could not be that simple. Your long experience with Ard Negh raiders warns you only moments before you arrive in a northern pass. A rock is rolled before the convoy and a huge bearded man lands ahead of you, a smile on his face and double headed axe in hands.

“I am told ye were the one who let that Emperor of yours put me brother in the dirt!”

The axe is swung with flair before being stuck into the snow covered ground.

“Harain might have been a little shit, but I'll gladly end ye for the sake of my own brother!”

The axe is wielded with grace and pointed with malice towards you. But you have fought these savages your whole life. Alys waits for your lead and Friedrich waits to see how you handle this, holding his knights back.
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>>5215834

> Negotiate

> Duel him, if you prevail you have the right to command him by Ard Negh law

> Bid your men to charge. No honor in war.

> Flee
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>>5215834
>Duel him, if you prevail you have the right to command him by Ard Negh law
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>>5215834
> Duel him, if you prevail you have the right to command him by Ard Negh law
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>>5215834
> Duel him, if you prevail you have the right to command him by Ard Negh law
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>>5215837
Gonna give this vote another dozen hours or so. Was out late tonight and hope we might get other votes in the mean time.

As always, thank you for reading.
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>>5216921
thanks
time your time ofc
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>>5215834
> Duel him, if you prevail you have the right to command him by Ard Negh law
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>>5215834
>Duel him

We are ever and always a slave to our honour. Outward appearance doesnt matter, nor does threats and cajoling. If a man will never break his honour, he is worth a hundred others who would.
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You've been here before, more than once. So you look up. Both ridge lines of the pass are filled with the indistinct shapes of Ard Negh warriors, assuredly armed with bows as well as the axes favored by the savages. If you dismount the knights, you think you could handle them, but casualties are a certainty. It would certainly be an ignominious start to your tenure as Captain-General to diminish your forces over some northern blood feud before even arriving at your destination. So, knowing how these savages can claim some primitive sense of honor, you find your solution.

You step ahead your companions and draw your own weapon, placing it before the man's axe in the ground between you. Alys gives you a questioning look and Friedrich scoffs, motioning for the knights to dismount before you hold up one arm to hold them. Bardus sounds panicked.

“My Lord!?”

You ignore him and address the Ard Negh instead. “I am Lord Uilleam Campbell. Is single combat an option?”

He laughs, his blood thirsty grin spreading nearly to his ears. “By the Gods, ye southern dog, it is damned preferable. I am Chief Domlech of the Avech Clan. I accept yer challenge and by the cairn you no doubt denied my brother, ye die this day!” He launches himself toward his planted weapon, and you do the same for yours. This is the ancient custom of his people, and one the northern duchies have seen fit to borrow for their own. Blood enemies, your people share this along with the tartans you both wear over your armor.

The first meeting is a shock to the senses. He lacks the enhanced strength of the boy Reiji, but this man is a veteran and skilled plenty to make up for it. His scraggly beard has a fair shock of gray to it, and you would put him ten years your senior at a minimum. Knowing how his people live, that is a lot of combat experience over the years. You absolutely must take this seriously, and balance caution with the confidence every warrior needs. Back-stepping from a heavy overhead, the snow begins to swirl thickly around the both of you, no doubt obscuring the clash from the watchers on both sides. His silhouette in the snow cloud shifts and you wait for an opening.
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>>5219561

> Please roll 3 1d100 best of 3 DC 50 roll under
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Rolled 84 (1d100)

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Praise heaven, a bare victory
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Close one guys. This would have had some lasting consequences.

With a roar he charges towards you again and you roll out of the way rather than meet his weapon with yours. You expect him to plant his axe in the ground once again, but he is too skilled for that. The trajectory of his axe alters mid swing, and he scores a shallow hit on your back. Despite the glancing nature, the sheer power of the blow sends you sprawling forward into the powder, and you are forced to scramble back to your feet.

“This aint some Lord's training field, boy!” He calls out, his grin still plastered on his face. He gives no time for further recovery, his axe meeting your left steel vambrace as you raise it to protect your vital areas and let your sword arm lower. It dents deeply and your arm alights in searing pain. You faintly hear a “No!” from behind you but no aid can come to this kind of fight. The wound is crushing, but you had worse from Reiji, so you force yourself back once again. You just barely outdistance Domlech's axe, but it's clear his skill with it can force you on the back foot. Using your superior agility to the burly savage you begin to stay just out of his range as he keeps up his furious attack. This infuriates the man. “Ye said ye would fight me, cur! Typical Godsdamned southerner, all talk, no balls!”

But you never planned not to fight him. In his fury, you see his expert movements slow and your final gambit takes form. You can't outfight him. Not if you are where he wants to be. You cannot run forever, honor demands resolution. So you will make sure he is forced to fight you as less than he is. You will make him lesser. Your left arm is still operaple, but you let it fall almost limp, as if the blow was more grevious than it was. And as you do, you one hand your hand and a half sword, something possible but very taxing. Your swings to drive Domlech away as he advances become sluggish, your feet begin to stumble. The very picture of a wounded enemy sapped of energy. You are hurt, and tired, but that does not mean you cannot play it up. You hunch slightly as if catching your breath, and your foe charges towards you for the killing blow. For half a moment, you close your eyes.

The first thing ever taught to you by your father in the training field at Hold Campbell was never, ever let loose of your weapons. A warrior must hold onto his tools like they were family, never letting go. He had died with his sword in his hand. The very sword you now carry. It's weight is heavy on your sword arm, it's heft meant to be used in two hands.
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A few weeks after swearing to Alkaign you found yourself with Alys at the party's fire as you always did. Alkaign and the others had gone into a nearby town to buy supplies, and you were left to tend the fire and see to the camp. Bored out of her mind, Alys had shown you a pastime of hers. Or perhaps a skillset: knife throwing. She explained to release the blade so the point and not the pommel would land, and how useful this could be in a fight. You scoffed at first, throwing a weapon went against what you were taught by your father, but her deft skill with the blades impressed you as the night went on. And so this was the first of only many times you both practiced this together.

There is still a dagger at your side.

Your eyes open and you see the mad rush of the berserk savage approaching. He is closing fast, and there is no time to dodge. The “limp” arm shoots up your side, unsheathing your side dagger and slinging it full force at your foe. His forward momentum is so total that even had he seen your movement there was nothing to be done. The small blade sinks deep into his right thigh and he stumbles in his furious charge.

“Gah! Damn you!”

You don't wait, springing into action as you once again swing with two handed blows towards your opponent. His charge now made clumsy by your dagger, you sidestep the slowed slash and land another attack to your opponent's legs. This time a crimson streak opens up amid the furs and leathers covering his left leg as he howls in fury and pain. A desperate swing follows, but you manage a steel shod kick to the man's face after dodging. Blood flying from his shattered nose, he falls backward and the axe leaves his fingers as his hands shoot up instinctively to hold his face together. You stand over him, sword ready to fall in a final arc and sever his head.
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“Yield!”

“Pfhah, fuck, that was dirty ye motherless-”

You half swing the blade down. “YIELD!”

“I yield, by the Gods! I Yield.”

“And you swear yourself to be my bondsman?” His eyes fill with some degree of resignation.

“Aye, but only ye. I give no promises to that Emperor of yours.” He spits on the ground besides where he lay.

You shrug. “Good enough for now, but don't ever say that to his face if you meet him.” You help him up, and offer him a shoulder due to his wounds. “Oh, and after you get looked at I want that blade back.”

He grunts. “I hardly wanna keep it in me leg, southerner. You have a healer?” He manages to raise an arm, and peripheral vision tells you whatever forces he had gathered are leaving. This is their way, he is now your man, and no longer any sort of Chief. You expect many of those men will not survive the coming power struggle, but it is no business of yours.

Your companions form in the mist of snow as you approach. Alys and Bardus are first, the knights arrayed in formation before the rest of the caravan in a wide formation. His helmet is on now but you can imagine Friedrich's disapproving expression beneath it. Bardus looks amazed, while Alys just smiles in amusement. “Healer? More of a poisoner, though I am told there is overlap. I hope that's not a problem?” He looks at you with skepticism. “It will be fine, Domlech, she's the best. Alys! Our new friend will need some attentions to be of any use, I am afraid.”

Alys approaches and gives a quick once over of the wounds. “Nothing I cannot handle, Captain General.” She proceeds to spy the knife in the savage's thigh and meets your eye. You barely notice her sly wink.

“Ah, not like I have a choice. You bastards have any ale!? I am not undergoing this... woman's ministrations sober.” You help him towards the caravan as Friedrich rides to you. Alys notes she can help your bondsman further, so you let her go with him and speak to the lead knight.

“So, now a pet savage? Ever full of surprises, Captain General.” It doesn't sound like a complement, and your title is spit like a curse. You wonder if Friedrich wanted this position for himself all along, or if that's just some paranoia you have been developing on your own.
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“I know his people, Sir Friedrich. They do have some concept of honor. I do not trust him, but he can be relied on to do as I say.”

The man snorts. “As you say, Captain-General. I will note in my report.”

You scratch your chin. “Can your men move that rock?”

“With the help of the caravanners who can move more than a pen?” He thinks for a moment. “Yes, we can do it. Will take a few hours, open us up to further ambush.”

You shake your head. “His men will be too busy killing each other to return, it's what the Ard Negh do.”

“Then I will get to it. By your leave, Captain-General.” You nod and he trots off to the knights. You cannot help but think that the man will be a thorn in your side once he eventually returns to the capitol.

You then approach Bardus. “Get the caravan ready and gather anyone able enough to help the knights with the rock. We cannot stay here.

He all but sketches a salute. “Of course, Captain-General!” He hurries off to his duties.

You take a moment to examine your ruined vambrace. It will require a replacement, but your destination is Hold Campbell to drop off the child before heading to Barathon, the very place where your armor was forged. You can get a replacement there. Your arm hurts like hell, but it's not the crippling pain you remember from the fight in the throne room. You'll live, and you are sure Alys will insist at seeing to it anyway. Leaning against one of the carts, you deeply sigh. Not even going home, it seems, will be without complication.
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>>5220653
About five days later you all arrive at the rise just before the fortified hill that is Hold Campbell. You can see the nearby river that gives the hold water, the forest you hunted in as a child, and the stone bridges that lead to the nearby settlement.

"Good to be home, Will?" Alys rides to your side, her cloak blowing about in the northern wind.

You nod. "It is, but I wonder what we should tell my family. About the child." He had been well taken care of, and grown much during the journey. No expert on child rearing, you still found yourself surprised.

Alys shrugs. "Why not gauge how they react? The Emperor didn't make it a decree or anything, you know. It's pretty much up to you."

It's true you have some autonomy here. Your thinking is interrupted as you are joined by Domlech astride a horse, though uncomfortably. His people abhor them. "This is your Hold then, eh? I prefer huts myself."

"And that's why you've never managed to do more than raid some thatch huts, Domlech."

He scowls at your words, but says nothing.

>Inform your whole family. It's only right as you are all but foisting the child upon them.

>Only inform your mother and the eldest of your sisters.

>Only inform mother

>Keep it a secret, let the rumors spread as they may, you will confirm none, not even to family.
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>>5220664
>Inform your whole family. It's only right as you are all but foisting the child upon them.
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Gave a pretty long one tonight. I have a ways to go tomorrow and might not be able to make it. As always, discuss among yourselves if you wish. The Hold Campbell update will be a monster and I might not be able to get it done tomorrow. But it will be done. Be good out there fellas. I appreciate all of you.
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>>5220664
If you mean tell them about our "bastard" then
>Inform them all.

If you mean tell the truth
>Tell nobody

One thing we learned from game of thrones. You can only keep a secret if you are the only one who knows it.
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>>5220895
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>>5220895
Sorry for any confusion. I meant telling them whole truth about the child's provenance, but not of the Isekai element. Obviously the existence of the child will be obvious as you will be leaving him with them. I will leave this vote open for some time in case anyone is confused, and also because tonight is somewhat busy for me. I appreciate your attention.
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>>5220664
>Only inform your mother and the eldest of your sisters.

