>>13623078

As quickly as it started, everything stopped, the world around you ravaged and warped by the massive displacement of energy. Stone and concrete buildings, once tall, were now twisted into horrible shapes, the souls used in the construction of the realm pressing out of the walls in atrophied, vaguely-humanoid shapes. Fog began to roll in as an icy wind blasted you from somewhere deep in the realm.

Behind you, where the building once stood, gaped an enormous pit. A massive, ragged tear in the very fabric of warp-space.

You could feel dread's cold talons working their way into your mind as you gazed into the wall of fog, your limbs heavy with fatigue. Your companions looked similarly, their bodies hunched and shivering.

Rodwen's whispered voice cracked the silence. "It knows we're here..."

You shook your head, swallowing hard, determined to keep strong. It didn't go past you that the swarm was gone, either destroyed or having fled from the crushing blow to the structure of this reality.

bumpin for my questers back.

I'm right here with you, OP. I'll write up a reply really quickly.
Also, in case anybody missed it, here's a new fic between Elizabeth and Sonja.
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6625058/6/Sororitas_Quest_Fic

>>13623078
>>13623079
"Excellent job, everybody. If it is this angry, then we must have struck a powerful blow."
I gesture for everybody to draw near me, and I cover everybody with a heavy dose of my aura.
The god seemed absolutely pissed at us, and I didn't want to present an opening for it to strike at us.
I glance at Rodwen. "Would we be able to switch out people right now? I would like to send Fortran back, since I don't think she will be able to help us any further."

>>13623941
As for who we bring in, I say in order of preference: Anna if she is awake, Sonja if she feels up to it, and Florencia if she has her armor fixed.
I'm assuming that the fog is also the boundary to the god's realm?
Once we change everybody out, push on!
Maybe something along the lines of, "Come, everybody, the beast is on its heels, we completely surprised it. Time to push on and do more damage, before the thing recovers."

Bump for fellow questers. Get in here everybody!

>>13623835

Read and reviewed my writefriend. There I explained why it was epic win :P

>>13625046
I thank thee, Most Revered Dungeon Mistress of the Ecclesiarchy.
I shall bear my title with pride.

I'm glad you enjoyed the story, especially since I was going for a little more risque and combat orientated piece.

Why is this archived already?

>>13626110
Probably just in case it falls off the board.
Don't want to lose any story that we would have developed, after all.

>>13626110

That and if the thread ever 404s without me posting a link to the new one, i'll archive the new one instantly so you can more easily find it.

also the descriptions may also contain hints or spoilers

Ah ha!
Found it!
>>13623078
"... Let it. It was going to happen sooner or later. Better that we have struck it while it was still unawares."
I sigh, and cross my arms.
"Still, I guess the going will be tougher from here on out. I think that as soon as we come across another tear in reality, we should switch out again."
I turn, roughly facing what I believe to be the straightest route to the center of this place.
"Come on. Where there's smoke there's fire. And I don't want to see what the chaos god will send to put *that* fire out." I say, pointing to the tear in reality