Do we know that our younger sisters can be trusted not to tattle? Word spreads fast in a hold, especially since servants pick up more than most people would guess—although our protagonist (and certainly Alys) are probable exceptions to that rule.
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>>5221858
I'd say that is all the more important not to tell them.
Even if we tell our mum and sister, they need to be able to sell that they believe he is a bastard and the stigma that Carries for both us and the boy.
I dont think they can do that. So let'nso jeprodise our efforts and already lost standing.
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>>5220664
>Keep it a secret, let the rumors spread as they may, you will confirm none, not even to family.
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>Keep it a secret, let the rumors spread as they may, you will confirm none, not even to family.

We already accepted the hit to our honor. Scrabbling desperately to preserve some measure of it is pointless.
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>>5221909
Worse than pointless, it could undo the good that hit did.
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>>5220664
>>5221858
Based on the replies of the anons below, I'll change my vote to
>Keep it a secret, let the rumors spread as they may, you will confirm none, not even to family.
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Update likely tomorrow. Got stuck out of town.
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It's snowing lightly as your party approaches the hold, and a small group of mounted guards rides out to meet you. Your personal banner flying alongside the Order's, it is a simple matter for the escort to bring you all inside the walls. The horses and carts are once again put to order and quarters found for the initiates and knights. You are dismounting yourself as a group of guards approach you, one leading your horse away. A familiar voice meets your ears.

“Welcome home, my Lord.” You turn to find Elpest, now accoutered in your house colors. He gives a quick salute. He seems to have adjusted well to his new circumstances as it appears he is already in charge of some of the other men within the garrison.

“Elpest. I take it you are well?”

He gives a sad smile and nods his head. “It was hard at first, Lord, but I have managed. I want to thank you for what you did for Aeflyn and I. I was surly with you before and it was unbecoming. We owe you.”

You look him in the eye. “Do your duty well and you owe me nothing besides that, Elpest. The Lady Moira is in the hall?”

“Yes, Lord. She sent me to fetch you after you made your way inside the walls.” He is dismissed with a nod as you go to find Alys, who had returned to the carts as you rode in from the rise. She's securing her tools and tinctures as you approach.

“Alys, where's the child? I think we should get this over with.” She places the last of her items in her satchel and drops down from the cart she was rifling through.

“With the nursemaids in the next cart. He's doing fine. I can have them bring him with us. You came to a decision then?”

You look around for a moment, and no one is nearby. “Mother will figure it out on her own. But that's it, otherwise we go with the story.”

She sighs. “Alright Will, let's go then. It will be good to see Lady Moira at least.” The two of you proceed to gather the child and place him with one of the hold's nursemaids, the one who had cared for him on the road clearly relieved to have a much needed break after the journey. They then follow you to the central keep of Hold Campbell. The iron studded, heavy oak double doors that lead inside are slowly pulled open by two of the garrison troops as you approach. The familiar interior of the keep is revealed, the audience room warmed by two fireplaces and lit by numerous sconces set into the stone walls. The wooden chair is in the back of the room, the chair you still finding yourself thinking of as belonging to Father all these years later. And gathered before it, your last remaining family in the world. You stride across the furs spread across the cold floor to greet them.
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Lady Moira, a stately woman of straw blond hair only subtly graying embraces you as you meet. You have a full head over her height, though she is by no means a short woman. “Welcome home, Uilleam. The hold is yours.” You release her, and straighten her black dress where it had wrinkled as she pressed against you. Despite attempting to hold a stoic visage, you cannot help but smile to see her again. So taken in this moment you are caught on back foot as a bundle of navy blue fabric flies into you, laughing. You tousle the hair of your eldest sister Eleyse, and spy the more shy and shorter forms behind her. Meera and Ava have always been more uncomfortable around you, with you being gone for much of their formative years.

“You're back!” Eleyse squeals while she does her best to suffocate you. Moira tuts from a few feet away in a scolding tone.

“Only for a few nights or so, I have duties elsewhere. It is good to see you, sister.” Looking over the others you address them. “All of you. But I have to speak with Mother now.” Eleyse reluctantly releases you and steps back with the younger two. They give you some space to speak with Mother in relative peace. You nod at them and then motion for Alys to step forward, and she joins you before Moira. The nursemaid follows with the child. Moira raises an eyebrow upon recognizing the nature of the bundle the woman carries, the child blessedly sound asleep.

Moira speaks softly, her words not intended to carry elsewhere in the room to the various guards and your sisters. “Lady Alys, wonderful to see you again. You look radiant.” Alys smiles at the complement. Mother was never much for effusive complements so it can be very pleasing to receive any from her at all. “Same to you, Lady Moira. It's good to be back.”

The polite smile falls from Moira's face. Suspicion fills her voice. “Uilleam, the infant. Who is it?”

“My bastard,” you grunt, “I need you to look after him here.”

Her eyes widen and she steps even closer, nearly whispering. “Your bastard?” She sounds genuinely shocked. “When did this happen?”

Uncomfortably, you answer. “While we were in the Capitol the past year or so. It's why I was there so long.” She stares you in the eyes and you try your hardest to not drop your gaze from hers. “I can't take him with me, my new duty from the Emperor will be dangerous. This is the best place for him.”

Her eyes narrow, but she does not outright accuse you of falsehood. She seems to think for a moment before turning to Alys. “And the child isn't-”
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Alys turns into a torch at your side, flushing a deep red before stammering out, “N-no!”, slightly too loud. You notice Eleyse in the back of the hall look over for a moment and cock her head in curiosity. Moira's eyes narrow even further.

“This is your hall, Uilleam. If you want the child nursed here that's your decision. Your sisters and I will see to it. However, you should talk to Eleyse about this. She's more than old enough to know what it means, and you know how much the poor girl idolizes you.” You grimace. That won't be an easy conversation to have. Eleyse has ever been idealistic. “What's his name?”

“He's not old enough to be named yet.”

She crosses her arms. “You have not been simply calling him the child since he was born?”

“... yes?” You say with some embarrassment.

She sighs deeply. “I'm sure the nursemaids or your sisters will come up with a pet name. Think on it over the next few months, bad luck to not name him when the time comes.” You know that, of course. If you don't make it back the hold's way during your service with the Order you'll have to send a missive when appropriate. Nothing you need to decide now, and honestly you can't really think of it right now. “Anyway, come, the servants should have dinner served by now. We'll celebrate your return, however so brief.”

The child is sent to a room further up the keep's four stories to be looked after by the servants, and you and Alys along with your family leave through the passage to the dining hall. As you remember from growing up, the food is hearty fare without being overly refined. You honestly prefer it to the more stuffy occasions you experienced traveling with Alkaign. You catch up with your family, describing what you can of your new duties and the last few months. While you plan to leave as soon as the caravan is resupplied(and the hold's blacksmith replaces your vambrace), you will have enough time to do one significant task while at home. You consider your options.
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>>5225063
>Examine the garrison. It has grown, Elpest hardly the only new addition. There is a possibility you could take some of your men with you without harming the defenses of the hold against raids.

> Call a new levy. Its been enough time that you could get fresh recruits. As is, other than the small garrison at Barathon and whatever knights can be swayed to swear to the Order you have little combat potential. The levy would be sworn to you and not the Order, but that is no matter

> Leave one of your sworn in new Brothers as a liaison to the Hold. Trained in the arts of bureaucracy they can make the hold into a more effective outpost for the Order. You will have to vet the individual chosen for this and it will take some time to find the right one.

> Write in

You also think about how to tell Eleyse about the boy. You should probably have that talk in private. The servants can gossip but you owe her an explanation, as mother said. Even if it's not the truth.

>Please roll 1d100 best of 3 along with the previous choice DC70 roll under
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https://suptg.thisisnotatrueending.com/qstarchive/2022/5187631/

A little premature but I also got the thread archived. Been a while since I did that so sorry if I fucked it up.
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>>5225066
>Leave a sworn in brother to make the hold an outpost.

For our sister, I think we should go with a story about a drunken infatuation that led to a night of passion. The mother died and we promised her that we wouldnt abandon it.
Sounds plausible enough for us, I think.
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>>5225066
> Leave one of your sworn in new Brothers as a liaison to the Hold. Trained in the arts of bureaucracy they can make the hold into a more effective outpost for the Order. You will have to vet the individual chosen for this and it will take some time to find the right one.
>>5225109
Supporting this
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>>5225066
> Leave one of your sworn in new Brothers as a liaison to the Hold. Trained in the arts of bureaucracy they can make the hold into a more effective outpost for the Order. You will have to vet the individual chosen for this and it will take some time to find the right one.
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>>5225066
>Leave one of your sworn in new Brothers as a liaison to the Hold. Trained in the arts of bureaucracy they can make the hold into a more effective outpost for the Order. You will have to vet the individual chosen for this and it will take some time to find the right one.
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>>5225066
> Call a new levy. Its been enough time that you could get fresh recruits. As is, other than the small garrison at Barathon and whatever knights can be swayed to swear to the Order you have little combat potential. The levy would be sworn to you and not the Order, but that is no matter

We need more soldiers - and men who are loyal to us first and foremost.

They’ll have time to train in due course - loyalty is a much harder attribute to have.

> Leave one of your sworn in new Brothers as a liaison to the Hold. Trained in the arts of bureaucracy they can make the hold into a more effective outpost for the Order. You will have to vet the individual chosen for this and it will take some time to find the right one.

Backing this as another anons have
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>>5225553
you only get one mate.

And do you have any pointers for breaking the news of our "unfaithfulness" to our sister?
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>>5225066
> Leave one of your sworn in new Brothers as a liaison to the Hold. Trained in the arts of bureaucracy they can make the hold into a more effective outpost for the Order. You will have to vet the individual chosen for this and it will take some time to find the right one.

>>5225109
Supporting this anon when it comes to our sister. We should also make sure that Alys knows our final story, so that it matches if they ask her about it.
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Decent way into the current post, cannot keep my head up, will continue tomorrow.
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>>5226196

The dinner proceeds pleasantly, and with only a little awkwardness. Your Mother and Eleyse speak more to Alys than you about your shared travels, and she good naturedly describes what is appropriate to them with little fanfare or exaggeration. You try to keep your younger sisters entertained, but they seem unable to tell you from a stranger. Sad, but not surprising. You can tell Moira knows there is more to the stories but Eleyse seems enraptured. She insistently asks Alys about how she was involved, what she did for the journey. Alys for once seems bashful describing what has been her profession for years, to a young girl of barely twenty. You begin to suspect your sister has an alternative motive on this line of questioning and you therefore discard it. Perhaps it's not only Moira she kept correspondence with all these months. No good to suspect family and friend. Until you have to.

Two hours pass before the last course is cleared. Your Mother announces her intent, “The hold, as I said, is yours, dear son, but do get some rest.” With that admonishment and a respectful tilt of her head, she retires, your younger two sisters at her heels as is proper. But Eleyse remains, as is her right as a legal adult. This seems, well, deliberate. The only people left at the table are you, her, and an increasingly uncomfortable looking Alys. You had made the opportunity to inform your companion of the nature of the lie beforehand, something which will hopefully provide dividends now. You take another gulp of the wine before you address your sister.

Of course, she's there before you. Damned clever girl. “Who's the kid, Uilliam?”

You gulp audibly. “I had him with some woman in the capital. I-I had too much to drink. It's nothing to be worried about.”

Eleyse makes a laugh, not unkind, but sharper than you would expect from her. She seems to accept that, but without some little condemnation. Though you do notice the four wine glasses empty before her.

“Oh bugger brother, that's such a social faux paux. Couldn't you have just fucked Alys? At this point no one would have said anything” Alys almost falls out of her chair and you yourself only do marginally better, a small drop of liquid leaving your lips.

“Eleyse! You know better than that!” You cry in legitimate outrage.

“Do I? Oh, fuck it, I believe you. It's Mother who always thought you were an angel with no wings. It was me who found you in the hay with village girls. No shock you would just do it again.” Eleyse is right, you once had a great deal of fun with girls in the village at the foot of the river. But that was almost fifteen years ago, that was before Father died, and now your love is duty. As you say this to yourself, Alys looks at you with a more vile expression than you have seen. Interrogated in your own home, how shameful.
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You stamp down the desire to shout at your sister. It would be unbecoming of the head of the family after all. Luckily Alys does the job for you. She pounds on the table and jumps to her feet. “Eleyse! How dare you! You dishonor your brother and myself with such talk! I may be your friend, but I am the Emperor's sister and I demand respect!” Eleyse's face droops and reddens as she looks despondently at her collection of empty glasses. Alys storms from the hall in a huff. “I am retiring!” She sounded so like a real noblewoman there, quite unlike the Alys you know. You'll have to find her later, for your sake as much as your sibling's.

“Perhaps you had too much wine, sister.” You say, with some effort to keep your tone kind.

“Perhaps.” She pouts, twirling the thimbles worth of remaining wine in her last glass around and around.

“I made a promise, Eleyse. To the mother. I would see to the child. She died, you see. When he was born, she didn't make it. What else was I to do? He's my responsibility now. More than that, as long as he is at the hold, he is your responsibility too. Can I trust you with that, dear sister?” This lie comes easier. It should, as it's mostly true. You gave Vera your word, and that you never break. Eleyse looks positively shamed, like when she was little and you or Mother caught her sneaking sweets out of the kitchen.

She puts her head between her crossed arms on the feast table, and lets out a sigh that sounds more a sob. “Of course you can, brother. And I'm sorry. About the mother, whoever she was.” You get the feeling she may be more sober than she was acting. So you get up from your seat and take the one next to her, putting your arm around her. She leans into you, just like when she was just a girl.

“Are you okay, Eleyse?” You whisper. While you've been gone a long time, this is absolutely out of character for your eldest sister. She may have had a mischievous streak, but was always responsible and dutiful in the end.

“... no, I'm not.” She whimpers. “I'm bored, Uilleam, Mother wants me to marry off but I have no interest in it. The other northern lords send their sons, and I give them the time of day, but they're all pigs.” She spits the word. “I wish I could do what you and Alys do. Travel around, having adventures. That's why I admire her so much. D-do you think she hates me now?”

You stroke her back soothingly. “Alys doesn't hate you. She's a caring person. You just made her mad. If it makes you feel better, she slapped me in the face only a couple weeks ago.”

OP being dumb: The Alys slap was before the Smith slap, but I couldn't resist.
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She giggles. “What did you do, make a move on her?”

This again? You shake your head. “No, I was moping, and I needed to snap out of it.” You turn your head to look into Eleyse's eyes. “That's what you need to do, too.”

She nods her head. “I know, but I don't know what I want. I know I don't want what Mother wants, but as for the rest, my life is like a gray fog. I don't know what to do but get married, but I don't want to get married. You understand me, brother?” You do. All too well. She want's to take the path Alys did. Go from one kind of tool to another instrument entirely. As family head you could do this for her, get her Alys's training. Alys would tell you who taught her. Despite her outburst she dotes on Eleyse. Your sister would be grateful and possibly another asset to you and the Order. But do you want to forge your little sister into a weapon? Would she not be better off as some courtly wallflower, however miserable it makes her for a time? You cannot make this decision on a whim. Best to bide for time.

“I understand, and I will think about your future. Remember, whatever Mother may want, you're my family. As head, I can overrule her. Even if it does make her cross with me, and I hate getting scolded.”

She nuzzles against you. “Oh, I know. I thought she and Father were going to kill you when I told them about that girl in the village.”

“Tattletale.”

“Whoremonger.” You jostle her softly, and she returns the favor before you both fall into quiet laughter, not wanting to draw attention. Both of you stay like that for some time before Eleyse, too, excuses herself upstairs to sleep off the wine. With her gone, you only have one task left for the night.

You find the functionaries and knights getting settled with their new quarters. There are enough of them that the most junior of both groups are in fact sleeping on hay with the horses, your humble hold unable to properly house them all even two or three to a room. Still, you take the time to interview everyone you can. It takes more time than you would like, and you will suffer for it tomorrow, but sleepless nights have ever been a fixture of your life. What you find is surprising.
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None of the functionaries suit your purposes. All too old, too timid, or too dedicated to their books to be a mostly independent agent. But one of the knights surprises you by coming forward. Sir Therin was the son of a minor lord, but is the grandson of one of the last great spies of the last incarnation of the Beholder Order. He expresses to you an excellent knowledge of all lands of the kingdom, especially your own Northern Duchies, where he was a squire under Duke Bertrand himself, your immediate liege lord. You had never heard of the man, but he impresses you with his humble demeanor and voluminous knowledge. Deciding such things are more important than mere bureaucratic acumen, you offer him a place in the Order and he quickly accepts. At least Friedrich did not poison this one against you. He will remain when the others leave, the first tendril in a network you will surely have to spread across the Empire if you are to counter the threat of the Better World.

You soon retire, your dreams haunted by the young mother you condemned to death and the child you have taken on. Was there a better option? It's too late to question yourself now, you tell yourself, as you haul your still tired body out of bed for the remainder of the journey to Barathon. You wash up before leaving. You are unfortunately unsurprised to find Alys in the hallway, a half eaten apple in her right hand. “So, Will, village girls?”

You scowl. “I was fifteen, Alys. Don't try to tell me you behaved then.”

She smirks. “Behave? Never. But I wasn't allowed out of the castle until I was eighteen, you know that. No village boys for this maiden.” She bites into the apple again, and you make a manly effort not to stare as an errant line of juice traces the smooth contours of her mouth and down towards her chin before she wipes it away with one of those formless sleeves of the hooded robe she continues to insist on.

“What?” She says, genuine confusion in her voice. You've been staring.

“Nothing, we should see to the men. And say goodbye to Mother.” You turn and walk towards the stairs. She follows after but a moment of silence.

The farewells to your family are brief. Your Mother hugs you, though more briefly than in relative private. Eleyse does at well, but she sneaks a whisper for you to keep your word about considering her situation as if you need it. Meera and Ava give you a shy goodbye. You wish to the Lady you had time to know them better. As your convoy leaves you spy Sir Therin and Elpest at his side. They wave, and you return the gesture despite your breeding. To them you have entrusted your family, and so they warrant consideration. Alys rides at your side, any wroth from your youthful indiscretions carefully hidden. Your functionaries and knights proceed slowly out of Hold Campbell.
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Castle Barathon lies only a week from Hold Campbell, being in the north east of the central Imperial province. The trip is leisurely, and you smile at the cheer that rises from the caravan when you finally leave the snow covered landscape of your home. From here on it is not exactly warm, but a footman wouldn't catch frostbite from taking a piss. Alys is a little morose during the remainder of the journey. Ever the melancholic, you let her have her space as she broods. Probably has something on her mind she needs to parse out. A week of travel with no serious upsets later you arrive at Barathon. The castle is truly magnificent, at least three gated walls before one can reach the keep, each teeming with the life common to a castle town. And town life extends beyond, a small city that is equal to Althimura's central district sprawling beyond the gates. Alkaign has given you a tough duty, but your own petty kingdom to do it with, it seems.

As your party approaches the gates, you see cloaked figures disappear from the opening, for unknown purpose. The soldier's instinct fills you. Spies? From the castle perhaps, and therefore friends? Assassins? Curious local thieves? Who can say? You don't call a halt, but you do talk softly to Alys.


> “Send the knights in, make a ruckus. Something is wrong and I want it drawn out.”

> “Alys, ride into the city. Find who those men were and if the Castle sent them.”

> “You and I are going, Alys. We need to find out who those men are and I will not be a coward in front of my new castle.”

> It'll be fine.

> Write in


Also:

What is to be done with Eleyse?

> She will be sent to Alys' tutors. Poisoner. Assassin. Spy. She seeks an adventurous life. She will have it.

> Mother will find her a suitor eventually. Eleyse will hate you for this, but it's the way things are done.

> Find a better match than Mother can. You don't know any off the top of your head, but considering your duty running into some adventurous third son or something is not out of the question.
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>>5228206
> “You and I are going, Alys. We need to find out who those men are and I will not be a coward in front of my new castle.”
QM, how many figures are there? A couple, a half dozen, more? I might change my response based on this.
> Find a better match than Mother can. You don't know any off the top of your head, but considering your duty running into some adventurous third son or something is not out of the question.
Top seems kinda like a bad idea, it’ll get her killed. And the other end seems like the whole conversation would just be useless.
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>>5228237
There were four Uilleam could make out. That, of course, is no guarantee, there could not be more.
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>>5228206
>Alys investigate
She is the spy. Let her counter spy.

>Find a better match than mother can
In the meantime, might we suggest she tries taking up hunting? A physical activity of some sort to keep her mind occupied.
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>>5228206
> “You and I are going, Alys. We need to find out who those men are and I will not be a coward in front of my new castle.”
> Find a better match than Mother can. You don't know any off the top of your head, but considering your duty running into some adventurous third son or something is not out of the question.
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>>5228237
>>5228259
>>5228283

Keeping vote up another few hours. Thanks for playing guys.
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> “You and I are going, Alys. We need to find out who those men are and I will not be a coward in front of my new castle.”

But +1 to >>5228259 the hunting part. We should have her do something she'd be interested in, just to give her a taste.
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>>5228206
>>5228259 +1 and if she ends up liking it and being good at it we can look into it more
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>>5229246
>>5229254
Appreciate you two. Will have to postpone update as I have five hours till work. If the thread is still on board tomorrow evening, I will see all of you then.
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>>5229271
Alrighty! Thanks for running so far, this quest is really good. Definitely among my favourites.
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>>5229281
Appreciate it friend. I hope people come to love the characters. It is my highest aspiration. I will sleep now, update tomorrow.
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>>5228206
> “You and I are going, Alys. We need to find out who those men are and I will not be a coward in front of my new castle.”
It may be her speciality, but I don't want to leave Alys to it alone. The hooded cloaks worry me, she could be up against equals.

Concerning Eleyse:
> Find a better match than Mother can. You don't know any off the top of your head, but considering your duty running into some adventurous third son or something is not out of the question.
Also supporting >>5228259 this anon's idea of hunting.
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To clarify, my idea for her hunting is to make sure she can fend for herself should it come down to it. Know how to shoot a woman's bow and all.

But serves double as a means to keep her occupied with an idea of how our work would have turned out for her AND serve as a filter for grooms.
If they like her spunk and guts, and decidedly not feminine passtime, he will probably be a good match.
And if he is influential, like the sort we meet regularly, it would be advantageous
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>>5228259
>>5228283
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>>5229303

You and I are going, Alys. We need to find out who those men are. I will not be a coward in front of my own castle!” You urge your horse into a gallop as you approach the town.

“Will, don't!” You hear behind you, before the telltale sounds of hooves prove that Alys is following you after all. You both dismount inside the gates, the guards paying you little mind upon spying the tartan on your tabard. You suppose they must have been briefed about the new master of Castle Barathon. Alys is let in beside you. The cloaked men spread out, so you pick one alley and tell Alys.

“With me, Alys, they'll want us alone!” Both of you speed into one alleyway you figure the figures had to use, and you storm down it with your friend. Your superior athleticism and Alys' own training pay dividends, as you soon come over a rise and see a black clad figure ducking into a nearby building. Unaware of his pursuers near as you can tell, he closes the door behind him. No time to spare you shoulder the door in, Alys trailing you and begging you to slow down.

The door flies inward, knocking one figure across the floor. Another six stare at you in disbelief. One raises his arm, his hand holding a wickedly curved knife. “He's here! For the Better World!”

His fellows draw a variety of weaponry even as the man below you squirms in pain. These men know exactly who you are, and you have delivered yourself into an ambush. But you have never shrunk from a fight. The first man, to the left of the door, swings a truncheon without further warning, you duck it deftly. With a scream Alys slams into him and he drops to the floor, a crimson wound in his breast. You know what she puts on her knives. That man is as good as dead, and no longer a threat. One down. Six left. You stamp your plate boot on the throat of the prone man, hearing a satisfying crack as his windpipe folds under the sudden pressure and his neck breaks. Five.

“R-remember Reiji!” On of the men shouts, raising his rusted sword in salute to the dead man. The rest let out a half hearted cheer. For all their lack of training, they still have you five to two, and in an enclosed space. You cannot retreat, they will be on you too fast. Alys looks at you and nods, a grim determination on her face. You two will walk out of here alive, or they will. There is no middle ground. Weapon raised, you march into the onslaught.

> roll 1d100 for Uilleam, DC 50 roll under

> roll 1d100 for Alys. DC 40 roll under

> Players should roll for both
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>>5230449
Both are best of three, as usual
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Rolled 4, 71 = 75 (2d100)

>>5230449
Rolling for both
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>>5230464
Excellent for Will. tragic for Alys if no one can top it.
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Rolled 72, 43 = 115 (2d100)

>>5230470
Uh oh. Gonna try.
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Rolled 44, 73 = 117 (2d100)

>>5230449
Oh boy. Here goes nothing. I like Alys WAY too much for anything to happen to her. C'mon dice gods!
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>>5230464
>>5230490
>>5230504
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>>5230464
>>5230490
>>5230504

See you guys tomorrow.


[Apologies in advance to the Alysbros out there./spoiler]
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>>5230504
>>5230506
>>5230514
FUCK. Sorry everyone ;_;
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>>5230490
It's only a slight failure. I'm hoping that the worst she gets is a wound.
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>>5230464
>>5230490
>>5230504

Three come at you. Ducking the sword thrust of the first, your own bastard sword disembowels a second as you pass. The other two balk at the death of their compatriot, and you take advantage. Before they can put up their guard you run through the man you targeted. He gasps out, dropping his axe, before the the last can respond to to the death of his friend. He swings his blade, but you draw your own from your fallen foe and swat it away. He tries to recover but you backswing and decapitate the man before he can attack again. Your foes fallen and not to rise, you turn to Alys.

One of her opponents is on the ground, dead as a nail. She managed to tear out his throat with her knives before the other assassin could respond. But respond he did. They are struggling on the ground, the burly assailant having a distinct advantage over the lithe Alys. Panic and strain strikes you as you see the knife embedded in Alys' stomach. Still struggling, neither notice as you stride towards the two.

Your kick sends the man off of Alys and to the side of the abandoned room. You are on him in seconds. Other enemies incapacitated, you take your time. With every hit of your mailed fists you proceed to further reduce the man's face into a bloody ruin. It is some time before you are called to stop.

“Will, stop!” Alys calls, crawling towards you on her side and holding the blood into her wound as best she can.

“He's gone, Will. He's gone.” Your frenzied expression must inspire terror. “It's okay, I-I can survive this. You did well, Will.” Her voice is a whisper, almost gone entirely, and it tears at you. You hold her as she comes to your side.

“You shouldn't talk, Alys. Be still. Just-just hold onto me. The men will be here soon.” You resist the desire to crush her in your arms, so glad you are that she still draws breath.

“W-Will, we really need to-” She mutters. Her eyes close and you panic even more.

“Alys!” She fails to stir.

“ALYS!” You yell in despair, but with no further effect. The door bursts open and Friedrich and several of his knights burst in. They crowd you and Alys, as she bleeds into your arms.

“I'm fine, you bastards, see to her! See to Alys!” They listen. She is tenderly carried out of the abandoned house and you, unharmed, follow soon after. You remind yourself you have to take control of Castle Barathon, but Alys never leaves your mind even as Friedrich and his men escort you and the caravan up to the castle.
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The seneschal of the castle gives a tour after you demand Alys is immediately put into the well stocked castle infirmary. The functionaries have dug up their own place in the fortress, a whole wing suddenly being transformed into a combination of archive, library, and work area. The knights stay in the unfilled barracks, and word is that some of them are considering swearing to the Order. The interior walls hold nothing less than a full village worth of amenities. A blacksmith, Inn, Tavern, Stables, and every other type of thing you might expect. Truly a city within a city, everything outside the walls can be had within. You excuse the seneschal. He told you his name but it didn't stick. Being better about that might be a good plan. Instead you head to the infirmary, as your men take control of the castle.

It's more or less a fully capable hospital environment. You marvel at the staff and equipment. Truly, Alkaign has given you a gift to trust you with such wealth and expertise.
It's not long before you see Alys. She has a somewhat reddened wrap on her torso, but she's conscious and aware. You approach her, nervous and concerned.

She smiles weakly. “Will. Thanks for coming.” She reaches out and you take her hand in yours. It's warm, and you rub your fingers on her palm when she doesn't break away.

“Alys, I would always be here. You only got hurt helping me.” You say, your eyes watering.

“You'd be here anyway, Will. I know that. It's my fault not killing the bastards before the one stuck me.” She maintains her smile. How many times will you let her get hurt? She lets out her hand and you take it. Her red hair as ever frames her face as you look into her eyes. Your duty binds you, bur your loyalty tells you it is time to make a decision.

> Ask Alys to marry you. Together nothing can stop you, and you will do Alkaign's will with no impediments.

> Alys is your dearest friend. Promise that nothing like this will ever occur again. You will protect what is dear to you

> Swear Alys into the Order. She will surely agree and this avoids questions about her relationship with you

> You can't make this decision now
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>>5231493
>> Ask Alys to marry you. Together nothing can stop you, and you will do Alkaign's will with no impediments.

I normally wouldn't be so quick to vote for this in quests. But you got your wish, QM, >>5229290 your characterisation is masterful. Every character feels alive and different. The chemistry between these two is strong as hell.
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>>5231498
I am so happy you think so, friend. May life bring you the best and save you from the worst.
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>>5231493
>> Swear Alys into the Order. She will surely agree and this avoids questions about her relationship with you
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>>5231493
>Ask Alys to marry you. Together nothing can stop you, and you will do Alkaign's will with no impediments.
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>>5231493
>Ask her to marry you.
I dont want a ceremony to interrupt our work. Something quiet and swift will suffice.m, after the required blessings and permissions are attained.
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>>5231587
As another point, I want the order to start investigating that sect which we just ripped apart. Friends they know, family, who owned the house, how they got there.
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>>5231493
> Ask Alys to marry you. Together nothing can stop you, and you will do Alkaign's will with no impediments.
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>>5231702

Your words catch in your throat. Are you really doing this? Now? You won't be living an easy life from here on, after all. But then, isn't this what Alys chose too? She had comfort and safety provided to her, she could have been just another princess with privilege and wealth handed to her. She chose a more dangerous life. She chose to be an assassin, a spy, a poisoner. She chose the life that put her in this very bed with a bloody wound.

In a way, she chose you. Your mind is made up. Was there ever another option? You know what you need to do. If you're honest, you've known for years. This latest event just made it more clear to you than ever.

You take Alys's hand in both of yours, tightly grasping her slender fingers with your calloused, scarred digits.

“Alys, marry me.” You whisper. Her eyes go wide, and that rare flush you have grown to treasure tints her face crimson.

“W-Will...” She looks at you in utter shock. It's one of the only times you have ever seen the woman at a loss for words. The moment hangs, and you begin to think you have made a critical misstep. Of course, the second you think you've made a mistake, Alys embraces you and locks her lips with yours. Taken aback, it is a moment before you reciprocate. Its a few seconds of bliss. Did you really wait so long to do this? Didn't you know long ago, almost from the beginning this was inevitable for the two of you? She winces, and breaks away. You let her go, fearing that she may reopen her fresh wound. But she grabs your arm, pulling you into another embrace. This time her head rests on your shoulder.

“Yes, Will, yes.” She speaks softly into your ear. So it's done then. No ring, no plans, no ceremony. But right now, you just might be the happiest man in the world. You fight back tears, this has all happened so fast. But you will not show weakness. It just took you time to see what Mother, Eleyse, and Alys herself clearly saw. Depths, how can you be so dense? You wonder if even the Emperor expected this. Alkaign is no fool. You would bet he was banking on it. A skilled assassin and one of his most trusted retainers? Who else to tackle the coming threats? And if you love each other, that's just all the more reason for the both of you to throw yourselves at the task.

You want to slap yourself. This beautiful moment is right in front of you and you are thinking on conspiracy theories. “Alys, I-I thank you. I think I need to get the castle in order now.”

She smiles. Sardonic. Radiant. “I know you do, Will. Leave me to the healers, we have all the time in the world now. We'd hardly want people talking. At least not yet.” She winks, and your heart flutters. What are you, fifteen? You place your hand on her cheek, and against character she leans into it. Her warmth restores you, but you do not cross the line into impropriety and remove it after a moment.
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“Farewell. My, uh, my Love.” You say unsteadily. Alys laughs.

“We don't need to be different Will, I think we are fine as we are.” She looks troubled for a moment. “.. but if you want to call me dear now and then I wouldn't mind.” You halt in the doorway, taken aback, but your cowardice wins out, and you leave without a further word. Dear. Dear Alys.

You have some trouble clearing your head as you head to the audience hall. The seneschal had told you that the first order of business would be decided there, but so preoccupied with Alys you had barely registered him and now you cannot recall the poor man's name. He greets you as you enter.

“Ah, Captain-General! Excellent timing, The knights are taking their leave, but you seem to have impressed a number of them. Sixteen new recruits! How exciting! A tremendous start!” The man's overly pleasing demeanor is troubling to you. No one acts like this without expectation of recompense. Still, Alkaign left Barathon with him for years and he clearly did not bring it to ruin. Some credit must be afforded, and you are not so powerful to refuse the assistance of possible allies.

“Remind me of your name, good Seneschal?” If he's offended, he is far too well trained, or too ambitious, to show it.

“I am Garn, my Lord. Humble servant to the master of Barathon.”

“Very good Garn. Bring the aspirants forward, I will hear their oaths.”

He does. It's not an arduous process. But the last of the men to be sworn to the Order draws your attention. Friedrich kneels before you, and swears the same oath as the others. He is now, by law, your man as long as you lead the Beholders. But this man detests you! He's made no secret of it. Member of Alkaign's house he may be, he has no love for you despite your close relationship with the Imperial family. What is he up to? Despite all of this, you have no cause to reject him, so you allow him to swear himself to you and the Order despite your misgivings. The unsworn knights will leave for the Capitol on the morrow. But first you have work to do. The new aspirants are sworn in, Alys is on the mend, and sometime in the future you have a wedding to plan. Mother will gloat and Eleyse will laugh. But there is a job you were sent to do.
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>>5233026
> One option may be chosen. This is the focus of the Order until it is accomplished.

> Network of informants: Play it subtle and build a network of informants across the Empire, tracking the Better World ideology, it's adherents, and rumors of anyone like the boy you and Alys slew in the Capitol.

> Aggressive recruitment: You need warriors. Seek out the Empire's finest from all military and knightly sources. This threat must be faced with force of arms at the end of the day.

> Propaganda campaign: Combat the growing threat of the Better World with your own thesis of Imperial strength and stability. Hearts and minds.

> Preemptive strike: Some cells of the Better World movement are known. Annihilate one as an example and show the might of the Empire and your new Order.
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>>5233029
>> Network of informants: Play it subtle and build a network of informants across the Empire, tracking the Better World ideology, it's adherents, and rumors of anyone like the boy you and Alys slew in the Capitol.
Knowledge is power.
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>>5233029
>Network of informants: Play it subtle and build a network of informants across the Empire, tracking the Better World ideology, it's adherents, and rumors of anyone like the boy you and Alys slew in the Capitol.
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>>5233029
> Network of informants: Play it subtle and build a network of informants across the Empire, tracking the Better World ideology, it's adherents, and rumors of anyone like the boy you and Alys slew in the Capitol.
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>>5233029
>Network of informants

The advantage we have over them, is that we are not public knowledge yet.
So we shall be the blade from the shadows. When we have our information, we will need propaganda.

Hmm. .
>Assign a single theologian/scholar to devising the system of belief we will be spreading.
This should be a background thing, all told, but the Order needs an ideology to rally around. And it's this ideaology we should spread, so it's best to start with our order members. Zealots make for excellent soldiers
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>>5233267
or we could dictate a code's skeleton and have this scholar devise a proper rebuttal.
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>>5233267
Supporting this.

We need to mix existing religious beliefs into a new zealous ideology.

Maybe we find a ‘lost tomb’ which speaks of ‘demons’ from another plane who grant their followers huge powers but corrupt their souls…
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>>5234322
Try and keep it more subtle, or leave it to the emperors new archeology department.
I don't feel us competent enough to do so.

Anyway, the reason I said that we only spend a single scholar doing it, is because it isn't a primary objective of the order, it's just preparation for the future.
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>>5187631
I hope you all had a good Easter Sunday. Unsurprisingly I was with family but we have at least one more post for this thread coming tonight. If I have the time an interlude after that and then another thread.
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>>5234940
Can I get a QM confirmation that setting a single scholar on prep work for the ideology for the rest of the order is legal, due to it being a low effort comparatively and a nice set up for training our order members.
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>>5234981
Yeah I was planning to throw it in, during the timeskip where the network is getting set up this post. Ill throw the more religious connotation down the road though, that seems more involved and you'd have to get the Clergy involved which has it's own issues.
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>>5235075
Any ideology, held close enough, can become religion.

A totally divine mandated code?
Just the belief that these things are evil and will destroy the kingdom we love?
Either works, just so long as our men hold to it with a burning passion. This will spawn faith, in the order and our mission, and faith can move mountains.

It is a sword and shield and tool we would do very well to hold close.
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QM, I'm late to the party due to an extended Easter weekend without internet access, but I'm this >>5230504 anon, and I'd like to thank you for the Alys marriage option.
I have to agree with >>5231498 wholeheartedly: I'm normally nowhere close to waifufagging, but your characterisation is masterful indeed.

Anyway, onward to the business of the day:
>>5233029
> Network of informants: Play it subtle and build a network of informants across the Empire, tracking the Better World ideology, it's adherents, and rumors of anyone like the boy you and Alys slew in the Capitol.

>>5235083
I'm not a fan of bringing religion into this at all, to be honest. I'd rather have our men convinced of their goal any other way than zealotry.
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>>5235452
You can recruit loyal psychopaths, you can scour the world for men of exceptional focus and will (who will more often than not be psychopaths), you can try and find people like Will who are utterly consumed with their honour to the face of death or you can begin fermenting zealotry with a code.

These are the only manners and means to get people who will not crack against the charisma and mind controlling shinanigence of an isakai. They are cognio hazards in some cases, and to that we must avoid the possibility.

I figure a code is easier than innate willpower.
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"Garn, do you have a list of current personnel and their abilities and duties?"

He nods, drawing your attention to the scrolls he has secured in his waistband. "Of course, Captain-General. I have the full listing of Barathon's garrison and other staff with me just now. Brother Bardus has also helpfully dropped off a roster of your new initiates in the records hall. He has some of them working to reconcile the two and give you the full picture in utmost accuracy.”

“Thank you for your attentiveness, Garn. I think I have an idea Bardus may help me with. I'll leave you to it and go bother him instead.” The seneschal gives you a bow, and moves off to his other duties. You remember the wing of the castle given over to the archives, and begin to head that way. Two of the men at arms in the audience hall make to follow you, but you wave them off. Of course you have a harder time deciding what to do about the lone knight leaning against the doorway to the next wing. Friedrich. He looks like he has something to say.

“Captain-General, a moment of your time, if you please?” He says, voice level in the same detached monotone you've grown to be annoyed by during your journey together to Barathon.

“I have duties to see to, Sir, please be brief.” You try, somewhat unsuccessfully, to keep the frustration out of your tone.

He inclines his head. For once his helmet is removed, unlike most knights you have known the man is very rarely seen without it. His hair is short cropped and midnight black. A disfiguring scar twists his mouth into a sneer on one side, the scarring spreading up past his ear and to the beginning of his scalp. “Thank you. I will be brief. I believe you may be wondering why I swore to the Order after all.”

“I am, I can't deny.”

“The Emperor always intended for me to. He did not order me to swear myself away from his household against my will, but his wishes were made clear to me when he gave me the duty of your escort.”

“So, you are just following orders.” Your suspicion grows. Is he Alkaign's eye on you after all?

“Not exactly. When we arrived here I was resolved to leave with the troops returning to the Capitol. I also considered recommending your appointment be reconsidered, though the Emperor would not have heeded me. If I may be frank, I found you unimpressive.”

You raise an eyebrow. “Go on then.”

“You are reckless, I saw this when you dueled that savage, the very one you know keep as a pet. I saw it again when you charged ahead upon our arrival here. You owed your position to your personal relationship to the former heir and his family. I served the previous Emperor for twenty years. He had the same fault. The advice and service given him suffered.”
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>>5235497
Restraining the desire to reprimand his insolence, you speak. “And all this suddenly changed?”

Friedrich shakes his head slowly. “I stand by all of that. However, I still would have sworn. This is where the Emperor wants me.” He looks troubled for a moment, a subtle change but quite remarkable on his usually stoic face. “It was your bastard. Recklessness can be accounted for, and your selection for the position is not necessarily an indictment on your abilities. No, I feared for your moral character. I have an inkling of what is coming to the Empire, though I was told I would learn more here. I cannot abide a leader so easily corrupted. Moral weakness cannot be allowed in the face of the trials we will surely face.”

You expected something like this, but the boy's secret has to remain in a tight circle. “I see” you say, anger beginning to affect your voice. If only he knew.

“There were always rumors about the Heir's traveling group. Elpest, I knew from before. A carouser and a cad. A boy in a knight's role. I believed much the same for the rest of you. I trained the Heir in his youth, he himself had a somewhat wild nature. While my knights and I did the tough work they would talk, of your grand adventures while we wallowed in the mud, hunting down bandits and thieves. How the Heir's sister insisted on tagging along where she had no business.”

“Careful, Sir Friedrich.” Menace is now fully evident in your tone.

He puts his palms out in a placating gesture. “Please, Captain-General. Let me finish. I am sworn to the Order, but I think you might want to know how the Capitol and the central province have thought of you all for some years.”

“We had an idea.”

“Then you will not be surprised at the news that the city sneered at the Heir picking up some half savage from the Northern Duchies. And you will also not be surprised at what they said about the rumor that throughout your travels the Lady Alys, daughter of our own Emperor, was ever at your side even among the others. Personally, I was unbothered. Lady Alys was never fit for castle life. Albrecht let her choose her own path, and she was free to choose who to associate with, however unorthodox. So when I first saw you around the Castle, I had no real reservation. Your closeness to the Lady was clearly not just a rumor, so I went forward with my assumptions.”

He closes his eyes for a moment. “And so, on the journey here, you appear with a bastard. Appearing before the Priestesses, you are denied. You and the Lady seem to get into at least one altercation and do not speak for some time. Then, you are as close as ever, like magic. It reminded me of Elpest, that sinner. I began to think you might be a disaster, that you had ensnared the Lady somehow.”
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“You give her too little credit, Sir.”

“Aye, that I do. Because remember who it was that found you two after that ambush when we arrived here. I am a knight, I've never had the time, but I know what I saw in there. No one is being deceived by whatever is between you two.” There is a far off look in his eyes, and you feel the stirring feeling of sympathy for the gruff knight for the first time. It reads to you like someone who was suffered real loss.

“I am sworn to the Order's service, Captain-General. It is not in me to sugarcoat or equivocate. You may never like me. But on the name of our Emperor and the Lady herself, you never need to worry about my dedication. That is all I had to say.” He gives the knight's salute, and you return it.

“As you were, Sir Friedrich.” Your voice is softer now. There is more to the man than you had thought. He steps aside as you continue toward the archive wing.

The guards and workmen scattered through the hallways either salute or bow as you pass, nodding in acknowledgment. You remember the way to the archive, only taking a single wrong turn as you try to get out of the way of a heavy bookshelf being moved by two servants. You find a large, vaulted room that you suspect was until recently a sitting room for guests. The furniture has been removed or is on it's way out, and the functionaries are busy supervising the addition of many bookcases and tables for study. Bardus is directing two of the Brothers who are carrying a table across the room, to a spot by one of the tall windows in order for it to receive enough light from outside.

“Brother Bardus, I see you are keeping busy.”

“Captain-General!” The older man exclaims, approaching and bowing slightly as the Brothers behind him do their best approximation of where exactly he wanted that heavy oak table. He steps closer. “How is the Lady? if you don't mind my concern.”

“It's welcome, Brother. She is on the mend. The healers are optimistic.”

The gregarious former tax official smiles broadly. “Great to hear! The caravan took such a liking to her on the journey, many have asked if I had news.”

“She has that effect on most people.” You can't help but smile wistfully. “Brother, I do have a task for you. I am sure the others can manage the furniture by themselves.”

“At your service, of course.”

“Initiates with jobs that involved gathering information. Tax auditors, enforcement, people like that. I need a list.”

He thinks for a moment. “It will be done. I can think of a few who might fit the bill. Though I will say they are used to financial crimes, not this kind of subversive activity. Perhaps you can provide further training?”
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>>5235503
You had considered that. While the Imperial Revenue Service had the closest thing among it's personnel as to what you need for the Order, it's not a perfect fit. For one, many of them are more used to books than travel and investigation, and even those who worked the field. Alys is the obvious solution, a lot of those skills are her specialty. But obviously it will be some time before that's an option, and even then eventually you will need a lot more than what she alone can provide as you begin recruiting more agents. Then, you've considered something like this before. Alys herself had tutors. She rarely talked of their identities, but if you are getting this network off the ground even in limited state while she is focusing on convalescence, they might be your best option. You hope you can get near what old Albrecht paid for their services with the Order's newly full coffers.

“I have a few ideas for that. Thank you for your help, you can hand your suggestions to the seneschal once the list is made out.”

“As you wish, Captain-General. Please give Lady Alys my regards when you see her next.”

You nod at the man in acknowledgment as he returns to micromanaging furniture and bookcase locations with a particularity you find more than a little unnecessary. Your business in the archives done you leave the initiates to the arduous task and make your way back to the infirmary.
The guards posted at the door, at your insistence, let you through with quickly traced salutes. You hadn't told them to prevent any visitors, just to be sure Alys was willing to see anyone they let in. You are surprised and a little disturbed to see the massive figure of Domlech dwarfing a chair in the corner of the room. You instinctively grab your hilt at the sight of him. Alys seems unconcerned, reading a book silently in the bed.

“Domlech, you better have a good reason to be here.”

“Calm yeself, Chief. She let me in.”

Alys looks up from her book at you. “Hello, Will. He insisted. Apparently his aegis over you extends to me.”

“Aye, though she did make me fetch her that useless thing.” He nods his head at the book as Alys places it at her side.

She chuckles softly. “They aren't so useless. Maybe you'll learn that some day.”

Domlech looks like he doubts it, and he gets up to leave. He stops for a moment as he edges past you and out the door. He gets as close to a whisper as a man of his temperament is likely capable. “Ye got a hell of a woman there, Chief.” You almost habitually deny you have any claim on her before remembering that's not quite true anymore. “I've seen lesser men out of it for weeks with a wound like that.” Then, over loud, as if to make up for it. “I need a drink!” You hear him stomping down the hall and towards the audience hall. There is little doubt he's planning to go put the interior wall tavern through it's paces.
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“I'm surprised you could bear the smell.” You say, as you take your previous seat at the side.

“Well, he did sit as far away as possible. I even think he might have actually bathed since we arrived.”

You grunt. “Considerate of him.”

Her hand reaches for yours. “What brings you here, Will? I know you're busy today.”

You rub the back of your head and let her knead some tension out of your arm. “Duty, this time, unfortunately. We need to establish some kind of way to get information on the enemy from across the Empire. But other than the knight we left in my hold and whoever keeps track of things in the Capitol, we have nothing. There's a core of potential candidates among those we have in the Order already, but they need training. And not the kind I know how to provide.”

She frowns. “I think I know where you're going with this, dear.”

“Yes. I know you never liked talking about them. Can they help? We can't wait for you to mend, and eventually it will be too much for one person anyway. This is just the beginning.

A far off look comes over face. She starts playing with one of the ringlets of her crimson hair, not in it's usual braid. “There were three. Some more, let's say, pleasant than the others. They aren't like you and I, they'll want to be paid. Paid a lot. Duty is meaningless to people like them”

“How much?”

“I don't know. They sent father into a rage with the estimate. I had to beg him to even consider it. And you want them to train people in mass. I think my level of training is out of the question. We don't have the time, or even the funds.”

“You can contact them?”

She looks distinctly uncomfortable. “I can, Will. And it has to be me. They all use ciphers. You have to trust me with this, you do not want to make an enemy of any of them.”

“You know I trust you, Alys. Always. Tell me about them, what did they specialize in?
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“Salaf is from a city to the far south, but still in Imperial Territory. He was focused on espionage, evasion, various spy skills. He had a long career as the spymaster for the city lord there. I think at a minimum we need to approach him. His skills are vital for what we need. He's the most personable of them, just a professional. Still plenty expensive, though.”

A look of disgust crosses her face. “Then there's Mother Rena. She used to be a Priestess, but they exiled her because she twisted the healing arts. Poison, assassination, and what I know of healing. It's all her. She puts on matronly airs, but she's unspeakable cruel.” You fail to hide your worry. “Will, she couldn't touch me or face an angry Emperor. The other girls she took off the street weren't so lucky. I hope the one's who disappeared had the good sense to just run away. She will fleece you as well. I would avoid even mentioning the old bitch if I didn't think she was the best.”

“Last one is Brassus. Used to be a pit fighter in some Lady forsaken tribal village out west. Best knifeman you'll ever meet and a truly devious fighter. You want our people to win a street fight he can get them there.” She looks almost sad. “But he's broken. Whatever they did to him out there turned him half feral. I don't even know if he'll be of any help. And he only ever asks for payment in increments of his old fight purses. I don't think he can count otherwise.”

The choices take form in your head. It does sound like Salaf is the most vital, but if you are willing to deplete your funds further you can approach the other two to give your agents a more diversified skill set. You won't be producing more on the level of Alys, but maybe you'll be more prepared over all.

Choose any or all

>Contact Salaf

> Contact Mother Rena

> Contact Brassus
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>>5235452
Thanks for the feedback. It makes me happy people enjoy this.

I had zero intention to actually do the marriage thing but I've been looking back on how I've written both characters and it made too much sense to me, especially at that moment.
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>>5235511
>Salif
>Brassus

Our agents arent there to assassinate people. They are there to root out the enemy and fight like hell if they have to get away.
We don't need the poisioner.
Though let's hope that the pit fighter only got payed in 200s.

As for the good Sir Friedrich, I want to place him at our right hand, Alys at our left.
He has given his oath of being dutiful and his character of being inflexible and willing to tell us exactly the faults in our plans.
That is valuable, to have a nay smith and an experienced one. Plus he seems to command respect himself, so our orders from his mouth will be twice as potent.
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>>5235511
>Salaf
>Brassus

Salaf 100%, Brassus might be a bit of a wild card. But I agree with the anon, we need agents who get info and who can lose heat.
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>>5235511
>>5235595 +1
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>>5235511
>>5235595
I completely agree with this anon. I was, however, thinking of also sending at least one but maybe two or three recruits to the poisoner/assassin. In case we need that skill set, I don't want to have to send in our wife every time.

Glad you brought up the point about Friedrich, I'd suggest a similar thing. Time for our character to put a bit more trust in him! Friedrich's litany could've been a very bad idea for him if we were less forgiving, so I admire his guts.
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>>5236578
The poisioners can be trained by wifey, once they have proven themselves trustworthy.
She is just as good a poisioner.
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>>5235595
Supporting this anon, we aren't asssassinating people *just* yet
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>>5236609
You make a great point. Nevermind sending them to Rena, then.
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Sorry for the delay guys. Due to a unexpected event(me falling asleep) this is more two updates in one. At about 3300 words and counting, will be done tonight.
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>>5237541
take your time qm
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“We'll reach out to Salaf and Brassus. No need to wipe out our coffers entirely before we've even begun.”

Alys smiles. “I can't say I'll regret not having to write Rena. Have the guards send for some vellum and I'll get to it.” Her smile fades quickly.

“Are you sure you are okay with this,” You gulp. “... dear?”

Her face lights up. “It was a tough time for me, Will. But it made me tough. Remember, it brought me here, with you, and you know I don't break easily.”

You sigh. “Okay. I'll tell the guards to send for what you need, and not to let anyone in until you call for them.

Her hand traces your arm as you stand from the chair and make your way to the door. “Thank you, Will. I think I needed to be useful right now.”

“Rest well, Alys.”

You step out of the room and give your instructions to the guards. One remains as the other heads out to go gather the requested items. It's been a long day, and between the strain of combat, exhaustion from the journey, and the emotional peaks and valleys you desire nothing more than sleep. If you could, you'd sleep in the infirmary for Alys' sake, but she wanted privacy. Not to mention you'd be scolded for neglecting yourself when you can no longer do any more for her than the healers can.

You find the seneschal helping direct the rearrangements happening around the castle for both personnel and various items needed for the archives. Near him are a number of pallets of tabards and robes, adorned with a stylized eye sigil unfamiliar to you. He looks to you and bows respectfully. “Hello again, Captain-General. As you can see the cloth-work for the Order has been delivered by the seamstresses guild in Barathon town. Excellent timing, and lucky we were instructed to make the order in the Emperor's initial letter to prepare for your arrival.”

The cloth-work was unknown to you, but then, you've been kind of stretched thin between visiting Alys, getting the personnel records settled, and your discussion with Sir Friedrich. Probably just didn't come up in your previous, and brief, conversation with the man. The clothing is a sheer black, in direct contrast with the blue commonly worn by Imperial men at arms, and the eye sigil is an embroidered gold. To your eye these items are of a higher quality than most you have seen, but then the Order will of course be much smaller than the Imperial levies and knights even if you heavily recruit.
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“I take it the original order used this iconography?” You ask.

“Yes, the Imperial Library had some for reference in the Capitol. I have it on good authority it is absolutely authentic, Captain-General.”

Having a visual identity is important for any fighting force or organization. Should help morale among your men at arms, knights, and even the more scholarly types. Even if it does seem cross purposes for an Order whose purpose is largely clandestine. As for authenticity, few living remember what the Beholders wore before they were disbanded. And even if they do, you really don't care.

“Very well. Garn, may you show me to my quarters? I haven't had the chance to ask , but I need to retire this evening if I am to be of any use at all tomorrow.”

“Oh, but of course Captain-General, just follow me. It's in the west wing tower. I hope you don't mind stairs, it's customary for the master of Barathon to be seated above it.” Honestly, it sounds impractical to you. But you can stand on ceremony, at least for now. You hope in your current exhaustion you can, in fact, handle the stairs the seneschal warned of.

It's some time before you arrive there, the second to last door on the long winding staircase of the tower.

“The last door is a balcony, of course. I do not recommend visiting it in weather like this, it gets quite windy. But the view is something on a clear day. Now then.” He opens the heavy wood door and reveals a surprisingly large quarters for a tower loft. At least the match for your quarters back in Hold Campbell in sheer area, it is considerably more luxurious in it's furnishing. A canopied bed much larger than any you can remember sleeping in, a wardrobe too large to be filled by the meager amount of clothing you brought with you, even the nearly unbelievable expense of a round copper mirror polished to a sheen. Noticing your expression, Garn clears his throat. “Ah, your predecessor was somewhat extravagant, Captain-General. I had what items you were traveling with brought up while you were familiarizing yourself with the castle. Do you require anything else?”

There's already a carafe of wine on the table next to the giant bed, so you suppose you got preempted on that one. “Thank you, Garn. You may return to your duties.”

With a bow, the seneschal leaves you alone with your thoughts. You intend to have a few goblets of mulled wine to quench your considerable thirst, but you barely down one before your tired bones scream for sleep, and you all but collapse onto the bed, your clothing discarded, and darkness takes you.
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The next few weeks are a blur as you and the Order work to secure your new home. The bodies of the attempted assassins are recovered and studied. They were poorly equipped and found to be known locals in Barathon town. There was no indication they were paid, so you are forced to assume that the bastards that almost took Alys from you were fanatics of the Better World. They were an assortment of menial laborers, petty criminals, and one veteran of the Imperial levy who had spent some time begging on the streets after gambling himself out of house and home. Unfortunates, then. This makes sense to you, the ideology would appeal to those who do not fit in the world of the Empire. As a precaution, Order members going beyond the walls have orders to remain in groups. Hopefully that dissuades other wannabe assassins.

You spend time overseeing the transition, though you find there is little for you to do other than occasionally sign off on some request from the scholars, scribes, or even the townsfolk. For the first time in years, you have free time, at least as long as it takes Alys to heal and her letters to return. Your mornings are in the training ring in the courtyard, Friedrich and Domlech common partners along with the braver of the sworn knights. You have Domlech fight others as well, no telling when it might come in handy to see how an Ard Negh fights. Afternoons you start a habit of taking meals to Alys in the infirmary. She shines every time you do it, though you get the occasional scowl from a healer that you do your best to ignore. This is almost certainly getting rumors started, but finally you think you are beyond caring.

Evenings are reserved for correspondence. Your report to the Emperor comes first of course, you update on your early decisions and describe happenings on the road to Barathon. Nervously, you include a personal letter to him to request Alys' hand. It's technically his call as head of house, though you predict he will have no issue with it. Alys, as she chose to become, was never expected to marry. His response is predictably swift. Your report is accepted and he finds your plans for an information network acceptable. The Imperial seal is unbroken and the missive carried by a member of the Emperor's household, so you consider the message secure. If he is concerned about Alys' wounding he deigns not to note it. Just as you did, he includes a more personal correspondence with the official message. It's not long.

My Lord Captain-General,

Your heart is as open as your mind dense. Why do you think I sent her with you?

I will not be attending. I am sure you would prefer a smaller ceremony, and there is much to do.

Emperor Alkaign I Athimur
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You probably should have expected that. Letters are also drafted to Mother and your sisters, of course. For now the roads are relatively safe, so if you want any of your family at the ceremony you have your chance. Mother of course must sit the chair of the Hold in your absence, as ever, but you feel it might be beneficial for Eleyse to get some travel in, if only to assuage the poor girl's malaise. To Mother you send the good news and suggestions for who to send as Eleyse's guards for the journey. You surprise yourself by suggesting Elpest. You also request Father's ring. Moira has not worn it since he was killed, and it has always been handed down to the first born son so they can continue to hand it down to their children. Any way you look at it, it will be some more weeks before they can both receive the message and arrive at Barathon, so you return to your routine.

Four weeks pass before your usual trek to the infirmary after morning practice finds Alys' bed suddenly empty. You swallow your worry when you notice the note left on the bedstand table. It's brief, as seems common between her and her brother.

Will,

Feast Hall

Love, A

Other than your visits to the kitchen to fetch your betrothed's meals you have seen little of Barathon's Feast Hall so far. You take your breakfast and dinner wherever you are working at the time. It is far bigger than your current manpower needs, and often feels almost eerily empty. Situated in the western wing of the castle, it is closer to the staff and guest quarters than the work spaces of the east wing. Walking over there, you are pleased and surprised Alys is out of bed. The healers were insistent on another week before they would let her go. The hall is livelier than usual as you enter, a number of the Barathon garrison troops noisily playing cards at one of the tables. Alys' table, in the back, is the one with the high backed chair meant for the master of the castle. She is not entirely alone, Domlech is there doing unholy things to a turkey leg as Friedrich and the garrison captain, a man called Redran, look on in a mix of disdain, horror, and perhaps fascination.
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You stride over to them, the rowdy card players standing to attention as you pass before you bid them return to their distraction. If they want to waste their meal time playing cards it's their prerogative. The men stand, Alys does not. Which is odd, but not improper, as she isn't sworn to your service. You take your seat at the head of the table.

“Good afternoon, everyone.” You say, as Alys flags down one of the servants and indicates you need a meal. It had slipped your mind entirely honestly, but you had been taking your lunch in the infirmary with her for so long you had nearly forgotten your long exercises in the training yard necessitated you restore yourself. No doubt she'll scold you for your neglect again. Friedrich nods respectfully as he sits, while Domlech looks mostly annoyed he had to temporarily quit eating to greet you. Redran looks nervous as they come. “It's Captain Redran, right? How long have you headed the garrison here?”

“T-ten years, Captain-General!” He stammers out.

“Calm yourself, man, the men are up to snuff so I have no quarrel with you.” You mean that, they are a match on the training field for any of your own men at arms back in the Hold.

“I appreciate your praise, Captain-General!” The excitable man seems to be developing a flop sweat. Alys giggles at your side while Friedrich shakes his head slightly in exasperation. Domlech continues eating the turkey to the bone, and then begins gesticulating wildly at the nearest servant. You note Redran has finished his meal and is fidgeting.

“Do you have somewhere to be, Redran?”

“Afternoon roll call Captain-General!”

“Then you're excused.”

He nods with enthusiasm and marches away from the table, gathering the card players with him as he leaves the hall.

“He seems a little, uh, jittery.”

Alys smiles. “He was perfectly fine before you walked in. I think he built you up a bit in his head.”

“What did I do?”

Domlech grunts. “Told em ye beat me one on one, chief. That seemed to do it.” His second turkey leg arrives and he begins his gluttonous task once again. Your own meal arrives. A roast and potatoes. Your favorite. Someone has been talking to the kitchen. Politely, you begin eating.

“So, you needed to talk, Alys?”
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“Yes, Will, we do.” She holds up two envelopes. “They came in today, it's why I slipped the healers. Couldn't let someone else get to them.” A chair is pushed back as Friedrich stands suddenly, drawing a look from Alys.

“At your leave, Captain-General.”

You think for a moment. “No, Sir Friedrich, sit down. As senior knight you are privy to such things as much as Alys and I are.” His stoic expression makes no move, but he sits again, and you almost swear his scarred mouth almost smirks after he does.

The knight looks to his side. “And him?”

You shrug. “Who's he going to tell?”

Domlech grunts. “Nobody talks to me but the woman, southerner, too scared.” He rips a huge chunk from the leg and mumbles. “Don't care anyway.”

Friedrich seems dubious, but accepts your lack of concern over it.

Alys begins. “They both arrived at the same time, with the same messenger. Tells me they must have conferred over the offer. Also I think Brassus had his dictated to Salaf. I always suspected the man was illiterate.”

“What does this mean?”

“Namely, Will, they are interested. In fact, they are already on their way. Together. One collective fee. I'd bet Salaf is probably skimming from Brassus' half but I doubt the old wolf would care even if he knew. The cost is, as we discussed, extensive.”

“How much?”

She softly gives a number. It's considerable. A third of your current coffers. But the crafty bastards have tied your hands. You can hardly have them come all the way out and not pay them. You suppose they just made the choice you would have had to make for you.

“Sir Friedrich, your opinion?”

He sighs. “It's robbery, but I trust the Lady Alys if she says they are the best. I am no spy, no alleyway thug. But I can see the use of such people for an Order like this. I will swallow my misgivings, Captain-General.”

“Very well.” You note that Friedrich is disinterested in what remains of his food and even Domlech seems loathe to order yet another turkey leg. “You both may leave.” Alys has her hand on your leg, bidding you to stay for a moment. Friedrich bows as he leaves while Domlech as usual stomps out without ceremony. The vast hall is silent once more.

“Alys, what is it?” You say, thinking there must be some message in the letters she wanted between the two of you after all.
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She shuffles uneasily. “My love, I don't think I can stand.”

“... I see. Back to the infirmary, then?”

She nods. “Yes, though there is somewhere else I would much rather be.”

You try not to pay attention to your face reddening as you help your betrothed to her feet, and slowly walk to the exit. On the way back some of the men at arms on duty give you looks, quickly aimed at their feet once you glare daggers into them. Before long you arrive back at Alys' private room in the infirmary.

One of the healers almost goes into hysterics. “Lady Alys! You need your rest! What if you could have reopened the wound!”

Alys scowls but seems too tired for her usual sardonics. You have to pick up the slack.

“Out.”

“B-but Captain-General?!” The healer sounds almost afraid.

“I said OUT, woman!” The healer scurries out of the room followed by the other on duty there, neither looking back. At this rate you'll have to make sure they don't cut off a limb next time you catch cold.

You help Alys out of her standard formless cloak, revealing the small clothes underneath and the wrappings covering what would otherwise be her exposed torso, and then you all but bodily lift her into the bed. Honestly, you think she could have managed both of those but she doesn't fight you about it. “Alys, they aren't wrong you know. You could have sent me for the letters, had them brought here.”

She smiles up at you as she undoes her long braid and let's the red sea of her hair fall about around her head like the background of a painting. “I can't stand being useless. It's like when I was a girl, locked up in Althimur Castle all day.”

“I know, I'm sorry Alys. But you do need to heal. I can't do this without you.” Your hands grasp your own head in exasperation.

“Of course you can, Will. But you won't have to, I'm not going anywhere.”

“You better not.” You lean in and kiss her forehead, before turning to leave. It's about time to see what petty issues Barathon town has for you this afternoon.

“Will.” You stop just at the door and half turn. “I love you.”

You force yourself to look her in the eyes. “I love you, too.” Nothing else could possibly be said, so you leave without a further word. The two healers are in the hall gossiping as you enter, and stop and stare in some degree of shock as you stride towards them. You indicate the door you just came in through. “Do you ladies need my permission?” They once again scurry through the door without looking back.
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Your two new hires must have sent their messages only days ahead of themselves. Alys is only blessedly out of the infirmary and close to whole for less than a day before both of them arrive. The call of approaching riders reaches you and Alys as you are confirming her own role in the training. You were discussing how, now back on her feet, she could orientate the chosen initiates before they get thrown into the deep end of your two expert trainers. Those who are distinguishing themselves could even learn some poisons and alchemy, though she is clear that any woman should keep some secrets.

In the courtyard, you meet them. The knights had mustered out to escort them in, Friedrich at their head. Salaf is a wizened figure, a deep brown skinned man atop a magnificent southern stallion you are sure is miserable in the relative cool of Barathon's surroundings. Brassus rides a mule, either out of preference or lack of riding skill who can say. The man is the most scarred individual you have ever seen, his ebony skin crisscrossed with pale scars. Two of his fingers on one hand are missing. He wears no armor, the only visible weapons at least twelve knives sheathed on his sides. You have no doubt more are hidden elsewhere.

Salaf and Brassus stop before you and dismount, allowing the grooms who approach to lead their mounts away to the castle stables. The elder man steps forward first, and enters into a very deep bow, much more elaborate than is common in the north or central provinces. You remember it from your travels through the southern cities.

“This humble servant greets you, Captain-General. I am Salaf, late of the great city Al-Quram. I come in response to your offer and with greatest respect for yourself and your endeavor.”

You nod your recognition. This obsequience is the way of his people. It will not stop him from collecting his pound of flesh. “You are welcome, son of Al-Quram. My home is your home.” It's been a while, but you think that was the proper etiquette. You remember Alkaign and Alys both quizzing you on it before you entered the southern desert. There simple offense can end in death. He raises from the bow and there is begrudging respect on his face, so you imagine you passed the test.
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Brassus ignores you entirely. “Aly, is that you, girl?” His voice is a grating rasp, one of a man who has spent his whole life breathing the sands of countless arenas and the arid air of the badlands of the western Empire. To your surprise, his face is kind. You cannot find it in you to broach offense at the breach of decorum.

“It is, Brassus, it's good to see you.” Alys sounds genuine. But at the worst time she winces and grabs at her mostly healed wound.

The muscled man's face drops. “You are hurt, child.” He all but snarls at you. “Was it him!? Did he hurt you!?” Friedrich draws his sword just as Brassus puts one of his blades in each hand. He back steps, snarling. His countenance is that of a wolf. Old wolf, that's what Alys had called him. For his part Salaf seems unsurprised, and even amused.

You hold a hand up to Friedrich, knowing full well that this man can land his knives in you before Friedrich could even begin to swing. Alys taught you, and he taught her.

Alys steps forward, her arms out in a gesture of peace. “No! Brassus no! This is...” She looks over at your worried countenance. “... this is my man.” Brassus looks confused for a moment. And then he falls on the ground laughing, his knives still held in his hands but flailing around as he loses control. Friedrich looks like he's about to burst open in fury, but remains still as the former pit fighter rises to his feet. A few of the knights look to each other uncertainly, as if trying to parse what they just heard.

“Why did you not say such, Aly! A joy to meet you then, friend! You make the girl happy, I am happy too!.”

You nervously scratch the back of your head. “I, uh, I do try.”

Brassus seems thoughtful for a moment. “Yes, try. All anyone can. My regrets for the anger, it comes easy to an old wolf. Aly! Who did hurt you?”

Alys smiles. “He bashed the man's face into bits.” She says it with almost an unsettling relish, but then she was stabbed, and it's not like the man behind the bashing gets to be sanctimonious about it.
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>>5237648
He lets out another quick laugh. “We will be friends I think. Remember the scar, girl, they all tell us who we are. Talk to Salaf about boring things, I need to clean knives.”

Salaf steps forward again as Brassus goes about asking the knights where to find a whetstone, their confusion palpable.

The man from the far south gives a second bow, though less formal than the introduction. “Do forgive the impertinence of my companion, he is protective of those he deems close. Now, to business. I will need to see our payment, for one. I know it is vulgar but it is how these things are done. Then bring forward your first group we are to work with. Good steel only comes from the finest iron.”

His requests are met easily enough. The payment is to his satisfaction. As Alys has said, this is not a man who leaves room for haggling. The price “agreed” is the price paid. You knew this going in, so his minor duplicity is more annoyance than insult.

The recruits are another story.

Salaf seems like he's solving a hard puzzle. “These will do, well most of them. There is always attrition. But you need more. Much more. You wish to cover the whole of the Empire, yes? I can train that many, but you do not have that many. Recruitment is what your organization needs.”

You think for a moment. “This is a nation of warriors, farmers, and craftsmen. None of those make good spies.”

Salaf clucks his tongue. “On the contrary, there will be some from every field. Keep an eye out. But we need a pool all of our own.”

Alys speaks up. “Criminals?”

The spymaster smiles. It does not reach his eyes. “You were always my finest student. Yes, a start. The training will have to be sufficiently, let's say, harsh? Must sort wheat from chaff, get rid of the ones just hiding from the thief catcher. Another option is another breed of criminal. Poachers. Natural woodsmen.”

“What about con artists? Dishonest merchants?” Alys adds.

“Now you are thinking, old student. There is more than one way to deceive. More than a thousand if one is to tell the truth.” Salaf chuckles. It sounds practiced.

“So, Captain-General, where should we focus? We can grab a little of all I am sure, but what is our bedrock?” This feels more like a test than a request. It seems Salaf is always playing a game.

> Choose a focus

>Street Criminals. Bonus to urban settings, helpless outside them

>Poachers. Masters of the wilds, unseen in small communities, hopeless in towns and cities

>Con artists. Natural confidence men, versatile. But lacking in basic physical skill.

> Dishonest merchants. They have connections and networks always in place. But they are even less trustworthy than other recruiting pools, greed drives them.
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>>5237652
4268 not counting greentext. Haven't wrote that much in one sitting since my thesis.
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>>5237648
>Street Criminals. Bonus to urban settings, helpless outside them
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>>5237652
>Street Criminals. Bonus to urban settings, helpless outside them
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>>5237652
>Con artists. Natural confidence men, versatile. But lacking in basic physical skill.
shit needs to work everywhere.
it's a versitile pick.
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>>5237652
>>Street Criminals. Bonus to urban settings, helpless outside them
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Next update soon, do continue posting. I will be putting up an interlude sometime soon, basically depending on if I find the time between this thread's end and number 2's start.

Had a few ideas.

> The man in the Imperial mask: This is just Alkaign from when he inherits the throne till the current time. First person narrative.

> Let the Lady talk: In the southern city of El Baram Uilliam flubs a bluff and is imprisoned. Alys rescues him, helping to enkindle an infatuation. Prequel, obviously.

> Eleyse's bizarre adventure: A funny thing happened on the way to her brother's wedding. Elpest tries to solve it. But is anything to be solved? More or less contemporary.

Feel free to vote. Or not. Im gonna write one of these anyway.
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>>5237652
>Con artists. Natural confidence men, versatile. But lacking in basic physical skill.

I'm honestly surprised the other anons didn't pick this choice. We specifically took on Brassus to up our recruits' combat prowess, and mostly focussing on urban settings leaves us with a pretty big weak spot, I think. Just my two cents.

QM, what's the general lay-out of Althimura? In my perspective, most of the people live in the countryside, so I might change my answer if I'm mistaken.

>>5237656
God-damn. It's like getting a whole new chapter with each update, I love it! If GRRM wrote at your pace, we'd have an entire damn songbook of Ice and Fire by now. Appreciate the effort!
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>>5237846
> The man in the Imperial mask: This is just Alkaign from when he inherits the throne till the current time. First person narrative.

All three sound like fine choices, but this one seems the most interesting for our main quest.
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>>5237850
You are mostly correct. The most urbanized regions are the central and eastern provinces. The north is sparse and mostly towns. The west is loose nomad camps who often barely remember their fathers swore allegiance and occasionally are brought in line with fire and sword. The southern cities pay tribute, but are considered untrustworthy. The populace of the central province is overwhelmingly rural despite the many cities. The populace of the south is almost entirely urban, and therefore dependent on grain from other provinces.
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>>5237652
>Con artists
The enemy thrives with cults.

>The man in the mask.
I want to see inside his head. I worry our friend has been broken by grief at the best. That some isakai magic has brought out his true colours at worst.
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>>5237652
>>5237846
>Con artists. Natural confidence men, versatile. But lacking in basic physical skill.

>The man in the Imperial mask.
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Taking the night off, bit of writers block, bit of holy shit how much did I just write. Back at it tomorrow, for now time to bash my head against Radagon again.

I have a rough draft for the Alkaign interlude so we're going with that one. Be well guys.
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Also, I spent two hours off and on trying to get artbreeder to shit out a passable Alys and Uilleam. No luck. I'll just commission something I guess. I have a few artists Ive used for tabletop before.

If you guys have a suggestion for said commission feel free. Otherwise it'll be two separate portraits. That's fine, but more expensive.
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>>5237652
>>5237783
Changing my vote to Con artists. Natural confidence men, versatile. But lacking in basic physical skill.
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“Con artists. Fraudsters, confidence men. They will be the core.” Salaf nods at you, and Alys does not object. An army of chameleons at your whim, men who can wear any skin. This will be the heart of the Order's network.

“It will be seen to, Captain-General. But perhaps you should work out a recruitment strategy?” He only raises an eyebrow but his skepticism is apparent.

Alys clears her throat. “Obviously we will check the jails and prisons first. We can bind them to us with amnesty. After that, we just funnel whoever gets caught into the system. I imagine there are enough desperate or greedy scum around to fill our rosters.”

You grunt. “And we can trust these recruits?”

She shakes her head. “Of course not, but if we give them a purpose, run them like dogs, and forgive their prior crimes, I feel they will be very willing agents.”

You think for a moment. “Perhaps they will come to like a steady paycheck in lieu of intermittent robberies. You have my permission.”

Alys leaves to carry out your order with a slight bow. You both must maintain some formality after all.

“So, the Lady is your second?” Salaf says. You do not doubt for a second that's not the truth of what he thinks.

“My betrothed.”

“Very interesting, Captain-General. I must say. Sublime taste, I considered it myself.” He sneers, like he is sharing a bawdy joke.

You scowl. “Must you be disgusting as well as blunt? I pay your fee. Lust after Alys in my presence again and I will slay you myself. I am sure Brassus would like the double pay.”

He theatrically scoffs. “I meant no offense, Captain-General! She is beautiful, what man would not covet her?” You recall that Salaf was the first tutor Alys was sent to, and she was merely eighteen at the time. He must have been almost sixty. Bile rises but you force it down.

“Watch yourself. I am a generous man, but I am not so magnanimous as to forgive such slights. It is not the way of the north.”

Another insincere, obsequious display. A theatrical bow of subservience. You are sure now. Salaf is a vile miscreant. Only a beast is so tethered to earthly desire even at his advanced age. But you paid the man, and he will not die until he has done his service to you. After that, well, that's another bridge to cross. Your tower is very tall, a thought that comes to you unbidden.

“Don't you have initiates to train, Salaf?” You don't bother hiding your annoyance.

“Of course, Captain-General, I will get to it.” This time his submissive stance seems less an act. He marches off. Friedrich, calmed and sword sheathed, approaches.
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“Was that wise? He is no fool, and from what I have heard a bad enemy to have.”

“There are boundaries. And Alys is one of them. He knew that would upset me, and he was right. But all it did was show his hand. I did nothing to endanger the contract. That is probably what he wanted. Leave with the money and no work done.” That's basically rationalization. But you believe it.

Friedrich thinks for a moment. “That does make sense. I am a simple man, Captain-General, these things are often beyond me.” To your surprise the man then smiles. “But if you want the man dead I will gladly do it myself. I've always had a good grasp on character, and Salaf is slime.”

You laugh quietly. “If the time comes, you're first on my list, Friedrich.”

“I am ever at your service, Captain-General.” It didn't sound sarcastic. But it was. You're pretty sure.

“Happy to hear it. See to yourself, I think I need to be alone for a while.”

“We all do at times, Captain-General, farewell.” He moves off to do, well, whatever Friedrich does in his free time. Probably plays chess with himself or something. Poor guy.

You walk back into the hall only to meet the seneschal ahead of a massive queue of complainants, great. The next five hours are basically torture. Livestock disputes? Check. Insurance fraud and claims of Insurance Scams? Check. Something called “Guard Brutality”? Ridiculous. Two men fighting over an aborted child? Yeah you won't pretend that one wasn't unusual. But it did take the better part of an hour. Luckily abortion is a capital offense so you just had one of them put to death and the other one fined for wasting your time. By the end of it, you are exhausted.

Recruitment plans and preliminary results of initial training are to be on your desk in the morning. You wolf down a meal on the chair in the audience chamber in a lull of activity, and inform the seneschal you are retiring. He assures you further inquiries will be logged for your later attention. A groan is only barely suppressed as you head to your quarters. As ever two of the men at arms attempt to accompany you and as is your habit you dismiss them almost immediately. You do not need company for stairs.

This night you are eager for bed, and the stairs are barely a nuisance as you take them, sometimes two at a time. And then you reach the top. At the uppermost door, the balcony, a dark figure looms. You reach for your dagger.
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“Care to get some fresh air, Will?” Alys' unmistakable voice echoes down the stairwell. You put your half revealed blade back in it's sheath.

You walk up the remainder of the stairs, and Alys embraces you. “You know, I realize it's good practice, but you can just ask me when you want to do something like this.”

“Will, shut up and take me outside.”

You do. It's a much calmer night than the one that Garn warned you of. The skies are clear, and the lights of the town and keep below sparkle in a beautiful contrast to the midnight black of the sky, however speckled by stars. You stare for many moments, only noting Alys beside you when she gently lays her head on your shoulder.

“It's all beautiful, isn't it?” Alys says. You have to agree. Garn did not undersell the view.

“It is.”

“Not just here, my love, all of it. Our world. We have to protect it. Brother can't do it alone.”

You shake your head softly. “He will never have to. He has my oath, and my sword.”

Her head turns to look up at your face. “It's hard for him, you know? He's not this cold face he puts on. I remember who he is. He's my brother. And soon, yours too.”

You had not thought of it, but she's right. By law, Alkaign will soon be your brother. What a strange thought. You were close on the road, but now? He seems so different to how he was, even such a brief time ago. “I suppose he will be.”

Her arms encircle you, seeking comfort, as a gale passes and chills you both. She shivers.

“Do you want to go back inside?” You ask, concerned. She only got back on her feet today after all.

She hums. “No, Will. I think I'll stay like this a while.”

A whisper. “I wish we could stay like this forever.”

Above you both, the stars are as static as ever. Alys softly kisses you in the moonlight, and to your mind it is perhaps the most beautiful moment you can imagine. All of the future fades away, and there is only this moment.
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Static except for one. It moves, slowly, almost unable to be perceived. It goes on and on, to a goal it can reach but never really be done with. Many cultures would have many words for it. Most would attribute it's strange behavior to one God or another, some divine fiat explaining the inexplicable. Many would explain it away as a trick of the eye. But the world is not what it was. There are more than one now who can name exactly what the light is.

Geosynchronous Satellite.

Miles away a man looks at the display attached to his wrist. ALTCON 1 has given him all the telemetry he needs, and he is in place. This mission is pure reconnaissance, and that is all he is here for. Yet, he brought his rifle anyway. Better safe than sorry. He takes out his binoculars, and zooms in on the tower indicated by the IR targeting ALTCON sent down. He sees them immediately. Two figures, leaning into each other. Kissing, if he were to guess. A moment of melancholy fills him. Not something he will ever do again. He reaches for his SVD.

No, Nykolai, not yet. This is not what you are here for. Let them have their moment.

“ASSET 01, WHY ARE YOU REACHING FOR YOUR WEAPON”

As always the voice sends pain lancing into his head. “Nothing, Control. Just a passing thought.”

“SUBJECT 2 HAS ONLY JUST BEEN DEPLOYED. DO NOT INTERFERE. WE TOOK YOU OUT. WE CAN SEND YOU BACK. THERE ARE OTHERS.”

The pain is nearly unbearable. But Nykolai knows this is his only choice. “Understood, Control.”

“SUBJECT 2 REQUIRES A REPLACEMENT DEVICE. DELIVER IT. GO DARK AFTER.”

Wincing, he covers one ear. “Acknowledged.”

Without a word, he collapses his rifle, and fades back into the night, his tracks slowly covered up by the falling snow. Far away, the two figures fade back into the tower, one carrying the other, their bodies locked together like a tight knot. As for what else, there is no one to see.

>THREAD 1: THE BEGINNING OF AN END: FIN
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About the taking a day off? I lied.
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I'll hopefully have the Alkaign interlude up before this thread is off the board. If not, well, I'll throw it in as an extra for OP 2.

This is the time to ask me anything you might have questions about or just chat. There will be not further updates this thread. Thank you all very much for reading and playing. The joy I feel every time one of you gives feedback is immense.
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>>5238947
Cool twist, good stuff QM. Please keep up the good work, your characters are pretty decent given the fact that they don't get loads of screentime.
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>>5238966
Thanks! A lot of this thread was collecting a cast. Provided you all don't get them killed they should have plenty more time in the sun.

I do feel I gave Alys and Uilleam enough time to come across as filled out. It's hard for the latter, as he's (you) but I've tried to give him a distinct characterization as you guys have shown your clear preference towards certain behavior.
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>>5238947
Satellites, Sniper rifles, mind control?

What unearthly revelry is going on here.

But he is my true question.
Roughly how far ahead is the opening of the thread set, from us?
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>>5238947
Oh, SHIT. That's one hell of a way to end the first thread, QM. Thoroughly enjoyed this one!

Like I told you before, your characterisation is nothing short of top-notch. I'm looking forward to the continuation! Kinda new to /qst/, so should I just keep an eye on the catalog or will a link be posted here?
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>>5239083
Unclear, and also a lesson in maybe not doing in medias res. I wouldn't dwell on it.
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>>5239185
This board is slow as hell, so you can watch the catalog. I also post announcements in /qtg/. It will be a few days, and like I said, Im going to try and get that interlude up before this thread is gone.
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Looking like another day or two. Keep an eye out for thread 2 and the announcement in qtg.



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